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* “[[September 11]], 2017, will be the 16th anniversary of the evil attacks on four planes, the [[World Trade Center]], and the Pentagon, but did you know that for every single person killed on that truly awful day, over 200 people have since been killed on America’s roads? Yes, a total of almost two-thirds of a million people slaughtered in U.S. highway crashes, plus around 40 million injured, in just 16 years. And almost all Americans, including supposedly responsible politicians, completely ignore this hideous and unnecessary travesty because what?” [[Eddie Wren]], [[Advanced Drivers of North America]], Inc. — July 13, 2017. <ref>http://www.advanceddrivers.com/2017/07/13/comparing-the-evil-911-attack-to-u-s-road-safety-is-awful/</ref>. |
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Now possibly 6 people are dead according to CNN. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 20:21, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Radio reports are saying that the assailant had a BB gun, not a firearm. ☆ Bri (talk) 21:13, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
Suggesting title to be changed to '2017 Manhattan attack' or '2017 New York City attack'
Per WP:NOTABILITY, media and sources refer to incident as 'New York attack' or 'Manhattan attack'.JBergsma1 (talk) 21:09, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Yeah I agree, we need a familiar title that is being used as the WP:COMMONNAME. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 21:06, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Yes I ment WP:COMMONNAME. My bad.JBergsma1 (talk) 21:09, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Why not name it "2017 New York City Truck Attack"? 173.54.215.179 (talk) 21:16, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support move to "2017 New York City truck attack" (note caps). West Side Highway is simply too parochial. I do see the need to disambigulate from the "2017 Times Square car crash", however, unlike Times Square, no one outside the metor region has a clue what the West Side Highway is. Plus this a truck attack, and that was a car crash.E.M.Gregory (talk) 21:39, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I think the new name isn't fitting, as the "west side highway" is only familiar with new yorkers. 173.54.215.179 (talk) 21:38, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I agree that 'West Side Highway' is too parochial. However, 'New York' may not be specific enough. I hate to add another suggestion into the mix, but what about using the phrase 'Lower Manhattan'?Avilan01 (talk) 21:46, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- How about '2017 Lower Manhattan Truck Attack'? 173.54.215.179 (talk) 21:50, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Yeah I think that works well. It's specific without being overly so. The unfortunate reality is that there have been many terrorist attacks in New York and there will probably be more. If we were to distinguish each one by just the year, things could get confusing in the future. Avilan01 (talk) 22:34, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I agree, but think it should be fine for now. If future attacks make a distinction necessary, then we can also add "Halloween" to the name to distinguish this one. Jade Phoenix Pence (talk) 22:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)Jade Phoenix Pence
- Assuming (knock on wood) there aren't any more attacks this year in Manhattan, the title could use Manhattan. However, Lower Manhattan works too, and in my opinion, better, due to its specificity. Or call it the 2017 Halloween (truck) attack. I'm also kind of surprised the West Side Highway isn't that well known... I guess all those Law & Order reruns have biased me... Paris1127 (talk) 23:20, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- The 2017 Times Square car crash was also an attack in Manhattan this year, so we need to rename this article to October 2017 New York City attack. Jim Michael (talk) 01:26, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Bold move - I've moved the article to 2017 Lower Manhattan attack as both of the proposed titles are ambiguous and confusing, as either could accurately refer to the 2017 Times Square car crash. A title with "West Side Highway" is also undesirable, as that was only the site of a portion of the incident. Referring to it as Lower Manhattan is more precise, and accurate to locals and outsiders. It's important not to depend too much on news headlines for direction on this naming, as we are writing an encyclopedia where this article has to stand among all the other topics in the historical record. A news operation writing headlines for an event today does not take naming for posterity into account, like we do. So an event in May (Times Square car attack) may not, and usually does not, play into their headline writing process. (I lived in Manhattan for many years, biked through that area many times and have edited scores of news stories about NYC and Manhattan for more than a decade, so I'm quite familiar with this area and topic.) -- Fuzheado | Talk 14:28, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Map
Wondering if a map displaying just Lower Manhattan would be better? ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:32, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I created this, would it be good? https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Lower_Manhattan_Terror_Attack_2017.jpg 173.54.215.179 (talk) 21:34, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
Is this map good?
I made a map, should we use it? https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Lower_Manhattan_Terror_Attack_2017.jpg 173.54.215.179 (talk) 21:34, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- It's good, but that map only shows where the pickup ended up, at West and Chambers. The attack began farther north, at Houston and West. Here's the New York Times's graphic. Paris1127 (talk) 23:30, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I could see a map like this used in the "Attack" section, but not the infobox. ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:09, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
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The result of the move request was: (non-admin closure) page moved already. Discussion can be continued below, but this is no longer a RM because the page has been moved. Disclosure: I opposed this title. epicgenius (talk) 01:04, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
2017 West Side Highway attack → 2017 New York City attack – Evidently there's a bit of disagreement on the name of the article. I think it's best we gain a consensus on this. Which name would be more appropriate for the article? – PhilipTerryGraham (talk · contribs · count) 21:38, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose proposed title; considering support for any other title. To distinguish with 2017 Times Square car crash, which some people initially called an attack. epicgenius (talk) 21:40, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support West Side Highway is simply too parochial. I do see the need to disambigulate from the "2017 Times Square car crash", however, unlike Times Square, no one outside the metor region has a clue what the West Side Highway is. Plus this a truck attack, and that was a car crash.E.M.Gregory (talk) 21:42, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- But do Note suggestions further up the page to move to 2017 Lower Manhattan truck attack, or to 2017 New York City truck attack, both of which which would also work.E.M.Gregory (talk) 21:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support: I think that the name should be this because the "west side highway" could be confusing for people not familiar with New York. Maybe instead mention the west side highway in the article. Also add in the word truck. "2017 New York City truck attack" 173.54.215.179 (talk) 21:47, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- How about 2017 Lower Manhattan attack - since the Times Square incident was also in Manhattan? --regentspark (comment) 21:52, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Too specific. Abductive (reasoning) 21:54, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I would prefer something ending with "....vehicle ramming attack". Abductive (reasoning) 21:54, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose: support 2017 Lower Manhattan attack instead (we both suggested this at the same time, but I got an edit conflict!) Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 21:54, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support: '2017 New York City attack' is a more notable title per WP:COMMONNAME.JBergsma1 (talk) 21:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose both the current title (because the West Side Highway isn't known to the large majority of people) and the proposed one (due to this not being the only notable attack in NYC this year). October 2017 New York City attack would be better. Jim Michael (talk) 21:58, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support change of title: I think 2017 New York attack is too general though. 2017 Lower Manhattan attack is the most optimal. I am particularly against the current 2017 West Side Highway attack. Our article identifies the location as "West Street" and also talks about the Lower Manhattan area. Our editors opting for the "West Side Highway" is to say the least puzzling if not questionable. From my limited knowledge of highways, I don't think highways as such have pedestrian sidewalks... But the incident happened on a pedestrian track. What makes the notion of a so-called "West Side Highway" even more confusing if not altogether counter-productive is that our article doesn't mention this highway even once. So why use it so mysteriously in the title!!! werldwayd (talk) 22:14, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- West Street is where the West Side Highway used to be, before they dismantled the highway (literally, it was largely on stilts) and made it into a street connecting with the res of the Manhattan street grid. And please don't go to Madison Square if you have tickets to a game at Madison Square Garden. New Yorkers are a traditional, hidebound, quaintly provincial folk who speak a language unintelligible ot other Anglophones.E.M.Gregory (talk) 22:35, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- That is the West Side Elevated Highway. West Street, 11th Avenue between 14th and 22nd Streets, and 12th Avenue are part of the West Side Highway that most New Yorkers use to refer to the boulevard that New York State Route 9A runs along below 57th Street. "Highway" is not wrong. Source: am a New Yorker. epicgenius (talk) 23:11, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose more specific is better. Dont mind lower Manhattan (isnt original Manhattan in HollAnd?)Lihaas (talk) 22:31, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- No. The New York Manhattan is the original one (there is a newer one somewhere in Kansas). Easily recognizable. --regentspark (comment) 22:52, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support as an improvement to the current obscure title, which is certainly not the common name. Might I also take this opportunity to suggest that perhaps we incorporate Halloween into the title somehow? There is certainly a precedent to naming the holiday as part of the name of such an event when it occurs on major holidays. — Crumpled Fire • contribs • 22:36, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support "West Side Highway" is most certainly not a name people are familiar with. "Lower Manhattan" is more recognizable, and it's also notable that the vehicle used was a truck, and that this was a deliberate act, therefore I believe "2017 Lower Manhattan truck attack" would be the best title. Jade Phoenix Pence (talk) 22:48, 31 October 2017 (UTC)Jade Phoenix Pence
- Oppose - I support the name "2017 New York City truck attack" for those in the world who are not familiar with Manhattan. I also support "October 2017 New York City attack", or other similar title. --Jax 0677 (talk) 23:15, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose proposed title, would support title referring to the more-specific "Lower Manhattan" or even something about Halloween. Paris1127 (talk) 23:32, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Oppose Both of the proposed titles' violate at least two of the five statutes laid out in the article title policy which these arguments are supposed to be based on - Precision – The title unambiguously identifies the article's subject and distinguishes it from other subjects. as well as Consistency – The title is consistent with the pattern of similar articles' titles. Many of these patterns are listed (and linked) as topic-specific naming conventions on article titles, in the box above. In the situation of another terrorist attack happening this year in Manhattan or New York City, the proposed titles' would fail to distinguish this attack from others. Secondly, the proposed titles' lack consistency with those covering terrorist attacks as these article titles tend to include a specific location or a distinguishing detail of the incident. The proposed titles' fail to cover at least two of the characteristics in a solid article title. I believe that 2017 West Side Highway attack fits the description of an adequate title; if not to it's improvement include "Vehicle" or a sweeping change of title to include the fact that the attack was indeed a Vehicle-ramming attack Jr xander 02:56, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Support - Who is going to recognize the name West Side Highway? We should be WP:PRECISE here. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 00:00, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
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Further discussion on title please
I agree that "New York City" is better than previous, but I think we should definitely add "Truck" and maybe "Halloween" or "October" for easier identification, because of the previous Times Square event. Readers may not be familiar with our geography, so we need something to provide readers with quick recognition. 2017 New York City Halloween truck attack works for me. Comments? Tvoz/talk 02:06, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Good except for the "Halloween" part. It is confusing. If anything, we'd say October 2017...truck attack. epicgenius (talk) 02:09, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Yeah, actually I agree - today it seems to work but in the future the Halloween part becomes irrelevant. October works better. I do think the truck part is important - and is more parallel to 2017 Times Square car crash. 2017 New York City attack is too vague - unfortunately we've had many attacks of one kind or another - only one truck attack, I hope.Tvoz/talk 02:56, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- October should be added to the title. Unless there's another notable incident in the next 25 minutes or so, there will not be another October 2017 attack in New York City to write an article about, so the article title October 2017 New York City attack should remain unique. Funcrunch (talk) 03:34, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I support all of the above (within this subsection). --Jeremyb (talk) 05:29, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- NB: I did a bold move, with explanation here: #Suggesting_title_to_be_changed_to_.272017_Manhattan_attack.27_or_.272017_New_York_City_attack.27 -- Fuzheado | Talk 15:27, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
2017 Manhattan attack
"2017 Manhattan attack" should also re-direct to this page. PlanetDeadwing (talk) 21:46, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support the redirect, this is what I looked up to get to this page. 173.54.215.179 (talk) 21:49, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Created Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 21:55, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
"See also" link: Terrorism in the United States
Since there's already disagreement, should Terrorism in the United States be linked in the "See also" section? ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:54, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I already removed it. Abductive (reasoning) 21:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I see the link now appears in the infobox, which works for me. ---Another Believer (Talk) 21:57, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support As this incident is already being treated as a terrorist attack by the FBI.JBergsma1 (talk) 21:59, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support the addition because Mayor Bill de Blasio referred to it himself as “an act of terror”. ToxicOJ (talk) 22:06, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support As per the Governor, the Mayor and the FBI.E.M.Gregory (talk)
- Support per above Governor, the Mayor and the FBI and all major newspapers call it a terror attack.Pharaoh of the Wizards (talk) 03:59, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
"See also" link: Vehicle-ramming attacks
Should Vehicle-ramming attack be linked in the "ssSee also" section? E.M.Gregory (talk) 00:48, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Support as per fact (irrespective of motivation) and because it is usual on pages about Vehicle-ramming attack.E.M.Gregory (talk) 00:48, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Do we need both of the "Lower Manhattan" and "Tribeca" categories?
Isn't the Lower Manhattan category unnecessary if we are using the Tribeca category? ---Another Believer (Talk) 22:15, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- I see it's already removed. epicgenius (talk) 23:11, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Great!, I'll mark this section as resolved. ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:19, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
"List of terrorist incidents in New York City" or "Terrorism in New York City"
Given Category:Terrorist incidents in New York City, should we create List of terrorist incidents in New York City, or even Terrorism in New York City? ---Another Believer (Talk) 22:17, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support That seems reasonable to me. There definitely seems to be enough instances to create one. ToxicOJ (talk) 22:23, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Support We have a large number of solid articles, going back many years. Alas.E.M.Gregory (talk) 22:28, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
Update: User:PhilipTerryGraham has created List of terrorist incidents in New York City. Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 23:20, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
Truck Image
Can I upload an image onto the article of the actual truck used that I retrieved from a news source’s website? ToxicOJ (talk) 22:36, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- You need to find out the licensing for the image first. In many cases, it won’t have the proper licensing to be used on Wikipedia. If anyone on Wikimedia uploads their own work or a public domain/fair use image, wel can use it. Codyorb (talk) 22:58, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- @ToxicOJ: if you are the owner of the image's copyright, or that the image was released under a free license, you can upload it to Wikimedia Commons. If the image is copyrighted, and you have reason to believe that usage of the image will have greater encyclopedic value than the free-licensed image being currently used, you can upload the image locally to Wikipedia, in acordance with the Non-free use rationale guideline. :) – PhilipTerryGraham (talk · contribs · count) 23:00, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
On the same topic, do we want to keep the current image of the Home Depot Load 'N Go Flatbed Truck (not actually used during the incident)? ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:08, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Keep - While an image of the actual truck used would be preferable, this image displays the identical type of the vehicle used in the attack (down to the company from which it was rented). This provides useful context in giving readers the ability to see the exact type of vehicle used. A similar use of an image is at another ramming article, 2007 Glasgow Airport attack. If a photo of the actual vehicle used becomes available, it should replace this image. – Nurmsook! talk... 00:29, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- As I said in the earlier message, I have an image of the truck used in the attack from a news website, but I don’t know how to upload it without violating Wikipedia’s copyright rules. Does anyone know how to upload it directly to Wikipedia as the previous comment said?ToxicOJ (talk) 03:39, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Deadliest NYC terrorist attack since September 11, 2001
Many articles have listed this as the deadliest New York City terrorist attack since September 11, 2001, so it should probably be noted.Rlt152152 (talk) 23:50, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Why though? - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 23:56, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
- Seems reasonable if multiple inline citation can support this claim. ---Another Believer (Talk) 00:01, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- It sounds trivial to me - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 00:03, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I think it might be a good idea since I think people looking up this information may want to know that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rlt152152 (talk • contribs) 00:14, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is the first deadly terrorist attack in NYC since 9/11 that involved civilians being killed, according to BBC. The Chelsea attack last year didn't kill anyone, and neither did the Queens attack in 2014. epicgenius (talk) 02:11, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- It would need an As Of ... Seraphim System (talk) 02:21, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is the first deadly attack since 9/11. I don't think {{as of}} is needed. epicgenius (talk) 13:40, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- It would need an As Of ... Seraphim System (talk) 02:21, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- It sounds trivial to me - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 00:03, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- It's also the deadliest terrorist attack by an Uzbekistani in the history of the United States, perhaps we should include that. And what about the deadliest terror attack in the history of the human race committed with a rented Home Depot truck? We gotta emphasize how deadly, terrifying, and full of deadly terror this attack was. The actual figures just aren't impressive enough, so we should throw in a few meaningless comparisons. 2601:644:1:B7CB:A970:A762:9AF2:38D5 (talk) 03:40, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- While we're at it, why not include the fact that it is the deadliest bike lane attack in the U.S.? Yes, this and the above are both unconstructive comments. Feel free to remove them. epicgenius (talk) 13:40, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Or maybe how it is the deadliest attack ever in the U.S. for the month of November? Seriously I agree with you though, this is trivial info at best that isn't encyclopedic. If you guys want to include it then link an article through the "see also" section. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 13:52, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- While we're at it, why not include the fact that it is the deadliest bike lane attack in the U.S.? Yes, this and the above are both unconstructive comments. Feel free to remove them. epicgenius (talk) 13:40, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Injured
In attack section, we say "causing at least eight fatalities and fifteen injuries" whereas in the victims section, we say "Eight people were killed and more than 12 were injured in the incident". So which is it, 12 or 15? We should be consistent. werldwayd (talk) 02:24, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- 15. epicgenius (talk) 02:33, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I'll agree anyone editing the article, info box, attack, victims sections, should updt stats and cite sources. The attack was perpetrated 3:05 pm EDT 31 Oct 2017. It is now 8:08 am EDT 1 Nov 2017. Not even 24 hrs. It may actually be days before all injuries are reported by hospitals to authorities. -- Naaman Brown (talk) 12:10, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Category:ISIL terrorist incidents in the United States?
Is Category:ISIL terrorist incidents in the United States appropriate to add? ---Another Believer (Talk) 02:49, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
God is great
Does a slogan shouted by the perpetrator merit inclusion in the lead? This isn't a tabloid. 2601:644:1:B7CB:A970:A762:9AF2:38D5 (talk) 03:37, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Tabloid has zero/zilch/nothing/nada/null set to do with it. This is a facet of the crime, and nothing else.50.111.60.244 (talk) 04:11, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- How is it a "facet of the crime"? I think it can stay in the article, but it is somewhat prominent in the WP:LEDE. Whether it is a facet of anything has not been established. Seraphim System (talk) 04:43, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Shouting the Takbir is clearly relevant given this is covered by most, if not all, WP:RS. It should be in the body and in the lede.Icewhiz (talk) 06:02, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Allahu Akbar? If said, then I would say yes.Ramhorbronc (talk) 07:13, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- He is still alive so this is covered under WP:BLPCRIME - I don't think we should be adding statements about material facts or making a "case for terrorism" at least until it is clear what exactly he is going to be charged with (not sure why it is taking so long, or even if the charges will be Federal). I think editors are kind of getting ahead of things here. Seraphim System (talk) 07:31, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Any updates on who his attorney is? Seraphim System (talk) 07:36, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- There is no consensus that the perpetrator actually uttered these specific words himself. The media in the initial stages of the attack speculated about his identity wanting to point out he was a Muslim. In such instances, it is habitual to include assertions as if he used the term "Allah Akbar". It is a common ploy to include it to point out the religious affiliation and convictions of the attacker. But did he actually utter these words? That's not clear. And now we have it enshrined in our intro as a given fact. Congratulations to us for taking part in this ploy as sensationalism instead of opting for a more cautious approach. werldwayd (talk) 15:57, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Allahu Akbar? If said, then I would say yes.Ramhorbronc (talk) 07:13, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Page Protection
I think, to protect the article from vandalism (especially due to the nature of the perpetrator being linked to IS, which may inspire racist vandal attacks), the page should be protected so that all edits have to be reviewed before getting published. This is an effective way of still letting people edit, but stopping the edits that can do damage (vandalism, pageblanking, etc). AllyGebies (talk) 05:22, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Articles are not pre-emptively protected. If this article does attract a significant amount of vandalism (which is not unlikely) then at that point it should be reported to WP:RFPP. Funcrunch (talk) 06:13, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
The section contained in this folder, while adressing NPOV, is mostly about a topic that is only tangentially related to the article. Please stay on topic.--EdgarCabreraFariña (talk) 12:33, 1 November 2017 (UTC) |
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Neutrality of point of view and Trump.According to the Telegraph, some american newspapers consider that cyclists (and pedestrians) killed by motorized vehicle drivers are the result of what they call a ”cowardly attack”, when this is not reported in this wikipedia article[1]. Being politically correct is fine, but not for this! According to the Guardian, Trump twitted ”I have just ordered Homeland Security to step up our already Extreme Vetting Program. Being politically correct is fine, but not for this!”[2]. As this has been reported by an international newspaper (notoriety criteria) I assume it should also be reported in this article (NPOV criteria). And one would agree with Trump: Being politically correct is fine, but not for cyclists killed by motorized vehicle drivers: too many cyclists (and pedestrians) have been killed for too many decades. Britain’s roads are many times more deadly than terrorism[3]. (And to be fair, some other countries’ roads are many times more deadly than Britain’s roads) With traffic comes air pollution that kills even more people: 12,000 air pollution deaths a year are directly attributable to road transport. As motor manufacturers have cheated on emissions tests, cars may bear far more of the pollution blame. Pedestrian deaths rose by 12% last year, with serious injuries to cyclists up by 8%[3]. About 100 cyclists die as a result of collisions or coming off their bikes on the roads in Great Britain each year. And more than 3,000 are seriously injured[4] (Facts are not limited to UK while those numbers are: each countries its statistics) Other countries other statistics: In 2016, in NYC citywide, there was 10775 pedestrian injuries, 148 pedestrian kills, 4592 bicyclist injuries 18 bicyclist kills due to Motor Vehicle drivers[5]. This is possibly too much unless if accepted? In the USA, in 2015, 5,376 pedestrians and 818 bicyclists were killed in crashes with motor vehicles (National Highway Traffic Safety Administration, Traffic Safety Facts). These two modes accounted for 17.7 percent of the 35,092 total U.S. fatalities that year[6]. This is also possibly too much unless if accepted? The cyclists (and pedestrians) are yet the victims of the motorized vehicle drivers with PM 2.5[7] which kills slowly (say in months), they are also victim of the unsafe driving which kills immediately (that is in more or less than 30 days in KSI). This makes the cyclists use cameras[8]. This is not how things should work: Motor vehicle drivers should have a safety education program which teach them how to drive safely. An Extreme Vetting Program should ensure that only those who have the skills to drive safely can access a driving license and a motorized vehicle. If this was working properly cyclists (and pedestrians) would not been killed in a so impressive quantity, and people would not need camera to report such issues. An Extreme Vetting Program should also ensure that those safety skills are periodically monitored. But it is not enough, because motorists are both aggressive and violent[9]. Something should be done for motorists not being neither aggressive nor violent. Some advertising blame cyclists for being in a bad position when a HGV lorry truck turn in a junction[10]. Being politically correct is fine, but not for this! Hope some people with influence or responsibility, some people with capacity, push for improving the picture, in this wikipedia article or in real life, taking into account NPOV & safety consideration. Just a quotation to close this critic of the wikipedia article: ”Being politically correct is fine, but not for this!”[2]. Donald Trump, 1 November 2017 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.193.104.227 (talk) 10:23, 1 November 2017 (UTC) References
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"Special needs" bus?
In the Attack section: "The driver then collided his truck with a school bus that transports students with special needs" Is there a source for "special needs"? None of the references in the paragraph describe it as anything other than a school bus. –dlthewave ☎ 12:34, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- The bus serves two schools in Lower Manhattan and transports students with special needs. WWGB (talk) 13:02, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
See also section
This section seems too long, maybe that it would be better to link to a few list-class articles? Thanks, —PaleoNeonate – 13:13, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- The "Other locations" part could be replaced with a link to Vehicle-ramming attack, or rather the list on that page. --ChlorideCull (talk) 13:19, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I've boldy replaced the list with wikilinks to lists. Galobtter (talk) 13:24, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- This seems to be resolved, so I am marking the section as such. ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:04, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Post-1932 politics?
I understand the need for protection but I don't feel like this event fits into the category of politics (arbcom notice up top). Can someone explain the connection? - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 13:39, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Move to 2017 Lower Manhattan attack done without consensus
Although I also opt for 2017 Lower Manhattan attack, this move has been done without consensus by User:Fuzheado. It is not the time for "bold moves" after all the discussion we had in which it was agreed the title should be 2017 New York attack. See above decision on adopting the title "2017 New York City attack". Discussion found in section "Requested move 31 October 2017" on this very same page. The decision came after a very long discussion involving many Wikipedia editors. I suggest going back to the original agreed title 2017 New York City attack and discussing move to 2017 Lower Manhattan attack. If suggested move finds support, then and only then move it. werldwayd (talk) 14:40, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I agree as this isn't a non controversial subject. The move was done in good faith but this is a big event followed by lots of people. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 14:42, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- If you note the closer comment on the move discussion, there actually was not consensus for the title "2017 New York City attack" either. The move discussion was closed because an editor moved the page to that title before a consensus was reached. Further discussion has continued in the section below. (In that discussion I suggested October 2017 New York City attack, FWIW.) Funcrunch (talk) 15:19, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Yes you are correct. But clearly 2017 New York City attack has the widest support for now. It doesn't warrant a "bold" move by a single editor to 2017 Lower Manhattan attack particularly after so much discussion from so many editors and the opinion of this one editor prevails over all the others measured collectively. I still demand reverting to original 2017 New York City attack title. werldwayd (talk) 15:33, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Hi all, sorry that I didn't see the second debate before responding to the first debate. However, I still stand by the bold move. I dove into this article today for the first time and immediately saw that the title was obviously problematic and ambiguous because of confusion with the Times Square attack in May. For a full explanation, my rationale is here: #Suggesting_title_to_be_changed_to_.272017_Manhattan_attack.27_or_.272017_New_York_City_attack.27. That said, I have looked at the requested move discussion (now green) and concur with @Funcrunch: - there was no consensus for moving it to 2017 New York City attack in the first place.
So independently, my move back to the Lower Manhattan attack restores the title before that bold move was made.I'm happy to discuss it more here in this section, but I think the Lower Manhattan moniker is the best, which is what you see in the Wikidata item for "location" and other sources. -- Fuzheado | Talk 15:38, 1 November 2017 (UTC)- I have no problem with the move here, I just hope this title sticks for a bit before it is moved again is all. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 15:49, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Reply - I believe that "New York City" is a more recognizable term than is "Manhattan", and should be somewhere in the title. I am thinking about starting a move review on the issue of which title should be used. --Jax 0677 (talk) 16:46, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I have no problem with the move here, I just hope this title sticks for a bit before it is moved again is all. - Knowledgekid87 (talk) 15:49, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Hi all, sorry that I didn't see the second debate before responding to the first debate. However, I still stand by the bold move. I dove into this article today for the first time and immediately saw that the title was obviously problematic and ambiguous because of confusion with the Times Square attack in May. For a full explanation, my rationale is here: #Suggesting_title_to_be_changed_to_.272017_Manhattan_attack.27_or_.272017_New_York_City_attack.27. That said, I have looked at the requested move discussion (now green) and concur with @Funcrunch: - there was no consensus for moving it to 2017 New York City attack in the first place.
- Yes you are correct. But clearly 2017 New York City attack has the widest support for now. It doesn't warrant a "bold" move by a single editor to 2017 Lower Manhattan attack particularly after so much discussion from so many editors and the opinion of this one editor prevails over all the others measured collectively. I still demand reverting to original 2017 New York City attack title. werldwayd (talk) 15:33, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Pier 40 image
Why does the article display an image of Pier 40 when the prose does not mention Pier 40? ---Another Believer (Talk) 14:51, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Use of the Pier 40 and also that of a "similar" truck (not the actual one) are both questionable. I suggest replacement by more relevant pictures. werldwayd (talk) 14:55, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I agree. I think both images should be removed. I'd remove the image of Pier 40, but would prefer to wait until others share their thoughts. ---Another Believer (Talk) 14:58, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I have now removed the Pier 40 photo as there is no evidence this was the actual place where the attack happened. The truck is more iffy for now and I opted to keep it giving time for inclusion of the actual truck in the coming hours, in which case the photo of this specific truck will merit deletion as well and replacement by a photo of the actual truck instead werldwayd (talk) 16:03, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- Pier 40 is at Houston Street, where the truck entered the lane. epicgenius (talk) 16:33, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I have now removed the Pier 40 photo as there is no evidence this was the actual place where the attack happened. The truck is more iffy for now and I opted to keep it giving time for inclusion of the actual truck in the coming hours, in which case the photo of this specific truck will merit deletion as well and replacement by a photo of the actual truck instead werldwayd (talk) 16:03, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
- I agree. I think both images should be removed. I'd remove the image of Pier 40, but would prefer to wait until others share their thoughts. ---Another Believer (Talk) 14:58, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
Sayfullo Habibullaevich Saipov is probably written Сайфулло Хабибуллаевич Саипов in Cyrillic
For example this article. США: Выходец из Узбекистана Сайфулло Саипов совершил террористический акт в Нью-Йорке http://www.fergananews.com/news/27157
see also
Add boston bombing? Similiar background ofperps.Lihaas (talk) 16:14, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
see also: September 11 and americans
I assume there might be some room in the article to add this quote related to America, 11 september and the World Trade Center, might be in a see also section:
- “September 11, 2017, will be the 16th anniversary of the evil attacks on four planes, the World Trade Center, and the Pentagon, but did you know that for every single person killed on that truly awful day, over 200 people have since been killed on America’s roads? Yes, a total of almost two-thirds of a million people slaughtered in U.S. highway crashes, plus around 40 million injured, in just 16 years. And almost all Americans, including supposedly responsible politicians, completely ignore this hideous and unnecessary travesty because what?” Eddie Wren, Advanced Drivers of North America, Inc. — July 13, 2017. [1].
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