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Confirmed her dual citizenship and updated accordingly.
Since it seems most of the controversy here surrounds descent v. citizenship, I updated the page with a mainstream media reference to her Haitian citizenship[1] and a local media reference to the fact that she's the first Haitian citizen to win.[2]
This should resolve the Haitian citizen v. descendant debate that's been raging on here.
Eganist (talk) 00:16, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
- Apparently I'm unable to read. She's a DS of US and JP, not US and Haiti. Reverted my own change. Eganist (talk) 00:35, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
Naomi Osaka's whole name is in Hiragana.
Someone please fix it. Thank you. オ坂 なおみ This is the correct spelling. CTRLmyself (talk) 00:56, 29 July 2014 (UTC)
How can she be Japanese-American if her father is Haitian and her mother is Japanese?
168.243.226.20 (talk) 02:15, 30 August 2017 (UTC)
- Father studied in US. Herself raised in JP, USA. 178.132.29.134 (talk) 09:27, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
If her father is Haitian. It should be written as Haitian-Japanese. That's what it look like this morning. Why the sudden change?
I agree why the sudden change. This should be corrected or I think it will have an impact on wikipedia credibility.. Po joseph (talk) 23:15, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Saying that Osaka is "a Japanese tennis player who represents Japan" is plain silly! Even "a tennis player who represents Japan" is silly. Biographical articles on WP traditionally give the person's ethnicity/nationality/citizenship in the first sentence. Osaka has Japanese and Haitian ethnicity and is an American citizen. This is all in the article and it is all sourced. Therefore we should follow convention and call her a Japanese-Haitian-American tennis player in the first sentence. Scolaire (talk) 12:22, 7 April 2018 (UTC)
- I wholeheartedly disagree. As far as I can tell, WP articles list the "sporting nationality" of athletes, unless there's a mismatch - and if there is, it's generally fleshed out in a different section. For example, Federer's intro doesn't mention that he is of South African descent, nor Djokovic saying that he is of Montenegrin/Croat descent. Osaka is Japanese born, of Japanese descent, and represents Japan - there's no disjointment. And her ethnicity and residency are clarified in a later section. Your intro is way more convoluted than necessary.--Ortizesp (talk) 01:07, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- "American" was first added on 18 March. Since then there have been 88 intermediate revisions by 41 users. "Haitian" was first added in January 2015. Since then there have been 367 intermediate revisions by more than 100 users. Yours are the only edits to remove "Haitian" and "American". Nobody else finds it "convoluted". There is a clear consensus for keeping it. Please do not edit-war to restore your version until you establish a consensus for it here on the talk page. Scolaire (talk) 14:04, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- Refer to MOS:BLPLEAD - Context - "This will be the country of which the person is a citizen, national or permanent resident, ... Ethnicity, religion, or sexuality should generally not be in the lead unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous nationalities or the place of birth should not be mentioned in the lead unless they are relevant to the subject's notability." The only nationality relevant to Osaka as an athlete is Japan, ethnicity (Haitian) and residence (American) are secondary. They are both expanded in the personal life section. Secondly, I am not the only one to play around with her intro, you seem to be the one of the few restoring it. And third, there is a clear consensus for how these intros work, else we'd end up with Federer "the Swiss-German-Afrikaner tennis player", Novak Djokovic "the Serbian-Croatian-Montenegrin tennis player," or Ethan Ampadu "the Welsh-Irish-Ghanaian-English footballer". I have found a reference for keeping my format, if you can find opposing evidence, then you may dispute it or start a consensus yourself.--Ortizesp (talk) 18:05, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- I don't think the comparisons with Federer, Djokovic or Ampadu are good ones. It's not a question of "descent". Osaka has lived in the US since the age of three. She has US citizenship. She speaks English with an American accent. On the other hand, she has spent little time in Japan, and has only poor Japanese, so "born in Japan and plays for Japan, therefore Japanese" is not by any means a good summary of her nationality. She herself lays emphasis on all three of her nationalities, as can be seen in this interview (at 1:26). For BLPLEAD purposes, I would say that her multi-national background definitely is relevant to her notability. It is talked about in nearly all the news stories about her. Scolaire (talk) 15:55, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- Rather than go to WP:3O, I am pinging editors who have had a major input into this article, and who have edited it this year: Fyunck(click), GAThrawnIGF, Wolbo, Ytfc23, OVVL, NewYorkYankeesVersusNewYorkMets09281999, Xperiaray610, GeneM18, Ausmor627, Brentbaxter. What do you think the first sentence should say? Scolaire (talk) 15:55, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- Refer to MOS:BLPLEAD - Context - "This will be the country of which the person is a citizen, national or permanent resident, ... Ethnicity, religion, or sexuality should generally not be in the lead unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous nationalities or the place of birth should not be mentioned in the lead unless they are relevant to the subject's notability." The only nationality relevant to Osaka as an athlete is Japan, ethnicity (Haitian) and residence (American) are secondary. They are both expanded in the personal life section. Secondly, I am not the only one to play around with her intro, you seem to be the one of the few restoring it. And third, there is a clear consensus for how these intros work, else we'd end up with Federer "the Swiss-German-Afrikaner tennis player", Novak Djokovic "the Serbian-Croatian-Montenegrin tennis player," or Ethan Ampadu "the Welsh-Irish-Ghanaian-English footballer". I have found a reference for keeping my format, if you can find opposing evidence, then you may dispute it or start a consensus yourself.--Ortizesp (talk) 18:05, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- "American" was first added on 18 March. Since then there have been 88 intermediate revisions by 41 users. "Haitian" was first added in January 2015. Since then there have been 367 intermediate revisions by more than 100 users. Yours are the only edits to remove "Haitian" and "American". Nobody else finds it "convoluted". There is a clear consensus for keeping it. Please do not edit-war to restore your version until you establish a consensus for it here on the talk page. Scolaire (talk) 14:04, 8 April 2018 (UTC)
- My thoughts are this is like Maria Sharapova and it should be short and simple in the lead. Naomi Osaka is a Japanese professional tennis player. The main body can go into detail about her parentage, etc.. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:37, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- Garbiñe Muguruza is described as being Spanish-Venezualan. I suppose either Japanese-Haitian or just Japanese is acceptable. Ausmor627(click) (talk) 22:17, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- I only edit the ranking of the player. I leave the biographical details to the pros, so I won't be of much help. Sorry! GAThrawnIGF (talk) 22:48, 10 April 2018 (UTC)
- That was a somewhat underwhelming response. It does appear, though, that contributors to the talk page are not greatly in favour of Japanese-Haitian or Japanese-Haitian-American. At least we can point to this discussion if people change it in future. However, I still think "a Japanese player who plays for Japan" is silly. I am inclined to follow Ethan Ampadu, "a professional footballer who plays for English club Chelsea and the Welsh national team", and take "Japanese" out of the first sentence. Scolaire (talk) 13:34, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
Japanese expatriate sportspeople in the United States?
She is listed under the category "Japanese expatriate sportspeople in the United States". She has U.S. citizenship though so she's not an expatriate in the U.S. She should probably be removed from the category. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.51.115.45 (talk) 17:10, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
- Whether a person gains citizenship has no bearing on their listing as an expatriate of the former country. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:05, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
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> Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997)[4] is a Japanese professional tennis player. On July 23, 2018, Osaka reached her best singles ranking of world No. 17. She was the first Japanese woman to reach and win a final of a Grand Slam, defeating Serena Williams at the 2018 US Open.
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> Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997)[4] is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player. On July 23, 2018, Osaka reached her best singles ranking of world No. 17. She was the first Haitian and Japanese woman to reach and win a final of a Grand Slam, defeating Serena Williams at the 2018 US Open. Plgeorges (talk) 22:02, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done She is Japanese, period. She also has United States citizenship, but she lists herself and is registered as Japanese. Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:06, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
Last night on tv she herself indentified herself as Haitian so stop being a racist and leave it her bio!! TheReelBlackSheep (talk) 22:16, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- It already is in her bio... Where did you come from? Vivexdino (talk) 22:21, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Why Did This Article Change
I read this wiki article the day before the Us Open. It stated that she was Haitian-Japanese in the first paragraph. Now it only says that she is Japanese. Why would this information change?
Representing Haiti
Her father is Haitian and her mother Japanese. I sincerely feel that it should be said that she "Haitian - Japanese" and not just Japanese. I believe that both cultures are something to be proud about! Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by M&M.plt (talk • contribs) 22:17, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
- I'm sure they are something to be proud of, but she's registered in tennis as Japanese. In the early life section it already mentions her father is Haitian. Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:39, 8 September 2018 (UTC)
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Hi please correct the article on Naomi Osaka. It should state that she is a Haitian Japanese tennis player, this article does not include her Haitian ethnicity at the beginning of the article. Thank you. Dimes25 (talk) 01:24, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done: please establish a consensus for this alteration before using the
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template. See previous discussions further up the page. ‑‑ElHef (Meep?) 02:39, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Which nationality you are does not depend on which citizenship you have. Here she is talking about representing Haiti: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9NAuI3mn7Dc
- Washington Post (September 2018) quotes her: "Japanese culture? I love everything about it. . . . America, I live here. I train in Florida. . . . And Haiti, if you’ve ever met a Haitian person, they are really positive, and literally if you’re friends with them, then they will do anything for you. That’s something that is a really good trait, and I’m really happy that my grandparents and my dad’s side of the family is like that" (https://www.washingtonpost.com/sports/tennis/with-energy-of-a-new-yorker-japans-naomi-osaka-reaches-us-open-semifinals/2018/09/05/9e3e7034-b12e-11e8-9a6a-565d92a3585d_story.html?utm_term=.fbbf4843280b).
- So writing that she is just Japanese-American while neglecting Haitian is biased. This wikipedia article has a serious issue of balance and the lack of a WP:Neutral point of view ("All encyclopedic content on Wikipedia must be written from a neutral point of view (NPOV), which means representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, all of the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic. ") — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tennisexpertise (talk • contribs) 04:03, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Washington Post (September 8, 2018): "Osaka, who is of Haitian-Japanese descent and was raised in the United States but plays for Japan" (https://www.washingtonpost.com/sports/tennis/naomi-osaka-upsets-serena-williams-who-received-game-penalty-to-win-2018-us-open/2018/09/08/089e1df4-b39f-11e8-aed9-001309990777_story.html?utm_term=.526ad7dadf9b)
- Boston Globe (September 09, 2018): "The biggest issue for Williams on the scoreboard Saturday was that she was outplayed by a younger version of herself in Osaka, a 20-year-old of Haitian-Japanese ancestry who was raised in the United States but plays for Japan and who idolizes the 36-year-old American." (https://www.bostonglobe.com/sports/2018/09/08/serena-williams-pays-dearly-losing-open-championship-naomi-osaka/V0Ltaws8TNV7q6ctvfL7gI/story.html)
- Sky Sports (18/03/18): "The Haitian-Japanese had beaten Maria Sharapova and world No 1 Simona Halep this week" (http://www.skysports.com/tennis/news/12110/11295691/naomi-osaka-defeats-daria-kasatkina-to-win-wta-bnp-paribas-open-title-at-indian-wells)
- Tennis World USA (March 10, 2018): "It was a show for everyone when the 20-year-old Haitian/Japanese and the 30-year old Russian came together in their first time meeting." (https://www.tennisworldusa.org/tennis/news/Tennis_Stories/52663/the-naomi-osaka-victorymaria-sharapova-struggles-go-on/)
- Tennis.com (March 08, 2018): "The Haitian-Japanese star openly idolizes Williams." (http://www.tennis.com/pro-game/2018/03/maria-sharapova-naomi-osaka-indian-wells-bnp-paribas-open-2018/72586/)
- WTA Tennis: ""I feel honoured (that I'm compared to Williams)," the Haitian-Japanese said, with a smile." (http://www.wtatennis.com/news/daily-insider-who-next-li-na)
- --Tennisexpertise (talk) 04:51, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- W Magazine [an American fashion magazine published by Condé Nast](September 9, 2018): "Despite Naomi Osaka becoming the first Haitian-Japanese woman to win the U.S. Open championship yesterday, the mood in the tennis world was far from celebratory." (https://www.wmagazine.com/story/serena-williams-naomi-osaka-controversy-celebrities-twitter)
- Huffington Post (09/08/2018): "She's the first Haitian-Japanese player and first player representing Japan, male or female, ever to win a Grand Slam." (https://www.huffingtonpost.ca/2018/09/08/naomi-osaka-us-open-victory_a_23521230/?guccounter=1&guce_referrer_us=aHR0cHM6Ly93d3cuZ29vZ2xlLmNvbS8&guce_referrer_cs=5h2Mw9ypK-4l_fDos74XEA)
- Reuters (January 19, 2017): "While the obvious talent Haitian-Japanese Osaka showed on court indicates that more experience can only keep her on the rise from her current ranking of number 48 in the world, Konta is on a sharper trajectory." (https://www.reuters.com/article/us-tennis-open-konta-idUSKBN1530QS)
- The Guardian (9 Sep 2018): "You have only to watch the US Open press conference footage – highlighted by the director Ava DuVernay – when yet another journalist asked Osaka to explain her Haitian-Japanese heritage, to be reminded of how women of colour have to justify their existence in the sport. “OK, I feel like every single time …” says Osaka, wearily, before proceeding to relay the genealogical and geographical facts of her life again." (https://www.theguardian.com/sport/2018/sep/09/serena-williams-again-bears-brunt-double-standards-tennis)
- Eurosport (18/03/2018): "The unseeded Haitian-Japanese player became the youngest Indian Wells champion since Ana Ivanovic was victorious a decade ago." (https://www.eurosport.com/tennis/osaka-dominates-kasatkina-for-career-first-title_sto6682346/story.shtml)
- -- Tennisexpertise (talk) 18:52, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Considering we just had 3 brand new users M&M.plt, Dimes25, and now you, all asking the exact same thing makes me pause to wonder if we are dealing with three people or one. If it is the same person please be advised that Wikipedia frowns GREATLY on multiple accounts used in this manner. It is already mentioned that she is from a Haitian background. But she is of Japanese nationality with United States citizenship. Also please do not keep making new topics for the same thing. Other editors will find this topic and weigh in over the next week or so. Fyunck(click) (talk) 05:37, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I don't think it's useful to start throwing around insinuations of sockpuppetry just because more than one user happens to disagree with you. "Haitian-Japanese" was already in use in the first sentence in early March this year, and the sentence was edited back and forth many times during the Indian Wells tournament and in the weeks after. I opened a thread on it here on the talk page in April, but there wasn't much participation, despite the amount of changing going on in the article. So there is a "consensus" version but obviously a lot of people disagree with it, and now they are saying it on the talk page, with citations to back their version up. You need to take that on board, and maybe open an RfC. Scolaire (talk) 11:16, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- It makes me very nervous when it's 3 brand new accounts just created today, all demanding the same exact thing. My spider-sense goes off. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:03, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Fyunck(click): Nevertheless, assume good faith is a policy. It is natural for new users to want to edit an article related to a current event, especially when it is a question of ethnicity, something so significant that major news media have it in their headlines. Especially when the page is semi-protected – newbies obviously see that and think they ought to register. Accusations of sockpuppetry are not a valid argument and don't strengthen your case. Scolaire (talk) 19:04, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Actually I have shown good faith. I keep answering all the queries as if they are legit. But if you think I'm not going to mention suspicious things (which these are), then you will continue to be disappointed in some of my posts. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:24, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- And also the fact that the user automatically created a random user-page and is only interested in this article. Obviously doesn't strike me as a new user. Vivexdino (talk) 21:59, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Actually I have shown good faith. I keep answering all the queries as if they are legit. But if you think I'm not going to mention suspicious things (which these are), then you will continue to be disappointed in some of my posts. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:24, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Fyunck(click): Nevertheless, assume good faith is a policy. It is natural for new users to want to edit an article related to a current event, especially when it is a question of ethnicity, something so significant that major news media have it in their headlines. Especially when the page is semi-protected – newbies obviously see that and think they ought to register. Accusations of sockpuppetry are not a valid argument and don't strengthen your case. Scolaire (talk) 19:04, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- It makes me very nervous when it's 3 brand new accounts just created today, all demanding the same exact thing. My spider-sense goes off. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:03, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I don't think it's useful to start throwing around insinuations of sockpuppetry just because more than one user happens to disagree with you. "Haitian-Japanese" was already in use in the first sentence in early March this year, and the sentence was edited back and forth many times during the Indian Wells tournament and in the weeks after. I opened a thread on it here on the talk page in April, but there wasn't much participation, despite the amount of changing going on in the article. So there is a "consensus" version but obviously a lot of people disagree with it, and now they are saying it on the talk page, with citations to back their version up. You need to take that on board, and maybe open an RfC. Scolaire (talk) 11:16, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Considering we just had 3 brand new users M&M.plt, Dimes25, and now you, all asking the exact same thing makes me pause to wonder if we are dealing with three people or one. If it is the same person please be advised that Wikipedia frowns GREATLY on multiple accounts used in this manner. It is already mentioned that she is from a Haitian background. But she is of Japanese nationality with United States citizenship. Also please do not keep making new topics for the same thing. Other editors will find this topic and weigh in over the next week or so. Fyunck(click) (talk) 05:37, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Washington Post and Boston Globe use the most appropriate, concise and neutral introduction which includes all the necessary information and would please everyone, so using their style it would be: "Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a professional tennis player of Haitian-Japanese descent who was raised in the United States but plays for Japan".Tennisexpertise (talk) 11:46, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- We don't mention descent in the lead, only nationality. She is not a Haitian national. Vivexdino (talk) 18:31, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Where is it written that information about a person's background (which in this case is a defining factor of who the person is) should not be mentioned in the lead?
- Youtube video "Naomi Osaka answers: How Haitian and Japanese culture made her who she is today": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SkX0bjOyNME ("My dad is Haitian. I grew up in a Haitian household in New York, I lived with my grandma, and my mom is Japanese and I grew up with the Japanese culture too, and if you are saying American I guess because I have lived in America I also have that too")
- NZ Herald (New Zealand, 2 Jan, 2017): "Osaka has one of the most unlikely backgrounds on tour. She was born in Japan, raised in the United States and has been strongly influenced by Haitian culture, as her father is from the small Caribbean Island. "I guess it's an interesting mix," said Osaka. "I grew up with a mix of Japanese and Haitian culture, but we were living in New York. Every day was interesting. My grandma and father would speak Creole, my mum would cook Japanese food."" (https://www.nzherald.co.nz/sport/news/article.cfm?c_id=4&objectid=11775544)
- -- Tennisexpertise (talk) 19:36, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Where is it written that information about a person's background (which in this case is a defining factor of who the person is) should not be mentioned in the lead?
- True, but off-topic. She's not a Haitian citizen. Simple. As. That. Race/ethnicity belongs in the background, not the lead. Vivexdino (talk) 21:12, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Please read wiki policy about lead section before commenting and lecturing other people on it: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Biography#Lead_section Tennisexpertise (talk) 21:30, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- You've obviously misunderstood the guideline. And I see you've also now been blocked as a sock. Vivexdino (talk) 16:57, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I made this edit which I still think was a good edit, but that edit has been undone. Bus stop (talk) 13:57, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I like this suggestion by Tennisexpertise. I think the number of replies above likely has to do with recent attention drawn to Naomi Osaka by press coverage of the US Open controversy. I also think that claiming Naomi Osaka is simply "Japanese" as a person based on her athletic affiliation is a bit rude. If there were a woman born and raised in Croatia with European ancestry who went to Japan to train in tennis as an adult, fell in love with the county, and consequentially decided to rep Japan, would we be calling her simply "Japanese" in the first sentence? I don't want to be inflammatory but I think Naomi Osaka's name is biasing her treatment here. 96.41.225.223 (talk) 14:56, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- And shes lived her whole life in the United States and has US citizenship. So is she a United States/Haitian/Japanese tennis player? Her dad was born in Haiti but is he 100% Haitian? This could be argued back and forth depending on a lot of minutia details but she certainly represents Japan and is registered with the governing body of tennis as representing Japan. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:16, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Citizenship is generally clearly defined by governments and the fact of having dual citizenship is I think noteworthy-enough for the lede. Bus stop (talk) 16:35, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I like this suggestion by Tennisexpertise. I think the number of replies above likely has to do with recent attention drawn to Naomi Osaka by press coverage of the US Open controversy. I also think that claiming Naomi Osaka is simply "Japanese" as a person based on her athletic affiliation is a bit rude. If there were a woman born and raised in Croatia with European ancestry who went to Japan to train in tennis as an adult, fell in love with the county, and consequentially decided to rep Japan, would we be calling her simply "Japanese" in the first sentence? I don't want to be inflammatory but I think Naomi Osaka's name is biasing her treatment here. 96.41.225.223 (talk) 14:56, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
She’s Haitian-Japanese, please correct the page. LMacTheGr8 (talk) 17:58, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Now 4 brand new accounts. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:07, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- @LMacTheGr8, have you not been paying attention to anything so far, or are you just choosing to be willfully be ignorant? Vivexdino (talk) 18:29, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Vivexdino: seeing it's his/her first and only edit, he/she probably just didn't look to see if there was a prior discussion. Comment on content, not on contributors. Scolaire (talk) 19:07, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- This whole thread is filled with first and only edits. It's becoming an epidemic. Now we have TruthandLight6, Aafc1228, TheReelBlackSheep, and more to add to the list. Accounts created today. And they have migrated to her sister's bio. All it takes is one look from an administrator to verify if any or all are the same person and the factory would be closed, so I hope it's worth it. I've refrained from calling it to administration but if this continues too long I will. Fyunck(click) (talk) 00:06, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Ethnicity and race do not go into the head paragraph. It stating Japanese would be accurate because she is a Japanese citizen if I'm reading the sources correctly otherwise it would be that she's an American tennis player that represents her mother's home country of Japan.Mcelite (talk) 20:28, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Where is it stated that important information about a person's background is excluded from the head paragraph? As others have pointed out in this thread, for a long time in the head paragraph there was an information "Haitian-Japanese". Only now, when Naomi Osaka gaind worldwide attention and fame it became a problem? Tennisexpertise (talk) 20:50, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is wiki policy that the head paragraph does not include ethnicity. Her ethnicity is explicitly cited in her early life section where it should be. No one is denying that she is half Haitian.Mcelite (talk) 21:02, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- "unless it is relevant to the subject's notability". Wiki policy clearly states: "Ethnicity, religion, or sexuality should generally not be in the lead unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous nationalities or the place of birth should not be mentioned in the lead unless they are relevant to the subject's notability." (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Biography#Lead_section). And in this case it is relevant to subject's notability: 1) She herself puts equal importance on her Haitian as well Japanese background. 2) Her Haitian father has been a defining factor in her achievements (see for example: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=72Gq5OChj_o) 3) She is considered by a great number of Haitian people as one of their own (see for example a tweet by Wyclef Jean from 9 September 2018: "Naomi OSAKA Japonese Haitian blood What I have been doing with my microphone You are now making HAITI Proud with your tennis racket", https://twitter.com/wyclef/status/1038844533667246081) Tennisexpertise (talk) 21:25, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is not relevant to her notability. She is notable for playing tennis and now for winning a Major. She happens to play for Japan. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:44, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is your POV. Show sources which say it is not relevant to her notability. Tennisexpertise (talk) 22:05, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I see. So you are saying that she is notable to wikipedia because her father lived in Haiti? Not because of her tennis? Dream on. Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:34, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Do you understand English and what you are writing? Sorry but all the sources here are in English. Tennisexpertise (talk) 22:42, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- i don't think anyone is arguing that Osaka is notable because of her father's nationality; i don't think anyone would interpret this guideline that way. but Osaka's ethnicity is pertinent to her notability because her ethnicity is a subject of discussion in the US and Japan. there is a whole NYT article about how Osaka's biracial status "is helping to challenge Japan’s longstanding sense of racial purity and cultural identity". i would say having a NYT article (among others) written about the fact that you are biracial makes it pretty notable, and important for a reader's understanding of her role in the world of Japanese athletics. Boomur [☎] 01:11, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- For example, Henry Ossawa Tanner's page rightfully mentions his ethnicity in the first sentence because, among the many painters of history, he is notable for being the first African-American painter to achieve international fame. Naomi Osaka is not merely one of many [insert ethnicity] to do [some thing famously]. She is the first, and that's usually considered notable. 96.41.225.223 (talk) 01:45, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- It needs to be what makes her notable. Unless it is as important as Jack Johnson (boxer), it does not belong in the lead. Her ethnicity does not make her notable here.
- Not even Martin Luther King has his ethnicity anywhere in the lead, which is much more important to him. So definitely doesn't belong here where it doesn't matter at all. Vivexdino (talk) 06:31, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- again, i do not know how you could interpret the guideline as meaning that a person needs to be notable based solely on their ethnicity in order for it to be mentioned in the lead. i cannot think of a single person who fits that criterion; by your logic the guideline is nonsense. also, here and elsewhere you've brought up other individuals with notable ethnicities that go unmentioned in their leads, but those individuals are not the topic of this discussion. "x page does it this way, so this page must follow" is not a sufficient argument for establishing consensus. Boomur [☎] 13:33, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is part of wiki policy. You need to mention why her ethnicity is important, the way Jack Johnson (boxer) does. This has been discussed extensively. Vivexdino (talk) 15:04, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- are you denying that the importance of her ethnicity has been asserted by the NYT article about it, or the Washington Post article mentioned further down this thread? Boomur [☎] 15:46, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- If you're going to include it, you need to write why it makes it notable. How many times does this need to be repeated? Vivexdino (talk) 16:52, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- are you denying that the importance of her ethnicity has been asserted by the NYT article about it, or the Washington Post article mentioned further down this thread? Boomur [☎] 15:46, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is part of wiki policy. You need to mention why her ethnicity is important, the way Jack Johnson (boxer) does. This has been discussed extensively. Vivexdino (talk) 15:04, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- again, i do not know how you could interpret the guideline as meaning that a person needs to be notable based solely on their ethnicity in order for it to be mentioned in the lead. i cannot think of a single person who fits that criterion; by your logic the guideline is nonsense. also, here and elsewhere you've brought up other individuals with notable ethnicities that go unmentioned in their leads, but those individuals are not the topic of this discussion. "x page does it this way, so this page must follow" is not a sufficient argument for establishing consensus. Boomur [☎] 13:33, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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She is the first Japanese and Haitian Tennis player to win a Grand Slam singles tournament, defeating Serena Williams in the final of the 2018 US Open.[5] Osaka has reached a career-high world ranking of No. 7. 2601:643:8200:9999:E4FB:1E1E:2C48:6F96 (talk) 21:57, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done Unknown what is wanted here. Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:32, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Yesterday here on Wikipedia it stated she was a Haitian-Japanese tennis player. Now that she's famous Wikipedia has edited out her Haitian heritage!! Stating that she's only Japanese. Stop trying to filter out black greatness. You can't stop us!!! TheReelBlackSheep (talk) 22:14, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Do you have any suggested edit to make? This has been extensively discussed over and over again. She has Haitian ethnicity. Anything new? Vivexdino (talk) 22:27, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- And the day before it didn't so what's your point? Goodness, talk about racial bias. Fyunck(click) (talk) 22:32, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
I don't know why this is still an issue. A ton of users believe that her Haitian half should be mentioned. Why? Because its notable. They've provided sources as to how her ancestry is notable in regards to her position as a tennis player representing Japan. Her biracial makeup is an ongoing discussion in Japan in regards to societal acceptance of "hafus". That by itself makes this the exception to the rule of ethnicity generally not being included in the lead. The word 'generally' as a qualifier in this rule means exceptions can be made. Like the example of Henry Ossawa Tanner or Jero. Ms Osaka's country representation in sports (pushed by her father) was for financial reasons (JTA was more promising than USTA). Ms Osaka herself clearly identifies as both proudly Japanese and Haitian and has corrected media when her ancestry/heritage isn't properly referenced. Furthermore, her formative years were in the US with her Haitian relatives. I've made a couple of good faith edits which I've believed accurately represented Ms Osaka only to be repeatedly undone. Illogical if you ask me. Ghostreconnaissance (talk) 02:58, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Her Haitian heritage is acknowledged and noted in her article. However, she is not a Haitian citizen and she is representing Japan.Mcelite (talk) 03:23, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Your reply shows that you're either not comprehending the point so many users are trying to make or you're willfully ignoring it. The issue is whether or not her ethnicity is notable enough to warrant being mentioned in the lead, not if its mentioned in the article itself. The latter is a given. The former seems to be a hot button. Those in favor including myself believe it does and have expressed why. Wikipedia specifically states the parameters for having certain contextual info in leads. I believe this case fits that bill. I've yet to hear a convincing counterpoint other than her not being a Haitian citizen which is irrelevant to the original point in the first place. Everyone knows she represents Japan, literally no one is disputing that. Ghostreconnaissance (talk) 04:47, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- That's not what your edits are showing. What exactly are you trying to add to the lead? Do you have any specific sentence or paragraph in mind that makes her ethnicity more notable than the likes of Harriet Tubman, Jessica Jung, Ryan Higa, or Denzel Washington? Please enlighten us. Vivexdino (talk) 05:59, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is notable that she is representing Japan because that is whom she chose to represent her mother's country. Therefore yes that is more notable than mentioning her heritage in the lead paragraph. Yes she has acknowledged her Haitian heritage, however at the same time she represents Japan. In no way is her Haitian heritage ignored. Peace outMcelite (talk) 05:43, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Another problem is sourcing. The press is all over the map on this. While it looks like Japanese is the most prevalent, she has been described as a tennis player as Japanese, Japanese-American, American-Japanese, Haitian-Japanese, Hatian-American-Japanese and even Haitiano-Japanese in some Haiti press. Her father is often called Haitian-American. He was born in Haiti but do we know if he is 100% Haitian himself? It is a stew and in my opinion more trouble than it's worth in the lead. The way it is written now "Naomi Osaka is a professional tennis player representing Japan" is accurate and doesn't cause any problems that will lead to alphabet soup edit wars. I will change the second sentence to a non-inflammatory version also. Fyunck(click) (talk) 06:32, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- "but do we know if he is 100% Haitian himself". This sentence just shows that you don't have idea what is being discussed here and are here on this page just for trolling and have an agenda. Or maybe you can't even read simple English with understanding? All the issues (Haiti, Japan, American) are important in her life and career and neglecting it violates NPOV: "All encyclopedic content on Wikipedia must be written from a neutral point of view (NPOV), which means representing fairly, proportionately, and, as far as possible, without editorial bias, all of the significant views that have been published by reliable sources on a topic. NPOV is a fundamental principle of Wikipedia and of other Wikimedia projects. It is also one of Wikipedia's three core content policies; the other two are "Verifiability" and "No original research". These policies jointly determine the type and quality of material that is acceptable in Wikipedia articles, and, because they work in harmony, they should not be interpreted in isolation from one another. Editors are strongly encouraged to familiarize themselves with all three. This policy is non-negotiable, and the principles upon which it is based cannot be superseded by other policies or guidelines, nor by editor consensus." (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view). "The opening paragraph should usually provide context for the activities that made the person notable. In most modern-day cases this will be the country of which the person is a citizen, national or permanent resident, or if the person is notable mainly for past events, the country where the person was a citizen, national or permanent resident when the person became notable. Ethnicity, religion, or sexuality should generally not be in the lead unless it is relevant to the subject's notability. Similarly, previous nationalities or the place of birth should not be mentioned in the lead unless they are relevant to the subject's notability." (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Biography#Lead_section). Somebody stated there "unless it is relevant to the subject's notability" not just for fun, but for that kind of complicated biographical issues, where genealogy of the subject is discussed extensively in many articles about her and there is a lot of confusion and bias in the media towards stating that only Japan/being Japanese is relevant to her notability (see youtube video: "Naomi Osaka's Blackness ERASED by Media US Open 2018", https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=72Gq5OChj_o). Tennisexpertise (talk) 12:43, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I don't condone all the socking that's going on here, but I do note that The Washington Post is running a headline today, Japanese, Haitian, and now a Grand Slam winner: Naomi Osaka’s historic journey to the U.S. Open. So I don't think mentioning the dual ethnicity in the article is unreasonable. -- RoySmith (talk) 14:41, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Her heritage is getting coverage meaningfully related to her notability, in addition to the sources quoted above, we have the New York Times stating "Her victory sparked celebrations across the country and, because she is half Haitian-American, started challenging Japan’s conservative pure-blood definition of ethnicity.". [1] Such comments are numerous and appear signficant, and I lean toward including a mention of her ethnicity as a result. --joe deckertalk 19:51, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Joe Decker: I'm a bit confused here. It is included extensively in her personal section so no one is arguing that. The question is about the lead. Various sources call her Japanese, Japanese-American, American-Haitian-Japanese, Haitian-Japanese... it's all over the map. That's pertinent for her personal section but not for the lead. We also have this article and [this. What to put in the lead is going to be very tough to source. I do think it best to keep it to her personal section. Fyunck(click) (talk) 20:06, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- The thing is, it already included her ethnicity. What kind of mention did you have in mind about including, exactly? Vivexdino (talk) 17:26, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I meant in the lead. Sorry for any confusion. It is my judgment that the coverage I have seen of her ethnicity, and how that is being received in Japan and elsewhere is broad enough to warrant it. *shrug* --joe deckertalk 19:54, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- The thing is, it already included her ethnicity. What kind of mention did you have in mind about including, exactly? Vivexdino (talk) 17:26, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I agree with the suggestion that we should include that she is "Haitian-Japanese". I think that it is not enough to just say that her father is Haitian. Bus stop (talk) 17:36, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I still think mentioning that she's Haitian in the lead paragraph isn't notable. She is Japan's first champion that's notable besides here winning her Grand Slam at the age of 20. I feel this whole thing has been blow up even more by one editor making ghost accountants on a mission because they believe her Haitian heritage is being denied when it isn't. If it was being denied it wouldn't even be mentioned in the article. That's what I'm seeing here.Mcelite (talk) 18:01, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I find aspects of ethnicity as well as aspects of citizenship of importance. And I think it is simple enough to state these. For instance Osaka is of Haitian-Japanese ethnicity and she holds dual US-Japanese citizenship. That is a very short sentence. I don't think this should be an issue. These are related concerns (ethnicity and citizenship) and a brief sentence is all it takes to clarify this for the reader. Bus stop (talk) 18:29, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- No one is saying not to mention her ethnicity. In fact I included all the terms used to describe her in her personal section. But the lead section seems out of place for it, especially since the exact phrasing is different depending on the source. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:36, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- You refer to "exact phrasing" but aren't we often paraphrasing? Are there significant differences in the wording found in different sources? Bus stop (talk) 18:43, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- As to whether she is Japanese, Japanese-American, Haitian-Japanese, or Haitian-American-Japanese... yes that's significant. And that's best handled under her personal section where we can go into more details on the situation. It's really not best for the lead. Fyunck(click) (talk) 19:41, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- You refer to "exact phrasing" but aren't we often paraphrasing? Are there significant differences in the wording found in different sources? Bus stop (talk) 18:43, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- No one is saying not to mention her ethnicity. In fact I included all the terms used to describe her in her personal section. But the lead section seems out of place for it, especially since the exact phrasing is different depending on the source. Fyunck(click) (talk) 18:36, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I find aspects of ethnicity as well as aspects of citizenship of importance. And I think it is simple enough to state these. For instance Osaka is of Haitian-Japanese ethnicity and she holds dual US-Japanese citizenship. That is a very short sentence. I don't think this should be an issue. These are related concerns (ethnicity and citizenship) and a brief sentence is all it takes to clarify this for the reader. Bus stop (talk) 18:29, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I still think mentioning that she's Haitian in the lead paragraph isn't notable. She is Japan's first champion that's notable besides here winning her Grand Slam at the age of 20. I feel this whole thing has been blow up even more by one editor making ghost accountants on a mission because they believe her Haitian heritage is being denied when it isn't. If it was being denied it wouldn't even be mentioned in the article. That's what I'm seeing here.Mcelite (talk) 18:01, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
It is still an issue because of the widespread discussion on social media about the blatant racism on Wikipedia that has removed her Haitian heritage to make her appear Asian instead. She wins, and now she is no longer African American? Obviously editors here have little sensitivity to issues of culture and ethnicity. And the argument that that info belongs in another paragraph is no excuse. Google Osaka's own comments on this issue to educate yourselves! Judeberman (talk) 19:23, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- We follow what the sources say, not social media. You're the one making this about race. Vivexdino (talk) 19:35, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Vivexdino, I find it disingenuous for you to act like an unbiased party when your contribution history shows a clear bias towards all things Japanese. I think that her Haitian heritage is notable and belongs in the lead because it is central to her personal identity. It seems that some here simply want to minimize the part of Osaka's heritage that they find less palatable. Ropo153 (talk) 23:27, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Have you not been following the discussion at all so far? What does me being an anime fan and editing Japanese culture got to do with anything? So you're just gonna call me a weaboo and not follow Wikipedia guidelines? Vivexdino (talk) 23:43, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- I didn't call you a weeboo, I don't believe in disparaging people for their personal interests. I just find it hypocritical for you to accuse someone else of having bias when I doubt you would have had any interest in this article if it were not for the subject's Japanese heritage. Ropo153 (talk) 23:58, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Have you not been following the discussion at all so far? What does me being an anime fan and editing Japanese culture got to do with anything? So you're just gonna call me a weaboo and not follow Wikipedia guidelines? Vivexdino (talk) 23:43, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Vivexdino, I find it disingenuous for you to act like an unbiased party when your contribution history shows a clear bias towards all things Japanese. I think that her Haitian heritage is notable and belongs in the lead because it is central to her personal identity. It seems that some here simply want to minimize the part of Osaka's heritage that they find less palatable. Ropo153 (talk) 23:27, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Judeberman and Tennisexpertise this isn't about racism at all. Since she is an American citizen then yes she can be categorized as African American if she wasn't an American citizen then NO. I'm beginning to believe both of you are supporters of the One Drop Rule which is a problem. I'm concerned that if things were reversed and her Japanese heritage was the focus of this discussion instead of her Haitian heritage that you wouldn't be going to war and screaming racism. She is representing Japan not Haiti and not the U.S. so no I don't believe her heritage should be mentioned in the lead paragraph. She is obviously proud of being half Haitian, but at the same time I'm not in strong favor of her heritage being the focus in the lead paragraph.Mcelite (talk) 22:54, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Mcelite, we're not talking about one drop here, were talking about HALF of her heritage. I haven't seen a single person object to including her Japanese heritage so your argument is just a straw man. Ropo153 (talk) 23:31, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- @Judeberman and Tennisexpertise this isn't about racism at all. Since she is an American citizen then yes she can be categorized as African American if she wasn't an American citizen then NO. I'm beginning to believe both of you are supporters of the One Drop Rule which is a problem. I'm concerned that if things were reversed and her Japanese heritage was the focus of this discussion instead of her Haitian heritage that you wouldn't be going to war and screaming racism. She is representing Japan not Haiti and not the U.S. so no I don't believe her heritage should be mentioned in the lead paragraph. She is obviously proud of being half Haitian, but at the same time I'm not in strong favor of her heritage being the focus in the lead paragraph.Mcelite (talk) 22:54, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- One Drop Rule just in case you're not American and don't get it. Obviously you didn't read that I'm concerned that if her Japanese heritage was the discussion some of ones screaming racism wouldn't be interested in this conversation.Mcelite (talk) 23:36, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- As a biracial American I am more than familiar with the one drop rule, thank you. I read your concern but I've seen no evidence of anybody suggesting that her Japanese heritage be omitted from the the lead, so I think your argument is a straw man. However, because you brought it up: since you don't you care if her Haitian heritage is removed, how are you any better than someone who wouldn't care if her Japanese heritage was removed? Ropo153 (talk) 23:52, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- One Drop Rule just in case you're not American and don't get it. Obviously you didn't read that I'm concerned that if her Japanese heritage was the discussion some of ones screaming racism wouldn't be interested in this conversation.Mcelite (talk) 23:36, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Sources / Coverage 2018.09
- "Naomi Osaka’s Breakthrough Game : The 20-year-old is poised to burst into the top tier of women’s tennis. Can she also burst Japan’s expectations of what it means to be Japanese?" https://nyti.ms/2BFe4eB -- with a lot of content on her early life. --178.132.29.134 (talk) 09:28, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
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Remove "Williams went on to congratulate Osaka while giving her a hug, and told the audience to stop booing because of their anger against the umpire and to focus on congratulating Naomi.[27]" as it is irrelevant to the preceding and succeeding sentences stating Naomi Osaka won the 2018 US Open. Butko0 (talk) 20:39, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- It is not irrelevant that is an important moment and shows sportsmanship between the women.Mcelite (talk) 21:24, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
DoneI actually think it is trivial and should be removed. This is not Serena Williams article. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:32, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Eventually it will be removed, as will the full thank you speech. Those are beyond trivial to this article. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:47, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I'm willing to settle for mentioning that Serena congratulated her we can keep out the extra Serena hugged her and told the audience to stop booing. I believe that is relevant because it shows their sportsmanship and Naomi has looked up to Serena.Mcelite (talk) 22:06, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- But that always happens. When doesn't an opponent congratulate the winner? Fyunck(click) (talk) 23:59, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- I'm willing to settle for mentioning that Serena congratulated her we can keep out the extra Serena hugged her and told the audience to stop booing. I believe that is relevant because it shows their sportsmanship and Naomi has looked up to Serena.Mcelite (talk) 22:06, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
@Fyunck(click) and Mcelite: As of now, the last paragraph of § 2018: Indian Wells and US Open Champion reads, in full (emphasis added):
- She defeated her idol Serena Williams in straight sets to claim the trophy. During the award ceremony, as the crowd was booing, Osaka stated, "I know that everyone was cheering for her and I'm sorry it had to end like this. I just want to say thank you for watching the match. It was always my dream to play Serena in the US Open finals so I'm really glad I was able to do that. Thank you."
As far as I understand what happened, the booing, and the hooraw that prompted it, followed directly on the referee's action against Williams, her furious ranting at him, and his docking her one game, which cost her the match. Those details are seriously notable. If we're going to keep that quote, we must explain why the crowd was booing. Readers will be seriously confused: "Who were they booing? Why were they booing? Did they think Osaka had cheated or had not earned the win?" I'm reopening the request until this issue is addressed. --Thnidu (talk) 21:12, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese tennis player 2600:8806:1100:10A0:E5C0:BACB:2C63:2702 (talk) 20:51, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- No, she's not. She has Haitian ethnicity. Nice try though. Vivexdino (talk) 21:21, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done She is a Japanese tennis player who happens to have some Haitian blood. She is also a United States citizen and lives and was raised in the United States. It would actually be more appropriate to call her a Japanese-American tennis player, but she is registered as Japanese with the governing bodies of tennis. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:30, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- "She is a Japanese tennis player who happens to have some Haitian blood". It is your point of view which if far from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view Tennisexpertise (talk) 21:36, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- You're always going to be able to find some sources which say she is japanese-haitian. But I think most will say she is Japanese or represents Japan. She is registered as such with the ITF. Mentioning her parentage in her personal sections is fine and dandy. Most players have that. I'm half Polish but I'm not a Polish-American software engineer just because of that. She was born in Japan and raised in the United States since she was a toddler but she has chosen to go with Japan as her tennis nation. That's what should be in the lead. Fyunck(click) (talk) 21:42, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Cześć. "I think most will say she is Japanese or represents Japan". Since when it is important what most people say in defining someone's biography and not who says it based on relevant sources? Wikipeadia is based on sources and not on "what most people will say" or like to see on wikipedia. Instead of just giving your POV, show sources which clearly state that her Haitian background is irrelevant. You will not find any, because there are important sources quoted in this thread which show that her Haitian background is relevant in her whole life and achievements. Tennisexpertise (talk) 22:01, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- This is an issue of WP:Due and undue weight. The vast majority of sources simply say Japanese, or Japan. Which is what she is representing officially and is listed as. Her Haitian background is already mentioned in the article. You are the one pushing ethnocentric edits here. Vivexdino (talk) 22:16, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Throwing insults clearly shows that you don't have sources to base your POV opinions. Please educate yourself before throwing accusations: ethnocentric - preferring a particular race or culture to all others (https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/ethnocentric) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tennisexpertise (talk • contribs) 22:26, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- Ebony magazine (title: "Tell ‘Em! Tennis Player Checks Reporter for Neglecting to Mention Her Haitian Heritage", January 22, 2018): "Naomi has been very public with her Haitian background, and is also very active at the school her parents built in the city of Jacmel" (https://www.ebony.com/news-views/naomi-osaka-haitian-australian-open) Tennisexpertise (talk) 22:54, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Someone is editing this section to specifically target Tennisexpertise (talk) by striking out his answers in a thoughtful and deliberate debate. I have restored his answers. Please stop attempting to destroy other points of view because you're too vested in your own narrowed one. You are being watched. shiznaw (talk) 00:26, 11 September 2018 (UTC)
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Naomi is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player. Aafc1228 (talk) 22:47, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
- She is indeed. Keep in mind, though, that Wikipedia is not a forum and do not abuse the edit request template. Vivexdino (talk) 23:25, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Japanese family
Her Japanese family has been in the Japanese news with this win, so expansion can be done to add family details. -- 65.94.42.168 (talk) 23:19, 9 September 2018 (UTC)
Using the fact that she's listed with the IPA as playing for Japan shouldn't negate her complicated Biography
Tennisexpertise (talk) has given numerous examples and cited sources in which She refers to herself as a Hatian and living a significant part of her formative years in America. This has to be addressed in the 1st paragraph with objectivity, not with a biased view against having a complicated life history for the sake of simplicity. The world is becoming ever more complicated. We'll have to keep up in order to remain relevant.shiznaw (talk) 00:56, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- i mentioned this in a thread above, but as Tennisexpertise mentioned, MOS:LEADBIO states "Ethnicity, religion, or sexuality should generally not be in the lead unless it is relevant to the subject's notability." i would argue that Osaka's haitian ethnicity/biracial identity is relevant to her notability; there is a New York Times article how Osaka "is helping to challenge Japan’s longstanding sense of racial purity and cultural identity". it was also enough to warrant a section in the Indian Express article about her win, and a Sydney Herald article. it seems clear to me that her ethnicity is highly notable in context, and of enough interest to a general audience that it would deserve a mention in the lead. Boomur [☎] 01:26, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Honestly, with how much has gone on about this topic, and given how hostile some of the threads above have gotten, maybe this should go to some kind of dispute resolution. There's basically 5 posts from Tennis and 5 posts from Fyunck saying the same thing while the rest of us are being accused of being Tennis's sockpuppets. 96.41.225.223 (talk) 01:32, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Her ethnicity/race is an important part of her, sure, but that's not why she is WP:NOTABLE, her tennis career is. For example, the African-American ethnicity of Harriet Tubman, the Korean ethnicity of Jessica Jung, or the Japanese ethnicity of Ryan Higa, is an even more important part of them, but it's not mentioned anywhere in their leads. If her ethnicity needs to be mentioned, it should be in a separate paragraph or sentence explaining why, not as part of her nationality/citizenship. Vivexdino (talk) 03:55, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Seconded. As I was writing my comment below, someone again removed the reference to Osaka’s Haitian background. I don’t want to start an edit war, so how do we start a dispute resolution process? —ThorstenNY (talk) 03:45, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- There sure is a lot to untangle here: citizenship, residency, ethnicity, national team affiliation — all different but related properties — and how they all relate to Osaka’s notability. I’m mostly okay with the latest version as of 21:53, 9 September 2018 (“of Haitian and Japanese heritage representing Japan”) — except that this omits Osaka’s American citizenship (and almost life-long residency), which probably should be mentioned as per WP:MOS/Biography#Context. Also, “heritage” seems a bit vague. What’s described here is Osaka’s ethnic heritage. But there is also cultural heritage, and Ms. Osaka’s arguably is partially to largely American. But we clearly know: ethnicity (Haitian and Japanese), citizenship (U.S. and Japanese), national team affiliation (Japan.) I think mentioning all three aspects (which have all informed, if not outright motivated, major reporting) is less bad than omitting any. —ThorstenNY (talk) 03:39, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Well, again it's not so clear. One, are you talking about the article or specifically the lead? Also, I assume you are aware that censuses such as in the USA or Canada allow for the ethnicity of American or Canadian. The ethnicity of French for example come from a melting pot of dozens of older ethnicities. So her ethnicity is also American-Haitian-Japanese for those are advocating for such things. Fyunck(click) (talk) 23:02, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Please keep this conversation in the Representing Haiti section so editors do not have to keep going back and forth. Thank you.Mcelite (talk) 03:57, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Well, again it's not so clear. One, are you talking about the article or specifically the lead? Also, I assume you are aware that censuses such as in the USA or Canada allow for the ethnicity of American or Canadian. The ethnicity of French for example come from a melting pot of dozens of older ethnicities. So her ethnicity is also American-Haitian-Japanese for those are advocating for such things. Fyunck(click) (talk) 23:02, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Naomi Osaki is the first Haitian-Japanese player too win the grand slam titled. StJamesProject (talk) 02:52, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done That's cool and everything, but keep in mind that Wikipedia is not a forum. If you have a suggested edit to make, please gain WP:Consensus. Vivexdino (talk) 04:26, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Add that she is Haitian as well as Japanese. Cathrinwitt (talk) 05:16, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done Against consensus. Welcome back to wikipedia after 9 years. Fyunck(click) (talk) 05:32, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Change 'Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a professional tennis player representing Japan.' to 'Naomi Osaka (大坂 なおみ Ōsaka Naomi, born 16 October 1997) is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player representing Japan.'
Such a change would keep the emphasis on her Haitian heritage along with her Japanese heritage that she both embraces. https://haitiantimes.com/2018/09/09/3-things-to-know-about-naomi-osaka/ JWalton314 (talk) 05:34, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- Take this argument to the Representing Haiti section. Not here.Mcelite (talk) 05:38, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done no consensus for change. Fyunck(click) (talk) 10:08, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Original bio read "Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player". Changing it to "Japanese" only may have removed the Haitian history of the girl. Please correct. Kcemenike (talk) 07:14, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done No consensus, plus it is correct as is. Fyunck(click) (talk) 10:09, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Change " is a professional tennis player of Japanese and Haitian heritage, representing Japan" to "is a professional tennis player from Japan, of Japanese and Haitian heritage"
Also why have you mentioned her father being Haitian twice under Personal and Family? "and a Haitian father, Leonard "San" François..... Her father was born in Haiti and went to New York University before moving to Japan, where he met and married her mother"
"Osaka has been described as Japanese, American, Japanese-American, American-Japanese, Haitian-American, and Haitian-American-Japanese." is unnecessary. BookWord1 (talk) 14:56, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player. 67.81.171.71 (talk) 16:44, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Miss Osaka is of Haitian AND Japanese decent. You had that on your site until the day she won the US OPEN. That should be restored 2601:640:4080:5710:80C1:E866:F30B:AEEF (talk) 18:17, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Naomi Osaka is a Japanese Haitian - American professional tennis player representing Japan. She is the first tennis player born in Japan to win a Grand Slam singles tournament, defeating Serena Williams in the final of the 2018 US Open.
Thank you! 170.74.231.21 (talk) 19:45, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Score Digme724 (talk) 22:14, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
Not done Unknown what is wanted. Fyunck(click) (talk) 23:05, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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The Japanese script of Osaka's name must be changed because her first name Naomi is not a native Japanese name. Instead, because the name Naomi is originally Hebrew, her name should be changed from "なおみ" to "ナオミ". See here for a link to an article from a native Japanese site that uses Katakana to write her name: https://mainichi.jp/articles/20180909/k00/00e/050/210000c. 2600:1700:EC90:F9F0:249A:5D67:D823:C5D5 (talk) 23:02, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese tennis player 148.75.220.142 (talk) 23:15, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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She is Haitian- Japanese residing in America. She never represented Japan
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Naomi Osaka is a Haitian-Japanese professional tennis player. 2604:2000:C519:2F00:9191:4E4A:9EA:68F6 (talk) 23:42, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
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Haitian - Japanese — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:581:C002:D43:E591:70DC:8C8:BEDA (talk) 23:54, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
- ^ Noori Farzan, Antonia. "Japanese, Haitian, and now a Grand Slam winner: Naomi Osaka's historic journey to the U.S. Open". Retrieved 2018-09-10.
- ^ "Haitian-Japanese Tennis Player Naomi Osaka is going to U.S. Open finals, her first". Retrieved 2018-09-10.
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