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Gaza Health Ministry

Some non-involved editors would be welcome at Gaza Health Ministry.

The context is essentially

• Israel and the US expressed unspecific doubts about GHM's casualty data.
• Organizations like the UN say the GHM's data has historically been reliable.
• Two peer-reviewed articles published in The Lancet did not find evidence of inflated or fabricated data. (Edit: turns out the articles are "correspondence" and not peer reviewed, see here and here.)
• Later, statistics professor Abraham Wyner wrote in Tablet (magazine) that the data contained irregularities, such as a strong negative correlation between male and female deaths.
• Later still, Michael Spagat wrote about GHM's "declining data quality", explained by a shift to user-submitted reports as hospitals have closed.

The current lede is unbalanced, emphasizing the sources that say the data is reliable, while not mentioning opposing viewpoints at all. My various attempts to include brief mentions of the latter (even just "received significant attention and scrutiny") have been reverted.

The argument seems to be that the two peer-reviewed Lancet articles trump non-peer-reviewed sources, making opposing viewpoints somewhat fringe. However, the two Lancet articles are older, and focused on very different aspects of the data. In some sense they support opposing narratives, but they absolutely don't contradict one another.

The current article also quotes a blog comment by "Ken M", with speculation about how the irregularities noted by Wyner might be explained. My attempt to remove that was reverted as well. — xDanielx ^T/_C\^R 17:56, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

I think you might want to reflect on the concept of Materiality (auditing). No source I've seen thinks the GHM data is dramatically wrong. It's even possible that it's an undercount (e.g., bodies that haven't been found in the rubble yet). WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:56, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

I agree an undercount is plausible. No reliable sources really claim that the total is clearly inflated, just that it shouldn't be considered very reliable, especially recent data from the current war.

Some milder versions of this viewpoint are very mainstream, even uncontroversial. E.g. The Telegraph factually notes that (at the time) ~54% of the data was from hospital sources, with the rest coming from a combination of media sources and a Google form.

I suppose reasonable editors can disagree about materiality, but I think there are also very objective problems here, such as

• Framing Roberts' article as a refutation of Wyner's, when it doesn't discuss Wyner's arguments at all, only mentions it once in passing
• Using two blog comments to counter some of Wyner's arguments, one from an anonymous "Ken M" with unknown credibility

There has been significant resistance to fixing even the most clear issues like these. — xDanielx ^T/_C\^R 18:05, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

Those blogs are by professors, the first by Lior Pachter, a professor of statistics who dismissed the first argument. The Ken M comment is not in because of whoever they are but because James Joyner, a professor of security studies, said it showed insight. Professor Les Roberts, who is an expert in such matters, has like you say just one comment on Wyner's article - right in the lead: "Israel’s U.N. ambassador and online pundits have purported that the numbers are exaggerated or, as a recent article in Tablet alleged, simply faked. Actually, the numbers are likely conservative. The science is extremely clear." Professor Wyners article was the one in Tablet (magazine) and if that is okay then they're okay too in the article. None of this should be in the lead. NadVolum (talk) 20:27, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

As we discussed on the talk page, Joyner included the "Ken M" blog comment in a compilation of quotes and referred to it as an "insight", but didn't engage with it at all beyond that. It still seems like a pretty clear WP:USERGENERATED violation, since the argument is still from "Ken M", not from Joyner.

Right, Roberts mentioned Wyner's article once, and in some broad sense he's arguing in a different direction, but he doesn't respond to any of the specific points Wyner made. I think that makes "Wyner [...] wrote [...] to which [...] Roberts responded" rather misleading.

Not to mention that Pachter's blog post is framed as a refutation of Wyner's "main point", when it really only applies to a single figure. (The text of Wyner's first argument refers to variance in daily deaths, not the cumulative sum that Pachter argues is misleading.) — xDanielx ^T/_C\^R 01:42, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

Lior Pachter, Les Roberts (epidemiologist), and James Joyner all have their own articles and I would hope that they have some idea of what they're doing when they bother to write things. Just seen Wyner also had something from Joshua Loftus, professor of statistics and data science at LSE, saying "One of the worst abuses of statistics I've ever seen" and "shockingly irresponsible" about the article NadVolum (talk) 09:49, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

That doesn't negate the problems I mentioned. Of those three authors, only one actually engages the content of Wyner's article at all, namely Pachter's criticism of one particular visual that Wyner used. — xDanielx ^T/_C\^R 18:10, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

See the convo I linked below, Wyner's article is a minority view and critiqued. Time to drop this. Selfstudier (talk) 18:15, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

Four with Joshua Loftus. NadVolum (talk) 19:34, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

And quoting professor Michael Spagat about the data quality declining doesn't justify anything Wyner did. NadVolum (talk) 20:36, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

• I don't see why Abraham Wyner's article should be given any special prominence over any other sources. It's just an article in a magazine. To make it any more prominent than that seems like a violation of WP:DUE. Silverseren^C 18:13, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

  I'm not sure that the Gaza Health Ministry#Other analysis section (where Wyner's magazine article is mentioned) should be in the article at all. The article feels a bit more like a deep-dive into details and he said/she said bickering, instead of an encyclopedic summary of the subject. Also, the article is wildly unbalanced; there are ~1300 words on casualty counts and ~200 words total on everything else. Don't they have, like hospitals and budgets and employees and things like that? We're treating them as if their sole purpose is to count deaths. WhatamIdoing (talk) 21:45, 9 June 2024 (UTC)

  +1 Selfstudier (talk) 08:30, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

  I suspect the vast majority of coverage of them is in relation to their casualty counts. BilledMammal (talk) 08:53, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

  If you only look at coverage during the last six months and in the popular press, you might be right. But in the 17 years before that, I think there was other coverage. The 2007 doctor's strike gets a few sentences; perhaps someday this, too, will get just a few sentences. WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:26, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

  You're right, there should be a lot more about it like how many hospitals and doctors it has/had and it's record in looking after health issues. Do you know of some sort of tag for that kind of issue? NadVolum (talk) 10:17, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

  Remember this convo? Wikipedia:Reliable_sources/Noticeboard/Archive_431#Tablet_(magazine)_and_article_by_Wharton_statistician Selfstudier (talk) 10:21, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

  I remember that okay. There's been responses by academics now so perhaps the business can end. NadVolum (talk) 10:59, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

  One would hope so. Selfstudier (talk) 11:08, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

  I would be in favor of a WP:SPINOUT article called "Reliability of Gaza Health Ministry casualty data" to correct the balancing issue.VR _{(Please ping on reply)} 03:44, 14 June 2024 (UTC)

  Might be a good idea, put a stop to all this "Hamas run" discussion every ten minutes. Selfstudier (talk) 11:01, 14 June 2024 (UTC)

  The Gaza Health Ministry is fairly short and is a natural place to look about that if a person is bothered. I'm not keen on such a split, at least not without a lot more development of the article. NadVolum (talk) 18:44, 14 June 2024 (UTC)

  To me, this would be an inappropriate split, especially because the article is not long. Further, splitting it off would make it more difficult for due weight discussions, as they would have to occur over multiple articles. If the information isn’t due weight to include in the main article, then a split doesn’t make it due weight. If the main article is too long as a whole, then a split can be considered.

  I also find problematic the splitting of scientific studies from the section below where people voice their support/concern with those articles. This basically gives “double weight” to the scientific studies compared to the governments. Ideally, the most important/discussed studies would be given a sentence or two each, and immediately be followed by at most a sentence or two of that study’s analysis by other academics, etc. Very, very rarely would it be due weight to give credence to someone’s opinion of a study when the study itself isn’t due weight to be included in the article. And even then, only significant criticisms or adoption/agreement should be covered - some studies may not have any significant criticism/adoption and thus would only be covered themselves.

  Perhaps the solution here is to condense the “analysis” into two sections - governmental (and intergovernmental such as UN) analysis, and then a section for academic/independent analysis. Neither section should be too long, and care must be taken to ensure that the balance of general academic consensus is reflected in the article. This is a discussion that should continue on the talk page regarding how to handle that section - with a link to it from here - and only brought here if the talk page fails to come to a consensus.

  To summarize my view: American and Israeli government analysis is too big for now and needs to include information about other bodies, and there is no reason that people repeating scientific papers needs to be in the article - the papers themselves and a summary of their proponents can be covered in a single section. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 16:56, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

  The sentence If the information isn’t due weight to include in the main article, then a split doesn’t make it due weight doesn't sound quite right to me. It's obvious that information could be an undue level of detail for our article about History and still a completely appropriate level of detail for our article about History of Gaza. Similarly, something could be undue for Gaza Health Ministry and still appropriate for an article about a subtopic like Gaza Health Ministry casualty data.

  However, I agree that even in a subtopic, it is possible to overemphasize certain things or to go into an unencyclopedic level of detail. We are looking for the Goldilocks balance, even in a specialized subtopic article. I think your suggestions are sound overall. Especially if the content stays in this article, condensing it and removing anything that looks like a "me too" duplication or endorsement would help. WhatamIdoing (talk) 17:36, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

  The problem is that it’s not a subtopic being proposed but a content fork. I agree that I could’ve been much clearer that my comments applied to content forks. Summary style still does apply when a split/sub article isn’t a content fork.

  I tend to think that, at least at this point, there is not a real need to split it off for size, and I’m not sure the casualty data can be covered in its own article without it turning into a POV fork. If and when the article becomes large (adding more history/operational/etc information, if possible), then the casualty data would be a good option for a split and summary. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 17:51, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

  I agree that there's no WP:SIZE problem here, but I'm not sure that it's actually possible to create a POV fork about casualty data. The only reason to split it would be that it's overall too detailed (i.e., about all of the POVs) for the general article, not that there isn't enough room for extra details about a single viewpoint. WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:34, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

  If it’s too detailed about all of the POVs, that’s a sign that we may be being too broad in the coverage. Everyone and their mother can publish an opinion about the evidence/beliefs - but not all of them should be in the encyclopedia. Not even all of the authors/academics with articles who have opined should be covered. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 21:39, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

I think it's foolish to assume we'll know anything for sure while the situation remains live and articles could avoid all of this by observing that, in my view. Jondvdsn1 (talk) 17:10, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

I have removed all mention of Wyner from the article as despite what is here @XDanielx: has started trying to dress up what he did as an actual analysis and is saying criticism would be a BLP problem. NadVolum (talk) 20:26, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

@XDanielx has re-added this disputed content under the guise of "balance". I think it's a false balance, and I think it should be removed. WhatamIdoing (talk) 21:33, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

I'm not arguing for any kind of equal weight here, but I believe the consensus (considering all past discussions) was that this is a significant (non-fringe) minority view.

We should probably discuss mainly on the article's talk page (RfC?) or a new thread here, since this will be archived soon. — xDanielx ^T/_C\^R 21:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

At the moment, threads on this page are archived 21 days after the most recent comment (not the first one). We therefore have another 21 days to go.

I think we should remove all of the non-official (e.g., government) and non-scholarly responses.

Separately, I also think we should say less about this. Supposedly this article is about a 17-year-old government agency, but you can't really tell that because it's turned into a coatrack article about bickering over how good they are/aren't at just one of their less important duties during the last nine months (4% of its existence). WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:07, 9 July 2024 (UTC)

Perhaps GHM reliability is a notable enough topic to get its own small article? In which case the main GHM article could have just a brief summary section on it. Not a typical WP:SPINOFF but it might make sense here? — xDanielx ^T/_C\^R 01:57, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

It might make sense, but even then, it might not make sense to include Wyner, and it probably wouldn't make sense to include Wyner as if his were just one of many equally valid views. WhatamIdoing (talk) 22:53, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

Laken Riley Murder

I feel that there is heavy bias in the Killing of Laken Riley article which I and at least one other editor tried addressing, but were predictably ignored. Just move down to the "aftermath" section and read the main points in order:

"Riley's killing became a "national political case" during what Forbes' Sara Dorn called a "historic surge in border crossings during Biden's tenure"

"Former U.S. President Donald Trump posted on Truth Social: "Border INVASION is destroying our country and killing our citizens! The horrible murder of 22-year-old Laken Riley at the University of Georgia should have NEVER happened!" He later met with Riley's mother and stepfather before his campaign rally in Rome, Georgia on March 9, 2024." (awww)

"President Joe Biden mentioned the killing of Riley during the 2024 State of the Union address, mistakenly calling her "Lincoln Riley". The unprepared remarks came after Congresswoman Marjorie Taylor Greene shouted Riley's name at the president" (what a hero)

Where to begin unwinding this disaster..

First, sources were produced that characterize this homicide as an episode of politicization by anti-immigration activists[1]. The reason why this tragic murder became a national story and other tragic killings that happened around the same time did not (see first link) had less to do with concern over violence against young women, which is a noble cause, and was more about demonizing migrants, which is not[2]. This speaks right to the notability of the subject, yet all requests to add this context to the article have so far been ignored in talk.

Secondly, NPR is one of several sources that's discussed Laken Riley's killing in the context of crime rates among the undocumented population.[3] Pretty much every objective researcher who's analyzed this subject is aware that undocumented migrants (ie "illegals") are significantly less likely to commit violent crimes than American citizens (both American-born and legal immigrants), so what we are dealing with here is a situation where activists are cherry-picking anecdotes to sway public opinion, quite literally the only reason Riley's case met notability criteria.

CNN talked to criminologists about this in the wake of Riley's homicide, and here's what they said.[4]

First, here's what the general public thinks:

"In a recent Pew Research Center report about the situation at the US-Mexico border, 57% of Americans say the large number of migrants seeking to enter the country leads to more crime. 'In other words, most people in the US are now tying crime to recent increases in immigration."

Versus mainstream experts:

• "When I heard about the New York incident, the first thing when I hear about this on the news is like, “Oh, God, here we go.” Because these anecdotal instances — not to minimize the seriousness ever — but the rare occurrences where individuals who are foreign-born, let alone undocumented, are engaging in crime, and it makes the news, I worry about the cascade effect of these incidents overshadowing what we know in the broader context about immigration and crime."

• "Human beings commit crime in pretty much all societies across the globe. But the bottom line is what gets lost in those anecdotal stories — those lead you to a flashpoint of negativity in which you ignore all the potentially good things that immigrants bring to our society. And it’s frustrating to try to bring evidence to the table and try to contextualize things and put it statistically when you’re arguing against this flashpoint that allows people to more or less kind of ignore everything else." (I know the feeling)

• "Across a variety of studies that use different years of data that focus on different areas of the United States — with some exceptions, there’s some nuance there. I don’t want to deny the nuance — in general, on average, we do not find a connection between immigration and crime, as is so often claimed. The most common finding across all these different kinds of studies is that immigration to an area is either not associated with crime in that area, or is negatively associated with crime in that area. Meaning more immigration equals less crime."

This is the context in which the notability of Riley's killing is to be understood. By omission, the article takes what was an exploitation of a girl's homicide for political propaganda and turns it into a natural, reasonable reaction to an "illegal" committing a murder against the backdrop of a "border invasion." Or, am I missing something here? Jonathan f1 (talk) 20:48, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

I mostly agree. I don't see what relevance social media comments have, especially ones that aren't germane to the actual topic. Bickering between political talking heads has even less reason to be included. I think that entire section can be removed. Lostsandwich (talk) 21:35, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

But also, and maybe more importantly, the subject is only notable because the suspect in her murder is an illegal immigrant, and that was exploited politically. No mention of this was made, even though sources were provided. Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:42, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

Yes, what you are missing is the fact that the article in question isn’t about crime by immigrants, it’s about a specific murder and it’s impact … and in this case, the political impact of the murder is the key part of the story. What various politicians say about it is what makes this particular murder so notable. Blueboar (talk) 21:42, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

Okay, so had the suspect been a local boy from Georgia, what are the odds this murder would've made national news headlines let alone become an issue during the State of the Union address? The reason why reliable sources are discussing the crime rates of illegal immigrants in the context of this case is because the case was politically exploited by anti-immigration activists, and that has everything to do with the subject's notability. Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:46, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

Exactly… which means that the things the anti-immigration activists say about this particular murder are relevant to the article, and should be included. Note, things that pro-immigration activists say about this murder are also relevant, and should be mentioned.

Where things get more complicated (trickier) is when we start including commentary about what the various sides said. Discussing “why the anti activists are wrong” is a bit off topic, moving us away from discussing the murder itself (the topic of the article) and more into discussing the broader issue of crime by immigrants. THAT is likely a very notable topic on its own, and I would suggest creating a new article about it (if one doesn’t already exist). A lot of the “why the anti activists are wrong” commentary would probably be better placed in THAT article. Blueboar (talk) 23:36, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

You might be right that the subject is notable enough to warrant its own article. The CNN piece cited the Laken Riley case along with several other examples of "migrant crime" that provoked the same pattern in political rhetoric. The issue in this section is that they quote a rather inflammatory comment made by a former president, where he is trying to link the murder to the situation at the border, as part of a broader argument about illegal immigration and violent crime, which is disputed by academic studies. I happen to agree with two other editors (one here and one on the Laken Riley talk page) that the section in question should probably be removed. Jonathan f1 (talk) 00:35, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

I think such an article about the "myth of migrant crime," would necessarily consist of articles containing the opinion of random analysts who would be in accord with the opinion of the editor(s).

The following is certainly a biased source, but no more than NPR:

https://www.heritage.org/crime-and-justice/commentary/increased-illegal-immigration-brings-increased-crime-almost-23-federal

Certainly the vast majority of illegal aliens do not commit violent crimes, however the issue here are the "bad apples." That's what some are concerned over.

Whether you agree with the politicization or not, it is entirely relevant. That is what was covered extensively in the news. Whether you think the claims of proponents of border security are valid or not is irrelevant. The reason (justified or not) that the tragic murder was covered so extensively was precisely because of the immigration debate. Therefore the coverage and responses are entirely needed. TanRabbitry (talk) 06:25, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Are you seriously suggesting that the Heritage Foundation is in league with NPR? They are wholly unreliable on this subject in every sense of the word. As the criminologists in the CNN article explained, there's a large canon of studies on illegal immigration and crime rates, and most of them show either no relationship or a negative one (meaning there's less crime where there are more immigrants, and in fact illegal immigrants are statistically less likely to commit crimes than immigrants who've been legally naturalized, never mind American-born citizens).

What we have here is a situation where activists are cherry-picking isolated incidences of migrant crime, and then scaremongering about a "border invasion" and a violent crime epidemic. This is from the University of Wisconsin-Madison: "Undocumented immigrants far less likely to commit crimes in U.S. than citizens"[5].And here's Scientific American: "Some of the most solid evidence to date shows that President Trump’s cornerstone immigration policy was built on a wholly false premise"[6]. I really didn't want to cite this stuff because it does not mention Laken Riley and would be undue or even OR if it's used in the article; but the two sources above (NPR and CNN) do mention Laken Riley and cover the same data.

The fact that a former president and perennial candidate for president is exploiting these murders to traffic in political propaganda is the only reason this subject has any notability on a national level. Now please don't tell me you think Scientific American is as reliable as Heritage. Jonathan f1 (talk) 07:01, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

I just did a Google search on this so let me add this source:

https://www.vox.com/politics/2024/3/21/24097467/laken-riley-jose-antonio-ibarra-trump

I don't know what the reliability status of Vox is on here, but here's what they say:

"Trump has demagogued unauthorized immigrants as dangerous criminals since his first campaign for president, and this year he’s returning to that familiar theme, accusing immigrants of “poisoning the blood” of the country.

But while he has hosted rallies before that featured family members of people killed by unauthorized immigrants, Riley’s death seems set up to be more central to his campaign messaging than any of these prior tragedies.

Trump evidently thinks he can lay it directly at his opponent’s feet, blaming Biden’s failure to control the border (and changing the subject from Trump’s own role in scuttling Biden’s bipartisan border security bill). He’s also trying to argue that Riley’s death isn’t an isolated tragedy, but part of a larger trend of “migrant crime” — once again smearing a vast and diverse group of people as criminals."

Trump has been doing this for years and Riley's murder is just the latest example. Wikipedia needs to come up with a way to handle this considering it's going to keep happening as long as he and his minions are involved in national politics. Jonathan f1 (talk) 07:28, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Sigh… no… Wikipedia is not the place to Right Great Wrongs. Blueboar (talk) 10:35, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

But isn't it a place to capture what reliable sources say about the significance of an event and determine why a subject warrants its own article on here? You act like everything I wrote is just my opinion when I provided sources for every last argument, and academic studies backing my statements about illegal immigration and crimes rates. But you're even suspicious about NPR and seem to think 'bias' and 'unreliability' are the same thing. Because, Heritage Foundation. Jonathan f1 (talk) 16:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Yeah, suggesting that the Heritage Foundation is comparable to NPR is pretty silly. However, I think the pertinent issue isn't the validity of x or y source, it's whether or not such a source should even be included.

I remember this happening, and I remember the usual talking heads brewing up the usual controversy but I don't really think that is of any particular significance. At the most, perhaps a note acknowledging the controversy I could see- if it can be demonstrated that it's of any particular note, rather than the usual political rhetoric. As I indicated in a previous reply, a congresswoman shouting something and a person saying something on a platform they own doesn't really feel worthy of inclusion. Nor does single (?) reference in Forbes. Lostsandwich (talk) 08:51, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

It isn't significant if you can come up with another explanation as to why this murder has a Wikipedia article. Why was it part of a national 'debate' and not confined to local Georgia news? The political aspect is unavoidable considering that murders committed by illegal immigrants aren't ipso facto notable on that point alone. Can anyone direct me to one article on here about a murder committed by an illegal immigrant (or any other crime) in the pre-Trump era whose notability was based on that factor alone? I'm genuinely curious. Jonathan f1 (talk) 16:50, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Once again, I think you're questioning why something became notable. You think it due to a dishonest basis, but that is irrelevant. It is notable. TanRabbitry (talk) 19:46, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

I don't think a congresswoman shouting something at an event is of any importance. Lostsandwich (talk) 01:12, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

to expand, nor do I think someone's ramblings on a social media platform that they own is either. Lostsandwich (talk) 01:14, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

To expand on Blueboar's point, this article needs to expand on where this killing took place in the context of the 2024 election cycle and the mess over the politics of funding border security came into play. This event came at a critical time that the GOP used to try to force claims of this "mass invasion", alongside Texas' antics with razor wire on the Rio Grande. A background or an impact section that establishes this should be necessary, and then.the impact framed around it, to make it clear why this notable. — Masem (t) 11:42, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Yes, agreed. Jonathan f1 (talk) 17:16, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

As others have said the interface with politics is a key part of this which should be covered. We should cover the directly related politics on this. We don't and shouldn't need to debate or evaluate or provide commentary on or try to repudiate the politics, just cover it. As a side note, US opinion, politics and laws often are driven by individual "anecdotal" incidents. We often even name laws after individual incidents which caused or catalyzed the law. North8000 (talk) 11:56, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

I just found another article in CNN that actually uses the word "exploited": "Laken Riley deserves justice – not to be exploited as a symbol of xenophobia or hate."[7].

But the argument will be that opinion pieces aren't RS, I get that. I'm wondering how many sources and of what quality need to be produced to demonstrate the two obvious facts that a) the murder was politically exploited; and b) the subject's notability has everything to do with this exploitation. If an NPR article is suspect, according to one editor here, then what's the basis for including #45's blurting about 'border invasion'? This guy's been documented lying 15,000 times by major news outlets and should be treated as a deprecated source on here. Jonathan f1 (talk) 16:40, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

I very much doubt that you can find support to factually state the murder was used to drive politics, since I am sure that that is a view from the liberal side and that the conservative side will say they aren't exploiting it. But you likely can find numerous opinion sources to support a statement like "Democrats including X, Y, and Z claimed the Republicans exploited the murder to push for immigration reform." As well as statements from the other side.
I fully agree that both the victim and the murder only have notability from the attention it got, but I don't think this type of statement needs to be explicitly made as long as the gist point on political exploitation is establish. It sorta follows from the first. — Masem (t) 16:50, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

This is why I think there's a strong case to include sources that discuss the murder in the context of illegal immigration and violent crime. Because once we venture into the domain of academic studies, it is no longer a mere opinion war between CNN contributors and right-wing politicians. The latter has not only exploited the murder, but has used it to traffic in falsehoods about illegal immigration and crime that are contradicted by published research. Jonathan f1 (talk) 17:13, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

I think you're mischaracterizing the issue. The problem isn't that half the country (actually by polling data, much more than half) despise illegal aliens, that is inaccurate. Bringing up crime statistics are from a false premise. A opponent of illegal immigration would say, in this case rightly, that you're assuming an alien's right to be in the country. You're starting from a neutral ground, but with them already in the country. They would say that immigrants should vetted so that those with a criminal history can be refused entry. Once again, the issue isn't that all, or even a small percentage of illegal aliens are dangerous. The issue is that some dangerous criminals necessarily enter with them and those are the people that there is concern over.

A note on NPR. https://www.nytimes.com/2024/04/11/business/media/npr-criticism-liberal-bias.html

(Before you argue that that is the verdict of only a handful of former employees, the principal point is the reception to their claims.)

TanRabbitry (talk) 20:00, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

Okay, so according to Pew Research (see link above), nearly 60% of Americans erroneously believe that illegal immigration is linked to rising crime rates. The article goes on to say that one of the reasons they believe this falsehood is because murder cases like Riley's are exploited by politicians to demonize migrants. These cases generate news coverage not because the crimes themselves are any more or less notable than other crimes of the same nature, but because of the citizenship status of the suspect and the false belief that there's a correlation between being here illegally and committing other crimes. Here's the Stanford Institute of Economic Policy Research on the "The mythical tie between immigration and crime"[8]. Isn't it interesting that all these different researchers, in fields as far as economics and criminology, have all independently arrived at the same conclusion on immigration and crime, yet a majority of Americans believe the opposite. Let's wonder why that is..

As to the rest of your reply -it is beyond the scope of noticeboard discussion but let me briefly say this. I do. not. care. where a murder suspect was born. All murders are tragic and a foreigner who murders an American citizen on American soil isn't any more or less heinous than an American killing an American, at least not on that factor alone. If you had asked which population I would prefer to live next to as an American citizen, and I had to choose solely based on criminality, my response would be the population that's statistically much less likely to commit crimes, which happens to be the illegal immigrants. Even framing this in terms of "illegal immigration" obscures what's really motivating many of these people. The suspect's status as an 'illegal' mattered less than his perceived 'race', and I even produced a source up top, written by a local of Athens, who described how the mood in the community changed when the suspect's identity was revealed. It wasn't merely a concern about immigration, but there were immediate tensions with the local Hispanic community, most of whom were born in the US. I doubt anyone really believes we'd be having this discussion if a European tourist killed an American at Disneyland. There'd be no hysteria, no national debate about "crackdown on tourism", no irrational arguments about how it's a greater sin when a foreigner kills you, and no Wikipedia article.

If you're wondering why there's a problem with illegal immigration in the US (and this, too, is off topic, so let's try to move on after this) you can read this source[9]. The fact is, US immigration laws are decades out of date and do not meet the needs of the 21st Century economy. Those migrants at the border -only some tiny fraction stand any realistic chance of entering the country legally, thanks to laws that were written nearly 60 years ago, that politicians failed to upgrade in 34 years. That's the real 'crisis' in immigration, not the rest of this bullshit. I wonder how quickly opinion polls would change if Americans heard less about rare instances of migrant crime, and more about how many illegal immigrants own businesses, employ other Americans, and possess degrees in fields like engineering at a time when the country's facing a talent shortage. If Trump has his way with deportations there will be massive economic costs, and then we just might see 'rising crime rates'.

Okay, no more soap-boxing. The previous suggestion to remove the aftermath section was rejected by another editor on the talk page, although the Trump quote was removed. This is not really sufficient considering Trump's "border invasion" argument is still implied in the section via other sources, with no balance. I also do not understand your point about NPR having a "liberal bias". Having a bias does not imply unreliable. Almost every RS we use is biased, especially in news media. Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:24, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

I don't think race matters at all here and I dislike it being brought up. It's totally irrelevant.

I would gently like to suggest that your obviously strong feelings on the border dispute may mean you shouldn't be editing related pages. I am not suggesting you have bad motives at all, but you may be too biased to view it neutrally. However that is your decision.

I wholeheartedly agree about biased sources. All people are biased to some degree. The point is I think we can look at the Heritage Foundation article, ignore the framing that is obviously biased and focus on the facts that it records. TanRabbitry (talk) 22:55, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

So then the argument that NPR has a 'liberal bias' doesn't work. We don't downgrade sources for bias -only if there's evidence they're deliberately publishing misinformation, like when Forbes used to publish pseudo-science about climate change. And even then, Forbes was still used in other subject spaces (with caution) if they were deemed reliable in that area. The first statement in this section, about the "historic surge in border crossings", happens to be sourced to Forbes.

I think I've established that NPR, despite whatever biases they may have, is a reliable source for immigration/crime data. Numerous links were provided to independent sources and I'll add this Reuters article to the list[10]. They cite several studies by academic researchers published in peer-reviewed journals, including a meta-analysis and an analysis by economists of incarceration rates over a 150 year period.

This is beyond what's normally required to establish the reliability of data in a source, so you'll have to come up with another rules-based reason why NPR (who specifically addresses the Riley murder in this context) shouldn't be included but the idiotic statement about "historic surge in border crossings" is due. Increases in illegal immigration have heck all to do with crime trends, let alone homicides. Jonathan f1 (talk) 00:29, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Increases in illegal immigration have heck all to do with crime trends, let alone homicides. Hmm, since violent crimes are decreasing, I guess that means more immigrants reduces violent crimes. Good thing we don't do SYNTH. O3000, Ret. (talk) 00:35, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

I meant that there's no (causal) relationship between illegal immigration and more crime, as claimed by you know who. But yes you're right that violent crime is decreasing amid the "historic surge in illegal border crossings," proving yet again this claim is false[11]. There are multiple studies (cited up top) that even show a negative relationship between immigrants and crime (ie where there are more immigrants there's less crime). Jonathan f1 (talk) 00:43, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

I never argued that NPR shouldn't be included or that their bias meant it couldn't be used. In fact I was saying that biased sources can be used as far as the facts that they list, for example the Heritage Foundation. TanRabbitry (talk) 03:14, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

When has the Heritage Foundation ever been considered reliable on here? You're comparing an ideological think tank involved in activism (including pushing election fraud claims) to organizations that have editorial boards and do fact-checking. NPR has a history of being accused of having both "liberal" and "conservative" bias, so it doesn't seem like they're committed to either side, and "bias" does not imply "unreliable." The data used by CNN and NPR came from academic studies; the Reuters piece cited academic studies published in refereed journals. Anything Heritage publishes is self-published -they are their own source.

At any rate, I left a comment on the talk page. There seems to be growing support for completely removing the section, at least temporarily. Jonathan f1 (talk) 03:49, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Putting aside all the other issues with what you have said, if you remove that section what will be the context for mentioning the so-called "Laken Riley Act?" TanRabbitry (talk) 03:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

The context would be the murder of Laken Riley? The whole article talks about the killing, the suspect, his undocumented status. Why do you think the Laken Riley Act would be so incomprehensible to readers without a section that says only two things: "historic surge of illegal border crossings" and a congresswoman shouting at the president? There is nothing of any educational or encyclopedic value in that section -it's a one-sided, partisan reaction and adds nothing of any significance to the article. Wasn't it you who said that "Once again, the issue isn't that all, or even a small percentage of illegal aliens are dangerous. The issue is that some dangerous criminals necessarily enter with them and those are the people that there is concern over" ? Okay, so a dangerous criminal entered and killed someone. There's the context Jonathan f1 (talk) 05:12, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

The context is the national outrage and controversy over the murder. Congress passes laws in reaction to public discussion/concerns/hysteria frequently and this is one of those times. It is necessary to explain the background to that Act.

I would like to point something out to you. You've obviously read a great deal about this issue. Let's severely oversimplifiy and put it this way: out of 100 American citizens, 3 commit violent crimes and out of 100 illegal aliens, 2 commit violent crimes. While the illegal aliens may be less likely overall to be violent criminals, the handful that are, mean that if the 100 had never arrived, the 2 couldn't commit violent crimes in America. That is what people are concerned over when it comes to crime and illegal aliens. They would argue that if the 100 were either turned away or at least heavily vetted, the 2 would not be allowed in. Once again, the Americans in polls on the subject aren't worried about all the immigrants with regard to crime, they are worried about the percentage who are dangerous.

One final thought, I would note that the man accused has not been convicted and you're assuming he's guilty. That is wrong.

TanRabbitry (talk) 08:48, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

The hysteria has to do with a 'migrant crime wave' at the border, which reliable sources describe as a 'myth'. Google "migrant crime myth". When the article moves from talking about this particular murder, which involved one suspect who was here illegally, to statements about a "historic surge in border crossings", it is no longer about this one suspect, but a much larger population, which has been subjected to public misconceptions. Your argument that "Well, the logic goes like this: if only 1 in 100,000 illegal immigrants commit a murder, that's one too many, and that's what people are concerned about," is cute, but not what the hysteria is over. The rationale is that illegal immigration is associated with an increase in the incidence of violent crime, which is disputed by academic studies. That's why the former president is using rhetoric like "border invasion" -a military term, associated with armies, or widespread violence. Sources were provided that say Trump is quite explicitly using this murder to make this argument, and that he is not saying there's one or two bad apples out of a much larger sample.

So, the compromise I tried to reach with you was that we leave the content about "border crossings" up, but balance it with sources that discuss the murder in the context of immigration/crime data, which I provided. But we reached an impasse because you would only agree to publish this data if it's published alongside a report from the Heritage Foundation, an activist think tank (ie unreliable) that self-publishes their 'research'. CNN and NPR got their data from academic studies, published through an academic press, like Oxford. This is the quality of research supporting the CNN/NPR position[12][13][14]. Now, compare to Heritage.

So, since we couldn't come to an agreement on a rules-based way to edit this section neutrally, I joined a number of other editors who agree that removing the aftermath section, in the state that it's in right now, would only improve the quality of the article, despite the fact that it'd be missing context. Jonathan f1 (talk) 18:28, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't read any of this yesterday, so it's late, but here are a couple notes:

One: 1 in 100,000, though obviously not meant to be taken literally, is so low it's laughable.

Two: You're conflating all concerns over border security into one, crime. There are many, many other issues people are concerned over. Terms like "invasion" are used to refer to the scale of the movement of people, not the danger of the immigrants themselves.

Three: You're putting words in my mouth. I never said anything had to be used from the Heritage Foundation, or couldn't be used from the sources you provided. I only asked that you read the article, winnow the factual statements from the biased framing and consider them.

Considering your consolidation of all border security concerns into a false perception on crime and your adding heavily to what I said, I still think you are too emotionally and mentally invested to properly edit pages related to this. TanRabbitry (talk) 19:28, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

To try to intercede here, there is no need to go into a full thesis about the state of immigration, its effect on crime rates, or the like on this article about the murder. Certainly linking to Illegal immigration to the United States and relevant subpages is fair. But I think that as much should be said is something along these lines:

1. The murder occurred during a larger debate in US politics about the large number of immigrants crossing the border and the need to increase funding and change policies regarding that.
2. Republicans and conservatives, broadly, had been arguing that the border crisis was an "invasion" prior to the murder, criticizing Biden (eg Immigration policy of the Joe Biden administration), and then used the murder to back their desires to increase border funding/security.
3. Republicans in the house did pass a bill in Riley's name as a result.

And that's really it that the killing article needs to touch. Anything else is something that belongs on subpages of Illegal immigration in the US pages. --Masem (t) 20:30, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

+1 agreed. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 20:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

I have to say -this is the first time I've ever encountered a situation where someone's produced a dozen or more sources that address a specific aspect of a subject, only to be told it isn't relevant (not relevant according to us, not reliable sources). Usually I will find people pushing for edits that seem to be little more than their opinion, only to be told, quite rightly, that they need to find an RS that says what they want the article to say (and then, be bold!). So, if I'm understanding this correctly, we want the article to cover Republican "border invasion" tropes, which are total bs, but not any sources that have countered this bs, with reliable data, in the context of the Laken Riley killing.

I strongly oppose this, but if that's the consensus here's I'll accept. Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

You know, I just scrolled to the bottom of the Riley article, and it links to another article about the Murder of Mollie Tibbetts, who was also killed by an illegal immigrant. And they have a section at the bottom called "Politicization of Tibbetts's death" which reads:

"The case became a political talking point for more restrictive immigration policies. Opponents of illegal immigration emphasized that the suspect had entered the country illegally, despite research showing that undocumented immigrants are less likely to commit crimes than native-born Americans."

This is exactly along the lines of what I asked for in Riley's article only to be told "not relevant". Tibbetts' article also reads:

"In addition, Tibbetts' father—responding to Donald Trump Jr.—criticized as "heartless" and "despicable" the use of Tibbetts's death for political purposes;"

Again, exactly the same pattern in the Riley case, and directly related to the notability of the subject. I'm going to change my previous "strongly oppose this" to "vehemently oppose" as it's entirely unorthodox on here to conceal important information about a subject that appears in RS. Jonathan f1 (talk) 22:35, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

This is basically WP:COATRACK. Within the topic of illegal immigration to the US and crimes associated with it, Riley's killing (as well as Tibbetts) are examples of highly-profiled cases attributed to illegal immigration which some (conservatives, mostly) have taken to show why the current trend in immigration is bad (but clearly we can't say that in Wikivoice). But on the article on Riley's killing, a dissertation on illegal immigration to the US is undue - a link to the main article on the topic makes sense, and establishing just enough context of why it gained significant coverage is obviously due, but to try to either justify or criticize the US's immigration problem in any length or detail is far beyond the topic - and because of how it can be written, it seems rather easy to be made into a coatrack. Masem (t) 23:20, 23 June 2024 (UTC)

The fact that this keeps happening in pattern, and is related to the subject's notability, does not require a thesis -just a simple statement as we find in Tibbetts' article:

""The case became a political talking point for more restrictive immigration policies. Opponents of illegal immigration emphasized that the suspect had entered the country illegally, despite research showing that undocumented immigrants are less likely to commit crimes than native-born Americans."

Just cite the sources relevant to the Riley case.

Here's AP News covering the politicization of Riley's murder, the Republican tropes, and the academic research.[15]

Here's LA Times doing the same thing (this piece was written by professional researchers)[16]

And NPR[17]

USA Today[18]

CNN[19]

NBC[20]

Washington Post[21]

The Guardian[22]

How many more?

The studies are reliable, the relevance to the subject has been established, and one statement is hardly undue considering every major news outlet has linked the immigration debate to the notability of these cases. Telling readers there's an 'immigration debate' and presenting only one view of it (that's premised on falsehoods) is the very definition of non-neutral. And the other editor's suggestion that we present academic research, that was published in journals and by the National Academy of Sciences, alongside Heritage Foundation polemic should not be taken seriously. No thesis is needed, just a sentence or two addressing the immigration debate, the sort of policies these cases are exploited for, and the robust academic consensus on illegal immigration and crime. Jonathan f1 (talk) 00:16, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Once again, I never said that. TanRabbitry (talk) 19:32, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

I never said to present it as one sided. I am not aware of any reliable source that factually documents that the current levels of immigration are leading to more crime. One side presents their case that there is a causation, the other side (Democrats) site lower numbers and other factors that try to explain the conservative's point that the border "invasion" is leading to more crime is not a likely hypothesis. However, it is only the conservatives that are using this killing to try to push their point. That that is what is happening is objectively true, just that whether the killing was actually due to current immigration numbers is clearly unknown. The killing article is not the place to explain the entire political situation around illegal immigration, hence why asking for more is a coatrack. Masem (t) 00:32, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Coatrack is going off on a tangent -not making a statement or two about something that's directly related to the article's main subject and is covered in multiple reliable sources.

"the conservative's point that the border "invasion" is leading to more crime is not a likely hypothesis"

It isn't only an 'unlikely hypothesis' -it's directly refuted by all published research. Crime is down, and it's lower in places that have a higher number of illegal immigrants.

"just that whether the killing was actually due to current immigration numbers is clearly unknown."

It was due to the fact that the suspect was a criminal, and probably a misogynist who preyed on women. Take a large enough sample of any demographic and you'll find some criminals, in every demographic, in any society. There is no world that could ever exist, except maybe in political fantasy land, where the number of illegal immigrants in your country is zero. Technically, someone who overstays a visa is illegally in the country and so no border crossing required. The point of all this research is that you're more likely to find an American-born criminal at your local mall than in a population of illegal immigrants. Jonathan f1 (talk) 01:00, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

It falls under the section of COATRACK "All About George". the article on the killing of Riley should not be a full-fledged breakdown of the political arguments over immigration, only the fact that the Republicans wanted to push on it to dismiss Biden's policies while other groups presented evidence to try to refute the Republican's claims. You cannot say that because crime is down and immigration is down that there is causation between these two, without the aid of RSes that explicitly state it. Masem (t) 01:23, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

I didn't say anything about crime and immigration both being down -I said crime is down amidst the "historic surge in illegal border crossings" (quoting from the article), with the aid of RSes that explicitly state it. I also said that illegal immigrants have lower crime rates than American citizens, with the aid of RSes that explicitly state it. I don't know what gave you the impression that I think a paragraph on immigration/crime should be included, but I quite literally said a statement or two will suffice. COATRACK would be talking about how her parents met, and then spending a paragraph or two on their first date. This isn't anything close to that. Jonathan f1 (talk) 01:35, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

From the above, I think that we need to consider degree of WP:Relevance of material. "High relevance" is the murder itself. Medium relevance would be sources specifically discussing the murder in conjunction with politics/crime issues. Lower relevance would be getting into all of the politics / crime / immigration topics (analyzing, opinioning etc. ) not in conjunction with substantial mention of the murder. IMO the "lower relevance" material should not be in the article. North8000 (talk) 13:31, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

The murder itself is notable because of immigration/crime issues. A statement or two about the immigration/crime aspect in a section that's discussing reactions to the murder is not only valid, it's absolutely necessary. Concealing this aspect of the subject, on the other hand, is an egregious violation of npov. This isn't a platform for political propaganda under the guise of "just sayin' what they said." If this section can't be covered neutrally, then the next best option is to remove it. Jonathan f1 (talk) 17:56, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

If you mean opining on the immigrant/crime issue in general, I don't agree. If you mean discussions that substantially include the murder, then I would agree. North8000 (talk) 19:37, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Yes, this article on the killing is not the place to include viewpoints an opinions related to the broader topic of immigration and crime, except for enough to say that this killing came during a critical time on the debate ofimmigration (funding bills). — Masem (t) 19:53, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

"Opining" about what exactly? Multiple reliable sources discuss this case in the context of immigration and crime, and a statement or two about this aspect would be well under the weight it's given in RSes. I'd like to see someone try and make the argument on the Mollie Tibbetts article that the single solitary statement they have about immigration/crime is "irrelevant" or "coatrack". The section exists because the case was politicized, which is why it's notable, and RSes discuss this aspect of politicization. As far as notability goes and what sort of reactions the Tibbetts and Riley cases generated -they are one in the same. If the Riley article includes a section on political reactions (statements about "illegal border crossings" with absolutely no context), it needs to be covered neutrally, reflecting all major viewpoints.

This is going in circles and I'm all talked out at this point. My next move will be to file a DRR, whether or not any of you participate will be up to you. Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:04, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

One example of "opining" is saying or implying that using an individual case for a political argument is bogus or makes the point illegitimate. This is a common and accepted influencer in what happens politically (rather than statistical studies) North8000 (talk) 18:08, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Relevant points for the section:

1. the murder occurred during debate of immigration and border funding bills.
2. Due to this timing, the murder was used by Republicans to support their agenda.
3. The resulting bill was passed.

Irrelevant points:

1. What specific politicians (on either side) said at specific points in the debate.
2. Whether what was said (by either side) is correct or not.
3. The statistics on crime by immigrants.

Cut the irrelevant from the article and support the relevant with quality sources. Less is better than more. Blueboar (talk) 21:17, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

The belief that "specific points in the debate over immigration" (eg immigration/crime research) are "irrelevant" is something that was invented on this board, but not what RSes say. Their own sources cover this, right in the lead in fact.

This is from citation #2: "Despite the heated rhetoric, researchers' analysis of crime data in several studies has shown that undocumented immigrants have lower rates of violent crime compared to U.S. citizens."

And citation #3: "Ibarra’s status as an undocumented Venezuelan migrant is now being touted by several state and national GOP leaders to support their calls for tighter border security – though there is little evidence indicating a connection between immigration and crime." (and they link to research)

I'm sure I'll find it in other sources they've used, in addition to the ~dozen sources I provided here that not only mention it, but dedicate whole articles to it. The reason why this keeps coming up in RSes is because the politicization of this murder and "specific points in the immigration debate" are not only relevant, but are the only reason this murder was covered by national news outlets (and by extension, the only reason it meets notability standards on here). So, the relevance of the immigration/crime aspect is established in reliable sources, despite anyone who might want to say otherwise.

I appreciate all the time and effort everyone put into this discussion, but we're done here. I'll be filing a DRR, probably tomorrow. Jonathan f1 (talk) 22:10, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Look at the relevant section on the Tibbetts article. The tie in to the larger immigration issue are there, and the only thing that seems excessive is using Trump's quote on full (though mentioning that Trump addressed that killing is well in line). But there's nothing like looking at stats, support or disproving of specific claims related to immigration and crime, and factors you've mentioned aren't included there. Instead the inclusion focuses only on the small nexus that the killing had in the much much larger immigration picture. Same applies to this killing, it's ties to immigration debates may be significant to the notability of the event, but the event isn't solving nor creating new debates within immigration politics. It doesn't need a larger section to describe the big picture around immigration. — Masem (t) 22:21, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

The article already has an "aftermath" section, and could include a statement or two similar to what we find in the Tibbetts article, since we are dealing with exactly the same phenomenon:

""The case became a political talking point for more restrictive immigration policies. Opponents of illegal immigration emphasized that the suspect had entered the country illegally, despite research showing that undocumented immigrants are less likely to commit crimes than native-born Americans."

Both of these statements would be backed by multiple RSes that cover the Riley case, with plenty more to spare.

I said nothing about including "stats" or starting a much larger section. TanRabbitry, who's been editing that article, doesn't even want any statement on this anywhere, despite the fact that many of his own sources use it. Instead, he wants the section to say that the murder occurred amidst a "historical surge in illegal border crossings" and leave it at that. I offered him a compromise that if he wants to open that can of worms, either do it neutrally or remove the section, and he won't do either. Jonathan f1 (talk) 22:38, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

I obviously don't mind disagreement. I do not however, appreciate lying. In the first place, saying "been editing the article" implies a current action. I haven't edited that article in a month. In the second place, saying "(I want) the section to say that the murder occurred amidst a 'historical surge in illegal border crossings' and leave it at that," is also deceitful. You make it seem like I wrote that. I simply disagree with your additions. I don't think we need to breathlessly "correct" notable political rhetoric that has used the tragedy as a cause célèbre in the same way that numerous other sensational events and/or tragedies are used (9/11 and the Patriot Act, switchblade legislation, Amber Alerts, etc). If you were mistaken or meant something different, then please explain. But if you meant what you seem to have, I do not appreciate dishonesty. Thank you, TanRabbitry (talk) 01:02, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

You really should not be lecturing editors like this. You are way out of line. O3000, Ret. (talk) 01:18, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

If someone implies I have been actively editing a contested page that I haven't edited since May, and asserts that I am insisting on exactly how a section is to be written when I am only disagreeing with their changes, amidst other insinuations, I will likely respond in some manner. I did allow the possibility of a mistake or misunderstanding and also asked for clarification. At any rate, the editor's comments are poorly phrased, if not downright dishonest. TanRabbitry (talk) 01:30, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Could you also explain what the "compromise" or "can of worms" are that you say you offered? I'm not saying you didn't, but I read the "talk" page again and I don't see a compromise. Maybe I missed it, or it's not very obvious, but either way, can you provide a quotation of your compromise that you offered over there? TanRabbitry (talk) 01:42, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

The political actors who sensationalize these murders are trying to claim that undocumented immigrants should be presumed violent and criminal. That is the whole point of why they latch themselves onto these cases, and is why all these RSes, including the ones currently in use in the article, address this subject. What is your issue with a statement or two addressing the politicization (to use your words, the 'context of why this murder is notable') and the crime studies? Right Great Wrongs has to do with publishing unverifiable information, and does not apply to content that's in reliable sources. Jonathan f1 (talk) 03:39, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

I notice you didn't answer anything that I said.

Are you really saying that most/many/a fair minority of politicians or related figures on one side are saying that any illegal alien must be "presumed" a dangerous criminal? I wouldn't mind a sentence or two that contained a attributed opinion that may reference studies. I would say in that situation, Trump's (or another prominent voice's) contrasting opinion should be included. The current wording is basically:

1. The story was national news.
2. It occurred during an extremely heightened wave of illegal immigration.
3. It was heavily discussed.

When Trump's statement was there, it showed one view in the aforementioned discussion. There probably should have been a contrasting opinion.

What I don't think is right is framing what is currently there with something like: "Studies have shown that illegal aliens are statistically less likely to be violent criminals. Therefore, anyone who used the case to criticise illegal immigration are wrong to do so," or something implying that.

I wouldn't care if there was an attributed opinion that contained those exact words, but saying it in "Wikipedia-voice" isn't neutral. Just because political rhetoric isn't 100% absolutely, directly, specifically factual in every case doesn't mean we need to correct every statement a politician makes. Let me ask you this: would it be right to include the line "According to the US Treasury, the top ten percent of earners pay sixty percent of taxes," on every politician's page who has said millionaires/billionaires/the wealthy should pay their "fair share?" Of course not. It would be appropriate on a Wikipedia page about US Tax policy, but not elsewhere. TanRabbitry (talk) 04:22, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

No no, I didn't say anything about "critics of illegal immigration are wrong." I just quoted a line from the Tibbetts article that I think this article could use, because it applies here too:

""The case became a political talking point for more restrictive immigration policies. Opponents of illegal immigration emphasized that the suspect had entered the country illegally, despite research showing that undocumented immigrants are less likely to commit crimes than native-born Americans."

What you don't seem to understand is that this murder is part of a set of politicized murders that all share 3 common features: 1. suspect is an illegal immigrant; 2. Trump and his supporters use it to claim there's a 'migrant crime wave' at the border 3. the case gets pulled into a political debate about immigration.

All of these features depend on the other -take one of them away, and there's no notability.

I don't know if you've ever seen the Bill Murray movie Groundhog Day, but at one point he's able to predict what's going to happen next because he keeps reliving the same day over and over again. The Tibbetts article is the same as Laken Riley, which is the same as the latest example this week, Jocelyn Nungaray (here's NBC reporting[23]). And lo and behold:

"Former President Donald Trump is blaming the Biden administration’s border policies for Nungaray’s death. On Thursday, he said on Truth Social that “we have a new Biden Migrant Killing — It’s only going to get worse, and it’s all Crooked Joe Biden’s fault.”

An NBC News review of city data shows overall crime levels dropping in major cities that have received the most migrants from Texas, including Chicago, New York City and Washington, D.C.

Nungaray’s death is the latest suspected high-profile crime by migrants, which has led to political firestorms, even as studies have shown that immigrants are less likely to commit crimes than U.S.-born citizens."''

Same thing, over and over again.

We don't even need to change the words -the wording used in the Tibbetts article is the same wording used in sources discussing Laken Riley, which is the same wording used in Jocelyn Nungaray's article. Jonathan f1 (talk) 05:00, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

1. You still haven't answered anything.
2. "Wrong to do so" and "wrong" are two entirely different things.
3. "Migrant crime wave" and "wave of migrants" are also different. Stating that some of them are dangerous ccriminals doesn't imply they all are.

TanRabbitry (talk) 06:17, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

While this line Opponents of illegal immigration emphasized that the suspect had entered the country illegally, despite research showing that undocumented immigrants are less likely to commit crimes than native-born Americans. is taken nearly verbatim (paraphrased enough) from that given news article, to me it really ses to be unnecessary on WP. These killings have been politicized, yes, and the Republicans have said it is a direct result of Biden's immigration policies and all that. The statement that points to the lack of corelation between immigration and crime may certainly be true, but on any of these killing articles, it seems to be a coat rack even if it seems to counter the Republican argument, and feels what turns these killing articles in the start of a thesis about immigration and crime. It's a very subtle thing but it is creating the perception of making the article into something it shouldn't be. It makes me somewhat uneasy about it's inclusion, even with the RSes that back that statement, because it Judy feels out of place. I think letting the statement like "The killing was used by Republicans to raise opposition to Biden's immigration policies, claiming that crime rates had gone up due to loose border enforcement." and Lea ING it at that without providing the counterpoint, as long as an article that does detail the immigration debate goes into the reported studies showing no increase in crim due to immigration. — Masem (t) 16:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Why not say something like: "The murder was extensively refrenced by proponents of stricter border security. They claimed that this murder and other similar violent crimes had occurred due to the Biden administration's border policy." That's a factual statement, (note that I am saying the statement is factual, not necessarily the assertion) but phrased in such a way that means it's neutral as to if they were "correct" or not, in their opinion. I would prefer merely adding attributed opinions from one or more prominent voices on each side, but maybe this is a fair compromise. TanRabbitry (talk) 17:09, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

I think your compromise is right on the money. Blueboar (talk) 17:38, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

We're done here. I'll be filing a DRR when I have the time. You can explain your position there, if you want. Jonathan f1 (talk) 17:40, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

I would only add that a link to the best article covering the debate over immigration and crime that applies here, so that this is nearby that text and so a reader who wants to know more can read there. — Masem (t) 17:46, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

I don't know what the best article is, but I suggest linking "border security" to it. TanRabbitry (talk) 17:53, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

I think it's seriously flawed. Congress, on both sides of the aisle, commonly passes acts with names that fit their political narrative. In this case, partially to bolster their popularity with racists. They aren't saying anything about the porous Canadian border. Also, we cannot say anything about the Biden administration's border policy without explaining it. The Biden border policy was to pass a border act which the Republicans blocked also for political reasons. Trying to balance this would require too much space in an article about this girl's death. And frankly, we still do not know the circumstances of her death. There were no witnesses. If something must be added (and I don't think so) then I think one or two sentences without any reference to political talking points would be enough. Whatever the circumstance were, the girl's death is tragic. But Congress didn't wait to find out. They appropriated her name for political reasons knowing they could pass a bill with the name as few would dare vote against it. The only connection between this girl and the political nonsense is specious. O3000, Ret. (talk) 18:23, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

I'm not sure if it's worth responding to, but here you go:

1. About 10,000 people were arrested for illegally crossing the Canadian border last year. In just December of 2023, 250,000 people were arrested illegally crossing the Mexican border. Do not bring nonsensical allegations of racism into this without cause.
2. The bill didn't pass because Congress couldn't agree on it. Don't bring in assumptions about political motives. Two out of the three main sponsors of the bill voted against it moving forward because they said the process had become about optics and appearances instead of substance. I will say I think the sentence could be changed to say something like: "due to the record amount of illegal immigration," or "due to the Biden administration's handling of the border."
3. It is irrelevant to this if the suspect is innocent or guilty. What matters is what the political aftermath was.
4. Your personal thoughts on whether connection between the murder and the perception was legitimate or not is immaterial. Congress does things like that all the time and it isn't our job to ignore them just because we don't like it. There are plenty of articles/sections of articles that we would each disapprove of, but they're still notable and we don't get to remove them because of our feelings. TanRabbitry (talk) 19:52, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

1. How many people were not arrested from Canada? Racism is a huge part of this. Trump said, why can't we get more immigrants from Norway. Now he's added Africa to his claims of countries emptying their jails and asylums. Where did that come from? He has again said immigrants are "poisoning the blood of our country".

2. The Biden bill was largely written by a very conservative Republican. Trump told the Republicans not to vote for it. This is well documented by RS.

3. I said nothing about innocence. If I must, he is innocent under the law. Neither Congress nor RS know the circumstances of the death.

4. Of course Congress does crap like this all the time. I said that and said both sides of the aisle are a part of this cynicism. I do not claim this has something to do with an editor's "feelings". You started with I'm not sure if it's worth responding to and ended with the characterization. Please learn how to AGF.

5. You ignored my point. You proposed that we mention Biden's immigration policies. That cannot be stated without explaining what they actually are instead of what the Republicans claim (completely open borders -- Hah, I just heard Trump say that again on the TV while typing this.). We would end up with a section as long as the current article if we get into this political imbroglio. The article is about her tragic death. Let us not lose site of that. O3000, Ret. (talk) 20:12, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Feel free to disregard this, since it has been here for so long before I answered.

1. I don't understand the point of your first sentence. I also think reading racism into motivation is highly improper. I am not disputing your claim about Trump and Africa, but I haven't seen it. Can you provide a source?
2. There was so much debate over that bill that and I don't want to list it here, but boiling it down to Trump told Republicans not to vote for it to keep the border crisis ongoing is wrong.
3. You talked about the "circumstances of the death." What else could you have been referring to?
4. I don't understand how it makes in un-notable just because we disapprove of what Congress does in like situations. The mention of feelings is something I think we all share. Are you honestly saying there isn't a single notable article or section you wouldn't want removed?
5. Why would we need to fully explain Biden's border policy? Where is the suggestion (in the proposed sentence) that the policy is open borders?

Thank you, TanRabbitry (talk) 09:42, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

I filed a DRR, and notified you on your talk page, so make your case there if you want. The average person reading the Laken Riley article, will not be there out of morbid curiosity, but because they heard a former president and his acolytes spewing bs about illegal immigrants and criminality, which will probably be sprayed at the debate Thurs. night. The fact that his claims are false is utterly relevant to the subject, is mentioned in reliable sources, including the RSes used in the article, and is the reason why most people have interest in this case. Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

So, the decision to close the DRR was based on:

"Closed as pending at the neutral point of view noticeboard. The instructions for DRN say: We cannot accept disputes that are already under discussion at other content or conduct dispute resolution forums. As another editor says, it is under discussion at the Neutral Point of View Noticeboard. Let the discussion at NPOVN continue for a few more days. If the discussion fizzles out inconclusively or is closed as having been inconclusive, discussion can then be started here. In the meantime, you may optionally take part in the discussion at NPOVN'

So, you want to let this discussion fizzle out for a few more days, after the presidential debate. Drip..drip..drip..

Who wants to say that this murder is notable because it's an isolated, relatively rare crime of an illegal immigrant, and not because Trump demonizes migrants as a sort of herd that lurks ready to pounce on anyone who has a social security card. Make your case, and do it with reliable sources. Jonathan f1 (talk) 04:10, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

This is starting to feel like WP:RGW territory. I think we all agree that it is really bad that some people wanted to politicize any of these killings, but it is not our place as WP editors to try to drive the narrative in that direction without sources. Again, we can say on these killing articles that it was used by Republicans et al to attack the Biden immigration policy. But the next step from that would require third-party sources that document what other significant voices say to respond to the Republican claims, otherwise we are stepping into OR/POV/COATRACK territory. We absolutely can let an article discussing immigration and crime discuss more in depth including the counterclaims at the broad picture level, but unless those counterclaims are narrowly focused to the specific use of these killings in the Republican politization of the matter, its beyond the scope for these killings articles. --Masem (t) 04:35, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

So, I'll let this fizzle out a few more days. Anyone else have 2 cents to spare? Drip..drip..drip Jonathan f1 (talk) 04:39, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

You also need to WP:AGF. Masem (t) 04:41, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

I'm not only assuming good faith, but great faith, in the almighty powers of Wikipedia editors to sort this stuff out. I'm dead serious -I appreciate everyone who's taken the time to participate in this discussion, and I don't believe any of you are 'racist', 'xenophobic' or partisan, not even TanRabbitry. I truly believe we all want to contribute to this encyclopedia in an honest and transparent way, and that this is a legitimate point of disagreement. I vehemently disagree with TanRabbitry, but I don't think he's up to no good -he truly believes everything he's saying, no matter how nonsensical it is. Jonathan f1 (talk) 04:54, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

I was tempted to make a sarcastic comment about the "not even TanRabbitry" and "nonsensical" bits, but decided not to. I'm genuinely glad that you wrote that. It is good to know that we can have a reasonable debate without falling into idiotic attacks on each other's character, or foolish assumptions about the opposition's motivation. Such sentiments as you expressed also serve to "cool down" the argument and therefore improve dialogue. Thank you, TanRabbitry (talk) 09:51, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

I have declined the case request at DRN because We cannot accept disputes that are already under discussion at other content or conduct dispute resolution forums, and this dispute is still being discussed here at NPOVN. I will comment that it appears that some of the discussion here is becoming repetitive. However, if I were moderating a discussion at DRN about this topic, I would begin by reminding the editors that the purpose of content dispute resolution is to improve the encyclopedia, and then asking editors what each editor wants to change in the article, or what an editor wants to leave the same that another editor wants to change. Exactly what sentence or sentences do any of you think are non-neutral, and how should they be changed? Robert McClenon (talk) 04:56, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Mr. McClenon, the discussion is highly repetitive here and I don't want to participate in it any longer. The disputed content in this discussion appears in reliable sources and is due for inclusion. It's very simple. Jonathan f1 (talk) 05:10, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Mr. McClenon, their own sources say:

"Despite the heated rhetoric, researchers' analysis of crime data in several studies has shown that undocumented immigrants have lower rates of violent crime compared to U.S. citizens."[24]

Pray tell, why can't this information appear in the article? Jonathan f1 (talk) 05:29, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Because it is not relevant to the article topic. The relevant information is that Riley’s murder was used by Republicans as a political talking point. It does not actually matter to the story of her murder whether that use was justified or not. Blueboar (talk) 10:39, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

If we include that the Republicans are blaming the killing on immigrants in general and Biden's policies in specific, we cannot just leave it at that and not include the actual facts in RS that counter this. Either we include an unbiased view of the politics or nothing political at all. O3000, Ret. (talk) 11:09, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Again, not in this specific article. The fact that Republicans used this murder as a talking point to push their political agenda is relevant to the story. Whether they were/are justified in doing so is not relevant. To put it another way: what happened is both neutral and relevant… why it happened isn’t. Blueboar (talk) 11:51, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

That would be a gross violation of WP:NPOV You cannot add a cynical accusation by a political party while ignoring the actual facts documented in RS. O3000, Ret. (talk) 12:19, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Saying, as part of the killing's relevance, that "it was politicized by Republicans critical of Biden's immigration policies", is not creating a POV issue that needs to be resolved on the page about the killing, but there should be a link to an appropriate article that does go into the specifics of the Republican criticism, and where NPOV would also there require the appropriate counterpoints. As soon as one tries to go far than a broad statement like this one in the killing article, you're wedging in the need to go into a whole amount of unnecessary detail as to maintain the NPOV. Masem (t) 12:38, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Saying that "it was politicized by Republicans critical of Biden's immigration policies" may not create a POV issue in the minds of discriminating, intelligent readers. We cannot assume that's the bulk of our readership or that they will follow a link. What are the stats on how many readers even go past the lead? Further, Biden's immigration policies are not what the Republicans claim on a daily basis, which will put in the mind of the reader a ring of truth that is in fact a false narrative. We simply cannot state one side of an extremely polarizing issue even if it weren't in an election cycle. O3000, Ret. (talk) 12:49, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Sure we can… example: Our bio article on Winston Churchill notes that “He was particularly opposed to Mohandas Gandhi, whom he considered "a seditious Middle Temple lawyer, now posing as a fakir" His views enraged Labour and Liberal opinion, though he was supported by many grassroot Conservatives.” - we don’t try to “correct” Churchill’s view of Gandhi… We simply state that this was his view, and that some reacted to his view negatively while others positively. Our coverage of Churchill’s views is strictly neutral. Blueboar (talk) 12:45, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Are either of them currently involved in an election? Indeed, were they ever in the same election? Are they involved in a current cycle of hate? And I am not trying to correct a view or RGW. How many times do we have to hear that false claim? I am trying to avoid Wikipedia engaging in a gross WP:NPOV violation, one of our five pillars. O3000, Ret. (talk) 12:57, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Ah… the fact that you bring up the current election is telling. It shows that you are not approaching the topic from a neutral, historical perspective. The current election should not impact what we say in our article. Instead we should focus on what aspects of the story will be relevant long after the election (in 10, 20 or 50 years). THAT is how you achieve a proper NPOV. Blueboar (talk) 13:38, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

As I said if we just leave the short summary as "The killing was used by Republicans to criticize Biden's immigration policies." we are not even stepping into statements that take a POV.. That statement is very much true and not a viewpoint. — Masem (t) 13:56, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

The statement is very much a true lie. It is the presentation of a POV. One side. Look, this is very simple. Three options.

1.) Present a neutral view of the politics.

2.) No mention of politics at all, possibly a See also link.

3.) A neutral statement with a link to an article. Something like "This event became a part of a contested election issue." along with a See also link.

O3000, Ret. (talk) 14:09, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

It's not a lie, it is the factual and neutral truth that Republicans used the killing to criticize immigration policy. We are not saying exactly how they are criticizing it, just that they did, predicated on this event. If I said, instead "Republicans used the killing to claim that illegal immigration has led to increased crime." now we're entering the territory where this might be too much a POV, where we may need additional statements in the article to properly valve it, at which point you likely have to venture into many details of the larger debate, which is simply not necessary here. Masem (t) 14:22, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

It is true that the Republicans are lying about Biden's policies and criticizing a policy which does not exist. It could easily be argued that it is their fault for voting against the bipartisan Senate Border bill. With no clarification, the statement strongly suggests that this death is Biden's fault. Being "true" does not mean being neutral, and this is the Neutral point of view noticeboard. Neither argument belongs in this article. Neither or both viewpoints must be included. Not one viewpoint. There has been an effort from multiple editors to included one viewpoint for five days. What is wrong with option 3? O3000, Ret. (talk) 14:33, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

You know, I know, and likely all involved in this discussion know that the Republicans are exaggerating or even falsifying the data relating immigration and crime in their use of the killing. But NPOV says we can't write as if we knew that. Republicans are critizing Biden's policy, and leaving it at that avoids any type of claim or subjective statement under NPOV would require further prose to achieve appropriate balance within the bounds of DUE. This statement is not a viewpoint, it is factually what has happened. It may not be a "sky is blue" statement but it is clearly a neutral fact easily verified in sources across the board. Masem (t) 15:02, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

No, the Republicans are NOT criticizing Biden's policy. Hundreds of times I have heard them state that his policy is a completely open border and that the border is in fact now completely open. They also argue that he wants the border to be open to bring in migrants to vote for him -- even though they cannot do so. The statement that Republicans are criticizing Biden's policy is NOT a true, verifiable statement. It is a verifiable lie. We should not state a sham viewpoint without the opposing viewpoint. What is wrong with option 3, an actual neutral statement that is not misleading? O3000, Ret. (talk) 15:15, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

You are going into exactly what the Republican complaints are, their viewpoint, which most here consider to built on lies and exaggerations that, if discussed at that detail, need the other viewpoints the be NPOV compliant. But that they have complaints that we actually don't mention to any detail don't touch on their viewpoints, it simply gives the factual reason why the killing was in the national spotlight without touching on viewpoints. Masem (t) 16:11, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

It is NOT factual. They have NOT criticized Biden's policies as stated. No one actually answers my comments about this nor my suggested solution. O3000, Ret. (talk) 17:31, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

We should obey NPOV. We have zero idea what will happen in the future as we do not have a CRYSTALBALL any more than did Chuchhill. And your comparison with what a drunken leader thrown out of office after WWII once said about the Mahātmā isn't close. What is the point of purposely presenting bias in an article? I can see why Jonathan left this discussion. O3000, Ret. (talk) 13:57, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

We are not presenting bias, we are presenting the story of what occurred with an eye to historical perspective and relevancy. You are 109% correct that we do not have a CRYSTALBALL… we have no clue whether any of this will actually have an impact on the current election… nor should we care. IF it does have an impact, future sources will record that impact and we can add it to the article. Right now, however, the historical facts are: Riley was killed, and Republicans made (are making?) political hay out of it.

Ultimately, that is ALL the article needs to say. We don’t even need to quote what Republicans said (except, perhaps, as examples of the type of rhetoric they used - similar to how we include the Churchill quote about Gandhi in the bio).

It does not matter to the story of Riley’s death whether the Republicans are saying Truth or spouting Bullshit. The statistics on crime by immigrants do not matter. It is all irrelevant to Riley’s killing. ALL that is relevant is: Riley was killed, and Republicans made political hay out of it. The Truth/Bullshit content of that hay may matter in some other context, in some other article. But it is irrelevant in this context, in this article. Blueboar (talk) 15:06, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

It ain't neutral if only one side's view is presented. It is misleading. What is wrong with option 3, an actual neutral statement? O3000, Ret. (talk) 15:17, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Saying that Republicans made political hay of the killing isn’t a “view”… it is neutral historical fact. What is a “view” is any commentary on whether the content of that hay is Truth/Bullshit. Blueboar (talk) 15:51, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Saying that the Republicans are criticizing Biden's policy is a lie. It is not a fact at all, much less a neutral historic fact. They are criticizing what they are pretending is his policy. What is the point of adding a lie to the article without explanation? O3000, Ret. (talk) 16:43, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

That is a matter of wording, not relevance, and can be fixed with copy editing.

Please read what I have been saying again… the relevant information is: 1) Riley was killed. 2) Republicans used her death as a talking point to further their agenda. That’s it. Those are the basic facts. It doesn’t matter to that story whether the agenda is Truth or Bullshit. Blueboar (talk) 16:59, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

That is not at all what the suggested text says. And it still isn't neutral. Option 3 does not make any suggestion as to the politics. Just that related politics exist and are explained elsewhere. O3000, Ret. (talk) 17:28, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

• Well, I have asked multiple times what is wrong with option 3, an actual neutral solution, and no one will respond. Just constant repeats as Jonathan said when they left the discussion and insistence we add a non-neutral, false statement. This is pointless. O3000, Ret. (talk) 16:47, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Blueboar and Masem are extremely policy-expert, experienced and neutral editors and IMO have given excellent assessments and recommendations here. Respectfully, maybe it's time to absorb, accept and benefit from some of what they've had to say. Sincerely, North8000 (talk) 18:16, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

I know who they are and I fully understand NPOV. Their assessment is incorrect and have not responded to my neutral suggestion. O3000, Ret. (talk) 19:44, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

For the record, I have no objection to something like option 3… in fact, that is precisely what I have consistently been talking about: All the article needs to contain is a simple neutral statement outlining the history of what occurred (Riley killed, Republicans use the killing as a political talking point). Where we seem to disagree is whether the article should go beyond that… and discuss the truth/bullshit content the of the political talking points. I’m saying it shouldn’t, as such a discussion is irrelevant to the story. Blueboar (talk) 19:41, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

No, I did not say go beyond that. I did not say discuss political points. I suggested the opposite in Option 3. I said do less than that. Merely state that this has become political without mentioning either party as that will suggest a POV. A link can be included. This is neutral. O3000, Ret. (talk) 19:49, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Seems to me we are mostly in agreement. It's just the language that has to be worked out. I think it is fine to mention that politics raised its ugly head. I just don't think we should add how as there is no neutral way without a large amount of text. That stuff belongs in another article. O3000, Ret. (talk) 20:40, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

I don't really see how "The murder became extensively discussed as part of a national debate," is better than, "The murder was extensively refrenced by proponents of stricter border security. They claimed that the murder and other similar violent crimes had occurred due to the level of illegal immigration at the Southern border." The former just seems unclear, less informative and non-substantive. The latter is direct, full and totally impartial. Repeating someone's claims isn't biased. By the way, I wouldn't have a problem with a following sentence containing a counter point from a reliable source provided it is something like, "In contrast, others emphasized that studies have shown illegal aliens are statistically less likely to commit violent crimes." I've already stated earlier why I believe stating this fact in "Wikipedia-voice" would be biased. I will not repeat it here unless necessary, but will add that that point doesn't contradict those people's claims; assuming (only for a moment) that the suspect committed the murder, he would not have been able to, had he never entered the country. Stating the statistical fact in response to the charge that some murders have occurred due to illegal immigration is a non sequitur.

I've said before that I would tend to prefer attributed opinions from both positions, but this seems like a good compromise. A final note, I can certainly understand and have respect for the opinion that wants the former version, I just consider that version of inferior clarity and less informative. TanRabbitry (talk) 09:24, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

"The killing became extensively discussed as part of a national debate" is neutral. ""The murder was extensively referenced by proponents of stricter border security. They claimed that the murder and other similar violent crimes had occurred due to the level of illegal immigration at the Southern border." states one side and one side only of the debate. It is not neutral. And it is less neutral to insert Biden's name essentially blaming him for the death based on false statements about his policies, making this both a BLP and NPOV issue. assuming (only for a moment) that the suspect committed the murder, he would not have been able to, had he never entered the country is true but not neutral. It is like saying if we locked up every person with British ancestry or every left-handed person there would be fewer murders because some people fitting this description have murdered. Likely true but absolutely meaningless, misleading and nonneutral as it suggests that Brits or left handed folk are somehow responsible for the murder rate. O3000, Ret. (talk) 10:29, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

As best as I can recall from sources, the only group that used the killing in their politics were Republicans. Democratics didn't say anything. Journalists and academics made the point of immigration and crime not being connected. "discussed as part of the national debate" seems purposely vague, particularly when in the case of Riley, we have the Republicans that introduced and passed the act named after her, which absolutely should be within the article. We can't avoid or water down that last part to try to avoid politics.

What I think there is full agreement is to introduce a significant amount of the general talking points about immigration and crime, in Riley's article (eg option 1). And we can't avoid mentioning the bill, so option 2 is off the table. Its basically how to describe how this killing was made notable, and that's because Republicans used it to try to justify their criticism of Biden's approach to immigration policy, during the time that they were playing partisan politics with both border funding alongside funding to Ukraine and Israel. Now, there is a way to present that factually, leaving links to the relevant articles that get into more details of why various sides in these debates were taking their sides and what they were doing, and without engaging further with the political angle. "Discussed as part the national debate" is too generic really here. Masem (t) 12:37, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Yes the Republicans are trying (successfully) to make this a political issue. The problem with the currently suggested text, stated in a vacuum, is that when matched with the comments made ad infinitum by Republicans, Fox, OOAN, NewsMax, etc., that immigrants are rapists and murders released from Hispanic and now African prisons and asylums supposedly invited into the country by the current president, will sound like Wikipedia is blaming Biden for the death of the girl in this article in the minds of a significant number of readers. We appear to agree that we cannot put both sides in this article. That belongs in an article about immigration as a whole. But only mentioning one side and one person raises both POV and BLP issues. Blueboar rightly says that the Republicans are making hay of the situation. Correct, but that's not what the suggested text says. The only solution that I see is a neutral statement that there is a political brouhaha and provide a link. If you think "Discussed as part the national debate" is too generic, we could use "has been used in attempts to gain political advantage" or political gamesmanship, or other words to that effect. This is less generic and more towards Blueboar's hay while not mentioning any party or person. As I said, I think we just need to agree upon language that does not suggest fault for the death about which this article is supposed to be about, other than that which a jury will ultimately find. O3000, Ret. (talk) 13:14, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

The problem with the currently suggested text, stated in a vacuum, is that when matched with the comments made ad infinitum by Republicans, Fox, OOAN, NewsMax, etc., that immigrants are rapists and murders released from Hispanic and now African prisons and asylums supposedly invited into the country by the current president, will sound like Wikipedia is blaming Biden for the death of the girl in this article in the minds of a significant number of readers. uhhh, we've never have taken into account of how a topic is presented happening outside WP to influence how WP should write about it, outside of the proper summarization of RSes with appropriate due weight. That the far right media is jumping at everything doesn't mean we should be walking if eggshells to nit feed into that. There is a CIR expected of our readers that they are critical thinkers too (as should editors) and shouldn't be dumbing down topics, as this suggests. Masem (t) 13:29, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Not saying that we need to walk on eggshells. And In no way did I suggest that we should "dumb down" the article. Actually, not mentioning both sides is dumbing it down. But that's OK if we have another article and don't wish to distract from the subject article. I don't want to dumb down the article. I just want to put the complex side issues in the correct, linked article. We certainly do take into account writing in a manner that does not mislead and we certainly do take into account BLP and NPOV. The more contentious the subject, the more problematic. I frankly do not understand the resistance to a neutral statement as opposed to one suggesting a connection between the death and a living person without explanation. O3000, Ret. (talk) 14:25, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

The statement that's been suggested "The killing of Riley was used by Republicans to criticize Biden's immigration policy" in no way is a BLP issue, given that in context we've already identifies the suspect, and even in context, to say that suggests Biden directly killed Riley is nonsense and can only be read that way if you have been brainwashed by Fox News and others. It could be rewritten to say "the current administration's immigration policy" but that doesnt really help.
I stress that the discussion of the bill named in this article necessitates that briefiest of statements to say that the Republicans jumped on this killing as a political point, otherwise this bill's mention is narrative something out of thin air. — Masem (t) 14:51, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Good grief, where did I ever say it suggested anything as incomprehensibly idiotic as Biden directly killed Riley? It suggests that Biden is responsible for the death, not that he physically killed her. And that he is responsible for many killings and rapes. We already have a section on the Laken Riley Act along with cites and a See also to immigration and crime. We also say that the suspect was an immigrant. You say There is a CIR expected of our readers that they are critical thinkers.... So why do we also have to bring in another person's name without any explanation of the subject as a whole? If something else really needs to be added, surely we can find neutral language that does not refer to one party and one person as accuser and accused. O3000, Ret. (talk) 15:13, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Where are we going?

Where are we going? Are we going anywhere? Are we any closer to agreement on how to provide neutral point of view?

About 36 hours ago, I declined a DRN request because the dispute about this article was already pending here, at the Neutral Point of View Noticeboard, and said to let the discussion continue for a few more days. I said that a case could be filed at DRN if the discussion here fizzled out as inconclusive or was closed as inconclusive. The discussion here is being inconclusive, but does not appear to be about to fizzle out, and there doesn't appear to be any way or anyone to close discussions because they are going on forever. If we were at DRN, I would specify that DRN Rule D would be in effect, which would prohibit back-and-forth discussion, so that the thread wouldn't keep restating the same opinions over and over again, and would say that a Request for Comments was needed, and would ask each participant to identify an option for the RFC. Since this isn't DRN, we don't have a moderator, and so we have unlimited back-and-forth discussion, which has gotten to 15,000 words and 28 pages. One unlikely way to resolve this would be for someone to close this discussion so that we can take this dispute to DRN, and have a moderator control the development of the RFC. I don't think that is what is likely to happen. But I think that an RFC is in order.

So, in addition to or in place of restating what has already been said, I will ask each editor to propose an option for an RFC, and to please give your option a title in bold face so that another editor can see at a glance what the options are, and then compose a draft RFC.

We need an RFC. Please identify what you think should be your option for the RFC. Robert McClenon (talk) 17:18, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

That ~60% of Americans think illegal immigration is linked to violent crime[25], and the fact that Republicans presumed the suspect guilty before a verdict (the case is still open), and that even Biden referred to suspect as an "illegal" on national TV, is reason to believe the suggested wording for presenting only the Republican pov, however neutral it may sound to us, will be problematic for most people reading this article, not just Fox News watchers. The case is notable not because the suspect is here illegally, but because he is assumed, by instinct, to be part of a horde of criminals crossing the southern border, and that this has something to do with the president's border policies.

That leaves us with two viable options for an RfC:

1. The Republican pov and counterarguments are both presented neutrally according to reliable sources.

2. A generalized statement and link to the appropriate article. The statement would say something to the effect that the case became a national story because it involved a contested issue in US immigration politics, no more or less. Jonathan f1 (talk) 18:08, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Yes, I was about to say an RfC is the only option at this point. I'll start with Jonathan's suggestion and alter a bit:

1. The Republican pov and counterarguments are both presented neutrally according to reliable sources. (I'm against this in this article but probably belongs.)

2. A generalized statement and link to the appropriate article. The statement would say something to the effect that the case became a national story due to partisan, election politics. No mention of Republicans or Biden.

3. Remove the section on the Laken Reily Act and make no reference to the politics.

4. The killing was used by Republicans to raise opposition to their claims of Biden's immigration policies, with a POV tag.

The RfC should welcome multiple selections in order of preference, even though this is always true. O3000, Ret. (talk) 18:37, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

I think option #2 is the best compromise at this point, but I'll let others weigh in. Jonathan f1 (talk) 18:39, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Biden's name is already in the article three times, which is overkill in such a short article even without adding a fourth. O3000, Ret. (talk) 18:52, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Two of those mentions have to do with Biden getting the girl's name wrong, which is even less relevant than anything that's been discussed here. The section opens with a line about "a historic surge in border crossings during Biden's tenure," proceeded by talk about Biden getting her name wrong. What's the point of all this? These are Trump campaign talking points that were repackaged for Wikipedia. Jonathan f1 (talk) 19:53, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

• As requested in Roberts comment, my stance is that to introduce the politics around this killing (and the entire reason why this is notable to start) us to use a statement similar to Riley's death was used by Repuicans to criticize Biden's immigration policies. to lead into the Riley Act, without going into any further specifics on the actual criticism and just pointing to an appropriate article where that debate is covered in full. Masem (t) 19:53, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

  As O3000 mentioned upthread, the "policies" they are criticizing don't even exist. But I understand your view is that this isn't relevant in this article. Jonathan f1 (talk) 20:03, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

  All Robert asked for was a suggested wording as to start an RFC, not discuss those choices yet. — Masem (t) 20:40, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

  He also asked us to compose a draft, which means we need to come to an agreement on acceptable options. But okay, we'll wait. Jonathan f1 (talk) 20:52, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

  I could fully support Masem’s language. That said (just to give another option that does not mention Biden by name), we might phrase it as: “Riley's death was used by Republicans to bolster their calls for more robust immigration policies. This explains the context, and leads into the passage of the Riley Act. Blueboar (talk) 21:12, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

  Without attempting to derail this process, I'd offer a link to the Laken Riley Act for consideration

  " Findings.—Congress finds that the Nation—

  (1) mourns the devastating loss of Laken Riley and other victims of the Biden administration’s open borders policies''';"[26]

  The very language used in this Act speaks of 'open border' policies that don't exist, and then ascribes these views to "the Nation". Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:31, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

  Congress does not have a NPOV policy. It’s actually allowed to be partisan. Blueboar (talk) 21:39, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

  Well that's a mighty polite way of saying that they constantly attacked Biden for completely opening the border and inviting immigrants to come to the US to vote for him. O3000, Ret. (talk) 21:35, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

• Separate from this article's terms, I feel Immigration policy of the Joe Biden administration is the right place to point to -- except that it is missing appropriate criticism and debate (using sourcing that has been given throughout this thread) to identify the GOP's point and where appropriate facts and counterpoints can be added. --Masem (t) 15:34, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

  Problem with the GOP's point is that it is built upon a fallacy. Now, if they were honest about it, they'd have a point. Problem with linking to Immigration policy of the Joe Biden administration is that it is not what the GOP is arguing against. Adjusting that article might be a solution. But, it will likely require longer discussions than this one. O3000, Ret. (talk) 15:44, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

  However, as WP editors we cannot discriminate on a viewpoint published in numerous high quality RSes, even if we think or know that viewpoint is wrong. To dismiss such information itself that meets DUE is an NPOV violation. But we can make sure that counterpoints and fact checking that is also published in high quality RSes that disprove the falsehoods and misinformation that viewpoint is built on is also included. But key is that is information all tied to the criticism of the Biden's administration policy (There's also Democratic and left-leaning criticism of the policy as well, so it would not be just the GOP's points) — Masem (t) 18:22, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

  What's the point of trawling the net for immigration/crime data to try and veer an article on Biden admin policy in that direction? The sources probably don't even exist, because the subject of illegal immigration and crime rates is rarely, if ever, discussed in conjunction with Biden's policies. It's discussed in "numerous high quality RSes" in individual cases like Laken Riley, where it is more relevant. Jonathan f1 (talk) 19:21, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

  Because the specific criticism that ties these cases together is the GOP's specific response to the Biden's administration, or at least in the time period of his administration. Its not a response to immigration into the US in general. Nor were these types of arguments present during Obama's (and of course Trump's) administration.

  Arguably each major component of a presidental adminstration's platform (like economic, immigration, military, etc.) should have its own article, and in that article should be the appropriate elements of criticism, legal challenges, etc. that would help to define how that platform was described. Masem (t) 21:41, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

  The reason why that article is missing the content and sourcing discussed on this thread is because it isn't the position of the Biden administration. Both Biden and Trump are making their little photo op visits to the southern border, and are currently in a war of words over who's tougher on illegal migrants. Biden's big criticism of Trump is that Trump didn't endorse his tough-on-migrants border bill, and the article you link makes it clear that the Biden administration has continued many of Trump's border policies (eg extending Title 42, sending troops to the border etc). Cases like Riley's are notable because they're seized on as examples of a mayhem-enabling immigration system, the latest cases of migrant predation. And this is very much a bipartisan delusion.

  The content I sourced on immigration and crime comes from non-partisan, apolitical academic studies, and is usually only cited in RSes that cover individual cases like Riley's, as a neutral counterargument to political rhetoric coming from both parties. If you try introducing this content on an article about Biden's immigration policy, it would likely provoke the same issues you've raised here (ie that it isn't relevant to the subject), and it is there where your argument makes more sense. The only page we have that specifically addresses this subject is a general article on Immigration and crime, but it covers migrant/crime research across multiple countries and continents, and does not specifically address US politics (although they do mention Trump twice, but only to say his refugee ban had no impact on crime rates, and that his claims about terrorism were false). Jonathan f1 (talk) 17:32, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

  If Immigration and crime would be the right venue for what you want to add, but is too broad in geographical scope… It sounds like we could use an Immigration and crime in the US sub-article. No? Blueboar (talk) 20:13, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

  I think that may be necessary, and I believe we briefly discussed this a week ago when this section was opened. The article Masem linked would not work considering the immigration/crime issue rarely, if ever, appears in sources covering Biden policies. And the general article on 'immigration and crime' would hardly warrant mentioning specific cases in the US. The only time multiple RSes frequently cover this research is in connection with these individual cases, like Laken Riley. Jonathan f1 (talk) 20:57, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

• To avoid another circular discussion, while we seem to have agreed on a number of options for an RfC, most of them involve linking to a more appropriate article, which doesn't seem to exist on here. If the decision comes down to creating a new article on "US immigration and crime", just to link the Laken Riley article (and similar ones), I'm wondering who here has any interest in working on it. I'm not involved in editing the Laken Riley article and have little interest in the subject as a whole; in fact I find the repetitive political debate boring and unproductive. I stumbled on the Laken Riley article, saw what appeared to be a violation of NPOV, and tried to get it resolved. Again, RSes discuss immigration/crime research in the context of these individual cases, not Biden policies.Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:11, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

  There are over 20,000 homicides a year in the US. Obviously we don't add 20,000 articles a year on such. This very small article (small because so little is known) was added because a party is pushing a racist narrative putting it into recent news, even though there are no witnesses to what may or may not have been a crime and no trial has even been scheduled, much less an adjudication. We have an essay on WP:RECENTISM which has been largely ignored for some time. Unfortunate for an encyclopedia. But we must live by the fact that Wikipedia is moving closer to becoming a breaking news site. </rant> O3000, Ret. (talk) 00:29, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  Once again, I really do not like your reading racism into this. I find it totally inappropriate and quite repulsive, to be honest. TanRabbitry (talk) 00:52, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  Reliable journalism seems to indicate that there's racist alarmism co-opting (also see [27]) this tragedy for ends that are quite a bit more repulsive than an editor pointing out that there's racism in the way certain elements of society are pushing the topic in discourse. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 01:26, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  I don't think the opinion piece is really "reliable journalism," however, as to the other article, I would certainly sympathize with any Hispanic students who feel threatened or otherwise mistreated. A sad reality of human nature is the tendency to view groups of people as monolithic beyond any semblance of reason. There was a horrific murder in Texas a year and a half ago and the suspect was a delivered driver. People actually reported that they dreaded seeing delivery vans and I believe at least one driver spoke of being shunned. The ease with which people can be whipped into suspicion and hysteria is quite disturbing. The issue is not over idiots threatening random people, but over allegations of a "racist narrative" supposedly being pushed by an entire party. That is what I do not like. TanRabbitry (talk) 02:03, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  There are quite a few opinion pieces 'reading racism' into this case, and some that are not opinion pieces at all. Here's The Boston Globe[28], MSNBC[29], The NY Times[30], an NPR article about a bill pushed in the Georgia legislature that's using the Laken Riley murder "to target wholesale, an immigrant and Latino community"[31]. And FYI -the phrase "say her name!", that Marjorie Taylor Greene appropriated and shouted at the president, was coined by a black racial justice activist, and this is coming from AP News.[32].

  But 100 sources later and the argument will be "not relevant to this article, find another article and link to it." No wonder this circular discussion has been going on for over a week. Jonathan f1 (talk) 17:15, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  Well, I can't see two of those articles because I am not a subscriber to them. Two of the other articles include opinions attributed to activists. There certainly entitled to their opinion, but their argument can be countered and in the case of the NPR article, is. The MSNBC article I will admit, contains the direct assertions of the author and is not framed as opinion. However, I would challenge anyone to read it and then seriously say the author is even remotely unbiased and/or fair.

  Principally, however, I don't think we should be adding charges of racism against either position while we discuss this. Thank you, TanRabbitry (talk) 18:10, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  Speaking of breaking news, a few days ago I mentioned the latest murder-by-migrant case, and now someone's created a Killing of Jocelyn Nungaray article, with the same issues we find in the same section of Laken Riley. I think this has now become a decision of whether this encyclopedia is going to become a "breaking migrant murder news" platform, or we cover this subject in one general article, with only the more notable cases having their own article. So, maybe add this as an RfC option. Jonathan f1 (talk) 17:33, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  I don't know about that case. It's still pretty new, so we don't know if it will be as widely talked about as this one. It is significant enough that something a Harris county judge said about it has made news. TanRabbitry (talk) 18:19, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  And yet it already has an article on here, with a reaction section about Biden's immigration policies. And it was created right around the same time I cited an MSNBC article on Joceyln as the latest example of "migrant crime" exploitation. Do you think this encyclopedia should be used to create articles of every murder by an illegal migrant within a week or less of publication, with absolutely no balance or context beyond vague statements about border policies?

  "Per policy, Wikipedia is not for scandal mongering or gossip. Even in respected media, a 24-hour news cycle and other pressures inherent in the journalism industry can lead to infotainment and churnalism without proper fact checking, and they may engage in frivolous "silly season" reporting. Some editors may take into account perceived media bias, such as Missing white woman syndrome, when assessing notability. Note that this guideline applies to articles about a wide range of subjects beyond just events including articles about living people, celebrities, and fringe ideas."[33]

  The bias here that we might want to take into account is "migrant murder syndrome." Jonathan f1 (talk) 18:30, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  we don't know if it will be as widely talked about as this one: That we don't know is precisely why we have guidelines like WP:SUSTAINED: Wikipedia is a lagging indicator of notability, and Brief bursts of news coverage may not sufficiently demonstrate notability. It's been scarcely two weeks since Nungaray's death, and it's an undeniable tragedy. That does not change that Wikipedia is WP:NOTNEWS, nor does it change the WP:NPOV issues with the undue weight being placed on flash-in-the-pan politicized rhetoric from pundits and electoral candidates. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 18:31, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  Agreed. Jonathan f1 (talk) 18:34, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  I would also agree. From a Notability standpoint, the reaction to Riley’s death stands out because it reached a stage well beyond routine news headlines (most significantly - an act of Congress was named after her). We can’t say that about other deaths in the headlines (or at least, we can’t say that yet). I do think we are too quick to write articles on recent news events, and too quick to add breaking news to existing articles. Waiting helps us to better understand the historical significance (if any) of the news. Blueboar (talk) 20:03, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

  I'd just like to point out to other editors that I didn't write the article, nor have I contributed to it. You seem to think that I'm defending it and I even said that I wasn't sure if it should be an article yet.

  I will say that I don't think we should be coining phrases like "migrant murder syndrome." That isn't our place, is it? TanRabbitry (talk) 03:42, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

• We have wandered off the path… so let’s refocus. We are discussing Killing of Laken Riley. I think we have consensus on the broad direction the article should go, but are not quite there as to specific language. We have several proposals. Do we have any more… or can we discuss those proposals and try to reach consensus on one of them? Blueboar (talk) 12:14, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Draft RFC

I have developed a draft RFC which is available for your viewing and review at Talk:Killing of Laken Riley/RFC on Aftermath . I think that this encapsulates the options that have been suggested. My question about Option B is: What article should there be a link to? If the article exists, we should identify it. If it does not exist, referring to a future article may confuse the community, who will ask what article, or will argue about what article.

However, there also is now discussion about reaching a consensus here at NPOVN. So, will there be a consensus reached here at NPOVN, or do we let the community decide with an RFC? If we send this to the community, we should agree on what the options are, and get the RFC running within a few days. Robert McClenon (talk) 23:42, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Getting an agreement here on the exact RfC text will likely continue this discussion until the next geologic epoch (which may be sooner than expected). An RfC need not be perfect. It must only be neutral and cover all the bases. I say go with the draft as is. O3000, Ret. (talk) 00:14, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

I'm having trouble parsing Option D - The killing was used by Republicans to raise opposition to their claims of Biden's immigration policies, with a POV tag on two fronts:

• Would this be a version of the text that says Republicans publicized the killing of Riley to stoke opposition to Republicans themselves and their claims ('raise opposition to their claims')? Is this supposed to say 'raise support for their claims about'?
• If this RFC is to achieve consensus about action to be taken to provide neutral point of view in the Aftermath section of the article, why does Option D (and only Option D) involve adding a POV tag? Would that be concluding that there's consensus for that section of the article to contravene WP:NPOV, and also consensus to recognize that it contravenes WP:NPOV, but furthermore consensus to leave it that way?

Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 00:50, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Option B is a link to the appropriate article. What article is that? I won't start the RFC until I have some idea what the linked article is. Robert McClenon (talk) 01:00, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

This is the problem -there is no alternative article that addresses what the Riley article itself should address. We really should have an article on the US immigration debate, with sections on politicized migrant crimes and research, but we currently don't. The Immigration policy of the Joe Biden administration article doesn't cover this, and the Immigration and crime article has little to do with US politics. I would like some idea of what this 'linked article' is also. Jonathan f1 (talk) 01:26, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

To have these articles on the killings to make any sense in context, we should have content somewhere that discusses the current state of immigration (not just in relation to crime), the current policies on immigration, and points and counterpoints about these two areas. These killing articles are obviously not the place for this lengthy content. It absolutely makes sense to expand the article on Immigration in the Biden administration article, and there is really no other logical place. If we don't have this info so where, these killing article sit in a void of notability and should be deleted as NOTNEWS (but that I don't think is a solution) Masem (t) 20:00, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Actually, if it is an option (deleting killing articles on the basis of NOTNEWS at least until some of these other articles are expanded) I would support this over the others. Jonathan f1 (talk) 02:33, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

This RfC is borderline unintelligible. The Republican pov and counterarguments are both presented neutrally according to reliable sources. - Passive voice is odd for an action, but what does it even mean? Which POV and what does it mean to present them neutrally? Isn't that a big part of the debate? A generalized statement and link to the appropriate article. - What generalized statement? The killing was used by Republicans to raise opposition to their claims of Biden's immigration policies, with a POV tag. - Why on earth would an RfC include a POV tag. If the goal isn't to resolve POV tags, it's not a good use of time. If the response to these is "you can find answers in the vast morass above", it's a bad RfC. — Rhododendrites ^talk \\ 13:44, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

I'm not opposed to removing some of these options, like the POV tag which I never agreed to anyway. The dispute is basically over whether to include detailed context of why this murder became a national story, or a link to another article that might offer that context, but doesn't seem to exist at the moment. This case was politically exploited by (mostly, but not entirely) Republicans who used it as the latest example of an illegal migrant crime wave, so that they could attack Biden's border policies. Neither the crime wave nor the border policies actually exist, and there's no shortage of reliable sources that discuss this aspect of Riley's homicide. There are some people here who want the article only to reference the counterfactual claims made by Republicans and then link to another article; while others feel that it's this article that could use this context, and that there's no other, more appropriate article to link to anyway. At one point a compromise was offered that we publish only a very general statement (ie one that doesn't even mention 'Republicans') and then link to another article.

So, maybe find a way to nutshell all this into a more comprehensible RfC. The options currently on the list were just rough ideas that were supposed to be developed into a final draft. Or we could resolve this here, right now, without an RfC or another week of discussion.Jonathan f1 (talk) 19:10, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Query: what did people find objectionable about my suggested wording of: ““Riley's death was used by Republicans to bolster their calls for more robust immigration policies.”? I only ask because it seems to have gotten lost in the arguments about other stuff. Blueboar (talk) 22:09, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

Well, if you added the word "cynically" before bolster it would be accurate. But we can't do that. O3000, Ret. (talk) 22:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC)

It's an example of presenting only the Republican perspective without additional context.

Masem made a good suggestion -what do you think about deleting these 'killing' articles, at least temporarily? There are no verdicts in any of these cases so 'NOTNEWS' can apply here. In the meantime some of the other articles on immigration/crime can develop more and potentially serve as a useful link if any of the articles on individual cases are restored. Jonathan f1 (talk) 02:40, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

To be honest, I am very tired of this debate, but here are a couple thoughts I had:

1. While exaggerated claims of "an open border" are not literally true, can anyone here seriously say that there are not legitimate and serious border concerns? I repeat my previous comparison; the hyperbole being employed by some Republicans here is of similar substance to that used by all politicians. Do we need to add context to every article talking about taxing the wealthy a "fair share," with statistic that the top 10% of earners pay 60% of taxes?
2. I like editor Blueboar's idea. I would suggest tweaking it to: "Riley's death was extensively referenced by Republicans in their calls for tighter border security."
3. I don't know about other similar articles, but this one made international news, was talked about extensively, made it into the State of the Union and has been refrenced by numerous politicians on both sides of the aisle. It obviously should not be deleted.

Thank you, TanRabbitry (talk) 08:31, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

I'm not going to "debate" border issues with you here, but to respond briefly to point 1 -no, nothing about US immigration politics is legitimate or serious. I told you over a week ago that the issue at the border has to do with outdated immigration laws, that only some small fraction of migrants have a realistic chance of lawful entry, and that until politicians upgrade the laws and disincentivize illegal immigration, the groundhog day political debate will continue. The odds of you being killed by an illegal migrant are on the order of 0.00003%. You have better odds of being killed by a dog (~0.0008%) and better odds of being killed by a bee than a dog (~0.002%). So, some subjects that are of more concern to the safety of Americans that we might rather spend time debating include: diabetes, science funding for cancer research, car accidents, mass shootings, and bee stings. Somewhere at the bottom of all this would be the migrant issue, if this were a serious, rational debate.

So let me ask you now: why do we need these individual killing articles on Wikipedia? Your only defense is that this murder was politicized and made news yet the issue is that this isn't a news site. Take a look at other crime/homicide articles on here -almost none of them have anything to do with politics, and the cases are still notable 10, 20, 30 years later. The Riley killing wasn't notable enough for mention on Immigration policy of the Joe Biden administration or Immigration and crime, so why should this killing, or any individual killing, have its own article? Jonathan f1 (talk) 18:15, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

There are certainly other concerns than crime. Boiling every issue on illegal immigration down to crime is incredibly narrow sighted. TanRabbitry (talk) 19:01, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

what do you think about deleting these 'killing' articles, at least temporarily? There are no verdicts in any of these cases so 'NOTNEWS' can apply here.: I'm inclined to this. I'd add that these articles also fall afoul of WP:SUSTAINED: these articles are built largely on flash-in-the-pan breaking news—not investigative journalism, not peer-reviewed journals, not mainstream monographs, not university press books. While the general phenomenon of tragic murders getting politicized may be notable, the individual killings are not. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 18:24, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Yes agreed - they should either be mentioned in general articles on immigration and crime or border policy debates (which they are currently not), or maybe an article on the intersection of politics and crime (which I don't think exists atm). So far none of these individual cases have crossed the threshold between news items and encyclopedic notability, and it's doubtful they ever will. By the time there's a verdict in the Riley murder, it will probably be discussed alongside multiple other cases that have since been politicized. Jonathan f1 (talk) 18:37, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

The thing that makes the Riley killing stand out is that it resulted in legislation being named after her. That didn’t happen with other deaths. Blueboar (talk) 19:02, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Even so, even in the case of the killing of Riley, The notability guideline reminds that a notable topic can be covered better as part of a larger article, where there can be more complete context that would be lost on a separate page. Covering it in a separate article that struggles to provide that context is what's creating the NPOV issue under discussion to begin with. The killing of Riley would make more sense contextualized as part of a more general article about, say, the politics, rhetoric, and politicization of immigration and crime in the United States. Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 19:15, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Exactly what Hydrangeans said. And also, a Congressional act isn't ipso facto notable. Out of a list of acts passed by Congress in 2023 -24, only some small handful have an article. There is no article, for example, about "Prohibiting Russian Uranium Imports Act", or "Airport and Airway Extension Act of 2024, Part II." The Laken Riley Act should be included in one of these lists, but whether or not it's notable enough for its own article is a separate issue.

I would also add that a Congressional act doesn't legitimize hysteria. As they say, hysteria is short-lived in a nation of practical 'men', and so should not be the basis of a permanent encyclopedia article. Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:14, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Sigh… we seem to be backtracking from attempting to find consensus, so I’m backing out for now. Ping me when this goes to an RFC. Blueboar (talk) 21:53, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

It seems like at least two of us agree on something and you don't, so I don't see how that's backtracking. If this does go to an Rfc (and it doesn't have to), I would propose these two options as alternatives to the draft linked above:

1. Is the Laken Riley Killing notable enough for its own article or should it be discussed as part of a general article on immigration, crime and politics?

or

2. If yes on notability, should the article discuss all relevant context on immigration, crime and politics as it appears in reliable sources?

There's no need to overcomplicate this. It's either yes/no it should have its own article, and if yes, then yes/no it requires detailed context. Jonathan f1 (talk) 22:28, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

There is roughly 0% of consensus forming to delete articles like this one, so not really worth the debate. Even as someone who doesn't think we should have these until lasting significance is demonstrated, I'd acknowledge this one is notable. — Rhododendrites ^talk \\ 19:00, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Two Ways Forward ?

This NPOVN thread is now 21,000 words, and 40 normal-sized pages. I see that two ways forward are being discussed. The first way forward is the RFC. I have revised the RFC, which is still at Talk:Killing of Laken Riley/RFC on Aftermath . I have changed the order of the options so as to move the option with the link to another article to the end. In order to vote meaningfully for that option, the editor should either identify the article to be linked, or write the article. I have removed the mention of a POV tag. If an editor thinks that wording is non-neutral, they can vote for something else. I am ready to activate the RFC in its current form if we think that is the way forward.

The second way forward is to propose to delete the article. I personally disagree with that option, because the killing has been heavily covered by reliable sources. However, a case is being presented that the coverage is all political. If someone nominates the article for deletion, the RFC can wait until we see whether there will still be an article. An AFD is likely to be very heavily participated in, even if not as heavily as Mass Killings Under Communist Regimes (MKUCR). It will almost certainly be sufficiently participated in that it won't be necessary to relist it, and so should be done in seven days.

Unless someone provides a reason why further discussion here is likely to be productive, I will wait about 48 hours to see if someone nominates the article for deletion. If so, we will wait for a decision on the AFC. If not, I will start the RFC.

Comments? Robert McClenon (talk) 17:54, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

A third option is a merge on the basis this being more about the politics than the crime, but to what article it should merge into is not clear. Masem (t) 18:02, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

The second way forward is an AFD, and the option of merging can be discussed as an Alternative To Deletion. So I see two ways forward from this discussion that is otherwise going in circles. Robert McClenon (talk) 18:14, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Then I would call the second option either to seek deletion or a merge via an appropriate forum. (If merge is the intent Ed target, you're not supposed to used AFD for that hence why I treated it as a third option) — Masem (t) 23:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Sorry, still not seeing this RfC as helpful. The purpose of an RfC is to attract uninvolved parties to help form a consensus, but you've done nothing to explain what any of the options means or where the dispute lies, and some look to be facially problematic in preempting WP:NPOV. Here's a third way forward (no new subsection necessary): disagreeing parties draft 2-4 versions of a section [that's currently called aftermath, but doesn't have to be]. Ideally, two versions are the preferred versions for the different sides, and then at least one factors in the strongest objections of either side to come up with a compromise neither is happy with. Hold an RfC as to which should be the starting point for further revisions (i.e. not necessarily perfect, but the closest). — Rhododendrites ^talk \\ 19:16, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

It doesn't even require drafting a whole section of content. The 'aftermath' section, which may be alternatively called "reactions" or even "politicization", will either include a statement like this:

“Riley's death was used by Republicans to bolster their calls for more robust immigration policies."

or to the effect of this:

"The case became a political talking point for more restrictive immigration policies. Opponents of illegal immigration emphasized that the suspect had entered the country illegally, despite research showing that undocumented immigrants are less likely to commit crimes than native-born Americans."

Both statements would be backed by RSes discussing the Laken Riley killing, only one is missing critical context. All of these other complications about deletion, merging, linking and POV tags, evolved out of a simpler dispute of whether to present only one political pov or additional context. The offer to link to another article was presented to get some of us to agree to publishing biased pov in the Laken Riley article (something to the effect of statement #1), but there isn't any article to link that covers this. I think a strong case could be made to delete the whole article and cover the killing as part of a more general article on immigration, crime and politics, but there doesn't seem to be much appetite for that. Notability does not always mean something needs its own article; as the rules state: a notable topic can be covered better as part of a larger article, where there can be more complete context that would be lost on a separate page. If this doesn't apply here, I don't know where it would. Jonathan f1 (talk) 20:05, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

I wouldn't want to see a list of killings in an article on immigration any more than a list of killing by left-handed people in an article about lefties. Assuming for the moment that this was a murder and that it was at the hand of an immigrant, there is still no nonpolitical connection between his immigration status and the killing. And please no one respond that if he hadn't come in there may not have been a murder. If left handed people were deported, there wouldn't be any left-handed killers. And I'm sure some of the millions of visa overstayers have killed - yet I see no articles about them. Because they aren't convenient political targets. O3000, Ret. (talk) 20:19, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Not even the girl's parents believe that tougher border security would've prevented their daughter's murder. The belief that it is even possible to keep "illegal" or foreign people out of the country is something that exists only in political fantasyland. Not only do ~8 million non-migrants enter and leave the US every year (on business, work visas or simply as tourists), but visa overstays exceed illegal border crossings by a factor of ~2 to 1 on any given year (and more than half of the undocumented population arrived by air)[34] .According to Homeland Security, 850,000 people overstayed visas in 2022, not one of them illegally crossed the southern border, and not a peep was made about it in Congress or political press.[35][36] Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:17, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Just pointing it out again, you're reducing the debate to a straw man. You are assuming that illegal aliens have the same right to live in the country as a left-handed citizen has. You can argue for that, but you can't assume it. Additionally, entering (or overstaying) in the country illegally makes you a criminal. You can certainly argue that is insignificant, but being left-handed is a a totally different category; it is an aspect of your body, not your status under the law. TanRabbitry (talk) 23:23, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

I don't think anyone wants to ive in a country that has absolutely sealed borders, however, assuming it is impossible to reduce millions to any lower number is a bit silly. "The case became a political talking point in the debate over immigration policies." How about just this sentence? TanRabbitry (talk) 23:26, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Okay, and a link to this article. It covers the crime research discussed here as well as additional economic factors that get left out of the political debate. Jonathan f1 (talk) 23:29, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

If we absolutely cannot compromise on what to say, I have presented two options:

1. Return to the original status quo ante.
2. The above sentence.

TanRabbitry (talk) 01:30, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

And I'm offering you a compromise to end this tedious discussion and avoid an Rfc: option 2, the above sentence, and a link to the article I linked on illegal immigration in the US. It covers pretty much every aspect of the debate, crime research, economic research, and more. Jonathan f1 (talk) 01:48, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Just pointing it out again, you're reducing the debate to a straw man. You are assuming that illegal aliens have the same right to live in the country as a left-handed citizen has. TanRabbitry, look up strawman because unlike what I said, what you just presented is the actual definition of a strawman as I never suggested any such thing. And no, it is not a different "category" as I am talking about killers in both cases. And what you said assumes the suspect was both the killer and illegally in the country with no conviction of either. O3000, Ret. (talk) 00:18, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Just to answer briefly: "Assuming for the moment that this was a murder and that it was at the hand of an immigrant." I didn't know I had to spell that out after you already did. Being a criminal, being left handed, being female, being Japanese, being green-eyed, being a policemen, being a Lutheran, being a libertarian, being elderly, et cetera, are all various categories that people may belong to. Comparing the category of a specific criminal status and the category of handedness is absurd. It would at least be a comparison of the same kind (though I do have objections to this comparison as well) to compare them to people who speed while driving. TanRabbitry (talk) 01:25, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Firstly, he is not a criminal under the law. No conviction. Secondly, what's the difference? I was specifically providing different categories, not the same category. That was my obvious point. O3000, Ret. (talk) 01:46, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

You temporarily assumed his guilt, as you said. Criminal here refers to his being an illegal alien; he entered the country illegally, a criminal offense. What do you mean what's the difference? You're comparing apples and oranges. TanRabbitry (talk) 04:12, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Please stop mischaracterizing what I say. And please stop claiming that the suspect is guilty of anything as there has been no trial. You do not know for a fact that he entered the country illegally. This is a charge, not a conviction. We also do not call the tens of millions who have overstayed visas "criminals". We do not call the Americans who drive through customs from Canada with July 4th fireworks in their trunks criminals. We don't use it in the Trump article, even though he has been convicted. We should not throw around words like that. This is a WP:BLP vio. O3000, Ret. (talk) 10:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Or you can think about this statistically: the odds of you being killed by a migrant are lower than the odds of you dying from a bee sting. Crime rates are down in major cities, and Biden has mostly continued Trump's border policies, which I don't agree with anyway. The notability of this article is fundamentally political, propaganda-based, and there's no dancing around it. It isn't just my opinion either -it's what reliable sources say.

So, do we have a deal on that compromise? Jonathan f1 (talk) 01:56, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

I don't think we alone get to decide. We may agree on it, but let's let the others weigh in. I would tend to assume there will be more discourse the day after tomorrow. I will speak with y'all then. Happy 4th of July (including you, editor Objective3000). TanRabbitry (talk) 04:17, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

Happy 4th of July. I look forward to resolving this after the holiday. Jonathan f1 (talk) 04:41, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

I would like to suggest the article on Illegal immigration to the United States as an appropriate article to link, should that be decided. Jonathan f1 (talk) 23:25, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Third Way Forward?

This is getting a little ridiculous as to the amount written on this debate. The following is a pretty bad deal for all of us, but that is the nature of compromise; if we can't even agree on how to frame options for others to choose from, maybe we should return the article to its previous state. Perhaps no changes are better than either of our attempts to "improve" it. Thank you, TanRabbitry (talk) 19:34, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

You must be new here… we Wikipedians can spend months arguing about which previous state to return an article to. :) Blueboar (talk) 21:02, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

I figured that would come up. I would argue for the edit right before Trump’s comment (as of June 14th) was removed. Like it or not, and putting aside opinions on the content, he is a very prominent voice. However, if most of us believe that it should not be so, the version after his comment was removed (July 1st) is fine, too. I don't anticipate anyone debating this that much over the next day. I hope everyone has a happy 4th of July. Thank you,

TanRabbitry (talk) 23:15, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

In case anyone is interested, we are now at 23,600 words and 44 normal pages. Robert McClenon (talk) 22:58, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

I'd file an AfD, but it would fail. The AfD process is currently under fire; but I haven't watched it. IMO folks think GNG is the be all and end all while ignoring NOTNEWS and RECENTISM, albeit an essay. And t isn't a stub because of a large number of completely useless links like Georgia Bulldogs softball. Might be worth the exercise anyhow. O3000, Ret. (talk) 00:29, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

Call for Paragraphs for Way Forward

I think that what User:Rhododendrites is saying that the RFC, as currently drafted, has vague options for how to rework the Aftermath paragraph. I think they have a good idea in calling the editors here to write draft paragraphs rather than merely discuss draft paragraphs. So I am asking each editor who has contributed to the RFC, or to this discussion in general, to write draft text for a paragraph in place of the current Aftermath paragraph. When the draft paragraphs are ready, I will provide a revised draft RFC for the community to choose between versions of the paragraph. In the meantime, if anyone nominates the article for deletion, any RFC will wait until a decision is made to Keep the article. So please provide draft paragraphs. Robert McClenon (talk) 04:56, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

I have commented at the (draft) RFC. Blueboar (talk) 17:20, 4 July 2024 (UTC)

I would suggest that we shift this drafting process over to the article talk page. Blueboar (talk) 01:20, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

Apologize for the delay. The touchpad on my laptop isn't functioning and so had to order a mouse. I'll check back when it arrives. It was quite tedious getting here to leave a reply using a tab key and other keyboard commands. Jonathan f1 (talk) 21:47, 5 July 2024 (UTC)

We've begun to draft suggestions on the Rfc draft talk. Enter your preferred text so we can get this thing going and over with. Jonathan f1 (talk) 00:53, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

Thomas Niedermayer

The article Thomas Niedermayer is in some places worded rather strangely; seven months ago the first sentence of the article was edited in an apparent attempt to downplay the role of his abductors in his death.

Another editor is defending the current wording based on some rather dubious lines of argument; such as claiming that the word "killed" is in all circumstances a synonym of "murder", and claimed I was trying to relitigate a court case. When I brought the definitions of "murder", "manslaughter", and "killing" to their attention they simply refused to respond. When confronted with multiple reliable sources which disagree with their position, they cherrypicked a single source and now claim that the article needs to mitigate the culpability of his abductors to an even greater degree despite the overwhelming preponderance of reliable sources being in opposition.

I do not believe they are acting in good faith, since they do not directly address any points raised and refuse to engage with legitimate concerns. I do not yet wish to take this to the incidents noticeboard and hope the situation can be dealt with by drawing attention to the article and its issues here. 92.21.248.228 (talk) 04:41, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Hello, 92.21.248.228 I'm a non-administrator editor, but saw your entry here. I gave my support to the current RfC of "kidnapped and killed" on the article talk page. I noticed that an editor who commented before me about a different topic on the Noticeboard ALSO supported usage of "kidnapped and killed' on the talk page. We did not coordinate! It was coincidental. While I was there, I cleaned up the article a bit as there were duplicate refs, some misspellings, and unsourced content.

Although I have no power to remediate, I observed the comments made by that other editor, not just to you, but to several others, in a tone that is atypical for creating an encyclopedia in good faith:

1. "I couldn't care less what you say"
2. "We're not interested in your own opinions"
3. "We're not interested in your own "observations"
4. "Your reply is specious and not germane to this discussion"
5. "The article didn't discuss that at all, until I made sure it did"
6. "For many years this article was in fact wrong, until I recently fixed it"
7. "The article needs amending in the exact opposite way you want to change it"

I DID notice that Niedermayer's death is described not as a killing but as a murder in the Wikipedia List of Kidnappings and is properly sourced (see section for 1950 to 1979, as I couldn't link directly) and by a recent WP:RS secondary source, "Documentary film traces trauma of a brutal IRA murder" (10 August 2023) via The Guardian. A court of law sentenced two men to between 5 and 20 years in prison for Niedermayer's death and the men admitted in court to having pistol-whipped Niedermayer to death, then buried his body in a shallow grave. Therefore the other editor's insistence that Niedermayer's death was an accident or due to unknown causes, while being rather rude to at least four editors, seems to me to be something that needs to be addressed.--FeralOink (talk) 12:48, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

Proposal to remove use of word Islamist in September 11 attacks wiki

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:September_11_attacks#Proposal_to_remove_use_of_word_Islamist_in_September_11_attacks_wiki

Gsgdd (talk) 20:20, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

La France Insoumise has an RfC

La France Insoumise has an RfC for possible consensus. A discussion is taking place. If you would like to participate in the discussion, you are invited to add your comments on the discussion page. Thank you. Chaotic Enby (talk · contribs) 20:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)

Taylor Swift has an RfC

Taylor Swift has an RfC for possible consensus. A discussion is taking place. If you would like to participate in the discussion, you are invited to add your comments on the discussion page. Thank you. PHShanghai | they/them (talk) 06:00, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

List of South Korean girl groups has an RfC

List of South Korean girl groups has an RfC for possible consensus. A discussion is taking place. If you would like to participate in the discussion, you are invited to add your comments on the discussion page. Thank you. 98𝚃𝙸𝙶𝙴𝚁𝙸𝚄𝚂 • [𝚃𝙰𝙻𝙺] 12:02, 13 July 2024 (UTC)

RFC - Gaza Health Ministry qualifier

Moved to Wikipedia:Requests for comment/Gaza Health Ministry qualifier

 – ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 12:15, 22 July 2024 (UTC)

Aaron Maté

Article is using citation methods that goes against WP:NPOV for an example citation/source 8 refers to a third party subjective opinion on the person in the article and uses this as a basis to make seemingly objective information. If this source were to be used, it should correctly state that this is an opinion by the Jewish Chronicle - or described in an article by the Jewish Chronicle, not used as a source to standing alone to use as basis of using adjective terms to describe the person or his current employer. Further, it is disturbing that editors with privileges has locked it and not adressed this issue, but kept as is even though they have continously been made aware of it by the community. Hapsback (talk) 17:02, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

Discussion should be put in the Talk Page of the article.

Locking down pages is normal for edit warring and for certain contentious topics. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 17:26, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

The problem is that the guidelines are not being following according to guidelines on neutrality, and the lock is only enforcing this by ignoring the problem. That is why I posted this. Hapsback (talk) 17:33, 16 July 2024 (UTC)

@Hapsback, if you want to open an RfC on whether it the Greyzone is a "fringe, far-left site", you can. Otherwise, I believe the consensus is to include that. Allan Nonymous (talk) 18:22, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Edit war at Kirk Shaw

While patrolling recent changes, I found that this article about a Canadian film producer is the subject of an edit war in which both sides' preferred versions have significant WP:NPOV and WP:BLP problems. One camp appears to be associated with the article's subject, and the other associated with people involved in a labor dispute with him. For details, see my post on the talk page. Huntthetroll (talk) 21:34, 23 July 2024 (UTC)

American Legion

American Legion has some POV problems. I have tried to fix many of them, but I do not live in the USA so it would be nice if someone who does can take a look at it.

Polygnotus (talk) 02:40, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

Jinn: RfC: Proposed additions of text 1

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User inputs and comments are requested at:

• Talk:Jinn#RfC: Proposed additions of text 1.

Bookku (talk) 14:23, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

Blacklist/whitelist

I would like some editors to review if these removals at Blacklisting, Blacklist (computing), and Whitelist on "UNDUE" grounds were warranted. Nardog (talk) 19:07, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

Not warrarented. The issue over the racial connotations of those terms is well documented by academic sources so definitely not undue. — Masem (t) 19:17, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

These controversy sections are in part based on self-published sources, which should be removed, and are firmly rooted in Anglo politics and cultural sensitivities, and wider Western colonial context, which don't make much sense elsewhere in the world. It's WP:UNDUE to devote them sections this long, in proportion to the rest, in articles about technical concepts. NicolausPrime (talk) 19:33, 24 July 2024 (UTC)

Removal was not warranted, but I'd agree that the sections were probably longer than they needed to be. @NicolausPrime can you clarify which self-published refs you thought should be removed? I have some WP:SYNTH concerns with a few refs from the Whitelist and Blacklist articles, especially the Martin 1991 ref as I didn't see any mention of either phrase in it, but nothing jumped out as an WP:SPS. There are quite a few refs though so I suspect I'm just missing it. CambrianCrab (talk) 19:33, 25 July 2024 (UTC)

@CambrianCrab: In both Blacklisting and Whitelist, evident self-published sources were [37] and [38], as the former is a blog and the latter is an advice website.

In Blacklist (computing), a large portion of the controversy section text was sourced to:

• A company announcement, [39]
• Twitter post, [40]
• Git commit, [41]
• Another git commit. [42]

These too are WP:SELFPUBLISHED and WP:PRIMARY sources. NicolausPrime (talk) 20:10, 25 July 2024 (UTC)

Thank you, I had missed the first two. I did see the ones on Blacklist (computing), but figured those fell more under WP:ABOUTSELF (with the exception of the Git commits, which I agree feel a little more like WP:PRIMARY). Regardless, the bullet points for each company were a bit overkill and I don't think any of those refs are necessary for the articles in question CambrianCrab (talk) 21:34, 25 July 2024 (UTC)

The controversy section in the blacklisting article was preposterous -- considerably larger than the section on every employment blacklist from 1774 to the present (including the Hollywood blacklist). I don't know if it's appropriate to remove the whole thing, but it does not seem reasonable for it to be as gigantic as it was. I feel like one paragraph would suffice, and that's pushing it. jp×g🗯️ 06:18, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Blacklist (computing) -- this one is less bloated, but it's still quite long, and includes 5 bulletpoints to say the same sentence over and over. There is also weird stuff like "The issue and subsequent changes caused controversy in the computing industry, where "whitelist" and "blacklist" are prevalent (e.g. IP whitelisting)" -- at the end of the section, in an article that just got done explaining what these things were. This also feels like it could just be a single paragraph. jp×g🗯️ 06:21, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Whitelist -- I would argue the same is true here (four gigantic paragraphs where one would have done the job equally well).

In general I think that these could just be condensed into a single paragraph in a section about the origin of the term. jp×g🗯️ 06:23, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

1993 Michael Jackson sexual abuse allegations

Content on this page appears to be heavily controlled by Michael Jackson fans who will not allow neutral/referenced points they do not agree with or like to be added to the article. The article appears to have a non-neutral point of view/bias towards highlighting that Michael is innocent, and that his accusers were only after financial compensation, e.g. with loaded text such as "Chandler demanded money from Jackson, threatening to go to a criminal court" opening the second paragraph in the introduction.

My recent edit was to provide context to the claim that "The investigation found no physical evidence against Jackson", by adding the factual statement that "less than five per cent of child sexual abuse allegations have medical evidence available, and prosecution typically relies on testimony.", with a supporting reference backing up this statement. The text I added in no way implies Jackson's guilt or innocence; it merely provides context that physical evidence in child sexual abuse cases is the exception, not the norm. Yet multiple editors have reverted my edit, for a bunch of different reasons - none of which appear to be valid.Nqr9 (talk) 02:16, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

The source for less than five per cent of child sexual abuse allegations have medical evidence available, and prosecution typically relies on testimony doesn't mention Michael Jackson, so it is original research. Geogene (talk) 02:23, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Why does a report on facts about child sexual abuse, in an article relating to an accusation of child sexual abuse, need to mention the alleged perpetrator? That does not make sense.Nqr9 (talk) 02:26, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Because of Wikipedia's rule against synthesis, WP:SYN. If you want to make this point you need a source that relates to the specific case at hand. MrOllie (talk) 02:33, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

The example of Synthesis at WP:NOREX is very similar to this: Intelligence officers of the attacking forces claimed to have telephoned the residents of buildings where military assets were suspected of being stored, to warn them to leave before it was bombed.[Sourced to an article about the bombing] During the war, 90% of the telephone system was down.[Sourced to an article that does not mention the bombing] (Implied: Thus the attacking forces could not have warned 90% of the residents whose buildings were bombed.) As MrOllie said, if there's a source that applies the testimony statistic to the Michael Jackson case, this won't be a problem. Geogene (talk) 02:38, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

OK...Nqr9 (talk) 02:40, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

The article is incredibly biased/non-NPOV in general, though.Nqr9 (talk) 02:55, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Hi, Geogene. I attempted to explain to him one of the potential reasons his edit was reverted. He proceeded to accuse me of being a sock puppet. I am still a newbie and learning to navigate Wikipedia. I fully intend to stick around and contribute to unrelated articles.

Here are his Reddit posts about the situation:

[Redacted]

Here is our conversation on his Talk page:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Nqr9#c-Magnesium77-20240725204400-Nqr9-20240724022300 Magnesium77 (talk) 05:53, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

What I post on other sites has absolutely zero relevance to what I post here. Any reasonable editor would understand my skepticism on being lectured on Wikipedia rules by an account that was opened less than 48 hours ago, and has only posted on topics relating to Michael Jackson's sexual abuse allegations or discussion relating to this, when I have been posting here for over 18 years. Nice try, but you are not very convincing.Nqr9 (talk) 06:23, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

I am not attempting to convince you, Nqr9. I merely expected a balanced, neutral and tactful approach from you due to your 18 years of editing experience.

As I explained in the Talk page, I am familiarizing myself with the platform. Reading Wikipedia’s editing rules is part of the process. If that makes me a so-called sock puppet, so be it. Magnesium77 (talk) 08:30, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Why did you feel a need to mention that I am a cancer patient in one of your replies on my talk page if you are as butter-wouldn’t-melt-in-your-mouth innocent as you claim to be? Using someone’s illness to make a point against them is really quite low and nasty.Nqr9 (talk) 10:14, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Stay on topic. I was not using your diagnosis to make a point against you. I was simply making an observation. In fact, I even encouraged you to prioritize health and wished you healing on your cancer journey earlier in the conversation. Magnesium77 (talk) 13:19, 27 July 2024 (UTC)

Would WP:DRN be a possible useful place as well? Bluethricecreamman (talk) 13:44, 27 July 2024 (UTC)