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::I don't see how that could be considered true. A quick Google search for [https://www.google.com/search?q=paul+hunter&oq=paul+hunter&aqs=chrome..69i57j35i39j0j69i60l2.2026j0j7&client=ms-android-samsung-gs-rev1&sourceid=chrome-mobile&ie=UTF-8#ip=1 Paul Hunter] brings up almost exclusive hits for the snooker player. Over a prolonged history the article gets a significant amount more traffic than the rest of the articles. Snooker is perfectly well publicised. Best Wishes, '''[[User:Lee Vilenski|<span style="color:green">Lee Vilenski</span>]] <sup>([[User talk:Lee Vilenski|talk]] • [[Special:Contribs/Lee Vilenski|contribs]])</sup>''' 15:32, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
::I don't see how that could be considered true. A quick Google search for [https://www.google.com/search?q=paul+hunter&oq=paul+hunter&aqs=chrome..69i57j35i39j0j69i60l2.2026j0j7&client=ms-android-samsung-gs-rev1&sourceid=chrome-mobile&ie=UTF-8#ip=1 Paul Hunter] brings up almost exclusive hits for the snooker player. Over a prolonged history the article gets a significant amount more traffic than the rest of the articles. Snooker is perfectly well publicised. Best Wishes, '''[[User:Lee Vilenski|<span style="color:green">Lee Vilenski</span>]] <sup>([[User talk:Lee Vilenski|talk]] • [[Special:Contribs/Lee Vilenski|contribs]])</sup>''' 15:32, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
::: [https://www.totalsportek.com/most-popular-sports/ Is it really, though]? [[User:BD2412|<span style="background:gold">'''''BD2412'''''</span>]] [[User talk:BD2412|'''T''']] 16:40, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
::: [https://www.totalsportek.com/most-popular-sports/ Is it really, though]? [[User:BD2412|<span style="background:gold">'''''BD2412'''''</span>]] [[User talk:BD2412|'''T''']] 16:40, 30 April 2020 (UTC)
::::How has snooker's publicity got anything to do with whether this person is the primary topic? [[Special:Contributions/62.165.227.49|62.165.227.49]] ([[User talk:62.165.227.49|talk]]) 01:54, 2 May 2020 (UTC)
:::How has snooker's publicity got anything to do with whether this person is the primary topic? [[Special:Contributions/62.165.227.49|62.165.227.49]] ([[User talk:62.165.227.49|talk]]) 01:54, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

Revision as of 01:55, 2 May 2020

Former good article nomineePaul Hunter was a Sports and recreation good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
February 2, 2011Good article nomineeNot listed

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Paul Hunter (snooker player)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: BencherliteTalk 01:21, 2 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take a look at this. BencherliteTalk 01:21, 2 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm quick-failing this article for numerous instances of non-neutral language. For example:

  • "Four months later, Hunter caused a major sensation at the UK Championship by beating world number six Alan McManus 9–4 in the first round".
  • "at the age of just 17 and three months"
  • "Hunter's achievements earned him high accolades throughout the game" (also unsourced)
  • "it was to be the start of a great love affair that he would have with Wembley" (also unsourced)
  • "where he defeated no fewer than seven players to lift the title "
  • "he announced his arrival as a genuine force at the top of the professional game"
  • "but he saved his best form for the 2001 Masters."
  • "on his way to a famous 10–9 victory,"
  • "but it did not get any less exciting along the way. After a relatively straight-forward 6–3 victory at the round of 16 stage over Stephen Lee, Hunter triumphed in final frame shoot-outs against Peter Ebdon in the quarter-finals, Alan McManus in the semi-finals and most memorably coming from 0–5 down to beat Mark Williams 10–9 in the final"
  • "It represented a fantastic start to the year for Hunter,"
  • "After his best ever season, in which he had been a contender in virtually every tournament he played, it was time for the Yorkshireman to perform in the biggest tournament of all, and that he most certainly did."

I could go on, but the point is made.

Other problems

These are not quick-fail issues, but might help for a future submission.

  • Lead
    • "As well Hunter compiled 114 competitive century breaks [...]" - not grammatically correct
    • "In March 2005 Hunter was diagnosed with neuroendocrine tumours, he died from the disease in 2006[...]" not grammatically correct
  • Early life
    • "By the age of 12 had become an outstanding junior talent." not grammatical, and "outstanding junior talent" is a direct quotation from the source so should either be acknowledged as such or reworded.
    • "He has won many junior tournaments" - wrong tense
  • Early career
    • "the youngster from Leeds made his debut among the professionals" / "before bowing out" - not encyclopaedic tone
    • "before he overcame the John Higgins" - not grammatically correct
  • Masters champion
    • "knocking in four centuries in six frames" - not encyclopaedic tone

I could go on, but again, the point is I hope made.

The "death and legacy" and "personal life" sections have too many one-sentence paragraphs, which ought to be merged together, moved elsewhere, or expanded.

Too many problems in the quick-fail list to ignore. Feel free to resubmit once the article has been rewritten. BencherliteTalk 01:38, 2 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 26 March 2015

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

The result of the move request was: Move. Cúchullain t/c 20:39, 3 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Paul HunterPaul Hunter (snooker player) – There are 6 different Paul Hunters on Wikipedia, one of which, Paul Hunter (director), is a popular music video director that has worked with Justin Timberlake, Madonna and J. Lo. I don't see why this Paul Hunter has to be the primary one for the name. I think the name should be changed to help with any confusion and that "Paul Hunter" redirect to the disambiguation page. LADY LOTUSTALK 11:56, 26 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]


The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.

Picture?

Surely it's not beyond the wit of man to get a picture for this article? Not least given that Hunter was so well-known for his looks? Brooklyn Eagle (talk) 03:00, 22 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I was looking to ask the same thing. The hideous image currently here may be of Paul Hunter, or it may be an outtake from some 1930s horror film. For God's sake, someone put up a decent picture of this man. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.110.242.175 (talk) 10:44, 7 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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And a man known for his good looks, a man who could have been cast as an excellent Vampire Lestat, gets a posthumous-looking pic that makes him look more like Nosferatu. Come on, we can do better! http://www.pix123.com/livesnooker/NewsImages/473980_2948403.jpg Steve Rapaport (talk) 14:55, 14 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead image

Please can someone try to get hold of a free use image that we can use for this article? I can't believe there isn't a photo of Paul somewhere out there that can't be licensed for use in Commons. The one we're using at the moment is a portrait derived from an etching on a trophy and it doesn't even look remotely like Hunter! As it's a representative image, rather than an actual picture of the subject of the article, it doesn't provide "visual confirmation" and could therefore be misleading. The reader might question whether they've arrived at the correct article. See MOS:LEADIMAGE. In my view, we shouldn't really be using this image and the best solution might be to go back to not having a lead image at all. Rodney Baggins (talk) 07:15, 10 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
And I just realised this image was added a few weeks ago by an unregistered IP but no-one questioned it at the time. Rodney Baggins (talk) 07:18, 10 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Rodney Baggins - there is a possibility for NfCC images here. As the article is no longer a BLP, we could get away with adding an image such as we did at Bill Werbeniuk Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 20:07, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Lee Vilenski, thanks Lee, I'd completely forgotten about this! I agree with what you're saying, according to Wikipedia:FUC, it should be OK as there is no free equivalent available (point 1 in Policy section). Question is, where can we get an image from? What about nicking this from the Polish wiki? [1] Cheers, Rodney Baggins (talk) 09:21, 5 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Lee Vilenski, hello again. Going back through the page revisions, the image in this version is the one I suggested above, but was removed by User:Aloeicious who called it a "poor photo"...? It's in commons: [2] Rodney Baggins (talk) 11:35, 5 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, just re-add it. If there is a free image, FUR no longer counts. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 13:52, 5 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 29 April 2020

– The WP: PRIMARYTOPIC. The director has a lot of notability, but doesn't even get close to the amount of hits as the snooker player. Despite not being world number one, or a world champion, 3 Masters titles suggest he is a well known snooker player. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 20:06, 29 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see how that could be considered true. A quick Google search for Paul Hunter brings up almost exclusive hits for the snooker player. Over a prolonged history the article gets a significant amount more traffic than the rest of the articles. Snooker is perfectly well publicised. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 15:32, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Is it really, though? BD2412 T 16:40, 30 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
How has snooker's publicity got anything to do with whether this person is the primary topic? 62.165.227.49 (talk) 01:54, 2 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]