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Candidate entries
Articles created/expanded on January 20
Template:DYKsuggestion at 03:47, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- Article only cites on one source. It seems reliable, but it's an obituary, which could be biased. Otherwise, length and date check out. Shubinator (talk) 04:21, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 03:08, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- ... that Pat Riley is the only Miami Heat head coach to have won the NBA championship with the Miami Heat, having winning it in the 2006 NBA Finals? New article, self-nom by -- SRE.K.A
nnoyomous.L.24 review me 01:14, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Hope this is better... -- SRE.K.A
nnoyomous.L.24 review me 02:41, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- Hope this is better... -- SRE.K.A
Articles created/expanded on January 19
Template:DYKsuggestion at 07:49, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 07:01, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 05:49, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 03:57, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- The article has not been expanded enough, so far it's been expanded 3.1x. Also, the hook is implied but not explicitly stated (the article does not explicitly say the park has no lions). Shubinator (talk) 00:25, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 23:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 23:16, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 22:54, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- For any other reviewers thinking we'd already done this, it was a hook for editor Thomas Congdon earlier this month that discussed the novel. (How did we not have an article about this book until now?) - Dravecky (talk) 00:26, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 21:31, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- A bit on the short side. I get 1682 characters. Also, the reference is to a forum. The forum says the European Space Agency is its source [1], so this can easily be strengthened by putting in the ESA source instead of the forum. Shubinator (talk) 23:01, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I moved the ESA source up... It's currently at about 1780 characters. — Scientizzle 23:16, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Date, length, reference good. Shubinator (talk) 23:23, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 21:15, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- alt 1 ... that the USOC awarded medals to Sam Stoller and Marty Glickman 62 yeas after the only two Jews on the U.S. track team were pulled from the 400-meter relay team at the 1936 Berlin Olympics? Cbl62 (talk) 21:43, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion Lordoliver Lord R. Oliver I His Lordship's Court 21:11, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 20:58, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Article hasn't been expanded enough, only 3.5x now by my count. Unfortunately tables and lists don't count. Also, to me the hook was a bit confusing because I didn't know that the promotion refers to WWE. Rephrasing to due to his contract with WWE would help. Shubinator (talk) 00:42, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- Eh, I forgot to count. Your suggestion would work, but it makes no difference really since its not technically 5x.TRUCO 01:45, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- You've still got a few days to expand it. Shubinator (talk) 02:33, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- There isn't really much more to add to the list in order to add 2,000 more characters of prose.--TRUCO 04:00, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion Thruxton (talk) 20:38, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 20:34, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- No inline citation for hook. Shubinator (talk) 22:27, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Rejigged refs to fix this. Mjroots (talk) 22:40, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Date, length good. Offline reference accepted by AGF. Interesting article. Shubinator (talk) 22:43, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 18:14, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 17:56, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 17:32, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Article has been written gradually since December 29. The expansion from 5 days ago until now is just 9k to 11k. Therefore, article is too old. Politizer talk/contribs 17:51, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 09:10, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 08:51, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 08:00, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length 4,987 characters and source verified - Mario1987 14:37, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 07:42, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- 249 character hook. Also, the hook is not explicitly stated in the article. The article has been expanded much more than 5x though. Also (this has nothing to do with DYK), I'd recommend moving the "See also" (now called "More info") before the References section per WP:ALSO. Shubinator (talk) 02:51, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- Oh gosh... I knew it's a lot more than 5x, but once I got started I wanted it to be worthy of Wiki and just kept going. I have moved the "See also" per your good advice. As for the hook... I was worried about that. I liked it, but in complete agreement with you, here's a shorter and more precise alternate:
- ... that that the four-part A&E documentary series The Greatest Pharaohs is being used in many Colleges and Universities courses teaching Anthropology and Archaeology?
- The hook length is much better, but it still isn't explicitly stated in the article. The grammar of the hook needs tweaking...maybe this is better:
- ... that that the four-part A&E documentary series The Greatest Pharaohs is being used in many college and university courses on anthropology and archaeology?
- Shubinator (talk) 03:27, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- To clarify: the article does state that it is in the libraries of numerous universities and colleges, but doesn't say the video series is being used in the classroom. Shubinator (talk) 03:35, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for pointing the way. I looked over the paragraph's cites to ensure that the film is listed in either a course sylabus, the course's media library, or course media requirement and rewrote the sentence to clarify the asssertion of the hook. The library stuff is now in a different sentence. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 03:56, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- AND I do very much like your cleaner hook. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 03:59, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- I'm still unsure the series is being used in courses, but I'll accept it per AGF. Shubinator (talk) 04:12, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 06:37, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Note to reviewer: Expansion is fivefold if infobox, etc. are not counted. Thanks, GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:37, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length, 5x expansion, and source verified. Jappalang (talk) 12:30, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 04:50, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Yep, confirmed. - Mgm|(talk) 12:43, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 04:43, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- ... that a Liveline phone-in debate on gay adoption staged by stand-in presenter Evelyn O'Rourke in February 2007 led to two-thirds of the total complaints issued against the radio show in the following six months? (new article, self-nom) --➨♀♂Candlewicke ST # :) 03:04, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 04:10, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that between 20,000 and 80,000 Filipinos live illegally in Italy? SpencerT♦C 04:10, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- for ALT1 Lenght ok, more than 5x expansion and source verified. Mario1987 14:45, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on January 18
Template:DYKsuggestion at 21:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 11:08, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I don't know what to say but it's not that interesting. Mario1987 14:50, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- This is the only example I've ever heard of a fungus being used as fish bait, thought that might warrant a DYK. Are any of the following more interesting to you? Sasata (talk) 16:35, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Cookeina is a genus of cup fungus found in the tropics and subtropics?
- ALT3 ... that Cookeina, a genus of tropical and subtropical cup fungi, have asci which mature simultaneously rather than in series?
- In the original hook, does the offline source really mean a Malaysian town called "Peninsular"? It probably means Peninsular Malaysia (no comma, one link; it was once known as Malaya). The Peninsular link is about Spain. Art LaPella (talk) 02:24, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- Good catch, I've fixed the hook above. Thanks - Sasata (talk) 04:29, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- In the original hook, does the offline source really mean a Malaysian town called "Peninsular"? It probably means Peninsular Malaysia (no comma, one link; it was once known as Malaya). The Peninsular link is about Spain. Art LaPella (talk) 02:24, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 02:00, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 02:00, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Both articles still need some cleanup before promotion. Strike article has repeated phrases ("Workers at the Daily News settled their issues, accepting raises of $8 per week in talks mediated by United States Secretary of Labor W. Willard Wirtz") and other grammar issues. - Dravecky (talk) 03:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for catching the near-duplicate sentences. I have reviewed both articles and I think all issues have been addressed. Please let me know if you have any other questions regarding either article. Alansohn (talk) 05:02, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 01:54, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 01:49, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- How about this:
- "...that the Amagi class battlecruisers were to be canceled due to the Five-Power Treaty, but an exemption saved Akagi, which (after conversion to an aircraft carrier) took part in the attack on Pearl Harbor?"
- Should be around 204 characters (while not under the 200 limit, it's close enough, I think). Parsecboy (talk) 03:07, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 22:41, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length, >1500 (2536) characters (seems more like a new article), image, and source verified. Jappalang (talk) 01:59, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 21:09, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 19:15, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 18:47, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Good to go. Arsenikk (talk) 19:54, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 18:28, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 16:02, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that college football player Bob Ward is the only player to have been selected by the Associated Press as a first-team All-American in both an offensive and defensive position? Strikehold (talk) 16:02, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 15:57, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 15:47, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length, >1500 characters, and source verified. Jappalang (talk) 12:38, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 08:33, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 15:00, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- In a statement like this, the date is always relevant.=--Wetman (talk)
- ... that the 1983 song "Everyday I Write the Book" was Elvis Costello's first hit single in the United States? Boston (talk) 01:26, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- In a statement like this, the date is always relevant.=--Wetman (talk)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 08:17, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Date, length, reference good. Shubinator (talk) 03:46, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 08:05, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 07:36, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- According to User talk:Dr pda/prosesize.js this is a tad too small. A shame, because it's a really interesting article. - Mgm|(talk) 12:30, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- I added three sentences to it, but I messed up the refs in the process and I don't know how to fix it. Schuym1 (talk) 15:44, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Someone else expanded further. I'll double check the refs - Mgm|(talk) 22:21, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- You fixed the ref issue, and the article and hook are confirmed. - Mgm|(talk) 22:32, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 06:49, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- I made a small alteration to the hook (rewording), the article's age and size check out as well as the hook's reference. - Mgm|(talk) 12:41, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 06:36, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length, >1500 characters, and sources verified. Jappalang (talk) 06:24, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion Ironholds (talk) 03:10, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length, >1500 characters, and source verified. The lucky devil. Jappalang (talk) 04:31, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion Algorerhythms (talk) at 02:39, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length and 5x expansion verified. Sources are off-line newspapers accepted in good faith. Jappalang (talk) 06:31, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion Ironholds (talk) 02:26, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion Ironholds (talk) 01:35, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Article only relies on one source. It is from The Daily Telegraph, but it's an obituary, which could be biased. Otherwise, length and date check out. Shubinator (talk) 03:52, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that in T.I.'s Road To Redemption, an upcoming reality television show, rapper T.I. will be trying to show seven teenagers that there is "another way" than spending a life of crime?
- ALT 2: ... that in T.I.'s Road To Redemption, an upcoming reality television show, rapper T.I. will be sharing the mistakes he has made in the past and the lessons he has learned from them to teenagers across the United States?
- Note: Would prefer using the first hook and not the ALTs as the first hook contains two pieces of information—March sentencing to prison and reality show. The ALTs only have information on the show, but I just added those hooks there incase. If for some reason the first hook has a problem that needs fixing, go with ALTs. — RyanCross (talk) 09:19, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 19:52, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on January 17
Template:DYKsuggestion at 03:03, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not much of an expert on how this works, but credit on this one should be shared also by user:Freechild, user:Outsider80, user:Parkwells, and user:Tvoz. It's an intersting subject and article I think, and it's at AfD too which I think gives it bonus points. Someone find a cool photo we can use. ChildofMidnight (talk) 03:03, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 02:16, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 16:18, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 07:27, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I got the obviously wrong impression from this hook that Epik continued to write after being executed. Can the information in the hook be re-organized? Maybe some tweaking of the tenses would help, too. --PFHLai (talk) 16:37, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- That sure would be a good hook if true :) I added the years now so maybe it's clearer? Närking (talk) 20:41, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1 (rephrasing): ... that after being sent to GULAG in 1935, Ukrainian writer Hryhorii Epik continued to write, and even sent one of his works to NKVD in Moscow before his execution during the Great Purge in 1937? Jappalang (talk) 02:23, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 00:45, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
NB:Moved to mainspace Jan 17th. Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:45, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT 2: ... that the candy cap mushroom is commercially harvested as a flavoring for sweet foods, like cookies and ice cream? Peter G Werner (talk) 23:55, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 17:46, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT 1: ... that the "London Cage," a World War II prisoner of war facility commanded by Lt. Col. Alexander Scotland, was beset by allegations of torture?
Template:DYKsuggestion at 15:15, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- I don't see why this is an article. Shouldn't this just be a section of Presidency of Barack Obama, with any important events, whether or not they happened in his first 100 days, having their own articles? --NE2 06:53, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Isn't this just 1600 characters of crystal ball gazing? He's still on day -2 so an article about the first 100 is pure speculation, no matter how well sourced. - Dravecky (talk) 16:47, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- It's not really crystal balling "if the event is notable and almost certain to take place". Lampman (talk) 17:34, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- The article has been nominated for deletion. There is significant support for deletion. I am merely reporting it here. I am not stating an opinion in the AFD or DYK. Chergles (talk) 19:35, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 02:41, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 00:08, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Expansion and dates check out, reference accepted in good faith, but this needs a good grammar polish by a native English speaker before it can be promoted. - Dravecky (talk) 08:09, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
... that three former Wanderers players and Ireland rugby internationals – Tom Crean, Robert Johnston and Frederick Harvey – were all also awarded the Victoria Cross? Crean and Johnston served with the British Army during the Second Boer War while Harvey served with the Canadian Army during the First World War[1] … I know article has not been expanded 5x but I believe this fact is particularly noteworthy and unusual. It has to be more interesting then trivia about wrestlers, surely !!! Djln--Djln (talk) 00:00, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- But perhaps you didn't know that our 5x rule doesn't include lists, and I've never seen a hook approved in the range of 1.1x. Furthermore, it's a 307 character hook, and "Unwritten" Rule/Additional Rule C5 states "No external links in the hook." Art LaPella (talk) 20:01, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Very disappointed . Above answer is a lot of waffle. I really cannot be bothered reading reams and reams of unwritten rules ! Should’nt the criteria for this section be simply that fact might encourage people to read the articles further and that is cross checked as true. It is my opinion that DYK section has been extremely poor lately. I hav’nt been inspired to read an article in this section for months. And now I understand why. It has become the preserve of trainspotters, wrestling fans and pedantics ! I really do not see the point in trying to nominate anything. Djln --Djln (talk) 20:51, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry you feel that way, but the main problem isn't the newly renamed "Additional Rules" (formerly "Unwritten Rules"). It's the Main Page description "Did you know ... From Wikipedia's newest articles" (emphasis added), and our bureaucratic rules only clarify that this isn't a new article. Art LaPella (talk) 21:15, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Djln, quit complaining about how you "can't be bothered" to read the rules. First of all, the rule about expansion is prominently stated in the regular rules, not just the Additional Rules. Secondly, if you're too lazy to read the rules, then you really only have yourself to blame for not getting your article passed; people at DYK didn't force you to ignore the stnadards. Politizer talk/contribs 19:57, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- The whole point is to expand an article or create a new one, thus it's one of Wikipedia's "newest article" as stated on the Main Page. If all you do is add some stuff and come up with a catchy hook, how is it any special or interesting? Grsz11 20:07, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
Template:DYKsuggestion at 23:10, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- - Prose length, hook reference, and hook length all check out fine. Sunderland06 (talk) 00:04, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Not interesting - it's just an error in the National Bridge Inventory database. --NE2 06:50, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length, >1500 characters (prose), and sources verified. Jappalang (talk) 00:57, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ... that Robert Elliott-Cooper lived for 12 more years after Nature described him as "among the oldest of English engineers"? - self nom, new article - Dumelow (talk) 11:25, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length, 1500 characters, and source verified. Jappalang (talk) 14:56, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Article has less than 750 characters of prose (the list doesn't count). Also, the hook has too much technical jargon. Shubinator (talk) 04:48, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Alt1 ... that a expense recorded in the Pipe rolls were for bags and casks for transporting silver pennies around England?
- Alt1 w/ grammar fixed ... that the Pipe rolls record an expense for bags and casks used to transport silver pennies around England? = Jmabel | Talk 04:13, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Great article, generally well sourced, but the rules do say that the hook fact must be directly followed by a reference in the text (I'm talking about the first hook here, which I prefer). Should be an easy fix. Lampman (talk) 14:38, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed. Both hooks should have citations. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:44, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Off-line ref accepted AGF. Lampman (talk) 17:05, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Should that be "an expense ... was", or "expenses ... were"? Art LaPella (talk) 20:01, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Couldn't quite figure that one out either, but as I said: I prefer the first hook. That is a significant historical fact, while the second one is just trivia. Lampman (talk) 21:46, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- I prefer the first hook also, and I wasn't sure on the grammar of the second. I think either of the alternates Art gave are correct, but it's a very odd sentence. I'm fine with folks fixing it as they like. Ealdgyth - Talk 22:31, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Alt1 ... that a expense recorded in the Pipe rolls were for bags and casks for transporting silver pennies around England?
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- Was it her talent that was only recognized 50 years later, and is that fact in the article? Art LaPella (talk) 20:01, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Alt ... that the Australian photographer Olive Cotton captured her childhood friend Max Dupain in Fashion shot, Cronulla Sandhills, and married him in 1937? Xn4 (talk) 21:04, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- The fact is implied in the article. She only became a national "name" with a retrospective at the australian centre for photography in '85, and when the book came out in 1995. I'll summarise it in the introduction. She was "pioneer" because women in their own right were overlooked in the professions in that era but in a way she did make a career of it. Hope this makes sense, otherwise Xn4's alt is very helpful. Julia Rossi (talk) 23:08, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- PS if you use the first, please check my maths, I dated her relative anonymity from 1930s. Otherwise the second is cool. Thanks guys, Julia Rossi (talk) 23:17, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- I added a comma to the hook to explain that better. Art LaPella (talk) 23:20, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks so much, Julia Rossi (talk) 00:08, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Not sure of the protocol on this page re changing assessment tags versus putting a new one at the bottom of discussion, so I'm doing the latter. Looks good now, running with the Alt tagline. hamiltonstone (talk) 02:03, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks so much, Julia Rossi (talk) 00:08, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I added a comma to the hook to explain that better. Art LaPella (talk) 23:20, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- PS if you use the first, please check my maths, I dated her relative anonymity from 1930s. Otherwise the second is cool. Thanks guys, Julia Rossi (talk) 23:17, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- The fact is implied in the article. She only became a national "name" with a retrospective at the australian centre for photography in '85, and when the book came out in 1995. I'll summarise it in the introduction. She was "pioneer" because women in their own right were overlooked in the professions in that era but in a way she did make a career of it. Hope this makes sense, otherwise Xn4's alt is very helpful. Julia Rossi (talk) 23:08, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Note: Byte expansion between 1/12 and 1/16 is slightly less than 5x, however virtually all of the actual prose was written in this time period. --ThaddeusB (talk) 01:16, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- This is actually a composite hook, but all parts of it are sourced. I'm open to discussion. --Rodhullandemu 14:57, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- (alternate hook) ... that noted jurist Harlington Wood, Jr was not only an Abraham Lincoln buff, but actually portrayed him in a play that was favorably reviewed by the New York Times? — New article by Arcayne (talk). Self nom at Arcayne (cast a spell) 06:02, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that consuming the elfin saddle mushroom would result in the harmful formation of monomethylhydrazine, a component of rocket fuel, in your body? Jappalang (talk) 02:32, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Date, length good, offline reference accepted AGF. Shubinator (talk) 04:58, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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- The article was initially created as a stub by Woody, tweaked by several others, and then I expanded it to meet DYK guidelines. The history probably needs a review to determine if anyone else should qualify for DYK credit. David Underdown (talk) 16:15, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Just a comment: I suggest the hook be re-worded slightly as Donaldson's actions where slightly more involved then saving the Afghani interpreter; that was only a part of the action. Cheers, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 01:12, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Alternate hook taking in circumstances and trying to avoid it being ITN candidate. Regards, Woody (talk) 00:14, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- ... that Mark Donaldson became the first recipient of the Victoria Cross for Australia, for his gallant actions under enemy fire in Afghanistan on 2 September 2008?
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- This hook sounds like they were expected to compete in the same events? --74.14.22.41 (talk) 17:37, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Yes, since they are sisters that's what one'd expect. As the article describes, them competing in different sports there was a first. Punkmorten (talk) 20:37, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Why would one expect sisters to compete in the same events? Many siblings are polar-opposites of each others. Then, there are people like Venus and Serena Williams who avoid each other in most tourneys, except Grand Slams. --74.14.16.143 (talk) 02:39, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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Verified. Arsenikk (talk) 12:45, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- I can't read Norwegian so I have to accept the reference in good faith but this claim seems awfully broad given the wide range of disabilities and the long history of Norway. Not one minister in all those year with colorblindness, dyslexia, or some other disability? I guess I'd feel better if either the scope of the hook were narrow or a Norwegian-fluent editor could assure me as to the contents of the source. - Dravecky (talk) 12:59, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- The reference does say that, but as Dravecky says, it's a silly claim to make. Norwegian government ministries go back to 1814, and back then there was both less knowledge of, and less openness about disabilities, so than none of those ministers should have had any kind of disability is just a ridiculous claim. Just because a journalist says it, doesn't make it so. Of the top of my head I remember that Gudmund Hernes had dyslexia, which is considered a disability. I don't think this is a good hook. Lampman (talk) 14:25, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- This source says she was the first to use crutches regularly at work, which sounds a bit more reasonable, though again I doubt the journalist has done the necessary research on 200 years of Norwegian government minsters. Lampman (talk) 14:30, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Perhaps she was the first paraplegic... Punkmorten (talk) 16:03, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thinking about it, I reckon she'd prefer that everyone doesn't focus on her disability all the time. Punkmorten (talk) 19:56, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Perhaps she was the first paraplegic... Punkmorten (talk) 16:03, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- This source says she was the first to use crutches regularly at work, which sounds a bit more reasonable, though again I doubt the journalist has done the necessary research on 200 years of Norwegian government minsters. Lampman (talk) 14:30, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- The reference does say that, but as Dravecky says, it's a silly claim to make. Norwegian government ministries go back to 1814, and back then there was both less knowledge of, and less openness about disabilities, so than none of those ministers should have had any kind of disability is just a ridiculous claim. Just because a journalist says it, doesn't make it so. Of the top of my head I remember that Gudmund Hernes had dyslexia, which is considered a disability. I don't think this is a good hook. Lampman (talk) 14:25, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that before entering politics, Guro Fjellanger studied to be a goldsmith?
- That's better, I added a ref to support the hook fact. Lampman (talk) 14:54, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ref added to support most of this hook. Cannot find ref for "900 years"... Victuallers (talk) 15:19, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Reference to 900 years is here [2]. In the section Old Boundary: "... and for 900 years until 1967, was the boundary between Yorkshire and Derbyshire".
- thanks Victuallers (talk) 16:09, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- According to the prose size tool this one is roughly 80-90 characters too short. I'll ask Raul if he'll expand. - Mgm|(talk) 12:58, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- I've added more than that just now. Johnbod (talk) 15:27, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Improved the image and added an imagemap Victuallers (talk) 23:19, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- (Alt)... that The Agnew Clinic (use cursor for names) depicts Dr. Agnew performing a partial mastectomy watched by students and Thomas Eakins who painted it?
- This particular hook is grammatically ambiguous and I think mentioning the painter is stating the obvious. He had to be watching to paint it. - Mgm|(talk) 13:12, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Please suggest an improvement. As it says ...the painting "depicts" him being watched by the painter..this is quite unusual - usually painters do not depict themselves in paimtings. Can you suggest a way to make it less ambiguous? Victuallers (talk) 22:42, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- It's not usual but it happens as in Las Meninas which would make the alt hook okay (he was there and he painted it, and shows himself in the scene). It doesn't always follow an artist was present in order to paint a scene. Fwiw, Julia Rossi (talk) 06:00, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thx for noticing JR. The imagemap on Las Meninas was also my work (and that was a featured article). I have added "(use cursor)" to the hook ... do you think that is sufficient to get the imagemap noticed? Victuallers (talk) 16:15, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- To my eye yes it's fine as it is – don't know but if its really needed, would it take too many strokes to add "for names" or something like that? congratulations on the FA btw. Good work, Julia Rossi (talk) 22:06, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thx for noticing JR. The imagemap on Las Meninas was also my work (and that was a featured article). I have added "(use cursor)" to the hook ... do you think that is sufficient to get the imagemap noticed? Victuallers (talk) 16:15, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- It's not usual but it happens as in Las Meninas which would make the alt hook okay (he was there and he painted it, and shows himself in the scene). It doesn't always follow an artist was present in order to paint a scene. Fwiw, Julia Rossi (talk) 06:00, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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Uses unreliable sources like imdb.Nrswanson (talk) 20:40, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Just one of them is IMDB.- Mgm|(talk) 13:21, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Yes but fiftiesweb.com isn't a reliable source either.Nrswanson (talk) 23:26, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Is bygone tv a reliable source?
Givesconfirms it here[3]. Julia Rossi (talk) 05:41, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Is bygone tv a reliable source?
- Yes but fiftiesweb.com isn't a reliable source either.Nrswanson (talk) 23:26, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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Uses unreliable sources like imdb and tv.com.Nrswanson (talk) 20:41, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Please note that IMDb is not inherently an unreliable source, as clarified in this debate. Furthermore, an entire article cannot be disqualified simply on the existence of an unreliable source, as long as the hook fact has proper sourcing. In this case the hook fact seems to be supported by a Penguin Books publication, which should earn it a . Second opinions welcome. Lampman (talk) 21:57, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Seems proper argument for hook's verifiability; being slain for that 2-edged sword, imdb is perhaps harsh for an entertainment subject. Julia Rossi (talk) 05:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that Santanichthys is the oldest known member of the Order Characiformes, an order that includes the tetras and the piranha? Shrumster (talk) 06:45, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length and >1500 characters verified. However, the article is woefully not inline-cited. These should be at the least cited in-line for ALT1 hook (which is more interesting): "most primitive known member of the Order Characiformes." and "in the order Characiformes, an order that includes the tetras." Furthermore, the reference to the piranha is not in the article. Jappalang (talk) 02:37, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- Referenced. Shrumster (talk) 04:14, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ... that John Parker, while Archbishop of Tuam, was remembered for the abundance of food and drink served in his palace? - new article, self-nominated by Strawless (talk) 16:06, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- It's unclear in the hook if people remembered the food & drink while Parker was the archbishop and forgot after his successor took office, or people remembered the food & drink served during his time as the archbishop. I'm sure it's the latter, but the hook is a bit ambiguous. Is "while Archbishop of Tuam" associated with "remembered" or "served"? I don't know how to fix the hook, though. --74.14.16.33 (talk) 04:08, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Actually, I thought that was very clear: "Parker... was remembered", and "food and drink served"; "while Archbishop of Tuam" plainly refers to Parker, and not to a verb, as verbs can't become archbishops. But here is another hook which may be more interesting... Strawless (talk) 21:02, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Alternative ... that before John Parker became Archbishop of Tuam and of Dublin, he had been imprisoned by Cromwell's forces as a suspected Royalist spy? Strawless (talk) 21:02, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that Barnet Burns (pictured) toured England from 1835, exhibited his Māori tattoos and recounted his adventures in New Zealand? Monsieur Blanc (talk) 20:11, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Dates, length, and ref check out but sorting the "make" credits for this one will be a bit of a nightmare. Do we want to give this article a day or two to settle down before promoting it? Given the backlog, even it were promoted right now it wouldn't appear on the home page for about a day and a half. Perhaps by then the article will have been filled out and the editing will start to settle down. - Dravecky (talk) 13:33, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
You could nominate both the Sullenberger article and the Flight 1549 article for a double DYK. Anyway, here's an alternative hook:... Chesley Sullenberger, pilot of US Airways Flight 1549 (pictured) which successfully ditched in the Hudson River, also runs an aviation safety consultant company and has worked as an accident investigator for the USAF, NTSB, and FAA? Suggested by Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 03:33, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Comment I think it is a really good hook. Unfortunately, the DYK criteria says "Articles that have appeared on the main page's In the News section are not eligible" to be a DYK nom. Flight 1549 is currently featured on the In The News section. Therefore, I don't think we can have the double hook offered by Matthewedwards. I suggest we remove the Flight 1549 as a DYK nom in the alternative hook, but keep the rest of the alternative hook the same.Terrakyte (talk) 11:04, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Comment Actually, the alternative hook is too long. Maximum length of a hook is 200 characters (with spaces), and this hook is 231 characters long. Terrakyte (talk) 12:58, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- You're right, I'd forgot about those two rules. How about, "... that Chesley Sullenberger, the pilot who successfully ditched Flight 1549 in the Hudson River, also runs an aviation safety consultant company and was an accident investigator for the USAF and NTSB?" Gets the same point across, comes in at 197 characters, and the article about the flight is not the DYK nom. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 16:41, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that Chesley Sullenberger, who piloted US Airways Flight 1549 (pictured) to a safe ditching in the Hudson River, had gained the IQ necessary to join Mensa International at the age of 12? Terrakyte (talk) 13:24, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Comment' Flight 1549 is currently featured on ITN, so can't be bolded in the hook. Mjroots (talk) 17:45, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Yes, I would hold this hook for as long as possible. People who are in the news may have more that is yet to be revealled. He may have hidden notable saintly (or otherwise) qualities which have yet to surface. Victuallers (talk) 12:28, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
ALT 3: ... that C.B. "Sully" Sullenberger, who successfully landed an Airbus A320 in the Hudson River in 2009, operates a safety consulting firm?
Note that there are perhaps hundreds of people who expanded the article. I will notify them for DYK credit if this passes. These people should get credit, not only Jrsamples.
Also, my suggested hook doesn't restate what everyone knows, i.e. that Sully landed the plane. It highlights that he has a safety consulting firm (so he might really be a safety expert who safely landed the plane in the water) Chergles (talk) 19:30, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length, 5x expansion, and sources verified. Jappalang (talk) 01:46, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- The article says "the first Muslim woman to be appointed to any higher judiciary", not just any "first of any highest judiciary of a nation in Asia" as claimed in the hook. --74.14.16.33 (talk) 04:49, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Hook: "first of any highest judiciary of a nation in Asia" <- Article: "She is the first woman judge of a Supreme Court of a nation in India and Asia." Jappalang (talk) 05:27, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Okay. I didn't expect every highest judiciary of nations in Asia is known as "Supreme Court" --74.14.16.33 (talk) 06:47, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Hook: "first of any highest judiciary of a nation in Asia" <- Article: "She is the first woman judge of a Supreme Court of a nation in India and Asia." Jappalang (talk) 05:27, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that "Mental Reactions" which was first published in the avant-garde magazine 291' in 1915 is considered the first example of visual poetry in the United States?
- Perhaps I'm wrong, but "Journal" shouldn't be capitalized, right? If anyone has AWB or some other automated system running, please fix the link and everything pointing there. - Mgm|(talk) 13:08, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Confirmed. Nice hook! - Mgm|(talk) 13:11, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length and >1500 characters verified. Source is assumed to be good (old 1964 paper inaccessible unless by subscription or library visit). Jappalang (talk) 15:06, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Refs, hook and date check out good, but article is 33 letters too short. Arsenikk (talk) 12:54, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Done. Mario1987 13:05, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Good to go. Arsenikk (talk) 18:03, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Wow - did he really? Prices start at about £40/$60 [4]. There must be something more interesting to say about him! Johnbod (talk) 15:34, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Thomas Robbins, the Connecticut Historical Society's first librarian, owned the 385 volume Journal des sçavans, the earliest published scholarly periodical? Rosiestep (talk) 18:42, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Confirmed. - Mgm|(talk) 22:45, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- (Ditch the Harrison pic) ALT: ... that the people of Indiana refused to join the army during the War of 1812, necessitating recruits from Kentucky be brought in to defend the American state? Why not make this a double-DYK hook by starting the "Kentucky in the War of 1812" article (currently a redlink)? --74.14.23.25 (talk) 16:48, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length and >1500 characters verified in both articles. Common source (Mahon's The War of 1812) is accepted in good faith (no on-line availability). Jappalang (talk) 01:12, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- not sure what the preferences are for spelling out a greek letter in this situation. The article name is Alpha-Parinaric acid, but the more common usage is to use α. Sasata (talk) 08:16, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- This is good (5x) expansion, but I suggest getting rid of the skeletal formula in the DYK (too small to discern properly), and rephrasing it as:
- ALT: ... that thanks to its fluorescence, α-parinaric acid has been used to analyze the stability of beer foam?
- I also suggest copyediting the article for excessive use of passive voice. It wasn't an easy read. Xasodfuih (talk) 01:38, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT: ... that the Enron corporation's collapse and other "corporate scandals" inspired "Get Me a Lawyer", the pilot episode of Damages?
- ALT: ... that Australian Rose Byrne and British Anastasia Griffith were both cast as Americans in the Damages pilot episode "Get Me a Lawyer"? —97198 (talk) 06:17, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- or,
... that Australian 1930s social history photographer George Caddy remained unknown until 2007?
::sorry abut the mess, but I just don't get it and still the four brackets. :/ Julia Rossi (talk) 04:17, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- Got it. Julia Rossi (talk) 04:26, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length, >1500 characters, and sources verified. Jappalang (talk) 15:20, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length and >1500 characters verified. Source is readily verifiable, although the citation is pointing at the reference section of the source (website). Jappalang (talk) 15:24, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you for catching the footnote pointer in the citation; I didn't intend that. I fixed the link to point to the beginning of the source article rather than the footnote. The same website has also has a pdf version of this article as printed (allowing the reader to go to the specific referenced page on Debo), but I don't think there is a way to link directly to the pdf.--Arxiloxos (talk) 22:10, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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- "involved"? --74.14.23.25 (talk) 16:54, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- If "involved" isn't specific enough, how about ALT1: ... that singer Cyndi Lauper was featured in the storylines behind the main events of World Wrestling Federation shows The Brawl to End it All and The War to Settle the Score? GaryColemanFan (talk) 18:24, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- My original idea was longer, but more specific. ALT2: ... that World Wrestling Federation manager Lou Albano's participation in Cyndi Lauper's "Girls Just Want to Have Fun" music video initiated the main storylines behind WWF events The Brawl to End it All and The War to Settle the Score? GaryColemanFan (talk) 18:24, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT3:... that the storylines in the main events of World Wrestling Federation shows The Brawl to End it All and The War to Settle the Score began with Cyndi Lauper's "Girls Just Want to Have Fun" music video? (This is a little too long, but it's a double-DYK hook! Should be okay, eh?) --74.14.17.171 (talk) 15:11, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- 4 ... that wrestling manager Lou Albano's part in a Cyndi Lauper music video inspired storylines for World Wrestling Federation shows The Brawl to End it All and The War to Settle the Score? Julia Rossi (talk) 21:14, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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Offline reference accepted on good faith. - K. Lásztocskatalk 14:41, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Interesting article. However, there is no mention of the Walking Purchase being fraudulent in either Teedyuscung or Walking Purchase articles (land swindle, yes; under investigation, yes). I would simplify the hook by dropping the dangling arson comment. Maybe something like:
- ... that Teedyuscung, known as the King of the Delawares, lost much of his territory to colonial Pennsylvania in the Walking Purchase and later sought retribution for the massive land loss? -Mitico (talk) 16:04, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- the changes are fine with me. Thanks! Dincher (talk) 20:55, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that the book La Question by Henri Alleg about torture by French paratroopers in the Algerian War contained a foreword by Jean-Paul Sartre? - Mgm|(talk) 22:56, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the book La Question by Henri Alleg describes the torture he claims to have subjected to by French paratroopers in the Algerian War? - Mgm|(talk) 22:56, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
"Unwritten" Rule C1 says "No redlinks in the hook." Art LaPella (talk) 00:07, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- La redlink est turnée bleue. :) --74.14.17.171 (talk) 15:17, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- This fact comes from inline citation #133, Sadao's chapter in the Cambridge History of China: Ch'in and Han (1986), page 588.--Pericles of AthensTalk 21:09, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the earliest Roman glass found in China comes from a 1st century BC tomb in Guangzhou, dated to the Han Dynasty? Pericles of AthensTalk 00:44, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the nomadic Xiongnu leader Huhanye 呼韓邪 received 200,000 cash coins (pictured) when he submitted in 51 BC as a tributary vassal to the Han Dynasty of China? Pericles of AthensTalk 00:44, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- I just shortened it a bit; is it usable now?--Pericles of AthensTalk 10:05, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Well, no; it's 290 characters now. Click my User:Art LaPella/Long hook link for more explanation of our hook length rule. Art LaPella (talk) 02:19, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Ah, my bad. To get it under 200 characters, I took out everything besides the mentioning of 200,000 cash coins, since that is the most relevant item in regards to the picture I posted to the right.--Pericles of AthensTalk 11:39, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Well, no; it's 290 characters now. Click my User:Art LaPella/Long hook link for more explanation of our hook length rule. Art LaPella (talk) 02:19, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- I just shortened it a bit; is it usable now?--Pericles of AthensTalk 10:05, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT4 (a slight tweak of the original): ... that from 118 BC to 5 CE, the Han Chinese government minted 28,000,000,000 wushu coins (pictured), an average of 220,000,000 coins a year? --74.14.17.171 (talk) 15:25, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Not bad, but that's not the one that needs to be shortened; the sentence mentioning the Xiongnu Shanyu Huhanye and the gifts the Han court granted him is the one that needs to be shortened still, I believe.--Pericles of AthensTalk 23:23, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- If "Napa" links to Napa County, which redirects to Napa County, California, then "Sonoma" should link to Sonoma County, California for consistency.--74.14.23.25 (talk) 17:02, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- My bad! I didn't realize there was an article on Napa County wine created. They both should link to the wine region rather than the political entity. So it is fixed now. 17:13, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- This hook is not accurate. Fitzpatrick was not the athletic director, and he earned less than a U.S. Senator. He was the athletic trainer and track coach, and it was he and two others combined who earned more than a Senator. The artcle is a work in process. I'll propose a hook in a couple days when the article is ready.Cbl62 (talk) 06:09, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- Articles with {{construction}} should not be nominated. Be patient, Red tiger.--74.14.23.25 (talk) 17:06, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- alt ... that Keene Fitzpatrick (pictured) invented modern pole-vaulting technique, coached five Olympic gold medalists, and trained Michigan's "Point-a-Minute" football teams from 1901 to 1905? Cbl62 (talk) 06:51, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- ... that Bulgaria is depicted by squat toilets in the artwork, Entropa, commissioned by the Czech Republic for its EU presidency? Created by a lot of users. Jolly Ω Janner 19:32, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- I nominated this at ITN here but I don't think they'll take it. Politizer talk/contribs 00:47, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- Didn't notice that Jolly Janner had already nom'ed this; moving my nom of it down to this section. Politizer talk/contribs 00:49, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT by Politizer ... that the controversial sculpture Entropa, unveiled in Brussels on January 13, 2009, depicts Bulgaria as a series of squat toilets (example pictured)? Lots of possible hooks here, I just used the Bulgaria example because it seems to be the one to have generated the most outcry. Also, being a current event, this article is being edited very heavily so we might need to add more people to the credits later, or whatever. at 00:47, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- Would be great if Wikipedians in Brussels can take a good photo of those "toilets" for this hook. --74.14.23.25 (talk) 16:17, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- Agreed. The "In pictures" BBC article linked in the references section has a picture, but of course that doesn't do us much good. 129.237.62.53 (talk) 16:36, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- As already noted at Talk:Entropa, I took pictures during the inauguration on January 15, including detailed pictures of the various member states. I am not sure whether the quality is sufficient, but I will try to upload Bulgaria (under fair-use again) if this is requested. Blahma (talk) 01:36, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- So here's the picture: File:Entropa-Bulgaria.jpg. I release my photographer's copyright under cc-by-sa, so that anyone of you who can volunteer, please feel free to create a proper derivation that would suit for the hook picture. Blahma (talk) 01:46, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- The picture looks great, as long as someone can ensure that we can use it here (ie, that it doesn't count as a derivative work). If we are free to use it, someone will probably want to crop it so that Bulgaria will show up bigger (since DYK images get scaled down to 100x100px). Politizer talk/contribs 06:07, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Recently, at Commons, someone replied to my question and gave an opinion that the photo is a derivative work and as such cannot be used at Commons but well in (English) Wikipedia as fair use. However, I now read at the top of this page, that fair use should not appear at DYN. That's a pity, since then probably no part of the sculpture may be used, and without it there is probably not much to show and stay relevant (or perhaps a general picture of a squat toilet would do and then the rest is shown in the article itself?). Blahma (talk) 16:58, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, it sucks. You can't even show the picture on this page, whilst we're discussing it, despite other media using the pictures. The ridiculous thing is with the license you were using as well, is that it's the same for buildings built 70 years ago. Thankfully, everybody ignores the rule on buildings. Jolly Ω Janner 20:07, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Blahma's suggestion saved the day...I think it would be fine to use some other squatty potty as the image. I added one at random from the squat toilet article...if there's a different one you guys prefer, feel free to swap. Politizer talk/contribs 20:38, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- OK, what needs to be done now, when it seems that we have identified a usable picture and also have the text? It would be nice to see thisis DYN soon. Blahma (talk) 15:33, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- There's not really anything we can do other than wait for someone to review it (which might take several days). I had hoped to get it on ITN so it would be more timely, but they don't seem to think it's notable enough (I disagree with them, but the only arguments I would have been able to bring up were WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS). Politizer talk/contribs 18:46, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- length, refs, hook all check out. V. interesting story, shame it wasn't ITN. hamiltonstone (talk) 02:18, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Shame indeed. Oh well. Thanks for reviewing! Politizer talk/contribs 03:00, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Is that for both of the hooks? If you haven't reviewed your own, then I don't mind reviewing it. Jolly Ω Janner 16:48, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Shame indeed. Oh well. Thanks for reviewing! Politizer talk/contribs 03:00, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT: ... that the 13th-century French romance Palamedes describes the adventures of the fathers of King Arthur and Knights of the Round Table? --Redtigerxyz Talk 05:26, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- This one is better.--Cúchullain t/c 19:54, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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I think I can do 5x expansions on parinaric acid and conjugated fatty acid in the next couple of days and make this a triple hook, if that's ok.Sasata (talk) 22:39, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- Never mind, the α-parinaric acid article has a fact cool enough for its own DYK. My 1st multihooker will have to wait... Sasata (talk) 08:05, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Fabbo article, interesting, beautifully laid out. Refs, age, and hook+ref check out. One possible suggestion for an alt hook: that The Visitors is the only opera created by Mexican composer Carlos Chávez? (or any other config that gets his nationality into the hook)hamiltonstone (talk) 22:58, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- Using the word 'created' implies he did all the work when he only did the musical score. - Mgm|(talk) 11:26, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that The Visitors is the only opera Mexican composer Carlos Chávez ever scored? = Mgm|(talk) 11:26, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that The Visitors, the only opera composed by the Mexican Carlos Chávez, had a libretto by Chester Kallman? - Kallman is the better-known figure, I'd say. Johnbod (talk) 17:31, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT: that
in 1985,Harold Snyder founded the first generic pharmaceutical company to be listed on the New York Stock Exchange? --74.14.23.25 (talk) 19:22, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- I have also tried to recast the hook, but this version makes it sound that the firm was founded in 1985, not listed on the NYSE in 1985. Alansohn (talk) 21:02, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- Removed "in 1985". Keeping it simple. BTW, when was Biocraft listed? You may want to check the article for typos. --74.14.23.25 (talk) 13:39, 15 January 2009 (UTC) I threw in a {CN}. Pls fix the year of listing on the NY exchange. --74.14.17.171 (talk) 15:35, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Typo was fixed. Company was founded in 1964 and listed on NYSE in 1985. Alansohn (talk) 19:52, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT: that
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- Who are Anelli and Spartz? --74.14.23.25 (talk) 13:50, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- Both webmasters for highly popular Harry Potter fan sites (The Leaky Cauldron for Anelli and MuggleNet for Spartz)...I wasn't sure how/whether to include that in the hook. Karanacs (talk) 14:36, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that Melissa Anelli and Emerson Spartz, webmasters for Harry Potter fansites, were the only Americans invited to Edinburgh to interview J.K. Rowling the day after the Half-Blood Prince was released? --74.14.23.25 (talk) 16:37, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- I'm open to alternative suggestions for the wording. - Mgm|(talk) 12:58, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- External reference accepted in Good Faith. Length and statement verified. Good article, though I'm not exactly good at rewording sentences; I'll leave that to someone else. Cheers. Imperat§ r(Talk) 13:27, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that, in order to address the quality of surgeons in the Confederate military, Samuel P. Moore (pictured) set up an examination system to identify unqualified doctors who would be dismissed if they failed a second test? --74.14.23.25 (talk) 19:33, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2:... that American soldiers and sailors did not have access to dental service till Confederate Surgeon General Samuel P. Moore (pictured) brought in the first dentists at military hospitals during the Civil War? -- I find this more interesting, but we need a footnote for this in the article. --74.14.23.25 (talk) 19:42, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- I like ALT2 a lot. I've asked the article creator to provide the ref the anon asked for. - Mgm|(talk) 21:21, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- Will that do? Just to be clear on the first hooks, I used "doctor" and "surgeon" interchangably, so I didn't repeat surgeons many, many times. Sorry for the confusion. Kresock (talk) 02:03, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Article length verified, but the link appears to be faulty; I get a "Your session has timed out. Please start again." Also, the hook needs to be catchier and more concise;
it well passes the 200 character limit for hooks at 256.Cheers. Imperat§ r(Talk) 13:30, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- Article length verified, but the link appears to be faulty; I get a "Your session has timed out. Please start again." Also, the hook needs to be catchier and more concise;
- Even though the hook is at 185, still needs to be thoroughly revised. Cheers. Imperat§ r(Talk) 13:32, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- The broken inline citation in the article has been revised. Thanks, Easchiff(talk) 07:35, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that Barbara McLean, a "revered" film editor and unusually influential woman at the 20th Century Fox film studio, received an unsurpassed seven Academy Award nominations? Easchiff(talk) 07:35, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ""revered" and "unusually influential" ?? Too PEACOCK-ish?
- ALT2: ... that Barbara McLean has received the most nominations for film editing in the history of the Academy Awards? (You may want to mention this (with a ref, of course) in the Academy Award for Film Editing article.) --74.14.23.25 (talk) 17:20, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks for your good ideas. Peacock point taken. The statistics of the editing award are cited in the article, so we're OK there. Easchiff(talk) 00:57, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2': ... that Barbara McLean's seven nominations for the Academy Award for Film Editing are unsurpassed in the history of the Academy Awards? (Two other editors are tied with her.) Easchiff(talk) 00:57, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- ""revered" and "unusually influential" ?? Too PEACOCK-ish?
- ALT3: ... that the film All About Eve (1950) gained Barbara McLean a record seventh nomination for the Academy Award for Film Editing, and that this record remains unbroken? Easchiff(talk) 14:01, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Article+hook+references check out. Cheers. Imperat§ r(Talk) 14:21, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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99% of the info from the hook comes from the article on the bacteria, not from the guy's bio. Xasodfuih (talk) 23:25, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Do you have some advice on what else to mention about him instead? This is what he is famous for, discovering this bacteria, it was a scientific breakthrough with far reaching ramifications particularly with PCR. The info in the hook is all covered in the Career section, that doesn't count? --MPerel 00:34, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I took the time to read the source [5], and it's indeed all mentioned in one article so I guess it's fine to promote this as DYK given that the article on the bacteria is unlikely to grow by 5x at this point. Let's give microbiology more coverage on the main page :) Xasodfuih (talk) 00:55, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Hold up.... the hook is 209 characters. Can someone trim it? Maybe by removing "in hot springs at Yellowstone," but even then it'll still be a bit clunky for my tastes. How about:
- ALT1: ... that Thomas D. Brock discovered the extremophile Thermus aquaticus (pictured), which is the source of the enzyme Taq DNA polymerase used in PCR? Politizer talk/contribs 19:21, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- The alt hook you have proposed leaves out the most important information. The DYK is 193 characters when you remove "that" and "(pictured)", two of the DYK-defined words that are not part of the DYK submission. When you leave "that" in, it is 198 chars. Adding "(pictured)", a parenthetical reference to the image that is not part of the informative content of the DYK, brings it to over 209 chars. The DYK can remain intact by removing the term "pictured" and if necessary, the image itself. It is acceptable to use the original DYK as the parenthetical is not technically part of the DYK and there is some flexibility here in regards to character count. The fact that the extremophile lives at greater than 70°C in hot springs at Yellowstone is essential information in the DYK, as this was the central thrust of Brock's scientific discovery; up until that point, most organisms were not thought to live anywhere on Earth at that temperature. And stating that this discovery was made in Yellowstone, a national park, is also important, as it was eventually used in private industry (PCR) by Kary Mullis, a subject of contention today by the NPS. Your alt hook effectively removes this overview of the most important facts related to Brock's discovery and glosses over it without regard to its necessity. I should also point out that you were recently involved in a dispute with me over character limits on Wikipedia_talk:Did_you_know#Character_limit and you are not a neutral party in this DYK, so I ask that you recuse yourself here due to your conflict with me over character limits on the talk page. Viriditas (talk) 23:03, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Well…there may be some pointiness going on, but, my dear co-submitter, you did sort of read the riot act over the rules not being kept rigidly enough! This is called karma. Let’s take our medicine and conform to the letter, no need for recusals. --MPerel 03:10, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
- The alt hook you have proposed leaves out the most important information. The DYK is 193 characters when you remove "that" and "(pictured)", two of the DYK-defined words that are not part of the DYK submission. When you leave "that" in, it is 198 chars. Adding "(pictured)", a parenthetical reference to the image that is not part of the informative content of the DYK, brings it to over 209 chars. The DYK can remain intact by removing the term "pictured" and if necessary, the image itself. It is acceptable to use the original DYK as the parenthetical is not technically part of the DYK and there is some flexibility here in regards to character count. The fact that the extremophile lives at greater than 70°C in hot springs at Yellowstone is essential information in the DYK, as this was the central thrust of Brock's scientific discovery; up until that point, most organisms were not thought to live anywhere on Earth at that temperature. And stating that this discovery was made in Yellowstone, a national park, is also important, as it was eventually used in private industry (PCR) by Kary Mullis, a subject of contention today by the NPS. Your alt hook effectively removes this overview of the most important facts related to Brock's discovery and glosses over it without regard to its necessity. I should also point out that you were recently involved in a dispute with me over character limits on Wikipedia_talk:Did_you_know#Character_limit and you are not a neutral party in this DYK, so I ask that you recuse yourself here due to your conflict with me over character limits on the talk page. Viriditas (talk) 23:03, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that Thermus aquaticus, an extremophile living at greater than 70 °C, was discovered by Thomas D. Brock in hot springs at Yellowstone, and is the source of the enzyme Taq DNA polymerase used in PCR?
- Simple resolution, just take out the superfluous word "(pictured)" as shown in ALT2 above if it's a problem, and leave in the rest. There's no need to remove all the essential parts. : ) Or...even better yet, the following (198 chars) which ends up keeping all the essential parts, leaving in the word "(pictured)" and putting the biographical subject at the front of the sentence:
- ALT3: ... that Thomas D. Brock discovered Thermus aquaticus (pictured), an extremophile living at greater than 70 °C in hot springs at Yellowstone, and the source of the enzyme Taq DNA polymerase used in PCR? --MPerel 02:01, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Exceeds 5x expansion. Date verified. Offline hook's ref accepted in good faith. Rosiestep (talk) 22:51, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ... that the Jastrzebie-Zdroj 1980 strikes forced the government of the People's Republic of Poland to sign the last of three agreements establishing the Solidarity trade union? self nom by Tymek (talk) 01:51, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ... that LPGA golfer Danielle Ammaccapane is the mother of child actor Laura Ann Kesling, who made her film debut in Adam Sandler's 2008 film Bedtime Stories? - alternate hook - Peregrine Fisher (talk) (contribs) 21:02, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Slightly over with 204 characters (but acceptable), >1500 characters verified, and source (subscription) accepted in good faith. Jappalang (talk) 01:37, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Someone is bound to trip over this one all the important words in this hook start with ho-. Hostel, hotel, hospital. Using those in quick succession with the word hosts makes it a tongue twister. Perhaps an alternative phrasing that gives the same fact would be better. - Mgm|(talk) 22:38, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- I thought it was deliberate. Anyways, where's the hostel? A letter 's' is missing from the hook? --74.14.23.25 (talk) 17:31, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Former redirect. Length, date, hook's ref verified. Rosiestep (talk) 22:59, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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"If"? Per DYK rules, we should only use definite facts.
- ALT: ... that, according to theories by Dennis MacDonald, the earliest books of the New Testament are responses to the Homeric Epics, thus "nearly everything written on early Christian narrative is flawed"? (Or something like this, but shorter.) --74.14.23.25 (talk) 17:37, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- It's a hypothesis, a controversial one. but I could live with your wording.---Balloonman PoppaBalloonCSD Survey Results 00:49, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Confirmed. Size, age and refs all check out. - Mgm|(talk) 08:40, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
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- May I suggest that you include a reference to the team that actually won the game, since the hook is for an article about the game between the teams rather than one specifically about VT. For instance:
- "... that, in the 1998 Gator Bowl, North Carolina beat Virginia Tech, 42–3, in what was that college football team's worst loss since a 45–0 shutout in 1983?"
- Or something to that effect... Just a thought. Strikehold (talk) 08:37, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- how about ... that a 42–3 win by the North Carolina Tar Heels in the 1998 Gator Bowl was the worst loss for the Virginia Tech Hokies college football team since a 45–0 shutout in 1983? JKBrooks85 (talk) 22:57, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- That sounds good to me. Strikehold (talk) 23:49, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
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- major (United Kingdom) (piped) might be a better link in the hook. David Underdown (talk) 15:14, 14 January 2009 (UTC)
- Uses unreliable sources like imdb.Nrswanson (talk) 02:14, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Uses unreliable sources like imdb.Nrswanson (talk) 02:16, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- This has been discussed before; IMDb is not inherently unreliable, only when it comes to trivia. Anyway, the following hook is supported by The New York Times:
- ALT:... that Brave Eagle, a 1955–1956 CBS western, was unusual for its time in taking the perspective of the Native American? Lampman (talk) 10:46, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- This has been discussed before; IMDb is not inherently unreliable, only when it comes to trivia. Anyway, the following hook is supported by The New York Times:
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- Length, date, hook's ref verified. Rosiestep (talk) 23:12, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ... that following TV3's axing of Night Shift the model Michelle Doherty was said to have been left feeling "completely bewildered, and absolutely gutted"? (new article, self-nom) --➨♀♂Candlewicke ST # :) 05:10, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Length, date, and reference verified. Cunard (talk) 05:00, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length, >1500 characters and sources verified. However, I suggest that the article be cleaned up, so that uses of "peshwa" is clearly defined; right now, the term is so freely thrown about that no one can discern if it is supposed to be a title, class, or race. Jappalang (talk) 01:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that during the Battle of Aachen, despite his wounds, Captain Bobbie E. Brown knocked out three German pillboxes and led his men into the attack, thereby receiving the Medal of Honor?
- Can't you find some other interesting fact in the battle? This hook should normally have Bobbie E. Brown as the main article, except that article is old. Xasodfuih (talk) 14:11, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the 450 aircraft which conducted the opening aerial bombardment during the Battle of Aachen failed to hit a single German pillbox? (ref #63) JonCatalán(Talk) 17:35, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Can't you find some other interesting fact in the battle? This hook should normally have Bobbie E. Brown as the main article, except that article is old. Xasodfuih (talk) 14:11, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that during the Battle of Aachen, despite his wounds, Captain Bobbie E. Brown knocked out three German pillboxes and led his men into the attack, thereby receiving the Medal of Honor?
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- Length, >1500 characters, DSC-source verified, NYT is subscription article verified on good faith. Jappalang (talk) 01:19, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Can two people both claim authorship for the same DYK? (This isn't a writer + nom.) Xasodfuih (talk) 01:45, 20 January 2009 (UTC)
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- Length and dates okay but there is no source directly cited on the hook fact sentence. (Reference at end of paragraph is offline so I can't check to see if it applies directly to this sentence as well.) - Dravecky (talk) 08:36, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I don't care, use it or don't. --IvoShandor (talk) 12:15, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- The reference cited at the end of the paragraph (the Kennedy book) applies to the whole paragraph. --Elkman (Elkspeak) 12:51, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ... that when NBC pulled "Steve Burdick", an AIDS-themed episode of the medical drama Lifestories, gay and AIDS activists accused the network of fearing advertiser backlash?
- ALT: ... that "Steve Burdick", an AIDS-themed episode of the NBC medical drama Lifestories, has been called "an indictment of commercial television for its skittishness in dealing with the AIDS crisis"? new article, self-nom, moved to article space today. Otto4711 (talk) 23:07, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
- No, the episode is not the indictment.--Wetman (talk) 00:01, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
- The source says in its entirety, in referring to this episode of the series, "This 'Lifestories' is as much an indictment of commercial television for its skittishness in dealing with the AIDS crisis as it is a show about AIDS patients." If you can explain how that source does not support the hook, please do. Otherwise maybe random comments would be better left untyped. Otto4711 (talk) 01:53, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
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- I edited the above to read the doubtless intended "built for speeds"--Wetman (talk) 00:03, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
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- The article is too short by at least 200 characters, the hook only partially represents his situation as a driver in 1967, and unless his parents were time travellers from the 1980s there is no way he was named for the serial killer (and likewise the 1946-born serial killer of the same name could not have been named for the driver). With expansion, a better hook, and a good reference then this could perhaps be saved. (The dates check out okay.) - Dravecky (talk) 12:46, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
- Rephrased the hook. I'm not a native speaker of English and thought that namesake just means "has the same name" (as the German: Namensvetter), and does not claim "was named after". I stand corrected. Avoiding confusion and having a proper article to link to (eg from Günter Klass, see Jan 8 below) was my motivation to create the entry, listing at DYK should raise awareness not to link to the killer when the racer is meant. Expanded the article by well over 200 characters, too. -- Matthead Discuß 13:33, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
- I've added a hatnote to the serial killer's article that should help direct people looking for the race driver to the correct article. Length is good now but the hook still needs to be reworded for clarity. I can't think of one at this moment but perhaps some other enterprising editor can phrase this better. - Dravecky (talk) 20:26, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
- Hook rephrased. -- Matthead Discuß 04:40, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- a date of birth and disambiguation hatnote is not a great hook. His Jaguar and GT40 successes plus Ferrari works drives would be more interesting.Autodidactyl (talk) 13:53, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Hook rephrased. -- Matthead Discuß 04:40, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- I've added a hatnote to the serial killer's article that should help direct people looking for the race driver to the correct article. Length is good now but the hook still needs to be reworded for clarity. I can't think of one at this moment but perhaps some other enterprising editor can phrase this better. - Dravecky (talk) 20:26, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
- Rephrased the hook. I'm not a native speaker of English and thought that namesake just means "has the same name" (as the German: Namensvetter), and does not claim "was named after". I stand corrected. Avoiding confusion and having a proper article to link to (eg from Günter Klass, see Jan 8 below) was my motivation to create the entry, listing at DYK should raise awareness not to link to the killer when the racer is meant. Expanded the article by well over 200 characters, too. -- Matthead Discuß 13:33, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT HOOK: ... that British race driver Peter Sutcliffe was a Scuderia Ferrari factory driver in 1967?
- ALT HOOK: ... that British sport car driver Peter Sutcliffe, who won the 'Grand Prix de Paris' and the 'Pietermaritzburg 3 hours', raced in Aston Martins, Jaguar D-Types, Shelby Cobra Daytonas, Ford GT40s and works Ferrari 330P4s? Autodidactyl (talk) 14:54, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Hmm, Grand Prix de Paris covers the equestrian event only. While he drove several interesting cars and races, I'd say that getting hired by the Ferrari factory team for Le Mans and the championship decider is the highlight of his (and almost any) career. That he seemingly retired after that kind of underlines this. And, as the serial killer seems to be very famous in the UK, I'd like to mention him for clarity in one form or the other. -- Matthead Discuß 11:14, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- Tightened/cleaned erroneous/pointless links.
- It is surely inappropriate, unnecessary and somewhat tasteless to define a person/personality/hero of one generation via a shared name with a criminal of the next generation. He was a successful driver in his own right. Autodidactyl (talk) 15:39, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- ps. To avoid PoV and Original research, we should rely on reputable sources rather than impute reasons for his retirement.
- I've reworded the final sentences, just stating that he did not race anymore, plus a mention of the death toll of the time. As for the hook, I'm running out of ideas. How about mentioning that he entered only one Formula race? -- Matthead Discuß 09:35, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Hmm, Grand Prix de Paris covers the equestrian event only. While he drove several interesting cars and races, I'd say that getting hired by the Ferrari factory team for Le Mans and the championship decider is the highlight of his (and almost any) career. That he seemingly retired after that kind of underlines this. And, as the serial killer seems to be very famous in the UK, I'd like to mention him for clarity in one form or the other. -- Matthead Discuß 11:14, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT HOOK: ... that British sport car driver Peter Sutcliffe, who won the 'Grand Prix de Paris' and the 'Pietermaritzburg 3 hours', raced in Aston Martins, Jaguar D-Types, Shelby Cobra Daytonas, Ford GT40s and works Ferrari 330P4s? Autodidactyl (talk) 14:54, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ... that there have been five head coaches for the Phoenix Coyotes, an American professional ice hockey team based in Glendale, Arizona? 5x expansion, self-nom by -- SRE.K.A
nnoyomous.L.24 review me 02:16, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
- I was about to propose a hook about every (non-interim) Coyote coach before the Gretzky era had a winning record, based on Win% listed in the article. But then, how do you calculate Win%? The W's are less than half of GC's, so they should all have sub-.500 — losing! — records. Pls check your stats. Thx. --74.14.17.171 (talk) 16:11, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- The alternate hook you suggested cannot be a hook because it is not on the prose. -- SRE.K.A
nnoyomous.L.24 review me 07:00, 17 January 2009 (UTC)- Just fix the stats in the table. Whether you want the (corrected) info added into the prose is up to you. --74.13.129.143 (talk) 22:29, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
- The alternate hook you suggested cannot be a hook because it is not on the prose. -- SRE.K.A
- Why is the number 5 interesting? --74.14.17.171 (talk) 15:42, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Nothing. What's interesting is that...holy ****. Laugh out loud, it has to be interesting doesn't it? Alternate hook down below.
ALT1 ... that Bob Francis is the only Phoenix Coyotes head coach to have won the Jack Adams Award, having won it in the 2001–02 NHL season? -- SRE.K.Annoyomous.L.24 review me 08:55, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- If you want the focus on Bob Francis, you may want to fix up his stats. Winning only 165 out of 390 games coached is a losing record and the Win% cannot be above .500 as shown in the table. --74.14.16.33 (talk) 03:59, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I can see you're not familiar with hockey statistics. Read winning percentage. You will see that the Win% is the number of points divided the most possible points the coach can get. -- SRE.K.A
nnoyomous.L.24 review me 04:12, 19 January 2009 (UTC)- You may want to explain this in your article, perhaps as a footnote to your table, as I'm sure I am not the only one who doesn't understand this. (And frankly, it's wrong! I love the line "The name "winning percentage" is actually a misnomer..." in the Winning percentage article. Thanks for the link.) --74.14.16.33 (talk) 06:14, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- The readers could just easily click on the wikilink, so doesn't really make a difference. -- SRE.K.A
nnoyomous.L.24 review me 06:17, 19 January 2009 (UTC)- Took me a while to find the link, but yes, it's there... --74.14.16.33 (talk) 06:27, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Since I can't contact you in talk because of you using public computers, wouldn't it be nice if you make a account, and record the great things you have done for WP:DYK? -- SRE.K.A
nnoyomous.L.24 review me 09:43, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Since I can't contact you in talk because of you using public computers, wouldn't it be nice if you make a account, and record the great things you have done for WP:DYK? -- SRE.K.A
- Took me a while to find the link, but yes, it's there... --74.14.16.33 (talk) 06:27, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- The readers could just easily click on the wikilink, so doesn't really make a difference. -- SRE.K.A
- You may want to explain this in your article, perhaps as a footnote to your table, as I'm sure I am not the only one who doesn't understand this. (And frankly, it's wrong! I love the line "The name "winning percentage" is actually a misnomer..." in the Winning percentage article. Thanks for the link.) --74.14.16.33 (talk) 06:14, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- It would be very nice if the stats in the Bob Francis article were in table format instead of the far less attractive nowiki plain text dump format. - Dravecky (talk) 10:04, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- The hook isn't about Bob Francis, it's about the List of Phoenix Coyotes head coaches. Also, all NHL player and goaltender article have their Career statistics in nowiki plain mode. Now, can we try to get this hook on T:DYK? -- SRE.K.A
nnoyomous.L.24 review me 18:47, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- The hook isn't about Bob Francis, it's about the List of Phoenix Coyotes head coaches. Also, all NHL player and goaltender article have their Career statistics in nowiki plain mode. Now, can we try to get this hook on T:DYK? -- SRE.K.A
- I can see you're not familiar with hockey statistics. Read winning percentage. You will see that the Win% is the number of points divided the most possible points the coach can get. -- SRE.K.A
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- According to the article he studied gold deposits specifically. That is hardly a comprehensive study of placers. Please clarify. - Mgm|(talk) 13:13, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
- I was referring to this material, found in Ref#1: "During the next two years (1922-1923) he was engaged in the preparation of Bulletin 92, Gold placers of California, which encompassed all economic occurrences of alluvial gold deposits known in the entire state. This was the first comprehensive study of Tertiary fluvial (river) placers, dredge fields, and dry placers on a statewide basis." Rosiestep (talk) 16:37, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Californian Charles Scott Haley was an expert in the field of placer gold deposits? Rosiestep (talk) 19:19, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2:... that Charles Scott Haley conducted the first comprehensive study of placer gold deposits in California? --74.14.17.171 (talk) 15:45, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that Nigel Hamilton's biography of Field Marshal Bernard Montgomery won one of the most prestigious British literary awards, the Whitbread Award, for best biography? Ip208man (talk) 20:29, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1. The orignal hook seem credible enough, but you're using IMDB for the (sub)fact that Patrick Dempsey played JKF. I'm 99.99% sure that it's true, but people here hate IMDB for some reason. Xasodfuih (talk) 00:01, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Good point and thanks for that information. I went ahead and added an additional reference, from the production company (Hearst Entertainment), about the movie which gives further detail on the actors in the movie. It just reinforces Dempsey was the actor who portrayed JFK so any IMDB problem can be cleared up. Cheers! Ip208man (talk) 05:04, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1. The orignal hook seem credible enough, but you're using IMDB for the (sub)fact that Patrick Dempsey played JKF. I'm 99.99% sure that it's true, but people here hate IMDB for some reason. Xasodfuih (talk) 00:01, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Nigel Hamilton's biography of Field Marshal Bernard Montgomery won one of the most prestigious British literary awards, the Whitbread Award, for best biography? Ip208man (talk) 20:29, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1 (phrasing): ... that while in the service of the Austro-Hungarian Army during World War I, Polish Legionnaires decided to mutiny, fighting their former master at the Battle of Rarańcza?
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- Alternative hook 1: ... that William K. Jones, awarded the Navy Cross and the Silver Star for valor at Tarawa and Saipan, was the youngest commander of a U.S. Marine Corps battalion during World War II?
- Alternative hook 2: ... that William K. Jones, awarded the Navy Cross and the Silver Star for valor at Tarawa and Saipan, published under the pseudonym "Base Plate McGurk" after the war? — ERcheck (talk) 03:48, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1 (phrasing): ... that Kanthirava Narasaraja I was the first ruler in the Kingdom of Mysore to create symbols associated with Mysore royalty, such as the coins (Kanthiraya) that he named after himself? Jappalang (talk) 05:44, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I'm concerned that this article relies entirely on one source. - Dravecky (talk) 07:34, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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- If you want the attention on Brian Hill, pls check his stats in the table on this page. Winning 18 out of 36 playoff games is not going to get a Win% of anything but .500. Winning 191 out of 295 in the regular seasons should get .647, instead of .632 (unless my calculator is broken). While you're at it, pls check all the numbers in the table. Thx. --74.14.17.171 (talk) 16:01, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
- Ah yes; fixed. Gary King (talk) 05:36, 17 January 2009 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that as an explanation for the collection of a non-native specimen of the Indo-Pacific sea urchin Diadema setosum off the coast of Turkey in 2006, it has been proposed that an aquarist might have released the specimen? Shrumster (talk) 22:24, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
- initial wording in this one seems awkward, suggest using verbs instead, e.g.
- ... that to explain a non-native specimen of the Indo-Pacific sea urchin Diadema setosum collected off the coast of Turkey in 2006, it was proposed that an aquarist might have released the specimen? – Julia Rossi (talk) 11:41, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- The source, www.jpgr.co.uk/r6145.html, is a fansite run by Graham Calkin. This has to be explained as to how it can qualify as a reliable site via Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2008-06-26/Dispatches. Jappalang (talk) 03:52, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- I don't know whether it counts as reliable or not, but it's been used in many other articles on Beatles songs (both as a group and solo). If I can find anything to replace it I will, but there seems to be silent in-project (WP:TB) consensus that it's reliable. Dendodge TalkContribs 10:41, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Using their FAs as their "best articles", The Beatles FAs were passed in 2004–5. The standards of FAC were much different then, the Dispatch listed above is a guideline for current FACs. Generally, the reliability of a site is determined by whether reliable sources have found the site to be reliable or an expert. Jappalang (talk) 22:53, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
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- In the image file name, the word "Japanese" is misspelled. So when promoting to Next Update, remember to give this a new caption (|Curious Japanese ... ), rather than allow "Japenese" to appear on the Main Page as a rollover caption. Art LaPella (talk) 22:18, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
- I have put in a request to have the file renamed, but its one on a long list so it will take some time.--SelfQ (talk) 10:34, 12 January 2009 (UTC)
- Why not upload another copy of the image file with the correct name, then request the old file with the wrong name be deleted? This way, we don't care when the Commons admins get around to fix things, DYK gets something to use right away. --74.14.16.33 (talk) 06:01, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- I wonder why I did not even think about doing that, done. File name corrected.--SelfQ (talk) 13:52, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Why not upload another copy of the image file with the correct name, then request the old file with the wrong name be deleted? This way, we don't care when the Commons admins get around to fix things, DYK gets something to use right away. --74.14.16.33 (talk) 06:01, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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I'm sorry, but there are serious grammar problems in the text, like missing a lot of verbs. Xasodfuih (talk) 23:12, 18 January 2009 (UTC)
- Article has now been copyedited after your comment and I don't anything much that is wrong with it now. It is a B-class article, and also a GAN. I'd say it was quite all right to pass this, unless you have any other concerns? Chamal talk 12:53, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
- Seems fine now. Good >5x expansion. Xasodfuih (talk) 14:54, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
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