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* ... that [[Australia]]n [[composer]] '''[[Raymond Hanson]]''', a highly regarded teacher of [[music composition]] at the [[Sydney Conservatorium of Music|Sydney Conservatorium]], was himself largely [[self-taught]]? '''[[Raymond Hanson]]''' - new article by [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 10:50, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
* ... that [[Australia]]n [[composer]] '''[[Raymond Hanson]]''', a highly regarded teacher of [[music composition]] at the [[Sydney Conservatorium of Music|Sydney Conservatorium]], was himself largely [[self-taught]]? '''[[Raymond Hanson]]''' - new article by [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 10:50, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
**[[Image:Symbol confirmed.svg|18px]] Date/reference/length all fine; just mild surprise that it's [[User:Gatoclass#Contributions|not an article about a ship]]... <runs away> [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 01:49, 4 June 2008 (UTC)


* ... that the '''[[Berezan' Runestone]]''' is the only [[runestone]] discovered in Eastern Europe? (self-nom)--[[User:Berig|Berig]] ([[User talk:Berig|talk]]) 08:49, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
* ... that the '''[[Berezan' Runestone]]''' is the only [[runestone]] discovered in Eastern Europe? (self-nom)--[[User:Berig|Berig]] ([[User talk:Berig|talk]]) 08:49, 1 June 2008 (UTC)

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"Neuron screen" at the Edmond and Lily Safra Center for Brain Sciences
"Neuron screen" at the Edmond and Lily Safra Center for Brain Sciences

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Articles created/expanded on June 4

Articles created/expanded on June 3

File:Walle Plough.jpg
"despite"? Maybe the "intense media and public attention" drove people away? BTW, "5,000 to" seems unnecessary. --74.13.130.46 (talk) 05:30, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Agree that this "despite" sounds odd - what does the first part of this sentence have to do at all with the second part? Has this sort of comparison been made in any independent WP:RS/WP:V sources - or is this conclusion being made for the first time in this sentence? Seems to be pushing something. Cirt (talk) 09:13, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • nomination withdrawn -Sorry. Although 5,000 to 10,000 is the real figure there is no way to sift out the inflated estimates. My point was that the church made a big public impact with very few people. Steve Dufour (talk) 00:35, 4 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
A DYK hook that works better without a question mark at the very end?! :-) --74.13.130.46 (talk) 05:26, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Some oppose all multi-sentence hooks, but if there is a multi-sentence hook, then the question mark belongs after the first sentence because of the implied "Did you know...". I put that in the rules a couple months ago. Art LaPella (talk) 20:47, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I know this is a bit unconventional, but since it's an important book and two famous and important literary figures I thought I'd be bold and see what others thought. --JayHenry (talk) 23:18, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I crossed out the first "the" as it seems unnecessary. I'd also suggest linking to Secularism in Turkey, but we don't have a wikipage about Modernism in Turkey to link to. --74.13.130.46 (talk) 05:26, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Good point - I will simply link both to Atatürk's Reforms. Vishnava talk 13:42, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • ... that Lorin Maazel was 75 years old when his first opera, 1984, had its world premiere in 2005? (self-nom). 14:50, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
German Empire war ensign 1848-52

Articles created/expanded on June 2

An Italian Wall Lizard
An Italian Wall Lizard
added "in 1951".-- Matthead  Discuß   22:13, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks man. Tymek (talk) 03:48, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps "Polish" should link to Music of Poland, allowing "Poland" to link to Poland? --74.13.130.46 (talk) 05:36, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
(alt hook) *... that the bobsled from the 1932 Olympic Games, which had been missing for more than sixty years, was donated to the Lake Placid Winter Olympic Museum in 2002? still self TravellingCarithe Busy Bee 18:43, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
the bobsled? was there only one used? See Talk:Lake Placid Winter Olympic Museum.-- Matthead  Discuß   22:27, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Instead of using "nowiki", try ′ (about 2cm below the preview button) --74.13.130.46 (talk) 05:36, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I was once a great science fiction fan and I've never even heard of this book. Also, one of your refs is entitled "Hubbard hot-author status called illusion", which doesn't sound like they are about to heap the guy with praise. Hubbard is usually regarded as a hack writer in SF, so I am kind of suprised by this claim. Have you actually read these articles yourself? Gatoclass (talk) 06:56, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Yes, I have, and even that particular article that you refer to does acknowledge that this particular novel is seen as a classic in the Golden Age of Science Fiction genre. Feel free to check the cites - I did use one or two press releases but really only for basic info like publication re-release dates. Every single sentence is backed up to multiple WP:RS/WP:V sources. Cirt (talk) 07:02, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • On request from Cirt I just took a look, and everything seems fine to me. I don't have access to the offline sources, but I trust him to not make it up—I didn't have any WTF moments while reading over it. dihydrogen monoxide (H2O) 07:50, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Assertions of "early" or "late" require dates in order to be meaningful. I inserted the publishing dates from the article. --Wetman (talk) 19:16, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think that's necessary, the Golden Age of Science Fiction article makes clear what the period was. Gatoclass (talk) 04:05, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Agree w/ Gatoclass (talk · contribs) and removed the note of the years. It also made the hook too bulky. Cirt (talk) 10:53, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Charcuterie platter
Charcuterie platter

OR

Articles created/expanded on June 1

The statue of Lady Justice on the Gerechtigkeitsbrunnen.
The statue of Lady Justice on the Gerechtigkeitsbrunnen.
Can we not say "both"? It gives the wrong impression that it was a palace and an elementary school at the same time. --74.13.130.46 (talk) 05:52, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I concur, it does sound a little weird. Thingg 13:32, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay then. I'm an Editorofthewiki[citation needed] 21:54, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Yellowwood boulder
Yellowwood boulder
Lurie Garden
Lurie Garden
Memorial plate in Lopburi showing king Narai with French ambassadors.
Memorial plate in Lopburi showing king Narai with French ambassadors.
Article by PHG (talk · contribs) according to edit history. Not sure if 1688 is the appropriate name for this Siamese item. The Gregorian calendar was unlikely to be in use by the locals. "1688" was probably only used by historians from the West. What's the local name for this event? --74.13.130.46 (talk) 05:52, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I posted the question on PHG (talk · contribs)'s talk page. The name derives from western accounts such as 1688: Revolution in Siam. The Memoir of Father De Bèze , S.J. by E. W. Hutchinson, Three Military Accounts Of The 1688 'Revolution' In Siam by Lieutenant General Desfarges, De La Touche, and J. V. des Verquains, Witnesses to a Revolution: Siam 1688 Edited and translated by Michael Smithies. I'll add that Michael Smithies is an honorary member of the Siam Society Under Royal Patronage. The last book I mentioned is available through their website.--Work permit (talk) 15:47, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
A Chantecler hen
A Chantecler hen
I'm pretty sure the monk will object to the use of the verb "create", as only (his) God can create! Try "established" or "developed". --74.13.130.46 (talk) 05:56, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
First, the monk is dead. Second, he created this breed from other breeds just in the same way that art is created or a house is built. You take the things "god created" and combine or alter them to create something new. It's not a religious offense. Third, who cares? This is an encyclopedia, not a religious oligarchy. VanTucky 19:21, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Civility people, please. --293.xx.xxx.xx (talk) 21:53, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
While the article is properly named India-Republic of China relations, is it acceptable to refer to ROC as Taiwan in the DYK statement, or is it compulsory to be ROC? Feel free to change the naming if ROC is the only possible name. Vishnava talk 18:20, 1 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
or, ... that smoking in air-raid shelters was banned in Nazi Germany?
or, ... that Nazi Germany banned smoking in air-raid shelters as part of their anti-tobacco movement?
or, ... that Nazi Germany banned smoking in buses and city trains in 1944 as part of their anti-tobacco movement?
or, ... that Nazi Germany instituted a strong anti-tobacco movement and banned smoking in buses and city trains in 1944? Otolemur crassicaudatus (talk) 14:16, 1 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I support Soman's alternative suggestion as most historically significant and highest interest hook, i.e.:

Articles created/expanded on May 31

Alt: ... that of the 500 copies of No Age's vinyl EP Dead Plane, 400 were black vinyl and 100 were beige vinyl? This one has a steadier source, but the other hook is more interesting.
This article was started on the 31st (but wasn't over 1,500 characters until 6/2), but I'm nominating it for today anyway. EnjoiNico and myself have worked one-then-the-other on it since then. So it's both a new and expanded article! BobAmnertiopsisChitChat Me! 03:09, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • ... that the Skyline Towers apartment building is often referred to as a "ghetto in the sky"?
Okay. Hook # 1 or 2 are the ones I would reccommend. Actually, #2 is best. BobAmnertiopsisChitChat Me! 20:30, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Just my $0.02, Hook #2 would definitely make me click on it if I saw it on the Main Page. Thingg 14:10, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed, definitely. BobAmnertiopsisChitChat Me! 23:41, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Obviously either can be used without pictures, just added them in case they were needed. New article, self nom - Dumelow (talk) 11:20, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"crash due to political pressure"? You may want to move around the words and use commas, etc. to clarify. --74.13.130.229 (talk) 13:30, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, I didn't realise how badly that read, how about:
  • Who nominated this? Also, article looks like it may not satisfy notability standards (all primary sources, and the articles on the various members of the board of supervisors also look rather non-notable too). BuddingJournalist 08:48, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
i nominated it, sorry i forgot to sign it. not all the sources are primary actually, check again. secondary sources where largely unavailable. the board members are irrelevant as they are not up for nomination. on a side note i fail to see how county supervisors could possibly be irrelevant, mayors are not, neither are city council members, especially in one of the richest most powerful counties in the nation and world. san francisco county board of supervisors all have articles.SuperSuperBoi (talk) 10:41, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"commonest" or most "prescription most often dispensed" would be better. Johnbod (talk) 15:51, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on May 30

now linked Norman architecture not disam page - check where those links go, Skinnandoc! Johnbod (talk) 15:53, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The Kramgasse in Berne, Switzerland
The Kramgasse in Berne, Switzerland
  • ... that the Jews of the Byzantine Empire enjoyed a unique legal status superior to other religious minorities, but inferior to Christians, because they were a "living testament" to the victory of Christianity?
Coracle on the Kaveri River.
Coracle on the Kaveri River.
Model of α-synuclein protein
Model of α-synuclein protein
If possible, pls crop and remove the blank space from the image. --74.14.19.91 (talk) 05:50, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Franklin County Courthouse, on Memorial Square in Chambersburg, in 2004
Franklin County Courthouse, on Memorial Square in Chambersburg, in 2004
Please check were the link leads - it is by no means a new article. Dahn (talk) 14:13, 30 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
My mistake, I was rewriting it in notepad and removed the tags -- クラウド668 20:54, 30 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Does this pass the "interesting" test? FlagSteward (talk) 18:39, 30 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Expiring noms

Articles created/expanded on May 29

Why is this crossed out? --74.14.19.91 (talk) 06:02, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Second proposal seems best. Vishnava talk 19:26, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • I may be misreading it, but doesn't the actual intro say the opposite? ... The peasant retained ownership of his property, including land, but owed taxes and levies imposed by the noble. ... Is something missing? Autodidactyl (talk) 10:42, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The intro is giving the basic setup, that the peasant retained ownership while owing taxes. The hook comes from A series of privileges by the Grand Dukes (by Sigismund Kęstutaitis in 1434, Casimir IV Jagiellon in 1447, Alexander Jagiellon in 1492, Sigismund I the Old in 1507) released veldamai from their taxes to the state. The hook is about these historical events in 1447, 1492 and 1507. Vishnava talk 13:35, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Autodidactyl confuses 2 different taxes, as I did when I first studied this. The article explains: "... they owed taxes both to the state ... and their local noble. A series of privileges ... released veldamai from their taxes to the state." Art LaPella (talk) 20:47, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Autodidactyl (talk) 21:12, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Source, length verified. Vishnava talk 19:24, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Francis Noel Clarke Mundy
Francis Noel Clarke Mundy
Where is the mention of "Metamorphoses" in the article? Otherwise it is Vishnava talk 19:40, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"Ovid's version of the tale" has been expanded to "Ovid's version of the tale in the Metamorphoses". Awadewit (talk) 22:20, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I'm new at this so pardon any error of judgment, but I'm pretty sure that a Sequential Tarts column by a Katherine Keller and this weblink of Ron Frantz's book do not comply with WP:RS. While pages and publication details from Frantz's book are provided, you will need to remove the questionable sites and bring in more reliable sources to support the hook and the overall article. Vishnava talk 15:04, 30 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I relied on a published source and as best I could researched the material (note the mention of holdings at MSU). While somewhat obscure this is an important part of the history of collectibles in terms of dealing with fraud and other growing pains. If you are adament I will remove the weblinks you object to, although I find your objections petty. I have been a comic book collector since 1975 and these are the most "reliable" sources I could find. It is nice to work hard to create an entry that illuminates and then have a snarky response. Dgabbard (talk) 17:30, 30 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry about the last message, I came across as a bit grumpy. I created an external links section and put the links there, and pulled the quote by Keller. Hope that addresses some of the concerns.Dgabbard (talk) 20:21, 30 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I understand your feelings, its natural to be miffed at criticism of your hard work. I think we should wait for another DYK examiner like Daniel Case or Olaf Davis to give their opinion. As I said in the first place, I just started this work so its possible that I'm mistaken, although I don't think so. Vishnava talk 16:59, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thought I felt my ears burning. I hope I don't give the impression of being some sort of venerable DYK expert!
I think Frantz's book is fine as a reference. Yes multiple references are preferable, but they're not always available and we do accept DYKs without them. I do agree with Vishnava though that the external links are not needed. In an article on the book a review makes sense, but a review of a book that's just used as a source is too peripheral for inclusion. The link to the book's website is a bit close to sites that primarily exist to sell products or services. I'm not saying it's spam, but the main purpose it seems to be serving is letting people get hold of the book. Since the article includes the publication details and (now) ISBN, they shouldn't have any trouble doing that without it.
So I'm approving this for DYK, but I think the two external links would be better off removed. Olaf Davis | Talk 09:42, 1 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The removal of the external links as citations was my only point. Frantz's book was never the issue. Vishnava talk 15:43, 1 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, Ok. When you said "bring in more reliable sources", I thought you were objecting to a single-referenced DYK. In that case we are in agreement. Olaf Davis | Talk 07:52, 2 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. I took out the external links. Your reasoning is very reasonable. Dgabbard (talk) 00:33, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The hook is not clear about time. Do you mean an advisor for the Syrians turns out to be a former flying ace? The old guy came out of retirement to shoot down 103 enemy aircraft? Or what? --74.14.19.91 (talk) 06:02, 31 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
(expanded > 5x since May 29) Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 04:59, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
It looks like most of the expansion was done on the 3rd instead of the 29th. So shouldn't it should be listed in June 3rd section, not May 29th?--293.xx.xxx.xx (talk) 06:55, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I guess. Depends where you want to set the start point. I'll have to count it up but I suspect it is over 5x since June 3rd too. I just wanna leave it where it has most chance of gettin' picked is all...Cheers, Casliber (talk · contribs) 10:50, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not the one that makes the final cut, but best thing I would say is, move it to the June 3rd section (seeing the bulk of your edits were done on that day compared to your two minor edits on the 29th), that way you have at least a couple of days for it to "settle" abit just in case you need to do some tweaking or someone has a concern about your hook. --293.xx.xxx.xx (talk) 21:46, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on May 28

ALT HOOK: ... that Juozas Urbšys was the last Foreign Minister of independent interwar Lithuania? (wikilink change) --Rosiestep (talk) 01:27, 4 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Lengthen and reference good, but some might have a problem of putting an "ad" on the front page. Not me, really, but there might be some issue from others here.--Bedford Pray 02:57, 29 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Two possibilities here:

Both hooks check out. "Streamline Moderne" is referred to in the ref as the "Moderne style", which is fine as that is an valid alternative name for it. Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 20:50, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
This article's hook is unsourced or too long or there are other content issues Just long enough. Can you just provide the relevant quote or page cite from the 323-page .PDF you linked to? Daniel Case (talk) 02:33, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure what the issue is: the citation clearly references page 184. However, I've added the two relevant paragraphs from the source to the citation. —EncMstr (talk) 04:50, 3 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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