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::I have done everything in my power to address Superninja's underlying concerns and personal viewpoints, opening an RFC at this point would just be rewarding them for failing to engage with the basic processes of wikipedia. [[User:Orchastrattor|Orchastrattor]] ([[User talk:Orchastrattor|talk]]) 05:33, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
::I have done everything in my power to address Superninja's underlying concerns and personal viewpoints, opening an RFC at this point would just be rewarding them for failing to engage with the basic processes of wikipedia. [[User:Orchastrattor|Orchastrattor]] ([[User talk:Orchastrattor|talk]]) 05:33, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
:To elaborate on my first paragraph, if Yano is describing the subject as "imbued with" a ''particular cultural group'' then that is obviously antonymous with the subject being culturally neutral; Superninja is playing rules lawyer over whether or not Yano specifically uses the words "Western" or "European" in her work but appears to have absolutely zero issue with putting words in Yano's mouth when it comes to supporting their own viewpoint of "culturally neutral" instead. [[User:Orchastrattor|Orchastrattor]] ([[User talk:Orchastrattor|talk]]) 02:09, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
:To elaborate on my first paragraph, if Yano is describing the subject as "imbued with" a ''particular cultural group'' then that is obviously antonymous with the subject being culturally neutral; Superninja is playing rules lawyer over whether or not Yano specifically uses the words "Western" or "European" in her work but appears to have absolutely zero issue with putting words in Yano's mouth when it comes to supporting their own viewpoint of "culturally neutral" instead. [[User:Orchastrattor|Orchastrattor]] ([[User talk:Orchastrattor|talk]]) 02:09, 11 April 2024 (UTC)
::[[WP:TLDR]], but thanks anyway for responding. [[User:Super ninja2|☆SuperNinja2☆]] <small>'''[[User talk:Super ninja2|<u>TALK!</u>]]'''</small> 02:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC)

===== Lead 3 (SuperNinja2)=====
I don't think this is going to work. I think starting an RfC might be a better option. Thank you so much, [[User:Snowmanonahoe]], you did a really good job! Thanks to everyone who participated in this discussion. Hope we reach a consensus in RfC. [[User:Super ninja2|☆SuperNinja2☆]] <small>'''[[User talk:Super ninja2|<u>TALK!</u>]]'''</small> 02:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC)


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    Albert Camus

    – General close. See comments for reasoning.
    Filed by NAADAAN on 01:34, 30 March 2024 (UTC).[reply]
    Closed discussion

    Albert Camus discussion

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    Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Camus)

    I am ready to moderate this discussion. Please read DRN Rule A. Be civil and concise. Comment on content, not contributors. It appears that Camus's nationality is one of the issues. Are there any other content issues besides how to refer to the nationality of Camus?

    It is my opinion, on reading the article and the statements by the editors, that there are arguments in favor of describing him as French, or as French-Algerian (pied-noir). Since there are arguments in favor of at least two alternatives, we should refer to him in the way that most of the reliable sources that have written about him have characterized him. So I am asking each editor to state briefly what they think should be listed as his nationality, and what reliable sources support their position. Robert McClenon (talk) 05:15, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]


    Are there any other issues or questions? Robert McClenon (talk) 05:15, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Zeroth statements by editors (Camus)

    I personally view the status quo -- showing him as "French" in the first paragraph of the lead and adding that "Camus was born in Algeria during the French colonization, to pied-noir parents" in the second paragraph in the lead -- to be the best option.
    I have made a bona-fide attempt to find sources referring to Camus' nationality:
    1. "Français"; 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6
    2. "Français d’Algérie" (lit. "frenchman from Algeria"); 1, 2
    3. "French"; 1, 2, 3, 4
    4. "French-Algerian"; 1
    Although a bit anachronistic, I wouldn't be necessarily opposed to saying "Algerian-born French" or "French-Algerian" if the appropriate sources are there. My point of contention is the fact that @Syzygyst did not replace "French writer" with "French-Algerian writer", but rather omitted "French" and replaced it with "Algerian writer" and exclusively such, making such edits ad nauseam for the past few years. So no, I wouldn't say I'm frustrated against Algeria -- why would I be? I agree that this is probably a silly debate, but this would not have escalated had Syzygyst not repeatedly made such edits
    I think it must be taken into consideration that pied-noirs and native Muslims in Algeria had different statuses akin to different European colonies, even in the case of Camus. Native Muslims in Algeria were French subjects but not citizens, whilst pied-noirs were French citizens. Considering that Algeria was considered a part of Metropolitan France until 1962 -- two years after Camus' death -- associating him with the current Algerian state would be anachronistic. Especially considering that he gained notoriety as a Frenchman in France, I think it's best to call him "French" in the first paragraph of the lead.
    Per Albert Camus the Algerian (CUP), Camus was "born to parents who  were legally French, [and] enjoyed from birth the full rights and protections of French citizenship, unlike the over-whelming majority of Berber and Arab Algerians, who were denied citizenship and designated as indigenous French subjects or nationals.", this explains the case of people like Larbi ben M'hidi who were Algerian natives in Algeria. He was the son of French settlers and attempted to join the French army during his formative years. Frenchman he was born, Frenchman he was raised, as a Frenchman he died. NAADAAN (talk) 12:51, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    First statement by possible moderator (Camus)

    One editor has replied to my request, and has provided sources that characterize Camus as French or as French-Algerian. The editors who had edited the article to characterize Camus as Algerian have not replied. I will offer my opinion, which is that characterizing Camus simply as Algerian or as North African is inconsistent with the usage of the times, which is that the designation of Algerian was used to designate persons of Arab or Berber origin, usually Muslim, and Camus was of French origin. It appears that most of the reliable sources characterize Camus as French, and that some characterize him as French-Algerian (pied-noir).

    Do any editors have anything to add about Camus's ethnicity? Do any editors have any other questions? If there are no other comments, I will close this thread and will advise that either normal editing or an RFC can resolve whether Camus is characterized as French or as French-Algerian. Robert McClenon (talk) 15:54, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    First statements by editors (Camus)


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    Talk:Mukokuseki#Undo

    – Discussion in progress.
    Filed by Super ninja2 on 14:35, 30 March 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

    Location of dispute

    Users involved

    Dispute overview

    Me and User:Orchastrattor had a dispute about using the wording "stereotypical European features" in the lead section in article Mukokuseki especially in its definition. I thought that the article did not have enough sources to support this claim so this claim should be removed. While discussing this issue, the use brought up a book by Yano to support his claim, then he referred to a study that was off-topic, it was not about mukokuseki, so I explained that referring to it would be a WP:SYNTH. We reached a dead end so I asked for a third opinion. User:IOHANNVSVERVS kindly gave their opinion:

    "I agree with SuperNinja2's position and modified the lead, removing the bit about 'stereotypical European features', which doesn't seem to be supported by the sources", "Yano's perspective is that mukokuseki design ('without nationality') is often/actually 'very much imbued with Euro-American culture or race'. This can be included in the article but is an analysis/criticism of the concept, and doesn't change the definition of the concept which is approximately 'the depiction of characters with racially ambiguous features, without a concrete ethnicity or nationality'."

    But User Orchastrattor reverted IOHANNVSVERVS' edit and returned the wording in question to the lead and as a definition of mukokuseki and added the the study that is off-topic. I reverted his edit but he reverted mine.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    I would like to see uninvolved editors with the experience at Dispute Resolution help to arrive on a WP:CONS in regards to all of these details and telling us what we can do to end the dispute and how each of us can compromise.

    Summary of dispute by User:Super ninja2

    Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

    I think the wording; "stereotypical European features" or the "stereotypically Western characteristics" (the wording that Orchastrattor used after I reverted his edit) should not be used in the article, not to mention in the lead because there are not enough sources to support this claim.

    The location where Orchastrattor insists on placing this wording may confuse the reader into thinking that it is part of the definition of the concept.

    Orchastrattor keeps mentioning Yano's book, I'm not against using this source in the article but I think it should be included as an analysis/criticism of the concept, and should not change the definition of the concept which is "the depiction of characters with racially ambiguous features, without a concrete ethnicity or nationality". ☆SuperNinja2☆ 10:27, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Summary of dispute by User:Orchastrattor

    The sentence in question is not a definition and is providing context for the lead sentence by stating how different authors describe the subject in relation to real life.

    I put the article's sources together based on the top results on google and WPL, then when it was challenged I looked the subject up on a different database and found that the authors already cited for one paper in the article supported the interpretation in question in another paper. SuperNinja did not provide any concrete reason not to cite the source in the original dispute apart from falsely accusing me of cherrypicking.

    IOHANNVSVERVS agreed in their third opinion that we can [...] say that some people, such as Christine Yano, consider mukokuseki characters to have European features and failed to respond when I attempted to explain how this was still met by my preferred wording, I do not see what dispute there is to resolve here.

    I updated the wording to reflect points made in both the original discussion and the 3O, but a lot of these were reverted by SuperNinja alongside a wide range of unrelated edits I made to coverage, quality and another claim added by Piotrus (talk · contribs) as an uninvolved fourth party. Orchastrattor (talk) 18:14, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Summary of dispute by User:IOHANNVSVERVS

    Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

    No comment. SuperNinja2's summary seems accurate. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 14:07, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Talk:Mukokuseki#Undo discussion

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    First statement by moderator (Mukokuseki)

    (hidden ping of parties) I am willing to moderate this. Please read Wikipedia:DRN Rule A. Despite what the page says, you can edit anything unrelated to the clause in question.

    Some initial thoughts:

    • SuperNinja2, you cannot know whether Orchastrattor was cherrypicking sources, so assume good faith in that regard.
    • Orchastrattor, try to keep the conversation focused on the dispute.

    Opening question: How do you want the lead to describe the features mukokuseki characters often have, and why?

    Remember to address your answer to me and the Wikipedia community (not to each other). Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 17:55, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Fix ping Super ninja2 Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 17:57, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    First statements by parties (Mukokuseki)

    Lead (Orchastrattor)

    The lead sentence already defines the subject in relation to real life, it only makes sense to have Yano and Gruyter there to give specific perspectives on that relation. It makes the lead read better by bringing attention to the role of the setting in a narrative work, with two constituent claims both sourced to reputable authors and corroborated by other sources cited later. Nothing about their analysis is any deeper or more controversial than the claims used for the rest of the lead, and there is no other claim that would fit better there. Orchastrattor (talk) 18:29, 3 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    It isn't part of the definition, it is giving a potential example of how the subject can be perceived. The is no "X is Y" statement of any sort in the phrase in question. Orchastrattor (talk) 13:38, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Lead (SuperNinja2)

    I think that the lead section should not include "stereotypical European features" or "stereotypical western characteristics in a setting where they might otherwise be assumed to be ethnically Japanese" because there are not enough sources to support. There is at least one source that says "Although it is true that such anime characters do not necessarily adhere to the usual Japanese phenotype, it would be false to infer that, because of this, such characters look “Western” or “Caucasian.” Rather, the characters look nationless.

    Orchastrattor insists on placing it after the first fullstop in the lead. I would argue that this makes it part of the definition and would confuse the reader into thinking so.

    I think this claim should be added as an analysis/criticism of the concept and we can only say that some people, such as Christine Yano, consider mukokuseki characters to have European features.

    • How do you want the lead to describe the features mukokuseki characters often have, and why?
    I think that the lead section should say "Mukokuseki is the depiction of characters with racially ambiguous features, without a concrete ethnicity or nationality" because this is the concrete definition that all sources support and agree on. Other additions are disputed between sources and the lead cannot afford to display them all. ☆SuperNinja2☆ 09:47, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Second statement by moderator (Mukokuseki)

    I am now going to ask that both editors write their own version of the lead. Do not simply paste in an earlier revision you prefer, because they have already been established to not have consensus. Rather, consider what the other editor has said as you write it and try to create something you think would be a good compromise. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 01:50, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Second statements by parties (Mukokuseki)

    I already did that with the current version, I was entertaining a lot of different ideas for the prose during the original discussion and applied those after the 3O stopped responding.

    I switched "features" for "characteristics" in case it would match the new source better to talk about the abstract "placing" of characters rather than actual visuals, and I switched "European" for "Western" to reorder the phrase in a manner Superninja had suggested.Orchastrattor (talk) 03:55, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Again, if you have conduct concerns, go to ANI. Super ninja2 can stop participating in this discussion at any time if she feels it is a waste. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 05:24, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.

    I don't think it's fair that Super ninja2 should have to continuously repeat themselves here. A third opinion was requested and provided affirming this version of the lead. Orchastrattor did not abide by the third opinion and restored their preferred version; isn't that edit warring? Especially when Super ninja2 reverted them "per talk page, we already discussed that" and Orchastrattor reverted them again, misrepresenting the conclusion of my third opinion. This version of the lead should be restored per the third opinion and if Orchastrattor wants it to say otherwise it should be on them to explain why. This is how I see it anyway, IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 04:25, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Third opinion is not a binding process. It is just that: a third opinion. If you believe there are issues with Orchastrattor's conduct you can file a report at ANI. DRN is not the place for this discussion. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 04:33, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    It seems relevant, and I'm concerned that Super ninja2 is having their time and energy wasted here and that they will be discouraged from participating in disputes on Wikipedia in the future. Likewise Orchastrattor seems to be being rewarded for edit warring. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 04:47, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Also, I'm not familiar with DRN but isn't this statement of "Do not simply paste in an earlier revision you prefer, because they have already been established to not have consensus.", an instance of the middle ground fallacy / false compromise? Isn't it possible one editor is right and the other is wrong? IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 05:02, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Yes, but if that is the case, moderated discussion would not be able to determine it. If you or one of them are confident you are absolutely right, an RfC is the appropriate venue. If you have more questions or concerns about how I am moderating this discussion, please bring them to my user talk page instead. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 05:24, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    SuperNinja2

    Mukokuseki (Japanese: 無国籍, translated as "statelessness" or "nationlessness") is a Japanese term describing fictional characters in visual media depicted with racially ambiguous features, without a concrete ethnicity or nationality. It is commonly invoked in visual media, including anime and manga, such as when a character is described as having neutral features. It is thought to be particularly significant in the context of marketing of entertainment properties towards non-Japanese audiences.

    I removed the part that talks about foreign influence because the source did not say that Mukokuseki implies foreign elements in the characters but rather says the characters appear neutral. And it did not say that Mukokuseki is a result of foreign influence on Japanese culture either. I tried to find an alternative for "stereotypical western characteristics" but couldn't find one in any source. ☆SuperNinja2☆ 16:23, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Third statement by moderator (Mukokuseki)

    I am now asking SuperNinja2 read the current version of the article, and Orchastrattor her draft, and explain why (if at all) you object to said version, or the editor's rationale for the changes. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 00:53, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    They've explained their position multiple times at this point. @Super ninja2, you might just start a Request for Comment at the Mukokuseki talk page. IOHANNVSVERVS (talk) 01:04, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    If you do not wish to participate constructively here, you can leave. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 01:33, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I will consider that. Thank you so much for the advice! I appreciate it. ☆SuperNinja2☆ TALK! 12:03, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Volunteer Comment - If an editor has an objection to the moderator's moderating style, they can raise their questions here, in the discussion. Robert McClenon (talk) 21:17, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Third statements by parties (Mukokuseki)

    Lead 2 (Orchastrattor)

    "[W]hat is interpreted as ‘without nationality’ [direct translation of mukokuseki] is actually very much imbued with Euro-American culture or race" Christine Yano, quoted by Birlea Oana-Maria.[1]

    "Yano argues that [the setting of Hello Kitty in London] can still be considered mukokuseki because in most cases, anything but a white, Anglo-Saxon, Protestant is considered “ethnic culture” by most people." Newspaper review paraphrasing Yano's work directly.[2]

    "[I]t gets interesting [...] when there is a large cast of Asian characters, and one of them -- usually the lead character [...] -- looks more like a Caucasian character [...] [A] Caucasian-looking lead character among a Japanese-looking cast" From CBR magazine.[3]

    Superninja has changed their interpretation of the above sources multiple times throughout the dispute but these clearly support the interpretation given in the current version. Yano is a reputable expert on Asian studies, there is zero reason to think she is some sort of embattled minority on the subject, especially if she is being cited this directly by other reputable publications. CBR is also helpful as a more popular article on the same subject with a more niche interpretation but was excluded from the current version of the lead to avoid refbombing.

    Admittedly the prose naming 'neutrality' directly was moved away from the lead by the fourth party so it could be workshopped back in, but that is still just three different perspectives, perfectly reasonable to include especially in a lead that now has as much room for expansion as the one in question.

    The "might otherwise be assumed to be [...]" is also something I would really like to keep, mukokuseki as a subject would be meaningless if it didn't somehow deviate from what Japanese people might be expected to depict themselves as. Orchastrattor (talk) 03:46, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Lead 2 (SuperNinja2)

    I think that the lead mentions Yano's unique POV on the subject and favors it over many other sources that think otherwise without good reason. There is at least one source that says: "Although it is true that such anime characters do not necessarily adhere to the usual Japanese phenotype, it would be false to infer that, because of this, such characters look “Western” or “Caucasian.” Rather, the characters look nationless, but the lead mentions only Yano's. Why is that? That sentence is disputed between sources in top of being controversial, so it should be discussed further and it should be represented with other POVs in order to meet WP:DUE and the lead is not the place for that. And I would like to add that even Yano agrees with other sources on that "Mukokuseki means characters without a concrete ethnicity or nationality" but she adds and analyze this idea further and deeper to say: what is interpreted as ‘without nationality’ is actually very much imbued with Euro-American culture or race. So we can safely say that all the sources including Yano agree on the definition I suggested. But analyzing of the details shouldn't be in the lead. That is why I suggest analyzing it in its own section. The lead is supposed to give an overview of the subject and is not supposed to be trafficked with extra information. And not to mention the wording itself (stereotypical western characteristics) which is not even used by Yano and is very misleading.

    And regarding the part at the bottom of the lead that talks about foreign influence, it should be removed because the source that is cited to it did not say that Mukokuseki implies foreign elements in the characters but rather says the characters appear neutral. And it did not say that Mukokuseki is a result of foreign influence on Japanese culture either. ☆SuperNinja2☆ TALK! 12:19, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Fourth statement by moderator (Mukokuseki)

    Based on the statements given, please propose a compromise draft of the lead. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 16:59, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Up until this point, all three parties have seem to have made it quite clear they are not convinced by the opposing arguments. If no discernible progress is made towards a resolution soon, an RfC may be the appropriate venue for this dispute. Snowmanonahoe (talk · contribs · typos) 17:01, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Fourth statements by parties (Mukokuseki)

    The current lead already names "stereotypically Western" and "racially ambiguous" as two different, opposing ways to describe the subject, either one with two or more sources throughout the article that can be drawn up to support them. Superninja is being factually and obviously incorrect when they claim Yano's work is the only one being represented in the current version. Superninja also claims this idea to be unique to Yano when as I laid out in plain English her interpretation is being repeated without any further commentary by other authors, and is echoed very closely by CBR. Thirdly Superninja misinterprets the source based on their partisan interpretation (as demonstrated in their first edit to the article) of "neutrality" as the default viewpoint that other perspectives must subscribe to, when the sources instead portray Yano's conclusion as being that something lacking "concrete nationality or ethnicity" is not the same as being neutral, all three perspectives of Western, ambiguous, and neutral have to be included with equal prominence in order to preserve neutral point of view.

    Those three perspectives were specifically the three I laid out in my third statement as my new, theoretical preferred version, where I offered to actively workshop the lead with Superninja to paper over a technicality introduced by an uninvolved editor; I fail to understand what the moderator means when they say I did not attempt to compromise with my opponent. I have not once yet failed to meet the moderator's demands, I just have nothing left to compromise on.

    Superninja on the other hand, has failed to address my repeated attempts to explain how the second sentence improves the current version; The point of an encyclopedic lead is to allow the reader to conceptualize and recognize the subject for themselves, naming the different perspectives directly is not only entirely non-exhaustive in terms of how much information is being conveyed, but is also the only non-controversial option to describe the subject in any capacity beyond the dictionary definition while also allowing the reader to frame the information in the rest of the article through those core perspectives.

    "Western" is also plainly synonymous with "Euro-American culture or race", just contracted to fit the sentence structure. Superninja has dodged concerns over COMPETENCE in understanding of English before and I believe the moderator should account for whether or not there is a language barrier of some kind when evaluating my attempts to compromise with my opponent. Orchastrattor (talk) 05:03, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    The final sentence of the lead is also plainly stating that foreign influences are a context in which the sources analyze the subject, plainly seen in the very first sentence of the cited source, which frames the entire essay around "the [...] ability of the Japanese to adapt foreign elements". I don't understand how I am expected to compromise with someone this repeatedly incapable of interpreting basic elements of the article and sources they are arguing about. Orchastrattor (talk) 05:13, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Mukokuseki (...) is a Japanese term describing fictional characters depicted without a concrete ethnicity or nationality, particularly in anime and manga. It is commonly invoked in criticism of Japanese media, such as when a character is perceived as having racially ambiguous, culturally "neutral", or stereotypically Western characteristics in a setting where they might otherwise be assumed to be ethnically Japanese. It is thought to be particularly significant in the context of foreign influences on Japanese entertainment properties as well as the subsequent marketing of such properties towards non-Japanese audiences.
    I have done everything in my power to address Superninja's underlying concerns and personal viewpoints, opening an RFC at this point would just be rewarding them for failing to engage with the basic processes of wikipedia. Orchastrattor (talk) 05:33, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    To elaborate on my first paragraph, if Yano is describing the subject as "imbued with" a particular cultural group then that is obviously antonymous with the subject being culturally neutral; Superninja is playing rules lawyer over whether or not Yano specifically uses the words "Western" or "European" in her work but appears to have absolutely zero issue with putting words in Yano's mouth when it comes to supporting their own viewpoint of "culturally neutral" instead. Orchastrattor (talk) 02:09, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    WP:TLDR, but thanks anyway for responding. ☆SuperNinja2☆ TALK! 02:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Lead 3 (SuperNinja2)

    I don't think this is going to work. I think starting an RfC might be a better option. Thank you so much, User:Snowmanonahoe, you did a really good job! Thanks to everyone who participated in this discussion. Hope we reach a consensus in RfC. ☆SuperNinja2☆ TALK! 02:40, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    1. ^ Oana-Maria, Birlea. "Hybridity in Japanese Advertising Discourse", Acta Universitatis Sapientiae: Philologica, Vol. 11, no. 2, pp. 55 – 71, December 2019.
    2. ^ Nakagawa, Martha. "Analyzation and critique of a cute global character", Review of Pink Globalization: Hello Kitty’s Trek Across the Pacific by Christine R. Yano, Nichi Bei News. 23 July 2015. Retrieved 25 March 2024.
    3. ^ Altiok, Revna. "What Is Mukokuseki in Anime – And Why Is It Important?" from Comic Book Resources, 24 June 2022.

    Death of Nex Benedict

    – General close. See comments for reasoning.
    Filed by Sawerchessread on 20:57, 31 March 2024 (UTC).[reply]


    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Closed discussion

    Kathleen Kennedy (producer)

    – General close. See comments for reasoning.
    Filed by Xam2580 on 00:06, 2 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]
    Closed discussion

    Jinn

    – New discussion.
    Filed by Louis P. Boog on 16:19, 4 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]


    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

    Location of dispute

    Users involved

    Dispute overview

    I've made two attempts to include mention of belief in jinn being considered a necessary part of belief in Islam according to some scholars. Both were completely reverted by VenusFeuerFalle, one of several deletions he has made of edit I've made to Islamic articles in the past month or so.

    Specifically the dispute is over
    1) whether this statement should be allowed in the lede

    Many Muslim scholars, believe that belief in Jinn is essential to the Islamic faith, since jinn are mentioned in the Quran.[1](p33)

    2) whether revivalist preacher Abul A'la Maududi should be included among two other scholars listed who support this position (i.e. belief in Jinn is a necessary part of Islam). (The point here being that Maududi has/had a huge following and readership);

    3) and whether as evidence of the significance of this belief, a brief description of the troubles of Nasr Abu Zayd "who was threated with death for apostasy" in the 1990s "(in part) because he didn't believe in jinn", should be included in the article. (The significance here is that belief in the apostasy of Nasr Abu Zayd in his country (Egypt) was so widespread that even one of the police officers guarding his house referred to him as a "kafir" when asked about him).

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    Make some sort of determination or recommendation as to whether my deleted edits are good for the article, or if not why not, i.e.what wikipedia rules they do not follow.

    Summary of dispute by VenusFeuerFalle

    Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.
    The requested information is already part of the article and well-cited: "Belief in jinn is not included among the six articles of Islamic faith, as belief in angels is. Nontheless, many Muslim scholars, including the Hanbalī scholar ibn Taymiyya and the Ẓāhirī scholar ibn Hazm, believe they are essential to the Islamic faith, since they are mentioned in the Quran." (Nünlist, Tobias (2015). Dämonenglaube im Islam [Demonic Belief in Islam] (in German). Walter de Gruyter GmbH & Co KG.) I do not see why a more precise statement should be replaced by a more vague (some scholars) statement. VenusFeuerFalle (talk) 21:48, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Jinn discussion

    Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.
    (Reply to comment by VenusFeuerFalle) I did not replace other statements, I added to them. Included Maududi to the list of scholars who "insist belief in jinn is essential to the Islamic faith" and added the case of Nasr_Abu_Zayd as an example of why the issue matters.
    Belief in jinn is not included among the six articles of Islamic faith, as belief in angels is. Nontheless, many Muslim scholars, including the Hanbalī scholar ibn Taymiyya, the Ẓāhirī scholar ibn Hazm, and revivalist preacher Abul A'la Maududi,[a] insist belief in jinn is essential to the Islamic faith, since they are mentioned in the Quran.[1](p33)[3] (Egyptian Prof. Nasr Abu Zayd went into exile from Egypt after being accused of apostasy, in part for his alleged disbelief in Jinn)[4]
    (PS, I was waiting for a noticifcation of comments in the Dispute Resolution and did not get any, hence my slow reply) --Louis P. Boog (talk) 15:48, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Jinn)

    I am ready to moderate this dispute if it is necessary. Please read DRN Rule A. The purpose of content discussion is to improve the article and so improve the encyclopedia. Please state concisely what you want to change in the article, or what you want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. It appears that there may not be a significant disagreement, if one editor wants to say that some Islamic scholars consider belief in jinn to be necessary to Islamic belief, and another editor wants to attribute that statement to a specific Islamic scholar. But state what you consider to be the content issue. Robert McClenon (talk) 14:59, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Zeroth statements by editors (Jinn)

    Climate change

    – Discussion in progress.
    Filed by InformationToKnowledge on 09:19, 18 March 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Have you discussed this on a talk page?

    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

    Location of dispute

    Users involved

    Dispute overview

    Me and another editor have hit multiple points of persistent disagreement regarding the structure of a key section, currently named "Food and health". We also cannot agree on how to incorporate a third editor's suggestions.

    1) How many sentences should we devote to breaking down the WHO's 2014 estimate of increased mortality caused by climate change (approximately 250,000 extra annual deaths over the next 20 years)? One editor additionally argues this estimate may be too outdated to belong in a top-level article.

    2) In particular, whether extreme weather deserves separate mention as a threat to life and health in this particular section, or if it is sufficient that it is mentioned in the other sections?

    3) What is the best way to phrase the sentence which discusses that areas of the globe where "life-threatening conditions" due to increased extreme heat/humidity would occur are projected to increase?

    4) Should this section in an FA article use exclusively secondary sources, even when the secon are forced to omit notable findings from recent primary sources?

    5) Whether we should first note that crop yields have been increasing over time due to agricultural improvements before noting the adverse impacts of climate change on these yields?

    6) Whether it's necessary to mention differing impacts by latitude, particularly when the reliable secondary sources can only support vague wording, or if it is best to avoid mentioning latitudes entirely?

    7) Do we need to mention the impacts of climate change on livestock production, and in how much detail?

    8) How much detail should we devote to food security projections between now and 2050, and the differences under various scenarios?

    9) Should we use year 2050 or 2040 for projections after midcentury?

    10) Should we keep this section limited to 2 paragraphs, or does it deserve 4? Larger size would make it more likely primary references are used, or that there are cuts from other parts of the article.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    Talk:Climate_change#Food_and_health (the section was started on the 1st of February, and is now very large, with three sizeable subsections.)

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    I would like to see uninvolved editors with the experience at Dispute Resolution help to arrive on a WP:CONS in regards to all of these details.

    Summary of dispute by Bogazicili

    Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

    This dispute is about the two paragraphs in Climate_change#Food_and_health subsection. Some issues:

    1) Opening sentences for the section such as "Extreme weather events affect public health". InformationToKnowledge said these are " too general and colourless" [1]. However, reliable and overview sources mention these: (bottom chart) [2] [3] [4]

    2) InformationToKnowledge doesn't want a general sentence about infectious diseases, even though this is also mentioned by reliable sources. Instead they seem to prefer ONLY a specific WHO study, but that study only looked at a small subset of issues. So just using WHO numbers (250k deaths per year) and info is not comprehensive.

    3) InformationToKnowledge prefers too specific information, whereas I prefer more top level information. For example, InformationToKnowledge prefers information from page 797 of this report, whereas I prefer information from pages 14-15 (from the Summary for Policymakers section which gives an overview summary for laypeople).

    I have also made a compromise offer to InformationToKnowledge [5]. The latest suggestions and my compromise text are here Talk:Climate_change#Latest_suggestions. Bogazicili (talk) 20:37, 18 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Agree to DRN Rule D Bogazicili (talk) 06:06, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Summary of dispute by EMsmile

    Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

    Climate change discussion

    Please keep discussion to a minimum before being opened by a volunteer. Continue on article talk page if necessary.


    Zeroth statement by possible moderator (Climate Change)

    I am ready to act as the moderator for this dispute. Please read DRN Rule D. If you want to take part in moderated discussion, please state that you agree to comply with DRN Rule D. Climate change is a contentious topic, and is subject to the ArbCom decision on climate change. I will repeat a few points from the rules. Do not edit the article while it is being discussed. Be civil and concise. Comment on content, not contributors. Do not engage in back-and-forth discussion. You have already done that, and it has been civil but extremely lengthy, and has not resolved the issues. So address your answers to the community, and to the moderator (me) on behalf of the community. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:50, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    It appears that there are a long list of points mentioned. So I will ask each editor to list no more than three points that they want to change in the article, or points that they want to leave the same that another editor wants to change. We can then work on one or two of them. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:50, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Zeroth statements by editors (Climate change)

    @Robert McClenon: thanks for agreeing to take this dispute. Agreed to DRN Rule D above. Do you need me to trim my statement as well? I had tried to make 3 points. The rest are background info (such as compromise offer, proposed texts etc). My text is closer to the existing article text, as I want to keep general opening sentences in the first paragraph. There were multiple text proposals, my later proposals have diverged more from the current as I tried to accommodate InformationToKnowledge's suggestions. Just FYI, there is a separate conversation at the article talk page here [6], but this is completely unrelated to the dispute that is here. Bogazicili (talk) 06:17, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I know there shouldn't be a back and forth between editors, but I do not like my views being misrepresented. I did not agree that this [7] is "the most reliable source on projected changes". IPCC sources also needs to be taken into account. Bogazicili (talk) 09:29, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Robert McClenon, btw, by "do not edit the article", you mean the disputed part only right? Bogazicili (talk) 17:57, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @Robert McClenon: Thank you for choosing to moderate this dispute. I agree to abide by DRN Rule D. It seems that the other editor's summary is already limited to three points, which isn't as much of a surprise, as their position is more conservative with respect to the existing text. As the party which wants more extensive changes to the article, it falls to me to focus on the most important areas.

    1. Paragraph structure and "flow": Bogazicili's preferred structure for the first paragraph of the disputed section is similar to the current one. So, first this sentence: The World Health Organization (WHO) calls climate change the greatest threat to global health in the 21st century. Then, several short and very general sentences such as Extreme weather leads to injury and loss of life. (current text) or Extreme weather events affect public health (his latest suggestion), or Both children and older people are vulnerable to extreme heat (current)/Temperature extremes lead to increased illness and death (latest suggestion.) Then, a sentence which says that the WHO estimated additional 250,000 annual climate-related deaths for the 2030-2050 period and lists every cause they assessed. I think this is poor writing, and would much prefer that we mention the WHO annual mortality estimate in the second sentence, and then either write about causes assessed in more detail than the short sentences he favours, or not at all.
    2. Food security projections: Both of us have already agreed to use this meta-analysis from 2021 as the most reliable source on projected changes in food security between now and 2050, but we disagree on how to cite it. Bogazicili's suggested wording is By 2050, climate change may affect tens to hundreds of millions of people in terms of undernourishment and nutrition-related diseases; change in population at risk of hunger may be positive or negative depending on several climate change and socioeconomic scenarios. I think that this is far too wordy, poorly structured and fundamentally doesn't represent the reference well. Graphs from the reference (here and here) show near-universal declines in food insecurity, so my proposed wording is: By 2050, the number of people suffering from undernourishment and the associated health conditions is likely to decrease by tens to hundreds of millions, but some combinations of severe climate change and low socioeconomic development may increase that number instead. Similarly, I want to explicitly mention the growth in crop yields till now (reference) as a necessary background for this section, while Bogazicili considers it out of scope.
    3. What counts as "excessive" detail: I.e. Bogazicili wants to mention effects on crop production by latitudes, but I find it challenging to do it in a sentence without being vague. Conversely, I want to address impacts on livestock production (currently not mentioned in the article), but Bogazicili finds my wording too detailed and keeps omitting any mention of those impacts. It even extends to reference choice: i.e. Bogazicili claims that IPCC summaries are preferable to full IPCC reports, which is not a position I have never heard of. I oppose this position when it weakens our wording (i.e. timelines becoming inconsistent, such as using 2050 in one sentence and 2040 in another) for the supposed benefit of the very few people who'll click on those specific references out of 400+ already in the article.

    I hope that this summary meets your expectations. InformationToKnowledge (talk) 09:14, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]


    First statement by moderator (Climate Change)

    If the editors who are taking part in this discussion agree that they are only requesting moderated discussion about the Food and health subsection, then the rule against editing the document can be revised not to edit the subsection. So my first question is whether the content dispute is only about that subsection.

    If that is the only area being discussed, then, instead of discussing point-by-point, I will ask each editor to write their own version of the Food and health section in the spaces provided. After I see the two rewritten sections, I will decide what the next step is. Robert McClenon (talk) 00:41, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    First statements by editors (Climate change)

    Food and health (InformationToKnowledge)

    @Robert McClenon: Indeed, the dispute is limited to that subsection only.

    This is my preferred version:

    The World Health Organization (WHO) calls climate change the greatest threat to global health in the 21st century.[8] It has estimated that between 2030 and 2050, climate change would cause around 250,000 additional deaths per year due to impacts such as increased levels of extreme heat, greater frequency of extreme weather events and changes in disease transmission.[9] Lethal infectious diseases such as dengue fever and malaria are more easily transmitted in a warmer climate.[10] [11] 30% of the global population currently live in areas where extreme heat and humidity are already associated with excess deaths.[12] By 2100, 50% to 75% of the global population would live in such areas.[13]p. 988

    Agricultural and socioeconomic changes had been increasing global crop yields since the middle of the 20th century,[14] but climate change has already slowed the rate of yield growth.p.9 Extreme weather events adversely affect both food and water security, and climate change increases their frequency.p.9 Fisheries have been negatively affected in various regions.p.9 By 2050, the number of people suffering from undernourishment and the associated health conditions is likely to decrease by tens to hundreds of millions, but some combinations of severe climate change and low socioeconomic development may increase that number instead.[15] Under higher warming, global livestock headcounts could decline by 7-10% by 2050, as less animal feed will be available.p.748 If the emissions remain high, food availability will likely decrease after 2050 due to diminishing fisheries and livestock counts, and due to more frequent and severe crop failures.p.797

    InformationToKnowledge (talk) 05:09, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Food and health (Bogazilici)

    @Robert McClenon: yes, the dispute is only about Food and health subsection, which has two paragraphs currently.

    Here's my suggestion:

    The World Health Organization (WHO) calls climate change the greatest threat to global health in the 21st century.[16] Extreme weather events affect public health.[17][18] Temperature extremes lead to increased illness and death.[19][20] Climate change can affect transmission of infectious diseases.[21] [22] The WHO has estimated that between 2030 and 2050, climate change would cause around 250,000 additional deaths per year due to increases in diarrhea, malaria, dengue, coastal flooding, childhood malnutrition, and heat exposure in elderly people.[23] By 2100, 50% to 75% of the global population may face climate conditions that are life-threatening due to combined effects of extreme heat and humidity,[24]p. 988 which currently affects 30% of the global population.[25]

    Despite overall increase in agricultural productivity, climate change has reduced water and food security, and has curtailed agricultural productivity growth.p.9 Agricultural productivity was negatively affected in mid- and low-latitude areas, while various high latitude areas were positively affected. p.9 Fisheries have been negatively affected in multiple regions.p.9 By 2050, climate change may affect tens to hundreds of millions of people in terms of undernourishment and nutrition-related diseases;p.60 change in population at risk of hunger may be positive or negative depending on several climate change and socioeconomic scenarios.[26] Depending on climate change trajectories, there will be increasing risks to food and water availability, and human health beyond 2040.pp. 14-15.

    Bogazicili (talk) 18:28, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Second statement by moderator (Climate Change)

    I will be looking at the draft subsections in more detail shortly. In the meantime, I will ask each editor to comment briefly on the other editor's draft. In particular, can you accept the other editor's draft? If not, please give a brief explanation of what you object to in the other editor's statement. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:03, 29 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]


    Second statements by editors (Climate change)

    Bogazicili

    I'm against InformationToKnowledge's draft because:
    1) It's misleading. Portrays WHO numbers as pretty much comprehensive ("greater frequency of extreme weather events and changes in disease transmission"), whereas WHO looks at only a small subset of issues (small subset of disease transmission for example). For example IPCC also predicted "nine million climate-related deaths per year are projected by the end of the century" (high emissions scenario) [IPCC AR6 WG2 Technical Summary p. 63]. Therefore, general opening sentences are preferable, rather than merging everything with the WHO study.
    2) It's against NPOV. For the sentence that starts with "By 2050, the number of people suffering from undernourishment and the associated health conditions is likely...", it only uses a single source, ignoring IPCC.
    3) It's cherry picked. Uses p.797 in the concluding sentence to justify it's wording, rather than using an overview from Summary for Policymakers section (pages 14-15).
    I'm ok with this part: 30% of the global population currently live in areas where extreme heat and humidity are already associated with excess deaths.[22] By 2100, 50% to 75% of the global population would live in such areas.[23]p. 988 Bogazicili (talk) 11:12, 30 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    InformationToKnowledge

    I oppose Bogazicili's draft for the following reasons:

    1) Issues with paragraph structure and sentence construction/wordiness which make it more difficult to understand. I consider those issues fairly self-evident (i.e. inconsistencies such as "climate change has reduced water and food security, and have curtailed" or run-on sentences like the second-to-last one about projections by 2050), and this difference can even be quantified. According to one of the Readability tools we have been advised to use, Bogazicili's draft ranks almost 10 points below mine in terms of readability.

    2) No mention of livestock - a sector of food supply which is, rightly or wrongly, a core part of billions of people's diet, provides 30% of the global protein supply and supports the livelihood of 400 million people.[27]

    3) Inconsistencies with dates. Again, I think it would be confusing to readers when the penultimate sentence talks about events between now and year 2050, and the final sentence is about the events after year 2040. There is literally no reason for this besides preferring different parts of the same report. Further, the opening sentence of his second paragraph's draft also has issues with dating. Despite overall increase in agricultural productivity, climate change has reduced water and food security, and have curtailed agricultural productivity growth. "Increase in agricultural productivity" since when? "Reduced water and food security" since when or perhaps, relative to what year? My version of that sentence should not lead to such questions.

    4) Likewise, too many sentences raise more questions than answers. I.e. while various high latitude areas were positively affected. (What does "various" mean? Which areas does actually refer to? What percentage all of all high latitude areas is included in there?) Or By 2050, climate change may affect tens to hundreds of millions of people in terms of undernourishment and nutrition-related diseases; change in population at risk of hunger may be positive or negative depending on several climate change and socioeconomic scenarios. Firstly, this sentence says climate change may affect (i.e. the implication is that it may not do anything at all?), then the rough numerical range tens to hundreds of millions of people is immediately followed by may be positive or negative and depending on several climate change and socioeconomic scenarios. How many scenarios are "several"? Do we really think a reader who has not ever looked at an IPCC report or a climate paper before is going to grasp the full meaning of "climate change and socioeconomic scenario"? This sentence risks giving the impression to readers that climate change itself can cause positive change as far as the risk of hunger is concerned. It also risks suggesting that the scientists know so little about the changes in hunger projected in 30 years' time that any estimate could be off by hundreds of millions of people. This is not a good summary of either the Nature source we have both agreed to use or even of the IPCC page he cites for that sentence (and I don't, because the methodologies are not compatible.) Both estimates are precise to the closest million for the specific scenarios, and my draft makes this come across much, much better.


    I can adopt the sentence in Bogazicili's draft which mentions latitudes if we can find better language than "various high latitude areas". InformationToKnowledge (talk) 11:56, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]


    Third statement by possible moderator (Climate Change)

    I am now asking each editor to read the criticisms that the other editor has of their draft, and to write a revised draft, taking into account the criticisms that the other editor has raised. I will then read the revised drafts more carefully than I have so far, and will make an assessment as to whether I think that there is enough convergence so that a compromise is possible. Otherwise the community will be asked to choose between the two revised versions by a Request for Comments.

    Are there any other questions, or any other content issues? Robert McClenon (talk) 22:41, 1 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Third statements by editors (Climate change)

    Food and health second draft (InformationToKnowledge)

    I'll begin by responding to the last question posed. As I mentioned earlier, the other questions/content issues regarding this section are: 1) Should it be made larger (approximately doubled, from two paragraphs to four) and split into distinct two-paragraph sections; 2) Whether we should continue using the 2014 WHO estimate. Both points were initially raised by @EMsmile:. This was the reason why I included her when logging the DRN request, but she has not participated in the discussion so far.

    When we have last discussed these suggestions with Bogazilici, he was skeptical about the idea of doubling the section, but did not outright oppose it. He was mainly insistent that only secondary sources are used. He was also open to replacing the WHO estimate, but his only suggestion was a quote from the IPCC which focused on a different timescale (2100) and was more complementary then a true alternative.

    In my new, four-paragraph draft, I chose to both add this IPCC statement and to replace the WHO estimate with a more up-to-date alternative - the WEF estimate of climate change impacts on human health from January this year. I have also tried to accommodate Bogazicili's preferences in other ways. So, he insisted on a general sentence about extreme weather and health: my draft now includes several specific projections. There are two sentences devoted to impacts on agriculture by latitude instead of one in his draft and zero in my previous one. At the same time, I strove to add more detail and several important factors are discussed for the first time. These are:

    • hypertension indirectly caused by coastal flooding
    • mortality from wildfires
    • impact on mental health
    • total healthcare costs
    • impact on cash crops
    • impact on pests and crop pathogens
    • impact on food prices
    • Stunting caused by childhood malnutrition


    Human health

    The World Health Organization (WHO) calls climate change the greatest threat to global health in the 21st century.[28] Over 100 scientists writing in The Lancet have warned about the irreversible harms it poses.[29] According to the World Economic Forum, the most likely future scenario is of 14.5 million deaths caused by climate change by 2050.[30] Of those, 8.5 million deaths are associated with flooding, mostly because flooded areas expand the range of malaria. By 2050, the range of vector-borne diseases may expand to reach 500 million more people. Saltwater intrusion caused by sea level rise will also add over 800,000 cases of hypertension in coastal areas.[31]

    Under the same scenario, around 1.6 million people will die in heatwaves by 2050, primarily those aged 65 and older, and 300,000 more will be killed by wildfires.[32] 30% of the global population currently live in areas where extreme heat and humidity are already associated with excess deaths.[33] By 2100, 50% to 75% of the global population would live in such areas.[34]p. 988 These and other climate change impacts are also expected to substantially increase the burden of stress-related mental health conditions.[35] The overall healthcare costs from climate change impacts would exceed 1$ trillion by 2050.[36] If the emissions continue to increase for the rest of century, then over 9 million climate-related deaths would occur annually by 2100.p.63

    Food supply

    Climate change has strong impacts on agriculture in the low latitudes, where it threatens both staple crops and important cash crops like cocoa and coffee.p.788 Agriculture will experience yield gains at high latitudes, but will also become more vulnerable to pests and pathogens.p.794 Extreme weather events adversely affect both food and water security, and climate change increases their frequency.p.9 Food prices spike after climate shocks.p.794 An increase in drought in certain regions could cause 3.2 million deaths from malnutrition by 2050, primarily in children under five. Many more children would grow up stunted as the result.[37] Under higher warming, global livestock headcounts could decline by 7-10% by 2050, as less animal feed will be available.p.748 Marine animal biomass decreases by 5% with every degree of warming, reducing fishery yields.p.718

    Yet, while climate change has already slowed the rate of yield growth,p.9 total crop yields have been increasing since the middle of the 20th century due to agricultural improvements.[38] By 2050, the number of people suffering from undernourishment and the associated health conditions is likely to decrease by tens to hundreds of millions.[39] Food security only worsens by 2050 in some combinations of severe climate change and low socioeconomic development,[40] but if the emissions remain high, it will likely decrease after 2050. This would be due to diminishing fisheries and livestock counts, and due to more frequent and severe crop failures.p.797

    I'll also note that this draft has a higher Readability score than the current text of that section, and much higher than either of our previous drafts.

    Food and health second draft (Bogazilici)

    Bump so this doesn't get archived, will add my revised suggestion later Bogazicili (talk) 16:28, 8 April 2024 (UTC) Bump Bogazicili (talk) 23:27, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Back-and-forth discussion (Climate change)

    References

    1. ^ a b Cite error: The named reference Nünlist-2015 was invoked but never defined (see the help page).
    2. ^ Maududi, Syed Abu-Ala'. "72. Jinn. Reality of Jinn". Syed Abu-Ala' Maududi's Chapter Introductions to the Quran. International Islamic University of Malaysia. Retrieved 12 March 2024.
    3. ^ see also:El-Zein, Amira (2009). Islam, Arabs, and the Intelligent World of the Jinn. Syracuse, NY: Syracuse University Press. p. x. Retrieved 10 March 2024. ... although belief in the jinn is not one of the five pillars of Islam, one can't be a Muslim if he/she doesn't have faith in their existence because they are mentioned in the Qur'an and the prophetic tradition.
    4. ^ Cook, Michael (2000). The Koran: A very short introduction. Oxford University Press. pp. 46–47. ISBN 0-19-285344-9.

    Sand War

    – General close. See comments for reasoning.
    Filed by Katangais on 02:25, 7 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]
    Closed discussion

    Buck-Tick

    – General close. See comments for reasoning.
    Filed by Weiqwbo on 09:09, 8 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]
    Closed discussion

    Talk:LiveJasmin#Latest proposed_"Controversy"_section_improved_after_a_number_of_suggestions_from_the_community

    – New discussion.
    Filed by Alexfotios on 21:20, 9 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]

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    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

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    The issue is whether the latest version of the proposed article session Talk:LiveJasmin#Latest_proposed_"Controversy"_section_improved_after_a_number_of_suggestions_from_the_community should be added to the LiveJasmin page or not. For discussion and background please see talk page sections above this one.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    Talk:LiveJasmin#Controversy Talk:LiveJasmin#Latest Proposed Controversy Section Talk:LiveJasmin#Proposed RfC Talk:LiveJasmin#Latest proposed "Controversy" section after a number of suggestions

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    Please advise whether Talk:LiveJasmin#Latest_proposed_"Controversy"_section_improved_after_a_number_of_suggestions_from_the_community is worthy of inclusion to the article and whether it complies with WP rules and etiquette. Thank you!

    Summary of dispute by Ohnoitsjamie

    Please keep it brief - less than 2000 characters if possible, it helps us help you quicker.

    Summary of dispute by Seraphimblade

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    • This editor has already been told by, at my count, four experienced editors that their proposed addition is not appropriate, with no one except this editor disagreeing with that assessment. At this point their continuing to push at the issue is becoming disruptive, and I do not have any intent of participating in further "dispute resolution" on the matter. You got your answer. I realize it wasn't the one you hoped for, but it's still the answer. Time to move on. Seraphimblade Talk to me 21:27, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Summary of dispute by Avgeekamfot

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    Got involved in this after being pinged by the feedback request bot. Not sure why it's still being discussed since pretty much everyone except Alexfotios agrees that this content isn't appropriate. Avgeekamfot (talk) 04:07, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Summary of dispute by IOHANNVSVERVS

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    Summary of dispute by Herostratus

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    Adding the content is fine with me. What I want to hear is if it's not true. It it's true, it's fine. Can't hurt to present it to the reader and let her decide if she thinks it too trivial to care about or not. The reader is not an idiot. The article is not too long. If you want to make the argument "Well it is true, but we don't want the reader to know these facts" make it, and good luck. Throwing around accusations of "disruptive" is only OK if you're in the right. Are you? And "four experienced editors" doesn't impress me much on this subject, because... oops out of space. Herostratus (talk) 02:08, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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    Talk:LiveJasmin#Latest proposed_"Controversy"_section_improved_after_a_number_of_suggestions_from_the_community discussion

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    Djong (ship)

    – New discussion.
    Filed by Merzostin on 14:12, 10 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]

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    Yes, I have discussed this issue on a talk page already.

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    Disagreement about removing problematic misinformation quote WP:LIE, which deliberately used a quote out of context to mislead readers. It also tried to fabricate real history by passing off description of Chinese ships to describe the Javanese ships.

    I have removed the quote, but was then reverted, this quote was pretty famous and used in many publication to describe Chinese ships so i have provided multiple evidences to show that it was indeed quote of Chinese ships, but the editor continue to deny it while didn't provide a single credible evidence on how he think it could be Javanese ships and also continue to use the distorted quote rather than the real quote from the real source.

    How have you tried to resolve this dispute before coming here?

    Talk:Djong (ship)#Zhou Qufei, Lingwai Daida

    How do you think we can help resolve the dispute?

    with fact checking the evidence and then removed the misinformation and hoax, which aren't allowed on Wikipedia.

    Summary of dispute by Nitekuzee

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    Djong (ship) discussion

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