User contributions for Septegram

16 May 2024

• 14:5214:52, 16 May 2024 diff hist −34‎ Steve Belkin ‎ →‎Biography: This is a different "Trans National Communications." The link leads to a company that makes no mention of Belkin and is headquartered in New York rather than Massachusetts. current

27 April 2024

• 06:4406:44, 27 April 2024 diff hist −1‎ Hamas ‎ →‎Second Intifada: Copyedit image caption from "Intifiada" to "Intifada." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 March 2024

• 09:0409:04, 5 March 2024 diff hist 0‎ The High Ground (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit to remove incorrect / superfluous hyphen. "A short-term solution" would be an appropriate use of a hyphen, but "in the short-term" is not. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 January 2024

• 03:3103:31, 23 January 2024 diff hist −44‎ Killing of Tony Timpa ‎ →‎Legal proceedings: Remove superseded text.

1 January 2024

• 23:3123:31, 1 January 2024 diff hist 0‎ List of screw drives ‎ →‎Spanner: Copyedit, change a comma between two related sentences that could stand alone into a semicolon. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 December 2023

• 09:2009:20, 9 December 2023 diff hist +1‎ Assault on Wall Street ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit: corrected "best-interest" to "best interests." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 November 2023

• 12:1112:11, 29 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan ‎ →‎Reception: Copyedit: removed superfluous/incorrect dashes. Correct usage would be "gave it a three-and-a-half star review," but not "gave it three-and-a-half stars." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 November 2023

• 02:4902:49, 22 November 2023 diff hist 0‎ Even Lambs Have Teeth ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit: to black out is a verb. "Blackout" is a noun. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 November 2023

• 14:1014:10, 9 November 2023 diff hist −18‎ Cruiser rules ‎ →‎History: Removed superfluous dash from "Laconia incident." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 October 2023

• 09:2709:27, 17 October 2023 diff hist −5‎ Tor (network) ‎ →‎2018: Rephrase for slight improvement in readability. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 09:2509:25, 17 October 2023 diff hist +1‎ Tor (network) ‎ →‎2017: Copyedit; add comma for clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 September 2023

• 13:0113:01, 17 September 2023 diff hist +3‎ Unrotated Projectile ‎ Copyedit for slight improvement in grammar. Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:5112:51, 17 September 2023 diff hist 0‎ Prince Eugene of Savoy ‎ →‎Personal life: Copyedit: adding the missing hyphen to "seventy-two." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

25 July 2023

• 14:3314:33, 25 July 2023 diff hist −28‎ The Juniper Tree (fairy tale) ‎ →‎Synopsis: Remove unnecessary exposition. This information is provided a sentence or two previously. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 April 2023

• 15:4215:42, 14 April 2023 diff hist +95‎ Jet fighter generations ‎ →‎Sixth generation (2020s): Add relevant reference to semi-autonomous drone "wingmen." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 February 2023

• 12:4712:47, 5 February 2023 diff hist +6‎ Elles (film) ‎ →‎Production: Rephrase for slightly more encyclopedic tone Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

5 December 2022

• 03:5103:51, 5 December 2022 diff hist 0‎ The Tin Man (novel) ‎ Copyedit incorrect capitalization Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 October 2022

• 17:0017:00, 19 October 2022 diff hist +1‎ Suits (American TV series) ‎ →‎Spin-off: Copyedit for tense Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 September 2022

• 13:2513:25, 15 September 2022 diff hist 0‎ Playgirl ‎ →‎History: The W3C convention is for URLs to be all lowercase. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 July 2022

• 18:0418:04, 29 July 2022 diff hist −10‎ m Rolling Thunder (video game) ‎ NPOV

9 June 2022

• 13:5313:53, 9 June 2022 diff hist +115‎ Henry Selby Hele-Shaw ‎ Clarification needed
• 13:4713:47, 9 June 2022 diff hist +121‎ Hele-Shaw clutch ‎ →‎Description: Citation absolutely needed. In the unlikely event this is true, Professor Hele-Shaw's name still needs to be spelled correctly. I found no case where the name has an accented e ("é").
• 13:4313:43, 9 June 2022 diff hist +5‎ Hele-Shaw clutch ‎ →‎Description: Tidying up grammar, slight change for NPOV
• 13:3213:32, 9 June 2022 diff hist −21‎ m James Kirk diploma mills ‎ →‎History: Remove superfluous repetitions of detail. Minor punctuation/grammar change.

7 June 2022

• 15:4615:46, 7 June 2022 diff hist −21‎ Caprera ‎ →‎History: Change phrasing slightly for more NPOV tone. Add capitalization to book title.

1 June 2022

• 17:5617:56, 1 June 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Computer cooling ‎ →‎Heat-sinks: Tidying up punctuation

18 May 2022

• 19:3919:39, 18 May 2022 diff hist +411‎ Talk:New Age ‎ →‎Invisible Text: new section Tag: Reverted

17 May 2022

• 15:4815:48, 17 May 2022 diff hist −3‎ New Age ‎ Changing hidden text to section headings. Tag: Reverted
• 15:4315:43, 17 May 2022 diff hist +30‎ New Age ‎ Undid revision 1088243629 by Editor2020 (talk) These seem to be mis-coded section headings. I will mark them as such. Tag: Undo

13 May 2022

• 13:4913:49, 13 May 2022 diff hist −2‎ Jarret Brachman ‎ →‎Education and career: Corrected misspelling of Dr. Brachman's name

1 May 2022

• 16:1416:14, 1 May 2022 diff hist −4‎ m Steven Mnuchin ‎ →‎Comments on Lego Batman movie: Copyedit grammar. Change subsequent sentence to be slightly tighter.

29 April 2022

• 19:1719:17, 29 April 2022 diff hist +38‎ m Metal foam ‎ →‎Hybrid foam: Add relevant wikilink

21 April 2022

• 10:2510:25, 21 April 2022 diff hist 0‎ Lockheed Martin F-35 Lightning II ‎ Copyedit: remove superfluous / incorrect hyphen. "A shot-down aircraft" is correct; "they shot-down the enemy" is not. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 March 2022

• 14:0014:00, 31 March 2022 diff hist +273‎ N User talk:2409:4041:D9C:6199:0:0:404B:480F ‎ ←Created page with 'Hi; you posted something on my page, but I'm not sure what you were trying to say. ~~~~' current

30 March 2022

• 14:2114:21, 30 March 2022 diff hist +665‎ Talk:Public adjuster ‎ →‎Copyvio: new section
• 14:1614:16, 30 March 2022 diff hist −115‎ Public adjuster ‎ Add relevant wikilink. Remove explanatory text. Rework some of the text for more neutral tone. Frankly, this smells of copyvio, but I don't have time to work on that now.

28 March 2022

• 15:3115:31, 28 March 2022 diff hist −8‎ m Scram ‎ →‎Mechanisms: Only one link per subject is required.
• 14:2714:27, 28 March 2022 diff hist +210‎ User:Septegram/notes ‎ →‎To Do: Updating notes current

25 March 2022

• 13:0213:02, 25 March 2022 diff hist −3‎ Lady Sheba ‎ Remove superfluous/incorrect apostrophe (eyeroll). Change "intended" to "tended;" the material wasn't something that all other Wiccans wanted to keep secret, just most of them.

24 March 2022

• 15:2815:28, 24 March 2022 diff hist +2‎ m Pelham, Massachusetts ‎ →‎Education: Copyedit change "1" to "one" MOS
• 15:2615:26, 24 March 2022 diff hist +48‎ User:Septegram/notes ‎ →‎To Do

18 March 2022

• 14:5814:58, 18 March 2022 diff hist −33‎ Minneapolis, North Carolina ‎ Remove superfluous citation request. It's intuitively obvious that a town of under 500 people is barely notable and definitely less famous than the largest city in Minnesota. Added population data from city-data.com/township/Minneapolis-Avery-NC.html, although I can't include it as a citation; Wikipedia seems to think it's a spam site.

17 March 2022

• 16:4216:42, 17 March 2022 diff hist −13‎ m Wicca ‎ Removing superfluous "BTW"s. Once the abbreviation is defined, it is not necessary to keep doing so.
• 16:4016:40, 17 March 2022 diff hist −4‎ m Wicca ‎ "BTW" links to a disambiguation page, and does not need a link because the full phrase is linked in the words immediately preceding the abbreviation.

9 March 2022

• 14:3914:39, 9 March 2022 diff hist +4‎ m Guntō ‎ →‎History: Add relevant wikilink
• 14:2914:29, 9 March 2022 diff hist −10‎ Puyi ‎ →‎Puppet ruler of Manchukuo (1932–1945): "Since then" carries the implication of something continuing to the present. This better describes the situation. Remove unnecessary redirect for Kenpeitai.

2 March 2022

• 18:3218:32, 2 March 2022 diff hist +11‎ Modern paganism ‎ →‎Late 20th century: Add relevant wikilink. Remove superfluous "the." Remove reference to Paganism as a religion, since it is an "umbrella" term covering any number of religions.

23 February 2022

• 12:0212:02, 23 February 2022 diff hist +133‎ Weather Underground ‎ Add relevant citation. I'm using an unfamiliar tool, so I apologize if I didn't format this as well as I might have normally. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 February 2022

• 16:2316:23, 22 February 2022 diff hist +395‎ Talk:New Forest coven ‎ Request clarification
• 16:0116:01, 22 February 2022 diff hist −7‎ Ossian ‎ Slightly tighten phrasing
• 15:5715:57, 22 February 2022 diff hist 0‎ m The Sorrows of Young Werther ‎ Copyedit to remove superfluous / incorrect hyphens. "Over a five-and-a-half-week period" would be correct, but "in five-and-a-half weeks" is not.

20 February 2022

• 17:3017:30, 20 February 2022 diff hist +250‎ Equinox (MLM) ‎ Add one additional item and a reference
• 17:2717:27, 20 February 2022 diff hist +610‎ Equinox (MLM) ‎ Add several references. Reword a couple of passages to remove unreferenced material.

9 February 2022

• 21:2021:20, 9 February 2022 diff hist +6‎ Wheel of the Year ‎ →‎Halloween: Copyedit; add appropriate apostrophes and add "All" to correct the name to "All Hallows' Eve."
• 21:1521:15, 9 February 2022 diff hist −7‎ Wiccan views of divinity ‎ Undid revision 1070528242 by 213.107.87.52 (talk) Remove questionable content Tag: Undo

31 January 2022

• 22:4622:46, 31 January 2022 diff hist +1‎ m Gōjū-ryū ‎ Undid revision 1069158717 by 65.94.203.70 (talk) Restoring period removed for no apparent reason. Tag: Undo
• 22:4322:43, 31 January 2022 diff hist −2‎ Wellerman ‎ →‎Synopsis: Copyedit; "quartet" fits this sentence better than "quadruple."

24 January 2022

• 19:4019:40, 24 January 2022 diff hist 0‎ m Othala ‎ →‎Modern use: Copyedit; "older" is more appropriate here

20 January 2022

• 17:5217:52, 20 January 2022 diff hist +19‎ Table saw ‎ →‎Safety: Add relevant wikilink; a riving knife adds a substantial safety factor.

19 January 2022

• 13:1613:16, 19 January 2022 diff hist 0‎ The Good Witch ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit superfluous capitalization Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 January 2022

• 23:2823:28, 17 January 2022 diff hist +4‎ Motherboard ‎ Add relevant wikilink
• 12:4912:49, 17 January 2022 diff hist +10‎ Harlan Ellison ‎ Add relevant detail. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

11 January 2022

• 21:2921:29, 11 January 2022 diff hist −1‎ m Contempt of court ‎ Copyedit: add space between "jail" and the following "or." Remove the "or" preceding "jail."
• 21:2721:27, 11 January 2022 diff hist −1‎ m Contempt of court ‎ Tidying up wikimarkup

7 January 2022

• 23:4823:48, 7 January 2022 diff hist −1‎ m Karla Faye Tucker ‎ Correct transitive to intransitive Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

9 December 2021

• 18:5018:50, 9 December 2021 diff hist −11‎ Irish mythology ‎ →‎Druids: Tidy verbiage for tense agreement

1 December 2021

• 09:2309:23, 1 December 2021 diff hist +538‎ Talk:Backlot ‎ →‎Demise: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 October 2021

• 15:2115:21, 29 October 2021 diff hist +891‎ Talk:Wheel of the Year ‎ →‎Christian terminology

20 October 2021

• 12:4912:49, 20 October 2021 diff hist +10‎ George Floyd Justice in Policing Act ‎ Reorganizing links, including removing a redirect.

13 October 2021

• 16:2416:24, 13 October 2021 diff hist +157‎ SIAI-Marchetti SF.260 ‎ Add relevant tidbit Tag: Disambiguation links added

6 October 2021

• 17:3017:30, 6 October 2021 diff hist +15‎ Campfire ‎ →‎Activities: Copyedit "sot" for "soot." Add "contamination" for clarity.
• 17:2217:22, 6 October 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Super-LumiNova ‎ →‎Alternative for afterglow pigments: Copyedit capitalization for "radium."

30 September 2021

• 17:5417:54, 30 September 2021 diff hist +42‎ Boston ‎ →‎See also: Add relevant wikilink. This is a part of Boston's culture.

23 September 2021

• 14:0014:00, 23 September 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Kat Von D ‎ →‎Career: Copyedit capitalization

22 September 2021

• 20:2920:29, 22 September 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Button Gwinnett ‎ →‎Early life and education: Copyedit punctuation

21 September 2021

• 09:0309:03, 21 September 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Public school funding in the United States ‎ Copyedit superfluous capitalization Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 September 2021

• 15:2315:23, 15 September 2021 diff hist +4‎ m Runic magic ‎ →‎Stephen Flowers: Copyedit typos, add relevant wikilink
• 15:1615:16, 15 September 2021 diff hist +670‎ N User talk:2600:6C40:7400:1C4E:B160:B24E:D278:9C65 ‎ Notifying this user an inappropriate edit has been undone. current
• 15:1015:10, 15 September 2021 diff hist +4‎ West African Vodun ‎ Undid revision 1044244820 by 2600:6C40:7400:1C4E:B160:B24E:D278:9C65 (talk): Possible vandalism. Tag: Undo

25 August 2021

• 20:0020:00, 25 August 2021 diff hist −2‎ m Crown Jewels of the United Kingdom ‎ →‎Ampulla: Copyedit

20 August 2021

• 14:2014:20, 20 August 2021 diff hist 0‎ Stewart Farrar ‎ Undid revision 1039712808 by Bazonka (talk) British spelling for a Briton Tags: Undo Reverted

19 August 2021

• 18:3218:32, 19 August 2021 diff hist +4‎ m Crown Jewels of the United Kingdom ‎ →‎Sceptres: Change "a bit" to "slightly" for more encyclopedic tone

12 August 2021

• 17:3917:39, 12 August 2021 diff hist +45‎ m Ross Swimmer ‎ Add relevant wikilink

23 July 2021

• 18:3818:38, 23 July 2021 diff hist −10‎ m Pancor Jackhammer ‎ →‎See also: Eliminate redirect
• 18:3018:30, 23 July 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Saiga-12 ‎ Copyedit capitalization

14 July 2021

• 22:1122:11, 14 July 2021 diff hist −2‎ Blue Star Wicca ‎ Change from city to state, for consistency

4 July 2021

• 13:2813:28, 4 July 2021 diff hist +4‎ m Blue Star Wicca ‎ Correcting italicization Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 13:2513:25, 4 July 2021 diff hist +4‎ Blue Star Wicca ‎ Add abbreviation Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 July 2021

• 20:3220:32, 2 July 2021 diff hist −5‎ Lewis gun ‎ →‎Design details: Slightly rework phrasing for clarity
• 14:5714:57, 2 July 2021 diff hist +480‎ N User talk:Trovita ‎ ←Created page with ' {{subst:uw-vandalism1}}'
• 14:5114:51, 2 July 2021 diff hist +50‎ Giovanni van Bronckhorst ‎ Undid revision 1031588273 by Trovita (talk) Not sure what this is, but it's pretty reliably not relevant. Tag: Undo
• 14:5014:50, 2 July 2021 diff hist +49‎ 2007–08 Rangers F.C. season ‎ Undid revision 1031588095 by Trovita (talk) Not sure what this is, but it's pretty reliably not relevant. Tag: Undo

30 June 2021

• 21:2821:28, 30 June 2021 diff hist +13‎ m Goldie and Wendy ‎ "Fatale" is a modifier of "femme," so "femme" gets the plural.
• 21:2621:26, 30 June 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Sin City (film) ‎ →‎"The Hard Goodbye": Lower-case "l" for "lesbian;" it's not a nationality

25 June 2021

• 20:1820:18, 25 June 2021 diff hist +194‎ Derek Chauvin ‎ Adding reference. I should have done that right away.
• 20:1420:14, 25 June 2021 diff hist +95‎ Derek Chauvin ‎ Sentence

24 June 2021

• 15:5915:59, 24 June 2021 diff hist +18‎ Air Force One (film) ‎ Undid revision 1030206484 by Quentin X (talk) She plays the Vice President. Tags: Undo Reverted

23 June 2021

• 22:2622:26, 23 June 2021 diff hist +367‎ Talk:Love on a Branch Line (TV series) ‎ →‎Critical Reception?: new section
• 22:2522:25, 23 June 2021 diff hist +175‎ Love on a Branch Line (TV series) ‎ →‎Plot: "Undertakes" implies that he planned to get hammered with Lionel. Some grammatical / punctuation fixes, and some rewrites for clarity, consistency, and encyclopedic style
• 15:5615:56, 23 June 2021 diff hist −27‎ Space: Above and Beyond ‎ →‎Plot: Tighten phrasing

17 June 2021

• 17:0217:02, 17 June 2021 diff hist +4‎ Lichterfelde (Berlin) ‎ Add relevant wikilink
• 16:5316:53, 17 June 2021 diff hist −124‎ Charles Edward, Duke of Saxe-Coburg and Gotha ‎ →‎Duke of Saxe-Coburg and Gotha: Removing duplicate references to education. Add relevant wikilink.
• 13:5313:53, 17 June 2021 diff hist +26‎ EncroChat ‎ →‎Infiltration: Add relevant wikilink
• 13:3813:38, 17 June 2021 diff hist +23‎ Charles Edward, Duke of Saxe-Coburg and Gotha ‎ →‎Early life in the United Kingdom: Change language to slightly less stilted. Consolidate references to education. Add relevant wikilink. We should have a wikilink for "Lyndhurst," but I can't find anything about it after a quick search. I'd look harder, but I have to get back to work.
• 13:1913:19, 17 June 2021 diff hist +37‎ Charles Edward, Duke of Saxe-Coburg and Gotha ‎ →‎Duke of Saxe-Coburg and Gotha: Adding relevant wikilink, although we really should have the name of the actual institution here

14 June 2021

• 19:1119:11, 14 June 2021 diff hist +7‎ m Storm of the Century ‎ →‎Plot: Sidestepping apostrophe issues

8 June 2021

• 16:3116:31, 8 June 2021 diff hist −4‎ m Web accessibility ‎ →‎United States: Tidying tenses

7 June 2021

• 17:0717:07, 7 June 2021 diff hist −2‎ Type XXI submarine ‎ There doesn't appear to be anything shaped like a figure eight; this may be a better description.

2 June 2021

• 19:1219:12, 2 June 2021 diff hist −12‎ Wicca ‎ →‎Magic: THERE IS A SPECIFIC NOTE AT THE TOP SAYING NOT TO USE THE SPELLING "MAGICK" AND WHY. Tag: Manual revert
• 19:1019:10, 2 June 2021 diff hist −9‎ Wicca ‎ Undid revision 1026497081 by 146.212.56.118 (talk) THERE IS A SPECIFIC NOTE AT THE TOP SAYING NOT TO DO THIS AND WHY. Tags: Undo Reverted

1 June 2021

• 16:2716:27, 1 June 2021 diff hist −9‎ Iron Sky ‎ →‎Producers go bankrupt: Minor changes to phrasing, punctuation, etc. for more encyclopedic tone. Not entirely sure what the second sentence means (can a company file another into bankruptcy?), so I didn't mess with it, but it might benefit from some attention.

24 May 2021

• 23:5823:58, 24 May 2021 diff hist −13‎ Augury ‎ →‎Position of the augur: "Tricks" might be seen to imply the augures were not sincere. Oxford comma... Add apostrophe for possessive "the gods' will."
• 23:5423:54, 24 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Augury ‎ →‎Types of auspices: Changing "Gods" to "gods." As a Pagan, I understand the desire to be respectful, but the term gets a lower case in this context.

21 May 2021

• 17:3217:32, 21 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Battle of Mobile Bay ‎ →‎Clash with CSS Tennessee: Reorder words for emphasis
• 16:2616:26, 21 May 2021 diff hist +2‎ m Sikorsky MH-53 ‎ →‎Design and development: Past tense, since it's now retired.
• 15:5515:55, 21 May 2021 diff hist −110‎ Air Force One Is Down ‎ →‎Episode I: Considerable rewriting for brevity and clarity. I suspect I could do better if I'd actually seen this thing.
• 15:4315:43, 21 May 2021 diff hist −1‎ Bear Island (film) ‎ →‎Shooting: People are "whom"

11 May 2021

• 20:1620:16, 11 May 2021 diff hist +100‎ Modern paganism ‎ →‎Polytheism: Restore verbiage removed in a previous edit https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Modern_Paganism&diff=prev&oldid=1022578303

10 May 2021

• 11:4911:49, 10 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ Mach 5 ‎ Remove incorrect / superfluous hyphen. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 May 2021

• 14:3614:36, 3 May 2021 diff hist −25‎ Wicca ‎ Undid revision 1021167950 by 2600:6C4E:2600:5A8E:944B:AA2:8541:C2B8 (talk) There is a specific note at the beginning of the article saying not to do this. Tag: Undo

29 April 2021

• 21:1121:11, 29 April 2021 diff hist +300‎ Talk:George Floyd Justice in Policing Act ‎ →‎Description of Darrell C. Scott
• 15:0115:01, 29 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ The Dagda ‎ Undid revision 1020506006 by 207.74.82.228 (talk) Undoing obvious mistake. Tag: Undo
• 15:0015:00, 29 April 2021 diff hist +25‎ George Floyd Justice in Policing Act ‎ →‎Committee hearings
• 14:5814:58, 29 April 2021 diff hist −15‎ Talk:George Floyd Justice in Policing Act ‎ →‎Description of Darrell C. Scott
• 14:5714:57, 29 April 2021 diff hist +1,352‎ Talk:George Floyd Justice in Policing Act ‎ →‎Description of Darrell C. Scott
• 14:4114:41, 29 April 2021 diff hist +266‎ Talk:Tomb of the Unknown Soldier (Arlington National Cemetery) ‎ →‎Selecting the Unknown

28 April 2021

• 16:0816:08, 28 April 2021 diff hist +1,327‎ Talk:George Floyd Justice in Policing Act ‎ →‎NPOV: new section
• 15:4015:40, 28 April 2021 diff hist +621‎ Talk:Tomb of the Unknown Soldier (Arlington National Cemetery) ‎ →‎Selecting the Unknown: new section

23 April 2021

• 19:0019:00, 23 April 2021 diff hist +4‎ David Lane (white supremacist) ‎ →‎Wotansvolk: Add relevant wikilink

22 April 2021

• 15:1515:15, 22 April 2021 diff hist +3‎ Wiccan (character) ‎ →‎King in Black: Wiccan and Hulkling: Copyedit typo and slight rephrase
• 15:0815:08, 22 April 2021 diff hist +6‎ George Floyd Justice in Policing Act ‎ →‎Committee hearings: Change for NPOV. His bio reads like a Trump surrogate, but unless he's referred to as such in a reliable source, we shouldn't call him that.
• 15:0415:04, 22 April 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Darrell C. Scott ‎ →‎Early life: Remove superfluous/ incorrect hyphen. "It is not a nationally-accredited institution" could be correct, but "it is not nationally-accredited" is not.

19 April 2021

• 18:2318:23, 19 April 2021 diff hist −17‎ Wilhelm Canaris ‎ →‎Downfall and execution: Tightened up phrasing.
• 17:5017:50, 19 April 2021 diff hist −20‎ m Fortress (2012 film) ‎ →‎Plot: Remove wikilink and capitalization for "Riot Act," as this is a colloquial usage. Remove "Chickenshit" for more encyclopedic tone. Change "effect" (noun) to "affect" (verb).

13 April 2021

• 23:1923:19, 13 April 2021 diff hist +814‎ User talk:Springee ‎ →‎Barnstar: new section
• 23:1023:10, 13 April 2021 diff hist +276‎ Talk:Othala ‎ →‎RfC CPAC stage Odal shape
• 18:1418:14, 13 April 2021 diff hist +282‎ Talk:Othala ‎ →‎RfC CPAC stage Odal shape

12 April 2021

• 17:2117:21, 12 April 2021 diff hist +264‎ Talk:Cult ‎ →‎Falun Gong
• 17:1617:16, 12 April 2021 diff hist +5,317‎ User talk:BiteofAnubis369 ‎ →‎April 2021: Offering information I have found useful in editing WPedia, including link to standards for reliable sources.

9 April 2021

• 22:2022:20, 9 April 2021 diff hist +904‎ Talk:Cult ‎ →‎Falun Gong: new section
• 22:0422:04, 9 April 2021 diff hist −1‎ m Cult ‎ →‎New Acropolis: Copyedit "closed" to "close."
• 14:0114:01, 9 April 2021 diff hist −103‎ Wicca ‎ Undid revision 1016781089 by NNL2021 (talk) RM Unsourced material. Tag: Undo

2 April 2021

• 14:3614:36, 2 April 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Aerodrome ‎ →‎History: Copyedit "Takeoff" is a noun. "Take off" is a verb. Don't ask me; I didn't design the English language...

31 March 2021

• 22:0122:01, 31 March 2021 diff hist −8‎ Mountain Farms Mall ‎ →‎Walmart controversy: Unlikely that every single store called in a complaint, so I'm removing unsourced assertion.
• 21:5921:59, 31 March 2021 diff hist +6‎ Mountain Farms Mall ‎ →‎Walmart controversy: Remove incorrect / superfluous hyphen. "An eight-year timeframe" would be correct. "Developers have eight-years" is not. Change "have" to "were given," as this occurred in 2007. What is the current status?
• 21:5621:56, 31 March 2021 diff hist +4‎ m Mountain Farms Mall ‎ →‎History: Copyedit spelling. Add relevant wikilink. Change "and" to ampersand, as that is how the business presented itself before absorption by Whole Foods
• 21:3121:31, 31 March 2021 diff hist −349‎ RRP ‎ Remove unsourced material. There is no indication "Robert Roland Philibert," whomever he may be, is sufficiently noteworthy to be listed here. Tag: Manual revert
• 21:2921:29, 31 March 2021 diff hist −43‎ RRP ‎ Removing unsourced material. I did a cursory Google search for the term "red roof pigeon," and was unable to find any reference to this expression that did not appear to come originally from here. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
• 21:2621:26, 31 March 2021 diff hist −1‎ m RRP ‎ Correcting spelling Tag: Reverted
• 19:2119:21, 31 March 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Ineffective assistance of counsel ‎ →‎The McCoy Doctrine: Copyedit for grammar; using "plea" as a verb replaced with "plead."

19 March 2021

• 19:2019:20, 19 March 2021 diff hist −5‎ Right to keep and bear arms ‎ →‎Italy: Minor copyedits for grammar and spelling
• 19:1519:15, 19 March 2021 diff hist +15‎ Seidokaikan ‎ →‎Tournaments: Much copyediting for readability and punctuation.
• 19:0319:03, 19 March 2021 diff hist +3‎ m Seidokaikan ‎ →‎History: Copyedit for punctuation
• 19:0119:01, 19 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Seidokaikan ‎ Copyedit for punctuation

18 March 2021

• 14:5614:56, 18 March 2021 diff hist −43‎ Extraterrestrial life ‎ Undid revision 1012825221 by 2402:3A80:1094:8FE4:5AEF:F864:57A8:E8D4 (talk) Not really relevant. Addition of "the" is unnecessary here. Tag: Undo

17 March 2021

• 22:2022:20, 17 March 2021 diff hist +20‎ m "Pimpernel" Smith ‎ →‎Plot: Capitalize rank and add relevant wikilink because why not?

16 March 2021

• 19:0119:01, 16 March 2021 diff hist −18‎ Ammon Bundy ‎ →‎Post-occupation: Copyedit grammar, copyedit for readability
• 15:0715:07, 16 March 2021 diff hist +407‎ Talk:Othala ‎ →‎Survey Stage

15 March 2021

• 22:0622:06, 15 March 2021 diff hist +754‎ Talk:Othala ‎ →‎RfC CPAC stage Odal shape

12 March 2021

• 21:3121:31, 12 March 2021 diff hist +528‎ Talk:Othala ‎ →‎CPAC stage
• 18:0918:09, 12 March 2021 diff hist +870‎ Talk:Othala ‎No edit summary

11 March 2021

• 18:4718:47, 11 March 2021 diff hist −48‎ Flying ointment ‎ →‎Extreme toxicity of active ingredients: Removing header: this section appears pretty well-sourced at this point. There's one "Citation Needed" still, but that can be a standalone.

9 March 2021

• 17:2617:26, 9 March 2021 diff hist +613‎ Talk:Othala ‎ →‎CPAC stage

8 March 2021

• 23:5923:59, 8 March 2021 diff hist +812‎ Talk:Othala ‎ →‎CPAC stage
• 16:3916:39, 8 March 2021 diff hist −6‎ m Exercise Red Flag ‎ Copyedit grammar for improved tense & readability
• 16:1116:11, 8 March 2021 diff hist +932‎ Talk:Othala ‎ →‎CPAC stage

2 March 2021

• 16:0916:09, 2 March 2021 diff hist +923‎ Talk:Mosaic ‎ →‎Disconnected Fragment: new section
• 15:5415:54, 2 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Mosaic ‎ →‎Byzantine mosaics: There were probably more than one Muslim

1 March 2021

• 22:3622:36, 1 March 2021 diff hist +518‎ Othala ‎ →‎Other: 2021 CPAC incident Tag: Reverted

25 February 2021

• 17:1017:10, 25 February 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Tin Man (Star Trek: The Next Generation) ‎ →‎Plot: Remove superfluous/incorrect hyphen. "A millennia-old creature" would be correct, but "it is millennia-old" is not.

23 February 2021

• 17:4017:40, 23 February 2021 diff hist +1‎ Tipu Sultan ‎ →‎Fourth Anglo-Mysore War: Slight change for readability
• 17:3517:35, 23 February 2021 diff hist +15‎ m Sharpe (novel series) ‎ →‎Promotions: More precise wikilink

22 February 2021

• 17:2717:27, 22 February 2021 diff hist +1‎ m Murder of David Dorn ‎ →‎Investigation: Number agreement
• 12:0112:01, 22 February 2021 diff hist +1‎ Stephen Covey ‎ →‎Religion: Unless there's a Reliable Source verifying he's still practicing his faith somewhere in the afterlife, "was" is more appropriate here. Tag: Manual revert

11 February 2021

• 19:4019:40, 11 February 2021 diff hist +6‎ Confraternities of the Cord ‎ Clarifying, because the article indicates no incidences in any other relition
• 19:3719:37, 11 February 2021 diff hist +2‎ Miniskirt ‎ →‎Reception: Correcting wikilink

1 February 2021

• 17:2417:24, 1 February 2021 diff hist −9‎ Andrew Cohen (spiritual teacher) ‎ →‎Criticism: Change from "Andrew" to "Cohen" for more encyclopedic tone (and for consistency)

29 January 2021

• 14:2414:24, 29 January 2021 diff hist +2‎ Wiccan Laws ‎ In this specialised meaning of the common word hang, the past and past participle is hanged instead of hung. Tag: Manual revert

28 January 2021

• 16:4516:45, 28 January 2021 diff hist +1‎ Kenny Klein ‎ →‎Neopagan activities: Present tense is somewhat inappropriate due to his 2020 demise; changing it to remove that and add a relevant date.

27 January 2021

• 15:4115:41, 27 January 2021 diff hist −25‎ Lord of War ‎ →‎Plot: Reword slightly to remove the unclear expression "a forward statement" and tighten up the description.

25 January 2021

• 19:0219:02, 25 January 2021 diff hist +2‎ Flying ointment ‎ Change for a slightly more encyclopedic tone

21 January 2021

• 21:1321:13, 21 January 2021 diff hist +769‎ Talk:Melania Trump ‎ →‎Successor: new section
• 20:5820:58, 21 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ Daniel LaPlante ‎ →‎Criminal activities: Replacing "snuck" for more encyclopedic tone.

19 January 2021

• 02:4402:44, 19 January 2021 diff hist +11‎ m Melania Trump ‎ Fixing clumsy edit I should have gotten right the first time
• 02:4102:41, 19 January 2021 diff hist +4‎ m Melania Trump ‎ Adding Dr. Biden's professional title.
• 02:4002:40, 19 January 2021 diff hist +117‎ User:Septegram/notes ‎ →‎To Do
• 02:3902:39, 19 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ J. Horace Harding ‎ Moving paragraphs from "Career" to "Legacy," as they are not particularly related to his professional work. Plus, the reference to "the road" in what is now ¶3 (previously ¶1) was not automatically clear, since the road to which it referred was in the "Career" section. This ties the references together more smoothly.

15 January 2021

• 23:5023:50, 15 January 2021 diff hist −2‎ m Glossary of nautical terms (A–L) ‎ →‎B: Once you heave to, you are "hove to."
• 21:5221:52, 15 January 2021 diff hist +38‎ Wicca ‎ Added "Citation needed" tag. This may be true, but the phrasing assumes the criticism is true, which absolutely requires a strong citation. If it had said "has come under fire due to claims of cultural appropriation," that would be more correct, but would still need a citation.

3 January 2021

• 04:5904:59, 3 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Child in the Night ‎ Copyedit to correct homonym Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 January 2021

• 16:3016:30, 1 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ m Jon Burge ‎ Removing incorrect hyphens. "A four-and-a-half-year prison sentence" would be correct. "Four-and-a-half years in prison" is not. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 December 2020

• 04:1904:19, 31 December 2020 diff hist +418‎ Talk:Crew resource management ‎ →‎Removing Link: new section
• 04:1604:16, 31 December 2020 diff hist −80‎ Crew resource management ‎ →‎External links: Removing link that now links to the Facebook page for a marketing agency. &*(# cybersquatters...

29 December 2020

• 17:0117:01, 29 December 2020 diff hist −31‎ Span of control ‎ →‎Theoretical considerations: Some rephrasing for readability. Remove several superfluous commas, also for readability.

23 December 2020

• 22:0422:04, 23 December 2020 diff hist +6‎ m Ronda Rousey ‎ →‎Training: Original text reads as though Gamburyan injured his knee

18 December 2020

• 17:2517:25, 18 December 2020 diff hist +8‎ m Miesha Tate vs. Ronda Rousey ‎ Add relevant wikilinks. Why were these not already in place??
• 16:5016:50, 18 December 2020 diff hist +87‎ User:Septegram/notes ‎ →‎Handy Tools For Myself

17 December 2020

• 20:1920:19, 17 December 2020 diff hist +316‎ Talk:The Salvation Army ‎ →‎Biased History: Add encouragement
• 20:1320:13, 17 December 2020 diff hist +4‎ m Fort Saint Elmo ‎ →‎Reconstruction and modifications: Add relevant wikilink for this obscure term
• 20:0420:04, 17 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Midnight Express (film) ‎ →‎Reception: Copyedit superfluous / incorrect hyphens. Saying "a two-and-a-half-star review" would be correct, but saying "gave the film two-and-a-half stars" is not.
• 15:5015:50, 17 December 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Five-hundred-meter Aperture Spherical Telescope ‎ →‎Overview: Change parenthetical to wikilink. Copyedit superfluous/incorrect dashes and change "degree" to "degrees." Saying "a 40-degree angle" would be correct; saying "an angle of 40-degree" is not.

11 December 2020

• 16:4316:43, 11 December 2020 diff hist +259‎ User talk:Septegram ‎ →‎“LGBT” → “LGBTQIA+” at The Salvation Army

9 December 2020

• 16:2616:26, 9 December 2020 diff hist +8‎ The Worthy ‎ →‎Synopsis: Assorted copyedits, primarily to punctuation.
• 16:1516:15, 9 December 2020 diff hist 0‎ It Comes at Night ‎ →‎Plot

7 December 2020

• 21:1921:19, 7 December 2020 diff hist −3‎ Fire discipline ‎ →‎Call for fire: Change phrasing to reflect the fact that FOs are not always male.
• 17:5217:52, 7 December 2020 diff hist +480‎ Talk:The Salvation Army ‎ →‎"Criticism by LGBT activists" Section

4 December 2020

• 21:5821:58, 4 December 2020 diff hist +27‎ The Living Daylights ‎ →‎Plot: Adding reference to the unique weapon used during the opening sequence
• 21:5721:57, 4 December 2020 diff hist +94‎ Walther WA 2000 ‎ Add popular culture reference
• 18:3618:36, 4 December 2020 diff hist +275‎ Talk:The Salvation Army ‎ →‎"Criticism by LGBT activists" Section

3 December 2020

• 19:5919:59, 3 December 2020 diff hist +7‎ Talk:The Salvation Army ‎ Closing the div tag so color formatting does not go beyond the specific discussion.
• 19:5619:56, 3 December 2020 diff hist +572‎ Talk:The Salvation Army ‎ →‎"Criticism by LGBT activists" Section: new section
• 19:2519:25, 3 December 2020 diff hist +32‎ Brodie knob ‎ →‎Design and use: This really needs a citation. I haven't seen that many tractors, but none that I've seen had this attachment. They may be popular, but "standard equipment" seems a bit of a stretch.
• 15:0915:09, 3 December 2020 diff hist +9‎ Junji Ito ‎ →‎Inspiration and themes: Rework again for more clarity
• 15:0915:09, 3 December 2020 diff hist −12‎ Junji Ito ‎ →‎Inspiration and themes: Copyedit for clarity

2 December 2020

• 17:2717:27, 2 December 2020 diff hist −787‎ Guerrilla art ‎No edit summary
• 17:2617:26, 2 December 2020 diff hist +496‎ Talk:Guerrilla art ‎ →‎Artistic Movement Section: new section

25 November 2020

• 11:4111:41, 25 November 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Scollay Square ‎ Copyedit capitalization. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 November 2020

• 21:0721:07, 24 November 2020 diff hist +240‎ Talk:Welding ‎ →‎Definition?
• 21:0321:03, 24 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Under the Dome (novel) ‎ Remove incorrect / superfluous hyphens. Hyphens in numbers are only appropriate when the number is a modifier. "A twelve-day trip" would be correct; "The trip took twelve-days" would not.
• 19:1819:18, 24 November 2020 diff hist +270‎ Talk:Falklands War ‎ →‎Civilians

23 November 2020

• 23:0823:08, 23 November 2020 diff hist +329‎ Talk:Falklands War ‎ →‎Civilians: new section
• 22:5122:51, 23 November 2020 diff hist +4‎ m Avro 730 ‎ →‎Design: Add relevant wikilink
• 22:1722:17, 23 November 2020 diff hist +528‎ Talk:Welding ‎ →‎Definition?: new section

22 November 2020

• 09:4009:40, 22 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Heat (1986 film) ‎ Correcting a comma to a period Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 November 2020

• 13:1013:10, 19 November 2020 diff hist −80‎ Squatting position ‎ Change "females" to "women," as this is specifically about humans. Remove irrelevant material about urination unrelated to squatting. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16 November 2020

• 22:2222:22, 16 November 2020 diff hist +179‎ Talk:Melania Trump ‎ Undid revision 989061291 by 2600:1700:31C0:40E0:610E:79C0:2486:2B4D (talk) Not yet, she isn't. Tag: Undo

13 November 2020

• 13:3313:33, 13 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Mesh networking ‎ →‎Basic principles: Moving the link to the first instance of the word.

10 November 2020

• 20:5920:59, 10 November 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Original jurisdiction of the Supreme Court of the United States ‎ →‎Authority: We don't need two identical links in the same article, let alone in the same paragraph.

30 October 2020

• 15:0515:05, 30 October 2020 diff hist 0‎ Flyback chronograph ‎ Rephrase for a more encyclopedic tone.

29 October 2020

• 15:3615:36, 29 October 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Consulier GTP ‎ →‎Challenge with C4 Corvette: Remove incorrect / superfluous hyphens. "A three-year-old" car would be correct, but "the car was three-years-old" is not.

28 October 2020

• 15:5215:52, 28 October 2020 diff hist −44‎ World War Z (film) ‎ →‎Plot: Tidying up phrasing for readability, punctuation, sentence structure. Since there's only one Mossad, "Israeli" is superfluous.
• 11:4311:43, 28 October 2020 diff hist +52‎ m 10x10 (film) ‎ →‎Plot: Better link
• 11:3011:30, 28 October 2020 diff hist −1,821‎ 10x10 (film) ‎ →‎Plot: Rewrite for conciseness and to remove some extraneous material. This would benefit from attention by someone who's actually seen it, though.

22 October 2020

• 17:4717:47, 22 October 2020 diff hist +650‎ Talk:Akira Kurosawa ‎ →‎Images: new section
• 15:0815:08, 22 October 2020 diff hist +10‎ m Polytheism ‎ Undid revision 984758688 by RohanDaBOSS012345 (talk) Undoing change that created a formatting error Tag: Undo

21 October 2020

• 22:1822:18, 21 October 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Barbara Barrie ‎ Customarily, an article does not lead with personal life unless that is the main reason for someone to be listed.

15 October 2020

• 21:5021:50, 15 October 2020 diff hist +82‎ HMS Hurricane (H06) ‎ →‎Wartime modifications: Add reference to the dazzle camouflage paint shown in the picture.

13 October 2020

• 16:1016:10, 13 October 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Ido ‎ Undid revision 983287184 by 62.57.200.108 (talk) Esperantidoj is plural, which matches the number in the rest of the sentence. Tag: Undo

30 September 2020

• 13:2113:21, 30 September 2020 diff hist +194‎ Slide hammer ‎ Illegal use

29 September 2020

• 21:0221:02, 29 September 2020 diff hist +3‎ m Executive privilege ‎ →‎Trump administration: Gender-neutral term is more appropriate
• 15:0615:06, 29 September 2020 diff hist +206‎ User talk:2606:6000:6C88:1800:2561:D828:35E3:8CAD ‎ →‎Activity current
• 15:0215:02, 29 September 2020 diff hist +5,656‎ N User talk:2606:6000:6C88:1800:2561:D828:35E3:8CAD ‎ →‎Activity: new section

24 September 2020

• 15:4215:42, 24 September 2020 diff hist +129‎ Heather Cox Richardson ‎ →‎Newsletter: Adding her video presentations.

21 September 2020

• 14:4814:48, 21 September 2020 diff hist +304‎ Talk:Hiller OH-23 Raven ‎ →‎Nickname: new section
• 14:4414:44, 21 September 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Seymour Hersh ‎ →‎Killing of Osama bin Laden {{anchor|Death of Osama bin Laden}}: Changing tense, since there is no longer an Obama administration

17 September 2020

• 23:4523:45, 17 September 2020 diff hist +42‎ Bullworker ‎ →‎The Bullworker in the culture: Minor copyedits. Add "citation needed" tag. I'm not entirely sure if this is should be here even with a citation, but one thing at a time.
• 23:4223:42, 17 September 2020 diff hist +1‎ m Bullworker ‎ →‎Arthur Aubriot Pons: Copyedit typo
• 21:4421:44, 17 September 2020 diff hist −101‎ Poi (performance art) ‎ →‎Modern poi: Removing random garbage
• 21:3921:39, 17 September 2020 diff hist +16‎ China Airlines Flight 605 ‎ →‎Aftermath: Pretty sure you don't want to remove the ILS from an airport

15 September 2020

• 17:1717:17, 15 September 2020 diff hist +40‎ Peaky Blinders ‎ This reference was added without any documentation, and probably needs one.
• 14:5414:54, 15 September 2020 diff hist +7‎ Theophany ‎ "Deity" includes those of any gender, and allows us to sidestep things like the previous editor's mistake regarding whether or not to capitalize "god" in this context. Change to "manifestation" to avoid using "appearance" twice in the same sentence, which is unencylopedically clumsy.

28 August 2020

• 22:4822:48, 28 August 2020 diff hist +536‎ Talk:Melania Trump ‎ →‎Misleading Flight Claims: Advice to a new editor
• 15:4015:40, 28 August 2020 diff hist −9‎ United States Air Force Pararescue ‎ →‎Training and structure: Can't be coached "in nutritionist," etc. Copyedit punctuation

26 August 2020

• 20:3820:38, 26 August 2020 diff hist −50‎ List of Sharpe series characters ‎ →‎Williams: Copyedit; tidy up phrasing. Correct spelling.
• 20:3520:35, 26 August 2020 diff hist −215‎ List of Sharpe series characters ‎ →‎Isaiah Tongue: Move text to eliminate duplication. Rephrase parts for clarity. Add relevant wikilinks.

24 August 2020

• 15:3415:34, 24 August 2020 diff hist +50‎ Odette Keun ‎ Copyedit stuff; punctuation, capitalization, a bit of rewording for clarity/ brevity. Who was Prince Grisha? We should have a link here if this is correct.
• 15:2015:20, 24 August 2020 diff hist +37‎ Odette Keun ‎ →‎Wells and the search for a third way: Adding another book dedicated to her, per the WP Bulpington of Blup article

21 August 2020

• 22:5122:51, 21 August 2020 diff hist −12‎ Fluid Drive ‎ →‎M4 and M6 transmissions: "Astonishing" seems superfluous and not particularly encyclopedic.
• 21:5621:56, 21 August 2020 diff hist −37‎ History of Wicca ‎ Undid revision 974181919 by 87.191.190.197 (talk) There is no verifiable record of any recognizable version of Wicca before Gerald Gardner's writings in the early 1950s. (Wiccan myself, so I have no axe to grind, but WP must be verifiable) Tag: Undo

19 August 2020

• 16:3416:34, 19 August 2020 diff hist +35‎ Stop and identify statutes ‎ →‎Encounters between law enforcement and the general public: Law enforcement may not be required to articulate reasons during the stop; in at least some cases I believe they only need to do so in court, if it comes to that. Be careful of getting legal advice from Wikipedia.
• 16:3116:31, 19 August 2020 diff hist +28‎ Stop and identify statutes ‎ →‎Police–citizen encounters: Law enforcement officers are also citizens. Changed from "police" because sheriffs, constables, etc. are also covered.
• 16:2916:29, 19 August 2020 diff hist −107‎ Stop and identify statutes ‎ This *is* the article on stop-and-identify statutes.

17 August 2020

• 14:2114:21, 17 August 2020 diff hist +12‎ m Fraud squad ‎ Eliminate unnecessary redirect

14 August 2020

• 15:1015:10, 14 August 2020 diff hist −29‎ Chiappa M6 Survival Gun ‎ Multiple small copyedits for grammar, punctuation, etc.
• 15:0115:01, 14 August 2020 diff hist −1‎ m M6 Aircrew Survival Weapon ‎ →‎History: It's > Its

13 August 2020

• 17:0017:00, 13 August 2020 diff hist −16‎ George Conway ‎ →‎Personal life: Putting events in chronological order. Small rephrase regarding Claudia Conway's social media accounts for readability.

12 August 2020

• 14:1414:14, 12 August 2020 diff hist +8‎ Pelham, Massachusetts ‎ →‎Transportation: Rework to remove "lied" which really doesn't fit here.

6 August 2020

• 15:3115:31, 6 August 2020 diff hist −10‎ Barefoot ‎ →‎Imprisonment: "Civilized" implies there is such a thing as an "uncivilized society," which is pretty POV.
• 15:2415:24, 6 August 2020 diff hist +8‎ Prison uniform ‎ →‎21st century: Rework for grammar and readability
• 15:1715:17, 6 August 2020 diff hist −19‎ Drill commands ‎ →‎Other drills: Rework for readability.
• 15:0015:00, 6 August 2020 diff hist −1‎ m John C. Woods ‎ →‎Biography: Minor copyedit for readability

4 August 2020

• 17:2217:22, 4 August 2020 diff hist +12‎ Poon Lim ‎ →‎World War II: Rework for clarity. As constructed, the "he" could refer to the ship.
• 17:1217:12, 4 August 2020 diff hist +48‎ m The Tomorrow People ‎ →‎Original series (1970s): Probably drawn from Bester's novel

30 July 2020

• 13:5413:54, 30 July 2020 diff hist −6‎ Barrack buster ‎ →‎Strategic impact: Copyedit typo. Rephrase for slightly smoother read. Remove accidental double-space after "Downing Street attack."
• 13:4813:48, 30 July 2020 diff hist −67‎ m Stephen Covey ‎ →‎Education: University of Utah apparently disagrees: https://catalog.utah.edu/#/programs/VkiwBhNAb?bc=true&bcCurrent=Business%20Administration&bcGroup=David%20Eccles%20School%20of%20Business&bcItemType=programs Tag: Manual revert
• 13:2813:28, 30 July 2020 diff hist −6‎ m Manchester-by-the-Sea, Massachusetts ‎ →‎Singing Beach: More encyclopedic format

27 July 2020

• 23:1723:17, 27 July 2020 diff hist +44‎ McLeod (tool) ‎ It is not clear from the context what these words me, especially "slough."
• 23:0623:06, 27 July 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Peaky Blinders ‎ →‎History: Remove superfluous/incorrect hyphen. Change word order for better readability
• 21:2021:20, 27 July 2020 diff hist +6‎ m HMS Ulysses (novel) ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedit: "his" looks like it refers to the book, which it obviously does not.

21 July 2020

• 16:2616:26, 21 July 2020 diff hist −31‎ m Stop and identify statutes ‎ Removing a link that simply leads to this page.
• 15:4615:46, 21 July 2020 diff hist +701‎ Talk:Macadam ‎ →‎Terminology: new section
• 15:3415:34, 21 July 2020 diff hist +563‎ Talk:Curb stomp ‎ →‎Other Definition: new section

16 July 2020

• 22:5822:58, 16 July 2020 diff hist +121‎ Akira Kurosawa ‎ →‎Final works and last years (1987–98): Add relevant quote.

14 July 2020

• 15:2115:21, 14 July 2020 diff hist +84‎ Can opener ‎ →‎Novel designs: Clarifying an advantage Tag: Visual edit: Switched

8 July 2020

• 14:1914:19, 8 July 2020 diff hist −19‎ Lebanon Hills Regional Park ‎ →‎Park history and information: Rephrase to make this sentence less time-specific.

7 July 2020

• 22:1022:10, 7 July 2020 diff hist +1,454‎ Amherst Regional High School (Massachusetts) ‎ This information was removed for unclear reasons. The Survival Living course is part of what makes ARHS unique, and definitely belongs in this article. Performing arts is, of course, not unique, but still relevant.
• 21:5121:51, 7 July 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Amherst Regional High School (Massachusetts) ‎ Copyedit typo--Superintendent's name is "Michael," not "Micheal."

3 July 2020

• 16:0216:02, 3 July 2020 diff hist +3‎ Alistair MacLean ‎ →‎Personal life: Slightly more conventional phrasing, although there's probably still work to be done.

25 June 2020

• 16:1216:12, 25 June 2020 diff hist +4‎ Barrack buster ‎ →‎Provisional IRA's improvised mortars: Punctuation. Rework for slightly smoother read
• 16:0816:08, 25 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m The Last Samurai ‎ →‎Critical response: Remove incorrect hyphenation. "A three-and-a-half-star review" would be correct; "gave it three-and-a-half stars" is not.
• 16:0616:06, 25 June 2020 diff hist 0‎ m The Last Samurai ‎ →‎Plot: Like "fish," the plural of "ninja" is "ninja." "Commit," in this context, implies some kind of offense; "perform" is more appropriate.

22 June 2020

• 19:0119:01, 22 June 2020 diff hist +56‎ m Tomb of the Unknown Soldier (Arlington National Cemetery) ‎ →‎Tomb guards: Correcting link

12 June 2020

• 17:3117:31, 12 June 2020 diff hist −2‎ The Killer Elite ‎ Major copyedit for egregious grammar, spelling, number matching, tense matching, etc. Incidentally, like "fish," the plural of "ninja" is "ninja."
• 16:5516:55, 12 June 2020 diff hist +646‎ Talk:Fire discipline ‎ →‎isn't there more to fire discipline than indirect fire?
• 15:4615:46, 12 June 2020 diff hist +23‎ Final Blackout ‎ →‎Plot: Rework for readability.
• 15:2415:24, 12 June 2020 diff hist +789‎ Talk:Bachem Ba 349 Natter ‎ →‎Copyvio?: new section
• 15:2015:20, 12 June 2020 diff hist +14‎ Bachem Ba 349 Natter ‎ →‎Manned test flight: Some of this section may have been copied from elsewhere. Please see the Talk page.
• 15:1215:12, 12 June 2020 diff hist +1‎ m 1972 Sacramento Canadair Sabre accident ‎ →‎Aftermath: Copyedit grammar
• 15:0815:08, 12 June 2020 diff hist +23‎ Bachem Ba 349 Natter ‎ →‎Modifications: Edit for tense consistency and slightly more crisp phrasing
• 14:5814:58, 12 June 2020 diff hist +77‎ Stabilator ‎ →‎Military: Adding clarification request. Can most aircraft be flown without actually holding the controls?
• 14:4914:49, 12 June 2020 diff hist −30‎ m Stabilator ‎ →‎General aviation: Replace HTML code with relevant Wikilink

10 June 2020

• 17:5917:59, 10 June 2020 diff hist −26‎ m M67 recoilless rifle ‎ →‎Description: Tense agreement.

19 May 2020

• 14:4214:42, 19 May 2020 diff hist +17‎ m Mann Act ‎ →‎Effects and alterations of the Mann Act: Minor rewording for clarity. Correct typo "als" to "also."

7 May 2020

• 17:0117:01, 7 May 2020 diff hist +43‎ m The Tales of Alvin Maker ‎ →‎Mormonism: Change tense, since Alvin Smith died in 1840. Add relevant wikilink

20 April 2020

• 22:2522:25, 20 April 2020 diff hist −3‎ Barrack buster ‎ →‎Strategic impact: "Forced" implies the British government had no other option. Withdrawal from Ireland, while unlikely, was a definite option.

6 April 2020

• 14:1714:17, 6 April 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Paul Beyerl ‎ →‎Biography: Copyedit: add hyphen to "4500 book"

3 April 2020

• 16:5316:53, 3 April 2020 diff hist −61‎ Tattoo ‎ →‎America: Add citation needed. Rework wording for a significantly more encyclopedic tone.

24 March 2020

• 00:3500:35, 24 March 2020 diff hist −2‎ m Heaven's Burning ‎ →‎Plot: Copyedits: the correct adjective is "Afghan," not "Afghani." Change "set backs" to "setbacks."

11 March 2020

• 20:2920:29, 11 March 2020 diff hist −1‎ m The Octagon (film) ‎ →‎Plot: Like fish, the plural of ninja is "ninja."
• 19:3319:33, 11 March 2020 diff hist +1‎ m ArcGIS ‎ Copyedit include > includes for number matching.

1 March 2020

• 03:0103:01, 1 March 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Sea Patrol season 4 ‎ Copyedit assorted typos. "Doctor" does not need to be capitalized in the middle of a sentence.

26 February 2020

• 15:0615:06, 26 February 2020 diff hist +164‎ Cooper Industries, Inc. v. Leatherman Tool Group, Inc. ‎ →‎Effects of the decision: Updating based on the outcome of the case.

25 February 2020

• 17:3617:36, 25 February 2020 diff hist +2‎ m Irukandji jellyfish ‎ →‎Biology: Copyedit for readability.

18 February 2020

• 19:2819:28, 18 February 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Jean Seberg ‎ →‎Personal life: Copyedit typo. I have corrected the spelling but if she actually wrote "discretely," it should be cited and followed with "(sic)."

14 February 2020

• 02:5902:59, 14 February 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Venom (2018 film) ‎ →‎Critical response: Copyedit: remove incorrect / superfluous hyphens. "A one-and-a-half star review" is correct. "He gave one-and-a-half-stars" is not.

13 February 2020

• 19:3019:30, 13 February 2020 diff hist +2‎ m Mastermind (Jason Wyngarde) ‎ →‎Fictional character biography: Correcting spelling

12 February 2020

• 03:2003:20, 12 February 2020 diff hist −2‎ m Robert Morley ‎ →‎Career: Minor grammatical revisions

10 February 2020

• 18:5818:58, 10 February 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Private label rights ‎ →‎Use: Eliminate gender-specificity, and agree with the "one" outside the parentheses.

5 February 2020

• 21:1121:11, 5 February 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Electrical ballast ‎ →‎Fixed resistors: Correcting number format

3 February 2020

• 17:5617:56, 3 February 2020 diff hist +555‎ Talk:Association for Crime Scene Reconstruction ‎ Conclusion current

31 January 2020

• 22:3522:35, 31 January 2020 diff hist +851‎ Talk:Association for Crime Scene Reconstruction ‎ Deletion discussion
• 14:4414:44, 31 January 2020 diff hist +697‎ N Talk:Association for Crime Scene Reconstruction ‎ Discussing the process for this redirect.
• 00:5300:53, 31 January 2020 diff hist +18‎ User talk:Jarble ‎ →‎Association for Crime Scene Reconstruction
• 00:5300:53, 31 January 2020 diff hist +756‎ User talk:Jarble ‎ →‎Association for Crime Scene Reconstruction: new section
• 00:4500:45, 31 January 2020 diff hist +123‎ Association for Crime Scene Reconstruction ‎ If there isn't a relevant article, the original link on the Crime Reconstruction page should be a redlink until there's somewhere to point to. Nothing wrong with redirects per se, only circular ones. Tag: Removed redirect
• 00:3600:36, 31 January 2020 diff hist +3‎ m Forensic firearm examination ‎ →‎Serial number recovery: Copyedit for grammar. Otherwise we have the risk of "manufactured into," which isn't quite right.
• 00:3200:32, 31 January 2020 diff hist −10‎ m Driving band ‎ →‎Variations: Correcting wikilink

30 January 2020

• 21:5521:55, 30 January 2020 diff hist +6‎ m Air brake (aeronautics) ‎ →‎History: Minor copyedit. I know they were all men for a long time, but let's go for the most neutral and encyclopedic tone here.

23 January 2020

• 18:5118:51, 23 January 2020 diff hist −4‎ m Backbencher ‎ Copyedit punctuation around "hinterbankler"
• 16:0316:03, 23 January 2020 diff hist −3‎ m Electronic cigarette ‎ →‎Construction: Copyedit: changed "the user" to "users" for number agreement.
• 16:0216:02, 23 January 2020 diff hist −1‎ m Electronic cigarette ‎ →‎Construction: Copyedit: corrected "wicking" to "wicking"

19 January 2020

• 04:1204:12, 19 January 2020 diff hist −59‎ m Quilling ‎ →‎Paper types: Correcting more capitalization
• 04:1104:11, 19 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ Quilling ‎ →‎History: Remove superfluous / incorrect capitalization

14 January 2020

• 15:4415:44, 14 January 2020 diff hist −14‎ Steve Alford (politician) ‎ Removing pejoratives. They may be true, but if so they need to be presented correctly, not simply inserted into his description.

13 January 2020

• 23:1523:15, 13 January 2020 diff hist −6‎ m Tecumseh ‎ Slightly tighter phrasing, especially since his mother is not referred to as "a Shawnee woman." In both cases, it's superfluous.
• 23:1123:11, 13 January 2020 diff hist 0‎ m Mark 13 torpedo ‎ →‎Wartime development: Copyedit. There's no need to have "attack on Pearl Harbor" capitalized.

11 January 2020

• 20:1320:13, 11 January 2020 diff hist +3‎ Kardashev scale ‎ →‎Observational evidence: Add relevant wikilink. Change "sphere" to "swarm," as a Dyson sphere would block *all* light. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

8 January 2020

• 23:2023:20, 8 January 2020 diff hist +601‎ Talk:Gloriavale Christian Community ‎ →‎Not a cult

28 December 2019

• 17:2217:22, 28 December 2019 diff hist −17‎ Foil Arms and Hog ‎ Rephrase for a little more crispness

26 December 2019

• 15:4215:42, 26 December 2019 diff hist +22‎ m Apollo command and service module ‎ Add relevant wikilink

20 December 2019

• 18:1618:16, 20 December 2019 diff hist +302‎ Talk:O. J. Simpson ‎ →‎Released from Prison: new section
• 18:1118:11, 20 December 2019 diff hist −11‎ O. J. Simpson ‎ →‎Other legal troubles: Tighten phrasing

17 December 2019

• 19:5919:59, 17 December 2019 diff hist +5‎ m Muhiyidin Moye ‎ →‎Activism: Correcting spelling and #ohwhynot adding relevant Wikilink

11 December 2019

• 02:1602:16, 11 December 2019 diff hist +16‎ m Atmospheric entry ‎ Add relevant wikilink. I was going to add a link to "nautical miles," but can't figure out how without screwing up the spiffy conversion tool.
• 00:5500:55, 11 December 2019 diff hist +413‎ Talk:Polyamory ‎ →‎History

10 December 2019

• 00:2100:21, 10 December 2019 diff hist +586‎ Talk:Window blind ‎ →‎Roman Blinds: new section
• 00:1700:17, 10 December 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Window blind ‎ →‎Overview of different blind types: Copyedit punctuation. Combine two sentences into one for a slightly less "choppy" read.
• 00:1200:12, 10 December 2019 diff hist −5‎ Roman shade ‎ →‎Styles: Remove superfluous capitalization. Slight tightening of phrasing.

29 November 2019

• 20:2220:22, 29 November 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Nail (fastener) ‎ →‎Hand wrought: Removing superfluous / incorrect hyphen, which also removes the need for a redirect.

24 November 2019

• 04:0404:04, 24 November 2019 diff hist +1‎ m Fear of Flying (novel) ‎ →‎{{anchor|Zipless fuck}}Summary: Tense consistency
• 04:0204:02, 24 November 2019 diff hist −444‎ Fear of Flying (novel) ‎ →‎{{anchor|Zipless fuck}}Summary: Remove original material. Was this copied from another source?
• 03:5903:59, 24 November 2019 diff hist −8‎ Fear of Flying (novel) ‎ →‎{{anchor|Zipless fuck}}Summary: Six is probably not "many," particularly out of 117. The "naturally" is editorializing, not encyclopedic.

23 November 2019

• 00:3000:30, 23 November 2019 diff hist +83‎ Tecumseh ‎ →‎Art and other media: Adding relevant detail
• 00:2900:29, 23 November 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Alvin Journeyman ‎ →‎Synopsis: Copyedit: correcting capitalization of "Rule" to "rule."
• 00:2400:24, 23 November 2019 diff hist −1‎ Tecumseh ‎ Better than "Americans," which might imply legitimacy to those trying to settle in Native American territory

15 November 2019

• 18:4018:40, 15 November 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Bail ‎ →‎India: Remove duplicate quotation marks before the phrase "Personal liberty"

14 November 2019

• 23:4123:41, 14 November 2019 diff hist +397‎ Talk:Polyamory ‎ →‎History
• 23:1423:14, 14 November 2019 diff hist +920‎ Amherst, Massachusetts ‎ Yes, it can be pronounced with the "h," just as "nuclear" can be pronounced "nook-yew-ler" but that doesn't make it correct. Pronouncing the "h" marks the speaker as a non-native. There was a long discussion about this, still visible in the :talk: section.
• 23:0223:02, 14 November 2019 diff hist +301‎ Talk:Slide (baseball) ‎ →‎History?: new section

6 November 2019

• 20:5020:50, 6 November 2019 diff hist +4‎ m Grumman F-14 Tomcat ‎ →‎Projected variants: Add relevant wikilink "thrust vectoring"

1 November 2019

• 08:2208:22, 1 November 2019 diff hist 0‎ Britt Ekland ‎ →‎Relationships and family: Grammar correction. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22 October 2019

• 00:5900:59, 22 October 2019 diff hist +465‎ Talk:Pixie Lott discography ‎ →‎Goodness Gracious Me: new section

18 October 2019

• 17:2417:24, 18 October 2019 diff hist −65‎ Anish Kapoor ‎ →‎Controversies: Rework this paragraph for clarity
• 17:1917:19, 18 October 2019 diff hist −13‎ m Temenos (Kapoor) ‎ →‎Other structures: Two "howevers" in a row is a bit awkward. Combined two sentences.

3 October 2019

• 03:4203:42, 3 October 2019 diff hist −2‎ m Ronda Rousey ‎ →‎Relationships: Minor copyedit; "stepmother" should not be capitalized, and does not need the article before it
• 01:5501:55, 3 October 2019 diff hist +36‎ User:Septegram/notes ‎ →‎To Do
• 01:4001:40, 3 October 2019 diff hist +17‎ User:Septegram/notes ‎ →‎To Do
• 01:3301:33, 3 October 2019 diff hist +74‎ User:Septegram/notes ‎ →‎To Do

2 October 2019

• 17:4717:47, 2 October 2019 diff hist +19‎ Warlock ‎ It was largely used towards women historically (although looking at the Wikipedia article on people executed for witchcraft shows at least a dozen men), but latterly is recognized as not being restricted by gender.

1 October 2019

• 20:1620:16, 1 October 2019 diff hist −100‎ Blinkist ‎ More encyclopedic tone

28 September 2019

• 02:5402:54, 28 September 2019 diff hist +13‎ Margin Call ‎ →‎External links: This link leads to something weird; definitely not the movie's page.

23 September 2019

• 17:2617:26, 23 September 2019 diff hist −9‎ Taxis of the United Kingdom ‎ →‎Types of cab: Remove implication that other kinds of transportation do not provide courteous service. It might be true, but we'd want a source.
• 16:2216:22, 23 September 2019 diff hist −6‎ m Vivat ribbons ‎ I was going to correct "thousands" to "thousand," but realized it made better sense to just use digits

20 September 2019

• 14:2314:23, 20 September 2019 diff hist +8‎ m Old fashioned (cocktail) ‎ Avoiding redirect

13 September 2019

• 05:0705:07, 13 September 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Operation Carthage ‎ Cleaner word order
• 04:5304:53, 13 September 2019 diff hist +9‎ m Talk:The Dagda ‎ Indentation
• 04:4504:45, 13 September 2019 diff hist +543‎ Talk:The Dagda ‎ →‎His Harp: new section

6 September 2019

• 23:3923:39, 6 September 2019 diff hist −12‎ m Evidence packaging ‎ Cleaning up a huge pile of excess capitalization and double-spacing. A typo and a couple of minor changes for grammar / readability.
• 23:1323:13, 6 September 2019 diff hist −2‎ Medal of Honor ‎ →‎Recipients: She's the only woman *to *date* awarded the honor, and so automatically the first. Given women's increasing rôles in combat, it's inevitable there will be others.

5 September 2019

• 22:5722:57, 5 September 2019 diff hist +7‎ The Emperor's Club ‎ →‎Plot: I haven't seen the film, but from the plot summary I can't imagine Hundert has a helicopter. Far more likely Sedgewick does.

4 September 2019

• 16:2416:24, 4 September 2019 diff hist −52‎ Dark Hollow (novel) ‎ →‎Plot summary: Tidying up some phrasing. Remove superfluous double-spaces between sentences.
• 15:5615:56, 4 September 2019 diff hist +140‎ Devil Anse Hatfield ‎ →‎In popular culture

29 August 2019

• 20:5520:55, 29 August 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Silva Method ‎ →‎See also: Correct capitalization for "visualization"

28 August 2019

• 18:1818:18, 28 August 2019 diff hist +1‎ m USBKill ‎ Not sure "installment" is a real word in this context.

23 August 2019

• 21:4921:49, 23 August 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Heptagram ‎ →‎Religious and occult symbolism: Blue Star uses this spelling, deriving from the Latin "septem" : seven.

22 August 2019

• 15:1415:14, 22 August 2019 diff hist +506‎ Talk:Ynglism ‎ →‎Terminology: new section
• 15:0515:05, 22 August 2019 diff hist +2‎ Ynglism ‎ I'm going to assume the original writer's first language was not English, because "umbegoing" is not, as far as I'm aware, a word in English. Replaced with "surrounding."
• 14:4514:45, 22 August 2019 diff hist −18‎ Modern paganism ‎ →‎Reappropriation of "paganism": Removed "superstition," as that term is a pejorative, often applied to the beliefs of "any religion that doesn't look a lot like mine." Tidied up the sentence a bit.
• 14:3314:33, 22 August 2019 diff hist +1‎ m IMacros ‎ →‎Features: Add comma to correctly lay out the parenthetical statement "with a few minor exceptions."

21 August 2019

• 21:5121:51, 21 August 2019 diff hist +1‎ m Bumper (car) ‎ Rework commas to better set off the parenthetical "more recently."

20 August 2019

• 00:5400:54, 20 August 2019 diff hist +4‎ m White Nights (1985 film) ‎ →‎Production: Add wikilink

12 August 2019

• 14:2414:24, 12 August 2019 diff hist +1‎ Powered paragliding ‎ Rephrase to remove his/their/whatever issue.

8 August 2019

• 22:3422:34, 8 August 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Federal Assault Weapons Ban ‎ →‎Violence: Ordering items chronologically, because why the %$^&* were they not already?
• 17:3217:32, 8 August 2019 diff hist −3‎ Loftstrom Loop ‎ Correcting redirect current Tag: Redirect target changed

7 August 2019

• 14:3314:33, 7 August 2019 diff hist +959‎ Talk:Lea Rosh ‎ →‎Sentence Fragment: new section

6 August 2019

• 22:1122:11, 6 August 2019 diff hist +5‎ Powered paragliding ‎ →‎World records: Changing to last names for consistency and slightly more encyclopedic tone

31 July 2019

• 14:3314:33, 31 July 2019 diff hist −25‎ Major general (United States) ‎ Remove superfluous/incorrect hyphens. Slight rework of one sentence for brevity and one for clarity.

26 July 2019

• 14:5714:57, 26 July 2019 diff hist −1‎ Bombsight ‎ →‎Bombsight concepts: Having "so" twice in one sentence feels a little clumsy. Still a bit of a run-on sentence, but a little better, I think.

25 July 2019

• 23:1323:13, 25 July 2019 diff hist +20‎ Bell Rocket Belt ‎ →‎Testing: Making the verbiage slightly less choppy.
• 23:1223:12, 25 July 2019 diff hist +23‎ m Jet pack ‎ →‎In fiction: Add relevant wikilinks--two links to "Bell Rocket Belt." I know we usually only use one link to a given page per article, but in this case it's two very different references. Change phrasing from "bad guys" to "villains" to be slightly more encyclopedic.

18 July 2019

• 15:1915:19, 18 July 2019 diff hist +16‎ Rebecca Schaeffer ‎ →‎Aftermath: Change phrasing to be a little smoother

9 July 2019

• 14:3414:34, 9 July 2019 diff hist +651‎ Talk:Lachlan McIntosh ‎ →‎Duel Aftermath: new section
• 14:3314:33, 9 July 2019 diff hist +650‎ Talk:Button Gwinnett ‎ →‎Duel Aftermath: new section

27 June 2019

• 16:4516:45, 27 June 2019 diff hist −14‎ m Geogrid ‎ Changing link to go directly to main article

26 June 2019

• 15:2515:25, 26 June 2019 diff hist +1‎ m Perforated eardrum ‎ Slightly more encyclopedic phrasing
• 15:2015:20, 26 June 2019 diff hist +1‎ m Orlunda radio transmitter ‎ →‎Problems: Punctuation

24 June 2019

• 15:2015:20, 24 June 2019 diff hist +160‎ Telecomix ‎ →‎History
• 15:1515:15, 24 June 2019 diff hist +101‎ Blue Coat Systems ‎ →‎Use by repressive regimes: The phrasing is a little POV, but could be left in if there's an RS citation.

18 June 2019

• 18:5818:58, 18 June 2019 diff hist +20‎ m Duralumin ‎ →‎Aviation applications: Better wikilink

9 June 2019

• 04:1304:13, 9 June 2019 diff hist +28‎ Eric Harris and Dylan Klebold ‎ →‎Relationship: More encyclopedic phrasing

17 May 2019

• 18:2318:23, 17 May 2019 diff hist +1‎ m The Wicker Tree ‎ →‎Plot: The way it was written made it look like Delia is the laird, or is ambiguous at best.

16 May 2019

• 14:3814:38, 16 May 2019 diff hist −8‎ m Watchkeeping ‎ →‎Types of watches: Both of these links redirect back here

3 May 2019

• 22:2022:20, 3 May 2019 diff hist +417‎ Talk:Red flag (idiom) ‎ →‎Red Pennant: new section

30 April 2019

• 18:2618:26, 30 April 2019 diff hist −4‎ m Alderley Edge ‎ →‎The Wizard of the Edge: Link redirects to the wrong "Stormy Point;" https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Point_Rosee . Removing wikilink
• 18:1718:17, 30 April 2019 diff hist +394‎ Talk:Ludovic Kennedy ‎ →‎TV: new section

20 April 2019

• 13:2913:29, 20 April 2019 diff hist +8‎ m The Man from Earth ‎ →‎Plot: "Buddha" is a title, not a name. Siddhartha Gautama was his name.

16 April 2019

• 18:0018:00, 16 April 2019 diff hist −9‎ Assassin's Creed ‎ Original wording "Freedom of exploration is given to the player the historical settings to finish main and side quests" was not really a grammatical sentence. Reworked for clarity. I'm not an AC player, so I hope my remarks reflect reality.

9 April 2019

• 18:1818:18, 9 April 2019 diff hist +22‎ Sonar ‎ →‎Passive sonar: Expand slightly, adding relevant terminology
• 16:4216:42, 9 April 2019 diff hist +536‎ Tannerite ‎ →‎Notable incidents

3 April 2019

• 22:3022:30, 3 April 2019 diff hist −2‎ m Heptagram ‎ →‎Religious and occult symbolism: "Early" sounds a little more neutral than "ancient."

28 March 2019

• 16:4616:46, 28 March 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Posillipo ‎ →‎Seiano tunnel: Slightly less effusive tone

11 March 2019

• 18:4718:47, 11 March 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Raven Grimassi ‎ →‎Wicca: Remove superfluous space before the period

10 March 2019

• 11:1211:12, 10 March 2019 diff hist +3‎ Deep borehole disposal ‎ Replace gender-specific pronoun with more universal term. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 February 2019

• 06:0006:00, 14 February 2019 diff hist −1‎ m Stormbreaker (film) ‎ →‎Critical response: Copyedit typo "believabiltity"

23 January 2019

• 02:0402:04, 23 January 2019 diff hist +5‎ DAK Industries ‎ →‎Founding: More encyclopedic tone

8 January 2019

• 15:2315:23, 8 January 2019 diff hist −16‎ Rubia tinctorum ‎ →‎Uses: Remove "the" before Professor Leonhardi's name. Rework sentence slightly to remove two "which"s in a row; not *bad* language use, but a little awkward.

7 January 2019

• 22:5922:59, 7 January 2019 diff hist 0‎ m Philadelphia Experiment II ‎ →‎Plot: Correct capitalization

27 December 2018

• 16:3116:31, 27 December 2018 diff hist 0‎ m Terry stop ‎ US English punctuation convention is to have the period, comma, etc. within the quote marks.

20 December 2018

• 18:2918:29, 20 December 2018 diff hist −153‎ RespOrg ‎ Remove promotional material.

6 December 2018

• 00:1000:10, 6 December 2018 diff hist −2‎ m The Noah's Ark Principle ‎ →‎Plot summary: Minor copyedits; capitalization, neutral POV, etc.

3 December 2018

• 22:3922:39, 3 December 2018 diff hist +1‎ m Speech-generating device ‎ →‎History: Number / grammar

28 November 2018

• 18:3618:36, 28 November 2018 diff hist +2‎ m Terry stop ‎ →‎Pretextual stops: Copyedit for grammar

19 November 2018

• 00:1800:18, 19 November 2018 diff hist 0‎ m Silva Method ‎ →‎See also: Capitalize for consistency. Alphabetize because I'm an anal-retentive type.