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:This actually comes from the report itself. It also appears in the German official history. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 02:29, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
:This actually comes from the report itself. It also appears in the German official history. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 02:29, 14 February 2019 (UTC)


*I would like to continue working on the article with a goal of improving due weight of certain aspects. My first attempt did not go so well; perhaps I was too bold with my changes by making them in one single edit. I can adjust this going forward. For example, I can implement the changes section-by-section and provide more specific edit summaries and / or more justification for the edits. For example, the 1954 source I referred to on the Talk page was {{cite journal|url=http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,860604-2,00.html|journal=[[Time (magazine)|Time]]|title=Smiling Al|date= 19 April 1954|accessdate=4 April 2009}}; it is used to claim that the Kesselring's [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Albert_Kesselring&diff=prev&oldid=881360396 "memoirs formed a valuable resource..."].
*I would like to continue working on the article with a goal of improving due weight of certain aspects. My first attempt did not go so well; perhaps I was too bold with my changes by making them in one single edit. I can adjust this going forward. For example, I can implement the changes section-by-section and provide more specific edit summaries and / or more justification for the edits. For example, the 1954 source I referred to on the Talk page was {{cite journal|url=http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,860604-2,00.html|journal=[[Time (magazine)|Time]]|title=Smiling Al|date= 19 April 1954|accessdate=4 April 2009}}; it is used to claim that the Kesselring's [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Albert_Kesselring&diff=prev&oldid=881360396 "memoirs formed a valuable resource..."].
*:Before archives began being declassified in the 1980s, memoirs of senior leaders were a major resource for historians for many years. Many sources consulted Kesselring's memoirs for the reasons for the invasion of the Soviet Union being delayed from May until June. They refuted the claim that the campaign in Greece was the cause. Today a better source might be the German official history on the ''Invasion of the Soviet Union''; I haven't read that volume, so I don't know what it says. But in the context, a 1954 source is precisely what we need for how the book was received. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 02:29, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
:My initial impression was that you felt that the current text was fine and any changes would be unwelcome. If this is the case, the other option is to ask for community input via FA reassessment. Not sure if your thinking on this matter has changed. I'd be happy to proceed with either option. --[[User:K.e.coffman|K.e.coffman]] ([[User talk:K.e.coffman|talk]]) 01:18, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
:My initial impression was that you felt that the current text was fine and any changes would be unwelcome. If this is the case, the other option is to ask for community input via FA reassessment. Not sure if your thinking on this matter has changed. I'd be happy to proceed with either option. --[[User:K.e.coffman|K.e.coffman]] ([[User talk:K.e.coffman|talk]]) 01:18, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
::Before archives began being declassified in the 1980s, memoirs of senior leaders were a major resource for historians for many years. Many sources consulted Kesselring's memoirs for the reasons for the invasion of the Soviet Union being delayed from May until June. They refuted the claim that the campaign in Greece was the cause. Today a better source might be the German official history on the ''Invasion of the Soviet Union''; I haven't read that volume, so I don't know what it says. But in the context, a 1954 source is precisely what we need for how the book was received. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 02:29, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
::While I feel the current text is fine, changes should be considered. Community input via the FAR process would be good, but the article only gets about 200,000 page views per annum, so it is not a high traffic one, and I don't think very many editors would be much interested besides the two of us. Have you read through the memoirs and von Lingen's book? It is available in English now, so you don't have to read it in the original German. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 02:29, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
::While I feel the current text is fine, changes should be considered. Community input via the FAR process would be good, but the article only gets about 200,000 page views per annum, so it is not a high traffic one, and I don't think very many editors would be much interested besides the two of us. Have you read through the memoirs and von Lingen's book? It is available in English now, so you don't have to read it in the original German. [[User:Hawkeye7|<span style="color:#800082">Hawkeye7</span>]] [[User_talk:Hawkeye7|<span style="font-size:80%">(discuss)</span>]] 02:29, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
:::Yes, I have Lingen's book and it has confirmed my impression that the article lacks neutrality in certain areas, through uncritical use of primary sources and a one-sided presentation. Some sources are dated; see [[WP:RS AGE]], especially in regards to bias.
:::It's a bit unclear to me what you feel should be done. There's seemingly support for both editing the article ("changes should be considered") ''and'' a FAR ("Community input via the FAR process would be good"). If you plan to continue reverting my changes wholesale, then I feel that FAR is the way to go. My preferred option would be to implement and work through the changes since the goal is not to have the article delisted but instead to improve it. Please let me know what you think. --[[User:K.e.coffman|K.e.coffman]] ([[User talk:K.e.coffman|talk]]) 04:59, 16 February 2019 (UTC)


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I'm following up some stuff I did long ago and just saw that you took up my bot proposal. Thanks a lot! Far better than I thought a bot could do. Huon (talk) 18:44, 12 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
This Bot run is on the seventh of each month (to allow the page stats to be updated beforehand.) So last month is now available. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 19:17, 12 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I saw the TFA wait for Apollo 8 was 13 years, which is technically not true since it was run as TFA between its original FAC and this TFA. Just an oddity to point out if you feel like addressing it, not a big deal. Neat tool! Kees08 (Talk) 21:38, 12 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I had to decide how to handle those, and decided to take it from the most recent FAC to the current TFA. So, for example, J. Robert Oppenheimer was promoted on 1 February 2005 and ran as TFA on 22 April 2005 (80 days later) but was demoted on 5 April 2007, and restored to featured status on 19 March 2011. If it was TFA again on 22 April 2019, the table would say 8 years, 34 days. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 02:50, 13 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah, you always have to decide what to care about for the edge cases. The TFA case column does not sort correctly though, and that should be an easy fix. Also, was a little sad that Apollo 8 was not the number one viewed article for the month! Kees08 (Talk) 03:07, 13 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Carrying the Fire

The reason I asked about your version is because in the book, In his biography he said he felt at that moment like a Roman god riding the skies in his chariot. is definitely not on page 78. It is also not on 178, 278, etc. I will try to find where it is mentioned in the book and fix the page number. Kees08 (Talk) 00:53, 13 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It's on page 221. I have corrected the reference. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 02:36, 13 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Perfect, thank you. Would you be opposed to me rephrasing it from In his biography he said he felt at that moment like a Roman god riding the skies in his chariot. to In his biography he said he felt at that moment like a God riding the skies in his chariot. He did not mention Roman, and the G is capitalized. Also wouldn't this be considered an autobiography? Kees08 (Talk) 03:03, 13 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Nevermind, read page 475. Thanks, that was the missing page I was looking for. Kees08 (Talk) 03:11, 13 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]