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::Based on what you've said, I'm curious to know if editors think MONGO reverted because he ''should'' — or because he ''could''. [[User:Soibangla|soibangla]] ([[User talk:Soibangla|talk]]) 22:47, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
::Based on what you've said, I'm curious to know if editors think MONGO reverted because he ''should'' — or because he ''could''. [[User:Soibangla|soibangla]] ([[User talk:Soibangla|talk]]) 22:47, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
:::I don't know that it matters what we think about that.{{pb}}Maybe I haven't been clear: Your content is a fair reflection of adequate sourcing per WEIGHT, and should therefore remain in. MONGO is free to add an alternative viewpoint if he can produce adequate sourcing per WEIGHT. Then we can discuss to what extent it's appropriate to use wiki voice. To date, MONGO hasn't produced anything but his own view of the political situation. Nor has anybody else in this thread, except you. &#8213;[[User:Mandruss|<span style="color:#775C57;">'''''Mandruss'''''</span>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Mandruss|<span style="color:#888;">&#9742;</span>]] 22:59, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
:::I don't know that it matters what we think about that.{{pb}}Maybe I haven't been clear: Your content is a fair reflection of adequate sourcing per WEIGHT, and should therefore remain in. MONGO is free to add an alternative viewpoint if he can produce adequate sourcing per WEIGHT. Then we can discuss to what extent it's appropriate to use wiki voice. To date, MONGO hasn't produced anything but his own view of the political situation. Nor has anybody else in this thread, except you. &#8213;[[User:Mandruss|<span style="color:#775C57;">'''''Mandruss'''''</span>]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Mandruss|<span style="color:#888;">&#9742;</span>]] 22:59, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
::::{{tq|his own view of the political situation}} is not sufficient grounds to revert and force another editor into WP:ONUS. If I'm not mistaken, you recently called into question whether MONGO should be permitted to edit American politics articles. [[User:Soibangla|soibangla]] ([[User talk:Soibangla|talk]]) 23:15, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
{{u|Soibangla}} - find other sources to mix it up (I’m sure WaPo cited best economy as one of Trump’s most repeated falsehoods) and I’ll add it back as DUE material. '''[[User:Starship.paint|<span style="color:#512888">starship</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Starship.paint|<span style="color:#512888">.paint</span>]] ([[User talk:Starship.paint|talk]])''' 22:57, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
{{u|Soibangla}} - find other sources to mix it up (I’m sure WaPo cited best economy as one of Trump’s most repeated falsehoods) and I’ll add it back as DUE material. '''[[User:Starship.paint|<span style="color:#512888">starship</span>]][[Special:Contributions/Starship.paint|<span style="color:#512888">.paint</span>]] ([[User talk:Starship.paint|talk]])''' 22:57, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
: [https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/2018/09/07/president-trumps-repeated-claim-greatest-economy-history-our-country/?noredirect=on&utm_term=.1bac7922b5b8 "President Trump’s repeated claim: 'The greatest economy in the history of our country’"] [[User:Soibangla|soibangla]] ([[User talk:Soibangla|talk]]) 23:06, 26 May 2019 (UTC)
: [https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/2018/09/07/president-trumps-repeated-claim-greatest-economy-history-our-country/?noredirect=on&utm_term=.1bac7922b5b8 "President Trump’s repeated claim: 'The greatest economy in the history of our country’"] [[User:Soibangla|soibangla]] ([[User talk:Soibangla|talk]]) 23:06, 26 May 2019 (UTC)

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    Former good article nomineeDonald Trump was a Social sciences and society good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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    June 2, 2006Good article nomineeNot listed
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    In the news News items involving this article were featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "In the news" column on November 9, 2018, and June 12, 2018.
    Current status: Former good article nominee

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    Current consensus

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    01. Use the official White House portrait as the infobox image. (Dec 2016, Jan 2017, Oct 2017, March 2020) (temporarily suspended by #19 following copyright issues on the inauguration portrait, enforced when an official public-domain portrait was released on 31 October 2017)

    02. Show birthplace as "Queens, New York City, U.S." in the infobox. (Nov 2016, Oct 2018, Feb 2021) "New York City" de-linked. (September 2020)

    03. Omit reference to county-level election statistics. (Dec 2016)

    04. Superseded by #15
    Lead phrasing of Trump "gaining a majority of the U.S. Electoral College" and "receiving a smaller share of the popular vote nationwide", without quoting numbers. (Nov 2016, Dec 2016) (Superseded by #15 since 11 February 2017)

    05. Use Trump's annual net worth evaluation and matching ranking, from the Forbes list of billionaires, not from monthly or "live" estimates. (Oct 2016) In the lead section, just write: Forbes estimates his net worth to be [$x.x] billion. (July 2018, July 2018) Removed from the lead per #47.

    06. Do not include allegations of sexual misconduct in the lead section. (June 2016, Feb 2018)

    07. Superseded by #35
    Include "Many of his public statements were controversial or false." in the lead. (Sep 2016, February 2017, wording shortened per April 2017, upheld with July 2018) (superseded by #35 since 18 February 2019)

    08. Mention that Trump is the first president elected "without prior military or government service". (Dec 2016)

    09. Include a link to Trump's Twitter account in the "External links" section. (Jan 2017) Include a link to an archive of Trump's Twitter account in the "External links" section. (Jan 2021)

    10. Keep Barron Trump's name in the list of children and wikilink it, which redirects to his section in Family of Donald Trump per AfD consensus. (Jan 2017, Nov 2016)

    11. Superseded by #17
    The lead sentence is "Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American businessman, television personality, politician, and the 45th President of the United States." (Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Jan 2017, Feb 2017) (superseded by #17 since 2 April 2017)

    12. The article title is Donald Trump, not Donald J. Trump. (RM Jan 2017, RM June 2019)

    13. Auto-archival is set for discussions with no comments for 14 days. Manual archival is allowed for (1) closed discussions, 24 hours after the closure, provided the closure has not been challenged, and (2) "answered" edit requests, 24 hours after the "answer", provided there has been no follow-on discussion after the "answer". (Jan 2017) (amended with respect to manual archiving, to better reflect common practice at this article) (Nov 2019)

    14. Omit mention of Trump's alleged bathmophobia/fear of slopes. (Feb 2017)

    15. Superseded by lead rewrite
    Supersedes #4. There is no consensus to change the formulation of the paragraph which summarizes election results in the lead (starting with "Trump won the general election on November 8, 2016, …"). Accordingly the pre-RfC text (Diff 8 Jan 2017) has been restored, with minor adjustments to past tense (Diff 11 Feb 2018). No new changes should be applied without debate. (RfC Feb 2017, Jan 2017, Feb 2017, Feb 2017) In particular, there is no consensus to include any wording akin to "losing the popular vote". (RfC March 2017) (Superseded by local consensus on 26 May 2017 and lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017)
    16. Superseded by lead rewrite
    Do not mention Russian influence on the presidential election in the lead section. (RfC March 2017) (Superseded by lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017)
    17. Superseded by #50
    Supersedes #11. The lead paragraph is "Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is the 45th and current president of the United States. Before entering politics, he was a businessman and television personality." The hatnote is simply {{Other uses}}. (April 2017, RfC April 2017, April 2017, April 2017, April 2017, July 2017, Dec 2018) Amended by lead section rewrite on 23 June 2017 and removal of inauguration date on 4 July 2018. Lower-case "p" in "president" per Dec 2018 and MOS:JOBTITLES RfC Oct 2017. Wikilinks modified per April 2020. Wikilink modified again per July 2020. "45th" de-linked. (Jan 2021)
    18. Superseded by #63
    The "Alma mater" infobox entry shows "Wharton School (BSEcon.)", does not mention Fordham University. (April 2017, April 2017, Aug 2020, Dec 2020)
    19. Obsolete
    Following deletion of Trump's official White House portrait for copyright reasons on 2 June 2017, infobox image was replaced by File:Donald Trump Pentagon 2017.jpg. (June 2017 for replacement, June 2017, declined REFUND on 11 June 2017) (replaced by White House official public-domain portrait according to #1 since 31 Oct 2017)

    20. Mention protests in the lead section with this exact wording: His election and policies have sparked numerous protests. (June 2017, May 2018) (Note: In February 2021, when he was no longer president, the verb tense was changed from "have sparked" to "sparked", without objection.)

    21. Superseded by #39
    Omit any opinions about Trump's psychology held by mental health academics or professionals who have not examined him. (July 2017, Aug 2017) (superseded by #36 on 18 June 2019, then by #39 since 20 Aug 2019)

    22. Do not call Trump a "liar" in Wikipedia's voice. Falsehoods he uttered can be mentioned, while being mindful of calling them "lies", which implies malicious intent. (RfC Aug 2017)

    23. Superseded by #52
    The lead includes the following sentence: Trump ordered a travel ban on citizens from several Muslim-majority countries, citing security concerns; after legal challenges, the Supreme Court upheld the policy's third revision. (Aug 2017, Nov 2017, Dec 2017, Jan 2018, Jan 2018) Wording updated (July 2018) and again (Sep 2018).
    24. Superseded by #30
    Do not include allegations of racism in the lead. (Feb 2018) (superseded by #30 since 16 Aug 2018)

    25. Do not add web archives to cited sources which are not dead. (Dec 2017, March 2018)

    26. Do not include opinions by Michael Hayden and Michael Morell that Trump is a "useful fool […] manipulated by Moscow" or an "unwitting agent of the Russian Federation". (RfC April 2018)

    27. State that Trump falsely claimed that Hillary Clinton started the Barack Obama birther rumors. (April 2018, June 2018)

    28. Include, in the Wealth section, a sentence on Jonathan Greenberg's allegation that Trump deceived him in order to get on the Forbes 400 list. (June 2018, June 2018)

    29. Include material about the Trump administration family separation policy in the article. (June 2018)

    30. Supersedes #24. The lead includes: "Many of his comments and actions have been characterized as racially charged or racist." (RfC Sep 2018, Oct 2018, RfC May 2019)

    31. Do not mention Trump's office space donation to Jesse Jackson's Rainbow/Push Coalition in 1999. (Nov 2018)

    32. Omit from the lead the fact that Trump is the first sitting U.S. president to meet with a North Korean supreme leader. (RfC July 2018, Nov 2018)

    33. Do not mention "birtherism" in the lead section. (RfC Nov 2018)

    34. Refer to Ivana Zelníčková as a Czech model, with a link to Czechs (people), not Czechoslovakia (country). (Jan 2019)

    35. Superseded by #49
    Supersedes #7. Include in the lead: Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics. (RfC Feb 2019)
    36. Superseded by #39
    Include one paragraph merged from Health of Donald Trump describing views about Trump's psychology expressed by public figures, media sources, and mental health professionals who have not examined him. (June 2019) (paragraph removed per RfC Aug 2019 yielding consensus #39)

    37. Resolved: Content related to Trump's presidency should be limited to summary-level about things that are likely to have a lasting impact on his life and/or long-term presidential legacy. If something is borderline or debatable, the resolution does not apply. (June 2019)

    38. Do not state in the lead that Trump is the wealthiest U.S. president ever. (RfC June 2019)

    39. Supersedes #21 and #36. Do not include any paragraph regarding Trump's mental health or mental fitness for office. Do not bring up for discussion again until an announced formal diagnosis or WP:MEDRS-level sources are provided. This does not prevent inclusion of content about temperamental fitness for office. (RfC Aug 2019, July 2021)

    40. Include, when discussing Trump's exercise or the lack thereof: He has called golfing his "primary form of exercise", although he usually does not walk the course. He considers exercise a waste of energy, because he believes the body is "like a battery, with a finite amount of energy" which is depleted by exercise. (RfC Aug 2019)

    41. Omit book authorship (or lack thereof) from the lead section. (RfC Nov 2019)

    42. House and Senate outcomes of the impeachment process are separated by a full stop. For example: He was impeached by the House on December 18, 2019, for abuse of power and obstruction of Congress. He was acquitted of both charges by the Senate on February 5, 2020. (Feb 2020)

    43. The rules for edits to the lead are no different from those for edits below the lead. For edits that do not conflict with existing consensus: Prior consensus is NOT required. BOLD edits are allowed, subject to normal BRD process. The mere fact that an edit has not been discussed is not a valid reason to revert it. (March 2020)

    44. The lead section should mention North Korea, focusing on Trump's meetings with Kim and some degree of clarification that they haven't produced clear results. (RfC May 2020)

    45. Superseded by #48
    There is no consensus to mention the COVID-19 pandemic in the lead section. (RfC May 2020, July 2020) (Superseded by RfC Aug 2020)

    46. Use the caption "Official portrait, 2017" for the infobox image. (Aug 2020, Jan 2021)

    47. Do not mention Trump's net worth or Forbes ranking (or equivalents from other publications) in the lead, nor in the infobox. (Sep 2020)

    48. Supersedes #45. Trump's reaction to the COVID-19 pandemic should be mentioned in the lead section. There is no consensus on specific wording, but the status quo is Trump reacted slowly to the COVID-19 pandemic; he minimized the threat, ignored or contradicted many recommendations from health officials, and promoted false information about unproven treatments and the availability of testing. (Oct 2020, RfC Aug 2020)

    49. Supersedes #35. Include in lead: Trump has made many false and misleading statements during his campaigns and presidency, to a degree unprecedented in American politics. (Dec 2020)

    50. Supersedes #17. The lead sentence is: Donald John Trump (born June 14, 1946) is an American politician, media personality, and businessman who served as the 45th president of the United States from 2017 to 2021. (March 2021), amended (July 2021), inclusion of politician (RfC September 2021)

    51. Include in the lead that many of Trump's comments and actions have been characterized as misogynistic. (Aug 2021 and Sep 2021)

    52. Supersedes #23. The lead should contain a summary of Trump's actions on immigration, including the Muslim travel ban (cf. item 23), the wall, and the family separation policy. (September 2021)

    53. The lead should mention that Trump promotes conspiracy theories. (October 2021)

    54. Include in the lead that, quote, Scholars and historians rank Trump as one of the worst presidents in U.S. history. (October 2021)

    55. Regarding Trump's comments on the 2017 far-right rally in Charlottesville, Virginia, do not wiki-link "Trump's comments" in this manner. (RfC December 2021)

    56. Retain the content that Trump never confronted Putin over its alleged bounties against American soldiers in Afghanistan but add context. Current wording can be altered or contextualized; no consensus was achieved on alternate wordings. (RfC November 2021) Trump's expressions of doubt regarding the Russian Bounties Program should be included in some capacity, though there there is no consensus on a specific way to characterize these expressed doubts. (RfC March 2022)

    57. Do not mention in the lead Gallup polling that states Trump's the only president to never reach 50% approval rating. (RfC January 2022)

    58. Use inline citations in the lead for the more contentious and controversial statements. Editors should further discuss which sentences would benefit from having inline citations. (RfC May 2022, discussion on what to cite May 2022)

    59. Do not label or categorize Trump as a far-right politician. (RfC August 2022)

    60. Insert the links described in the RfC January 2023.

    61. When a thread is started with a general assertion that the article is biased for or against Trump (i.e., without a specific, policy-based suggestion for a change to the article), it is to be handled as follows:

    1. Reply briefly with a link to Talk:Donald Trump/Response to claims of bias.
    2. Close the thread using {{archive top}} and {{archive bottom}}, referring to this consensus item.
    3. Wait at least 24 hours per current consensus #13.
    4. Manually archive the thread.

    This does not apply to posts that are clearly in bad faith, which are to be removed on sight. (May 2023)

    62. The article's description of the five people who died during and subsequent to the January 6 Capitol attack should avoid a) mentioning the causes of death and b) an explicit mention of the Capitol Police Officer who died. (RfC July 2023)

    63. Supersedes #18. The alma mater field of the infobox reads: "University of Pennsylvania (BS)". (September 2023)

    64. Omit the {{Very long}} tag. (January 2024)

    65. Mention the Abraham Accords in the article; no consensus was achieved on specific wordings. (RfC February 2024)

    Trim second paragraph in lead

    The lead section currently comprises an intro sentence briefly defining the subject and three paragraphs describing his life: the first on Trump's early life and business career, the second on his accession to the presidency, and the third about his actions as U.S. President. Now that we are well into the third year of his first term, I believe that the second paragraph has reached undue proportions compared to the rest of the biography. I would therefore suggest to trim it thus.

    Current version

    Trump entered the 2016 presidential race as a Republican and defeated sixteen opponents in the primaries. His campaign received extensive free media coverage. Commentators described his political positions as populist, protectionist, and nationalist. Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics. Trump was elected president in a surprise victory over Democratic nominee Hillary Clinton. He became the oldest and wealthiest person ever to assume the presidency, the first without prior military or government service, and the fifth to have won the election despite having lost the popular vote.[a] His election and policies have sparked numerous protests. Many of his comments and actions have been perceived as racially charged or racist.

    Proposed trim

    Trump entered the 2016 presidential race as a Republican and defeated sixteen opponents in the primaries. Commentators described his political positions as populist, protectionist, and nationalist. He was elected president in a surprise victory over Democratic nominee Hillary Clinton, although he lost the popular vote.[a] Trump became the first U.S. president without prior military or government service. His election and policies have sparked numerous protests. He made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. Many of his comments and actions have been perceived as racially charged or racist.

    1. ^ a b Presidential elections in the United States are decided by the Electoral College, in which each state names a number of electors equal to its representation in Congress, and all delegates from each state are bound to vote for the winner of the local state vote. Consequently, it is possible for the president-elect to have received fewer votes from the country's total population (the popular vote). This situation has occurred five times since 1824.

    Rationale to keep or remove each sentence

    • Keep Trump entered the 2016 presidential race as a Republican and defeated sixteen opponents in the primaries. This was the widest field of Republican candidates ever, and Trump used to be a Democrat. He encountered perhaps more opposition from within the Republican party as from the Democratic candidates. Even after he became the nominee, the Never Trump movement continued until and beyond election day.
    • Remove His campaign received extensive free media coverage. All presidential campaigns do, so what was exceptional this time? On the one hand, the media gave him a lot of airtime, on the other hand most of their coverage was negative. There's not much to conclude in terms of unusual influence of "free media" on voters.
    • Keep Commentators described his political positions as populist, protectionist, and nationalist. That sounds like a fair and concise summary of his "MAGA" campaign platform.
    • Keep He made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. That's a notable characteristic of his campaign rhetoric, of his prior life story touting "truthful hyperbole", and of his ongoing vagaries with the truth. Because it does not apply to the campaign only, I moved this to the end of the paragraph, before the sentence on racially-charged statements.
    • Remove The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics. That's too much detail for the lead, and is partly opinion. The previous sentence says enough about false statements; keep details for article body.
    • Keep He was elected president in a surprise victory over Democratic nominee Hillary Clinton. That's the meat of the paragraph.
    • Remove Trump became the oldest and wealthiest person ever to assume the presidency. That's just irrelevant trivia.
    • Keep He became the first U.S. president without prior military or government service. That sounds more relevant than his age or his wealth.
    • Replace and the fifth to have won the election despite having lost the popular vote by although he lost the popular vote after we mention his victory against Clinton. Keep the footnote that explains the Electoral College and mentions that this situation has occurred five times.
    • Keep His election and policies have sparked numerous protests. That's a fact, and we have strong consensus to mention it.
    • Keep Many of his comments and actions have been perceived as racially charged or racist. Keep per recent RfC.

    Comments welcome. — JFG talk 22:43, 27 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    I would agree with the changes except for the removal of "The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics.", which I am strongly opposed to. This wording enjoys hard-won consensus. It is an important qualifier to the previous sentence.- MrX 🖋 23:21, 27 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I strongly oppose the sentences - Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics. Many of his comments and actions have been characterized as racially charged or racist. First - many politicians make misleading statements, but that is not placed in the article, much less in the opening paragraph. Second, the fact that the statements have been documented by fact-checkers is hardly relevant - fact checkers can and do routinely tear apart speeches to characterize the slightest misstep as a lie. Remember President Obama saying he had visited 57 States? Or if you like your doctor you can keep your doctor? But the opening paragraph of Obama's article does not state that he has made many false statements, and it shouldn't. Third, most fact check web sites are notoriously liberal, and are not objective when determining if a conservative has made a false or misleading statement. Fourth - the sentence about many of his comments being characterized as racist is not even cited, but merely mentioned as an established fact, which it certainly is not. For all these reasons these sentences need to be removed. JohnTopShelf (talk) 03:20, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I strongly oppose removal of "Trump became the oldest and wealthiest person ever to assume the presidency." These are relevant and important items. I disagree that they are "irrelevant trivia." The Reagan article, for comparison, notes in the lead section that "Reagan was the oldest person to have been elected to a first-term..."; the JFK article states "at age 43, he became the second-youngest man to serve as president (after Theodore Roosevelt), the youngest man to be elected as U.S. president"; the T. Roosevelt article says that he "remains the youngest person to become President of the United States"; the Lincoln article states that Lincoln "grew up on the frontier in a poor family." Neutralitytalk 02:43, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I largely agree with JFG, except for what Neutrality has expressed. Trump's wealth was a huge point of discussion in the election -- whether it was a pro or a con depended on who you were talking to, but it was constantly talked about either way. Cosmic Sans (talk) 17:28, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support. I agree with each and every deletion. I think JFG has done a nice job here separating the most significant aspects from the less significant aspects. I think MrX's concern can be addressed by expanding the "false or misleading sentence"; the "fact-checkers" sentence is a bit much and just poorly written. Regarding the "oldest and wealthiest" sentence, that's absolutely important, but my understanding (as an avid news reader) is that, regardless of how we feel about it, it's received significantly less RS coverage than the other content in the paragraph. R2 (bleep) 19:30, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Same as MrX. Consensus has weight and it should take a lot to change one, particularly a recent one. By "a lot" I mean considerably more than a majority in this discussion, which is about far more than that sentence. I fail to see how the sentence is "just poorly written", and I don't think that's just because I wrote it. ―Mandruss  20:13, 29 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry, I had no idea who had drafted that sentence when I wrote that. Both clauses could be greatly improved.
    • The statements have been documented by fact-checkers This is extremely milquetoast... Trump's false statements have been documented by fact checkers... So what? Every prominent politician's false statements have documented by fact checkers. This clause says more about fact checkers (and arguably about the political climate that led to the rise of fact checkers) rather than about Trump himself.
    • and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics. Just difficult to understand, because "the phenomenon" is so vague. I assume this refers to the frequency of Trump's false and misleading statements? If so, why don't we just say that? In addition, the "unprecedentedness" of Trump's false and misleading statements is a verifiable fact. We shouldn't be attributing this in-text to "the media," which violates WP:YESPOV (do not treat verifiable facts as opinions) and plays into Trump's war on the media and the concept that reliable sources are somehow on par with a politician's statements.
    R2 (bleep) 17:38, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    TL;DR: the emphasis of the sentence is all wrong, as both clauses are about the media's conduct, rather than about Trump. R2 (bleep) 17:41, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Mea culpa, I should have omitted my last sentence above. The content sentence in question is the result of an RfC that was open for more than a month a mere few months ago, focused exclusively on that little bit of content, and received over 10,000 words from over 30 editors. One of the precious few editors willing to spend their time doing uninvolved closes spent a considerable amount of it assessing that consensus and writing the close. A change to that consensus should not even be on the table in this discussion. If you feel it's really important, start another RfC and be prepared for the outcry of "too soon to revisit this". ―Mandruss  17:55, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Ok, thanks for the info. I'm positively hitting myself for missing that RfC. R2 (bleep) 18:59, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Upon review I see I hit the RfC early and never saw Mandruss's proposed language. Damn. R2 (bleep) 19:15, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Same as MrX as well. And the Mandruss comments also. Gandydancer (talk) 13:27, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Can remove lots more - keeping 9 out of 11 is not much of a reduction. Some of these seem removable as not biographically major, some seem just an old artifact from when he was a candidate and there was nothing more to say, etcetera. So try eliminating down to just a few lines as was the mid-term precedent for Bush and Obama. Looking instead for whats the most that could be removed as not biographically big and/or not big in article gets a different view of just a couple things really need to stay.
    1. KEEP Presidential race. Major life event, large section of the article and much follows from that.
    2. Drop free media coverage. It was explaining how he got the nomination, but is not life event or large section.
    3. Drop commentators describe. Outside views not a life event, and content not in body -- only populist seems mentioned and not much of it. Shift this to body.
    4. Drop has made false. Outside views not a life event, and not much in article - plus has been contentious.
    5. Drop documented by fact-checkers. Just adding detail behind prior line.
    6. KEEP elected in surprise. Major life event, sizable section of article and much follows from that.
    7. Drop oldest and wealthiest, we do keep this kind of trivia here, but its not in article and not important
    8. Drop without prior military - we could but others make no lead about such, its not a big life event or big part of article
    9. Drop popular vote - not any effect from that, and its just one line in article body - plus its a parisan complaint.
    10. Drop numerous protests - not a major life event, small section in article and seems vague blurb for what was a 1-month wonder.
    11. Drop perceived as racist - outside views not a life event, big section of the article though. But it was contentious on having in lead.

    Cheers Markbassett (talk) 04:16, 1 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    • Update – Thanks for the feedback so far. I'll leave this suggestion open for another week to gather more comments, then we'll see how to proceed. — JFG talk 20:09, 3 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    We had an entire entire RfC on the "unprecedented" sentence. Wouldn't it require another RfC to remove? There was Consensus to use the term "unprecedented" so long as it is properly cited with a WP:RS. This was in February 2019. Has anything substantial changed since then? I doubt it. starship.paint (edits | talk) 04:28, 4 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    There is a proposal below to condense the two "false statements" sentences into one, while keeping the "unprecedented" qualifier. — JFG talk 10:02, 4 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    There's no rule that a consensus coming out of an RfC is "set in stone" or that it cannot be changed without another RfC. R2 (bleep) 21:14, 7 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Many of his comments and actions have been perceived as racially charged or racist.

    How can this sentence NOT be deleted? It is inflammatory and not cited, and it is written as if it were fact. Stating opinion of this type, even if it is the opinion of the majority of editors as well as left-leaning journalists, it is just that - opinion - not fact. Further, this violates the neutral point of view policy of Wikipedia. it should definitely be removed. JohnTopShelf (talk) 18:53, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    How are we doing?

    Of my proposed changes, there was unanimous support to remove free media coverage, and strong opposition to removing the sentence about fact-checkers. A separate thread was open below to discuss proposals to combine it with the previous sentence about false statements to make the whole point shorter. Other changes were generally supported, except that two persons want to keep the "oldest and wealthiest" stats, and one person would like to remove much more stuff. I'm going to apply the changes that were not substantially contested, and we'll take it from there. The new tenure of the paragraph is:

    Trump entered the 2016 presidential race as a Republican and defeated sixteen opponents in the primaries. Commentators described his political positions as populist, protectionist, and nationalist. He was elected president in a surprise victory over Democratic nominee Hillary Clinton, although he lost the popular vote.[a] He became the oldest and wealthiest person ever to assume the presidency, and the first without prior military or government service. His election and policies have sparked numerous protests. Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics. Many of his comments and actions have been perceived characterized as racially charged or racist.

    1. ^ Presidential elections in the United States are decided by the Electoral College, in which each state names a number of electors equal to its representation in Congress, and all delegates from each state are bound to vote for the winner of the local state vote. Consequently, it is possible for the president-elect to have received fewer votes from the country's total population (the popular vote). This situation has occurred five times since 1824.

    JFG talk 02:14, 10 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Yeah fine. No opinion on oldest/wealthiest. starship.paint (talk) 03:10, 10 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Agreed. Perfectly happy with this version. Mentioning his advanced years is ageist, and mentioning he's wealthy is vulgar, so I wouldn't be opposed to losing the age/wealth thing as Starship.paint said. -- Scjessey (talk) 12:39, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    In the last sentence, "perceived" needs to be changed to "characterized". Rreagan007 (talk) 21:16, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, due to the recent RfC that found consensus to replace this word. Updated above. — JFG talk 14:50, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Corporate raider

    MONGO reverted this edit:

    https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Donald_Trump&diff=896331565&oldid=896322943

    asserting that what many would characterize as pump and dump is "standard business practices, quite commonplace really"

    The edit is entirely consistent with the reliable source reporting and I recommend it be restored. soibangla (talk) 23:01, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    I support inclusion. This doesn't sound like common trading practice to me. If I'm mistaken then someone should be able to come up with sources to support that. Whether this was actually pump and dump (securities fraud), I don't know and it doesn't really matter for this discussion. R2 (bleep) 23:10, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Wikipedia is not a coatrack. Maybe it fits better in a daughter article but not in this BLP. Classifying it as a pump and dump seems to be an editorial decision not supported by RS. A revisit of our BLP policy might be in order.--MONGO (talk) 23:26, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I did not characterize it as pump and dump in the article. His activities in these trades are relevant to the Side Ventures subsection soibangla (talk) 23:31, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support inclusion of Trump's Pump and Dump, per [1][2][3]. It is not a "standard business practice". In fact, it's a form of fraud.[4] The NYT source is already in the article, by the way.- MrX 🖋 23:28, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose You need to show its overall significance to the topic. According to the source, this information was known 30 years ago, but has only been reported now. TFD (talk) 23:45, 9 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Wayne Barrett reported it in 1992 - see my below edit. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:56, 11 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    I suggest moving this information to Wealth of Donald Trump or Business career of Donald Trump or The Trump Organization. — JFG talk 01:40, 10 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    • Support in some article - It is certainly not a common trading practice. If it was P&D, couple of movies about guys in prison for this. O3000 (talk) 19:35, 10 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • OPPOSE - MALFORMED EDIT. As written looks like editor mangled the source — saying he did dump took profit then “lost back” the money (?!?) makes no sense. Also OBSERVE A 48 HOUR WAITING PERIOD. Please do not channel the morning feed here, trying to breathlessly retweet something new into WP that is less than 24 hours old just functionally lacks time to have WEIGHT or full picture and conceptually seems counter to NOTMIRROR just being a retweet, or NOTNEWS or at least not just-breaking news. If it’s important and factual, it will not go away by tomorrow; if it can’t wait until tomorrow then maybe it shouldn’t be here at all. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 10:20, 11 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    As written looks like editor mangled the source — saying he did dump took profit then “lost back” the money (?!?) makes no sense is incorrect:

    From 1986 through 1988, while his core businesses languished under increasingly unsupportable debt, Mr. Trump made millions of dollars in the stock market by suggesting that he was about to take over companies. But the figures show that he lost most, if not all, of those gains after investors stopped taking his takeover talk seriously. soibangla (talk) 01:55, 12 May 2019 (UTC)

    • Support inclusion as Corporate takeover ventures (or something along those lines) in the Side ventures section. It was a side venture from 1986 to 1992 that initially made him a lot of money and then cost him a lot more money than he had made. Wayne Barrett reported Trump’s stock market raids in 1992, in his book Trump: The Deals and the Downfall, reprinted in 2016 under the title The Greatest Show on Earth, chapter 13, The Billion-Dollar Bet.
    Trump's first venture was the Holiday Inns in 1986. Trump bought a 4.4 percent stake for almost $70 million without putting up his own money and "immediately applied for a gaming license in Nevada, suggesting that he had takeover intentions." The stock went up, Trump sold his shares at a profit of around $10 million, and claimed that he had made $35 million.
    According to the NY Times, he reported gains of $67.3 million to the IRS for 1986 to 1989 and a loss of $34.9 million for 1990 (i.a., half his prior gains); Trump's tax records for the years when he ran the casinos are available because of casino licensing requirements. When Trump had to turn over most of his assets (yacht, Trump Shuttle, Grand Hyatt shares) to his creditors in 1992 (see also bankruptcies), he had to sell his shares in the Alexander’s department store company which were worth only a fraction (18 percent) of what he had paid for them (Alexander's filed for bankruptcy that year), losing $55.5 million of the $67.9 million he had paid. That’s a total loss of $90.4 million.
    I’m not saying that we should go into great detail but it’s a sizable venture that is noteworthy for this bio. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:56, 11 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Considering the small percentage of these thibgs compared to the entirety of his business dealings it is not notable, least not for this article. So what, he changed his mind on some ventures...and yes that does happen all the time in business.--MONGO (talk) 18:21, 11 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    The dollar magnitude of the trades is minimally relevant, even though they are substantial by a typical person's standards. What is relevant is that he was engaged in an activity that falls into a dubious zone of legality that is most commonly associated with boiler room operations run by shady characters until they get raided by the FBI soibangla (talk) 18:29, 11 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    An aricle in Memphis provides a different interpretation.[5] Trump thought Holiday Inn was undervalued because of the appreciation of its real estate portfolio in the 1980s. He intended to buy the company but his plans were derailed when the directors found an angel investor and the real estate holdings were sold off. Trump, who had acquired 5% of the shares, profited, but not by as much as he would have had he taken over the company. This isn't pump and dump, as the shares actually had value. TFD (talk) 19:08, 11 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't see that the article actually says what you say it says. Indeed, it isn't flattering of Trump's motives, it actually smells alot like greenmail. soibangla (talk) 21:56, 11 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    The article doesn’t say that Trump intended to take over the company, just that he made its management believe that he did. The author appears to believe that Trump’s intent was to force the compay to sell off its assets separately. Barrett writes on page 388 that "[t]hough contemptuous of the [Holiday Inns’] management, at least in part because of the generous terms it had given him in 1982, he liked the company’s assets, especially the two Nevada casino’s run by its Harrah’s subsidiary and its highly profitable Harrah’s Marina in Atlantic City." We don’t know what Trump’s real intentions on any of his stock buying ventures were. We only know what he did or didn’t do. According to Barrett, Trump was "[s]ure that he could turn a profit on the raids even if his takeover attempts failed." For a while Trump’s strategy of acquiring stock and dropping hints about takeovers worked. But since he never followed through on any of them, eventually the stock market got wise to the scheme and didn’t take the bait any more. Trump’s shares didn’t rise in value, and he was stuck with the debts for buying them. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 10:51, 12 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Googling trump greenmail bally shows lots of contemporaneous reporting of suspected greenmail and he was fined for not reporting on a timely basis his stock purchases surrounding these activities. I think there is good reason to expand a "Corporate raider" subsection. soibangla (talk) 18:52, 12 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    It doesn't matter whether or not the article was complimentary. As you correctly write, "The author appears to believe that Trump’s intent was to force the compay to sell off its assets separately." That is how Trump intended to profit. Pump and dump would mean that he would profit from people buying his shares on the basis of false information. For example had he falsely stated that the real estate assets were undervalued. This article does not mention "dropping hints." In fact the FTC news article provided by soibangla shows that he did not disclose his purchases. It is not illegal to buy shares on the assumption they are undervalued. It is against the law to falsely state that shares you have purchased are undervalued. soibangla, in order to include information in the article you need to show that it has received significant coverage in secondary sources. A report by the FTC does not count. TFD (talk) 19:56, 12 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Earlier this month, Nevada Gambling Commission Chairman Paul Bible accused Trump of 'greenmailing' and said state regulators don't like those maneuvers. Trump had purchased a large block of Holiday Corp. stock, which then underwent a major financial restructuring before Trump sold his shares...Nevada was reacting to that deal--at least in part--when it enacted a law several weeks ago prohibiting "greenmail" of casinos in that state...One of the Wall Street naysayers, analyst Harold Vogel of Merrill Lynch in New York, said Thursday: "I tend to think, if history is a guide, that Mr. Trump gets the pot all stirred up. Speculators big and small start to salivate and chase after the stock. Then, within three months, Mr. Trump announces that he has sold his shares at a handsome profit."...According to Greenfield, the repurchase plan amounted to ″greenmail,″ the practice of buying up shares of a company and selling them back for a profit at an inflated price. ″This is a classic sense of Mr. Trump selling the shareholders down the river,″ Greenfield said...Mr. Trump recently applied for a Nevada casino license, but Paul Bible, chairman of the Nevada Gaming Commission at the time, said that Nevada regulators would look askance at any greenmailer who hurts casino companies operating in Nevada by acquiring large quantities of stock in order to sell the stake back to the company at a premium...The central issue for many was whether Trump was engaged in the tactic known as "greenmailing." It was an entirely legal strategy repeatedly deployed by activist investors throughout the 1980s -- a practice that, for lack of a better description, amounts to a corporate ransom payment. soibangla (talk) 22:03, 12 May 2019 (UTC)

    30 year old articles are not good sources for articles. Trump said he sold the shares to a third party, so it would not be "greenmail," which in any case was perfectly legal. I am sure that there must be a more complete account of the matter written in the decades following. So here's what we have established: Trump bought shares in a company he believed was undervalued. The shares went up and he sold them. Note too this occurred during a time when both stock and property markets were booming and it was not unusual for speculators to make fortunes overnight, only to lose them after the crash. TFD (talk) 23:33, 12 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't have any problem at all with 30 year old articles, particularly if nothing has contradicted them in the meantime. I don't think we should say in WP voice that Trump engaged in greenmail, as that doesn't seem to be supported by the sources, but it's appropriate to mention the accusations. R2 (bleep) 15:43, 13 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    One problem is that we did not know then whether Trump leaked information about his purchases in order to inflate the price, whether he sold them to management or to third parties and whether his selling price was inflated. If these facts were known, then it could be determined whether the transactions were pump and dump, greenmail, or an attempt to gain control of the company or just shrewd speculation. This is a BLP and we should not publish defamatory claims against a person without checking whether or not they turned out to be true. There is an irony in discrediting Trump without checking our facts. (Isn't that what he is accused of doing and the reason we don't like him?) TFD (talk) 16:23, 13 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    No, he's accused of lying. And there are many reasons people don't like him, but not checking his facts isn't quite one of them. WP:PUBLICFIGURE is clear that noteworthy allegations are appropriate. R2 (bleep) 18:32, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    MONGO, your edit summary for the revert was "standard business practices, quite commonplace really." Do you have any RS for that statement? Even if you did, that wouldn’t be a reason for a revert, according to WP:DONTREVERT; engaging in "standard business practices" for several years and making and losing hundreds of millions of dollars seems worthy of—at least—a short and well-sourced mention. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:05, 18 May 2019 (UTC) Trump’s takeover bids/stock buying and selling activities (Holiday Corp., Bally Manufacturing Corp, Allegis Corp., Federated Department Stores, Alexander’s Department Stores, American Airlines—the list probably isn’t complete) were covered individually in newspaper articles in the 1980s and early 1990s—I’m still sifting through the lot I was able to find. CNN did an in-depth report in 2016 that seems to have been generally ignored (everyone too busy reading DNC and Podesta emails?). Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:20, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Reversion explanation

    I reverted this removal of cited content on the basis that it doesn't violate WP:WEIGHT. I think this should be properly discussed first. -- Scjessey (talk) 21:18, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    I already did the BRD...sorry if my revert of that undue material was not characterized as a challenge by my reversion already. That belongs in the Presidency article, not this BLP.--MONGO (talk) 22:14, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    There are some edits in the subsection that probably don't belong there, but this particular edit isn't among them. If we're going to have an "Economy and trade" section in his BLP, a significant effect of his signature economic policy is most certainly germane. soibangla (talk) 22:32, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    There were numerous sources before and after the election that Trump was going to cause a stock sell off/recession/economic turmoil etc. and for most folks that has not rung true. If were going to be adding prognistications its best to do it somewhere off the BLP main page.--MONGO (talk) 22:43, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    In this case it is based on the economic reality that the administration has imposed tariffs which directly increase the costs paid by businesses/consumers buying imports, and economists have actual empirical data to work with. If anything belongs here, this does. soibangla (talk) 22:50, 17 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Irregardless, my edit was the BRD so Scjessey should self revert.--MONGO (talk) 00:00, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    It belongs in the article.2600:1702:2340:9470:9C71:218B:7331:3E2E (talk) 03:30, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Your edit summary said Undue for this BLP, perhaps in Presidency subarticle. Why are his decades in TV (wrestling, beauty pageants, Apprentice) undue for a personal bio? You removed the occupation "television personality" from the info box in the same edit. That's not something that could happen accidentally. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 08:24, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Removing the television personality was not intended and should be kept of course.--MONGO (talk) 14:25, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • REMOVED. Please follow WP:BRD - don’t restore the changes or engage in back and forth reverting. The para comparing tarrifs to tax breaks had been deleted, posting a thread and discussing was good and proper. Restoring it immediately, not so much.
    This seems yet another same-day posted story, and as I’ve said before that simply gives no time for WEIGHT (if any) to appear, or responses and further details. WP is not a news hotline, give it a 48 hour waiting period and it will be more obvious whether it is big or not. I rather doubt it though — this is a speculation and calculation against if tariffs go on vs comparison, a created item rather than factual event or causally linked item. Newspaper has to fill the space up with something every day and this is a good do — but WP doesn’t and shouldn’t copy every one. Also, this does seem the wrong article, OFFTOPIC as not BLP - not one of his personal life decisions or impacts - and CNBC remarks are too low a detail for here. It might take the mentioned suggestion and try the Presidential article, though even there I think it should be viewed as little coverage (UNDUE) illustrative speculation and/or partisan posturing. And WP simply cannot usefully add immediately same-day tales, each day, of every story du jour of daily spin. As a crafted portrayal rather than simple report of event facts, it should only get space if it shows some duration, spread, and effect. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 11:17, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • The material is appropriate for this article, every bit as much as the tax cuts passed by Congress. It has been extensively covered by major news organizations. We should also add that Trump lied[6] about Chinese paying the tariffs: "So our country can take in $120 billion a year in tariffs, paid for mostly by China, by the way, not by us. A lot of people try and steer it in a different direction. It’s really paid — ultimately, it’s paid for by — largely, by China."[7][8]- MrX 🖋 12:03, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    After I reverted MONGO's edit and then posted here, I went offline until just now. Looking back at the edit history, I see that I had incorrectly assumed the paragraph in question had been there for much longer. I apologize to @MONGO: for reverting their quite proper BRD edit. I would've self reverted, but I can see that I sparked off a bit of an edit war. For the record, I am in favor of retaining the paragraph per comments made above by Space4Time3Continuum2x and MrX, but I would be perfectly happy for it to be removed pending the outcome of this discussion. My bad. Apart from the big tax give away to rich people and corporations, Trump's tariffs have had more of a direct impact on the economy (and the stock market in particular) than anything else he has done in the last couple of years, so obviously it is something that should be included. -- Scjessey (talk) 13:31, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    • Keep. There were numerous sources before and after the election that Trump was going to cause a stock sell off/recession/economic turmoil etc. and for most folks that has not rung true. What does that have to do with the added costs for businesses and consumers through tariffs imposed on imports and those costs going straight into the government's coffers? That's not soothsaying, it's math. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 14:09, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    The edit is not BOLD. That it may be stunning to and intensely disliked by some does not make it BOLD. soibangla (talk) 17:17, 18 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    • User:Soibangla The Revert comment of MONGO for the CNBC 5/16 comparing projected tax cuts to projected tariffs was “Undue for this BLP, perhaps in Presidency sub article”. Please BRD Discuss with MONGO, preferably in policy and factual evidence. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 01:06, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I did discuss it with MONGO on the terms you describe. soibangla (talk) 02:51, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    User:Soibangla Where is it? I don’t see showing evidence of WEIGHT and doing my own Google, the topic of Trump Chinese tariffs got 65 million hits — that but tariffs equivalent to taxes is a microscopic 76 thousand of the 65 million (about 00.1 percent). And I see a bit about if there’s an economy section this should be here ... which isn’t showing this is part of a biographical bit. I’m willing to say the economy section doesn’t belong in a BLP ‘story of his life’, nor this part. But we don’t need to talk OFFTOPIC if this part can’t even show WEIGHT. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 01:05, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]


    • I cannot believe the people here who are NOT abiding by my BRD reversion. My reversion should not be edit warred over until a consensus is achieved either way. @Awilley: maybe can check the recent editing history and issue reminders to MrX and others who keep restoring this material without a consensus to do so.--MONGO (talk) 03:52, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    This also might be a good opportunity to re-examine the reasonableness of invoking BRD when an edit isn’t actually BOLD. soibangla (talk) 03:59, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    You inserted this content on 17 May 2019, 18:02,[9] and MONGO reverted two hours later at 20:19.[10] Per BRD, the first edit was Bold, the second was a Revert, and now people are Discussing. There is no need to re-examine the reasonableness of invoking BRD, unless you want to question a fundamental tenet of Wikipedia. — JFG talk 07:35, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I am not questioning a fundamental tenet of Wikipedia. I am saying that the edit was not BOLD to begin with, and I already explicitly stated that to make my position abundantly clear. soibangla (talk) 17:40, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    After the initial B and R steps, various editors edit-warred over the content (Scjessey, Rogerd, Kingerikthesecond, Markbassett and MrX); that is improper. Please all wait until this discussion reaches consensus. In the meantime, the disputed content must stay out, and I will remove it now. I have not yet formed an opinion on the merits of this text; this is purely a procedural removal — JFG talk 07:52, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I have opened a new thread to discuss what to say about the #Impact of tariffs on U.S. consumers. Thus, procedural issues (discussed here) can be segregated from content issues (to be discussed in new thread). — JFG talk 08:02, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    @JFG: As I said above, I had not realized the material was only recently added when I challenged MONGO's edit. I thought I was initiating a BRD cycle. It was not my intention to edit war, and I specifically apologized for precipitating one in my comment above. It is absolutely correct that the paragraph in question should not be in the article unless a consensus for inclusion is reached. -- Scjessey (talk) 12:25, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I understand that you only realized this later + you took the right step by initiating the discussion. No problem at all. — JFG talk 13:21, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Making a single edit is never edit warring and I don't need a reminder, thank you. My edit was perfectly reasonable.- MrX 🖋 12:32, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry, but JFG is right. This article is under WP:1RR, and technically every edit removal/addition of the content after MONGO's is a violation (including mine and JFG's). -- Scjessey (talk) 12:42, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Huh? 1RR is not a shared restriction. I made on 1RR. I'm not responsible for the others. Please read WP:EW if you still think a single revert ever qualifies as edit warring.- MrX 🖋 17:01, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    @MrX: It's not WP:EW that you need to be concerned about, it's WP:ARBAPDS. I've previously received warnings for a single edit that initiated or perpetuated an edit war, and all the edits after MONGO's initial reversion did this. -- Scjessey (talk) 19:19, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    That's just not right. I initiated the Arbcom case that resulted in ARBAPDS and at no evidence whatsoever was presented about editors making a single revert, nor did Arbcom have any findings of fact in that regard. You may be thinking of Coffee's restrictions, which gave inordinate control of these articles to sockpuppets and SPAs who had no interest in developing articles.- MrX 🖋 19:56, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    @MrX: Once an edit has been "challenged" per WP:BRD (as MONGO did), there should be no further deletions/restorations of the material in question, and it most certainly not be edit warred over, even if it is only a single edit. That's akin to tag teaming, even if it isn't specifically coordinated. Administrators have taken a dim view of this sort of behavior, including when it comes to enforcing ARBAPDS. Yes, Coffee was responsible for some particularly aggressive enforcement, but that still doesn't change the underlying enforcement policy. -- Scjessey (talk) 23:58, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    We’ve come all this way without any explanation as to why the edit was considered BOLD to begin with, but instead the reverter demands that the editor explain why it isn’t BOLD. Thus the reverter succeeds in vetoing an edit by demanding others prove a negative, when the reverter hasn’t even justified the basis for the reversion. This might lead a reasonable person to conclude that the reversion is based on a false pretext, a ruse when no valid reason to revert is readily available. IMO, it’s GAMING. It’s IDONTLIKEIT. And why do I get the feeling that some guys are smirking and snickering as they read this? soibangla (talk) 02:17, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    @JFG: I got a warning after one damn edit? WTF?? Are you saying that 0RR applies now? This edit is UNDUE --rogerd (talk) 18:19, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry, I did not mean to "warn" any of you. I just wanted to stop the edit-warring, and let people discuss the merits of the text in a proper thread below. — JFG talk 19:19, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    It isn't EW. Read the special restriction. X is right. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Soibangla (talkcontribs) 02:17, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    No, it is. Under the restrictions, any reversion that is again reverted can be considered edit warring. -- Scjessey (talk) 11:42, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    @MONGO: BRD is not a valid excuse for reverting good-faith efforts to improve a page simply because you don't like the changes; BRD is not a justification for imposing one's own view or for tendentious editing; BRD is never a reason for reverting. Unless the reversion is supported by policies, guidelines or common sense, the reversion is not part of BRD cycle soibangla (talk) 02:31, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    While it is true MONGO should've begun a discussion on this talk page after reverting, they did provide an explanation for their reversion in their edit summary:

    "Undue for this BLP, perhaps in Presidency subarticle"

    -- Scjessey (talk) 11:42, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    As I explained to MONGO in this thread, There are some edits in the subsection that probably don't belong there, but this particular edit isn't among them. I find it interesting that s/he finds the only "UNDUE" edit in the subsection to be the one that reports from multiple reliable sources on the actual outcomes of the tariffs now coming in, confirming that the warnings from the overwhelming consensus of reputable economists when the tariffs were proposed are now coming to pass. Trump calls himself Mr. Tariffs, it is his signature economic policy, he's been talking about it for 30+ years, and a brief discussion of the outcomes of that policy is DUE, while other edits in the subsection likely are not, yet no one ever called those edits UNDUE. soibangla (talk) 17:44, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Soibangla, in your edit summary here you stated that: "Although Trump has repeatedly asserted that his tariffs contribute to GDP growth, the consensus among analysts — including Trump's top economic advisor, Larry Kudlow — is that the Trump tariffs have had a small to moderately negative effect on GDP growth"...and the edit added the same passage. Indeed the sources do claim that economists believe Trump is wrong to say that increased tariffs have helped to increase the GDP, however, you framed it in a manner that suggests that Kudlow is in total disagreement with Trump on the tariff issue. Your factchecker source even clearly states Kudlow's full stance on the tariff situation is that, “a risk we should and can take without damaging our economy in any appreciable way” in order “to correct 20 years plus of unfair trading practices with China. We have had unfair trading practices all these years, and so in my judgment, the economic consequences are so small that the possible improvement in trade and exports and open markets for the United States, this is worthwhile doing, Kudlow said" here. We cannot just cherrypick portions of comments without putting them into their full context. THAT is exactly what tendentious editing IS. But all this gets back to my belief that this addition(s) are undue for this BLP...we must go into great depth to keep the section neutral and that causes us to stray away from following summary style. This is why we have subarticles dedicated to this sort of detail.--MONGO (talk) 19:11, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I'm not cherrypicking, you are. Kudlow acknowledged that the White House estimates that increased tariffs on all Chinese goods would amount to “about two tenths of 1 percent of GDP, so it’s a very modest number." That's why my edit said it was a small or moderately negative effect. Contrary to what Trump has said, that tariffs contribute to GDP, Kudlow has said it has a negative effect, albeit a small one. "without damaging our economy in any appreciable way” does not mean "positive." soibangla (talk) 20:24, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    As I explained, other edits in the subsection may be UNDUE, particularly because they do not provide a comprehensive explanation of all the tariff actions, as the Economic Policy article does. Why haven't you reverted those? In contrast, Trump calls himself Mr. Tariffs, he has been urging tariffs for 30+ years, it is his signature economic policy, he claims the tariffs add to GDP which has nearly universally contradicted, including by his own top economic advisor, and now CNBC has actual data showing it the equivalent of a large tax increase. That is certainly due here. Golly, you think some partisans might not want that to be known here? soibangla (talk) 20:40, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Impact of tariffs on U.S. consumers

    As a replacement for the procedural thread above, please discuss here which language and which sources should be used to cover the impact of tariffs on American consumers. — JFG talk 08:02, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    More discussion of process ~Awilley (talk) 18:53, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.
    The reverted edit was perfectly adequate in every respect and should be restored. soibangla (talk) 17:44, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Obviously some editors disagree, so the WP:ONUS is on you to convince them before the content can be restored. — JFG talk 19:21, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Would you or others like to explain precisely how the edit is BOLD, as opposed to, say, WP:IREALLYDONTLIKEIT? soibangla (talk) 22:01, 19 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Any edit that adds content is bold. WP:BRD states: Bold editing is a fundamental principle of Wikipedia. All editors are welcome to make positive contributions. It's how new information is added to Wikipedia. and If your edit gets reverted, do not revert again. Instead, begin a discussion with the person who reverted your change to establish consensus. Anyway, that is not the point: the process discussion was the previous thread. Here, you are invited to make your case on the merits of your proposed content. — JFG talk 06:49, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    If Any edit that adds content is bold were true, countless editors would be routinely citing BRD to revert edits they don't like. Alas, that is rare, in fact. BRD is being GAMED in this instance. soibangla (talk) 17:32, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Not gaming anything at all. Myself and several others seem to find your additions to be undue weight for THIS article. I see you have added the same material to daughter articles and there I have made no BRD. I suggest you start an Rfc so we can determine consensus for inclusion.--MONGO (talk) 18:32, 20 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • I think the issue is whether such belongs here at all — there’s two main hurdles (I’ll agree with what was mentioned by MONGO).
    • First, does such even belong in BLP or should it get redirected to the Presidency of Donald Trump.
    • Second, does an aspect have enough WEIGHT to mention. The tools I have, pending books being written, is prominence in newspapers and search results, or Google count.
    • I think any such should talk actual fact, such as the area or kinds of goods affected. (Electronics and shoes to U.S., food to China). The comparison mentioned before is verging on WP:CRYSTAL - while it’s only reporting that someone else projected years into the future, with whatever good or bad math. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 02:15, 21 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • I'm not ready to weigh in on specific language or sources, but I support inclusion of this subject matter. We mention Trump's tax policies prominently, we mention his tariffs policies prominently, so an assessment of the net impact of those policies seems noteworthy and appropriate. R2 (bleep) 17:32, 21 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Have to strip out the artistic hyperbole here ‘core’ or ‘persona’ or ‘signature’ are speculative psychology, not factual events. Also comparisons and “unique” are usually rejected as problematic and appears a bit false. The 30 years ago being support for Reagan doing similar sort of argues against unique, as do articles comparing these to Nixon’s mistakes, or folks simply walking thru items like Johnson’s Chicken tax, Nixon’s Nixon shock, Bush senior 2002 United States steel tariff, 2009 Obama tire tariff, solar tariff, etcetera or Tariffs in United States history. UNDUE in spin, but unemotionally and stripped of artistic frill phrases one could say his policy includes tariffs as a much wider number of articles mention the facts of his support. But, when stripped of personal psychology ... it’s not BLP, Again, more a topic for Presidency article. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 02:14, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    These edits are not proposed language for the article. They are rationales for restoration of the reverted content, to show why it is DUE. Sure, other presidents have imposed tariffs, but He is unique among modern presidents in his enthusiastic embrace of sweeping tariffs. It has been a consistent theme of Trump the man for decades, not merely Trump the candidate/president recently, so that's why it belongs in the BLP. soibangla (talk) 02:26, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    User:Soibangla This is the wrong venue for that, this is a thread for language discussion, of possible bit, not for proposal about un-reverting yet again with the objected to bit. I'll suggest you might take out the many individual adds you did for that here, except for the two that have replies -- and recraft a language proposal. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 21:59, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    HAHAHA! soibangla (talk) 22:50, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • An April 2019 study conducted by economists at the University of Chicago and the Federal Reserve found that the Trump tariffs on washing machines raised $82 million in federal revenues but cost consumers $1.5 billion in higher prices, and while foreign producers shifted some production to America to create 1,800 jobs, each job cost $817,000. The study also found that, rather than absorbing some portion of the tariffs, manufacturers passed on between 125% and 225% of the costs to consumers, improving manufacturers’ profits. Washer prices increased by about 12%, and because washers and dryers are typically sold together, manufacturers also increased dryer prices in tandem with washer prices, even though dryers were not subject to tariffs. soibangla (talk) 02:42, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • The New York Times reported in April 2019 that Wisconsin dairy farmers were facing "extinction" because Trump trade policies had exacerbated years of depressed prices caused by a production glut. Although the United States–Mexico–Canada Agreement Trump had negotiated would have given dairy farmers better access to Canadian markets, the expected benefits had not materialized because the treaty had not been approved by the Senate. Wisconsin is known as "America's Dairyland," with more dairy farms than in any other state. soibangla (talk) 23:22, 21 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • May 2019 analysis conducted by the Peterson Institute for International Economics found that although Trump's steel tariffs helped to create or save American steelworker jobs, they came at a cost of over $900,000 each. The total number of created/saved jobs was 12,700, according to analysis by the pro-tariff Alliance for American Manufacturing, although the number of workers in industries that consume steel outnumber those in the steel industry by a factor of about 80:1. The tariffs have caused domestic steel prices to be higher than foreign prices, which helps American steel producer profits, but makes consumers of steel at a disadvantage relative to their international competitors. soibangla (talk) 00:11, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • March 2019 analysis conducted by Princeton, Columbia and FRBNY economists found that by November 2018 “tariffs were costing U.S. consumers and the firms that import foreign goods an additional $3 billion per month in added tax costs,” with a “reduction in U.S. real income of $1.4 billion per month” and “the full incidence of the tariff falls on domestic consumers.” soibangla (talk) 01:52, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      Unpublished non peer reviewed paper the centre even says that using the paper as a citation should take into consideration that it is a provisional paper...aka as unendorsed.--MONGO (talk) 02:23, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • March 2019 analysis conducted by economists from UCLA, UCBerkeley, Columbia and the World Bank found “U.S. import tariffs favored workers in tradeable sectors living in electorally competitive counties. We find that the majority of counties experienced reductions in tradeable wages due to foreign retaliation. However, workers in very Republican counties bore the brunt of the costs of the trade war, in part because retaliations disproportionately targeted agricultural sectors.” They also found “complete pass-through of tariffs...suggesting that U.S. consumers bear the incidence of the tariff.” soibangla (talk) 02:17, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • February 2019 analysis conducted by Trade Partnership Worldwide found:
      • Effect of existing tariffs: U.S. GDP (annual percent): -0.37, Annual impact on family of four: -$767, One-time net impact on U.S. jobs: -934,700
      • Effect of existing tariffs plus threatened additional tariffs on all Chinese imports, with retaliation: U.S. GDP (annual percent): -1.01, Annual impact on family of four: -$2,294, One-time net impact on U.S. jobs: -2,159,500 soibangla (talk) 17:50, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • I have removed the addition regarding Kudlows comments that you inserted, was BRD removed by JFG and then restored by you in violation of BRD. I also removed MrX addition to that paragragh as a BRD move. Gain consensus for further restoration of this material.--MONGO (talk) 19:21, 21 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Trump's tariff claims

    This was removed:

    Although Trump has repeatedly asserted that his tariffs contribute to GDP growth, the consensus among analysts — including Trump's top economic advisor, Larry Kudlow — is that the Trump tariffs have had a small to moderately negative effect on GDP growth.[1][2] On several occasions, Trump also falsely said that import tariffs are paid by China into the U.S. Treasury—a claim also contradicted by Kudlow.[3][4][5]

    Sources

    1. ^ Farley, Robert (May 14, 2019). "Economists: Tariffs Not Boosting GDP".
    2. ^ Congressional Research Service, Trump Administration Tariff Actions: Frequently Asked Questions, February 2019 — https://fas.org/sgp/crs/row/R45529.pdf
    3. ^ Bort, Ryan (May 13, 2019). "Trump's Most Blatant Lie Is His Lie About Tariffs". Rolling Stone (magazine). Retrieved May 20, 2019.
    4. ^ Jacobson, Louis (May 14, 2019). "Who pays for US tariffs on Chinese goods? You do". PolitiFact. Retrieved May 20, 2019.
    5. ^ Newburger, Emma (May 12, 2019). "Kudlow acknowledges US will pay for China tariffs, contradicting Trump". CNBC. Retrieved May 20, 2019.

    If there is good reason for removing this widely-reported material, I would like to hear it. Otherwise, I'm inclined to restore it. (BRD is not a valid reason for removing it.)- MrX 🖋 21:34, 21 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Support If the article was less about his presidency, I'd say leave it out. As his presidency is included in general, and tariffs in particular, and the changing tariffs have had rather large effects on businesses, workers, and markets, it belongs. O3000 (talk) 21:50, 21 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    We went over this already. It is UNDUE and nothing but cherrypicked one sided nothingness. It exists in the Presidency article where I already clarified these details and made sure Kudlows comments were put in proper perspective. If we go into this level of detail here we are not following Summary Style.--MONGO (talk) 23:59, 21 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Not cherry picked. The first two Google search results for Trump tariffs are "Trump tariff increases hurting US businesses in China, survey says" and "Who pays Trump's tariffs, China or U.S. customers and companies?".
    What is the "other side" to Trump's falsehood that China pay's US tariffs on Chinese exports?
    What is the "proper perspective" for Kudlow's comments and why is that needed in this article?- MrX 🖋 11:13, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Why is it needed? A. For the purposes of neutrality. B. So the ratioanale for the tariffs can be placed in perspective. Do you really think Trump is imposing tariffs to destroy the economy deliberately? That is how the wording you came up with looks. In addition the fact that the tariffs will and have led to a shrinking Chinese dollar valuation means our exchange rate increases, and that increases our purchasing power on their goods. The fact that even most economists are talking about a 0.04% increase across the boards in the long haul is also omitted. My point is, simply slapping a negativism about Trump up to malign his policies without taking in the full ecominc forecast is not a neutral treatise of the issue and since we are trying to follow summary style here, going into the level of detail needed becomes undue. Now if you can figure out a way to present the tariff issue more neutrally I might agree. Can you summarize this in a manner that is more neutral?--MONGO (talk) 14:58, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    It's highly noteworthy that the President of the United States is either very uninformed about how tariffs work, or he is blatantly lying to the American public. I can't think of another time in history when president expressed such wanton ignorance of basic trade economics. It's far more important that recognizing Jerusalem, attempting and failing at detente with North Korea, and Scottish golf resorts. Also, still waiting to hear about the other side of China not paying export tariffs.- MrX 🖋 22:10, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    The full text on this issue in the Presidency article is: Analysis conducted by CNBC in May 2019 found that Trump "enacted tariffs equivalent to one of the largest tax increases in decades," while Tax Foundation and Tax Policy Center analyses found the tariffs could wipe out the benefits of the Tax Cuts and Jobs Act of 2017 for many households.[1][2][3][4] While Trump has repeatedly asserted that his tariffs contribute to GDP growth, the consensus among analysts — including Trump's top economic advisor, Larry Kudlow — is that the Trump tariffs have had a small to moderately negative effect on GDP growth.[5][6] Kudlow was also quoted as being in support of the administrations efforts to renegotiate tariffs with China, stating that this is, “a risk we should and can take without damaging our economy in any appreciable way” in order “to correct 20 years plus of unfair trading practices with China.” Kudlow went on to state that, “We have had unfair trading practices all these years, and so in my judgment, the economic consequences are so small that the possible improvement in trade and exports and open markets for the United States, this is worthwhile doing,”.[5]
    And even this level of coverage is incomplete.--MONGO (talk) 15:40, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Sources

    1. ^ Liesman, Steve (May 16, 2019). "Trump's tariffs are equivalent to one of the largest tax increases in decades". CNBC.
    2. ^ Keshner, Andrew. "Trump's escalating trade war with China could wipe out benefits from his tax reform". MarketWatch.
    3. ^ "Trump Tariffs Could Wipe Out Tax Cuts for Many Households". www.msn.com.
    4. ^ "For Many Households, Trump's Tariffs Could Wipe Out The Benefits of the TCJA". Tax Policy Center. May 14, 2019.
    5. ^ a b Farley, Robert (May 14, 2019). "Economists: Tariffs Not Boosting GDP".
    6. ^ Congressional Research Service, Trump Administration Tariff Actions: Frequently Asked Questions, February 2019 — https://fas.org/sgp/crs/row/R45529.pdf
    Kudlow is not the central topic.- MrX 🖋 22:10, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Speaking about cherry-picking. Found your clarified ... details—by searching for "Kudlow"—buried at the end of a section that is at least a dozen paragraphs long, with a link that doesn't work. This link (NYT) works; you used four long quotes from Kudlow's Fox News interview, but you didn't find this one worth mentioning: “In fact, both sides will pay,” Mr. Kudlow said on “Fox News Sunday.” “Both sides will suffer on this.” (but—in his judgment—no big deal, the economic consequences are so small that the possible improvement in trade and exports and open markets for the United States, this is worthwhile doing. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:33, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    That is where the additions were recently made to that article and my link worked for me and is the same one used a day prior.--MONGO (talk) 15:40, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support the inclusion of this material. Tariffs are a key component of Trump's economic policy, so excluding their economic effects would be bizarre. In fact, doing so would give the false impression that Trump's tariffs are somehow good for the economy. -- Scjessey (talk) 10:59, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support 2600:1702:2340:9470:31B2:15B8:E989:8543 (talk) 17:07, 22 May 2019 (UTC) 2600:1702:2340:9470:31B2:15B8:E989:8543 (talk) has made few or no other edits outside this topic. [reply]
    • Support but trim way down. The content in dispute appears to address two related but separate issues: (1) the effects of tariffs, and (2) Trump's false statements about the effects of tariffs. (1) is appropriate for inclusion, (2) is not. The purpose of this article isn't to debunk Trump's bullshit, nor is it to describe the he-said, she-said between Trump's bullshit and the verifiable truth (playing into the Trump/Bannon "the media is the enemy of the people" paradigm). That stuff belongs in the "False statements" and "Relationship with the press" sections. The "Economy and trade" section, on the other hand, should ignore the bullshit and focus on the verifiable facts. R2 (bleep) 18:48, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      Trump's level of competence and truthfulness are very important, and very biographical. I could care less about debunking anything.- MrX 🖋 22:14, 22 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      Got it. The issue about Trumps statement on the tariffs and the impact on the GDP are the focus apparently. See no reason to load up this BLP with forecasts and what-ifs that probably have no more reality to them than the forecasts that said the election of Trump would crash the stock markets cause an economic downturn and lead to increased unemployment.--MONGO (talk) 02:14, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Of course Trump's incompetence and untruthfulness are very important and very biographical. They're just not sufficiently on point in this particular section, in this particular article. We could veritably inundate the entire article with all of Trump's statements in every aspect of his life and presidency and how bullshit they are, but taken to an extreme it would violate WP:BALASPS. R2 (bleep) 18:49, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support. The tariffs, the false claims about them, and their detrimental economic impact are all very widely sourced and the length is appropriate. The two separate references to Kudlow are a bit much (can't that be consolidated into a single sentence?) but that should be handled in the ordinary course of editing. Neutralitytalk 01:59, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support but without the Kudlow remarks. Per Neutrality. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 02:32, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support but without the Kudlow remarks Per Neutrality.</s This man's knowledge of economics is relevant. starship.paint (talk) 14:16, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      Snooganssnoogans and Starship.paint. Would you support a single sentence about Kudlow's comments, as suggested by Neutrality, or do you think any mention of him has to be omitted entirely?- MrX 🖋
    As in...?

    Analysis conducted by CNBC in May 2019 found that Trump "enacted tariffs equivalent to one of the largest tax increases in decades," while Tax Foundation and Tax Policy Center analyses found the tariffs could wipe out the benefits of the Tax Cuts and Jobs Act of 2017 for many households. Although Trump has repeatedly asserted that his tariffs contribute to GDP growth, the consensus among analysts — including Trump's top economic advisor, Larry Kudlow — is that the Trump tariffs have had a small to moderately negative effect on GDP growth. On several occasions, Trump also falsely said that import tariffs are paid by China into the U.S. Treasury—a claim also contradicted by Kudlow. soibangla (talk) 18:31, 23 May 2019 (UTC)

    I don't think that addresses the concern that we should only mention Kudlow one time, or not at all.- MrX 🖋 22:25, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    MrX, I would omit Kudlow from the proposed sentences in this article. I would think that being a president who doesn’t listen to his aide is more relevant to the presidency article, while being a man who doesn’t know economics is relevant for both articles. starship.paint (talk) 23:53, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    User:MrX Please stop. This is in a BRD discussion above, it does not need another Re-re-revert. It does not need a separate thread, the it just needs some discussion of the poster with the reverter on the concerns and hopefully resolve it there. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 01:48, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    • Oppose - has no lasting value, it's a prediction (CRYSTALBALL), and it's UNDUE. Atsme Talk 📧 02:56, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      The only portion of the proposed wording that reads like a prediction is Trump's repeated assertions that his tariffs contribute to GDP growth. But the fact that he said it is not a prediction. It actually happened.- MrX 🖋 18:27, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      Oddly, the GDP is up since the tariffs. I also doubt this is related but seems the real issues about the tariffs are secondary to attempts to show a statement Trump made is not in concert with most economists and his economic advisor. The fact that Kudlow also feels Trump should try to rejig the tariffs with China and others is supported by Kudlow doesn't matter since that isn't neutral? Is that what you're saying?--MONGO (talk) 22:11, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      Are you asking me or Atsme? If you're asking me, you will have to clarify the question because I don't understand how it relates to my previous comment.- MrX 🖋 15:13, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Double vote
    The following discussion has been closed. Please do not modify it.
    Interesting that this IP and the IP above (2600:1702:2340:9470:31B2:15B8:E989:8543) both geolocate to same place and each has a total of one edit.--MONGO (talk) 22:02, 23 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose as UNDUE. This article is a BLP about the person, the tariff information belongs in the Presidency of Donald Trump article. Mr Ernie (talk) 03:39, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      That defies reason and evidence. This content is backed by dozens of sources from around the world, all of them about something Trump himself did or said. It has received sustained coverage for nearly three weeks. In fact, WP:DUEWEIGHT is quite clear that we have to include this to maintain a neutral POV.[11][12][13][14][15][16][17][18][19][20][21][22][23] We have 6487 words in this article under 'Presidency', but somehow 64 words about Trump's outlandish claim is undue. Trump lying to 300+ million Americans about a major economic issue is not even worth 1% of the space under Presidency in this article? - MrX 🖋 15:03, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Tariffs have been a consistent theme of Trump the man for decades, not merely Trump the candidate/president recently, so that's why it's DUE for his BLP
    • By that rationale, I can foresee a ton of upcoming cuts to the article, because if "detail" from one of Trump's most significant economic policies can be cut out, then so can detail for a host of other things far less important. -- Scjessey (talk) 14:00, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Absolutely correct. soibangla (talk) 17:24, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    No, we don't POV fork content just because a few editors don't like it.- MrX 🖋 15:03, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Can you create a neutral treatise about the tariffs and mostly avoid the analysis about Trump being, as in your response to MrErnie above, a liar? How do your prognosticators explain the GDP growth since the tariffs? Is stating that Kudlow disagrees with Trump in regards to the equation higher tariffs=GDP growth, not allowing Kudlows further comments from the same interview, that Kudlow supports Trumps efforts to rejig tariffs since the benefits outweigh the costs, have to be omitted? Is the goal to just show that Trump is a "liar" or a BLP policy following summary about the tariffs? Bottomline is taking only the portion of the interview where kudlow says the opposite of what Trump says and omitting the clarification is pure cherrypicking. By time we do make this a neutral addition, it becomes a very longish mess, and will be UNDUE.--MONGO (talk) 15:26, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    The content in discussion is a faithful reputation of the sources, and it helps contextualize the trade war material already covered in the article. If you know of a dozen or so sources that tie recent GDP gains to the tariffs, go a ahead write some copy and cite your sources. I would also suggest that people learn how to read sources. News articles have headlines and ledes, which show us what those sources deem to be important.
    On the matter of goals, there is no imperative to show that Trump is a liar. What is important is how he has framed his trade war, and how that relates to the reality of the situation.- MrX 🖋 15:50, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    It is faithful to only portions of Kudlows comments. It omits the facts that Kudlow is in agreement with Trump Administration efforts to rejig the trade issues. It omits the mystifying fact that GDP has not in fact yet been adversely impacted. It omits the fact that the devaluation of the Yuan increases American dollar spending power, offsetting some of the "costs". It also doesn't examine why Trump has been engaged in a tariff dispute with China, one that addresses the balance of trade issue and also the intellectual property theft China has been engaged in that Trump wants to put an end to. We can't frame the issue here on this page in a manner that follows summary style. There is no reason this level of depth cannot be better served by being placed in an article dedicated to this sort of discussion as JFG and others have suggested. I will however offer wording within a day maybe we can all agree on as I do think some sort of tariff/trade discussion deserves some mention here.--MONGO (talk) 16:48, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Maybe I'm missing something, but if we are discussing 1) Trump's claim that tariffs contribute to GDP growth, and 2) Trump's claim that China pays for the tariffs, then I don't understand why we would delve into Kudlow's comments about other things. I also don't see anything about devaluing the Yuan in the factcheck.org source. Are you refering to this in the CRS report?

    With regard to the value of the U.S. dollar, as demand for foreign goods may fall in response to higher tariffs, U.S. demand for foreign currency may also fall, putting upward pressure on the relative exchange value of the dollar. This in turn would reduce demand for U.S. exports and increase demand for foreign imports, partly offsetting the effects of the tariffs.

    If so, I don't understand how reduced demand for U.S. exports would boost the GDP (admittedly, I'm not an economist).- MrX 🖋 17:41, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    "Are Trump’s Tariffs Bolstering the U.S. Economy? Nope — The boost from trade in the first quarter looks like a blip" soibangla (talk) 17:49, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    The contribution of net exports to GDP is highly volatile from quarter to quarter. It's what economists call "noisy" data. For example, during the quarter after tariffs began, net exports added 1.2 percentage points to GDP, but the next quarter it subtracted 2.0 percentage points. The average since the tariffs began is 0.0 percentage points. soibangla (talk) 18:04, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment - wait until the trade war is over - see RECENTISM. Furthermore, GDP should be calculated annually, so if this is just a quarterly GDP - see RECENTISM. One last thing, it doesn't belong in his BLP - UNDUE. Atsme Talk 📧 20:01, 24 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    wait until the trade war is over Multiple reliable sources reported this week that Wall Street and companies are preparing for a protracted trade war; Treasury Secretary Steven Mnuchin said on Wednesday that he was personally questioning some of America’s largest companies about their plans for weathering the Trump administration’s trade war with China; Trump just gave farmers another $16 billion in aid
    GDP should be calculated annually I agree that first quarter GDP growth of 3.2% does not establish the tariff policy is working, as some assert: the president turned to Mr. Navarro, who showed the senators a slide presentation that documented how the tariffs had helped lift first-quarter economic growth to 3.2 percent
    it doesn't belong in his BLP:
    Tariffs have been a consistent theme of Trump the man for decades, not merely Trump the candidate/president recently, so that's why it's DUE for his BLP
    soibangla, I don’t think your edit has been discussed properly. The discussion of MONGO’s removal, Scjessey’s subsequent reversion of Mongo’s removal of your edit about the tariffs being equivalent to a tax increase—and two additional reversions by other editors on procedural grounds—got mired in a procedural discussion which JFG seems to have tried to put back on track but unfortunately on a different track, i.e., the impact on U.S. consumers in general. As the NY Times Editorial Board says, … a tariff is a consumption tax, much like a sales tax, and such taxes tend to be regressive, meaning they cost lower-income families a larger share of their income than they cost upper-income families. MrX’s discussion on Trump claiming that the tariffs increase the GDP are a related, but different matter. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 07:09, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Yes, the reversion of my original edit that initiated this long discussion appears to have slipped through the cracks. Unless another editor objects, I believe that original edit should be restored as well I will restore it. soibangla (talk) 18:54, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Object. Post an Rfc to gain concensus for this.--MONGO (talk) 19:25, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    That didn’t come out right. I should have said that the titles of both discussions (Reversion explanation and Impact of tariffs on U.S. consumers) were misleading. It’s not just consumers who are affected through higher consumer prices but also businesses. What good is the tax cut to them if they go out of business because consumers can no longer afford to buy their products with the tariff/tax tacked on? I think juxtaposing the claims for the 2017 Tax and Jobs Act and for the tariffs is a valid point that hasn’t been addressed in the article. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 11:05, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support inclusion without any mention of Kudlow. Is the restored sentence now open to normal editing? I’m late voicing my opinion because I had problems formulating my objection to mentioning Kudlow without violating BLP. Kudlow is not an analyst, he is a successful self-promoter whose "one Big Idea is supply-side economics"; he "attributes every positive economic indicator to lower taxes, and every piece of negative news to higher taxes," and he "has been spectacularly wrong on the biggest economic turning points in modern history." In line with his Big Idea, he saw the tariffs for what they are, a tax increase, and then—to please his current master—did some tap-dancing and spinning to arrive at his usual forecast of the other forecasts being all wrong and the tariffs being "a risk we should and can take without damaging our economy in any appreciable way." Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 11:05, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose per atsme, Mr Ernie and JFG. WP:UNDUE, subjective opinion; not saying this material has no place in Wikipedia, it is better suited to another D. Trump article e.g., the article about his presidency.--Literaturegeek | T@1k? 11:43, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    TLDR

    The above debate among learned editors about the finer points of international tariffs and their economic impact is no doubt interesting and relevant to the current U.S. administration's policy and China's reaction. I'm still puzzled that the focus seems to be on showing that Trump said something wrong yet again (in his BLP), rather than explaining what is actually unfolding and how various people represent it (which should happen in other articles). — JFG talk 14:47, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    That's been addressed. Trump has used his bully pulpit to personally promote his policy with blatantly false information, as he has frequently done in the past. In case you are not aware, that's also what autocrats do. It's historically unprecedented, reckless, and shows deep character flaw. If you think there is a better way to summarize this information, perhaps you can share it with us. I don't quite follow what you mean by ... how various people represent it". Could you elaborate?- MrX 🖋 17:02, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I've met four Presidents and they all lied. Since the issue of Trump being a liar is all documented why we diviate from the facts of the tariffs to highlight the alleged lying is telling. What have the tariffs actually done that can be connected to any yet known economic disaster? All we have is forecasts and even those mainly look at what an escalation MIGHT do, based on past incidences.--MONGO (talk) 17:51, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I believe I have done a fairly comprehensive job of explaining what is actually unfolding and how various people represent it, as well as why it is DUE for the BLP, but I have found the response to be strictly crickets. soibangla (talk) 17:18, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Where did you suggest article text that explains the tariff situation and its representation? Reading your numerous comments on this talk page, I see you arguing that your first edit somehow wasn't bold, and listing many sources to support your assertion that Trump has been a "tariff man" for 30 years. What's missing is a proposed edit giving better context and balanced treatment. All of which is in my opinion undue for this biographical article. — JFG talk 11:32, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    If indeed Trump has been supportive of tariffs for many decades (which might be biographically significant), then why not just say that, instead of focusing on Trump's inaccurate details and Kudlow's apparent contradictions? — JFG talk 11:34, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    That’s your prerogative—no need to shout, dear. I'm still puzzled, 'though, how you know what the learned editors debated if you DR. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 10:37, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I've read most of it, then skipped repetitive arguments and wrote this. — JFG talk 11:26, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    RfC: oldest and wealthiest

    Should the lead section mention that Trump is the "oldest and wealthiest" president? — JFG talk 15:03, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    The current, longstanding phrase in paragraph 2 of the lead includes:

    He became the oldest and wealthiest person ever to assume the presidency, and the first without prior military or government service.

    I would suggest replacing this with:

    He became the first president without prior military or government service.

    In recent informal discussions, some editors have said those qualifiers are unimportant statistics best left to specialized articles such as List of presidents of the United States by age and List of Presidents of the United States by net worth instead of the lead section of Trump's BLP. It was also argued that "oldest" is ageist and "wealthiest" is vulgar, and that it all was "irrelevant trivia". In support of the inclusion, it was argued that those facts were well-covered during Trump's campaign, and that similar statistics appear in other presidents' biographies. This RfC aims to resolve the disagreement. — JFG talk 15:03, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Survey: oldest and wealthiest

    Please express your preference with Keep to preserve the status quo or with Delete to remove the "oldest and wealthiest" qualifiers. A brief rationale is welcome here. Longer arguments should go to the #Discussion: oldest and wealthiest section.

    • Delete - I remember "oldest" and "wealthiest" were talking points during the election, but I honestly don't think they are biographically significant. Nor are they defining characteristics of his presidency. This is exactly the kind of trimming I would like to see more of in this article. Less is always more. -- Scjessey (talk) 15:21, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Delete – While Trump's lack of military or government experience is relevant to his presidency, and apparently unprecedented in the USA, his age and his wealth are mere trivia. Reagan was old too, and Washington was filthy rich for his day. — JFG talk 17:19, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Delete not at all defining characteristics and not lead-worthy, especially compared to his actions in office, though including in article body wouldn't be so bad. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 17:41, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Keep to preserve the status quo, no real reason to mess with a long-standing 2 year norm and what little stability this article has. Also, oldest and wealthiest seem to follow precedents of identifying characteristics in past presidents such as age remarks for Ronald Reagan or youth and religion of John F. Kennedy. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 06:00, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Keep - this is interesting information. He is a lot older than his immediate predecessors (though only slightly older than Reagan was as President). He also seems to be a lot wealthier than other President, according to the linked table. This is worth noting.--Jack Upland (talk) 07:04, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Keep - There is a long tradition to identify presidents according to records they hold in regards to their presidency. Ronald Reagan was widely reported to be the oldest back then, James Buchanan as the only bachelor to hold the office, John F. Kennedy as being the youngest to be elected and the only Catholic to be president, James Garfield as the last to be born in a log cabin etc. This sort of trivia exists for most presidents. One argument for deletion is that this information is well known to most readers because they refer to the current president, whose wealth and age are widely discussed in the media, but removing it now for being banal only to add it a few years later, when the information won't seem as obvious sounds unnecessary to me. PraiseVivec (talk) 16:05, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Delete per JFG. Gandydancer (talk) 17:08, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Delete - trivia. Atsme Talk 📧 18:30, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Discussion: oldest and wealthiest

    @JFG: - some editors have opined that "oldest" is ageist and "wealthiest" is vulgar - Not to put too fine a point on it, but I don't see more than one editor saying either.[24] I'd ask that you edit that for accuracy. ―Mandruss  15:20, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    You are right, and in fairness only one editor highlighted the comparison with Reagan, Kennedy and Roosevelt's biographies.[25] The point is to show that those were arguments advanced in the discussion. I'll edit to avoid referring to a particular editor or group thereof. — JFG talk 15:27, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment I think oldest should be included because it was a common description for WH Harrison and Reagan. The "prior military or government service" is clumsy. All previous presidents had held either elected office as a congressman, senator or governor, or had served in the Cabinet or were generals. If Trump had worked as an election official, or had been in the National Guard, his lack of experience would still be relevant. Also, not sure if we was the wealthiest, particularly if inflation is taken into account. We don't even know if he has a positive net worth. TFD (talk) 20:59, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I think "prior military or government service" was used in the media at the time. Does "government service" have a special meaning for Americans? Because I would have thought "military service" was "government service", and "government service" could include working as a clerk in the sanitation department.--Jack Upland (talk) 07:31, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I vaguely recall some discussion about this. Military service may be government service in some sense, but that doesn't mean Americans would interpret the term that way. We would normally think of people working in city halls, state capitals, and Washington, not in military bases and foreign countries. The military take direction from their government but serve their country, and they are not the same thing. ―Mandruss  07:47, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Perhaps we could lift this ambiguity by replacing "service" with "experience". The target articles is called List of Presidents of the United States by previous experience. — JFG talk 19:51, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • I think, in general, statements about the "oldest" should be avoided. Given the steady increase in human longevity, we should expect US Presidents to be increasingly older and to live longer (like Jimmy Carter). This is not notable and not worth noting. However, in Trump's case he is significantly older than Obama etc. There has been speculation that this could be a factor in his Presidency, and he could be or become medically unfit.--Jack Upland (talk) 08:40, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    RfC: False statements

    A recent discussion was archived without reaching a definite conclusion. Based on comments from various editors there, I am formally suggesting a change of the current wording, which was selected in the prior RfC about this subject, and is in my opinion unnecessarily wordy. — JFG talk 15:18, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Current version:

    Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency. The statements have been documented by fact-checkers, and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics.

    Proposed version:

    Fact-checkers have documented an unprecedented number of false or misleading statements during Trump's campaign and presidency.

    JFG talk 15:18, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Amended proposal:

    Fact-checkers have documented that Trump made an unprecedented number of false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency.

    I am putting forward this amended proposal following remarks by several editors in the first day of the RfC. — JFG talk 11:14, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Survey: false statements

    Please express your preference to Support or Oppose the proposed change, with a brief rationale. Longer arguments should go to the #Discussion: false statements section.

    • Oppose - Trump's falsehoods are a defining characteristic of his presidency. Without gazing too deeply into the crystal ball, I think the Trump presidency will forever be associated with an astonishing level of mendacity. As such, I like the way the existing text spells this out a bit more assertively. -- Scjessey (talk) 15:34, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      What happened to Less is always more?[26] Seriously, I think a shorter sentence is more impactful in asserting the issue. — JFG talk 15:39, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Not at the expense of missing something important, obviously. Nothing is more important to Trump's biography than the thing that has defined him, and that's the fact that he likes to tell porky pies. -- Scjessey (talk) 16:05, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    In your proposed version the issue is that someone somewhere made a whole bunch of false or misleading statements while Trump was president. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 10:54, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you. I have addressed this deficiency in the amended proposal above. — JFG talk 11:18, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Too soon/Oppose - The passage in question is the result of an RfC that was open for more than a month a mere few months ago, focused exclusively on that little bit of content, and received over 10,000 words from over 30 editors. One of the precious few editors willing to spend their time doing uninvolved closes spent a considerable amount of it assessing that consensus and writing the close. The length of the passage was pointed out at the beginning of the proposal for it, lest anyone fail to consider it, and yet the passage received wide support. Thus the length argument has been duly rejected and it's not constructive to raise it again hoping for a different outcome. This is not how we should be spending our limited time. ―Mandruss  15:47, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - The proposed wording obscures the fact that Trump made the false statements. That deviates far from almost every reliable source that has reported on the subject. We must be clear and direct. - MrX 🖋 16:22, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      • I also oppose the amended proposal because it shifts the focus to fact checkers. I would support Neutrality's proposal, or something like "Trump has made an unprecedented number of false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency." - MrX 🖋 11:41, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support The laundry lists of Trumps alleged deceptions is what is unprecedented.--MONGO (talk) 17:55, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose for the reasons states by Scjessey, Mandruss, and MrX, but I would favor a shorter "Trump has made many false or misleading statements during his campaign and presidency, at a level unprecedented in American politics" if someone proposed that. Neutralitytalk 18:00, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Neutrality - the statement "at a level unprecedented in American politics" would have to be attributed, otherwise we'd be treading in SYNTH territory or opinion rather than fact. The kind of coverage Trump has gotten is what's unprecedented, otherwise I would imagine the same could be said of a few former presidents. Atsme Talk 📧 18:04, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support — the current version attributes the assessment of unprecedented mendacity to the media, which plays into the "fake news" narrative (itself mendacious), while the proposed version attributes the assessment to fact-checkers. That said, Neutrality's proposed language would be even better. soibangla (talk) 18:08, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Doesn’t matter — Devoting so much contributor time to trivial matters like this contributes to outsiders’ perceptions of Wikipedia as largely dysfunctional on controversial subjects. Time to move on. Greg L (talk) 18:59, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose. Too vague. I support Neutrality's version over both of the proposed versions by OP. Snooganssnoogans (talk) 20:12, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - let’s not revisit it yet again and so soon. The change in portrayal also seems unnecessary and not preceded by groundwork. I think lead edits like this one should be a discussion first to show interests and concerns, not this every time jump straight to an A/B choice RFC that has not done substantial prep work in TALK. Cheers Markbassett (talk) 06:30, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support — the new version is shorter, to the point, and more neutral.--Jack Upland (talk) 08:23, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose per reasons stated by MrX, Scjessey, Mandruss, and Soibangla. I also think that Neutrality's version would be even better. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 10:50, 26 May 2019 (UTC) Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 17:43, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment – Following several remarks about the clarity of the sentence, I have amended the proposed text. @Scjessey, Mandruss, MrX, Neutrality, Snooganssnoogans, Markbassett, and Space4Time3Continuum2x: Could you reconsider your !votes in light of that? — JFG talk 11:17, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    No. The current longer version is accurate while ascribing the conclusion "unprecedented" to fact-checkers is not. I don't think that at this stage we need to point out that "fact-checkers documented" and "the media described" but, if we do it, we should do it accurately. Space4Time3Continuum2x (talk) 13:32, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    This amended proposal also does not work for me for the reasons that Space4Time addressed above. I prefer my proposal above. Neutralitytalk 14:45, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    No, since mine is a process objection. The hard-won consensus content should be considered good enough that we can better spend this time on other things. That will always be my position in situations like this. Thanks for the ping. ―Mandruss  19:45, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support for conciseness. — JFG talk 11:22, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Strong oppose - to say that Fact-checkers ... documented ... an unprecedented number is inaccurate. As one can see from the sources already in the article at Donald Trump#False statements (that's 305-315 at the time of this post, none of the sources describing unprecedented are fact-checkers. [27] / [28] [29] / [30] [31] / [32] / [33] / [34] / [35] / [36] Rather, they are academics or the media. I would instead add to the lede that The statements have been documented by fact-checkers; academics and the media have widely described the phenomenon as unprecedented in American politics. Alternatively, Neutrality's version is also okay. starship.paint (talk) 11:34, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support - Honestly, I don't think the difference is that large between the two version, but while we're here, the proposed version has a small edge over the current one. This is mainly because it's more concise and because saying that something "was described by the media" gives fodder to the "fake news" crowd who will claim that this is a conspiracy against the president by the news media, rather than demonstrable and well documented facts. PraiseVivec (talk) 15:58, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support - it says what needs to be said succinctly and in compliance with NPOV. Atsme Talk 📧 16:49, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - Neutrality offers a good choice for wording and Starship gives some good advise as well. Gandydancer (talk) 17:13, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support - It's important to stay neutral. The current way seems like it's "Bashing" Trump. I don't care if you like or hate the man, the wording needs to be neutral.Gregnator (talk) 22:06, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Discussion: false statements

    JFG, you made this proposal. Can you explain your decision to limit the description of an unprecedented number to fact-checkers, when the body of the article (and the sources) doesn't actually say that fact-checkers have said that? starship.paint (talk) 11:49, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    The original sentence says three things: 1) fact-checkers have documented a bunch of false and misleading statements by Trump; 2) the magnitude and raw count of false and misleading statements is unprecedented; 3) media have been pounding on this issue. My proposed version aims to simplify this state of affairs, and the original long-winded phrase, by focusing on points 1 and 2. You raise the issue that it's only media and academics that have used the "unprecedented" qualifier, I wasn't aware of that, and I'm pretty sure we can find fact-checker sources that use similar language. If I'm mistaken, then perhaps we should replace "unprecedented" with some other qualifier (staggering? unusual? unfathomable? just large?), but that would be a different discussion. — JFG talk 19:39, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Tariffs equivalent to one of the largest tax increases in decades

    This edit was reverted:

    Analysis conducted by CNBC in May 2019 found that Trump "enacted tariffs equivalent to one of the largest tax increases in decades," while Tax Foundation and Tax Policy Center analyses found the tariffs could wipe out the benefits of the Tax Cuts and Jobs Act of 2017 for many households.

    After extensive discussion of the edit, plus two supplemental edits by me and MrX, consensus was reached that tariff information is relevant and DUE in the Trump BLP, and MrX restored part of the content. However, the original edit (above) that initiated this whole process may have fallen through the cracks during this extensive discussion, and there may be some question as to whether it was included in the reached consensus. Consequently I request a vote to explicitly restore the edit.

    • Supportsoibangla (talk) 22:05, 25 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose More what-ifs and conjecture of mostly yet to be seen outcomes.--MONGO (talk) 07:34, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose There are many comparisons that could be made and no reason why these ones have weight. When combined with the income tax cuts, there is a net tax reduction, although the vast majority of Americans will see a net tax increase. I would just say that the tariffs are estimated to cost taxpayers $72 billion per year. TFD (talk) 09:58, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      @The Four Deuces: - since you say There are many comparisons that could be made can you provide many examples in reliable sources providing different comparisons? starship.paint (talk) 11:42, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I do not have to to. You need to show that the comparison cited is significant. TFD (talk) 11:59, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support - My initial instinct was to say that this was too prognosticative and detailed, but after reading the sources (of which more are available), I think we need to include this for NPOV reasons because of how extensively we already cover the tax cut legislation in this article:
    1. In the lead: "He enacted a tax cut package for individuals and businesses,"
    2. "Trump had asserted that a policy of tax cuts and deregulation would result in 3% annualized GDP growth, and perhaps much higher,..."
    3. Entire paragraph that begins "In December 2017, Trump signed the Tax Cuts and Jobs Act of 2017,..."
    I know we are concerned about article length, so I suggest we look at condensing paragraphs 4, 5 and the first part of 6 under 'Economy and trade' to make room for the 50 words proposed.- MrX 🖋 12:06, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oppose - none of the information regarding details of his presidency belong in his BLP - they belong in Presidency of Donald Trump, and from there, possibly into spin-off articles about specific (his most notable) policy decisions. Atsme Talk 📧 17:07, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Accordingly, I look forward to your edits that will cut the article size in half. soibangla (talk) 18:59, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment@Soibangla: If you mean this thread to be a RfC, you should add the required {{rfc}} tag, which will trigger the automated process and notifications. If you mean it just as a local informal survey, then please remove "RfC:" from the thread title. — JFG talk 19:31, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      I've removed "RfC:" from the heading. ―Mandruss  21:41, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't know how to use that tag. I'd appreciate if you could add it so I can see what it looks like and I will comply in the future. soibangla (talk) 22:00, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    @Soibangla: Per WP:RFCBEFORE, an RfC would be premature at this juncture. ―Mandruss  23:11, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Trump's "best economy in history"

    MONGO reverted this edit because "stocks are higher than ever...unemployment is lower than in last 50 years," despite the facts that:

    • The unemployment rate had been declining steadily for seven years before Trump was elected, contrary to efforts by some to make it seem that Trump became president and flipped a magic switch to cause unemployment to suddenly drop.
    • And anyway, the edit contains eight cites from a reliable source showing that Trump's assertions are false. And that's what we rely on here: reliable sources.

    I recommend the edit be restored. soibangla (talk) 18:23, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Both Trump's declarations, MONGO's assertion and Soibangla's sources are opinion about the health of the economy and the respective attribution to the Obama or Trump presidencies. The economy is always good or bad, best or worst, by some measure. Best leave all opinion out. — JFG talk 19:46, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    There isn't even a definition of "best economy" as it would have to include the how likely a recession will occur and how resiliently it will perform once the inevitable recession does. Which is only a comment, not an argument for or against inclusion. O3000 (talk) 19:50, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    This is not a matter of opinion, it's a matter of a RS reporting the assertions as false — eight times. But anyway, by every metric a reasonable person can name — GDP, job creation, wage growth, earnings growth, stock market, unemployment rate, labor participation, you name it — we are most certainly not in the best economy in American history, not by a long shot. "By just about any important measure, the economy today is not doing as well as it did under Presidents Dwight D. Eisenhower, Lyndon B. Johnson and Bill Clinton — and Ulysses S. Grant" soibangla (talk) 22:22, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Per Wikipedia policy, report what reliable sources say, subject to WEIGHT. If MONGO wishes to include a different viewpoint with sufficient sourcing, he is free to do so. Leave personal political analysis out of it; that is not our job. That said, it did seem odd to me that all eight cites were from AP. ―Mandruss  22:06, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I reported what RS said, MONGO cited specific metrics that are easily debunked. I can produce other reliable sources if desired, but I figured that AP is considered perhaps the most anodyne source that is rarely if ever challenged as "fake news." soibangla (talk) 22:13, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    Based on what you've said, I'm curious to know if editors think MONGO reverted because he should — or because he could. soibangla (talk) 22:47, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't know that it matters what we think about that.
    Maybe I haven't been clear: Your content is a fair reflection of adequate sourcing per WEIGHT, and should therefore remain in. MONGO is free to add an alternative viewpoint if he can produce adequate sourcing per WEIGHT. Then we can discuss to what extent it's appropriate to use wiki voice. To date, MONGO hasn't produced anything but his own view of the political situation. Nor has anybody else in this thread, except you. ―Mandruss  22:59, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    his own view of the political situation is not sufficient grounds to revert and force another editor into WP:ONUS. If I'm not mistaken, you recently called into question whether MONGO should be permitted to edit American politics articles. soibangla (talk) 23:15, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    Soibangla - find other sources to mix it up (I’m sure WaPo cited best economy as one of Trump’s most repeated falsehoods) and I’ll add it back as DUE material. starship.paint (talk) 22:57, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

    "President Trump’s repeated claim: 'The greatest economy in the history of our country’" soibangla (talk) 23:06, 26 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]