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Candidate entries
Articles created/expanded on September 26
- ... that Sir Michael Seymour was appointed to command HMS Niemen in September 1809, a ship he had captured from the French that April? new articles, self noms, Benea (talk) 23:14, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Charlie Hillard was the first American to win the World Aerobatics Championship? --Expanded 5x and nom by ArakunemTalk 23:03, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that "Frog Legs Rag" (pictured) was the second highest selling ragtime song after "Maple Leaf Rag" in publisher John Stillwell Stark's catalog? DurovaCharge! 22:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC) Shoemaker's Holiday (talk) 22:57, 26 September 2008 (UTC);-- Zginder 2008-09-26T22:57Z (UTC)
- ... that Hapoel Tayibe was the first ever Arab football club to play in the top division in Israel? (self nom) -- пﮟოьεԻ 57 21:54, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the river Lysakerelven forms the border between Bærum and Oslo, Norway, is rated an ecosystem of national importance, and offers walking and cycling trails on both of its banks, from its source all the way down to the Oslofjord? (self-nom) --Leifern (talk) 21:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that M3 Amphibious Rig, a self-propelled amphibious bridging vehicle, was originally developed by the German firm Eisenwerke Kaiserslautern? new article by User:Ialleinad, nominated by AdjustShift (talk) 21:02, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Henry Bohlen, an American Civil War Union Brigadier General who was born in Germany in 1810, was the first foreign-born Union general in the Civil War? new article by AdjustShift (talk) 20:42, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Dutch cricketer Maurits van Nierop had been recalled to the Netherlands national cricket team squad for the first time in two years just two weeks before he died? (more than fivefold expansion, selfnom) Andrew nixon (talk) 20:15, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Alternate if that's two "newsy": ... that Maurits van Nierop was the first Dutch player to play for the MCC Young Cricketers? (more than fivefold expansion, selfnom) Andrew nixon (talk) 20:15, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the first work of Texas literature in English was Texas (1833) by Mary Austin Holley, cousin of Stephen F. Austin? -- new article self-nom by Bob (QaBob) 17:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sadamu Shimomura, the last Army Minister of the Imperial Japanese Army was appointed after the surrender of Japan? <self-nom>--MChew (talk) 17:03, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that a scripted argument at Royal Rumble 1995 set up a wrestling match between wrestler Bam Bam Bigelow and football player Lawrence Taylor? -- Article expanded fivefold and self-nom by GaryColemanFan (talk) 14:03, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Holgate School in Nottinghamshire had a Khatchkar (pictured) installed in thanks by the Armenian Government? self-nom Victuallers (talk) 17:33, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sandy Stern's producing partner is R.E.M.'s lead singer Michael Stipe? (self-nom) —97198 (talk) 11:24, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that computer criminal Jeanson James Ancheta was the first person to be charged for controlling large numbers of hijacked computers or botnets? (self-nom) -- Esemono (talk) 09:43, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that biochemist Rollin Hotchkiss, a pioneer in bacterial transformation and molecular genetics, helped to popularize the term "genetic engineering"? (self-nom) --ragesoss (talk) 05:45, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- … that the magazine Electrician and Mechanic (pictured) changed its title six times in two years (1914–1915) before acquiring its current title, Popular Science? --- new article self-nom by SWTPC6800 (talk) 03:39, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the English adaptation of the first season of the D.Gray-man anime is licensed by Funimation and slated for release in 2009? (self-nomination) sephiroth bcr (converse) 01:14, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Not all that interesting, IMO, just a bland statement of fact. —97198 (talk) 12:07, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the second season of the D.Gray-man anime is known as the "2nd stage"? sephiroth bcr (converse) 17:46, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that art historian George Zarnecki was deputy director of the Courtauld Institute of Art for 13 years under Anthony Blunt's directorship? (self nom) RMHED (talk) 01:12, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that rains from Tropical Storm Lester (2004) triggered a mudslide that temporarily buried a man in Mexico? –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 00:29, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the main square in Mexico City or Zocalo has been a venue for rock concerts, skateboarding/BMX events and was the scene of one of Spencer Tunick's photo shoots, where 18,000 Mexicans bared all for the artist? (self nom) Thelmadatter (talk) 16:12, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Edith Killgore Kirkpatrick, former member of the Louisiana Board of Regents from Baton Rouge, still maintains her family's 150-year-old plantation home in Claiborne Parish?--self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk) 20:26, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- OR
- ... that Edith Killgore Kirkpatrick, serving on the Louisiana Board of Regents from 1978 to 1990, promoted the inclusion of art, music, and foreign languages in public school curricula?--self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk) 20:32, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that although designed for use on light rail lines, the Valmet RM 2 trams were only ever used on traditional tram systems? -- new article self-nom -- Kjet (talk · contribs) 22:37, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- OR
- ... that the Valmet RM 2 class trams, built in 1956, were only in service for 16 years due to the closure of the Turku tram network in 1972? -- new article self-nom -- Kjet (talk · contribs) 22:37, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 25
- ... that the Temple of Amada (façade pictured), built by Pharaoh Thutmose III during the 18th Dynasty, was moved 2.5 kilometres (1.6 mi) uphill between 1964 and 1975? ~ New article by Leoboudv; nominated by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 20:07, 26 September 2008 (UTC).
- Actually, there's double-hook potential here, because an article on its neighbour, the Temple of Derr, has been created:
- ... (ALT) ... that Pharaoh Thutmose III's Temple of Amada and Ramesses II's Temple of Derr (façade pictured) were both dismantled in 1964 and moved to new sites? ~ Both new articles by Leoboudv; nominated by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 20:22, 26 September 2008 (UTC).
- ... that the followers of the Socialist Workers Party in Palestine, the precursor of the Communist Party of Israel, were known as mopsim? (self-nom) --Soman (talk) 13:23, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Size and date fine, offline ref accepted on good faith. RMHED (talk) 22:45, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- The Shindler and Stein references are available at google books. Halliday is available on JSTOR. Offenberg is an offline ref, though. --Soman (talk) 22:54, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Size and date fine, offline ref accepted on good faith. RMHED (talk) 22:45, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Gliricidia sepium is second only to Leucaena leucocephala in being the most important multi-purpose legume tree? -- new article by User:Alternativity and Lenticel (talk) 11:09, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that Gliricidia sepium is used as firewood, live fencing, fodder, coffee shade, green manure and rat poison?
- ... that Marguerite Wilson is celebrated in the Golden Book of Cycling for holding all 16 British road records? Autodidactyl (talk) 09:02, 26 September 2008 (UTC) (Hi Vic, please improve this hook.)
- ... that Betty Furness, a Hollywood film actress turned consumer advocate, was appointed by Nelson Rockefeller as the first chairman and executive director of the New York State Consumer Protection Board? -- new article, self-nom by Alansohn (talk) 23:06, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Cleckheaton railway station was stolen in August 1971? -- self nom, Guy (Help!) 20:46, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Alaskan fiber artist Fran Reed was known for her distinctive baskets made from dried fish skins? -- self nom Scanlan (talk) 18:25, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that A.U. Fuimaono was the first Delegate from American Samoa to serve in the United States House of Representatives? -- self nom Scanlan (talk) 18:25, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Suggest deleting "serve in"; shorter, and avoids ambiguity. (He was a delegate to HoR; did not serve in it as a representative). Kablammo (talk) 22:30, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- How about ...
- ... that A.U. Fuimaono was the first Delegate from American Samoa to the United States House of Representatives? -- self nom by Scanlan (talk) 00:21, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Suggest deleting "serve in"; shorter, and avoids ambiguity. (He was a delegate to HoR; did not serve in it as a representative). Kablammo (talk) 22:30, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that volunteers have planted more than one million trees within the past year for National Public Lands Day in honor of the 75th anniversary of the Civilian Conservation Corps?
- Note: The event is this Saturday, September 27 (it would be nice if it were posted that day). I know the content is a little thin right now, but I asked for some collaberative assistance from Wikipedia:WikiProject Protected areas. — Eoghanacht talk 15:57, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the last common ancestor of bilaterian animals has been reconstructed as a tiny worm with a combined mouth and anus? Martin (Smith609 – Talk) 15:41, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Size and date fine; ref behind subscription accepted on good faith. (Jokes successfully resisted) Kablammo (talk) 15:48, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- I am sorry, but the article needs to be wikified, it has orphan tag on it, and references like "see article x for references" are not acceptable. Renata (talk) 16:17, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- You are correct as to other refs; the hook ref is however specific. Kablammo (talk) 16:45, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- I am sorry, but the article needs to be wikified, it has orphan tag on it, and references like "see article x for references" are not acceptable. Renata (talk) 16:17, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Size and date fine; ref behind subscription accepted on good faith. (Jokes successfully resisted) Kablammo (talk) 15:48, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in August 1936, the Matson Navigation Company cargo ship SS Mauna Loa came to the aid of a windjammer that was crewed by Sea Scouts and had been missing for two weeks? -- new article self-nom by Bellhalla (talk) 15:03, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that more than 100,000 Heinkel Tourist scooters were sold despite being heavier and more expensive than Vespas and Lambrettas? Respectfully, SamBlob (talk) 13:52, 25 September 2008 (UTC)(self-nominated, new article)
- ... that following the purchase of British Energy by Electricité de France, plans for a new Hinkley Point C nuclear power station have been announced?— Rod talk 13:39, 25 September 2008 (UTC) (self nom, new article)
- ... that works of Lithuanian painter Kazys Varnelis are owned by the Guggenheim Museum in New York and are said to be a modern interpretation of Lithuanian folk art? New article by user:Moonzero2, expended and ref'd by me. Renata (talk) 13:36, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Good article, size and date ok, but source is not clear that multiple examples of his work are owned by Guggenheim. Kablammo (talk) 15:53, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, reworded: ... that works of Lithuanian painter Kazys Varnelis, owned by museums such as the Guggenheim in New York and Art Institute of Chicago, are said to be a modern interpretation of Lithuanian folk art? 197 characters. Renata (talk) 16:11, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- All good. Kablammo (talk) 16:45, 25 September 2008 (UTC) Interestingly, although the ref supports the tag, a search of the S.R. Guggenheim website and Guggenheim Bilbao shows no results for this artist. Perhaps work were in the museum on loan as part of a show; perhaps there has been a deaccession. Kablammo (talk) 19:42, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Not everything owned is put on display or websites. Usually museums have much larger collections than they are able to display. Everything else is cataloged and goes to storage. Guggenheim NY has very small permanent exposition - most of it is special exhibitions (so that people can comeback and pay exuberant entrance fees all over again). Renata (talk) 22:16, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- All good. Kablammo (talk) 16:45, 25 September 2008 (UTC) Interestingly, although the ref supports the tag, a search of the S.R. Guggenheim website and Guggenheim Bilbao shows no results for this artist. Perhaps work were in the museum on loan as part of a show; perhaps there has been a deaccession. Kablammo (talk) 19:42, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ok, reworded: ... that works of Lithuanian painter Kazys Varnelis, owned by museums such as the Guggenheim in New York and Art Institute of Chicago, are said to be a modern interpretation of Lithuanian folk art? 197 characters. Renata (talk) 16:11, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Good article, size and date ok, but source is not clear that multiple examples of his work are owned by Guggenheim. Kablammo (talk) 15:53, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Slovenian biologist Ivan Regen is considered the founder of modern bioacoustics due to his work on cricket and katydid acoustic communication? Yerpo (talk) 08:08, 25 September 2008 (UTC) (self nom., new article)
- ... that Springfield Armory, Inc. assisted Naval Surface Warfare Center Crane Division in making the United States Navy Mark 14 Mod 0 Enhanced Battle Rifle by supplying the needed machinery to make it? Ominae (talk) 07:24, 25 September 2008 (UTC) Self-nom. Expanded at least five-fold.
- 3478/900=3.9-fold, not fivefold. We compare only the prose portion of the article, before and after. There's still time to expand it. Art LaPella (talk) 01:51, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks. Looks like I made a mistake in the fivefold rule. Looks like I need to review it again since I'm a bit confused. Also expanded a bit much too. Ominae (talk) 03:51, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- The article is now expanded to 4283 characters for a 4.8-fold expansion, which is close enough to 5 to be within the gray area. More explanation on Ominae's talk page. Art LaPella (talk) 06:50, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Patlabor: The Movie 2 was based on Mamoru Oshii's opposition of JSDF forces to be deployed under UNTAC mandate? Ominae (talk) 07:24, 25 September 2008 (UTC) Self-nom. Expanded five-fold.
- 9994/9918=1.008-fold, nowhere near five-fold. Did You Know is for new or mostly new articles. Please see #Instructions. Art LaPella (talk) 01:51, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the creation of the Defense Intelligence Headquarters was hindered by lack of cooperation and subordination from the Japanese Defense Agency's intelligence branches in the 1980s before it was founded in 1997? Ominae (talk) 07:24, 25 September 2008 (UTC) Self-nom. Article expanded five-fold.
- 3127/2991=1.05-fold. Art LaPella (talk) 01:51, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the creation of the Minebea PM-9 submachine gun was based heavily on the Uzi submachine gun? Ominae (talk) 07:24, 25 September 2008 (UTC) Self-nom. Expanded five-fold.
- 2868/2795=1.03-fold. Art LaPella (talk) 01:51, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that on April 17, 1964, Tim Harkness of the New York Mets became the first Met player to bat and the first to get a hit in the team's first game played at Shea Stadium? -- five-fold-plus expansion of stub by Alansohn (talk) 07:20, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Doug Hudson's only recorded statistic in his NFL career was a safety that resulted in two points for the opposing team? (self nom) conman33 (. . .talk) 03:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that at the funeral of Sir Anthony Browne, friends were given gold rings engraved on the outside with 'we die'? New article, self-nom, 3296 chars. I've translated the "we die" from the auld english in which it's given in the article; if people think it'd be best to use the original thats fine. Ironholds 02:47, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that boxer Paddy Maguire's last fight saw him lose his British bantamweight title to relative newcomer Johnny Owen? (self nom) RMHED (talk) 02:43, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Alt hook... that according to Hansard boxer Paddy Maguire once sparred with Conservative politician Colin Moynihan in a London pub? (self nom) RMHED (talk) 02:43, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Battle of Blanco Canyon marked the first time a foreign military force had penetrated to the heart of the Comancheria since the Comanche rose to power on the Great Plains, and marked the beginning of the end of the Comanche as a free people? Less than ten years later they would all surrender and be on reservations...JohninMaryland (talk) 11:39, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Incorporate 2d sentence into hook, or (preferably) delete it; it is not needed anyway, and hook is too long. Kablammo (talk) 19:54, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Battle of Blanco Canyon marked the first time a foreign military force had penetrated to the heart of the Comancheria since the Comanche rose to power on the Great Plains; less than ten years later they would all surrender and be on reservations? JohninMaryland (talk) 08:27, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Incorporate 2d sentence into hook, or (preferably) delete it; it is not needed anyway, and hook is too long. Kablammo (talk) 19:54, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
or::::::*... that the Battle of Blanco Canyon marked the first time any American had explored that part of the Llano Estacado in Texas? JohninMaryland (talk) 11:18, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that when Giurgiu Cathedral in Giurgiu, Romania was inaugurated as a cathedral in 2006, it received a box with the relics of Saint George, the city's patron saint, but this was stolen the following year? -- self-nom by Biruitorul Talk 18:51, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Supreme National Tribunal, a war crime tribunal active in Poland from 1946 to 1948, presided over seven high-profile cases, including the First Auschwitz Trial? --self nom by Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 04:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Warren A. Morton, a Speaker of the Wyoming House, was the father of a member of the Legislative Assembly of Alberta and the son-in-law of a U.S. representative from Pennsylvania?--self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk) 04:33, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- OR
- ... that Warren A. Morton in 1982 was the third of five consecutive Republican gubernatorial nominees to lose to Democrats in the usually GOP state of Wyoming?--self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk) 04:33, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Gary D. McCaleb, a former mayor of Abilene, once recruited the late Benazir Bhutto of Pakistan to speak to a community gathering in his West Texas city?--self-nomBilly Hathorn (talk) 04:46, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 24
- ... that Morris Sullivan's relocation of his Sullivan Bluth Studios animation company from the USA to Ireland, to exploit tax advantages, helped stimulate the development of Ireland's animation industry? ~ New article by Scanlan; nominated by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 21:01, 26 September 2008 (UTC).
- ... that vaporized hydrogen peroxide is useful for disinfecting buildings contaminated with anthrax? -- New article (9/23) by RoseanneSavage, expanded fivefold (9/24) by ArakunemTalk 13:54, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Alternate hook:
- ... that vaporized hydrogen peroxide was used to disinfect buildings contaminated in the 2001 anthrax attacks in the U.S.?
Nominated for deletion but expected to survive. Art LaPella (talk) 01:51, 26 September 2008 (UTC)Closed. The article survived. Art LaPella (talk) 02:31, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that vaporized hydrogen peroxide was used to disinfect buildings contaminated in the 2001 anthrax attacks in the U.S.?
- ... that oysters deposit pseudofeces in such amounts that they can clean up an entire estuary? – jointly expanded 5-fold by Invertzoo and self. --Geronimo20 (talk) 22:46, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that although Iván DeJesús, Jr. was selected to play in the 2008 Southern League All-star game, he instead played in the 2008 All-Star Futures Game?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 08:11, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that John Montague of the Seattle Mariners earned the first save in team history, pitching two scoreless innings to preserve a 5–1 win against the California Angels on April 9, 1977? -- article expanded five-fold, nom by Alansohn (talk) 05:00, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... Nora Kimball co-starred with Mikhail Baryshnikov in David Gordon's Made in U.S.A.?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 02:40, 25 September 2008 (UTC)--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 02:40, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Ayrlies Garden has been described as the "quintessential New Zealand garden"? -- Ferocious angel (talk) 22:04, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- I only count 1442 characters, which isn't far short of the required 1500. You have plenty of time to get this up to the required length. Everything else checks out. – Ikara talk → 22:11, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in 2004, Ouaga-Saga was one of two or three fims the Burkina Faso government produces in a year? New article by Your friend Eddy O. D. Wiki[citation needed] 21:30, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
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- It is cited to the next ref. Adding an extra one would be redundant. Your friend Eddy O. D. Wiki[citation needed] 11:02, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that during testing, the infamous M247 Sergeant York (pictured) locked onto an exhaust fan, shot into the ground instead of its target, and even threatened to fire on the high-ranking review panel in nearby stands? Maury (talk) 21:19, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Richard Kessel, a consumer advocate who opposed the US$5.5 billion Shoreham Nuclear Power Plant (pictured), purchased the facility for one dollar as head of the Long Island Power Authority? -- new article, self-nom ny Alansohn (talk) 18:29, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Great Swamp in Putnam and Dutchess County, New York is one of the largest wetlands in the state? –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 18:07, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the weroance (chief) of the Appomattoc tribe, Perecute, personally led Thomas Batts and Robert Fallom on an expedition in 1671 to become the first Europeans to set foot within what is now West Virginia? new article, self nom -- Til Eulenspiegel (talk) 17:28, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that according to writings by missionary Ivan Popov, an 18th century settlement on Uliaga Island (pictured) was destroyed by a Russian settler at the request of natives on nearby Umnak Island? --new article self-nom. Ref is located here. Origin of destroyer (name is Stephen Golottof) is located here. Thingg⊕⊗ 15:36, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that David Bowie (pictured) was awarded a lifetime achievement award at the 2007 Webby Awards? -- new article self-nom by JD554 (talk) 14:34, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that poet Arun Kolatkar's Jejuri (1976) was among the books that revolutionized modern Indian English literature? (self-nom) mukerjee (talk) 14:22, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Dave Needham is only one of a few British boxers to have been both a BBBC bantamweight and featherweight champion? (self-nom) RMHED (talk) 03:50, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that, after the rebellious Tang Dynasty general Zhu Tao was defeated by Wang Wujun and Li Baozhen, he immediately executed two subordinates who had suggested that he battle Wang and Li? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 03:21, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that, in high school, Matt Centrowitz was the first New Yorker to run two miles in under nine minutes? (new article, self-nom) Truthanado (talk) 02:06, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT hook ... that Matt Centrowitz was the number one high school mile runner in America in 1973? (new article, self-nom) Truthanado (talk) 00:12, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Both of these facts need inline citations directly following each sentence, not just at the end of the paragraph. —97198 (talk) 01:48, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ref added to each sentence. Would you please re-evaluate. Thanks. Truthanado (talk) 12:05, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 2006 film Strawberry Fields is a documentary about Palestinian farmers in Gaza facing hardships caused by the Israel–Hamas military conflict? (self-nom) Ecoleetage (talk) 02:14, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in 1715 the largest Russian landowner owned territory greater than that of such modern countries like Bulgaria or Iceland (113,431 km2)? (new article, self-nom) kmorozov (talk) 12:08, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Alternate:
- ... that in 1715 Grigory Dmitriyevich Stroganov, the largest Russian landowner after the tsar, owned territories greater than modern Bulgaria or Iceland?
- Date and size OK; one source, in Russian, for article.Kablammo (talk) 14:02, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Texel Disaster in August 1940 resulted in the deaths of 300 men?
- or ... that the Texel Disaster of 1940 resulted in severe damage to HMS Express and the sinking of two other ships who went to her aid? - new article, self-nom. Main reference is offline but the other online refs in the article back it up - Dumelow (talk) 15:19, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... the Angel Island Chuckwalla was considered such an important food item to the Seri people that they translocated populations of the lizard to islands within the Sea of Cortés for times of famine?-- Selfnom after 5-fold expansion.--Mike - Μολὼν λαβέ 20:12, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- …that the Portuguese village Cacela Velha was once the site of the Medina of Qast’alla Daraj, an Islamic town dating back to the 10th century? -- A new article, and a joint collaboration between Húsönd and Ecoleetage, nominated by Ecoleetage (talk) 20:31, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 23
- ... that Helena Paparizou, the second choice to represent Greece in the Eurovision Song Contest 2005, ended up winning the contest with "My Number One"?-- Expanded fivefold by Grk1011/Stephen (talk) 16:22, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that, at 248.1 metres (814 ft), Tokyo Midtown's Midtown Tower (pictured) is the tallest building in Tokyo? -- new article, by --TorsodogTalk 03:59, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Frankfurter Engel was the first memorial in Germany, that remembers LGBT people who were persecuted under Nazism and German § 175. -- new article, by GLGermann (talk) 22:08, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Classical Academy Charter School of Clifton, a chartered middle school that requires students to learn three years of Latin and Literary classics, has been recognized as a Blue Ribbon School? -- new article, self-nom by Alansohn (talk) 17:25, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Lord Peter Wimsey novel Thrones, Dominations was started by Dorothy L. Sayers in 1936 and completed by Jill Paton Walsh over 60 years later? Fivefold expansion of an article started in 2002 by User:Isis; self-nom. Karenjc 09:57, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Chicago Cubs have a tradition of raising a Cubs Win flag (pictured) on the flagpole atop the scoreboard at Wrigley Field after every home win?--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 06:16, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that English footballer Fred Geary scored the first goal at the opening of Everton's new Goodison Park stadium in August 1892? New article self-nom by Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) 04:57, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that a tower of 2,000 wooden Schlitz beer pallets described as "a rotting vestige of one man's egotism" that festers "like a sore on the community's body" is a Los Angeles Historic-Cultural Monument? new articles, prepared jointly by doncram (talk · contribs) and Cbl62 (talk) 04:26, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that from 1996 to 2001, racers driving the Riley & Scott Mk III (pictured) sports prototype won a total of eight Drivers Championships in four different sports car racing series? (self-nom) The359 (talk) 03:14, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that George Washington called Dismal Swamp a "glorious paradise" and now part of it is a North Carolina state park? (self nom) --Dincher (talk) 02:52, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that, as they did not acquire a license from FIFA, Rage Software were forced to use fictitious footballer names on Microsoft International Soccer 2000? — Self nom. Giggy (talk) 01:29, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
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- Perhaps simpler phrasing: "... that Rage Software were forced to use fictitious footballer names on Microsoft International Soccer 2000 because they did not acquire a license from FIFA? Truthanado (talk) 02:28, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that strong waves from Hurricane Bonnie in 1998 washed tens of thousands of tires, part of an artificial reef, ashore in North Carolina? Pretty sure it's a five-fold expansion. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 01:02, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that "Disneyland with the death penalty" became a famous description for Singapore (pictured) following the publication in 1993 of William Gibson's article of the same name? Self-nom by the skomorokh 00:56, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sir John Juyn served simultaneously as Lord Chief Baron of the Exchequer and Chief Justice of the Common Pleas, only relinquishing the positions when he was appointed Chief Justice of the King's Bench? 2100 chars, self nom, yadda yadda.Ironholds 23:08, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that William Fox was offered a scholarship to drama school, but only on the condition that he did not take the money? – self-nom – Lampman (talk) 21:40, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- two alternative hooks from extra material I've just added
- ... that William Fox and Peggy Ashcroft’s performance in As You Like It was painted by Walter Sickert?
- ... that William Fox joined the Territorial Army because he was annoyed by the Nazi songs played by his neighbour, Unity Mitford? David Underdown (talk) 15:01, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- For clarity, both these alternative hooks can be referenced from The Guardian obituary. David Underdown (talk) 15:03, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that "Where do you want to go today?", launched in November 1994, was the title of Microsoft's first global image advertising campaign? -- new article, self-nom by Alansohn (talk) 21:34, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in August 2007, millionaire businessman Anwar Rashid and his family left Clifton Hall (pictured), their £3.6M home in Nottingham, because they thought it was haunted? -- new article self-nom by Nev1 (talk) 20:54, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that despite its leaders being deported to remote parts of the country, the Gabonese opposition garnered 46% of the vote in a 1964 legislative election? New article by Your friend Eddy of the wiki[citation needed] 20:48, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Only 1298 characters in the article, still time to expand it to the required 1500 or more. Truthanado (talk) 02:35, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- I actually count 1500 characters of prose text (including spaces) which should meet the requirements. Article creation date verified, and French book ref accepted on good faith. Thanks, Jamie☆S93 15:33, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- BTW I have expanded the article slightly, so the lenth should not be a problem. Your friend Eddy O. D. Wiki[citation needed] 19:40, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 1991 Arctic Environmental Protection Strategy has been called a major political accomplishment of the post-Cold War era? (new; self-nom) --Rosiestep (talk) 20:41, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Greenbank Gardens (pictured) near Glasgow, Scotland were built by Robert Allason, a slave trader? (self nom)--Scott MacDonald (talk) 19:56, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that after Chief Justice of the King's Bench Robert Tresilian was executed for treason in 1388 (pictured), his wife married a pirate? -- self-nom -- Lampman (talk) 16:37, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Sołtan argument as outlined in 1982 suggests that the supermassive black hole at the center of our galaxy was once a quasar? New article, self nom ScienceApologist (talk) 15:29, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Sorry, I cannot find the hook properly sourced by an inline reference in the article. Perhaps someone more knowledgeable in astronomy can find it? Truthanado (talk) 02:50, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah. It's Sołtan, A. (1982). ""Masses of quasars",". Monthly Notices of the Royal Astronomical Society. 200: 115–122.
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ignored (help). Maybe you should get some science editors to work here? ScienceApologist (talk) 13:59, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Watchers of Main Page material are often condemned for not being numerous enough, so come on in, the water's fine. Art LaPella (talk) 22:17, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Cool, so can I myself off then? ScienceApologist (talk) 18:00, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yeah. It's Sołtan, A. (1982). ""Masses of quasars",". Monthly Notices of the Royal Astronomical Society. 200: 115–122.
- ... that the Dome of the Prophet, a free-standing dome located alongside the Dome of the Rock in Old Jerusalem, was built by the Ottomans to commemorate the Islamic prophet Muhammad? (self-nom) --Al Ameer son (talk) 15:27, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sir Francis Gawdy, his father and his two older half-brothers were all baptised Thomas Gawdy, although Francis had his name changed at his confirmation? New article, self-nom, 1690-odd chars. Ironholds 13:13, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the cause of the Svenskehuset Tragedy, where seventeen men died on Svalbard (see map) in the winter of 1872–73, was until recently a mystery? -- self-nom -- Lampman (talk) 13:00, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date, and image license verified. Non-English references accepted on good faith, although I was able to verify the hook with the English ref. Jamie☆S93 21:39, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Mike Berniker produced Barbra Streisand's first three albums, which were described by The New York Times as "among the most expressively uninhibited" of her career? -- new article, self-nom by Alansohn (talk) 12:12, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that on 21 June, 1859, French inventor and photographer René Dagron (pictured) was granted the first microfilm patent in history? (self nom} Dr.K. (talk) 05:51, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date, fact referencing and image license verified. The hook was a little overlinked, so I removed less-relevant links, like the term "history" and the beginning date. Thanks, Jamie☆S93 21:03, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Red-backed Kingfisher (pictured) nests in burrows in riverbanks ... but not near water?...(exp 5x) Casliber (talk · contribs)
- ... that the Cathedral of Saints Peter and Paul in Constanţa, Romania, which twice served as a parish church and twice as a cathedral, was made a monastery as well in 2001? -- self-nom by Biruitorul Talk 17:14, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the C. Burton Hotel (pictured) may be the only Greek Revival building in Sullivan County, New York, with a recessed porch and columns? Self-nom Daniel Case (talk) 22:04, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 22
- ... that the original text of the 2008 U.S. Financial System Bailout required that decisions made by Treasury Secretary Paulson "may not be reviewed by any court of law or any administrative agency"? --JaGatalk 21:55, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- (Alt) ... that, regarding the request for $700 billion in the 2008 U.S. Financial System Bailout, a U.S. Treasury spokeswoman explained, "It's not based on any particular data point. We just wanted to choose a really large number."? --JaGatalk 05:13, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- This hasn't been on ITN yet but is very likely to. If it does, it's ineligible. Daniel Case (talk) 13:43, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Cabonga Reservoir in central Quebec, Canada, is included among North America's best locations for walleye, northern pike, and lake trout fishing? -- P199 (talk) 13:22, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that during the 2008–2009 television season, the actress Shenae Grimes has starring roles in both the eighth season of Degrassi: The Next Generation, and the first season of 90210? --- New article, created by myself. Matthewedwards (talk • contribs • email) 05:41, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in the Toronto Blue Jays seasons, they have had seven different pitchers start twice or more on Opening Day? -- K. Annoyomous24[c] 04:09, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that after filing to run for a seat on the Oregon Supreme Court, judge Jason Lee had two cases decided against his interests in the same court before withdrawing? (self) Aboutmovies (talk) 22:56, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that British swimmer Heather Frederiksen won four medals at the 2008 Summer Paralympics after being told by doctors she would never be able to swim again? -- new article selfnom by Basement12 (T.C) 21:49, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that during the murder trial of Dr Thomas Lodwig, he claimed that he had used the poison potassium chloride to enhance the effect of painkillers rather than to kill his patient? -- new article, self-nom Malick78 (talk) 15:32, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Label Fandango was created by Andy Macleod and Simon Williams, the man behind debut singles from Coldplay and Keane? --SteelersFanUK06 ReplyOnMine! 06:29, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, fair use images cannot be used on main page. Dr.K. (talk) 06:59, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Not here, either. Removed. --74.14.18.100 (talk) 08:05, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- But surely the article itself is still a possible candidate for DYK, regardless of image? --SteelersFanUK06 ReplyOnMine! 21:23, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, the hook and article, but not the image, are candidates. "Unwritten" Rule H1. Art LaPella (talk) 04:31, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ah ok i see. I thought it was being failed on the basis of that image. Here's hoping it gets put in! --SteelersFanUK06 ReplyOnMine! 11:22, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, the hook and article, but not the image, are candidates. "Unwritten" Rule H1. Art LaPella (talk) 04:31, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- But surely the article itself is still a possible candidate for DYK, regardless of image? --SteelersFanUK06 ReplyOnMine! 21:23, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Not here, either. Removed. --74.14.18.100 (talk) 08:05, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that SS Empire Simba, a British cargo ship, was damaged in port by a land mine dropped by a German bomber during the Second World War? -- new article self-nom by Bellhalla (talk) 04:42, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Izmaylovo Estate contained the first zoo in Russia, established in the 1660s?
- alt.: ... that the 17th century gardeners of the Izmaylovo Estate managed to grow figs, coconuts and melons but failed to breed silk worms? NVO (talk) 23:38, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Cameroonian politician Louis-Paul Aujoulat's thesis was named best in his faculty at the Catholic University? New article by Your friend Eddy of the wiki[citation needed] 23:14, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that New York State Route 194 was the only victim in Lewis County of the 1980 state maintenance swaps?Mitch32(UP) 22:33, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Richard Wesley first won critical acclaim for his 1971 play Black Terror and financial success for his screenplays for the Cosby/Poitier vehicles Uptown Saturday Night and Let's Do It Again? -- article originally created by User:Ronald W Wise, expanded fivefold by Alansohn (talk) 22:09, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Schlesinger Doctrine of 1974 re-introduced the idea of flexible response to U.S. nuclear warfighting policy? Maury (talk) 21:52, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the two towns that New York State Route 146B once connected date back to the 17th and 18th century?Mitch32(UP) 21:29, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the 108.1 kilometres (67.2 mi) Canal de l'Ourcq (pictured) provides over half of the 380,000 cubic metres (500,000 cu yd) of water used daily by the city of Paris for cleaning public works? -- new article, self-nom. Lazulilasher (talk) 20:36, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Tropical Storm Gilma was, in terms of wind speed, the weakest named storm of the 2006 Pacific hurricane season? –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 16:33, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article split from 2006 Pacific hurricane season, expanded from 532 → 3362 = 6x expansion. Date checks out as well. However there is currently no inline citation after the hook in the article. Also, fixed typo in name – Ikara talk → 22:25, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- It wasn't split off from that article; I wrote it from scratch, so it's a new page. That aside, that fact is indeed referenced to ref #1, so I don't understand what's needed. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 22:43, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- The split is not an issue as the section has been expanded sufficiently. The hook in the article needs to have an inline citation at end of the sentence, not two sentences later. The first reference is sufficient, it just need to be moved forward to the end of the hook – Ikara talk → 23:00, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- I don't see why it can't be considered cited by the source two sentences in front of the fact, but I changed it, nonetheless. Thanks, –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 23:03, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Date, length and reference all check out. Reference quotes peak wind speed at 35 knots which works out to 40 mph (65 km/h) as in the article. I also changed "winds" to "wind speed" in the hook for clarity, feel free to change it back if you think it is unnecessary – Ikara talk → 00:09, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- I don't see why it can't be considered cited by the source two sentences in front of the fact, but I changed it, nonetheless. Thanks, –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 23:03, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- The split is not an issue as the section has been expanded sufficiently. The hook in the article needs to have an inline citation at end of the sentence, not two sentences later. The first reference is sufficient, it just need to be moved forward to the end of the hook – Ikara talk → 23:00, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- It wasn't split off from that article; I wrote it from scratch, so it's a new page. That aside, that fact is indeed referenced to ref #1, so I don't understand what's needed. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 22:43, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in 1570 the residents of the Neapolitan comune of San Giorgio a Cremano built a beautiful new church dedicated to Saint Mary, instead of their Patron Saint, Saint George, only to have it completely destroyed in the devastating eruption of Mount Vesuvius in December 1631? -- major edit, self-nom by Robert Fleming (talk) 15:15, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- 276 character hook. Art LaPella (talk) 02:49, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that San Giorgio a Cremano is so named because the residents called on their patron saint Saint George for protection from the fiery eruptions of Mount Vesuvius? Robert Fleming (talk) 12:43, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Schools Plus, an education policy proposed by New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark, was boycotted by fifteen schools? (self-nom) ~ User:Ameliorate! (with the !) (talk) 13:37, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Diocesan School for Girls students can download whiteboard notes to their laptops? -- new article self-nom by XLerate (talk) 10:35, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that George Odgers was the last living member of the 14 historians who wrote the official history of Australia's involvement in World War II, Australia in the War of 1939–1945? -- new article self-nom by Nick Dowling (talk) 11:29, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Latvian basketball player Ieva Tāre suffered a heavy arm injury during the qualification for the 2008 Summer Olympics, however, recover in time for the actual Olympics? -- new article self-nom by SpeedKing (talk) 14:39, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Rather short at the moment, at 655 bytes of text, but with plenty of time to add to. I would suggest "serious arm injury", and "...Olympics, but recovered in time...". Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 22:42, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Latvian basketball player Ieva Tāre suffered a serious arm injury during the qualification for 2008 Summer Olympics, however, recovered in time for the actual Olympics? --SpeedKing (talk) 15:33, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Readable prose size has reached 1 500 bytes. --SpeedKing (talk) 17:53, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Expanded sufficiently. Suitably referenced to Latvian website. Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 16:01, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Readable prose size has reached 1 500 bytes. --SpeedKing (talk) 17:53, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that two sculptors from Vest-Telemark, Dyre Vaa and Anne Grimdalen, both contributed to the decoration of Oslo City Hall (Grimdalen's playing bears pictured)? -- self-nom, Oceanh (talk) 10:11, 23 September 2008 (UTC).
- alt-hooks (split into two separate hooks):
- ... that sculptor Anne Grimdalen surprisingly won the 1938 decoration contest for Oslo City Hall?
- ... that Dyre Vaa's Holberg statue (pictured) was unveiled on the darkest day of Europe, 1 September 1939?
- OR
- ... that Dyre Vaa's Holberg statue (pictured) was unveiled on what later has been called the darkest day of Europe, 1 September 1939? Oceanh (talk) 10:10, 26 September 2008 (UTC).
- ... that unlike most other Jewish communities in the Catskills, the congregants of Ulster Heights Synagogue were farmers rather than resort operators? Self-nom (Yes, other people write synagogue articles besides Jayjg) Daniel Case (talk) 15:17, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ready for DYK. It'd be nice if the article didn't rely on only one reference, but that's not a big deal. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 15:38, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the current National Palace of Mexico (pictured), despite being destroyed and rebuilt several times in its history, still contains building blocks from the original palace of Aztec emperor Moctezuma II? Thelmadatter (talk) 17:33, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Looks good. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 15:40, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Arumer Black Heap was a group of Frisian freedom fighters and rebels led by the legendary folk hero Pier Gerlofs Donia? (self nominated) 193.172.170.26 (talk) 10:21, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 21
- ... that the ancient Egyptian temples of Dakka (pictured), Maharraqa and Wadi es-Sebua were dismantled in the 1960s and rebuilt several kilometres away in New Wadi es-Sebua due to the construction of the Aswan Dam? -- Three new articles by Leoboudv (talk · contribs), triple-nom. by PFHLai (talk) 23:17, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that according to recent research, the shadow trevally (pictured) is one of the first fish to move in after a ship is scuttled? -- new article by Kare Kare (talk · contribs), nom. by PFHLai (talk) 01:28, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date, and public domain image verified, but the reference is inadequate because it doesn't even mention shadow trevally. Cunard (talk) 05:28, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- It quite clearly states on page 7: "The biomass stabilized at an average of 153 g/m2 between 53 and 193 days after scuttling. Important variations were observed after this first colonization phase, due to the occasional presence of Carangidae (unidentified Carangidae and Carangoides dinema), large Lutjanus argentimaculatus and Sphyraenidae..." Quite obviously scientific papers don't use common names, that is simply common knowledge. The statement describes the species as the second phase of colonisation after scuttling... can't be too much clearer. Kare Kare (talk) 11:39, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Baghdad was under siege for more than a year during a civil war in the 9th century between Al-Amin and his brother Al-Ma'mun for the Abbasid Caliphate? -- new article by Yazid97 (talk · contribs), nom. by PFHLai (talk) 01:41, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Philip Goldberg (pictured), former U.S. Ambassador to Bolivia, was the eighth chief of mission in U.S. diplomatic history declared persona non grata and expelled from a country where he was serving? -- I hope this is not too negative. Chances are that Goldberg takes this as a badge of honor. :-) -- new article by Reservoirhill (talk · contribs), nom. by PFHLai (talk) 01:58, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sir Michael Sachs was the first English solicitor to become a High Court judge, appointed in 1993? (this is the headline fact in both of the obituaries in the references section) -- One pound (talk) 21:15, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article lacks inline cites. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 15:35, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- As the original poster pointed out, the fact is in the title of both obits, which I've now brought into the article and added official records of apopintment 9those these don't particualrly mention the solicitor side of things). David Underdown (talk) 16:50, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Article lacks inline cites. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 15:35, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that socialite Hazel Crane's posthumous memoirs revealed her secret criminal career, including smuggling emeralds out of South Africa in her beehive hairdo and her baby's nappy? ~ Article by Teatreez; nominated by Hassocks5489 (tickets please!) 12:44, 23 September 2008 (UTC). Article rescued from speedy deletion and suitably referenced. Not sure if "diaper" or "nappy" is preferred.
- ... that James W. Cannon gave a complete solution for John Milnor's "double suspension" problem? article by Nsk92 (talk · contribs), nom by Royalbroil (talk · contribs). A great new articles on mathematicians are very hard to find - what a find! We should make a strong attempt to get this article on DYK, switching to another fact if there's issues with this fact. Royalbroil 04:13, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- I agree we need some maths articles but I found this hard going and tricky to find (and understand) stuff in the public domain. However I would suggest a hook could be written about cannon helping to explain the shape of trees using this which is more approachable. Thought: If the author could write an into to the maths (even if it was OR - ish) then that would be good. Hope this helps Victuallers (talk) 08:22, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- (ALT) ... that James W. Cannon wrote a research paper that speculated on the large-scale growth patterns of biological organisms such as trees? Royalbroil 18:12, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- (Another ALT) ... that a paper co-written by a mathematician James W. Cannon suggested that the "negatively curved" nature of microscopic growth laws of biological organisms is responsible for such macroscopic phenomena as the highly folded and highly connected structure of the brain tissue? Nsk92 (talk) 02:00, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- This version is a 274 character hook. Art LaPella (talk) 04:31, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- (Revised) ... that James W. Cannon co-wrote a paper suggesting that the "negatively curved" nature of microscopic growth laws of bio-organisms is responsible for the highly folded structure of the brain tissue? Nsk92 (talk) 11:48, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Mario Lemieux became the only rookie in National Hockey League all-star history to win game MVP honours at the 1985 All-Star Game? Resolute 01:06, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Date and ref are good; text exclusive of infobox, box score, and refs < 1500 chars. Kablammo (talk) 12:45, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ahh yes, that would be a problem. I've expanded the article, and according to Microsoft Word, the body of the article, minus the box score, infobox, refs and lead should be over 1700 characters now. I will look to try and further expand before it would come up for the main page, just in case. Resolute 23:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Now 2404 characters. Art LaPella (talk) 01:51, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- And therefore now fine. Kablammo (talk) 02:04, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Ahh yes, that would be a problem. I've expanded the article, and according to Microsoft Word, the body of the article, minus the box score, infobox, refs and lead should be over 1700 characters now. I will look to try and further expand before it would come up for the main page, just in case. Resolute 23:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Date and ref are good; text exclusive of infobox, box score, and refs < 1500 chars. Kablammo (talk) 12:45, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Hall of Famers Don Drysdale and Don Sutton each made 7 Opening Day starts for the Los Angeles Dodgers (home field pictured) since the Dodgers moved to Los Angeles in 1958? -- new article self-nom by Rlendog (talk) 00:29, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that The City Sun, a black-owned newspaper, told David Dinkins, New York City's first African American mayor, that he was "beginning to look like a wimp"? (self nom) — [[::User:Malik Shabazz|Malik Shabazz]] ([[::User talk:Malik Shabazz|talk]] · [[::Special:Contributions/Malik Shabazz|contribs]]) 00:05, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that two weeks before 1964 bombings of the United States Embassy in Libreville, Gabon (pictured), the country had undergone an abortive coup d'etat which overthrew its president, Leon M'ba? New article by Your friend Eddy of the wiki[citation needed] 23:58, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Vladas Česiūnas was demoted from his customs agent position in the Soviet Union to teaching at a children's sports school after his 1979 West German defection (and subsequent return to the USSR) to avoid Soviet embarrassment prior to the 1980 Summer Olympics in Moscow? (self-nom) Chris (talk) 21:45, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- This version is a 274 character hook. Art LaPella (talk) 22:04, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- (Revised) *... that Vladas Česiūnas was demoted to teaching at a children's sports school after his failed 1979 West German defection to avoid Soviet embarrassment prior to the 1980 Summer Olympics in Moscow? Chris (talk) 23:13, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that flatwater canoer Vladas Česiūnas was the only one of four defectors from the Soviet Union in late 1979 to return to the USSR? (self-nom) Chris (talk) 21:48, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that flatwater canoer Vladas Česiūnas was forcibly returned by the KGB from West Germany to the Soviet Union out of fear that he would publish a book on doping in the USSR prior to the 1980 Summer Olympics in Moscow? (self-nom) Chris (talk) 21:56, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Hurricane Joyce was forecast to become a tropical storm six hours before it dissipated? (An alternative would be ... that Hurricane Joyce dissipated unexpectedly? but the first one makes it clear why the dissipation was unexpected. This is a self-nomination) Miss Madeline | Talk to Madeline 21:39, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Menlo Avenue Historic District in Los Angeles reflects the transition to American Craftsman style architecture (example pictured)? more than five-fold expansion, self-nom by Cbl62 (talk) 19:51, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- While the cited statements refer to individual properties rather than the district as a whole, the hook is literally true, and a fair statement for the district in light of the number of individual properties which are stated to show transitional features. Date and size OK, source accepted on good faith. Kablammo (talk) 22:16, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Hyman Golden was co-founder and chairman of Snapple, which got its name from one of its early products, a carbonated apple juice that had a "snapply apple taste"? -- new article, self-nom by Alansohn (talk) 19:16, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that George Ashley Campbell decided to use loading coils for improving telephone line quality only after he realized that the manholes were the right distance apart to allow this cheaper solution? major expansion (note histmerge tag requested) self-nom by SpinningSpark 19:10, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Farhad Reza, along with 12 other Bangladeshi cricketers, was banned from playing for 10 years after joining the Dhaka Warriors team in the unauthorised Indian Cricket League? --(Farhad Reza expanded 5-fold by User:Nev1; Dhaka Warriors created by User:Redgwan and User:Nev1) double nom by Nev1 (talk) 18:34, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Louis Timothee became the first public librarian in the United States of America? new article, self nominated by --Doug Coldwell talk 16:43, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Good article, is the reference a personal website or blog? Kablammo (talk) 22:47, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Reference is: Hudson, p. 41 Louis Timothee had served as the first librarian of America's first public library. See Bibliography. --Doug Coldwell talk 21:43, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Good article, is the reference a personal website or blog? Kablammo (talk) 22:47, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Britain's Heather Fell, the 2008 Olympic silver medallist in modern pentathlon, had to work three part-time jobs in order to fund her training? -- fivefold exspansion and selfnom by Basement12 (T.C) 14:39, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Pls mention the country. --74.12.122.145 (talk) 16:18, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Done, reworded it to avoid 3 consecutive wikilinks as well. Basement12 (T.C) 16:46, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- All good. Kablammo (talk) 22:51, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that former Thai Minister of Education M.L. Pin Malakul created a slide rule for calculating the day of week of any given date despite being required to study Sanskrit rather than mathematics? -- new article self-nom by Paul_012 (talk) 13:48, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Sydney Deane, who narrowly missed representing Australia in cricket, was the first Australian to appear in a Hollywood movie? --Roisterer (talk) 11:43, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Added some wikilinks. --74.12.122.145 (talk) 16:18, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the derelict brig Polly drifted over six months and more than 2,000 miles across the Atlantic with its stranded crew? (new article, self-nomination) --User:Tradermort (User talk:Tradermort) 04:34, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Interesting article. But "stranded" means washed ashore (at least in a nautical context), which is not what happened here. The footnote to the print resource links to a Google books entry for a different book (also cited elsewhere in article). More comments on talk page of article. Kablammo (talk) 09:35, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- I italicised the ship's name. --74.12.122.145 (talk) 16:18, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- References fixed. How about:
- ... that the damaged and demasted brig Polly drifted over six months and more than 2,000 miles across the Atlantic with its surviving crew? Tradermort (User talk:Tradermort) 17:04, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- References fixed. How about:
- ... that fifty-seven different pitchers have started for the New York Yankees on Opening Day? (new article, self-nom) --Mr.crabby (Talk) 03:01, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tang Dynasty general Zhu Ci, angry that he was removed from command due to his brother Zhu Tao's rebellion, later tried to become emperor of his own state of Qin? (self-nomination) --Nlu (talk) 00:33, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that reforms enacted by Eleftherios Venizelos after the 1909 Goudi coup helped bring him to power largely forestalled the development of strong socialist and agrarian movements then seen elsewhere in the Balkans? -- (see bottom of this page for verification) self-nom by Biruitorul Talk 06:38, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- .. that the Swaminarayan Temple in the London suburb of Willesden was actually a church which was converted into a temple? -- self-nom by Around The Globeसत्यमेव जयते 15:48, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Instructions of Shuruppak, first attested in a tablet from Abu Salabikh, has been called "the most significant piece of wisdom literature in Sumerian"? (double DYK, self-nom Wetman (talk) 16:23, 21 September 2008 (UTC))
- ... that, in his first season as the Arizona Diamondbacks manager, Bob Brenly led his team to the World Series?--LAAFansign review 19:38, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Canadian Alternative Dance band Ubiquitous Synergy Seeker is currently working on their first full-length album with renowned American mastering engineer Bob Ludwig? -- new article self-nom by Marchije (talk) 01:05, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- I don't know if Canadian bands use British plurals, but "is" should match "their" in grammatical number. That is, either "is" and "its", or "are" and "their". Art LaPella (talk) 04:31, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Good point. How 'bout:... that the members of Canadian Alternative Dance band Ubiquitous Synergy Seeker are currently working on their first full-length album with renowned American mastering engineer Bob Ludwig?
- I don't know if Canadian bands use British plurals, but "is" should match "their" in grammatical number. That is, either "is" and "its", or "are" and "their". Art LaPella (talk) 04:31, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- That sounds better to me than "...Ubiquitous Synergy Seeker is currently working on it's first full-length album..."; don't you agree? (LOL, they're playing them on the radio as I type this!) Marchije (talk) 07:16, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Either sounds OK to me, assuming "it's" becomes "its". Art LaPella (talk) 22:17, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- That sounds better to me than "...Ubiquitous Synergy Seeker is currently working on it's first full-length album..."; don't you agree? (LOL, they're playing them on the radio as I type this!) Marchije (talk) 07:16, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Alternate:... that the members of the Canadian Alternative Dance band Ubiquitous Synergy Seeker met while stocking the beer fridge at a golf course? Marchije (talk) 01:05, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
Expiring noms
Articles created/expanded on September 20
- ... that J. Clarence Karcher invented the reflection seismograph, and founded Geophysical Service Incorporated, which was later sold and renamed as Texas Instruments? -- new article by User:Starrymessenger, nom by Alansohn (talk) 06:47, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT: ... that J. Clarence Karcher founded Geophysical Service Incorporated to use his reflection seismograph invention to search for oil, a firm that was later sold and renamed as Texas Instruments? -- new article by User:Starrymessenger, nom by Alansohn (talk) 06:47, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length, date, and reference for both hooks verified. I prefer the first one because its more concise and a lot more clearer. Also, should the article be renamed to John Clarence Karcher? Cunard (talk) 03:53, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Bill Laxton was the winning pitcher in the first game ever won by the Seattle Mariners, a come-from-behind, 7–6 win over the California Angels? -- new article by User:Dewelar, expansion and nom by Alansohn (talk) 06:32, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length and date are okay, but the references in the article do not say that he was the winning pitcher. Cunard (talk) 03:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the papal election, 1159 resulted in a papal schism, which lasted until 1178? sel-nom by CarlosPn (talk 13:05, 21 September 2008 (CET)
- How about just "resulted in a papal schism" (as many would associate "the" Papal Schism with what Wikipedia calls the Western Schism)? Kablammo (talk) 11:55, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- "outbreak"? You make papal schism sounds like an infectious disease... :) --74.12.122.145 (talk) 16:26, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
That Mysterious Rag
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- ... that T.S. Eliot's poem "The Waste Land" parodies the lyrics of the Irving Berlin & Ted Snyder song "That Mysterious Rag"? (self-nom) DurovaCharge! 08:21, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length and date verified, but the reference doesn't mention "That Mysterious Rag" at all. Cunard (talk) 04:19, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- My bad; the wrong source had been linked in that citation. It's fixed now. The source states "That Mysterious Rag", one of Irving Berlin's earliest successes, was still popular in the early 1920s. Eliot's parody of it pushes the tense little dramatic dialogue over the edge… and quotes both the song and the poem for comparison. DurovaCharge! 08:25, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Lombard duke Euin had to twice defend the Duchy of Trent from the Franks, in 584 by battle and in 591 by diplomacy? nominated by Srnec (talk) 05:09, 21 September 2008 (UTC), but created by User:Steve Cobb
Length, history and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 14:13, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Andrew Rebori earned a bachelor's degree from the Armour Institute of Technology in 1911? Article by Jarvishunt, nom by --Gwib (talk) 22:02, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Of itself, not very interesting. Perhaps identify him as an architect, name a well-known project, or childhood friendship with Al Smith. Kablammo (talk) 23:40, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Haha! Philestine! :P. ALT ... that Andrew Rebori once referred to modern buildings as "steel and glass upside-down cakes"?Article by Jarvishunt, nom by --Gwib (talk) 22:02, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Of itself, not very interesting. Perhaps identify him as an architect, name a well-known project, or childhood friendship with Al Smith. Kablammo (talk) 23:40, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Michael P.C. Carns, who was the Vice Chief of Staff of the United States Air Force from 1991–94, received numerous military awards and decorations such as the Silver Star? new article by AdjustShift (talk) 20:15, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- The hook would be more interesting if it said why he got the Silver Star, or some other notable fact (MBA with 200 combat missions?). And the article would be improved if it did not track the structure and phrasing of its (cited) primary source so closely. Kablammo (talk) 23:53, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- I couldn't find the main reason why Carns got the Silver Star. But I believe that the Silver Star makes the hook interesting because the Silver Star is the third highest military decoration that can be awarded to a member of any branch of the US Armed Forces. And I've changed the structure of some sentences. I don't think the bio track the structure and phrasing of its primary source. In fact, the bio describes something that its primary source doesn't describe – the life of Carns after his retirement from the US Air Force in 1994. AdjustShift (talk) 20:35, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- The hook would be more interesting if it said why he got the Silver Star, or some other notable fact (MBA with 200 combat missions?). And the article would be improved if it did not track the structure and phrasing of its (cited) primary source so closely. Kablammo (talk) 23:53, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Theresa Elmendorf was the first woman president of the American Library Association? new article, self nominated by --Doug Coldwell talk 19:57, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the uniform of the Union Army during the United States Civil War was influenced hugely by the French army, to an extent where some regiments wore zouave uniforms? Article by LGF1992UK (talk · contribs), self nom, created today
- ... that the Duke of Connaught, son of Queen Victoria, laid the foundation stone in 1888 for the Fateh Sagar Lake in Udaipur? x5 expansion by --Nvvchar (talk) 12:53, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- wikified and shortened with tweaks by Victuallers (talk) 15:43, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Presumably the foundation stone was for the dam which impounded the lake, was it not? Kablammo (talk) 21:14, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- There was an old earthen dam which got washed away and the new dam was built to create the reservoir which is called the Fateh Sagar Lake, named after Maharana Fateh Singh, as mentioned in the article.--Nvvchar (talk) 01:23, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Presumably the foundation stone was for the dam which impounded the lake, was it not? Kablammo (talk) 21:14, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Fateh Sagar Lake was re-created in 1888 by re-constructing an earlier earth dam which got washed away?--Nvvchar (talk) 02:18, 23 September 2008 (UTC)A revised Hook for consideration
- } Length, reference and history verified. Daniel Case (talk) 14:05, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Kobe Bryant holds the record for the youngest basketball player to score 20,000 points in the National Basketball Association? -- K. Annoyomous24[c] 07:00, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Myna Potts, an historical preservationist from West Texas, converted her father's former general store into a museum dedicated to rural people of the recent past?--self-nom Billy Hathorn (talk) 04:23, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Length and date verified but the article doesn't seem to say that Myna Potts turned her father's general store into a museum. Cunard (talk) 04:35, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Note: I clarified the point by explaining that Potts turned the general store into a museum in both the text and the footnote.Billy Hathorn (talk) 04:42, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Tolantongo resort located near Ixmiquilpan in Hidalgo state Mexico is a cooperative set up to preserve ejido communal land for the families that own it? Thelmadatter (talk) 16:11, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
- Can't verify due to poor footnote formatting. Daniel Case (talk) 14:03, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 19
- ... that Helga Vlahović was picked, along with Oliver Mlakar, to host the 1990 Eurovision Song Contest in Zagreb following Yugoslavia's win at the 1989 contest? Article created by user:Mike Halterman, nominated by Grk1011/Stephen (talk) 16:37, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Sources verify that she was the co-hostess but say nothing about Yugoslavia being picked to host as a result of winning the year before. Daniel Case (talk) 14:02, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- That is one of the rules of the contest, but I'll track down a source for it. Grk1011/Stephen (talk) 14:28, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Good to go. I added a source for the winner hosting the following year and have also sectioned the article to make it look nicer. Grk1011/Stephen (talk) 14:44, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- That is one of the rules of the contest, but I'll track down a source for it. Grk1011/Stephen (talk) 14:28, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that the Vihar Lake, largest in Mumbai, to meet the urgent drinking water needs, was built in 1860 when John Lord Elphinstone was the Governor.--Nvvchar (talk) 12:50, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in 1860, when John, Lord Elphinstone was Governor of Madras, the Vihar Lake, largest in Mumbai, was built to meet the urgent drinking-water needs.
- ... that Vihar Lake, the largest in Mumbai, was built in 1860 when John, Lord Elphinstone was Governor of Madras, to meet urgent drinking-water needs? Art LaPella (talk) 19:00, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in 1860, when John, Lord Elphinstone was Governor of Madras, the Vihar Lake, largest in Mumbai, was built to meet the urgent drinking-water needs.
- It seems strange to say one "built" a lake. Kablammo (talk) 21:23, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Mention of the Governor's name is only to emphasise that it was during his rule as Governor of India that the Vihar Lake, the most needed water supply facility for Bombay (Mumbai) was built.--Nvvchar (talk) 01:32, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, it can be chnaged. Not an issue.
- I feel that the term "created" is more appropriate than "built" -RavichandarMy coffee shop 13:14, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Mention of the Governor's name is only to emphasise that it was during his rule as Governor of India that the Vihar Lake, the most needed water supply facility for Bombay (Mumbai) was built.--Nvvchar (talk) 01:32, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- It seems strange to say one "built" a lake. Kablammo (talk) 21:23, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Vihar Lake, the largest in Mumbai, was created in 1860 when John, Lord Elphinstone was Governor of Madras, to meet urgent drinking-water needs? Hook reworded--Nvvchar (talk) 02:05, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- I have a doubt here. The hook states that John Elphinstone was the Governor of Madras in 1860. The Vihar Lake is situated in Mumbai. The Governor of Madras had no jurisdiction over Mumbai. So how come are the two related?-RavichandarMy coffee shop 08:51, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- Refrences quoted in the article mention only about the Governor John Elphinston and not about where he was posted in 1860. He may have been holding additonal charge of the Bombay province also at that time. The name of Madras was suggested by User:Art LaPella as a comment on the Hook. I have therefore shortened the hook to just state as under.
- ... that Vihar Lake, the largest in Mumbai, was created in 1860?--Nvvchar (talk) 04:54, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- That version is fine (after I added the question mark), but I didn't suggest the name of Madras. Madras was first mentioned in the version that starts "that in 1860...", which isn't mine. I simply rearranged that version. Art LaPella (talk) 06:50, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- Fine. The Wikipedia article on Lord Elphinstone suggests that he was the Governor of Bombay in 1860. Lord Elphinstone was Governor of Madras sometime prior to being appointed as Governor of Bombay. There hasn't been any record of a Governor in British India having been in-charge of the administration of two Presidencies at the same time, though.-RavichandarMy coffee shop 10:46, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- That version is fine (after I added the question mark), but I didn't suggest the name of Madras. Madras was first mentioned in the version that starts "that in 1860...", which isn't mine. I simply rearranged that version. Art LaPella (talk) 06:50, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- I have a doubt here. The hook states that John Elphinstone was the Governor of Madras in 1860. The Vihar Lake is situated in Mumbai. The Governor of Madras had no jurisdiction over Mumbai. So how come are the two related?-RavichandarMy coffee shop 08:51, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that Vihar Lake, the largest in Mumbai, was created in 1860 when John, Lord Elphinstone was Governor of Madras, to meet urgent drinking-water needs? Hook reworded--Nvvchar (talk) 02:05, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ... that in the 1960s, Toby Philpott, who controlled the "Hutt puppet" in Return of the Jedi, became involved with a youth movement that rose with the end of the British Empire? Article by Hunter Kahn, nom by --Gwib (talk) 05:27, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT ... that Toby Philpott learned stage management and other "techie stuff" at the Melkweg music venue and cultural center in Amsterdam?Article by Hunter Kahn, nom by --Gwib (talk) 05:27, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
- Neither of these hooks are terribly interesting. The first one basically says that, like thousands of baby-boomers in Western culture, he did the whole late-1960s thing. The second ... well, everyone has to learn the job somewhere. Is there something else we can use? Daniel Case (talk) 13:52, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- OK, how about:
- ... that Jabba The Hutt puppeteer Toby Philpott began his career by juggling in the streets of London while he was homeless? Daniel Case (talk) 13:56, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- OK, how about:
- Neither of these hooks are terribly interesting. The first one basically says that, like thousands of baby-boomers in Western culture, he did the whole late-1960s thing. The second ... well, everyone has to learn the job somewhere. Is there something else we can use? Daniel Case (talk) 13:52, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on September 18
- ... that Bristol Virginia Utilities is a leader in technology with its fiber-optic broadband network? New article by Zopheus, nomination by --Gwib (talk) 19:22, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT ... that Bristol Virginia Utilities has approximately 577 miles of distribution lines and 29 miles of transmission lines in their electric system? New article by Zopheus, nomination by --Gwib (talk) 19:22, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT ... that a system known as Passive Optical Network (PON) was successfully deployed to over 6000 customers in a matter of two years by Bristol Virginia Utilities? New article by Zopheus, nomination by --Gwib (talk) 19:22, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT ... that Bristol Virginia Utilities has approximately 577 miles of distribution lines and 29 miles of transmission lines in their electric system? New article by Zopheus, nomination by --Gwib (talk) 19:22, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- The third and particularly first versions ('leader in technology') sound a little promotional to be on the main page, while the second is sourced only to the company's own website. I'd welcome a second opinion though, or perhaps there's a more neutral-sounding and independently sourced fact we can use? Olaf Davis | Talk 15:11, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT ... that the wastewater treatment plant of Bristol Virginia Utilities is jointly owned and operated by the City of Bristol, Tennessee?New article by Zopheus, nomination by --Gwib (talk) 17:55, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- Nice hook, but that's also sourced to the company's website. Olaf Davis | Talk 09:15, 26 September 2008 (UTC)
- ALT ... that the wastewater treatment plant of Bristol Virginia Utilities is jointly owned and operated by the City of Bristol, Tennessee?New article by Zopheus, nomination by --Gwib (talk) 17:55, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
- The third and particularly first versions ('leader in technology') sound a little promotional to be on the main page, while the second is sourced only to the company's own website. I'd welcome a second opinion though, or perhaps there's a more neutral-sounding and independently sourced fact we can use? Olaf Davis | Talk 15:11, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
See also
- User:AlexNewArtBot/GoodSearchResult – This is an automated list of promising new articles generated by AlexNewArtBot (talk · contribs · logs).