User contributions for Loodog

20 May 2024

• 20:0020:00, 20 May 2024 diff hist +400‎ Kepler's laws of planetary motion ‎ →‎Second law: kepler was accidentally righ there. current

8 May 2024

• 16:5616:56, 8 May 2024 diff hist +25‎ Israeli government response to the 2023 Hamas-led attack on Israel ‎ →‎Expulsion: seems worthwhile to mention that the Sinai is Egyptian, not a part of Gaza or Israel

2 May 2024

• 20:3120:31, 2 May 2024 diff hist +1‎ Coriolis force ‎ →‎Length scales and the Rossby number: "got the attention" -> "drew the attention", tone

1 May 2024

• 19:3919:39, 1 May 2024 diff hist +84‎ Coriolis force ‎ →‎Corollaries: these are technically corollaries, but "simple cases" is a bit more accessible of a topic heading for what's really shown in this section
• 17:1217:12, 1 May 2024 diff hist +462‎ Coriolis force ‎ →‎Formula: If I'm walking north in NYC, there will be a small Coriolis force to the east.

25 April 2024

• 14:1014:10, 25 April 2024 diff hist −132‎ Religulous ‎ →‎Cast: well, that's pretty tedious, given that it's a documentary

17 April 2024

• 14:0714:07, 17 April 2024 diff hist +48‎ Centrifugal force ‎ →‎Acceleration: part of the problem is we're using the same symbol to mean different things
• 14:0514:05, 17 April 2024 diff hist +114‎ Centrifugal force ‎ →‎Force: well this is just an untrue statement. If you're standing on the south pole, the centrifugal force =0, even though r = 6400km.

24 March 2024

• 02:5302:53, 24 March 2024 diff hist −11‎ Greyhound ‎ "defined as" the fastest breed in the world? They happen to be, but that's not what defines the breed

16 March 2024

• 20:2920:29, 16 March 2024 diff hist +109‎ Jad (given name) ‎ I can find no evidence that Jews are commonly given the name Jad, certainly none of the cases here. Also removing wikilinks as per DAB style guide
• 20:2520:25, 16 March 2024 diff hist +79‎ Jad (given name) ‎ useful info that Abumrad's father is Lebanese, wikilinks
• 11:5811:58, 16 March 2024 diff hist +146‎ Gaza Strip ‎ →‎Education: why would we mention high literacy in the lede, butnot in the corresponding section?
• 11:5411:54, 16 March 2024 diff hist +106‎ Gaza Strip ‎ 95% is middle of the pack, not highest in the world. impressive but not superlative. see wikilink

14 March 2024

• 15:4415:44, 14 March 2024 diff hist −57‎ Self-determination ‎ LEDE: there should be a definition in opening sentence, not statement of category (e.g. " is a concept")

11 March 2024

• 14:5614:56, 11 March 2024 diff hist −1‎ m Efraim Halevy ‎ →‎Government career: wikilink syntax current
• 14:5614:56, 11 March 2024 diff hist +1,039‎ Efraim Halevy ‎ →‎Government career: read a few things in Shlaim's book about Halevy's special relationship with Hussein

9 March 2024

• 20:4520:45, 9 March 2024 diff hist +1,378‎ Greyhound ‎ →‎History: expand on source's prehistory background findings of "greyhound-like" dogs, also Egyptian tombs Tag: Disambiguation links added

6 March 2024

• 15:5215:52, 6 March 2024 diff hist +777‎ 1991 Iraqi missile attacks against Israel ‎ Shlaim says it was a combination of Jordan and US pressure

4 March 2024

• 20:0020:00, 4 March 2024 diff hist +1,033‎ N Jad (given name) ‎ created article

15 February 2024

• 16:0516:05, 15 February 2024 diff hist +125‎ Herzog ‎ →‎Current usage: description of notable people
• 16:0016:00, 15 February 2024 diff hist +23‎ Herzog ‎ →‎See also: see also: herzog surname wikilink. the article does have one, but it's buried though I think this is one of the primary purposes of this page

11 February 2024

• 01:0001:00, 11 February 2024 diff hist +6‎ Nor'easter ‎ something strange happened here with the English grammar

1 February 2024

• 20:4120:41, 1 February 2024 diff hist +280‎ Hussein of Jordan ‎ →‎Arab Federation between Iraq and Jordan: how Hussein saw Israel prior to Samu' incident

19 January 2024

• 21:3121:31, 19 January 2024 diff hist +57‎ Specialty Coffee Association of America ‎ this helps clarify current
• 18:1618:16, 19 January 2024 diff hist +4‎ m Bajoran ‎ →‎Culture and traditions: seems worth a wikilink for caste

13 January 2024

• 16:5716:57, 13 January 2024 diff hist +173‎ Ubuntu philosophy ‎ we're at the third section before we've even defined the term? there should be a definition in the opening sentence, not a category (e.g. "it's a term")

4 January 2024

• 17:2817:28, 4 January 2024 diff hist +95‎ Kalapa (atomism) ‎ since the Classical element page has a link here, seems reasonable to link back current
• 16:3516:35, 4 January 2024 diff hist +43‎ Israeli settlement ‎ →‎Number of settlements and inhabitants: clarify "illegal" by Israeli law, not simply int'l law
• 15:0015:00, 4 January 2024 diff hist +8‎ m Argentina ‎ →‎Return to democracy: "made for a tough two years" sounded just a bit too casual/too sportcaster. I've paraphrased a bit more formally

2 January 2024

• 20:3520:35, 2 January 2024 diff hist +867‎ Talk:Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ →‎Relevance of Jewish expulsion from Arab lands: Reply Tag: Reply
• 20:0620:06, 2 January 2024 diff hist +9‎ Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ discuss on talk page first. further reverts without talk page discussion will invite listing on Wikipedia:Neutral point of view/Noticeboard Tag: Reverted
• 20:0420:04, 2 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ Talk:Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ →‎Relevance of Jewish expulsion from Arab lands
• 20:0320:03, 2 January 2024 diff hist +994‎ Talk:Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ →‎Relevance of Jewish expulsion from Arab lands: new section Tag: New topic
• 19:5419:54, 2 January 2024 diff hist +8‎ Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ →‎20th century: since my edit was reverted, here is a POV tag until we can come to an agreement on the talk page

1 January 2024

• 14:4714:47, 1 January 2024 diff hist +555‎ Palestinian genocide accusation ‎ →‎Nakba: Nakba is often compared to the Jewish exodus from Arab lands feels contextually relevant. please discuss on talk page if you think this isn't a good addition Tag: Reverted
• 14:4114:41, 1 January 2024 diff hist +263‎ Sabra and Shatila massacre ‎ →‎See also: not sure how relevant Al-Manam is, but here's short summary of the possible relevance of both these films

13 December 2023

• 00:0600:06, 13 December 2023 diff hist +19‎ The Covenant of Water ‎ →‎Plot: typo: "Parabil"->"Parambil". Also, the diagnosis of the condition is a bit of a spoiler, as we spend most of the book veiled in mystery

3 December 2023

• 23:2123:21, 3 December 2023 diff hist +262‎ List of Israeli Mizrahi and Sephardi Jews ‎ →‎Academic figures: noah yuval harari surely merits mention and was born to Lebanese parents

25 November 2023

• 13:3013:30, 25 November 2023 diff hist +4‎ m Arrival (film) ‎ →‎Plot: wiki link Cephalopod

1 November 2023

• 18:0918:09, 1 November 2023 diff hist +9‎ m Palestinian citizens of Israel ‎ →‎Population: miliions is better than thousands of thousands

20 October 2023

• 18:1418:14, 20 October 2023 diff hist −748‎ 16PF Questionnaire ‎ →‎Key features: blanking section, as these bullets basically seem like a |brochure for 16PF

14 October 2023

• 22:4822:48, 14 October 2023 diff hist −194‎ Lexical hypothesis ‎ the hypothesis.... is a thesis? define by meaning, not by category. also, this is screaming to be mentioned in context to Sapir-Whorf

9 October 2023

• 14:1214:12, 9 October 2023 diff hist +34‎ List of members of the twenty-fifth Knesset ‎ wikilink Knesset and MK

4 September 2023

• 14:0114:01, 4 September 2023 diff hist +394‎ Alfred Vellucci ‎ →‎Life and career: legacy and death

2 September 2023

• 16:1616:16, 2 September 2023 diff hist +194‎ Vulcan (hypothetical planet) ‎ needs to be contextualized with neptune

27 July 2023

• 15:2715:27, 27 July 2023 diff hist −24‎ Computer Systems Institute ‎ →‎2016 loss of accreditation: fix wiki links

27 June 2023

• 20:4420:44, 27 June 2023 diff hist +438‎ The Outcast (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ →‎Background: a bit more background
• 18:4918:49, 27 June 2023 diff hist +254‎ The Outcast (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ →‎Background

13 June 2023

• 14:4814:48, 13 June 2023 diff hist −188‎ AeroPress ‎ Undid revision 1159946313 by Loodog (talk) whoops Tag: Undo
• 14:4814:48, 13 June 2023 diff hist +188‎ AeroPress ‎ →‎Traditional method coffee properties: dubious that concentration is the same as espresso, also source is a deadlink Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 14:4714:47, 13 June 2023 diff hist −188‎ AeroPress ‎ →‎Traditional method coffee properties: dubious, also source is a deadlink Tag: Reverted

12 June 2023

• 15:1315:13, 12 June 2023 diff hist +4‎ m Prebiotic (nutrition) ‎ grammar
• 15:1315:13, 12 June 2023 diff hist +8‎ Prebiotic (nutrition) ‎ the GI tract is not an EXAMPLE of a prebiotic....(?)

10 June 2023

• 13:1413:14, 10 June 2023 diff hist −1‎ East German coffee crisis ‎ →‎Influence on coffee production in Vietnam: canephora (robusta) coffee isn't lower quality - it's a different species

13 March 2023

• 20:3420:34, 13 March 2023 diff hist +106‎ Daylight saving time in Egypt ‎ only african country using DST

9 March 2023

• 14:0914:09, 9 March 2023 diff hist +697‎ Inglehart–Welzel cultural map of the world ‎ value shifts correlated to sectors of economy (with citation)

14 February 2023

• 19:4019:40, 14 February 2023 diff hist +19‎ Distant Origin ‎ →‎Plot: wikilink to kangaroo court seems appropriate

15 December 2022

• 20:4320:43, 15 December 2022 diff hist +728‎ Coriolis force ‎ →‎Length scales and the Rossby number: toilet bowl swirl Tag: Reverted
• 20:3520:35, 15 December 2022 diff hist +412‎ Flush toilet ‎ →‎Swirl direction myth: Rossby number

9 December 2022

• 13:2213:22, 9 December 2022 diff hist +126‎ Centrifugal force ‎ →‎Derivation Tag: Reverted

21 September 2022

• 01:3401:34, 21 September 2022 diff hist +159‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply

19 September 2022

• 21:0621:06, 19 September 2022 diff hist +525‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎Demographics: as you wish, census data straight from the dominican american article

16 September 2022

• 22:1922:19, 16 September 2022 diff hist +217‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply
• 15:5215:52, 16 September 2022 diff hist +160‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎Utilities: that's a bit out of context so here's more of the story
• 15:2615:26, 16 September 2022 diff hist +272‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply
• 15:2015:20, 16 September 2022 diff hist +2,062‎ Talk:Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎Cited needed tags for publicly observable facts: new section Tag: New topic
• 15:1715:17, 16 September 2022 diff hist +512‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ remove cite needed tags (as already discussed). Copy + pasting sources from 1 sentence over

14 September 2022

• 21:2421:24, 14 September 2022 diff hist +167‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply
• 20:3520:35, 14 September 2022 diff hist +2,695‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply
• 20:1320:13, 14 September 2022 diff hist −51‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ Undid revision 1110306413 by Magnolia677 (talk) please join our discussion on [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Featured_article_review/Providence,_Rhode_Island/archive1#Providence%2C_Rhode_Island FAR} regarding this before reverting Tag: Undo
• 18:2918:29, 14 September 2022 diff hist +1,446‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply
• 18:1718:17, 14 September 2022 diff hist −51‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ removing more CNs that include things already supported by sources and Wikipedia:Common knowledge things observable from public property Tag: Reverted

13 September 2022

• 19:4519:45, 13 September 2022 diff hist +610‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply
• 19:4219:42, 13 September 2022 diff hist +130‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎19th century: some of these citation needed are very easily found in the links to the relevant articles
• 19:3719:37, 13 September 2022 diff hist −1,407‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ removing rugby team (defunct), curling team (no evidence of notability or citations). Removing other "cite needed"'s as either already included in sources given or Wikipedia:Common knowledge observations from public properties
• 19:3219:32, 13 September 2022 diff hist +513‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply
• 19:2919:29, 13 September 2022 diff hist +124‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎Economy: a lot of these cite needed are very dubious, as the sources are already cited or cited by implication (e.g. the pie chart's source)
• 17:5617:56, 13 September 2022 diff hist +228‎ Wikipedia:Featured article review/Providence, Rhode Island/archive1 ‎ →‎Providence, Rhode Island: Reply Tag: Reply
• 17:5517:55, 13 September 2022 diff hist +449‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎Education: added sources for student population numbers, as per FAR

6 September 2022

• 16:3916:39, 6 September 2022 diff hist +4‎ m Never Have I Ever (TV series) ‎ →‎Jewish representation: italics
• 16:3916:39, 6 September 2022 diff hist +1,867‎ Never Have I Ever (TV series) ‎ →‎Jewish representation: here's a bit more I've found on the Jewish thing, including some praise

22 June 2022

• 13:3813:38, 22 June 2022 diff hist +328‎ Somerville, Massachusetts ‎ →‎Demographics: seems relevant that that they translate into haitian creole and nepali

3 June 2022

• 17:0217:02, 3 June 2022 diff hist −2‎ m Earthquake rupture ‎ →‎Termination: whoops, wrong units
• 16:2316:23, 3 June 2022 diff hist +515‎ Earthquake rupture ‎ →‎Termination: rupture length

31 May 2022

• 14:4114:41, 31 May 2022 diff hist +126‎ Rowan Witt ‎ →‎Career: but who was he in The Matrix?

11 May 2022

• 16:3516:35, 11 May 2022 diff hist +1‎ m Safe space ‎ typo, because I'm stupid
• 16:3516:35, 11 May 2022 diff hist +459‎ Safe space ‎ i feel like we never really defined the term
• 16:2516:25, 11 May 2022 diff hist +179‎ Safe space ‎ →‎Criticism: makes more sense to include this is chronological context

10 May 2022

• 16:0116:01, 10 May 2022 diff hist +297‎ Safe space ‎ →‎Criticism: they wrote a whole book on it

25 April 2022

• 16:4216:42, 25 April 2022 diff hist −255‎ Rent regulation ‎ edit to include block quote. quite right that we don't need to quote this twice. removing first instance. Tag: Reverted
• 13:3713:37, 25 April 2022 diff hist +295‎ Rent regulation ‎ block quote from Lindbeck, with source change to address concerns Tag: Reverted

14 April 2022

• 16:0116:01, 14 April 2022 diff hist +545‎ Rent regulation ‎ Undid revision 1082545118 by Snooganssnoogans (talk) rv: unexplained reversion of material Tags: Undo Reverted

13 April 2022

• 19:0719:07, 13 April 2022 diff hist +545‎ Rent regulation ‎ →‎Economists' views: just a lovely block quote here summarizing economists' views Tag: Reverted

1 April 2022

• 15:5115:51, 1 April 2022 diff hist +193‎ Xennials ‎ if we're going to use the term "Oregon Trail generation" in the article, we'd better introduce it in the lede for context.

20 March 2022

• 12:5112:51, 20 March 2022 diff hist +12‎ Massachusetts Bay Transportation Authority ‎ →‎Charlie Baker administration (2015–present): events of this paragraph did not have a date on them

14 March 2022

• 22:3522:35, 14 March 2022 diff hist +22‎ Green Line Extension ‎ late summer 2022 is more specific than late 2022. "all stations" is vague language

13 March 2022

• 21:3021:30, 13 March 2022 diff hist +346‎ Green Line Extension ‎ more specific about latest on opening dates Tag: Reverted

17 February 2022

• 20:3420:34, 17 February 2022 diff hist +583‎ Trojan Horse scandal ‎ →‎Letter: authorship, according to podcast
• 16:5416:54, 17 February 2022 diff hist +347‎ Trojan Horse scandal ‎ not sure how Adderley was completely omitted, given its central role in Serial podcast

10 February 2022

• 13:4713:47, 10 February 2022 diff hist +433‎ Galileo (spacecraft) ‎ →‎Scientific instruments: its termination was notable

6 January 2022

• 16:4416:44, 6 January 2022 diff hist +439‎ Energy density ‎ →‎In energy storage and fuels: spelling out in concrete terms why this matters.

5 January 2022

• 16:3416:34, 5 January 2022 diff hist −105‎ Seizure ‎ that's a stupid statistic. 80% of the world lives in a developing country. 80% of women live in a developing country. 80% of people with eyes live in the developing world

3 January 2022

• 12:1912:19, 3 January 2022 diff hist −31‎ Americanah ‎ →‎Americanization: needlessly verbose

22 December 2021

• 14:0114:01, 22 December 2021 diff hist +38‎ Traction (mechanics) ‎ →‎Coefficient of traction: same thing, different name
• 14:0014:00, 22 December 2021 diff hist +295‎ Joule ‎ the source is...math
• 13:4913:49, 22 December 2021 diff hist +210‎ Friction ‎No edit summary

21 December 2021

• 17:2017:20, 21 December 2021 diff hist +120‎ Joule ‎ →‎Multiples: animals, humans energy Tag: Reverted

30 November 2021

• 16:4616:46, 30 November 2021 diff hist +102‎ The Matrix ‎ →‎Plot: a bit more streamlined. all on-screen deaths are real world deaths
• 16:4216:42, 30 November 2021 diff hist +205‎ Fuzzy mathematics ‎ well that lede told me absolutely nothing about fuzzy mathematics

12 November 2021

• 21:5421:54, 12 November 2021 diff hist +77‎ Cannabis (drug) ‎ →‎Emergency Department Visits: present tense isn't necessarily warranted. study examined 2012-2016 data, add more clarification
• 21:4221:42, 12 November 2021 diff hist +24‎ Coffee percolator ‎ →‎Terminology and related brewers: immersion brewer
• 17:0017:00, 12 November 2021 diff hist −60‎ Coffee percolator ‎ →‎Terminology and related brewers: bullshit. all of these vapor pressure the same way. boiling can be implemented but is never necessary
• 16:5716:57, 12 November 2021 diff hist +151‎ Coffee percolator ‎ →‎Terminology
• 13:0113:01, 12 November 2021 diff hist +1,318‎ Coffee percolator ‎ →‎Brewing process: differences from moka pot Tag: Reverted
• 12:4112:41, 12 November 2021 diff hist +43‎ Moka pot ‎ not to be confused with

2 November 2021

• 21:0721:07, 2 November 2021 diff hist +7‎ Psilocybin ‎ →‎Medical: "The more modern rediscovery of the spiritual and therapeutic potentials that hallucinogens may have" wat?

28 September 2021

• 17:1117:11, 28 September 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Moka pot ‎ →‎Brewing coffee with a moka pot: fixed now?
• 17:1017:10, 28 September 2021 diff hist +333‎ m Moka pot ‎ →‎Brewing coffee with a moka pot: added Gianino source
• 16:5216:52, 28 September 2021 diff hist +921‎ Moka pot ‎ →‎Brewing coffee with a moka pot: listing the papers
• 15:3615:36, 28 September 2021 diff hist +55‎ Moka pot ‎ →‎Brewing coffee with a moka pot: minor clean-up

9 September 2021

• 15:3215:32, 9 September 2021 diff hist −561‎ Lens flare ‎ →‎Deliberate use: ehhh, dubious that this is discussing lens flare

4 September 2021

• 12:1812:18, 4 September 2021 diff hist +135‎ Academy Awards ‎ →‎Allegations of a lack of diversity: I'm sure it's true that more yellowface portrayals have won than real Asians, but this is not supported by either source WP:V

28 August 2021

• 03:2503:25, 28 August 2021 diff hist −30‎ The Lobster ‎ →‎Plot: S&W omit needless words

25 August 2021

• 19:4619:46, 25 August 2021 diff hist −481‎ Eugenics ‎ →‎In science fiction: WP:OR no source for BNW being relevant. also, from BNW article "techniques used to control the populace in Brave New World do not include genetic engineering; Huxley wrote the book before the structure of DNA was known."

30 July 2021

• 14:1714:17, 30 July 2021 diff hist +34‎ m 5-MeO-DMT ‎ →‎Effects: fix ref. I lapsed on including title
• 14:1514:15, 30 July 2021 diff hist +582‎ 5-MeO-DMT ‎ →‎Chemistry: just copy +pasting erowid here. hopefully that's ok
• 14:0314:03, 30 July 2021 diff hist +34‎ 5-MeO-DMT ‎ "found in the toad" makes it sound like need to cut it open or something.

18 May 2021

• 15:4115:41, 18 May 2021 diff hist −44‎ Microcosmic God ‎ →‎Cultural influence: osmosis jones not in the source. Also, that would open the door to every single "World in a Body" example, which is not the same thing as created civilization in a body

26 April 2021

• 13:2313:23, 26 April 2021 diff hist +33‎ Patience Island ‎No edit summary
• 13:1713:17, 26 April 2021 diff hist +22‎ m Jamestown, Rhode Island ‎ →‎In popular culture: wrong link

22 April 2021

• 15:1115:11, 22 April 2021 diff hist +6‎ World Values Survey ‎ →‎Findings: couldn't find any mention of this in this source

16 April 2021

• 14:0214:02, 16 April 2021 diff hist −27‎ Full body scanner ‎ I'm amused that the US is not a part of the world

14 April 2021

• 00:4700:47, 14 April 2021 diff hist +22‎ Shambhala Buddhism ‎ That's just a link to Shambhala's initiatives to address the misconduct, not a listing of allegations continuing to surface

10 April 2021

• 16:2516:25, 10 April 2021 diff hist +11‎ m Janna Levin ‎ →‎Biography: separate sources
• 16:2516:25, 10 April 2021 diff hist +683‎ Janna Levin ‎ backstory details of parents, grandparents, Judaism, adding Jewish American scientists to category (cultural inclusion)

25 March 2021

• 17:5317:53, 25 March 2021 diff hist +319‎ Gael García Bernal ‎ →‎Early life: they're childhood friends is how they keep collborating
• 17:5117:51, 25 March 2021 diff hist +303‎ Diego Luna ‎ →‎Early life: they're childhood friends is how they keep collborating
• 17:4717:47, 25 March 2021 diff hist +473‎ Diego Luna ‎ →‎Acting: so they were childhood friends
• 01:3701:37, 25 March 2021 diff hist −117‎ List of New England ski areas by vertical drop ‎ rv to last version by Tparaiso601 Tag: Manual revert

24 March 2021

• 21:2421:24, 24 March 2021 diff hist −8‎ Speed (1994 film) ‎ Undid revision 1013639083 by 2001:56A:73D1:C600:D9D1:ACD8:5F8B:2C6F (talk) omit needless words Tag: Undo
• 21:1421:14, 24 March 2021 diff hist +45‎ Stoner (novel) ‎ the plot is as long as the book

20 March 2021

• 20:5320:53, 20 March 2021 diff hist +56‎ Speed (1994 film) ‎ →‎Plot: reword plot. the team was killed, whether "all" or "most", it doesn't matter. Also, wikilink UHF signal
• 14:2514:25, 20 March 2021 diff hist +874‎ Gael García Bernal ‎ →‎Career: putting Bernal's career in context, how Y tu mama launched him internationally
• 14:0814:08, 20 March 2021 diff hist −2‎ m Y tu mamá también ‎ →‎Reception: link formatting
• 14:0714:07, 20 March 2021 diff hist +6‎ m Y tu mamá también ‎ →‎Reception: close brackets
• 14:0714:07, 20 March 2021 diff hist +844‎ Y tu mamá también ‎ →‎Reception: box office gross and context for Bernal's success

17 March 2021

• 17:5117:51, 17 March 2021 diff hist +20‎ m Speed (1994 film) ‎ that link is dead, so here's the updated link for that source. also... are we saying that other police dept's don't have concern for human life?

2 March 2021

• 19:2319:23, 2 March 2021 diff hist +104‎ Moka pot ‎ →‎Brewing coffee with a moka pot: explain how it can brew without boiling

14 February 2021

• 00:2000:20, 14 February 2021 diff hist −49‎ m Moka pot ‎ →‎Brewing coffee with a moka pot: fix ref
• 00:1900:19, 14 February 2021 diff hist +1,019‎ Moka pot ‎ →‎Brewing coffee with a moka pot: more thorough discussion of preheating water, based on opinions of experts and basis for claims of preheating water

13 February 2021

• 15:1015:10, 13 February 2021 diff hist +624‎ Moka pot ‎ →‎Maintenance: dishwasher and aluminum content
• 15:0415:04, 13 February 2021 diff hist −8‎ Moka pot ‎ →‎Brewing coffee with a moka pot: okay, so I have read these papers in depth. Editting this text to what they actually support.

9 February 2021

• 13:5313:53, 9 February 2021 diff hist +132‎ Sarah Silverman ‎ →‎Personal life: she was careful to not condone his behavior in general, just that it was ok with her due to the context.

5 February 2021

• 02:3702:37, 5 February 2021 diff hist +151‎ Darcy's law ‎ →‎Use in coffee brewing

3 February 2021

• 22:1622:16, 3 February 2021 diff hist +886‎ Darcy's law ‎ →‎Use in petroleum engineering: also seems to be a regular staple of physics coffee papers

1 February 2021

• 23:0223:02, 1 February 2021 diff hist +574‎ Flu season ‎ →‎Timing: other southern hemisphere countries

27 January 2021

• 23:5223:52, 27 January 2021 diff hist +22‎ Al Franken ‎ →‎{{anchor|Allegations of inappropriate sexual conduct}}Sexual misconduct allegations: well this doesn't make any sense. can someone straighten this out?

11 January 2021

• 19:1019:10, 11 January 2021 diff hist +48‎ Coffee extraction ‎ →‎Extraction During Brewing: not sure why we're doing grams per liter, of mass ratio water:coffeee

27 December 2020

• 02:3802:38, 27 December 2020 diff hist +4‎ Star Trek Generations ‎ →‎Critical response: parallel tense "movie was.." "could barely tear itself..."
• 02:3602:36, 27 December 2020 diff hist +158‎ Jean-Luc Picard ‎ →‎Television series and films: thank god they gave up on his French pride after the first season
• 02:2802:28, 27 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ Jean-Luc Picard ‎ →‎Depiction: okay okay, we've mentioned the earl grey 3 times here. I would argue it's not an "interest", but it does make him British and it is a running trope of his character

25 December 2020

• 01:5201:52, 25 December 2020 diff hist +174‎ Star Trek Generations ‎ →‎Critical response: i recall Ebert's sentence to be a snappy summary of this line of criticism
• 01:4701:47, 25 December 2020 diff hist −13‎ Descent (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ emotion chip belongs down here with story continuity
• 01:3801:38, 25 December 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Descent (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ →‎Story arc continuity: errant quote mark
• 01:3801:38, 25 December 2020 diff hist +264‎ Descent (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ →‎See also: don't forget "Brothers", where the emotion chip was first introduced and Lore was left at large

17 December 2020

• 00:5500:55, 17 December 2020 diff hist +107‎ Clearing the neighbourhood ‎ definition first. significance second. "clearing the neighborhood" as one of 3 criteria doesn't explain how it's distinct from the other 2!

12 December 2020

• 18:1718:17, 12 December 2020 diff hist +137‎ Coffee percolator ‎ not to be confused with moka pot, also fix cite web template
• 18:1218:12, 12 December 2020 diff hist +144‎ Coffee percolator ‎ →‎Terminology: source that people mix up percolator with moka
• 16:4216:42, 12 December 2020 diff hist −68‎ Vacuum coffee maker ‎ →‎Workings: I'm actually convinced that there is no partial vacuum. Even if the chambers were both at 1atm, the coffee would settle on its weight alone. the coffee actually begins draining *before* the lower chamber even lowers to 1atm!

11 December 2020

• 20:4320:43, 11 December 2020 diff hist +90‎ Forrest Gump ‎ →‎Plot: I link the idea of the plot being written in Forrest POV, but with links to the greater significance
• 20:3920:39, 11 December 2020 diff hist +4‎ Forrest Gump ‎ →‎Plot: fixing redirect
• 20:3820:38, 11 December 2020 diff hist −1‎ Forrest Gump ‎ →‎Plot: better flow
• 20:3820:38, 11 December 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Forrest Gump ‎ →‎Plot
• 20:3720:37, 11 December 2020 diff hist +1‎ Forrest Gump ‎ →‎Plot
• 20:3720:37, 11 December 2020 diff hist +266‎ Forrest Gump ‎ →‎Plot: WP:OR. I always assumed it was AIDS and here are sources so we don't have to guess

8 December 2020

• 14:1214:12, 8 December 2020 diff hist +209‎ Rick Sanchez ‎ a bit of a rewrite. this is personality, not biography

7 December 2020

• 22:1722:17, 7 December 2020 diff hist +17‎ Hanukkah ‎ only because it happens at the same time of year

2 December 2020

• 17:1717:17, 2 December 2020 diff hist +28‎ N Figurant ‎ ←Redirected page to Extra (acting) current Tag: New redirect
• 17:1517:15, 2 December 2020 diff hist +400‎ Extra (acting) ‎ figurant
• 17:1017:10, 2 December 2020 diff hist +54‎ DMC DeLorean ‎ sorry, didn't intend to do that and I don't know how that happened. once more reinstating lead drawing contrast between longevity of car production and car's fame. I hope there wasn't disagreement with my final compromise solution here.

30 November 2020

• 22:0522:05, 30 November 2020 diff hist −62‎ DMC DeLorean ‎ compromise measure: this car was only made for 2 years, yet here we are 35 years later discussing it Tag: Reverted
• 13:5313:53, 30 November 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Tragedy of the commons ‎ →‎Non-governmental solution: i just don't like commas after "e.g."
• 13:4613:46, 30 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ Tragedy of the commons ‎ →‎Non-governmental solution: a little copy editing an otherwise good explanation

27 November 2020

• 05:0705:07, 27 November 2020 diff hist +496‎ Moka pot ‎ →‎Maintenance: not in the dishwasher

24 November 2020

• 16:1816:18, 24 November 2020 diff hist +15‎ Neil Patrick Harris ‎ →‎Film
• 16:1816:18, 24 November 2020 diff hist +550‎ Neil Patrick Harris ‎ most people do not realize this, but the Harold & Kumar role basically opened up his entire career. he was in HIMYM as a result

19 November 2020

• 13:5313:53, 19 November 2020 diff hist +8‎ DMC DeLorean ‎ →‎Performance: R&T only gives auto time

14 November 2020

• 21:2521:25, 14 November 2020 diff hist +273‎ Borat Subsequent Moviefilm ‎ →‎Controversy: loaded prompted question that became the headline.... never you change, Vanity Fair

13 November 2020

• 16:1016:10, 13 November 2020 diff hist +52‎ DMC DeLorean ‎ this car was only made for 2 years, but B2F immortalized its image Tag: Reverted

30 October 2020

• 12:1512:15, 30 October 2020 diff hist +404‎ Costa Rica ‎ →‎Culture: not just an isolated incident with Nat. Geo. most happiness rankings put CR pretty high

21 October 2020

• 15:2415:24, 21 October 2020 diff hist +1‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Construction projects in Providence ‎No edit summary
• 15:2415:24, 21 October 2020 diff hist +213‎ Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Construction projects in Providence ‎No edit summary

18 October 2020

• 17:2317:23, 18 October 2020 diff hist +430‎ East Somerville station ‎ 2 stops with identical names? What could go wrong?

9 October 2020

• 23:1523:15, 9 October 2020 diff hist 0‎ Culture of Costa Rica ‎ →‎Pura vida: recognise -> recognize. American spelling seems more appropriate to a Costa Rican article than UK
• 13:1013:10, 9 October 2020 diff hist +4‎ Usain Bolt ‎ →‎Infection with COVID-19: as the great late George Carlin has said, irony is about opposites. This is not irony,.

5 October 2020

• 15:4315:43, 5 October 2020 diff hist +239‎ Mokha ‎ →‎Overview: since it links here

2 October 2020

• 01:1101:11, 2 October 2020 diff hist −161‎ Statue of Tony DeMarco ‎ found it on google maps!

11 September 2020

• 12:1412:14, 11 September 2020 diff hist −174‎ East Somerville ‎ →‎Transportation: happily, closures are over with!

2 September 2020

• 21:0621:06, 2 September 2020 diff hist +88‎ Kenosha, Wisconsin ‎ →‎2010 census: best of both worlds: almost a direct plagiarism from the source and also somehow misrepresenting what the source says

1 September 2020

• 13:4613:46, 1 September 2020 diff hist −27‎ Takes a Little Time (Amy Grant song) ‎ I remember enhanced CDs!

30 August 2020

• 16:0016:00, 30 August 2020 diff hist +21‎ Q Who ‎ →‎Production: describing Gomez so that readers can recall who this refers to

25 August 2020

• 13:4913:49, 25 August 2020 diff hist −154‎ Black September ‎ cropping a little bit closer to the source's content.

15 August 2020

• 13:5413:54, 15 August 2020 diff hist −7‎ East Somerville ‎ insert map. remove sentence about North Station, which hardly seems relevant
• 13:5013:50, 15 August 2020 diff hist +489‎ N File:East Somerville map.png ‎ Uploading an excerpt from a non-free work using File Upload Wizard

27 July 2020

• 19:2919:29, 27 July 2020 diff hist +510‎ Men Are from Mars, Women Are from Venus ‎ →‎Criticism of the book: a but more detail about what the study showed.
• 16:0216:02, 27 July 2020 diff hist −3‎ The Myth of Mars and Venus ‎ →‎Details: he wasn't arguing that we need it, as if it's about us. he argues that its' needed in general

1 June 2020

• 13:3213:32, 1 June 2020 diff hist +121‎ The Vat of Acid Episode ‎ →‎Plot: change and clarify a few minor plot points.

20 May 2020

• 22:3722:37, 20 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ White Trash, Two Heebs and a Bean ‎ can't spell
• 22:3622:36, 20 May 2020 diff hist 0‎ White Trash, Two Heebs and a Bean ‎No edit summary
• 22:3622:36, 20 May 2020 diff hist +242‎ White Trash, Two Heebs and a Bean ‎ explaining the title

19 May 2020

• 18:3618:36, 19 May 2020 diff hist +77‎ Chambord ‎ also coffee makers current

8 May 2020

• 13:0113:01, 8 May 2020 diff hist +595‎ Loose Change ‎ →‎Criticism: don't forget Chomsky's reaction

5 May 2020

• 01:1201:12, 5 May 2020 diff hist +243‎ Shambhala Buddhism ‎ →‎History: returned to teaching march 2020
• 01:1101:11, 5 May 2020 diff hist +246‎ Sakyong Mipham ‎ returned to teaching

26 April 2020

• 16:5016:50, 26 April 2020 diff hist +347‎ Talk:Expected value ‎ →‎The lede section lacks consistency
• 16:4016:40, 26 April 2020 diff hist +44‎ East Somerville station ‎ somehow, no links to East Somerville
• 16:2616:26, 26 April 2020 diff hist +487‎ Somerville, Massachusetts ‎ →‎Role in the Revolutionary War: here's your source, but the history is uncertain
• 16:0916:09, 26 April 2020 diff hist +4‎ Somerville, Massachusetts ‎ updating since 2010 census to 2018 esimates
• 02:4702:47, 26 April 2020 diff hist +247‎ Talk:Expected value ‎ →‎The lede section lacks consistency

24 April 2020

• 20:5120:51, 24 April 2020 diff hist +196‎ List of Hispanic and Latino Americans ‎ →‎Scientists: so this guy won the Nobel prize
• 00:0000:00, 24 April 2020 diff hist −60‎ COVID-19 ‎ →‎Nomenclature: make shorter

20 April 2020

• 20:3520:35, 20 April 2020 diff hist +58‎ Factor analysis ‎ →‎Mathematical model of the same example: normalized has not been defined, z's come out of nowhere
• 20:3320:33, 20 April 2020 diff hist +88‎ Factor analysis ‎ →‎Statistical model: also not defined
• 20:2120:21, 20 April 2020 diff hist −49‎ Expected value ‎ But it's so much more than a concept!
• 20:1620:16, 20 April 2020 diff hist +161‎ Factor analysis ‎ →‎Statistical model: clarify equation into words
• 20:1220:12, 20 April 2020 diff hist −33‎ Factor analysis ‎ →‎Example: clarifying a bit for readability

19 April 2020

• 23:3923:39, 19 April 2020 diff hist −26‎ Inglehart–Welzel cultural map of the world ‎ then why waste words and claim it's a map?

6 April 2020

• 01:4701:47, 6 April 2020 diff hist +14‎ Educated (book) ‎ →‎Synopsis: that's a lot of long paragraphs

4 April 2020

• 02:4902:49, 4 April 2020 diff hist −23‎ Dialect ‎ →‎Dialect or language: WTF? "the western in its origins"

3 April 2020

• 04:0304:03, 3 April 2020 diff hist −1,991‎ The True Story of the 3 Little Pigs! ‎ rv: unencyclopedic

30 March 2020

• 13:4513:45, 30 March 2020 diff hist +152‎ Magoun Square station ‎ not actually going through the square
• 13:1413:14, 30 March 2020 diff hist +31‎ Green Line (MBTA) ‎ whoa whoa whoa.... one trusim of the MBTA is that the future is not known, and it certainly is not guaranteed to be the future written by MBTA deadlines

29 March 2020

• 02:2602:26, 29 March 2020 diff hist +214‎ AeroPress ‎ →‎Differences from French press: it's a popular thing to compare to just french press? that seems an oddly specific comparison to make. they're not all that similar, except for being immersion brew, which includes other methods

23 March 2020

• 20:1420:14, 23 March 2020 diff hist +1‎ Keurig ‎ →‎Environmental impact: fix ref?
• 20:1320:13, 23 March 2020 diff hist +519‎ Keurig ‎ →‎Environmental impact: kill the k cup and recyclability problems

25 February 2020

• 14:1114:11, 25 February 2020 diff hist −10‎ Blackstone, Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎History: I'm not sure the cemetery qualifies as a chapter in area's history
• 14:0914:09, 25 February 2020 diff hist +331‎ Bernie Bro ‎ SNL did a good parody of the popular percetion of BBs

23 January 2020

• 20:3520:35, 23 January 2020 diff hist +353‎ Bernie Sanders ‎ Undid revision 936215176 by SashiRolls (talk) was listed in the source give above. Tag: Undo
• 18:2818:28, 23 January 2020 diff hist +28‎ Factor analysis ‎ →‎Example: a bit more clarity that this is the prediction and the individuals vary from prediction is the point

17 January 2020

• 11:4711:47, 17 January 2020 diff hist +65‎ Bernie Sanders ‎ →‎Professional history and early years in Vermont: copy edit, + carpentry skills were "shitty"

10 January 2020

• 17:3617:36, 10 January 2020 diff hist +155‎ Dallas Area Rapid Transit ‎ also 6th busiest

6 January 2020

• 19:5819:58, 6 January 2020 diff hist +121‎ The Old Man and the Seat ‎ →‎Production and writing: or the Hemingway novel, also remove [[WP:OR|original research about Rick's OS

3 January 2020

• 14:1814:18, 3 January 2020 diff hist +31‎ Apollo 13 (film) ‎ →‎Plot: this example is actually cited in Square peg in a round hole

31 December 2019

• 15:2115:21, 31 December 2019 diff hist −33‎ Rattlestar Ricklactica ‎ →‎Plot: fixed
• 15:2115:21, 31 December 2019 diff hist −4,781‎ Rattlestar Ricklactica ‎ →‎Plot: greatly shortened plot to make more appropriate for encyclopedic context

20 December 2019

• 13:4613:46, 20 December 2019 diff hist −93‎ Bromantic comedy ‎ →‎Description: the gag is generally that the characters are mortified of the idea of the relationship being sexually intimate
• 13:2513:25, 20 December 2019 diff hist −626‎ Societal impacts of cars ‎ →‎Children and play: there's nothing in the source that says this is related to cars

18 December 2019

• 20:4720:47, 18 December 2019 diff hist −4‎ Claw and Hoarder: Special Ricktim's Morty ‎ →‎Development: change name of section to "Casting"
• 20:4720:47, 18 December 2019 diff hist +27‎ Claw and Hoarder: Special Ricktim's Morty ‎ →‎Plot: clinginess
• 10:5910:59, 18 December 2019 diff hist +17‎ Claw and Hoarder: Special Ricktim's Morty ‎ →‎Plot: obviously what they are going for
• 00:1500:15, 18 December 2019 diff hist +492‎ Human error ‎ this is like defining gasoline by the fact that it's flammable! INCLUDE A DEFINITION

17 December 2019

• 21:1221:12, 17 December 2019 diff hist −14‎ Hunger in the United States ‎ cleanup per wiki style

15 December 2019

• 04:5404:54, 15 December 2019 diff hist +16‎ Rick Sanchez ‎ this is just a personal essay with more steps

13 December 2019

• 16:2016:20, 13 December 2019 diff hist +336‎ Sputnik 1 ‎ no coverage at all for what the name "sputnik means"

14 November 2019

• 16:4316:43, 14 November 2019 diff hist −319‎ Kepler-452b ‎ let's not get ahead of ourselves, "Kepler-452b, might make a good stand-in for Coruscant" does not mean NASA refers to it this way
• 14:0014:00, 14 November 2019 diff hist +509‎ Usain Bolt ‎ →‎Personal life: something I found in the NY times, does scoliosis help or hurt?

12 November 2019

• 21:2921:29, 12 November 2019 diff hist +32‎ Edge of Tomorty: Rick Die Rickpeat ‎ →‎Plot: you can't really "steal" arsenal, grammatically speaking. also, why his SUBconsciousness? Just his consciousness.
• 21:2521:25, 12 November 2019 diff hist +10‎ Edge of Tomorty: Rick Die Rickpeat ‎ →‎Critical response: if we're going to attempt pretentious word choice, at least choose a word that makes sense here. also, grammar of this sentence came out weird.

8 November 2019

• 18:1118:11, 8 November 2019 diff hist +51‎ Raising the Flag on Iwo Jima ‎ →‎Raising the first flag: I am so confused what this block quote is

7 November 2019

• 20:5520:55, 7 November 2019 diff hist +97‎ Leonard McCoy ‎ →‎"He's dead, Jim!": why he refused
• 19:5219:52, 7 November 2019 diff hist +441‎ Skyscraper design and construction ‎ →‎The elevator conundrum: also mixed use development

6 November 2019

• 19:3719:37, 6 November 2019 diff hist 0‎ Saudi Arabia ‎ there are only 192 listed there and it's 174th
• 17:4017:40, 6 November 2019 diff hist +144‎ Pavel Chekov ‎ and in both cases their accents were probably modeled after their parents, since both grew up in the US
• 10:3410:34, 6 November 2019 diff hist +221‎ Pavel Chekov ‎ →‎Origin: what the reputed pravda article said

29 October 2019

• 14:0214:02, 29 October 2019 diff hist +27‎ m Albedo ‎ →‎Astronomical albedo: wikilink Lambertian
• 13:5913:59, 29 October 2019 diff hist +4‎ m Habitable zone ‎ →‎Solar System estimates: wikilink albedo
• 13:5813:58, 29 October 2019 diff hist +8‎ m Habitable zone ‎ →‎Determination: Photodissociation, and freezing point

27 October 2019

• 14:2714:27, 27 October 2019 diff hist +480‎ Human rights in the United States ‎ let's put this in context here. the US ranks relatively well globally
• 14:0214:02, 27 October 2019 diff hist +28‎ Human rights in Singapore ‎ →‎Caning: see also: michael faye
• 13:5413:54, 27 October 2019 diff hist +4‎ Singapore ‎ GDP per capita means nominal by default, which makes it 7th

24 October 2019

• 13:3613:36, 24 October 2019 diff hist +7‎ Triangulum Galaxy ‎ →‎Visibility: what does a "diffuse" object mean?

11 October 2019

• 14:5514:55, 11 October 2019 diff hist +780‎ User talk:Walrasiad ‎ →‎Columbus's letter on the first voyage: new section
• 14:4814:48, 11 October 2019 diff hist +99‎ Columbus's letter on the first voyage ‎ →‎Assessment: like a personal essay
• 14:3814:38, 11 October 2019 diff hist +69‎ Columbus Day ‎ strange ungrammatical
• 00:1000:10, 11 October 2019 diff hist +222‎ Dawn (Star Trek: Enterprise) ‎ →‎Reception
• 00:0600:06, 11 October 2019 diff hist +592‎ Dawn (Star Trek: Enterprise) ‎ →‎Releases: reception

10 October 2019

• 01:5401:54, 10 October 2019 diff hist +6‎ Ideology of Hezbollah ‎ →‎Jews and Judaism: I think it'd be fair to say he's a hacker, not a scientist, per se.

8 October 2019

• 13:2613:26, 8 October 2019 diff hist +515‎ Rigoberta Menchú ‎ →‎Personal life: something I found in the NY times

4 October 2019

• 10:2210:22, 4 October 2019 diff hist +191‎ Electricity on Shabbat ‎ →‎Additional fuel consumption: and so what? it's because of kinding a fire
• 10:1010:10, 4 October 2019 diff hist +7‎ Electricity on Shabbat ‎ →‎Molid: is that what molid is about? How does this relate to the rest of the paragraph?

3 October 2019

• 13:3013:30, 3 October 2019 diff hist −485‎ Man's Search for Meaning ‎ reception doesn't just mean uncited criticism of the work. should also include that it's a hugely influential book
• 11:4311:43, 3 October 2019 diff hist −2,481‎ The Happiness Hypothesis ‎ →‎Ch.2: Changing your mind: this a review/critique, not summary

19 September 2019

• 13:4713:47, 19 September 2019 diff hist +225‎ Orders of magnitude (mass) ‎ →‎10{{e|−6}} to 1 kg: M&M is 0.9 grams
• 13:4613:46, 19 September 2019 diff hist +223‎ Orders of magnitude (mass) ‎ →‎10{{e|−6}} to 1 kg: a few more milligram examples
• 13:1513:15, 19 September 2019 diff hist +27‎ Milli- ‎ SI prefixes
• 13:1413:14, 19 September 2019 diff hist +3‎ Centi- ‎ assuming you know what cf means

5 September 2019

• 19:2719:27, 5 September 2019 diff hist +42‎ Centi- ‎ examples of common etymology

1 September 2019

• 03:3703:37, 1 September 2019 diff hist −1,288‎ Vanishing Point (Star Trek: Enterprise) ‎ →‎Background: WP:OR this is all original research and not supported by the source
• 03:3303:33, 1 September 2019 diff hist −464‎ Vanishing Point (Star Trek: Enterprise) ‎ →‎Science connection: deleting section. this source makes no mention of the anything in the entire Enterprise series and the point being made is no more applicable to this episode than any other transporter episode ever nade

7 August 2019

• 16:3016:30, 7 August 2019 diff hist +3‎ m 2019 El Paso shooting ‎ →‎United States
• 16:3016:30, 7 August 2019 diff hist +486‎ 2019 El Paso shooting ‎ →‎United States: putting in Obama's statement, since he's basically endorsing the criticisms in this paragraph
• 16:0816:08, 7 August 2019 diff hist +38‎ Ethiopia ‎ →‎Federal Democratic Republic (1991–present): CUD is not yet defined in the article
• 16:0116:01, 7 August 2019 diff hist +124‎ Ethiopia ‎ →‎From Menelik II to Adwa (1889–1913)

10 July 2019

• 02:4802:48, 10 July 2019 diff hist +997‎ East Somerville ‎ →‎Transportation: GLX impact on traffic and plans

12 June 2019

• 13:3213:32, 12 June 2019 diff hist +45‎ Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure ‎ →‎Plot
• 13:2413:24, 12 June 2019 diff hist +587‎ Deus ex machina ‎ →‎Examples

13 May 2019

• 14:5114:51, 13 May 2019 diff hist +420‎ Cosmic ray ‎ →‎Effect on electronics: radiolab mentioned a connection, though here it seem speculative

6 May 2019

• 21:2821:28, 6 May 2019 diff hist +14‎ The Omnivore's Dilemma ‎ →‎Summary: "it's all a cycle"" clean up

30 April 2019

• 15:5115:51, 30 April 2019 diff hist +32‎ m Minimum wage ‎ →‎Research subsequent to Card and Krueger's work: a bit of copy editing. inappropriately placed "apostrophe's", etc...
• 13:3413:34, 30 April 2019 diff hist +366‎ The Little People (The Twilight Zone) ‎ →‎In popular culture: derivative source. sources do not recognize this episode as inspiration, but as Microcosmic God as inspiration for all
• 02:0602:06, 30 April 2019 diff hist +348‎ Microcosmic God ‎ →‎Cultural influence: here is the anthology

23 April 2019

• 14:0514:05, 23 April 2019 diff hist +450‎ Chelsea Clinton ‎ →‎White House years: appearance was also mocked by the late John McCain, though he did apologize profusely
• 12:0812:08, 23 April 2019 diff hist −31‎ Facebook ‎ →‎Breach: there's no source for a 3% drop in share price, and what typically happens with significant reported news-related share price drops is they rebound within the week anyway

22 April 2019

• 03:0203:02, 22 April 2019 diff hist +55‎ Street harassment ‎ →‎Public attitudes: mentioned again
• 03:0003:00, 22 April 2019 diff hist +167‎ Street harassment ‎ →‎Motivation: okay, but to clarify in context, Gordon-Smith was not endorsing that women play along. She was arguing that this was how men's impressions could be mistaken.

3 April 2019

• 12:2012:20, 3 April 2019 diff hist +83‎ Sweden Solar System ‎ →‎Other bodies: sedna pic
• 12:1712:17, 3 April 2019 diff hist +146‎ Sweden Solar System ‎ hey look, someone's uploaded a Neptune too!

2 April 2019

• 12:2512:25, 2 April 2019 diff hist +160‎ Sweden Solar System ‎ →‎Inner planets: well, I found a creative commons Venus pic to upload
• 12:1112:11, 2 April 2019 diff hist +129‎ Sweden Solar System ‎ →‎The system: I'd really love pictures of all the planets here, but least we can include the Ericsson Globe as the sun

23 March 2019

• 14:5414:54, 23 March 2019 diff hist +274‎ Ruth Bader Ginsburg ‎ →‎Future plans: I feel "full steam" is a distinct enough phrase she has used repeatedly to merit inclusion here
• 14:4214:42, 23 March 2019 diff hist −35‎ American Jews ‎ not really sure why we would include the hebrew

19 March 2019

• 19:1819:18, 19 March 2019 diff hist +6‎ Montpelier ‎ bolding Montpelier, VT. The other US places are incredibly small/obscure while Montpelier, VT is the state capital with far more notability
• 19:0219:02, 19 March 2019 diff hist +30‎ m Charles-Augustin de Coulomb ‎ slight rewrite

3 March 2019

• 17:2417:24, 3 March 2019 diff hist 0‎ Future of space exploration ‎ →‎Breakthrough Starshot: link redirects to solar sail anyway

2 March 2019

• 14:0014:00, 2 March 2019 diff hist +561‎ Robbin' the Hood ‎ →‎Reception: found another review
• 13:4913:49, 2 March 2019 diff hist +20‎ m Robbin' the Hood ‎ →‎Reception: wikilink
• 13:4813:48, 2 March 2019 diff hist +1,295‎ Robbin' the Hood ‎ reception

1 March 2019

• 19:5519:55, 1 March 2019 diff hist +139‎ 40oz. to Freedom ‎ →‎Critical reception: aged poorly.
• 19:4219:42, 1 March 2019 diff hist +3‎ 40oz. to Freedom ‎ →‎Critical reception
• 19:4219:42, 1 March 2019 diff hist +404‎ 40oz. to Freedom ‎ →‎Reception and legacy
• 19:4119:41, 1 March 2019 diff hist +1,055‎ 40oz. to Freedom ‎ →‎Critical reception: great review
• 19:3119:31, 1 March 2019 diff hist +19‎ A Message to You Rudy ‎ →‎Other cover versions: wasn't really a quote

27 February 2019

• 11:0311:03, 27 February 2019 diff hist +8‎ Power (physics) ‎ intro sentence unclear defintion
• 11:0111:01, 27 February 2019 diff hist −247‎ Horsepower ‎ this is simply untrue. It's a unit of power, just as any other. you can calculate the hp of a light bulb!

17 February 2019

• 14:2514:25, 17 February 2019 diff hist +13‎ Red pill and blue pill ‎ →‎The Matrix (1999): hehe, arguable. the matrix is the normal world, until he discovers that's he's been in wonderland. his going to wonderland is a metaphor for his mental journey
• 14:2214:22, 17 February 2019 diff hist +1‎ m Languages of India ‎ →‎Telugu: formatting mistake, silly me
• 14:2214:22, 17 February 2019 diff hist +68‎ Languages of India ‎ →‎Telugu: well, it's higher on this table than the next highest Dravidian language, which Tamil.
• 14:1814:18, 17 February 2019 diff hist +3‎ The Wandering Earth ‎ →‎Plot: that doesn't make any sense. the planet would have begun to be torn apart by tidal forces if it has passed the Roche limit. the point was just that they were too close

11 February 2019

• 14:5614:56, 11 February 2019 diff hist +112‎ Godfellas ‎ →‎Cultural references: brief summary of microcosmic God's relation

7 February 2019

• 14:4114:41, 7 February 2019 diff hist +59‎ American Jews ‎ Undid revision 881865937 by יניב הורון (talk) cited above, and actually the sources say "above 90%" or "95%" Tag: Undo
• 14:3514:35, 7 February 2019 diff hist +17‎ Red pill and blue pill ‎ →‎Overview: flagging my own contribution for a better source
• 14:3314:33, 7 February 2019 diff hist +124‎ Red pill and blue pill ‎ →‎Overview: it's a blog, but I suppose we'll take it for now
• 14:2814:28, 7 February 2019 diff hist +8‎ Red pill and blue pill ‎ →‎Overview: the script explicitly references Alice in Wonderland several times, but it seems like original research to clalim that red bill/blue pill was an homage to that

18 January 2019

• 15:4015:40, 18 January 2019 diff hist +28‎ Secretary problem ‎ it's not just that you can rank them. it's that you have enough information to correctly rank the candidates seen so far

4 January 2019

• 12:5412:54, 4 January 2019 diff hist −2‎ Chang'e 4 ‎ as if it were actually the near side

3 January 2019

• 18:1818:18, 3 January 2019 diff hist −66‎ Chang'e 4 ‎ technically 18% of the far side is visible at different times due to libation

1 January 2019

• 14:2314:23, 1 January 2019 diff hist −50‎ Galaxy Song ‎ →‎Accuracy of astronomical figures: this is actually untrue, as most of his figures were correct then, as are they now
• 14:1814:18, 1 January 2019 diff hist +49‎ Galaxy Song ‎ →‎Accuracy of astronomical figures: 18.51 rounds to 19 so this is accurate

21 December 2018

• 14:5714:57, 21 December 2018 diff hist +9‎ Comet Bennett ‎ umm... to grace the 1970s?

20 December 2018

• 14:4314:43, 20 December 2018 diff hist +2‎ Languages of India ‎ →‎Regional languages
• 14:4314:43, 20 December 2018 diff hist +3,141‎ Languages of India ‎ →‎Prominent languages of India: reinstate image and section removed without explanation

17 December 2018

• 16:5616:56, 17 December 2018 diff hist +246‎ Wonderful Christmastime ‎ →‎Reception and legacy

7 December 2018

• 16:2216:22, 7 December 2018 diff hist +22‎ Kepler-10c ‎ wikilinking to AU

28 November 2018

• 02:0702:07, 28 November 2018 diff hist 0‎ Mars Climate Orbiter ‎ →‎Cause of failure: in that very source

20 November 2018

• 22:5522:55, 20 November 2018 diff hist +3‎ m MythBusters ‎ →‎Popularity and influence
• 22:5422:54, 20 November 2018 diff hist −167‎ MythBusters ‎ →‎Popularity and influence: link was dead, but the source I found says she waited until pressure equalized to open the door

13 October 2018

• 12:1512:15, 13 October 2018 diff hist +28‎ Rick Sanchez ‎ misanthrope is a great word. also, hyphen not needed with "well" when complimentary verb is obvious
• 12:1012:10, 13 October 2018 diff hist +19‎ Rick Sanchez ‎ nobody knows him as Emmett Brown

12 September 2018

• 22:0922:09, 12 September 2018 diff hist +30‎ Sony BMG v. Tenenbaum ‎ →‎Background: WP:BLP only list what is supported

22 August 2018

• 02:1902:19, 22 August 2018 diff hist +291‎ Moment of inertia factor ‎ clarify

21 August 2018

• 12:5812:58, 21 August 2018 diff hist +481‎ Greater Boston ‎ explaining why the city proper population is such a small fraction of Greater Boston. Also, "contributions to human civilization" sounded a bit lofty

25 July 2018

• 20:5520:55, 25 July 2018 diff hist +244‎ Cluster munition ‎ →‎Threat to civilians: 45 years later

6 July 2018

• 18:2818:28, 6 July 2018 diff hist +195‎ South Boston ‎ →‎Parks: a new pic from the air

1 July 2018

• 04:0304:03, 1 July 2018 diff hist +111‎ Sakyong Mipham ‎ →‎Biography: it doesn't say founded by former shambhala members, only one
• 04:0004:00, 1 July 2018 diff hist +180‎ Sakyong Mipham ‎ →‎Biography: putting a quote on for his exact words, also inappropriate was mispelled

28 June 2018

• 12:3412:34, 28 June 2018 diff hist +242‎ Dee Barnes ‎ →‎Dr. Dre incident: story time!
• 12:2712:27, 28 June 2018 diff hist +9‎ Dee Barnes ‎ →‎Dr. Dre incident: this is much more popularly known as "no contest"

26 June 2018

• 01:3301:33, 26 June 2018 diff hist +235‎ Back Bay, Boston ‎ →‎Buildings around Copley Square: a picture
• 01:3101:31, 26 June 2018 diff hist +173‎ One Dalton ‎ I have a picture

21 June 2018

• 14:3014:30, 21 June 2018 diff hist +68‎ One Dalton ‎ official website in the style of other building articles

7 June 2018

• 12:2612:26, 7 June 2018 diff hist +25‎ John Cho ‎ →‎Being an Asian American in Hollywood: wikilink to white washing
• 12:2512:25, 7 June 2018 diff hist 0‎ John Cho ‎ →‎Acting career: makes more sense to make this chronological

1 June 2018

• 18:2518:25, 1 June 2018 diff hist +90‎ Deanna Troi ‎ →‎Depiction: a bit more encyclopedic clean up

26 March 2018

• 11:4911:49, 26 March 2018 diff hist +4‎ Effects of meditation ‎ →‎Physical changes in the brain: yeah, everybody knows what the precuneus is. totally common knowledge

19 March 2018

• 21:4521:45, 19 March 2018 diff hist −32‎ A New Day (The Wire) ‎ →‎Politics
• 16:1416:14, 19 March 2018 diff hist +460‎ Myers–Briggs Type Indicator ‎ valid, reliable, independent, comprehensive are the standards

18 March 2018

• 22:0322:03, 18 March 2018 diff hist +2‎ Economy of Greece ‎ →‎2010–2017 government debt crisis: 8 years ago is still the future tense?
• 21:5921:59, 18 March 2018 diff hist −2‎ Economy of Greece ‎ →‎2010–2017 government debt crisis: the linked source discusses the "OCED" data and is probably quoting OECD comparison, despite sloppily saying "the world"
• 14:3514:35, 18 March 2018 diff hist −13‎ Effects of meditation ‎ well that's a clunkily added sentence. of course, the results were published somewhere or else how would we be reporting the results here?

17 March 2018

• 19:0919:09, 17 March 2018 diff hist +238‎ Mars Climate Orbiter ‎ →‎Cause of failure: NASA does not blame lockheed

17 February 2018

• 18:4618:46, 17 February 2018 diff hist +1,425‎ Gender pay gap in the United States ‎ as per instructed, putting Uber study in the article as appropriate. however, the lede is inaccurate - these are 2 factors among many many more that are posted
• 18:2218:22, 17 February 2018 diff hist −189‎ Habitable zone ‎ I think most of us know this, and those who are confused can click the link

14 February 2018

• 19:2519:25, 14 February 2018 diff hist +554‎ Gender pay gap in the United States ‎ uber study, producing same gender gap without discrimination or negotiation

9 February 2018

• 01:4701:47, 9 February 2018 diff hist +14‎ Kamala Harris ‎ →‎Early life and education: Chennai was not Chennai then

6 February 2018

• 22:4822:48, 6 February 2018 diff hist +78‎ Flatland ‎ →‎As a social satire: to be clear, it's satire

30 January 2018

• 18:1618:16, 30 January 2018 diff hist −151‎ Fox Point, Providence, Rhode Island ‎ this source just says that Fox Point is a nice place to live, not that residents have been displaced

15 January 2018

• 16:1216:12, 15 January 2018 diff hist +183‎ Godfellas ‎ →‎Themes: reference of free will paradox

12 January 2018

• 16:2116:21, 12 January 2018 diff hist +396‎ Talk:Ronald Reagan ‎ →‎AIDS Section
• 16:1916:19, 12 January 2018 diff hist +17‎ Ronald Reagan ‎ →‎Response to AIDS epidemic: sorry, I mean to use the inline template.
• 14:4014:40, 12 January 2018 diff hist +10‎ Ronald Reagan ‎ →‎Response to AIDS epidemic: weasel
• 14:3614:36, 12 January 2018 diff hist +6‎ Hall effect ‎ →‎Discovery: general guidelines, spell out numbers that are [http://www.grammarbook.com/numbers/numbers.asp beginning a sentence]
• 13:4513:45, 12 January 2018 diff hist +10‎ Edwin Hall ‎ named for him

10 January 2018

• 17:0217:02, 10 January 2018 diff hist +42‎ Hormesis ‎ and that means?

9 January 2018

• 14:5114:51, 9 January 2018 diff hist +42‎ New York (state) ‎ indeed, though Hindi/Urdu together is 0.6%

8 January 2018

• 00:4300:43, 8 January 2018 diff hist −333‎ Long Island (Massachusetts) ‎ →‎Recent use: not supported by source given

7 January 2018

• 03:4403:44, 7 January 2018 diff hist +73‎ Down syndrome ‎ →‎Abortion rates: interesting trend in that the women most directly affected were mostly likely to terminate

6 January 2018

• 17:0817:08, 6 January 2018 diff hist +43‎ Inclusion (education) ‎ clean up lead. never define article subject by category when you can actually define it
• 17:0117:01, 6 January 2018 diff hist +149‎ Refugees (The Wire) ‎ →‎Plot: copy -editting

22 December 2017

• 02:1402:14, 22 December 2017 diff hist +9‎ Encyclopedic novel ‎ oh irony of ironies

7 December 2017

• 16:3816:38, 7 December 2017 diff hist +27‎ Soft Eyes ‎ →‎Plot: consolidated Herc-Valcheck plotline
• 11:1111:11, 7 December 2017 diff hist +43‎ Soft Eyes ‎ →‎Plot: define pay grade

6 December 2017

• 22:0222:02, 6 December 2017 diff hist +8‎ Ballades (Chopin) ‎ →‎Ballade No. 1: popular belief, huh?

4 December 2017

• 22:5522:55, 4 December 2017 diff hist +118‎ Sapiens: A Brief History of Humankind ‎ →‎Negative: specifically
• 22:1922:19, 4 December 2017 diff hist +429‎ History of Providence, Rhode Island ‎ Undid revision 813697741 by Dilidor (talk) rv unexplained edit that removes material and wikilinks
• 22:1522:15, 4 December 2017 diff hist +9,581‎ User talk:Dohezarsersdah ‎ Undid revision 457804862 by Dohezarsersdah (talk) talk page restore
• 22:1422:14, 4 December 2017 diff hist +5‎ Sapiens: A Brief History of Humankind ‎ →‎Summary: a bit less clunky to use prepositional phrasing in lieu of possessive apostrophe

21 November 2017

• 15:1315:13, 21 November 2017 diff hist +465‎ Public image of Barack Obama ‎ →‎Elitism: notable critique calling Obama a yuppie
• 12:5712:57, 21 November 2017 diff hist +23‎ Qattara Depression Project ‎ not in source

16 November 2017

• 13:3213:32, 16 November 2017 diff hist +84‎ United States Postal Service ‎ →‎Postal Inspection Service: another source

7 November 2017

• 03:0003:00, 7 November 2017 diff hist −116‎ DART Light Rail ‎ update to newest APTA data, highest ridership numbers and 6th busiest

28 October 2017

• 14:0314:03, 28 October 2017 diff hist +50‎ Sobriquet ‎ →‎A–C: here's one

20 October 2017

• 20:0920:09, 20 October 2017 diff hist −1,001‎ List of United States light rail systems ‎ I think we can remove a service that hasn't been run in 4 years
• 20:0320:03, 20 October 2017 diff hist 0‎ METRORail ‎ why are we linking a 2013 report, calling it a 2015 report and then using numbers that don't match any source?
• 20:0120:01, 20 October 2017 diff hist +800‎ METRORail ‎ Undid revision 806126027 by 50.206.179.150 (talk) rv: source lists 2003 numbers
• 19:5819:58, 20 October 2017 diff hist −171‎ The Circle (2017 film) ‎ rv: the song played and the artist performing are hardly key elements of the plot
• 12:3012:30, 20 October 2017 diff hist +77‎ Three Gorges Dam ‎ →‎Terrestrial impact: nope

19 October 2017

• 15:2015:20, 19 October 2017 diff hist +13‎ Central limit theorem ‎ well, technically lots of distributions are bell-shaped. It's just the common parlance amongst laypersons

16 October 2017

• 11:5211:52, 16 October 2017 diff hist +18‎ Auburn University ‎ yeah, I'm not sure that link is helpful here

12 October 2017

• 15:2215:22, 12 October 2017 diff hist −1‎ m Transportation in the United States ‎ →‎Infrastructure and private automobile use: ce
• 15:2115:21, 12 October 2017 diff hist +948‎ Transportation in the United States ‎ →‎Infrastructure and private automobile use: it's been 4 years, let's get some sources up here
• 14:5814:58, 12 October 2017 diff hist −39‎ Saturn ‎ →‎Physical characteristics: seems odd to mention the names of scientists when those names are never again used.
• 14:5314:53, 12 October 2017 diff hist +22‎ Saturn ‎ that source is currently down

3 October 2017

• 12:0112:01, 3 October 2017 diff hist −488‎ Massachusetts College of Art and Design ‎ →‎Academics: I'm sorry, 4 years of unsupported citation is all you get

27 September 2017

• 20:0620:06, 27 September 2017 diff hist +300‎ Galaxy Song ‎ →‎Accuracy of astronomical figures: okay, this number is legitimately off, and not by a rounding error

22 September 2017

• 18:4618:46, 22 September 2017 diff hist −99‎ American Jews ‎ →‎Buddhism: no source for Buddhist interest
• 15:4115:41, 22 September 2017 diff hist +118‎ Galaxy Song ‎ →‎Accuracy of astronomical figures: oh come on, the rhythmic meter of the song and the fact that the numbers are all good to 1 sig fig. let's be honest. he did his homework

21 September 2017

• 23:3923:39, 21 September 2017 diff hist +759‎ Moral foundations theory ‎ →‎The Five Foundations: clarifying this 6th foundation, it was put there for libertarians who emailed him, saying he'd missed the
• 01:5001:50, 21 September 2017 diff hist +1‎ 1984 Summer Olympics ‎ →‎In popular culture: "near financial disaster", huh? "it is working better than anyone expected"

13 September 2017

• 18:2718:27, 13 September 2017 diff hist +448‎ Mars Climate Orbiter ‎ →‎Cause of failure: a bit more complete. it was never about the units

17 August 2017

• 16:4416:44, 17 August 2017 diff hist +125‎ Outliers (book) ‎ and a note to the lead
• 16:4116:41, 17 August 2017 diff hist +481‎ Outliers (book) ‎ →‎Reception: the study authors themselves say he got it wrong

14 August 2017

• 19:2219:22, 14 August 2017 diff hist +73‎ Stress–energy tensor ‎ →‎Identifying the components of the tensor: rho can mean a half dozen different things in different contexts. always define your symbols

15 July 2017

• 23:0923:09, 15 July 2017 diff hist +98‎ Death's End ‎ →‎Eras: ?

5 July 2017

• 21:3121:31, 5 July 2017 diff hist +34‎ Death's End ‎ →‎Plot: wikilink to MAD
• 13:4413:44, 5 July 2017 diff hist +35‎ 1812 Overture ‎ there is no source or discussion that supports that this is popularly used outside of July 4th fireworks celebrations within the article

30 June 2017

• 13:4913:49, 30 June 2017 diff hist +666‎ East Ramapo Central School District ‎ →‎21st century: This American Life gives context. The mention in 2014 is only relevant in that it brought more attention

16 June 2017

• 14:3614:36, 16 June 2017 diff hist +5‎ Prime Directive ‎ It's a "principle" tells us nothing. What does it mean?

7 June 2017

• 16:4016:40, 7 June 2017 diff hist +815‎ The Circle (2017 film) ‎ Undid revision 784113442 by 86.131.175.226 (talk) undo reversion with no explanation given

5 June 2017

• 12:0412:04, 5 June 2017 diff hist +815‎ The Circle (2017 film) ‎ →‎Plot: differences from novel
• 11:4811:48, 5 June 2017 diff hist −1‎ Talk:Centrifugal force ‎ →‎direction of centrifugal force: apologies. it's been a while since I've mixed wiki mark up with latex mark up
• 11:4511:45, 5 June 2017 diff hist 0‎ Talk:Centrifugal force ‎ →‎direction of centrifugal force
• 11:4411:44, 5 June 2017 diff hist +28‎ Talk:Centrifugal force ‎ →‎direction of centrifugal force
• 11:4311:43, 5 June 2017 diff hist +1,323‎ Talk:Centrifugal force ‎ →‎direction of centrifugal force: new section

30 May 2017

• 20:5220:52, 30 May 2017 diff hist −963‎ Boston ‎ rv good faith edits on the basis of original research
• 20:5020:50, 30 May 2017 diff hist +21‎ Centrifugal force ‎ →‎Force: actually, for helical motion, you will have a centrifugal component in the direction of omega

22 May 2017

• 18:0318:03, 22 May 2017 diff hist +51‎ The Dark Forest ‎ →‎Plot: a few things made reference to

9 May 2017

• 20:1320:13, 9 May 2017 diff hist −1‎ Talk:QWERTY ‎ →‎Removed from lede: "we're only using QWERTY because of inertia"
• 20:1320:13, 9 May 2017 diff hist +1,122‎ Talk:QWERTY ‎ →‎Removed from lede: "we're only using QWERTY because of inertia": new section
• 20:0820:08, 9 May 2017 diff hist +6‎ m QWERTY ‎ cleanup
• 20:0720:07, 9 May 2017 diff hist −320‎ QWERTY ‎ already covered below. no need to put a weasely political debate in the lede
• 16:5616:56, 9 May 2017 diff hist +6‎ Charlie Kaufman ‎ Okay, but let's use the wording of the source itself "most celebrated"

1 May 2017

• 02:1902:19, 1 May 2017 diff hist −28‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎Demographics: stillborn sentence phrase
• 02:1602:16, 1 May 2017 diff hist −170‎ Providence, Rhode Island ‎ →‎21st century: this is only proposed. let's not forget the cancelled proposed new tallest OneTen a decade ago

30 April 2017

• 19:2719:27, 30 April 2017 diff hist +6‎ Charlie Kaufman ‎ well, 3 instances of something doesn't prove that it happens "often"

28 April 2017

• 14:2314:23, 28 April 2017 diff hist +21‎ Phobos (moon) ‎ seems appropriate to include a nod to "phobia"

25 April 2017

• 20:0120:01, 25 April 2017 diff hist −1,685‎ All Prologue ‎ clean up a bit. wikipedia summary isn't for including every snappy line of dialogue from the show

1 April 2017

• 19:3419:34, 1 April 2017 diff hist +35‎ The Corrections ‎ →‎Themes: looks like OR

31 March 2017

• 13:1213:12, 31 March 2017 diff hist +337‎ Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan ‎ Undid revision 770936006 by SonOfThornhill (talk) I find your reversion completely illogical

17 March 2017

• 18:3618:36, 17 March 2017 diff hist +106‎ Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan ‎ RV: because Abrams, who loved this movie, lifted large elements of plot and character from it when he made Into Darkness
• 18:3318:33, 17 March 2017 diff hist −112‎ Template:Providence neighborhoods ‎ let's not go putting in unofficial neighborhoods if we haven't even made an article. we have proof they exist
• 18:3118:31, 17 March 2017 diff hist +242‎ Talk:Downcity Providence ‎ →‎Downtown and Downcity
• 18:3018:30, 17 March 2017 diff hist −15‎ Template:Providence neighborhoods ‎ that article no longer exists
• 18:2918:29, 17 March 2017 diff hist −1,948‎ Downcity Providence ‎ there is no reason for this article to exist current

13 March 2017

• 13:4213:42, 13 March 2017 diff hist +1‎ m Star Trek Into Darkness ‎ →‎Critical reception: sorry, typo
• 13:4113:41, 13 March 2017 diff hist +399‎ Star Trek Into Darkness ‎ →‎Critical reception: explicitly ethnic, Indian as an aspect of the character himself. also, someone made a comic book to explain Khan's change into whiteness
• 12:4812:48, 13 March 2017 diff hist +102‎ Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan ‎ →‎Critical response: they even reused Khan, but no spoilers, so how about this wording?