Talk:Ina Kaplan

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Created by Lee Vilenski (talk). Self-nominated at 16:03, 3 July 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article meets DYK requirements, QPQ done, no close paraphrasing found. There's one unsourced statement (about her professionally playing for a team). All three hooks are interesting (I personally prefer either of the hooks about her being pregnant), but it seems there's a malformed reference in the article right now. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:03, 5 July 2019 (UTC)
  • I've fixed the sourcing, and added the source for her team - it's all mentioned in a very long interview with her. Hope that's enough info. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 06:17, 5 July 2019 (UTC)
Thanks. However, the phrasing for the sentence "Despite playing in the 1. Bundesliga, Kaplan was pregnant in 2014, and continued to play, and is still playing in the league in 2019." is a bit weird. Can this be fixed? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:55, 5 July 2019 (UTC)
I agree. I've done a bit of cleanup on that phrasing. Hope that is suitable. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 13:56, 5 July 2019 (UTC)
I meant the phrasing was a bit off. Wouldn't wording something like "Kaplan competed in so-and-so while pregnant"? or text to that effect work better? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:30, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
Oh, I see. Yes, that makes much more sense. I've updated the article. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 08:20, 6 July 2019 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg Thanks, this should be good to go now. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 09:59, 6 July 2019 (UTC)