Talk:Clumber Spaniel

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Good article Clumber Spaniel has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
December 17, 2009 Good article nominee Listed

Vulnerable Native Breed[edit]

This breed is classed in Britain as a VNB - a breed which originated in the UK but now has registration numbers with the Kennel Club of less then 300 puppies per year.

I'm a Canadian teenager on a gap year before Uni and I'm really interested in this. Would anyone like a VNB paragraph/link on this page? I can write it, but am ignorant about formatting etc. Plus, I'm trying to put together a whole collection on all 29 breeds on this list, including history and so on, using Wikipedia as one of my many sources. If you can help, or are interested at all, please contact me either on my talk page or at green_ied_dragon@hotmail.com

--The Wizard of Magicland 19:43, 10 September 2006 (UTC)

Breeders Websites[edit]

Just removed a link to a breeders website. According to the guidance on what types of external links are suitable on wikipedia pages, breeders websites are not permitted.Miyagawa (talk) 21:02, 15 December 2009 (UTC)

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Clumber Spaniel/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 01:32, 16 December 2009 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
    Appearance section and first paragraph of temperament need a little work, appearance is good, but a bit repetitive with the word Heavy. I'll give you time to work on these.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    Very good in this regard.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    Images need "ALT TEXT"
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Managed to reduce the "heavy"s in appearance down to two, and added inline citations for the first couple of lines of temperament - although I re-wrote one section so that it didn't seem like everything was coming from the same source. Miyagawa (talk) 23:35, 16 December 2009 (UTC)

Played with the Temperament section a little, pruned out the dupicate information in the first and third paragraphs, and moved the hunting information in the first paragraph into the third so that its all together. Miyagawa (talk) 12:51, 17 December 2009 (UTC)

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