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'''Placeholder''' - as the article's primary contributor I made the decision not to add an infobox. I'll explain my reasoning as soon as I have time, in a few days. In the meantime, I'm bringing this discussion to the attention of the arbs at ARCA, if that request is still open. [[User:Victoriaearle|Victoria]] ([[User talk:Victoriaearle|tk]]) 00:44, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
<s>'''Placeholder''' - as the article's primary contributor I made the decision not to add an infobox. I'll explain my reasoning as soon as I have time, in a few days. In the meantime, I'm bringing this discussion to the attention of the arbs at ARCA, if that request is still open. [[User:Victoriaearle|Victoria]] ([[User talk:Victoriaearle|tk]]) 00:44, 20 September 2016 (UTC)</s>

'''Oppose''' the infobox added on 19:56, 17 September 2016, in [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Ezra_Pound&diff=prev&oldid=739900021 this edit] for the following reasons:
*Image - image in the infobox ([[:File:Ezra Pound 1963.jpg]]) is not free in the US. We've had a lot of trouble with the images here because the Pound estate claims copyright in most cases or they were published at or about 1923ish when images fall out of the public domain. Plenty of discussions can be linked in regards to which images to use and which not. This is not on the list.
*Place of birth: Ezra was born in [[Hailey, Idaho]] (these days an adjunct to the [[Sun Valley, Idaho|Sun Valley]] and [[Ketchum, Idaho|Ketchum]] area (strangely the same area where Hemingway lived for a period and committed suicide). When Ezra was born Hailey wasn't a lovely little resort town, it was a silver mining town (basically lawless) in an area that hadn't yet achieved statehood. But this is all mostly irrelevant because Ezra's mother Isabel disliked Hailey intensely and the family moved back east to [[Jenkintown, Pennsylvania]] when Ezra was about a year and half old. He lived in Jenkintown until he moved to Europe c. 1906 (except for the period he was in college in Philadelphia and New York) so he grew up very much a [[Philadelphia Main Line]] boy and not at all a westerner. The field in the box implies he was born and lived in Idaho. He didn't.
*Resting place: this isn't incorrect - that's where he's buried, but I do dislike this terminology.
*Nationality: well that opens a can of worms and is one reason I decided not to include an infobox. He was born in the US and he held a US passport (though I'd have to look into the sources to see whether that was stripped at some point - certainly he wasn't able to use it when he was reputably trying to get out of Italy before his arrest). He lived in the US from his birth in 1885 to 1906 when he moved to Europe, and he lived in the US during the 12 years he was in [[St. Elizabeths Hospital]] - the rest of his life was lived in England, France and Italy. In many ways Ezra epitomized the post-WWI expatriates. Furthermore, he was accused of treason. In other words he was a traitor and came extremely close to being executed for treason. Many people repudiated him and repudiated his nationality.
*Alma mater: these are correct but it's a little more complicated. He went to UPenn at age 16, almost got kicked out (the sources are unclear why) then went to Hamilton. Some of his graduate work was done at Hamiliton - where he fought with the professors and was almost asked to leave (I'll need to get into sources to cite some of this and not all of it made it into the 10,000+ word article), and he tried to go back to UPenn as a graduate student but if I remember correctly off the top of my head they wouldn't have him. So it's all a little muddled. If I remember correctly he did receive an honorary degree from Hamiliton at some point. So, again, it's all a little muddled and not totally straightforward.
*Period: [[20th century in literature]] is overly broad but not bad and probably acceptable because of his influence on 20th century literature - not only through his own writing but through his mentorships to writers such as Joyce, Eliot and Hemingway among others.
*Genre: links to [[Poetry]] which is overly broad. He wrote essays, books, poetry, literary criticism, economic criticism, treatises, radio broadcasts, etc.
*Literary movement: [[Literary modernism]] and [[Imagism]], yes, ok. But again, what about all the others (and frankly there's no room in an infobox for them, but if we have an infobox some will creep in; some will be correct, others not).
*Notable works: Four works of poetry are mentioned - ''[[Ripostes]]'' one of his early collections; ''[[Hugh Selwyn Mauberley]]'' and ''[[The Cantos]]''. If we ''had'' to have an infobox and we ''had'' to chose one or two examples from his body of work, "Mauberley" might probably be included, but really he's best known for his ''Cantos'' that he worked on for many decades.
*Years active: 1908-1968: hmm, in 1908 he had a volume of self-published poems (''[[A Lume Spento]]'') to his name. He was incarcerated at St Elizabeths from 1945 to 1958 (he was published during that period, notably the ''Pisan Cantos'' that he began while in a cage for six weeks (and the irony of caging him again is not lost)), and on his return to Italy after his release he was quite ill for most of the 1960s until his death in 1972, so I have to question these dates.
*Spouse: another can of worms. He married [[Dorothy Shakespear]] in 1914; in 1922 he met [[Olga Rudge]] and kept two households until his arrest. The infobox says he was separated from Dorothy in 1961, which is not true. At that point he was quite ill and Dorothy and Olga (and for a period, his female secretary) were looking after him, which was a difficult job. Dorothy eventually decided to return to London, but I'd have to check the sources to verify whether they were officially separated. Off the top of my head, I believe they were not.
*Partner: [[Olga Rudge]] - the infobox says they were married in 1923. This is untrue. He never divorced Dorothy, and see above re separation. In fact he kept a household with Dorothy until his incarceration and during his incarceration Dorothy was declared his legal guardian. Olga visited twice during those 12 years. Yet, before his incarceration he also kept a household with Olga (separate from Dorothy's) and he kept a household with her until his death. The two were never married.
*Children: [[Mary de Rachewiltz]] was his daughter with Olga. He did not raise her, but did take some interest in her as she became older. Dorothy gave birth to [[Omar Pound]]. I invite you all to read this article and the one about Omar and decide for yourselves re paternity. The sources are clear that Dorothy went on an extended months-long visit to Egypt and returned pregnant - beyond that they are murky. Ezra never raised Omar - the child was sent to live with his grandmother within months (?) or a year of his birth.
Maybe this will help. It's taken two hours to write it all out. [[User:Victoriaearle|Victoria]] ([[User talk:Victoriaearle|tk]]) 16:25, 20 September 2016 (UTC)

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Infobox (again)

I move for a vote/request for comments to include an infobox on this article, as in this revision. I know infoboxes aren't required, but I don't see why not to have one.

THis has been dicussed in the past, but I've not seen a valid reason not to have one in just this article. (tJosve05a (c) 16:51, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It's not "just this article", and you've not presented a valid reason to have one - nor a valid RfC. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:55, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The valid reason is that editors has been trying to add it (being BOLD), but has been reverted, on multiple times. When that happens one should start a disucssion about the edits. That is what I have done. I want a discussion about pros and cons (for/againt) of having the infobox which users has been trying to add. (tJosve05a (c) 17:03, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
That may well be a reason to discuss the issue, but you've still presented no valid reason to add it nor a valid RfC. If all you want is a discussion of pros/cons (and you are unsatisfied with previous discussions along those lines), that's also not an RfC (and certainly not a vote), so I'd suggest removing the tag and rewording your initial comments. Nikkimaria (talk) 17:10, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
A summary of the earlier discussions is that Modernists are notoriously difficult to categorise, and that doing so via genre choice in an infobox would be especially glib for such a complicated man as Pound, and would poorly serve or more likely, mislead readers. Ceoil (talk) 17:55, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
To say that Ezra Pound is too complicated for an info box is nonsense - many complicated people on Wikipedia have info boxes, Gertrude Stein, for example, who was arguably a more adventurous writer than Pound and E.E. Cummings who was much more innovative with language than Pound. The Ezra Pound page is a Featured Article on Wikipedia and should follow the same standard format and presentation as other Wikipedia articles (Epinoia (talk) 15:55, 19 September 2016 (UTC))[reply]
Having an infobox is not a FA requirement, and Wikipedia's Manual of Style also states that infoboxes are not required. The e.e. cummings page as of this timestamp (as I'm about to edit it) is a good example of some common problems - an overemphasis on details that are easy to reduce to a value pair, even when they contribute little to an understanding of who the subject actually was; failure to follow documentation/best practices for the infobox; oversimplification of details presented (or in one case not even presented) in the article; etc. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:21, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Excuse me? Did Cummings or Stein support the Italian Fascists and the Nazi regime? Were either of those two rabid anti-semites or confined to an insane asylum? or convicted of treason? Sorry but no infobox here...Modernist (talk) 16:27, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Modernist. Why are those facts a reason not to have an info box? Debresser (talk) 16:54, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Why should a person's political views mean they are not eligible for an info box? Hitler has an info box and he was more of a fascist than Pound. Christopher Smart was a writer confined to an asylum, yet he has an info box. The info box gives basic information such as date and place of birth, date of death, etc. It is a feature of Wikipedia articles and is not an endorsement of anyone's beliefs or actions, it is a statement of information. Advocating for an info box does not imply support of Pound's anti-Semitism or fascism, it's simply a summary of dates and facts. (Epinoia (talk) 17:15, 19 September 2016 (UTC))[reply]
"The info box gives basic information such as date and place of birth, date of death, etc." so does the lede. CassiantoTalk 23:16, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
If you won't provide an acceptable answer to the question asked by both me and Epinoia, your opinion is likely to be overruled by the majority here. Debresser (talk) 19:38, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    • I guess you simply don't have the capacity to understand my answer to your question, Pound's issues are too complex for a simplistic infobox. I suggest that you go elsewhere with your desire for an unworkable infobox...Modernist (talk) 20:19, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
User warned for WP:NPA violation. Comment on arguments, don't comment on people. Debresser (talk) 21:14, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • List the problems. While infoboxes are helpful in general, they don't work where significant infobox parameters cannot be adequately summarized into a simple phrase. In such cases, the infobox either become bait for repeated edit-wars, or gets reduced to only containing minor points, leaving the main reasons for having an infobox absent. Is that the case here? If so, then I'd definitely oppose having an infobox. Simply list the infobox parameters that are likely to be a problem, and we'll discuss them. However, without that list, by default, I must be in favor of including a standard infobox. --A D Monroe III (talk) 20:15, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
If you look at Gertrude Stein's info-box, it lists her birth date, death date, nationality, etc. - what is complex about that? If you feel that Pound can't be pigeonholed as a Modernist, then leave that field out - there is nothing complicated about an info box, it is a standard Wikipedia feature presenting basic information and there is no reason why Pound can't have one, the same as anyone else on Wikipedia - (Epinoia (talk) 20:45, 19 September 2016 (UTC))[reply]
Any reason he would not be described as a Modernist? I'm looking for any potential problems with the infobox. That doesn't sound like one. --A D Monroe III (talk) 00:27, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose infobox per the last pantomime that appeared on these pages. This is a classic case of the requesting party not liking the result the last time round, so thought they'd have another stab until they get their way. This is a pointless waste of time. Since when do a load of lemmings with opposing views, requested by a RfC bot, trump the opinions of the primary author? CassiantoTalk 23:16, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Why I oppose an infobox by Cassianto
  1. Undisciplined expansiveness: A maximum-inclusion approach to fields that leads editors to place repetitive, sometimes downright silly information in the box. (There needs to be clear, prominent advice about not using every single field in every circumstance, and rather the need to ration the information, shaping it to the context.)
  2. Visual degradation: The way infoboxes squash the text to the left, particularly on smaller screens, and restrict the sizing of the lead picture.
  3. Prefabrication: The prefabricated feel infoboxes give to articles: here's quick and dirty info if you can't be bothered to read on—the very name of the boxes says it all.
  4. Disconnected particles: Their domination of the very opening of an article with chopped up morsels that seem to contradict the continuous, connected form and style of the running prose. (If the justification is that adding an infobox provides both genres, the problem is this utter visual domination at the top—and see the next point.)
  5. Uncertain benefit for readers: The failure of anyone who promotes infoboxes to explain how they are read. (Do readers look at them first, before embarking on the lead? Does the existence of infoboxes encourage readers not to absorb the main text? Do readers hop from article to article looking only at infoboxes—an argument I've heard put for retaining blue-carpeted linking practices within infoboxes? Do readers just glance quickly at the infobox and then read the article proper—in which case, what is the relationship between the infobox and the rest, and does the former reduce the impact of the latter through pre-empting basic information that the reader will encounter in the running prose? What functionality is missing when an article does not have an infobox?)
  6. Better as lists: The fact that infobox information seems, in design, to be for comparison between topics. (If this is the case, the information would be far, far better in a WP List, where the form is much better suited to comparison, and the relationship between lead and table can be made to work very well indeed; see WP:Featured lists for what I mean.)

Infoboxes work on complicated articles, and this article most certainly does not fit into that category. I like infoboxes, generally, and think they work extremely well on royal, political, sports, geographical, and film articles; but my worry is that this article only has one simply because some people perceive it to be "normal practise" for all articles to have an infobox, irrespective of the fact that it might not actually do the job required of it. CassiantoTalk 23:26, 19 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Placeholder - as the article's primary contributor I made the decision not to add an infobox. I'll explain my reasoning as soon as I have time, in a few days. In the meantime, I'm bringing this discussion to the attention of the arbs at ARCA, if that request is still open. Victoria (tk) 00:44, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose the infobox added on 19:56, 17 September 2016, in this edit for the following reasons:

  • Image - image in the infobox (File:Ezra Pound 1963.jpg) is not free in the US. We've had a lot of trouble with the images here because the Pound estate claims copyright in most cases or they were published at or about 1923ish when images fall out of the public domain. Plenty of discussions can be linked in regards to which images to use and which not. This is not on the list.
  • Place of birth: Ezra was born in Hailey, Idaho (these days an adjunct to the Sun Valley and Ketchum area (strangely the same area where Hemingway lived for a period and committed suicide). When Ezra was born Hailey wasn't a lovely little resort town, it was a silver mining town (basically lawless) in an area that hadn't yet achieved statehood. But this is all mostly irrelevant because Ezra's mother Isabel disliked Hailey intensely and the family moved back east to Jenkintown, Pennsylvania when Ezra was about a year and half old. He lived in Jenkintown until he moved to Europe c. 1906 (except for the period he was in college in Philadelphia and New York) so he grew up very much a Philadelphia Main Line boy and not at all a westerner. The field in the box implies he was born and lived in Idaho. He didn't.
  • Resting place: this isn't incorrect - that's where he's buried, but I do dislike this terminology.
  • Nationality: well that opens a can of worms and is one reason I decided not to include an infobox. He was born in the US and he held a US passport (though I'd have to look into the sources to see whether that was stripped at some point - certainly he wasn't able to use it when he was reputably trying to get out of Italy before his arrest). He lived in the US from his birth in 1885 to 1906 when he moved to Europe, and he lived in the US during the 12 years he was in St. Elizabeths Hospital - the rest of his life was lived in England, France and Italy. In many ways Ezra epitomized the post-WWI expatriates. Furthermore, he was accused of treason. In other words he was a traitor and came extremely close to being executed for treason. Many people repudiated him and repudiated his nationality.
  • Alma mater: these are correct but it's a little more complicated. He went to UPenn at age 16, almost got kicked out (the sources are unclear why) then went to Hamilton. Some of his graduate work was done at Hamiliton - where he fought with the professors and was almost asked to leave (I'll need to get into sources to cite some of this and not all of it made it into the 10,000+ word article), and he tried to go back to UPenn as a graduate student but if I remember correctly off the top of my head they wouldn't have him. So it's all a little muddled. If I remember correctly he did receive an honorary degree from Hamiliton at some point. So, again, it's all a little muddled and not totally straightforward.
  • Period: 20th century in literature is overly broad but not bad and probably acceptable because of his influence on 20th century literature - not only through his own writing but through his mentorships to writers such as Joyce, Eliot and Hemingway among others.
  • Genre: links to Poetry which is overly broad. He wrote essays, books, poetry, literary criticism, economic criticism, treatises, radio broadcasts, etc.
  • Literary movement: Literary modernism and Imagism, yes, ok. But again, what about all the others (and frankly there's no room in an infobox for them, but if we have an infobox some will creep in; some will be correct, others not).
  • Notable works: Four works of poetry are mentioned - Ripostes one of his early collections; Hugh Selwyn Mauberley and The Cantos. If we had to have an infobox and we had to chose one or two examples from his body of work, "Mauberley" might probably be included, but really he's best known for his Cantos that he worked on for many decades.
  • Years active: 1908-1968: hmm, in 1908 he had a volume of self-published poems (A Lume Spento) to his name. He was incarcerated at St Elizabeths from 1945 to 1958 (he was published during that period, notably the Pisan Cantos that he began while in a cage for six weeks (and the irony of caging him again is not lost)), and on his return to Italy after his release he was quite ill for most of the 1960s until his death in 1972, so I have to question these dates.
  • Spouse: another can of worms. He married Dorothy Shakespear in 1914; in 1922 he met Olga Rudge and kept two households until his arrest. The infobox says he was separated from Dorothy in 1961, which is not true. At that point he was quite ill and Dorothy and Olga (and for a period, his female secretary) were looking after him, which was a difficult job. Dorothy eventually decided to return to London, but I'd have to check the sources to verify whether they were officially separated. Off the top of my head, I believe they were not.
  • Partner: Olga Rudge - the infobox says they were married in 1923. This is untrue. He never divorced Dorothy, and see above re separation. In fact he kept a household with Dorothy until his incarceration and during his incarceration Dorothy was declared his legal guardian. Olga visited twice during those 12 years. Yet, before his incarceration he also kept a household with Olga (separate from Dorothy's) and he kept a household with her until his death. The two were never married.
  • Children: Mary de Rachewiltz was his daughter with Olga. He did not raise her, but did take some interest in her as she became older. Dorothy gave birth to Omar Pound. I invite you all to read this article and the one about Omar and decide for yourselves re paternity. The sources are clear that Dorothy went on an extended months-long visit to Egypt and returned pregnant - beyond that they are murky. Ezra never raised Omar - the child was sent to live with his grandmother within months (?) or a year of his birth.

Maybe this will help. It's taken two hours to write it all out. Victoria (tk) 16:25, 20 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]