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::At the endm it shows. [[User:AeschyIus|aeschyIus]] ([[User talk:AeschyIus|talk]]) 20:16, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
::At the endm it shows. [[User:AeschyIus|aeschyIus]] ([[User talk:AeschyIus|talk]]) 20:16, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
:::Oh, OK, I see. Shows a masked man barely reacting to the verdict. Even if you'd trimmed the 99% of filler, I don't think it'd add much beyond "The defendant's eyes darted about". [[User:InedibleHulk|InedibleHulk]] ([[User talk:InedibleHulk|talk]]) 23:05, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
:::Oh, OK, I see. Shows a masked man barely reacting to the verdict. Even if you'd trimmed the 99% of filler, I don't think it'd add much beyond "The defendant's eyes darted about". [[User:InedibleHulk|InedibleHulk]] ([[User talk:InedibleHulk|talk]]) 23:05, 22 April 2021 (UTC)

== Proposed name changes ==
{{atop|result=Formal RM is now open below at [[#Requested move 22 April 2021]]—[[User:Bagumba|Bagumba]] ([[User talk:Bagumba|talk]]) 08:10, 22 April 2021 (UTC)}}
I compiled a list of proposed titles in previously requested moves and in discussions. Hopefully, we can hash out which title is better and achieve some consensus. Choose Title # and discuss why it is the most appropriate. Beside each title I propose some reasons for choosing it.
* '''Title 1 (current title)''' ''State v. Chauvin'' - per [[WP:LAWMOS]] "Unless needed for specificity, leave state names out of the title, e.g., use State v. Elliott, not State of Vermont v. Raleigh Elliott, et al., and redirect the latter to the former."
* '''Title 2''' ''Minnesota v. Chauvin'' - Rename this for clarify the state of jurisdiction (ex. [[California v. Murray]])
* '''Title 3''' ''State of Minnesota v. Derek Michael Chauvin'' - The article's first sentence has the full name, so consistency?
* '''Title 4''' Trial of Derek Chauvin - per [[WP:COMMONNAME]], [[WP:OFFICIAL]]. If you search up "Trial of" on the Wikipedia search bar, almost every trial's page title is "Trial of [defendant]". (ex. [[Trial of George Zimmerman]], [[Trial of Michael Jackson]], [[Trial of Susan B. Anthony]], etc.)
* '''Title 5''' Derek Chauvin murder case - In case Chauvin faces any more cases (ex. [[O. J. Simpson murder case]], [[O. J. Simpson robbery case]])
* '''Title 6''' ''State of Minnesota v. Chauvin''

Please use the following format for choosing the title you want

*'''Title #''' _____

Also if anyone wants to add another title, you can add Title 6 in the same format and so on. [[User:Phillip Samuel|Phillip Samuel]] ([[User talk:Phillip Samuel|talk]]) 01:32, 22 April 2021 (UTC).

*'''Comment''' We literally finished a discussion on this yesterday [[User:EvergreenFir|'''<span style="color:#8b00ff;">Eve</span><span style="color:#6528c2;">rgr</span><span style="color:#3f5184;">een</span><span style="color:#197947;">Fir</span>''']] [[User talk:EvergreenFir|(talk)]] 01:45, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*:That discussion was for a requested move, not for finding consensus among proposed names.[[User:Phillip Samuel|Phillip Samuel]] ([[User talk:Phillip Samuel|talk]]) 02:09, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*'''Title 4''', for proposed reason. [[User:InedibleHulk|InedibleHulk]] ([[User talk:InedibleHulk|talk]]) 01:48, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*'''Title 1''', weakly '''Title 5'''. The rationale for title 2 is incorrect: ''California v. Murray'' is incorrectly named here and should be called ''People v. Murray''. Title 3 is ridiculous and makes Wikipedia look foolish: Nobody except a pedant uses the full case name except in the legal contexts where it's necessary, and it gives this entire article the air of being written by someone who knows nothing about legal practice. Title 4 is incorrect: This is an article about the '''criminal case''' and not just the '''trial''', which began with jury selection and ended with the conviction, and retitling it in that way incorrectly narrows the scope of this article to the trial (or inaccurately uses the word "trial" to refer to a criminal case). Just follow [[MOS:LAW]]. Zero rationale has been given to depart from that guideline. If you don't like that guideline go amend it. [[Special:Contributions/69.174.144.79|69.174.144.79]] ([[User talk:69.174.144.79|talk]]) 01:54, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*:In my experience, ''central'' topics are often titular, with background and aftermath sections (by any name) bookending the main event. I have a ''very'' hard time believing a tax trial can draw coverage comparable to racially-charged viral murder. If and only if I'm wrong, '''Title 5'''. [[User:InedibleHulk|InedibleHulk]] ([[User talk:InedibleHulk|talk]]) 02:10, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*::By your rationale this article should be called "Murder of George Floyd" and have a subsection about the prosecution. Calling this article "Trial of Derek Chauvin" and talking about the motion practice, sentencing, and appeals just makes us seem ignorant. Just as saying "[[if and only if]]" as a way of emphasizing your point does the same. It just makes everyone who knows better roll their eyes and reinforces improper usage among our less-educated readers. [[Special:Contributions/69.174.144.79|69.174.144.79]] ([[User talk:69.174.144.79|talk]]) 02:27, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
::::That last point is about whether a boring and untelevised tax trial will get its own article (Al Capone's is conspicuously absent). The "murder" itself has an article. Has pre and post, too. [[User:InedibleHulk|InedibleHulk]] ([[User talk:InedibleHulk|talk]]) 02:37, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*'''Title 4''' Trial of Derek Chauvin - for reason proposed and I stated in prior move requested, would be fine with 5 as well. Hopefully someone can ping prior participants since this was brought up in response to the prior move request being closed. A lot of the discussion after initial request was about alternate names. [[User:WikiVirusC|<b style="color:#000080; font-family:Tahoma">WikiVirus</b>]]'''[[Special:contributions/WikiVirusC|<u style="font-family: Tahoma">C</u>]]'''[[User talk:WikiVirusC|<b style="color:#008000">''<sup>(talk)</sup>''</b>]] 03:10, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*:Article is about more than the trial. It's about the overall criminal case. Once again there's no rationale for a departure from [[MOS:LAW]]. [[Special:Contributions/69.174.144.79|69.174.144.79]] ([[User talk:69.174.144.79|talk]]) 03:17, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*'''Title 4, but use hatnote to disambiguate''' I agree that [[WP:COMMONNAME]] applies here. I think we can deviate from [[MOS:LAW]] in this matter, as Bluebook tends to be used more for legal citations and not for everyday news references to criminal trials. MOS:LAW is more relevant when we're talking about court precedent or judicial opinions, not criminal trials. (I also think it may be worthwhile to update MOS:LAW to reflect the existence of "Trial of..." articles.) If the tax evasion trial is independently notable, then we should have separate articles. However, this murder trial would still be the [[WP:PRIMARYTOPIC]], so this article should display a hatnote that directs readers to information about the tax evasion charges. [[User:Edge3|Edge3]] ([[User talk:Edge3|talk]]) 03:46, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*:Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. It's not a news source. The fact that everyday people are going to use the wrong terminology constantly (like call this a "trial") doesn't justify improper usage here. The tax evasion case being ambiguous is a red herring: Almost nobody knows about that case. If we were going to go COMMONNAME then this article should be called "Murder of George Floyd". [[Special:Contributions/69.174.144.79|69.174.144.79]] ([[User talk:69.174.144.79|talk]]) 04:27, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*::Wikipedia gets its references and information from notable and reliable sources. The vast majority of them are using the terminology "trial of derek chauvin" over the legal name, and the fact that they are neither makes the usage wrong nor improper. And no, the [[murder of George Floyd]] and Derek Chauvin's trial are both connected and notable in their own case to merit separate articles, with common names for each page title. [[User:Phillip Samuel|Phillip Samuel]] ([[User talk:Phillip Samuel|talk]]) 07:51, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*'''Title 4''', per [[WP:COMMONNAME]]. --[[User:K.e.coffman|K.e.coffman]] ([[User talk:K.e.coffman|talk]]) 06:57, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
*'''Title 4''', Per [[WP:COMMONNAME]], "Wikipedia does not necessarily use the subject's "official" name as an article title; it generally prefers the name that is most commonly used (as determined by its prevalence in a significant majority of independent, reliable English-language sources) as such names will usually best fit the five criteria listed above.[5]". This mandates that articles be titled to what readers commonly refer. Googling "State v. Chauvin" outputs under [https://www.google.com/search?q=%22state+v.+chauvin%22&oq=%22state+v.+chauvin%22&aqs=chrome..69i57.4546j0j1&sourceid=chrome&ie=UTF-8 (20,000)] results, but googling "Trial of Derek Chauvin" outputs [https://www.google.com/search?q=%22trial+of+derek+chauvin%22&sxsrf=ALeKk022SRSmBcnZ1PLjQ_3Rw99HZfCPgQ%3A1619076510097&ei=niWBYPG6BcLn-wSf5ITIBA&oq=%22trial+of+derek+chauvin%22&gs_lcp=Cgdnd3Mtd2l6EAMyCAgAELEDEIMBMgIIADICCAAyAggAMgIIADICCAAyAggAMgIIADICCAAyAggAOgQIIxAnOgYIABAHEB46CggAELEDEIMBEEM6DQguELEDEMcBEKMCEEM6BAguEEM6BAgAEEM6BwgAELEDEEM6BQgAEJECOgcILhCxAxBDOgUIABCxAzoFCC4QsQM6BQguEJECULP2KFj4lilgt5kpaAJwAHgAgAGhAYgBshOSAQQxNy45mAEAoAEBqgEHZ3dzLXdpesABAQ&sclient=gws-wiz&ved=0ahUKEwjxgf6BqpHwAhXC854KHR8yAUkQ4dUDCA8&uact=5 ~(9,500,000)] results. Also per [[WP:OFFICIAL]], "The preference for common names avoids several problems with official names. Obscurity - Some official names are never used except in legal or other esoteric documents, or for theatrical effect." Most reliable and notable sources are not using the technical legal name but calling it the trial of Derek Chauvin, and thus there is no rationale to depart from WP policies to an obscure legal title for an infamous murder trial known internationally. Per [[WP:CRITERIA]], article titles must be recognizable, natural, precise, concise, and consistent, and Title 4 follows this much more closely than Title 1. [[User:Phillip Samuel|Phillip Samuel]] ([[User talk:Phillip Samuel|talk]]) 07:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
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== Requested move 22 April 2021 ==
== Requested move 22 April 2021 ==

Revision as of 03:06, 1 May 2021

Presumptive sentencing in lead

Should we include the presumptive sentence of 12.5 years in the lead? We would only need to do this until the sentencing hearing is concluded in 8–9 weeks, and the information is currently included in the body of the article. Virtually every RS appears to report on the 40 year maximum, and then very soon thereafter on the 12.5 year presumptive sentence. This is helpful, I think, to avoid creating the false impression of the likely penalty/range of penalties in this case, which seems important enough information for the lead too. Here is the sentence that I had originally added to the lead: ([1]).

Minnesota sentencing guidelines suggest a presumptive sentence of 12.5 years, discounting aggravating factors.

Alternatively, we could do a slim version of this (something like "the presumptive sentence under Minnesota law is much lower"), or just state that the sentencing hearing will begin in 8 weeks. — Goszei (talk) 07:13, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comment. An evaluation of the "headline stories" and what they have to say. Many organizations later released smaller "sentencing analysis" articles. AP News only mentions 40 years. NYTimes mentions the 12.5 years. The Guardian mentions a shorter sentence. WaPo mentions 11 to 12 years. WSJ mentions 11 to 15 years. Reuters mentions the 12.5 years. BBC only mentions 40 years. CNN mentions 12.5 years. ABC mentions 12.5 years and speculates on 15. — Goszei (talk) 07:33, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I'd leave it out of the lead, which should keep to simple facts not subject to dispute. Sentencing possbilities can be explained in the body.—Bagumba (talk) 09:32, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Per Bagumba, we really shouldn't put speculation in the lede. The lede is meant to be stable and summarise content. So add it to the body narrative and then we can refer to it in the lede as / when sentencing takes place. Koncorde (talk) 09:53, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, leave it out of the lede. Anywikiuser (talk) 10:31, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It`s spelled LEAD...leave it in...he will be out in 10-20 if that 2600:1702:2340:9470:E0AC:CD44:4802:427 (talk) 20:15, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Should this be placed? If so, where?

External videos
video icon Pioneer Press Live Stream of Derek Chauvin trial on YouTube (1 hr 44 min 58 s)


It is from a known news organization and may be useful. aeschyIus (talk) 16:20, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Are you sure you have the right link? I see downtime. If that's the point, it works here and only here. InedibleHulk (talk) 02:02, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
At the endm it shows. aeschyIus (talk) 20:16, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, OK, I see. Shows a masked man barely reacting to the verdict. Even if you'd trimmed the 99% of filler, I don't think it'd add much beyond "The defendant's eyes darted about". InedibleHulk (talk) 23:05, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 22 April 2021

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. There is consensus to move to Trial of Derek Chauvin per WP:COMMONNAME. (closed by non-admin page mover)Lord Bolingbroke (talk) 21:20, 29 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]


State v. ChauvinTrial of Derek Chauvin – Per WP:COMMONNAME, "State v. Chauvin" only has around 100 hits while "Trial of Derek Chauvin" has ~1,000,000. Similar examples include Trial of George Zimmerman, Trial of Michael Jackson and Trial of Susan B. Anthony. Note: The last RM was closed with the suggestion that a new RM can be opened with a new alternative name. #Proposed name changes (above) suggests this title has support, so this formal RM is opened to minimize having to duplicate arguments. —Bagumba (talk) 08:09, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support For my reasons stated in #Proposed name changes. Phillip Samuel (talk) 08:24, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Same InedibleHulk (talk) 09:02, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Strongest possible oppose as this article is about the criminal case, not the trial. The case includes investigation, pretrial motion practice, the trial itself, posttrial motion practice, sentencing, and direct appeals. MOS:LAW governs here. This is an article about a case, not about a trial. The fact that a number of other articles we have are wrongly named is of no moment; WP:WAX. I implore those rushing to jump on this terrible name choice because they're being wowed by someone's claim of more WP:GHITS to actually make a policy-based argument. Just because this is a high-profile case does not require it to have different handling from other articles about legal cases. 69.174.144.79 (talk) 11:45, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    • Point of order as well, Bagumba is misrepresenting the search engine results given above. The first, purportedly showing the number of Google News search hits for "Trial of Derek Chauvin" only returns 114 results, and not the one million-plus results falsely claimed. Assuming good faith, Bagumba has simply failed to perform a search engine test properly. This is clearly not a WP:COMMONNAME situation. But even if it were, the test is not what news sources—which use sensational, often incorrect terminology to refer to things—but what the common name is. 69.174.144.79 (talk) 11:48, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
      I see 1.9M when I click the link he provided which is a google news search for "Trial of Derek Chauvin" with quotes. Same search with quote for a general search I see 7.6M. WikiVirusC(talk) 12:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
      You see a claimed estimate of each large round number, the actual numbers of results for each query are around a hundred (including mere duplicates). InedibleHulk (talk) 23:22, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
      It's rather ironic that you make accusations of my "misrepresenting" while claiming AGF. Regarding searching news sources, WP:COMMONNAME states: When using Google, generally a search of Google Books and News Archive should be defaulted to before a web search. Cheers. —Bagumba (talk) 13:36, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support for reasons given on previous two discussion, such as WP:COMMONNAME. WikiVirusC(talk) 12:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support the common name in media reports. Few sources are using the technical legal name of the trial. (t · c) buidhe 12:28, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Keith Ellison as prosecutor

Isn't Keith Ellison supposed to be special prosecutor? The infobox doesn't have him listed. Phillip Samuel (talk) 15:24, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

As far as I could tell, he wasn't actually prosecuting the case during the day-to-day coverage. Edge3 (talk) 23:57, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
By all accounts, state Attorney General Ellison was the lead prosecutor, [2] which is also stated in the prose. Is it standard to only list those public facing in the infobox? No mention in the documentation.—Bagumba (talk) 03:15, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Skrelk commented on this above, so they might know something about it. I assume it shouldn't be, but I don't really know either. ‑‑Volteer1 (talk) 15:05, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Its unclear to what extent Keith Ellison is prosecuting the case. Its routine for the elected prosecutor to be an attorney of record, even if they aren't actually prosecuting the case. I dont know Wikipedia usually includes those as prosecutors or not, but it wouldn't make a ton of sense. I'm inclined to think that Ellison was just an attorney of record by virtue of being the AG, since looking at the publicly available pleadings, it doesn't look like he signed any. It would be surprising if he played an active role, since as a politician, he probably doesn't have much recent litigation experience Skrelk (talk) 16:38, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

He didn't participate in any of the in court roles but there have been coverage of his role in prosecuting the case. [3] While Mr. Ellison did not speak in court, he was there most days on the prosecution side of the room, .... He was deeply involved in just about every aspect of the case, from preparing witnesses to weighing in on jury selection, said Neal Katyal, a former acting solicitor general during the Obama administration who was part of the prosecution team. WikiVirusC(talk) 19:12, 25 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
He is also the one that gave the press conference speech following the verdict with the other attorneys all giving a shorter commentary. I'd add his name if I could figure out how to do it, but I can't... Gandydancer (talk) 08:56, 26 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I added his name in wikilink with "(lead)" on the side. Should it be (special) or (lead)? Phillip Samuel (talk) 17:25, 26 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I think lead as I'm not sure what special might mean. Gandydancer (talk) 18:48, 26 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]