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:* As creator of the article and the hooks, I would prefer ALT2 as I think it is more interesting to readers and serve its function as a hook better. Also I have removed the word "must" as it is not mentioned in the article. --<nowiki>:</nowiki>[[User:Raphaelmak|Raphaelmak]]<nowiki>: [</nowiki>[[User_talk:Raphaelmak|talk]]<nowiki>] [</nowiki>[[Special:Contributions/User:Raphaelmak|contribs]]<nowiki>]</nowiki> 08:58, 24 June 2009 (UTC) |
:* As creator of the article and the hooks, I would prefer ALT2 as I think it is more interesting to readers and serve its function as a hook better. Also I have removed the word "must" as it is not mentioned in the article. --<nowiki>:</nowiki>[[User:Raphaelmak|Raphaelmak]]<nowiki>: [</nowiki>[[User_talk:Raphaelmak|talk]]<nowiki>] [</nowiki>[[Special:Contributions/User:Raphaelmak|contribs]]<nowiki>]</nowiki> 08:58, 24 June 2009 (UTC) |
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:[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|18px]] Both hooks sourced to foreign language refs accepted in good faith. I prefer ALT2, it is frankly more interesting to me that students have to take boats to school than that they are drug addicts. However, I would not recommend use of the image unless more context is given to it in the caption. It looks sufficiently unlike any other college I've ever seen that it could serve to confuse readers. In other words, the caption and/or article need to explain why the image looks more like a garage than a college. [[User:Geraldk|Geraldk]] ([[User talk:Geraldk|talk]]) 03:13, 25 June 2009 (UTC) |
:[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|18px]] Both hooks sourced to foreign language refs accepted in good faith. I prefer ALT2, it is frankly more interesting to me that students have to take boats to school than that they are drug addicts. However, I would not recommend use of the image unless more context is given to it in the caption. It looks sufficiently unlike any other college I've ever seen that it could serve to confuse readers. In other words, the caption and/or article need to explain why the image looks more like a garage than a college. [[User:Geraldk|Geraldk]] ([[User talk:Geraldk|talk]]) 03:13, 25 June 2009 (UTC) |
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::Oh, the explanation is that the campus was converted from a pig farm. I have just added that to the caption of the image above, and the article in the "campus" section with reference. Thanks --<nowiki>:</nowiki>[[User:Raphaelmak|Raphaelmak]]<nowiki>: [</nowiki>[[User_talk:Raphaelmak|talk]]<nowiki>] [</nowiki>[[Special:Contributions/User:Raphaelmak|contribs]]<nowiki>]</nowiki> 03:35, 25 June 2009 (UTC) |
::*Oh, the explanation is that the campus was converted from a pig farm. I have just added that to the caption of the image above, and the article in the "campus" section with reference. Thanks --<nowiki>:</nowiki>[[User:Raphaelmak|Raphaelmak]]<nowiki>: [</nowiki>[[User_talk:Raphaelmak|talk]]<nowiki>] [</nowiki>[[Special:Contributions/User:Raphaelmak|contribs]]<nowiki>]</nowiki> 03:35, 25 June 2009 (UTC) |
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Candidate entries
Articles created/expanded on June 25
New Mexico School for the Blind and Visually Impaired
- ... that the New Mexico School for the Blind and Visually Impaired covers nearly ninety percent of its operating expenses from income from lands held in trust for it by the State Land Office?
Created by Uncia (talk). Self nom at 03:16, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
From a Buick 6
- ... that Bob Dylan's song "From a Buick 6" borrowed some lyrics from the 1930 Sleepy John Estes song "Milk Cow Blues"?
5x expanded by Rlendog (talk). Self nom at 02:04, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 24
John Callaway (journalist)
- ... that John Callaway created the award-winning news program Chicago Tonight and was awarded 10 honorary doctorates, despite being a college dropout who hitchhiked to Chicago with 71 cents in his pocket?
Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 03:17, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Queens Borough Hall
- ... that some 9,000 weddings a year are held in Queens Borough Hall in New York City, with Friday as the most popular day?
Created by Wasted Time R (talk). Self nom at 02:24, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Urban biosphere reserve
- ... that Brighton and Hove (Queen's Park pictured) is bidding to become the world's first urban biosphere reserve?
Created by Chanakal (talk). Self nom at 01:05, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Wołów bank robbery
- ...that Wołów bank robbery was the biggest bank robbery in the history of the People's Republic of Poland? self nom by Tymek (talk) 00:42, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Comment. All sources are Polish, I have been trying to find some English ones, but I have not found any. This is not a controversial article, so I hope it is OK. Tymek (talk) 00:42, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Virginia Zucchi
- ... that ballerina Virginia Zucchi once performed an entire solo en pointe?
Created by Wizardman. Self nom at 23:48, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
HMS Canopus (1798)
- ... that HMS Canopus (pictured) served for less than six months for the French Navy, and then for 89 years for the Royal Navy?
Created by Benea (talk). Self nom at 22:07, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Strandgaten, Bergen
- ... that the house where Edvard Grieg grew up, located in the street Strandgaten, was destroyed when the steam trawler Voorbode exploded in 1944?
Created by Aqwis (talk), Rettetast (talk). Self nom at 22:02, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
The Voyage that Shook the World
- ... that Peter J. Bowler complained that he was interviewed under false pretenses for The Voyage that Shook the World, a creationist documentary about the life Charles Darwin and his voyage on the Beagle?
Created by JoshuaZ (talk) and Voyaging1 (talk). Nominated by User:JoshuaZ (User talk:JoshuaZ) at 21:16, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Complications of hypertension
- ... that untreated persistent hypertension can lead to serious complications, such as dementia, strokes, renal failure, and heart failure?
Created by Madhero88 (talk). Self nom at 21:10, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Shin-Yakushi-ji`
- ... that eleven of the Twelve Heavenly Generals at Shin-Yakushi-ji temple in Nara, Japan, are made of clay and date to the 8th century while the statue of Haira is wooden and was made in 1931?
Created by Bamse (talk). Self nom at 20:43, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
It Takes a Lot to Laugh, It Takes a Train to Cry
- ... that "It Takes a Lot to Laugh, It Takes a Train to Cry" was the final song of Bob Dylan's controversial electric set at the 1965 Newport Folk Festival?
5x expanded by Rlendog (talk). Self nom at 20:30, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Samarkand clan
- ... that the Samarkand clan's main rival in Uzbekistan is the Tashkent clan?
Created by Bsimmons666 (talk). Self nom at 20:21, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Anna Turner (producer)
- ... that producer Anna Turner, co-host of Hearts of Space as "Annamystic", reportedly communicated with a spirit named Lazaris?
- ALT1:... that producer Anna Turner, before starting Hearts of Space with Stephen Hill, was "Information Director and Tape Librarian" for a San Francisco art center?
- ALT2:... that producer Anna Turner was instrumental in getting Stephen Hill's radio show Hearts of Space nationally syndicated?
Created by Ekans (talk). Self nom at 18:33, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Karine Ruby
- ... that while training to become a mountain guide, former Olympic snowboarding gold medalist Karine Ruby was killed in a climbing accident on Mont Blanc?
5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 18:09, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Sociology in China
- ... that sociology in China was repressed during the early communist era as a bourgeois pseudoscience?
Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 17:36, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Allen Steckle
- ... that medical doctor A.C. Steckle (pictured) gained fame coaching the University of Nevada, a school with only 80 students, to a 1903 victory over the University of California football team?
5x expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 15:10, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Dan Lungu
- ... that the works of Romanian sociologist and novelist Dan Lungu refer to concealed communist-era phenomena, such as the working class practice of stealing state property?
Created by Dahn (talk). Self nom at 13:18, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- To speed this up, since I realize a reviewer may find it difficult to follow: there are several citations and/or quotes for this - and, yes, the sources for them are all in Romanian. The hook subject is detailed specifically in the paragraph about Povestirile vieţii, which is a work of sociology, and again in the main one about Raiul găinilor and the second one about Sînt o babă comunistă!, which are works of fiction. References 12, 15, 18 and 22 in this version. Dahn (talk) 13:25, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Hematological Cancer Research Investment and Education Act
- ... that the Hematological Cancer Research Investment and Education Act names programs after Representatives Joe Moakley, who died of myelodysplastic syndrome, and Geraldine Ferraro, who has multiple myeloma?
Created by Wasted Time R (talk). Self nom at 12:58, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Paul Biegel
- ... that Dutch children's writer Paul Biegel wrote comics for Marten Toonder before publishing his first novel?
created by IP 194.109.232.171 (in 2003!), 5x expanded by Fram. Nominated by Fram (talk) at 11:39, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Expansion was primarily addition of a bibliography. MovieMadness (talk) 13:42, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Please compare the actual text (intro plus (now biography)) from the version before I expanded to now: [1]. The whole article is expanded *8, but the biographical part is expanded relatively even more. It went (in my count) from 177 characters to 1891 characters, or a *10 expansion. Fram (talk) 14:37, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Agreed. It passes DYKcheck, which doesn't count the bibliography. Art LaPella (talk) 21:23, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
George McTurnan Kahin
- ... that George McTurnan Kahin was expelled by Dutch authorities while conducting research in Indonesia for his dissertation on the country's struggle for independence?
Created by Arsonal (talk). Self nom at 11:19, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- No problems, ready for DYK MovieMadness (talk) 13:43, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Federico Romero
- ... that Federico Romero (pictured) who wrote the libretti for two of the most famous zarzuelas of the 20th century, Doña Francisquita and Luisa Fernanda, worked for 10 years as a telegraphist?
- ALT 1 ... that the Spanish poet and librettist, Federico Romero (pictured), was originally a mining engineer?
- Comment: The article was created on 21 June 2009 with 343 characters by User:AlbertHerring (to whom credit should also go) and expanded to 3586 characters (excluding notes and lists) by User:Voceditenore on 24 June 2009.
5x expanded by Voceditenore (talk). Self nom at 09:41, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- No problems, either one is ready for DYK MovieMadness (talk) 13:45, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Rainier Club
- ... that Seattle's Rainier Club (pictured) hosted Gifford Pinchot on the trip that led to the creation of the United States Forest Service and Mount Rainier National Park? - Jmabel | Talk Self-nom at 06:58, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Cawston Road Mill, Aylsham
Created by Mjroots (talk). Self nom at 06:49, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Norske Intelligenz-Seddeler
- ... that Norske Intelligenz-Seddeler (1763–1920) was the first newspaper in Norway?
Created by Oceanh (talk). Self nom at 00:17, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Foreign language hook accepted in good faith. You may want to clarify some of the information in the third paragraph - it isn't entirely clear. Geraldk (talk) 00:50, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review and for improvements to the article. I have tried to clarify parts of the third paragraph, as suggested. Oceanh (talk) 23:43, 24 June 2009 (UTC).
- I have always thought that while N.I-S was Norway's oldest periodical publication, the oldest newspaper was Adresseavisen. That said, two of the sources verify the hook, so I guess that trumps my original research. decltype (talk) 01:54, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 23
Johannes Klingenberg Sejersted
- ... that Johannes Klingenberg Sejersted, who created a military defence plan for Norway somewhat before its 1814 independence declaration, drew experience from an 1808 campaign by Christian August of Augustenborg?
Created by Punkmorten (talk). Self nom at 23:36, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
History of South African wine
- ... that Jan van Riebeeck (pictured) established the first vineyards in South Africa to help Dutch East India Company sailors ward off scurvy while traveling the spice route?
- Comment: FN#1 & FN#2 in lead as well as Vintage FN#4 & Domaine FN#4 refs in the "Settlement of the Cape of Good Hope" section
Created by Agne27 (talk). Self nom at 21:13, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Bagassa
- ... that the leaves of young Bagassa guianensis trees are so different from those of the adults that taxonomists considered them to be different species for at least 150 years?
Created by Guettarda (talk). Self nom at 18:46, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Mass drug administration
- ... that although mass drug administration was linked to the emergence of drug resistance, the WHO committee on malaria recommended it?
Created by Lseidlein (talk). Nominated by BorgQueen (talk) at 02:16, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
J. B. Milam
- ... that Cherokee Chief J. B. Milam funded an expedition to Mexico in 1939 to find the grave of Sequoyah, the inventor of the Cherokee writing system?
5x expanded by Uyvsdi (talk). Self nom at 00:30, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Off-line hook ref accepted in good faith. May want to clarify in the article what a Dawes Roll number is. Geraldk (talk) 00:57, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Mass of Saint Gregory
- ... that the earliest known Christian work of art made in the New World is an Aztec feather painting of 1539 (pictured) of the Mass of Saint Gregory?
Created by Johnbod (talk). Self nom at 00:27, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Length and date verified. However, I cannot find the hook in the article. Please point it out. —Mattisse (Talk) 01:12, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Article states, "The oldest Christian work of art surviving from the New World is an Aztec feather painting of the Mass..." MovieMadness (talk) 13:50, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the earliest dated Aztec feather painting is an image of 1539 (pictured) of the Mass of Saint Gregory?
- or
- ALT2: ... that some prints of the Mass of Saint Gregory claimed to offer indulgences of up to 45,000 years? (there is an alt pic for this one) Johnbod (talk) 02:53, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Samuel Sutton
- ... that Samuel Sutton joined HMS Monarch as an able seaman in 1777, and twenty-one years later was commanding her as a flag captain?
Created by Benea (talk). Self nom at 23:50, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Amador Valley High School
- ... that Amador Valley High School is used as the launch point for the annual Pleasanton Holiday Parade?
5x expanded by Deltawk (talk). Self nom at 22:35, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that President George W. Bush has asked to meet personally with Amador Valley High School basketball player Kevin Laue? 5x expanded by Deltawk (talk). Self nom at 22:35, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Should the hook be "... that former President George W. Bush has asked to meet with ex-Amador Valley High School basketball player Kevin Laue?" —Ed (Talk • Contribs) 22:40, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Yes, that's better. Deltawk (talk) 22:49, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that Amador Valley High School's robotics team competes against 30 college teams as the only high school group in the International Autonomous Underwater Vehicle Competition? 5x expanded by Deltawk (talk). Self nom at 22:35, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Rolf Brahde
- ... that astronomer Rolf Brahde provided commentary for the 1969 moon landing on Norwegian television?
Created by Punkmorten (talk). Self nom at 22:21, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Frank Dasso, Wenatchee Chiefs
- ... that as GM of the Wenatchee Chiefs, Frank Dasso ran a 1953 promotion where fans could pay whatever they wanted for admission, with game profits exceeding those of any three games so far that season?
5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 21:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Maybe a stub for Wenatchee Chiefs, for more context? Punkmorten (talk) 22:21, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- I'll see if I can turn this into a double (no pun intended). Alansohn (talk) 05:36, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- A DYK-eligible article was created for the Wenatchee Chiefs. Alansohn (talk) 14:44, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Phineas and Ferb (video game)
- ... that despite being the creators of the series it was based on, Dan Povenmire (pictured) and Jeff "Swampy" Marsh had no part in the video game Phineas and Ferb?
Created by SuperFlash101 (talk). Self nom at 20:13, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Dan Povenmire (pictured) and Jeff "Swampy" Marsh had no involvement in the video game based on their television series? The Flash {talk} 20:13, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Two problems. First, the link doesn't seem to be working for the in-line citation on this hook. Second, the hook is stated differently here than in the article, where it says they 'had little information' about the game. That means something different from 'have no part'. Geraldk (talk) 11:50, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
It's working fine for me, I don't understand why it isn't for you. And, here, better worder:
- ALT2: ... that Dan Povenmire (pictured) and Jeff "Swampy" Marsh had nearly no involvement in the video game based on their television series?
Better? The Flash {talk} 15:09, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- The in-line citation link works fine for me also, assuming audio without video was intended (it could be mistaken for a dead link when nearly all of the screen goes white.) Art LaPella (talk) 21:23, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- That's true. GeraldK, is that what you found wrong? The Flash {talk} 22:42, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
City of Carlisle
- ... that the City of Carlisle is the largest city in England in terms of area, but is one of the smallest by population?
5x expanded by User:Jza84 (talk), Nev1 (talk). Self nom at 18:44, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Satan's Harvest Home
- ... that the 1749 pamphlet Satan's Harvest Home blamed influences from France and Italy for promoting effeminacy and homosexual contact among British gentlemen?
Created by Gonzonoir (talk). Self nom at 18:22, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- To speed life up for someone, this is cited in the Modern scholarship section (e.g. footnote 32). Gonzonoir (talk) 18:23, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- The hook is related to passages that say France and Italy were 'associated' and not 'blamed'. We either need more clarity on this in the article or a modification to the hook to more exactly reflect the sourced text. Geraldk (talk) 12:17, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- I've modified the article to make explicit what Haggerty's saying: his exact quote is "Throughout the C18th it was a commonplace that sodomy was imported from Italy and France". (Haggerty 2006, Queer Gothic, p66) Does that work? Gonzonoir (talk) 12:33, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Being LGBT-related, we might want to save this for June 28th too, as long as people are happy to commemorate Stonewall with a helping of 18th-century polemic. Gonzonoir (talk) 16:03, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Yeah, I think that clarification is adequate. And I agree with Gonzo that this should be saved for the Stonewall anniversary. Geraldk (talk) 02:26, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
The Moon is Blue
- ... that United Artists decided to release the 1953 film The Moon is Blue without a Motion Picture Production Code seal of approval when it was denied one by the Breen office?
5x expanded by LiteraryMaven (talk). Self nom at 17:13, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- 6988/2653 = 2.6x prose expansion. Please continue expanding. Shubinator (talk) 00:21, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- I disagree with Shubinator. Article was 633 words long prior to expansion and now stands at 1484. To expand the required "5x" would mean the article would have to be 3,165 words long. Should expansion include fluff and trivia and a lot of padding simply to qualify for DYK? I don't think so. Quality, not quantity, should count. The article was expanded considerably from a stub to nearly B class, is well-written, and now includes previously missing references. I think this is a fairly complete article as it stands now. MovieMadness (talk) 13:21, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- A perennial argument, but I can't remember the last time a nomination was approved for such reasons, without coming anywhere close to the numerical requirements. Please see F2 and K1. Art LaPella (talk) 21:23, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Agree with Shubinator and Art. This isn't close to 5k. The limit exists for a reason, otherwise any expansion would qualify an article for DYK, and I think we're backlogged enough already. Geraldk (talk) 02:21, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
De Iniusta Vexacione Willelmi Episcopi Primi
- ... that the 11th century medieval tractate De Iniusta Vexacione Willelmi Episcopi Primi is the first surviving detailed account of an English state-trial?
Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 15:17, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Looks good to go. BencherliteTalk 23:52, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Success Will Write Apocalypse Across the Sky
- ... that the extreme metal band Success Will Write Apocalypse Across the Sky took their name from the 1989 text "Apocalypse" by William S. Burroughs?
- ALT1:... that Success Will Write Apocalypse Across the Sky took their name from a text written by William S. Burroughs?
Created by Cannibaloki (talk). Self nom at 14:31, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Confirmed, prefer the first option, it provides more detail and is fully backed up by the two references on the applicable sentence. Geraldk (talk) 01:11, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Buildings of Jesus College, Oxford
- ... that the wooden panelling in the principal's lodgings, one of the buildings of Jesus College, Oxford, was said to have set "a new standard of luxury for the heads of colleges"?
Created by Bencherlite (talk). Self nom at 14:01, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Alt hook 1: ... that the reredos installed in 1864 in the chapel of Jesus College, Oxford (pictured) has been described variously as "handsome", "somewhat tawdry" and looking like "corned beef"?
- Alt hook 2: ... that eleven parts of the buildings of Jesus College, Oxford, including the chapel (pictured), the hall and a boundary wall, are listed buildings?
BencherliteTalk 14:01, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Duguetia tobagensis
- ... that Duguetia tobagensis, a small tree endemic to the island of Tobago, has only been collected three times since its original discovery in 1912?
Created by Guettarda (talk). Self nom at 05:14, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Astraeus hygrometricus, Astraeaceae
- ... that the false earthstar in the fungal family Astraeaceae (pictured) can open and close its rays in response to changes in humidity?
Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 05:04, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Matthias Bernegger
- ... that Matthias Bernegger in 1635 translated Galilei's Dialogo from Italian into Latin?
Created by Matthead (talk). Self nom at 00:55, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- 1072 characters of prose. Please expand to at least 1500. Shubinator (talk) 01:03, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Seattle Sounders FC
- ... that Seattle was repeatedly passed over for a Major League Soccer team since 1994 before finally getting an expansion team, Seattle Sounders FC, in 2007?
5x expanded by Skotywa (talk). Self nom at 08:27, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- (Alt)... that Drew Carey is part of the ownership group of the expansion Major League Soccer team Seattle Sounders FC?
- The article had 11076 characters of prose before expansion, and now is a little under 15k, much short of a 5x expansion. Shubinator (talk) 00:20, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 22
Gay Bowel Syndrome
- ... that symptoms of Gay Bowel Syndrome include abdominal pain, cramps, bloating, nausea, vomiting and diarrhea?
Created by Thisglad (talk). Nominated by BorgQueen (talk) at 02:28, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Needs about 400 more characters to meet size limit. Also, from the article, "The term "gay bowel syndrome" is currently considered obsolete, non-specific, and potentially derogatory." So perhaps we should use it in the hook as if it's an accepted medical term. — Jake Wartenberg 14:49, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Expanded. Alt: ... that Gay Bowel Syndrome is a largely obsolete, potentially derogatory medical term comprising symptoms including abdominal pain, bloating, nausea, vomiting and diarrhea? --BorgQueen (talk) 15:42, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Tidens Tegn, Rolf Thommessen
- ... that Rolf Thommessen edited the newspaper Tidens Tegn for more than twenty years, from 1917 to 1938?
Created by Oceanh (talk). Self nom at 20:58, 23 June 2009 (UTC) Punkmorten (talk) assisted with Rolf Thommessen.
Michel T. Halbouty
- ... that Michel T. Halbouty was a wildcatter who was credited with discovering more than 50 oil and gas fields, though he twice declared bankruptcy?
Created by Plazak (talk). Nominated by Clerks (talk) at 19:31, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Verified, although I would make sure that the information in the hook and some of the other tidbits in the lead that derive from the NYT obit are mentioned in the body of the article (with in-line citation) and not just in the lead. Geraldk (talk) 02:31, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Wayne L. Horvitz, Federal Mediation and Conciliation Service (USA)
- ... that as Director of the Federal Mediation and Conciliation Service, Wayne L. Horvitz played a major role in negotiating labor disputes ranging from coal strikes to musicians at the Metropolitan Opera?
- Comment: Note that the article for the Federal Mediation and Conciliation Service (USA) is a 5x expansion.
Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 17:09, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Wilsonville Memorial Park
- ... that Wilsonville Memorial Park is both the oldest and largest park in Wilsonville, Oregon, and includes a barn built in 1901 (pictured)?
Created by Aboutmovies (talk). Self nom at 06:32, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Artocarpeae
- ... that the Artocarpeae, one of the five subdivisions of the mulberry family, is best known as the tribe that includes the breadfruit and the jackfruit, two widespread tropical crops?
Created by Guettarda (talk). Self nom at 06:16, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Big twenty township
- ... that the Big Twenty Township is the second northern most point in the continental U.S., behind Angle Inlet, Minnesota?
Created by Sssss snake (talk). Nominated by 66.30.45.255 (talk) at 01:55, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- No it isn't. The western half of the U.S.–Canada border is mostly at 49 degrees north, and Big Twenty Township is about 47 1/2 degrees north. The article says "It is the northernmost township in the United States except for Angle Inlet, Minnesota, and parts of Alaska." But that isn't true either – although not every state has townships, North Dakota has townships and Minnesota has other townships near the Canadian border. The hook's reference in the article mentions only the northernmost point in Maine, not the U.S. Art LaPella (talk) 06:03, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Papal income tax
- ... that non-payment of papal income tax was punishable by excommunication?
Created by Savidan (talk). Self nom at 22:45, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
World Hypertension Day
- ... that since the year 2006 The World Hypertension League had assigned the 17th of May as World Hypertension Day?
Created by Madhero88 (talk). Self nom at 22:05, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Asian Socialist Conference
- ... that the 1953 Asian Socialist Conference held in Rangoon, was an important precursor to the 1955 Bandung Conference?
Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 22:02, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
List of Gold Glove Award winners at shortstop
- ... that the "Wizard of Oz" and "Iron Man" are just two of the four members of the Baseball Hall of Fame who have won Gold Glove Awards at shortstop?
Created by Killervogel5 (talk). Self nom at 21:24, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- You need a source that verifies Ozzie Smith's nickname, and there is no reference to an 'Iron Man' in the article. You'll need to mention it in the lead similar to Smith and have a reference for it as well. Geraldk (talk) 12:54, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- My bad, saw the mention of the Wizard of Oz in the reference. Still need Iron Man. Geraldk (talk) 12:55, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- I thought linking to his article which verified it would have been enough. It's done now, but the note itself looks out of place, because it's really just tossed in there. The hook itself is verified without that note, in that those two specific players did win and are mentioned in the article. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 13:14, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- My bad, saw the mention of the Wizard of Oz in the reference. Still need Iron Man. Geraldk (talk) 12:55, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Confirmed now. Geraldk (talk) 02:06, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
KPBA (defunct)
- ... that defunct Christian radio station KPBA was owned by former National Football League tight end Jackie Harris?
5x expanded by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 20:19, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Vestararius
- ... that the vestararius managed both the wardrobe and money of the pope from the 8th to 11th centuries?
Created by Savidan (talk). Self nom at 20:00, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Felicisimo Ampon
- ... that Felicisimo Ampon was the first and only Filipino tennis player ever to make it to the quarter-finals of the French Open back in the 1950s? and there's never been a Filipino player ever made it that high in Grand Slam tennis ever since...
Created by Donmar (talk). Self nom at 16:01, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- The hook isn't cited. Also, how about we strike the second part of the hook, after the question mark? It seems kinda awkward as it stands. — Jake Wartenberg 14:54, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Ingvald Smith-Kielland
- ... that Ingvald Smith-Kielland left his ambassadorship in the Czechoslovak Republic after the Prague Spring?
Created by Punkmorten (talk). Self nom at 15:41, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Richard Andvord (born 1886)
- ... that although he headed the Royal Stables of Norway from 1945 to 1960, Richard Andvord only had responsibility for motor vehicles?
Created by Punkmorten (talk). Self nom at 15:41, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Pigeon Island National Park
- ... that Pigeon Island National Park (pictured) contains some of the best remaining coral reefs of Sri Lanka?
Created by Chanakal (talk). Self nom at 15:28, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Centipede (band)
- ... that Centipede were an English jazz/progressive rock band with more than 50 members?
5x expanded by Bruce1ee (talk). Self nom at 12:22, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- A previous version [2] stated that there were more than 50 members, and in fact there are 55 members listed (all of whom played on the album Septober Energy). I'd recommend changing the article and the hook to read "more than 50." (Or how about "50 musicians and 5 vocalists"?) —Offenbach (talk) 19:26, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- I would like to say that Centipede had more than 50 members, but all the references I've found say it was 50 ([3], [4], [5], [6], [7], [8]). My understanding is that Centipede had 50 members at their debut performance at the Lyceum, and that later 55 musicians were used to record the album. --Bruce1eetalk 06:00, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Donnchadh, Earl of Carrick
- ... that Earl Donnchadh of Carrick gave lands to Paisley Abbey so that he could found a new abbey at Crossraguel, but was prevented because the monks of Paisley wanted to keep the lands for themselves?
5x expanded by Deacon of Pndapetzim (talk). Self nom at 11:08, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Not a 5x expansion. But it is young enough to be eligible if you share credit with Malleus. — Jake Wartenberg 15:00, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- You serious? The new version of the article is nearly 20 times larger, and retains no previous content other than the cats. Deacon of Pndapetzim (Talk) 02:39, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry about that, not sure what I was smoking there. Everything looks great, nice work! — Jake Wartenberg 02:49, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- No worries. I'm guessing you got thrown by the huge amount of copy-editing there. Good argument for having space in the nomination template for links or diffs to previous and reworked versions. :) Deacon of Pndapetzim (Talk) 03:21, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry about that, not sure what I was smoking there. Everything looks great, nice work! — Jake Wartenberg 02:49, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- You serious? The new version of the article is nearly 20 times larger, and retains no previous content other than the cats. Deacon of Pndapetzim (Talk) 02:39, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Lutetium tantalate
- ... that lutetium tantalate (LuTaO4) (pictured) is the densest known stable white material (density 9.81 g/cm3) and is therefore an ideal material for X-ray phosphors?
Created by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 09:59, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Phoemela Baranda
- ... that Phoemela Baranda placed 23rd in the FHM Philippines 100 Sexiest Women of the World in 2006? --TitanOne (talk) 02:34, 22 June 2009 (UTC). Self nom
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- I've added two more sources both are news paper articles, one is in a native version though, please use google to translate contents. Also FHM is the body that gives the award, isn't that the best site for reference? but never the less I added 3 more references, plus I also added the magazine which contained the source. Hook now has 6 references. --TitanOne (talk) 03:05, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Atlantic flyingfish
- ... that the Atlantic flyingfish (pictured) is preyed upon by several species of larger fishes and seabirds, such as the Wahoo and Sooty tern?
Created by Ryan shell (talk). Self nom at 05:04, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- Doesn't quite meet size requirements. –Juliancolton | Talk 06:27, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the Atlantic flyingfish can glide 3 to 12 meters in the air after jumping out of the water?
- AGF verified. –Juliancolton | Talk 15:00, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 21
Xi (alternate reality game)
- ... that Xi, the world's first console-based alternate reality game, involved the users to search for clues in the real world?
Created by JDC808 (talk). Nominated by BorgQueen (talk) at 10:20, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
ALT1:... that Xi, the world's first console-based alternate reality game, involves the users in searching for clues in the real world? Art LaPella (talk) 21:23, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Comfortable, though it would be helpful if in-line citations were used throughout the article and not just in certain sections. Geraldk (talk) 02:42, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Oh, and definitely prefer Art's alt. Geraldk (talk) 02:43, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- It involved, not involves. It doesn't anymore. The game lasted a total of 12 weeks from its release, according to the article. --BorgQueen (talk) 02:44, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Wait... re-checked the source on the sentence that claims it's the world's first console based alternate reality game, and can't find where in the source it says that. Need that fixed, clarified, or a re-written hook. Geraldk (talk) 02:47, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Oh, and definitely prefer Art's alt. Geraldk (talk) 02:43, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Jean Boyle
- ... that while Chief of Defence Staff Jean Boyle was ridiculed for ordering the Canadian military to halt nearly all operations for one day to search for missing files, some were subsequently found? Sherurcij (speaker for the dead) 02:09, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- The one accessible source says no papers were found. Given this conflict between what the article states (which I assume is based on information from off-line ref #1) and the one source I can access, is it possible to find an accessible source that supports the hook? Geraldk (talk) 02:56, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Thakin Lwin, Burma Socialist Party
- ... that in 1950, the Burmese labour leader Thakin Lwin's pro-communist May Day speech brought a major split in the Burma Socialist Party into the open?
Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 22:23, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Alan Wagner
- ... that Alan Wagner, the first president of the Disney Channel, was also an opera critic and radio personality?
Created by Singingdaisies (talk). Self nom at 19:40, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Richard Andvord (born 1920), Richard Andvord
- ... that during World War II, Richard Andvord conducted illegal resistance work through the company Rich. Andvord, founded in 1865 by his ancestor of the same name?
Created by Punkmorten (talk). Self nom at 15:58, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Frank J. Low
- ... that Frank J. Low, an infrared astronomy pioneer, used an infrared telescope flown on a Learjet to show that proved the planets Jupiter and Saturn generate and emit internal energy into space?
5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 03:01, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- Did you mean "... a Learjet to show that the planets ... " or "... a Learjet that proved the planets ... "? You couldn't have meant both. Art LaPella (talk) 05:56, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Pink Panthers
- ... that members of an international thief network, named "Pink Panthers" by Interpol, have stolen millions of dollars worth of jewels by disguising themselves as women, driving limousines through a window and escaping on a speedboat?
(5x expanded, self-nom --candle•wicke 02:39, 22 June 2009 (UTC) )
- Your hook is over 200 characters long. Ottava Rima (talk) 19:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
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- Your previous hook was 217 characters. Try this to narrow it down. Ottava Rima (talk) 21:36, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Alt: ... that members of a thief network, named "Pink Panthers" by Interpol, have stolen millions of dollars worth of jewels by driving limousines through a window, escaping on a speedboat and cross-dressing? (Precisely 200 characters.) --BorgQueen (talk) 01:32, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Please note the article currently has a dispute tag. This dispute should be resolved before the DYK nomination is processed further. Geraldk (talk) 03:06, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Erika Cheetham
... that Erika Cheetham… ? [I don't know—please help me think of something. ]
- ... that medieval scholar Erika Cheetham interpreted Nostradamus' writings as prophecies of Napoleon, Hitler, and the establishment of modern Israel?
Created by CharlotteWebb. Self-nom at 20:55, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- I would use the sentence from the lead (... that Erika Cheetham was an English medieval scholar etc.), Alternatively you could say that she posited that Nostradamus predicted the establishment of the modern State of Israel or the rise of Hitler. Richerman (talk) 00:10, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- A couple of suggestions:
:*... that Erika Cheetham's book The Man Who Saw Tomorrow was the inspiration for an Orson Welles film by the same name?
- ... that medieval scholar Erika Cheetham interpreted Nostradamus' writings as prophecies of Napoleon, Hitler, and the establishment of modern Israel?
Last one sounds good, let's go with that. Thanks. Hey can I get a copy-edit—I sometimes tend to omit needful words and not notice it even upon re-reading… — CharlotteWebb 16:31, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
I should make myself clear here. I would prefer not to mention the Orson Welles film in the tag-line due to major discrepancies between the sources pertaining to it. Cf. [9], [10]. Pending further research I've done my best to write in general terms and avoid adding any contradicted information to the article. I may try to contact The New York Times sometime this week, namely their obituarist Holcomb B. Noble who appears to still be a semi-active contributor (having eulogized Milton Friedman in 2006 and Hortense Calisher earlier this year). — CharlotteWebb 17:41, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Andachtsbilder
- ... that typical subjects for late medieval Andachtsbilder include the Pietà, Pensive Christ, Man of Sorrows and Arma Christi (both pictured), and the Veil of Veronica?
5x expanded by Johnbod (talk). Self nom at 20:04, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
List of Olympic medalists in snowboarding
- ... that Ross Rebagliati, the first Olympic gold medalist in snowboarding, was briefly stripped of his medal after he tested positive for marijuana?
5x expanded by Scorpion0422 (talk). Self nom at 18:54, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- It's still only 2049 kb of prose size, but the previous version was a mere 81 bytes.
- Alternatate: ... that Philipp Schoch is the only snowboarder to win two gold medals at the Winter Olympic Games?
- -- Scorpion0422 18:54, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Christian Zheng Sheng College
... that the proposed move of Christian Zheng Sheng College (pictured), a correctional school in Hong Kong, from Chi Ma Wan to Mui Wo, led to widespread discussion?
- ALT1:... that most of the students in Christian Zheng Sheng College (pictured), Hong Kong, are former drug addicts entering there by order of court verdict?
- ALT2:... that Christian Zheng Sheng College (pictured) on Lantau, Hong Kong, has a dormitory on Cheung Chau from which students take small ferries called kai-tos to get to school?
Created by Raphaelmak (talk). Self nom at 17:43, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- I like ALT2 better than either of the others, and ALT1 better than the original hook. --Metropolitan90 (talk) 03:27, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- Withdrawing original hook. --:Raphaelmak: [talk] [contribs] 10:23, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- On the contrary, I think ALT1 is more attractive to readers. OhanaUnitedTalk page 15:51, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- As creator of the article and the hooks, I would prefer ALT2 as I think it is more interesting to readers and serve its function as a hook better. Also I have removed the word "must" as it is not mentioned in the article. --:Raphaelmak: [talk] [contribs] 08:58, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Both hooks sourced to foreign language refs accepted in good faith. I prefer ALT2, it is frankly more interesting to me that students have to take boats to school than that they are drug addicts. However, I would not recommend use of the image unless more context is given to it in the caption. It looks sufficiently unlike any other college I've ever seen that it could serve to confuse readers. In other words, the caption and/or article need to explain why the image looks more like a garage than a college. Geraldk (talk) 03:13, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Oh, the explanation is that the campus was converted from a pig farm. I have just added that to the caption of the image above, and the article in the "campus" section with reference. Thanks --:Raphaelmak: [talk] [contribs] 03:35, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Bernardo Peres da Silva
- ... that Bernardo Peres da Silva was the only native Governor of Portuguese India in its 451 year history?
Created by Deepak D'Souza (talk). Self nom at 15:34, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Bernardo Peres da Silva, the only native Governor of Portuguese India in its 451 year history, was deposed after just seventeen days in office?
- Comment Article was created in my userspace and moved to mainspace on 21st June. --Deepak D'Souza 15:39, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
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- Added a ref for 451 years of colonial rule. --Deepak D'Souza 14:20, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Douglas SASSTO
- ... that Philip Bono's exploration of a small single-stage to orbit vehicle similar to the S-IVB, the SASSTO, was the inspiration for many engineers who designed a variety of similar spacecraft?
Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 14:53, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
W. J. M. Lokubandara
- ... that W. J. M. Lokubandara (pictured), the current Speaker of the Parliament of Sri Lanka, was elected for the position after he won the election by one vote?
- Comment: Can anyone think of a better wording for this? BTW, in the article it's given with the result (110/109) rather than 1 vote.
Created by Chamal N (talk). Self nom at 14:52, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
St Mary's Church, Mold
- ... that the first patron of St Mary's Church, Mold (pictured) was Lady Margaret Beaufort, the mother of Henry VII?
- ... that the first patron of St Mary's Church, Mold (pictured) was Lady Margaret Beaufort, the grandmother of Henry VIII?
Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 12:36, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Comment. Not sure who added the second hook, which might be more "exciting" than the first; although the first is more direct, and I think it makes the point. Peter I. Vardy (talk) 07:41, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- PS The second hook is not in the article! Peter I. Vardy (talk) 08:18, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Offline sources accepted, first hook is better since the article mentions mother of Henry VII instead of grandmother of Henry VIII. --:Raphaelmak: [talk] [contribs] 13:56, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Comment. Not sure who added the second hook, which might be more "exciting" than the first; although the first is more direct, and I think it makes the point. Peter I. Vardy (talk) 07:41, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
NCAA Season 85 basketball tournaments
- ... that only two coaches are allowed to stand up on the sidelines starting in the 2009 basketball season of the Philippine NCAA?
- ALT1:... that there are three guest teams playing in the 2009 basketball season of the Philippine NCAA?
- Comment: If accepted, a date of June 27 will be nice.
Created by Howard the Duck (talk). Self nom at 11:47, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- I don't understand ALT1. Who are these guest teams and where did they come from? All three of them are redlinks and not identified further. Are they teams from other leagues, or teams from other countries, or what? --Metropolitan90 (talk) 19:02, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- These are teams from other leagues and they compete like regular members but they're called guests. Currently, only UAAP (below) and NCAA varsity teams have articles while those from the other leagues don't have any. Two of the guest teams' schools have articles while AUF doesn't have one yet. –Howard the Duck 05:24, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- revised ALT1:... that Angeles University Foundation, Arellano University and the Emilio Aguinaldo College are the guest teams playing in the 2009 basketball season of the Philippine NCAA?
UAAP Season 72 basketball tournaments
- ... that a "no ID, no sitting on the bench" rule will be implemented in the 2009 UAAP basketball season to avoid what happened last year when a coach was given a technical foul for not wearing his ID?
- Comment: If accepted, a date of July 11 will be nice.
Created by Howard the Duck (talk). Self nom at 11:47, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Confirmed, though have slightly changed hook to bring it under the 200 character limit. Geraldk (talk) 03:19, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Adam Clayton Powell Jr. State Office Building
- ... that the Adam Clayton Powell Jr. State Office Building is the tallest building in Harlem?
Created by MBisanz (talk). Self nom at 08:33, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- All set. — Jake Wartenberg 03:31, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Clan Macdonald of Sleat
- ... that in the 18th century, the chiefs of Clan Macdonald of Sleat and Clan Macleod, among others, were involved in a scheme to kidnap their own clansfolk, transport them to the American Colonies and sell them into slavery?
5x expanded by Celtus (talk). Self nom at 07:00, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Your hook is 220 characters long. Please shorten it to the 200 character maximum. Ottava Rima (talk) 21:37, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Congress for Democracy
- ... that although it was mocked by Indira Gandhi's Congress (I) as the "Congress for Defectors", Jagjivan Ram's Congress for Democracy helped the opposition Janata Party win the 1977 election?
Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Self nom at 01:49, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Mercedes-Benz W25
- ... that the 1935 Mercedes-Benz W25 scored nine major victories, and Rudolf Caracciola became European Champion with this model?
Created by Matthead (talk). Self nom at 02:14, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Alt: ... that the Mercedes-Benz W25 was withdrawn from the 1934 Belgian GP as the Belgian customs asked the German teams to pay 180,000 francs duty for their alcohol based special fuel? -- Matthead Discuß 12:46, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 20
John Lhotsky
- ... that Ukrainian naturalist, lecturer, artist and author John Lhotsky was credited as the first discoverer of gold in New South Wales?
Created by Cygnis insignis (talk). Nominated by Moondyne (talk) at 00:58, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- None of the sources credits him with being the first discoverer of gold. One mentions that he claimed he was, four says that he may have found some gold but says nothing about being the first, and eight says that the man who was credited as first discoverer found gold after Lhotsky. Maybe a rewording of the hook? Geraldk (talk) 03:28, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Wilfrid Lacroix
- ... that architect Wilfrid Lacroix who designed the Musée national des beaux-arts du Québec (pictured) became a member of the Canadian House of Commons?
Created by Dl2000 (talk). Self nom at 00:20, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- The portions of the article that mention his election to the House of Commons are unreferenced. Geraldk (talk) 03:33, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
El Tintal
- ... that the Maya archaeological site of El Tintal, in the northern Petén region of Guatemala, includes a triadic-style pyramid estimated to be 30 metres (98 ft) tall?
5x expanded by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 14:59, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
1901 Homestead Library & Athletic Club football team
- ... the professional American football championship of 1901 was won by a team sponsored by the Homestead Library & Athletic Club?
Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 06:42, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- alt 1 ... that the success of the championship 1901 Homestead Library & Athletic Club football team inspired promoters to form the first National Football League in 1902? Cbl62 (talk) 06:46, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Pete Overfield
- ... that Pete Overfield was nominated by Pres. William Howard Taft as a federal judge in Alaska after winning a professional American football championship in 1901?
Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 06:32, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
U.S. Post Office (Hudson, New York)
- ... that the classically-inspired porticoes on the Hudson, New York, post office (pictured) echo those of the Columbia County courthouse across the square?
Created by Daniel Case (talk). Self nom at 15:24, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Kevin O'Donoghue
- ... that General Sir Kevin O'Donoghue KCB CBE is the first Chief of Defence Materiel, a post created after the merge of the posts of Chief of Defence Procurement and Chief of Defence Logistics?
Created by Gaia Octavia Agrippa (talk). Self nom at 22:13, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- Welsh did a substantial amount of work; I am adding him as well.
Dominant white (horse)
- ... that dominant white, a collection of related genetic conditions, causes horses to be born with no skin pigmentation and completely or partly white coats (example pictured)?
Created by Countercanter (talk). Nominated by Hassocks5489 (talk) at 18:29, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
East-West League
- ... that Negro league baseball executive Cum Posey organized the East-West League in 1932, but the league folded before the end of the season?
Created by BRMo (talk). Self nom at 01:18, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Chitradurga Fort
- ... that the historic Chitradurga Fort (pictured) in Karnataka has so many interconnecting tanks to harvest rain water, it was said the fort never ran out of water?
5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Nominated by Mattisse (talk) at 20:21, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Aso Mining forced labor controversy
- ... that Aso Mining Company, which belongs to Prime Minister of Japan Aso Taro's (pictured) family, allegedly forced prisoners of war to work in mines during World War II?
Created/expanded by Cla68 (talk). Nominated by BorgQueen (talk) at 09:54, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Nymphaea nouchali
- ... that Nymphaea nouchali (pictured) is considered a medicinal plant in Ayurveda under the name Ambal?
Created/expanded by Xufanc (talk). Nominated by BorgQueen (talk) at 09:19, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1... that Nymphaea nouchali (pictured) is the national flower of Sri Lanka where it is known as Nil Manel in Sinhala?--Chanaka L (talk) 03:07, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Demographics of Japan before Meiji Restoration
- ... that the population of Japan in 400 AD is estimated by two different sources to have been 1.5 million?
Created by Aurichalcum (talk). Nominated by BorgQueen (talk) at 09:13, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Mount Banda Banda
- ... that Mount Banda Banda contains Antarctic Beech rainforests of World Heritage quality?
Created by Poyt448 (talk). Self nom at 07:20, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- 1169 characters of prose. Please expand to at least 1500. Shubinator (talk) 19:34, 21 June 2009 (UTC) Article increased as requested; also added more inline citations Poyt448 (talk) 06:21, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- This looks like it's true, but could you find a more interesting fact? The World Heritage List, although much more selective, reminds me of the National Register of Historic Places, which is liberally handed out and is nothing to brag about. Shubinator (talk) 00:35, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Stanley R. Jaffe
- ... that Stanley R. Jaffe after resigning as president of Paramount Television in 1971 to found his own production company, returned 20 years later in 1991 to be president of Paramount Communications and then replaced Brandon Tartikoff in 1992 as president of Paramount Pictures?
- This version is a 275 character hook. Art LaPella (talk) 04:53, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Without the wikilinks it is only 171 characters long. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 20:00, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- It's still 275 as we count them. You probably misinterpreted Q1 where it says, "... the text as it displays to the public (not from the edit screen which contains wikitext) ... " Count the text as it displays to the public, including the words "Stanley R. Jaffe", "Paramount Television", "Paramount Communications", "Brandon Tartikoff", and "Paramount Pictures". The reason counting from the edit page doesn't give the same result is because it contains "wikitext" and therefore includes the symbols [, ], ', and similar characters that don't show. Whether you agree with my interpretation of my own rule or not, I can assure you that's how we count everybody else. Art LaPella (talk) 06:03, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- No... what I misinterpreted was WP:Did you know/Additional rules where it states "If your hook introduces more than one article, you can do a basic calculation by subtracting the number of characters in the bolded character string for each additional new article beyond the first. If having done that the hook length is still 200 characters or less, it is probably an acceptable length.", thinking the wikilinks were intoductions to other articles. Luckily, I provided alternate hooks... as well as a shortened version of the original. Please feel free to use whichever one you feel creates the greatest interest in the article. Thank you. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 22:10, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that Stanley R. Jaffe was president of several different Paramount Pictures divisions, yet never held any one position with them for more than two years?
- ALT2:... that after producing Goodby Columbus, Stanley R. Jaffe was appointed president of Paramount Television in 1970, only to resign in 1971 to form his own production company?
- Comment: article a collaborative effort with User:Drmies
Created by Drmies (talk), MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 04:12, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT3:... Stanley R. Jaffe resigned as president of Paramount Television in 1971 and, returned 20 years later in 1991 to be president of Paramount Communications, and replaced Brandon Tartikoff in 1992 as president of Paramount Pictures?
- Here's a trimmed hook. But I'd be happy if either alternate served as well. Schmidt, MICHAEL Q. 19:19, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
21st Army Tank Brigade
- ... that the brigade had so few tanks after the Battle of Dunkirk that two-thirds of the brigade was forced to serve as infantry?
5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Self nom at 00:24, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- You need to actually include the nominated article in the hook. Manxruler (talk) 00:40, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Correct (see I4) but easily fixed. (I also added "British" because other Allies fought at Dunkirk, and so did Germans.) ALT1:... that the British 21st Army Tank Brigade had so few tanks after the Battle of Dunkirk that two-thirds of the brigade was forced to serve as infantry? Art LaPella (talk) 04:53, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Washington State Route 113
- ... that two different highways were named Washington State Route 113 between 1964 (1966 map pictured) and 1991?
5x expanded by ComputerGuy (talk). Self nom at 20:05, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- Oppose - reuse of highway numbers is extremely common. In addition, the former route should be covered in Washington State Route 20, which it became part of in 1973. --NE2 20:15, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- How about something relating to how the roadway became a state highway in 1937 and was given back to the county in 1955, only to be re-added in 1991? --NE2 20:18, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT:
- ... that the current route of Washington State Route 113 was given to the county in 1955, only to be given back to the state in 1991? –CG 17:07, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Better, but "the current route" is unnecessary. --NE2 16:50, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Finalized version:
- ... that Washington State Route 113 was given to the county in 1955, only to be given back to the state in 1991? –CG 21:44, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Dan Thomas
- ... that Milwaukee Brewers baseball player Dan Thomas was called the "Sundown Kid" because he refused to play on the Sabbath?
5x expanded by JGHowes (talk). Self nom at 19:51, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Praise the Names of the Musical Assassins
- ... that Pungent Stench's early demos featured in the compilation Praise the Names of the Musical Assassins caused a "considerable amount of interest" in the group, and led them to sign a deal with Nuclear Blast?
5x expanded by Cannibaloki (talk). Self nom at 17:16, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- Your hook is 209 characters long. Please shorten it to the 200 character maximum. Ottava Rima (talk) 21:39, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- ... that Pungent Stench's early demos compiled on Praise the Names of the Musical Assassins caused a "considerable amount of interest" in the group, leading them to sign a deal with Nuclear Blast?--Cannibaloki 02:06, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
1932 Colgate football team
- ... that the 1932 Colgate University football team was "undefeated, untied, unscored upon, and uninvited" after being snubbed by the Rose Bowl?
Created by Strikehold (talk). Self nom at 17:04, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
HMS Lively (G40)
- ... that HMS Lively (pictured) won five battle honours during the Second World War, despite a career lasting less than a year from commissioning to being sunk?
Created by Benea (talk). Self nom at 15:06, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Kendrick Moxon
- ... that Kendrick Moxon assisted Scientologists in filing 50 lawsuits against the Cult Awareness Network, which eventually led to the bankruptcy of the organization?
Created by Cirt (talk). Self nom at 08:59, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Abu Dhabi Media Company
- ... that in September 2008, the Abu Dhabi Media Company established Imagenation, a subsidiary with access to more than $1 billion with which to finance film production?
5x expanded by Tim1965 (talk). Self nom at 01:22, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- "Imagenation" is the correct spelling. See http://www.imagenation.abudhabi.com Art LaPella (talk) 04:46, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- And also not to be confused with Imagenation, the arts organization based in Harlem, New York. - Tim1965 (talk) 14:07, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Washington State Route 204
- ... that Washington State Route 204 is named the Snohomish–Marysville Road, but is does not serve those two cities?
5x expanded by ComputerGuy (talk). Self nom at 01:00, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- Not a 5x expansion according to Dr pda's script. –Juliancolton | Talk 03:14, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- 1. The fact is uncited. 2. You're confusing 204 with Sunnyside Boulevard,[11] which are the same road for a couple hundred feet at the south end. 3. When I was a kid, 204 ("the road to Frontier Village") was part of the way to Grandma's house. I can't imagine anyone calling it Snohomish–Marysville because as you noted, it doesn't go there. Art LaPella (talk) 04:46, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Older nominations
Articles created/expanded on June 19
Liam Jurrah
- ... that Liam Jurrah, a Warlpiri from Yuendumu, is the first Indigenous Australian from a remote community in Central Australia to play in the Australian Football League?
5x expanded by The-Pope (talk). Self nom at 13:25, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Holospira
- ... that internal column of the shell of snail Holospira (pictured) is hollow?
Created by Snek01 (talk). Self nom at 10:05, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
--Snek01 (talk) 10:09, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Oldřich Nový
- ... that during World War II, the Czech actor Oldřich Nový refused to divorce his wife, and as a consequence they were both imprisoned in a German concentration camp?
Created by Vejvančický (talk). Self nom at 08:31, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Aloisius Joseph Muench
- ... that Bishop Aloisius Muench, the liaison between the Vatican and the U.S. post-war occupation authority in Germany, referred to the latter as "other Hitlers in disguise"?
5x expanded by Savidan (talk). Self nom at 19:44, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
SN 2002cx
- ... that peculiar supernova SN 2002cx was classified as a type Ia, despite not having spectral features that define a type Ia supernova?
Created by Falcorian (talk). Self nom at 00:43, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Nanuli Shevardnadze
- ... that Nanuli Shevardnadze, wife of the president of Georgia, Eduard Shevardnadze, was a peace activist?
Created by Piorus (talk) and significantly expanded by Kober (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 16:05, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Ixlu
- ... that a Maya ruler of Ixlu, a small archaeological site in Guatemala, claimed to be the lord of the major Maya city of Tikal?
5x expanded by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 08:28, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that the small Maya archaeological site of Ixlu in northern Guatemala was an important port with access to Lake Petén Itzá?
Bly Ranger Station
- ... that the district office at the Bly Ranger Station (pictured) in south central Oregon was built by the Civilian Conservation Corps in 1937 at a cost of $1,700?
Created by Orygun (talk). Self nom at 02:28, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- Looks good. –Juliancolton | Talk 03:20, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Georgian Socialist-Federalist Revolutionary Party
- ... that in 1906, Georgian Socialist-Federalists managed to seize 315,000 rubles during an attack on a Russian treasury in Dusheti?
Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 21:09, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
Odd Man Out: A Year on the Mound with a Minor League Misfit
- ... that despite its author keeping detailed journals of his experiences, the baseball memoir Odd Man Out was criticized by many people named in the book as being factually inaccurate?
Created by Kuyabribri (talk). Self nom at 20:09, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
Burn Bridge
- ... that the village known as Burn Bridge could have received its name either due to a historic fire which destroyed its main bridge, or due to a Burn that runs just south of the town?
5x expanded by Storye book (talk). Nominated by Excirial (talk) at 18:23, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- Note I am not the most proficient person at creating hooks, so if this one contains grammar or other issues please forgive that. Excirial (Contact me,Contribs) 18:23, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- I tried to find a hook that would look interesting on the main page; As the article has a rather local scope finding something that would interest a larger public is rather difficult. If you have a suggestion about what would make a better hook, im all open :). Excirial (Contact me,Contribs) 08:50, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Joel Selvin
- ... that San Francisco Chronicle pop music critic Joel Selvin was an early member of the rock and roll band Rock Bottom Remainders, made up of authors and journalists?
Created by Binksternet (talk). Self nom at 17:55, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
Wushan Man
- ... that Wushan Man, a species of Homo, was identified from a fossil jaw found south of the Yangtze River but is now thought to come from an extinct ape that lived in China two million years ago?
- Comment: I am not good at writing hocks so this might be bettered. Also I am not sure whether to mention Russell Ciochon who has had this change of mind in Nature. There is a piece in National Geographic about this
5x expanded by LittleHow (talk). Self nom at 16:41, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- Your hook is 213 characters long. Please shorten it to the 200 character maximum. Ottava Rima (talk) 21:40, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Coleman Coker
- ... that Coleman Coker's work has been featured in the Cooper-Hewitt National Museum, the New York City MoMA, the San Francisco MoMA, the Wexner Center for the Arts, and the National Building Museum?
Created by Mifter (talk). Self nom at 16:30, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
Mascara Dorada
- ... that Luchador Mascara Dorada had to outlast nine other wrestlers to win the CMLL World Super Lightweight Championship?
Created by MPJ-DK (talk). Self nom at 11:20, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
Mubariz Mansimov
- ... that Mubariz Mansimov ranked as Turkey's youngest billionaire in 2009? --NovaSkola (talk) Self nom at 04:08, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- 649 characters of prose. Please expand to at least 1500. Also, please do not copy and paste DYK nominations; use the template instead. Shubinator (talk) 23:51, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
Kelly Misa
- ... that Kelly Misa ranked 84th in the FHM Philippines' sexiest women of 2006? --TitanOne (talk) Self nom at 01:50, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
John Mayberry, Jr., John Mayberry
- ... that John Mayberry, Jr. hit his second career home run against the Toronto Blue Jays, for whom his father, John Mayberry, played five seasons?
5x expanded by Killervogel5 (talk). Self nom at 01:40, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that John Mayberry, Jr. hit his first two career home runs against the last two major league teams for which his father John Mayberry played?
- Note: I know that this hook is 210 characters. This can easily be rectified by removed the piped link to the list of second-generation MLB players, but that list is a very interesting part of this hook and I feel it should be included. If not, I understand, but I don't know what the exceptions are. Thanks. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 01:40, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- Another note: I've included an alt-hook, same issue with being a little oversized (213 char), but same rectification issue, and I think this one is a little more hooky. Since I still have some time, I might also be able to get around this issue by getting John Mayberry up to DYK level too. I'll be working on that this evening. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 11:44, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- Comment KV, I'm not a DYK approver, but I believe the hook length count is based on "the text as it displays to the public (not from the edit screen which contains wikitext)" (see Wikipedia:Did you know/Hook length), so both of your hooks should be fine length-wise. I'm old enough to remember Mayberry Sr. when he was playing in the minors! Good luck with this one.--Arxiloxos (talk) 15:21, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- smacks forehead I can't believe I never knew that before! I have killed myself over and over trying to get my hooks under 200 characters of wikitext. This makes my life so much easier, thanks! Regardless, I'm still expanding the John Mayberry Sr. article and would like to double it up with this one, so I will do my best to get that done tonight. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 16:09, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- OK, here is another alternate; the second page has been expanded enough to qualify now. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 17:26, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT2:... that John Mayberry, Jr. hit his first two career home runs against the New York Yankees and the Toronto Blue Jays, the last two Major League Baseball teams for which his father John Mayberry played?
Articles created/expanded on June 18
Helena Palaiologina
- ... that Helena Palaiologina, Queen consort of Cyprus, gave orders for the nose of her husband's beautiful mistress to be cut off?
Created by Jeanne boleyn (talk). Nominated by User:Jeanne boleyn (talk) at 06:46, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Natalya Sats
- ... that MAT director Konstantin Stanislavsky recommended a 15 year-old Natalya Sats to the
Commissar of Education Anatoly Lunacharsky to start a theater for the children? Created by Mhym (talk). Self nom at 23:20, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- Comment I've tweaked a little bit of MOS (see abbreviations). Cheers, I'mperator 13:05, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- Unreliable sources used: autobiography of subject (should be used sparingly - see WP:PRIMARY) and findagrave, which is user-generated content and not reliable. Awadewit (talk) 01:24, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Trans-Alaska Pipeline System
- ... that the pipe in the Trans-Alaska Pipeline cost just $100 million, but the project as a whole cost more than $8 billion?
5x expanded by JKBrooks85 (talk). Self nom at 11:11, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- Great hook, AGF on offline source for the 100 million estimate (I found [12] which confirms it). The page was not 5x expanded, going from 9kB to 20kB, but I think it should be added anyway. I will, however, wait for another editor to voice their opinion before passing this. --Odie5533 (talk) 14:38, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 17
Limusaurus
- ... that the unusual finger structure of the dinosaur Limusaurus (pictured) gives clues on how dinosaur hands evolved into bird wings?
Created by ArthurWeasley (talk). Self nom at 21:19, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- Perhaps "dinosaur hands" and "bird wings"? Or "a dinosaur hand" and "a bird wing"? Firsfron of Ronchester 21:27, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- No inline citation and the article needs some copyediting. I read the paragraphs on the hand and it has some glaring grammar errors. Awadewit (talk) 16:58, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Copyedited. Art LaPella (talk) 23:59, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- No inline citation and the article needs some copyediting. I read the paragraphs on the hand and it has some glaring grammar errors. Awadewit (talk) 16:58, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Perhaps "dinosaur hands" and "bird wings"? Or "a dinosaur hand" and "a bird wing"? Firsfron of Ronchester 21:27, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
Sibudu Cave
- ... that in Sibudu Cave, 40 km north of Durban in South Africa, have been found the earliest example of a bone arrow and a needle (61,000 BP), and the use of compound glue (72,000 BP)?
Created by LittleHow (talk). Self nom at 18:37, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
Bar Council of Ireland
- ... that in response to the Irish Competition Authority’s critical stance to its restrictive practices, the Bar Council of Ireland’s code of conduct was most recently changed on March 13, 2006?
Created/expanded by Masteredmond (talk). Nominated by ImperatorExercitus (talk) at 14:17, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1... that although founded in 1897, the Bar Council of Ireland had no constitution until 1984? (This hook would required a citation for the constitution information found in the article.) Awadewit (talk) 17:14, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Well, this link to the Constitution of the Bar of Ireland and the premable to the constitution both say that the previous constitution was adopted on 20 February 1914, 70 years earlier than 1984 - is there a reason why the article says 1984? BencherliteTalk 22:47, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
U. Grant Miller Library
- ... that Benjamin Franklin donated the money to found the U. Grant Miller Library at Washington & Jefferson College?
Created by GrapedApe (talk). Self nom at 19:46, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1... that the collection at U. Grant Miller Library at Washington & Jefferson College has books donated by Benjamin Franklin in 1789?--GrapedApe (talk) 19:56, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Ruhuna cricket team
- ... that in the 2009 Inter-Provincial Twenty20 tournament's semi-finals Wayamba beats Ruhuna in the bowl-out to reach the finals, after the match was affected by rain?
Created by Chanakal (talk). Self nom at 13:04, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
John G.F. Francis
- ... that John G.F. Francis, who co-devised the QR algorithm for computing the eigenvalues and eigenvectors of matrices, had no idea of the impact his work had made until contacted almost 50 years later?
Created by Jheald (talk). Self nom at 12:08, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
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- Look at the calibre of people writing to it. Gene Golub was right at the the top of the tree when it comes to methods for matrix computations. Also note that NA-Net is a moderated, edited weekly digest of academic announcements, not a free-for-all discussion. Jheald (talk) 08:21, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- I do not think that this is a reliable source. This looks just like the moderated academic listservs I belong to. There is nothing that prevents speculation on them and there is no tradition of peer review, fact-checking, etc. that goes along with these. The editing seems to be limited to pruning posts. How do others feel about this source? Awadewit (talk) 16:34, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Have you read the postings in question? They are hardly "speculation". Rather, they are report-backs of interviews that had been conducted. According to WP:RS we accept statements by acknowledged authorities in their fields, when speaking on matters to do with the fields in question. When it comes to methods for matrix computations, and their history, you don't get more of an authority than Gene Golub. Jheald (talk) 19:06, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Y Ahora Te Vas
- ... that Mexican group Los Bukis won the Lo Nuestro Award for Best Regional Mexican Song in 1989 with their number-one single "Y Ahora Te Vas"?
Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 04:18, 17 June 2009 (UTC). Self nom at 04:17, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
Congregation Emanu-El (Victoria, British Columbia)
- ... The oldest surviving synagogue in Canada. The oldest surviving synagogue on the West Coast of North America. And probably one of the few synagogues to ever dedicate a new building to music played by the band of a 28-gun Royal Navy Frigate
Expanded form a two-sentence stub by User:Historicist and User:Skookum1). Self nom
- ALT1: ... that Congregation Emanu-El in Victoria, British Columbia, built in 1863 in the building boom that followed the Fraser Canyon Gold Rush, is the oldest surviving synagogue in Canada? Alansohn (talk) 03:50, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
Expanded form a two-sentence stub by User:Historicist and User:Skookum1). Self nom
- ALT2: ... that Congregation Emanu-El in Victoria, British Columbia, was founded by pioneers who came west for the Fraser Canyon Gold Rush, and is the oldest synagogue in Canada? Historicist (talk) 14:43, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Carol Lewis
- ... that after retiring from track and field, former long jump record holder Carol Lewis tried out for the 2002 Winter Olympics bobsleigh team?
Created by Sillyfolkboy (talk). Self nom at 03:01, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure if this was high profile news in the States but I've never heard it before. Also, would an alternate hook including that she is Carl Lewis's sister be better? I omitted it as it was getting rather clunky that way. Sillyfolkboy (talk) (edits)WIKIPROJECT ATHLETICS NEEDS YOU! 03:04, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
Jennifer Olayvar
- ... that Jennifer Olayvar joined the 8th Asia Arts Festival held in China?
--TitanOne (talk) 01:48, 17 June 2009 (UTC) Self nom.
- ALT... that choreographer Sergey Vikulov selected three lead couples where Jennifer Olayvar was one of the dancers chosen to perform in La Fille Mal Gardée?
Articles created/expanded on June 16
Baulk road
- ... that Isambard Kingdom Brunel used light rails and heavy timber baulks for the Great Western Railway's baulk road track (pictured) because existing technology could not produce strong rails?
Created by Geof Sheppard (talk). Self nom at 13:28, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
Malia (Hawaiian canoe)
- ... that the koa wood hull of a Hawaiian-style outrigger canoe named Mālia became the mold for modern fiberglass racing canoes?
Created by Joel Bradshaw (talk). Self nom at 03:40, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
Quartermaster Award (Boy Scouts of America)
- ... that the Quartermaster Award is the highest rank in the Sea Scouting program of the Boy Scouts of America?
Created by Stnfll (talk). Nominated by Rlevse (talk) at 02:20, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- Length, history, and source verified. There are unsourced paragraphs, however. Awadewit (talk) 16:41, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Added lots of refs. 74.212.14.226 (talk) 22:52, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Anselm of Meissen
- ... that Anselm of Meissen was the first actual Bishop of Warmia (Ermland)?
Created by Matthead (talk). Self nom at 20:27, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
Libočany
- ... that Liebotschaner Beer produced by some US breweries was originally brewed in and named after the Czech village of Libočany (pictured)?
Created and self nom by --Aloysius (talk) 18:31, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
Moturu Udayam
- ... that Indian women's activist Moturu Udayam was known as the first woman to ride a bicycle in the state of Andhra Pradesh?
Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 15:48, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- Was this for some public cause or something like that? It's an extraordinary claim so it would be good if we can have some more details about it. Just saying she peddled a bicycle is likely to raise some eyebrows. Anyway, the article could do with some improvement; try to expand those one-sentence paragraphs or combine them together. It looks a little untidy the way it is. Chamal talk 02:07, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Ernest May (historian)
- ... that Harvard historian Ernest May's 1997 book The Kennedy Tapes: Inside the White House During the Cuban Missile Crisis was the primary source for the 2000 film Thirteen Days starring Kevin Costner?
Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 13:45, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
Joseph Di Noia
- ... that Joseph Augustine Di Noia became Secretary of the Congregation for Divine Worship and the Discipline of the Sacraments on 16 June 2009?
Created by 193.63.81.140 (talk). Nominated by 龗 (talk) at 11:40, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
V.J.P. Saldanha
- ... that the Indian novelist V.J.P. Saldanha's main theme of writings was based on the captivity of 60,000 Mangalorean Roman Catholics at Seringapatam imposed by the Muslim ruler Tipu Sultan from 1784 to 1799?
Created by Kensplanet (talk). Self nom at 10:45, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
Polymorphs of silicon carbide
- .. that there are more than 250 different crystalline forms (polytypes) of silicon carbide[1] and that some of them have lattice constant as long as 301.5 nm that is about one thousand of usual lattice spacings.[2]
Created by Materialscientist (talk). Self nom at 07:38, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- I9 says "No external links in the hook."
- ALT1:... that there are more than 250 different crystalline forms (polytypes) of silicon carbide, and that some of them have a 301.5 nm lattice constant, about 1000 times longer than usual lattice spacings? Art LaPella (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- Thats Ok with me.Materialscientist (talk) 00:37, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- I'm not sure the left image is in the public domain as the license tag says. The source (image is on page 51) is hosted on the NASA website, but "Trex Enterprises" is written on every single page, and there aren't any NASA logos (or any logos of federal agencies). It seems reasonable to assume, then, that the image was created by Trex Enterprises, not by NASA as the license tag states. Shubinator (talk) 00:55, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
- Deleted the questioned image here. Materialscientist (talk) 01:20, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 15
May Brahe
- ... that May Brahe was the only Australian woman composer to win both local and international recognition before World War II?
Created by JackofOz (talk). Nominated by Sk8er5000 (talk) at 02:06, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- This sentence is copied directly from the source. I checked the article and saw a few other instances of direct copying without quotation marks. I would suggest that the editor rework the prose so that it does not resemble the original source and/or put quotation marks around directly copied phrases. See this dispatch on avoiding plagiarism. Awadewit (talk) 20:50, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
Prospero Amatong
- ... that as governor of Davao del Norte, Prospero Amatong oversaw the creation of nearby Compostela Valley, eventually serving as the new province's interim governor in 1998?
Created by Scanlan (talk). Self nom at 19:35, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- According to H10, this hook should mention the Philippines. Art LaPella (talk) 21:54, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT
- ... that as governor of Davao del Norte, Prospero Amatong oversaw the creation of nearby Compostela Valley, eventually serving as the new Filipino province's interim governor in 1998?
- You are absolutely correct. There should be some kind of reference to the Philippines. I added Filippino to the description for clarity. Any other suggestions on better wording? Scanlan (talk) 23:42, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- No. Others will soon review your hook in a more subjective way, as described at A2. Art LaPella (talk) 06:03, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- You are absolutely correct. There should be some kind of reference to the Philippines. I added Filippino to the description for clarity. Any other suggestions on better wording? Scanlan (talk) 23:42, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
Sacajawea Peak
- ... that Sacajawea Peak is the highest point in the Wallowa Mountains (pictured) and the sixth highest peak in Oregon?
Created by Pfly (talk). Nominated by Aboutmovies (talk) at 06:46, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- - hook is supported in the article, but what makes peakbagger.com and peakware.com reliable sources? —Ed (Talk • Contribs) 22:36, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Don't know, I didn't create the article, but I have added a source from The Mazamas group who are the climbing experts in the state and a GNIS search (though I don't know if the URL will re-create the search, but the parameters are also given). Aboutmovies (talk) 07:45, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
São Gabriel (ship)
- ... that Vasco da Gama's flagship, the carrack São Gabriel, was built by the explorer Bartolomeu Dias?
Created by Ekem (talk). Self nom at 22:06, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1... that returning from India Vasco da Gama left his flagship, the São Gabriel, to attend to his dying brother Paulo?Ekem (talk) 02:31, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
- - A few problems. First, the article needs a copyedit; sentences like "On the leg towards Cape of Good Hope, the supply ship was lost along the east coast of Africa" need some TLC before this can go on the main page. Second, the first hook is unclear—Dias did not 'build' the ship himself, he commissioned others to do it for him (I would assume that, at least?). Third, the second hook seems to be of trivial importance to the ship. Surely a better hook could be made up... —Ed (Talk • Contribs) 22:30, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Article has been further copyedited; the first hook is modified as follows:
- ... that Vasco da Gama's flagship, the carrack São Gabriel, was constructed under the supervision of the explorer Bartolomeu Dias? Ekem (talk) 22:04, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Orly's Draw-A-Story
- ... that Broderbund's computer game Orly's Draw-A-Story won the inaugural Interactive Achievement Award for Computer Innovation in 1998?
Created by 03md (talk). Self nom at 11:13, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- Note that I found a case of WP:Plagarism within the article[13]. I don't have further time at the moment, but if someone could check this out further; that would be great. NW (Talk) 19:57, 17 June 2009 (UTC)
- The bulk of this article is unsourced gameplay and the 2-3 of the 5 sources are unreliable. Awadewit (talk) 00:54, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- Which sources are unreliable. BNET is a well-known business website, one of the links is to an official awards website and the others all discuss the gameplay. 03md 07:38, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- Superkids.com, kidsclick.com, and allgame.com. If you can show how these sources are reliable, please do. I would suggest that you work on finding more sources for this article and expanding it. The sections, other than gameplay, are extremely short and do not give the reader much information. Awadewit (talk) 17:39, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- allgame is affiliated with allmusic, a resource that is used in most music articles, including featured articles, and I presume it works along the same rationale. I am not sure about the other two. 03md 10:31, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Will the article pass if I remove the kidsclick reference? The gameplay can be sourced to allgame and the hook is cited by the official awards site. 03md 10:26, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- In my opinion, the article needs to have more content. As I stated above, it is almost entirely gameplay and therefore, to me, still needs a bit more heft before it reaches the mainpage. Is there any information available on production and development, for example? (This falls under additional rule D6.) Awadewit (talk) 16:02, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Lawless v Ireland
- ... that Lawless v Ireland (1957-61) was the first International court case decision involving in interpreting International human rights law, the first one filed against a country and was refered to the European Court of Human Rights?
Created by Pharaoh of the Wizards (talk). Self nom at 19:38, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
- 1104 characters of prose. Please expand to at least 1500. Also, the hook is long at 231 characters. Shubinator (talk) 00:45, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1:... that Lawless v Ireland (1957–61), referred to the European Court of Human Rights, was the first international court case interpreting international human rights law and the first one filed against a country? Art LaPella (talk) 01:42, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- Expanded and ALT1 can be used.Pharaoh of the Wizards (talk) 19:26, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- There are many convoluted sentences in the article that make it almost unreadable. Shubinator (talk) 14:57, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Anaconda Road Massacre
- ... that the shooting death of striking miner Tom Manning in the 1920 Anaconda Road Massacre in Butte, Montana is still officially unsolved?
5x expanded by Geraldk (talk). Self nom at 02:11, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
- I have often added those strange-looking commas after states, and someone removed one here. If the commas aren't a consensus, I wish someone would change the "In geographic names" section of the comma article. See also [14]. Art LaPella (talk) 01:42, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- How is it a massacre if only 1 person was killed? Are you sure this the correct terminology, and used in all the references? Chamal talk 04:54, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Utah Utes football under Ron McBride
- ... that in 1992, the Utah Utes football team, coached by Ron McBride, ended a 28-year bowl game drought by appearing in the 1992 Copper Bowl?
5x expanded by DeFaultRyan (talk). Self nom at 19:59, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- Is this an accepted form for this sort of article? It appears to be an amalgam of the text and charts that are typically broken out by season (see 2005 Utah Utes football team, etc.) lumped together to make a DYK-length article. Other schools are sometimes organized into decade articles (see Alabama Crimson Tide football, 1970–1979) but there's no corresponding Alabama Crimson Tide football under Bear Bryant. The article should most likely be broken up into Utah Utes football, 1990-1999 plus three individual articles for the 2000-2002 seasons then have the '90s article renominated with roughly the same hook. - Dravecky (talk) 12:42, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
- Legitimate concerns, but here's what I think. First, there is no hard and fast rule for the type of grouping. Several other major college football programs have their seasonal articles arranged by coach (Georgia Bulldogs football under Mark Richt, Penn State Nittany Lions football under Joe Paterno (in the Big Ten), Notre Dame Fighting Irish football under Bob Davie, Oklahoma Sooners football under Bob Stoops, and Minnesota Golden Gophers football under Glen Mason, etc). Personally, I prefer this approach, as it seems to provide a more coherent focus for the article, rather than just an arbitrary decade-based grouping of seasons (why not 1991-2000? or 3 year groupings?). If it was up to me, I'd change the existing decade groupings to coach groupings, as it seems more like a more discrete topic (the tenure of a coach), rather than just a tabulation of data. Speaking of which, so far the article is still a bit tabular, but the prose is a work in progress, and given the scope of the article, it's going to take a little more work to increase it substantially to the level of, say, the Notre Dame article (but hey, it's a new article). Some of the seasons, like 1994, will surely merit individual articles that will be linked to via {{main}}, but other seasons, like 1997 or 2000, just don't have that much going for them as a standalone article, hence the grouping into a single article that can grow into something well-sourced and solid. DeFaultRyan 19:59, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 14
Garfield School
- ... that the Garfield School in Brunswick, New York, (pictured) was the first building in that town to be added to the National Register of Historic Places?
Created by Wadester16 (talk). Self nom at 23:45, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
- Using the word "first" implies there is a second, but the source says it is the only - what about changing the hook to say "only". Or, perhaps you could mention that it was used as a schoolhouse until the late 1950s instead. I thought that was more interesting, in fact, since it is a two-room schoolhouse. Awadewit (talk) 17:29, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- Verifiable or not, Brunswick is not a well-known place, and I can't imagine very many main-page viewers caring enough about that hook fact to click on the article. Here's an alternative suggestion:
- alt1 ... that the Garfield School in Brunswick, New York, (pictured) is considered
unusualunique for its time period because it was not built from a template found in an architectural plan book? --Orlady (talk) 01:18, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- alt1 ... that the Garfield School in Brunswick, New York, (pictured) is considered
- I feel that the situation is more complicated in the reference. Notice that after the sentences about how it was not copied from a prefab plan, there are these sentences: "a plan in a pattern book entitled Country School-Houses, which was written by James Johonnot and published in 1858, is markedly similar to the plan of the Garfield School; on the other hand, the plan is so simple that the similarities may be coincidental." - It sounds as if we don't know for sure whether they copied something or not. I'm not sure we can use this as the hook. Awadewit (talk) 15:57, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Dziwożona
- ... that Dziwożona, a wood demon in Slavic mythology, has such huge breasts that she uses them to wash her clothes?
Created by Malick78 (talk). Self nom at 22:21, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
- Please add more inline citations, there's only one now. Shubinator (talk) 22:28, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
- That makes no sense... –Juliancolton | Talk 22:54, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
- Shubinator is thinking of D2. Juliancolton's point is that his Polish references apparently retell the entire legend, not specific sentences. Art LaPella (talk) 23:36, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
- I was also thinking of bigger guidelines, like notability. Especially since this is mythology, and I can't read the ref, it takes more than one reference to convince me the article isn't original research. Shubinator (talk) 23:45, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
- I've added some inline citations, but the article should be more encyclopedic - currently it describes the mythical demon as a real, existing being, ex. "At the risk of becoming one of these demons after death were mostly midwives, old maids, unmarried mothers, pregnant women ...". --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 20:07, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
- I just did an online translation (which are known to be unreliable), and while it discusses "breasts great so and long", it doesn't say anything about washing her clothes with them as far as I can tell. –Juliancolton | Talk 16:40, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- "piersi ich są tak wielkie, że je zamiast pralników używają, piorąc swoją bieliznę" - "their breasts are so large, that instead of pounding sticks, they use them [the breasts] while washing their linen". Malick78 (talk) 21:45, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- The hook is based on a story told by Lucjan Siemieński (published in 1845). Please take a look at a different, but also mid 19th century depiction of Dziwożona as an attractive ghost from the woodcut by painter Jan Styfi based on an earlier art study by Henryk Pillati. --Poeticbent talk 17:11, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Are you saying one depiction is more representative of the myth than the other? Please be a bit clearer. The Siemienski version is found on many pages on the Polish web. (Btw, for other editors... Poeticbent and I have had a couple of altercations in the past. Just so you know there may be some history here...) Malick78 (talk) 19:39, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, I cannot read Polish. Can someone explain why the sources are reliable? Thanks! Awadewit (talk) 15:51, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- I do not hold grudges against anybody. But, it is quite disappointing, nonetheless, that under the circumstances, Malick78 would neither revise the hook in accordance with the above findings, nor would he make the necessary editorial changes to the article which are detrimental to its overall balance. --Poeticbent talk 16:37, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Zana e malit
- ... that in Albanian folklore the zana, mountain fairies revered for their beauty and courage, are said to have watched approvingly over Albanian protests against the 1878 Treaty of San Stefano?
Created by Flokarti (talk), Gonzonoir (talk). Self nom at 13:02, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
How Am I Supposed to Kill You If You Have All the Guns?
- ... that the "electric shocks" and "digital distortion" of How Am I Supposed to Kill You If You Have All the Guns? were labelled as "disgusting" by the parents of one of its creators?
(self-nom, created by --candle•wicke 02:49, 14 June 2009 (UTC) )
- The second-hand quoted reaction, "They were just like, ‘What is this? What are you talking about? This stuff is disgusting’", was to the whole EP, not the specific elements cited in the hook. Also, the quoted words "electric shocks" and "digital distortion" are those of the reviewer, not Jamie's parents. Factual inaccuracy aside, "mother of punk rock band member doesn't like punk rock" is just not that surprising a hook. - Dravecky (talk) 10:20, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 13
Jan Władysław Dawid
- ... that Jan Władysław Dawid was a lecturer at the Flying University?
- Comment: My first DYK nom. If there are any problems or more expansion/work will need to be undertaken on the article, please let me know ASAP. Also note that the hook I made is valid (reference provided refers to it by alternate name, but it is still the same institute. Also note: There is an image I found to add of him but it is currently being investigated what is the copyright status of the image (the image is in a Polish website, hence can't work my way around). Any help would be appreciated. See talk page of User:Piotrus to give your opinion. Kind regards.
Created by Calaka (talk). Self nom at 10:58, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
- Stupid question but do the DYK nominations need to be approved (if they are to become DYK) before they go over the 5 day limit? Or once they are nominated, it is a matter of time and there is no rush until it gets approve/not approved? Cheers!Calaka (talk) 11:00, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- No rush until or after they get approved. Once you nominate it here, it will usually stay for several days until it's reviewed and approved, and then some more until it goes up on the main page. You just have to keep an eye on it so if someone raises a problem with it, you can fix it. Chamal talk 11:08, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- Ah good to know! I will keep an eye over it but wont be expecting the review to be done ASAP. Kind regards.Calaka (talk) 13:00, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you for submitting to DYK! I have a few questions. 1) Could you add more information to reference 1, so that if a reader wanted to find it, it would be easy for them? 2) You wrote above that the reference provided refers to "Flying University" by a different name - what name is that? 3) Could you add an inline citation next to this information in the article? Thanks! Awadewit (talk) 18:43, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded on June 12
Battle of the palaces /new/ and Charles Cameron (architect) /exp./
- ... that Charles Cameron, fired and deprived of his house by Paul I of Russia during the battle of the palaces, later lived in retirement in Paul's favorite palace? Expanded/created: User:NVO, cleaned up by User:LilHelpa; self-nom by NVO
Alt hooks
- ... that the battle of the palaces culminated in 1796 with the destruction of the largest imperial palace of the Russian Empire?
- ... that Charles Cameron, fired and deprived of his house by Paul I of Russia in 1796, later lived in retirement in Paul's favorite palace?
- ... that in the beginning of his career Charles Cameron sued his own father who ended up in Fleet Prison? -- NVO (talk) 20:04, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
- I think that ALT1 is a wonderful hook, but I didn't see an inline citation for the "culmination" bit and when I looked in the sources I couldn't find anything quickly. Do you know where this information is in the sources and could you add an inline citation for it so we can use this great hook? Awadewit (talk) 18:18, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Special occasion holding area
- Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools'). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.
Articles created/expanded for the anniversary of the Stonewall riots (June 28)
List of pre-Stonewall LGBT actions in the United States
- ... that although the Stonewall riots in 1969 are generally recognized as the beginning of the modern gay liberation movement, there were over a dozen pre-Stonewall LGBT rights actions in the US?
Created by Otto4711 (talk). Self nom at 19:48, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
- If this is accepted, I would like it held until June 28. The featured article for that day is going to be Stonewall riots and I'd like to have this article appear on the same day. Otto4711 (talk) 19:48, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
- I'll accept the offline sources in good faith. The number of pre-Stonewall LGBT actions as described in the hook checks out (I could count 14), and the length looks good. I'll keep this tick up so someone can verify my check. I also think it should be held for June 28 as a double-feature. Hurricane Angel Saki (talk) 23:04, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
Heinz Heger
- ... that the publication of a rare memoir by concentration camp survivor Heinz Heger has been described as a turning point in the gay community's adoption of the pink triangle symbol?
Created by Gonzonoir (talk). Self nom at 21:15, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- Of course this is tangential to the Stonewall anniversary, but if it would fit the general theme I'd love to volunteer this one. Gonzonoir (talk) 21:15, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
- Off-line ref accepted in good faith. Geraldk (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Randy Wicker
- ... that despite having organized the first LGBT rights demonstration in the US, activist Randy Wicker denounced the Stonewall riots, saying that "throwing rocks through windows doesn't open doors"?
- Comment: If accepted, please hold for June 28. This could also be a double, by linking the first LGBT rights demonstration in the US to List of pre-Stonewall LGBT actions in the United States, which has already been passed for the same date and is in the holding area.
Created/expanded by Otto4711 (talk). Self nom at 11:53, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
- Offline sources accepted in good faith. I'll tick it so it can be placed into the special holding. Good work! Hurricane Angel Saki (talk) 22:50, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
One Iowa
- ... that the LGBT rights group One Iowa used psychologists and childhood development experts during Varnum v. Brien to establish that homosexual couples were as capable of raising children as heterosexuals?
Created by William S. Saturn (talk). Self nom at 03:15, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
From the source: "Lambda included statements from child development and other experts to make the case that children of gay and lesbian parents are just as well-adjusted as children of heterosexual parents." It appears from the source that this was a strategy adopted by plaintiffs' lawyers, not this organization. Is there another source that spells out a clearer connection between One Iowa and the stragegy, or is there another hook from the article that could be used? Otto4711 (talk) 02:20, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- Sorry about that, I completely misinterpreted the source. Here's another hook:
- ... that the LGBT rights group One Iowa held public forums during the landmark case Varnum v. Brien to discuss the importance of marriage equality? --William S. Saturn (talk) 04:20, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Good to go. Otto4711 (talk) 05:47, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Veterans Benevolent Association
- ... that the Veterans Benevolent Association, an early organization for gay American veterans, worked with the NAACP to end the issuance of the discriminatory blue discharge?
Created by Otto4711 (talk). Self nom at 18:11, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
- It is obvious that the blue charge was discriminatory but I do not believe this is in line with NPOV#Let_the_facts_speak_for_themselves.--William S. Saturn (talk) 18:40, 20 June 2009 (UTC)
Lisa Ben
- ... that pioneering lesbian journalist Edith Eyde only assumed the pseudonym Lisa Ben after editors of the lesbian magazine The Ladder rejected her first choice, "Ima Spinster"?
5x expanded by Otto4711 (talk). Self nom at 19:04, 16 June 2009 (UTC)
Stonewall Nation
- ... that the Los Angeles chapter of the Gay Liberation Front organized a project to take over the government of Alpine County, CA, to establish a gay separatist community called Stonewall Nation?
Created by Otto4711 (talk). Self nom at 21:31, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
William Dickey (poet)
- ... that the poet William Dickey finished a poem about the death of his mentor, John Berryman, shortly before his own death in 1994?
Created by Offenbach (talk). Self nom at 13:15, 21 June 2009 (UTC)
- Does the source for the hook call Berryman Dickey's mentor? If not, the hook needs revising, and should probqably be based on a different ref. Geraldk (talk) 02:30, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that the poet William Dickey finished a poem about the death of his former teacher, John Berryman, shortly before his own death in 1994? —Offenbach (talk) 03:45, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded for Canada Day (July 1)
Marcel Bellefeuille
- ... that in 2006, current Hamilton Tiger-Cats head coach Marcel Bellefeuille helped the Montreal Alouettes have the CFL's only two receivers with 1,000 receiving yards?
- ALT1:... that before the Hamilton Tiger-Cats final preseason game in 2009, head coach Marcel Bellefeuille said that, "The only thing we know for certain as a coaching staff and as an organization is that Nick Setta will be our kicker"?
Created by Giants27 (talk),DoubleBlue (talk). Self nom at 22:05, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Tumbo Abanikanda, Mark Restelli, Richie Hall
- ... that Edmonton Eskimos head coach Richie Hall said that he hoped that the position battle between Tumbo Abanikanda and Mark Restelli for a starting linebacker spot would end when "one player outperforms the other player"?
- Comment: I know Richie Hall isn't expanded 5x but it should be by July 1st.
5x expanded by Giants27 (talk), DoubleBlue (talk). Self nom at 20:11, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Jonathan Brown (gridiron football)
- ... that it took almost nine seasons for Jonathan Brown to record his first career interception?
- ALT1:... that after recording sacks against Winnipeg during the 2008 CFL season, Jonathan Brown passed Harold Hallman for most sacks in Toronto Argonauts team history?
5x expanded by Giants27 (talk). Self nom at 01:47, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Articles created/expanded for July 4th (July 4)
Syng inkstand
- ... that both the Declaration of Independence and the Constitution of the United States were signed with pens dipped in the Syng inkstand (pictured)?
5x expanded by Geraldk (talk). Self nom at 02:42, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
- It looks good from here! Hurricane Angel Saki (talk) 03:53, 18 June 2009 (UTC)
Enoch Crosby
- ... that the Revolutionary War spy Enoch Crosby was the basis for the character Harvey Birch in James Fenimore Cooper's novel The Spy?
Created by Geraldk (talk). Self nom at 19:32, 24 June 2009 (UTC)
Battle of Johnstown
- ... that the American victory in the Battle of Johnstown during the American Revolutionary War effectively ended fighting in the Mohawk Valley?
5x expanded by Geraldk (talk). Self nom at 01:56, 25 June 2009 (UTC)
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