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:::::Yes, apparently "Hanoi Hannah" was an invention of the Americans, and not a name she knew about originally. On air she actually used a different pseudonym, "Thu Huong", during the war. [http://www.nytimes.com/1994/11/26/world/ho-chi-minh-city-journal-hanoi-hannah-looks-back-with-few-regrets.html] I don't know how she felt about the name Hanoi Hannah. [[User:Dragons flight|Dragons flight]] ([[User talk:Dragons flight|talk]]) 12:36, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
:::::Yes, apparently "Hanoi Hannah" was an invention of the Americans, and not a name she knew about originally. On air she actually used a different pseudonym, "Thu Huong", during the war. [http://www.nytimes.com/1994/11/26/world/ho-chi-minh-city-journal-hanoi-hannah-looks-back-with-few-regrets.html] I don't know how she felt about the name Hanoi Hannah. [[User:Dragons flight|Dragons flight]] ([[User talk:Dragons flight|talk]]) 12:36, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
::::::It's safe to assume that if she did not explicitly acknowledge that pseudonym, that it's not how she prefers to be remembered, thus not making it a "stage name". Referring to her using a demeaning Americanism is practically the strongest form of [[systemic bias]] you can get, falling just shy of actual full-blown racism.--[[User:WaltCip|WaltCip]] ([[User talk:WaltCip|talk]]) 12:40, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
::::::It's safe to assume that if she did not explicitly acknowledge that pseudonym, that it's not how she prefers to be remembered, thus not making it a "stage name". Referring to her using a demeaning Americanism is practically the strongest form of [[systemic bias]] you can get, falling just shy of actual full-blown racism.--[[User:WaltCip|WaltCip]] ([[User talk:WaltCip|talk]]) 12:40, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
:::::::Fully agree with this: unless we know for sure she heard of and accepted the American nickname, her article should be at her given name, not the nick name (though obviously the redirect there is fine). It's a flat out BLP violation. --[[User:Masem|M<font size="-3">ASEM</font>]] ([[User Talk:Masem|t]]) 14:22, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
::::I want to note that if it's her common name, the article itself shouldn't be renamed. I can imagine this having influence on the RD, though. ~[[User:Maplestrip|<span style="color:#005080">Mable</span>]] ([[User talk:Maplestrip|<span style="color:#700090">chat</span>]]) 12:20, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
::::I want to note that if it's her common name, the article itself shouldn't be renamed. I can imagine this having influence on the RD, though. ~[[User:Maplestrip|<span style="color:#005080">Mable</span>]] ([[User talk:Maplestrip|<span style="color:#700090">chat</span>]]) 12:20, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
::::Per commonname the vast majority of the English-language sources (both historical and contemporary) refer to her as Hanoi Hannah. The article is currently named correctly and any rename is likely to be instantly reverted. As far as I can tell there was no derogatory aspect to the name, (see Pyongyang Sally etc) other than the inability of the troops to accurately pronounce an asian name. Should she be listed at RD, I would expect the HH name to be blue linked and her actual name included. [[User:Only in death|Only in death does duty end]] ([[User talk:Only in death|talk]]) 12:27, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
::::Per commonname the vast majority of the English-language sources (both historical and contemporary) refer to her as Hanoi Hannah. The article is currently named correctly and any rename is likely to be instantly reverted. As far as I can tell there was no derogatory aspect to the name, (see Pyongyang Sally etc) other than the inability of the troops to accurately pronounce an asian name. Should she be listed at RD, I would expect the HH name to be blue linked and her actual name included. [[User:Only in death|Only in death does duty end]] ([[User talk:Only in death|talk]]) 12:27, 4 October 2016 (UTC)

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October 4

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Nobel Prize (Physics)

Article: No article specified
Blurb: David Thouless, F. Duncan Haldane, and J. Michael Kosterlitz share the Nobel Prize in Physics for theoretical discoveries using topology to understand superconductors, superfluids, and other exotic states of condensed matter. (Post)
News source(s): NPR Nobel Committee
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Nominator's comments: This nomination is bordering on wishful thinking, as none of the articles are remotely ready right now, but I'm hoping that by putting it up here it might help attract the attention needed to improve the articles before this grows stale. Dragons flight (talk) 11:48, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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RD: Hanoi Hannah/Trinh Thi Ngo

Articles: Hanoi Hannah (talk · history · tag) and Trinh Thi Ngo (talk · history · tag)
Recent deaths nomination (Post)
News source(s): Newsweek
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Article updated
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Nominator's comments: Article is centred on her role in the war, not much about her previous life, but doesn't seem to be anything else to add to that period of her life. MurielMary (talk) 08:08, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Weak support – though the article is clearly start-class, its sourcing looks fine and the topic is fascinating. I think it's definitely worth listing at RD now, though I wish the sourcing was a bit better. The lack of early/late life information doesn't bother me too much, though I wish we could have some information about her own political beliefs during the war. ~Mable (chat) 11:30, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Based on the below discussion, I would prefer it to be posted under her legal name rather than her American common name. ~Mable (chat) 13:32, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
There is a redirect from her real name Trinh Thi Ngo to the HH page. Or is it appropriate to rename the HH page as her real name? MurielMary (talk) 11:47, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
We usually post the COMMONNAME, so if it shouldn't be Hanoi Hannah, the article needs to be moved. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:10, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Biographies may correctly be titled using a pseudonym if that is how the person is most widely discussed in reliable sources. See WP:STAGENAME. As for which name to use at RD, I'm actually rather conflicted. If this is a valid application of STAGENAME (and never having heard of her before today, I don't know if it is), then presumably Hanoi Hannah is the better known name and would be more recognizable to our readers. To give a more modern analogy, I imagine that if Katy Perry dropped dead, it would be more useful to readers to list her stage name than to post her legal name, Katheryn Hudson, at RD. Is there precedent for the question of pseudonyms at RD? I notice the Newsweek source uses her pseudonym in its title but introduces and uses her real name in the body of its text. Dragons flight (talk) 12:13, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I feel the same way. Has Trinh ever stated anything about her 'stagename'? Did she identify herself under that name, or was it a name given to her literally by her "enemies"? ~Mable (chat) 12:16, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, apparently "Hanoi Hannah" was an invention of the Americans, and not a name she knew about originally. On air she actually used a different pseudonym, "Thu Huong", during the war. [1] I don't know how she felt about the name Hanoi Hannah. Dragons flight (talk) 12:36, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
It's safe to assume that if she did not explicitly acknowledge that pseudonym, that it's not how she prefers to be remembered, thus not making it a "stage name". Referring to her using a demeaning Americanism is practically the strongest form of systemic bias you can get, falling just shy of actual full-blown racism.--WaltCip (talk) 12:40, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Fully agree with this: unless we know for sure she heard of and accepted the American nickname, her article should be at her given name, not the nick name (though obviously the redirect there is fine). It's a flat out BLP violation. --MASEM (t) 14:22, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I want to note that if it's her common name, the article itself shouldn't be renamed. I can imagine this having influence on the RD, though. ~Mable (chat) 12:20, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Per commonname the vast majority of the English-language sources (both historical and contemporary) refer to her as Hanoi Hannah. The article is currently named correctly and any rename is likely to be instantly reverted. As far as I can tell there was no derogatory aspect to the name, (see Pyongyang Sally etc) other than the inability of the troops to accurately pronounce an asian name. Should she be listed at RD, I would expect the HH name to be blue linked and her actual name included. Only in death does duty end (talk) 12:27, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Discovery of largest Iron Age Earthwork in Britain

Article: Skipsea Castle (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ Archaeologists discover Skipsea Castle's mound is 1500 years older than thought, making it Britain's largest Iron Age Earthwork (Post)
News source(s): BBC
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 ϢereSpielChequers 23:37, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose for now. I'm underwhelmed by the two sentence update over the recent discovery. If the recent archaeology could be expanded upon (how was the new determination made? What new work has been done? Etc.) then I would support this. --Jayron32 03:16, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Nobel Prize (Medicine)

Article: Yoshinori Ohsumi (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ Japanese cell biologist Yoshinori Ohsumi is awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for his discoveries of mechanisms for autophagy. (Post)
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Nominator's comments: Needs some work but otherwise Nobel Prizes are ITNR. Tone 09:59, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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2016 NRL Grand Final

Article: 2016 NRL Grand Final (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ In rugby league, the Cronulla-Sutherland Sharks defeat the Melbourne Storm to win their first NRL title. (Post)
Alternative blurb: ​ In rugby league, the Cronulla-Sutherland Sharks defeat the Melbourne Storm in the NRL Grand Final.
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Nominator's comments: This WP:ITN/R is up to date. The match summary could be expanded but is otherwise good to go. Jarumain (talk) 12:10, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Conditional Support Overall the article is not in bad shape and just needs some minor fixes. I've added a few CN tags and the tables aren't clear where their data is coming from. Fix those and we should be good to go. -Ad Orientem (talk) 15:23, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed. Jarumain (talk) 21:14, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support Looks good to me. Thatsgold (talk) 11:13, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hungarian Migrant Quota Referendum, 2016

Article: Hungarian migrant quota referendum, 2016 (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ In a referendum Hungarians strongly reject European Union quotas for migrant refugees, although its validity is in doubt. (Post)
News source(s): 27, 28
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Article updated
Nominator's comments: Significant news from Hungary showing very strong opposition to EU quotas requiring member states to accept certain numbers of migrant refugees. Although it is likely to be declared invalid due to low turnout the over 90% oppose vote is certain to add fuel to the debate over Europe's immigration crisis. The article has been updated, looks well written and decently sourced. Ad Orientem (talk) 04:27, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Right-wing nationalism on the march. Whether enforceable or not, the article is solid (at a quick glance, at least) and this is noteworthy in the migrant crisis. – Muboshgu (talk) 04:37, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose I cannot see why we would post a referendum that is invalid because of low turnout and therefore is not going to have any effect. Neljack (talk) 05:35, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    • Normally I would agree. But when you have upwards of 90% of the vote going against the EU quotas, legal validity is pretty much irrelevant. The referendum is sending shock waves through the EU. -Ad Orientem (talk) 05:40, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
      • Not really; it was predictable the vote would go this way. The majority of Hungarians are anti-immigration, and remember the vote was not "should Hungary accept a certain quota of immigrants?" but effectively "Should the EU be able to force Hungary to accept a certain quota of immigrants". Given that, the only surprising thing is that the turnout was so low. Black Kite (talk) 09:27, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support covered in multiple major new services (UK, Australia, Qatar, UK again, Europe, USA, etc.) - Yellow Dingo (talk) 07:19, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose The turnout was below 50% and according to Hungarian law this is insufficient to make the results valid. Brandmeistertalk 07:32, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose on impact. The plebiscite failed on turnout, and so nothing will change. And the thing sending shockwaves through Europe is the migrant crisis itself, not a failed plebiscite.128.214.53.104 (talk) 07:35, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Note: Unfortunately, my English grammar is quite poor, so I guess the article requires a susbtantial copyedit. In this light, I'd rather not support the candidacy. --Norden1990 (talk) 07:39, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose per the reasons above. For a start, yes, the turnout is too low for it to be valid. Also, this was more an opinion poll than an actual plebiscite, the question was loaded very much with emotive language. Hungary will not be able to legitimately deal with the EU's rules while it remains an EU member - in the mother of all ironies, it remains very much in favour of the EU for the benefit of its own migrants in Britain Valentina Cardoso (talk) 11:18, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment The blurb is misleading, the boycotting side won. Narayanese (talk) 17:34, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment I agree that the blurb is terribly misleading. Those who opposed the ruling party in this question were encouraged to boycott the referendum (which was widely considered illegitimate and pointless; the Constitution of Hungary itself states that "No national referendum may be held on ... any obligation arising from an international agreement" [2]) I would love to see the referendum mentioned on the main page, because it shows that the majority of people definitely refused to be part of Orbán's hate campaign, but the blurb should reflect this, and not the opposite. Thank you. HungaryNews (talk) 18:16, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Weak oppose because the turnout is too low. Can still be posted if we run into a serious lack of new blurbs, which was the case a week ago but we have several new nominations now. Banedon (talk) 01:02, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose routine local referendum. Haven't seen any coverage that claims that this has significance outside Hungary. HaEr48 (talk) 03:09, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Voters reject FARC peace deal

Articles: Colombian peace process (talk · history · tag) and FARC (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ Voters in Colombia reject FARC peace deal (Post)
Alternative blurb: ​ Voters in Colombia reject the FARC peace deal.
Alternative blurb II: ​ Voters in Colombia narrowly reject a peace agreement with FARC leftist guerillas.
News source(s): BBC, AP, Guardian.
Credits:

Both articles need updating
Nominator's comments: The landmark peace deal lies in tatters, it probably won't be possible to revive it. Count Iblis (talk) 22:43, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
But it will expire; this deal would have been permanent. 331dot (talk) 09:32, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Uusally its just a referendum but this was a major surprise with massive ramification akin to Brexit. I imagine its more in the news in the Spanish language media. Anyways support ALT as it links to the details..Lihaas (talk) 15:44, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
As does Alt2. Sca (talk) 16:27, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Nah, its too wordy.
Needs more prose reactions: FARC, Santos, Cuba, (Venezuela?), and troublemaker uribe. Also more analysis on the fact that the troubled areas approved it while the central areas less affected rejected it (was on bbxC tv).Lihaas (talk) 22:46, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
What are we waiting for? Sca (talk) 01:06, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Personally? Prose. Colombian peace agreement referendum, 2016 seems to be the best choice for a target article, but only a single sentence of prose has been added since the vote result became known. [3]. Having a map and vote tally is nice, but there is literally more discussion of what this result means on this page than there is within the referendum article right now. I understand that the consequences might be uncertain, but even then the article could at least cite some sources saying that. Dragons flight (talk) 01:33, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Well, Colombian peace process is a ridiculously bloated 19,143 words, while the last section reporting the referendum result is a mere 27. However, Colombian peace agreement referendum, 2016 is a respectable 1,000 words, plus two charts, and seems just barely adequate. True, it would be better to have what in the news business we used to call "instant depth," but the referendum result alone seems very significant. Time's a' wastin'. Sca (talk) 14:04, 4 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

2016 Ryder Cup

Article: 2016 Ryder Cup (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ In golf, Team USA wins the Ryder Cup. (Post)
News source(s): BBC
Credits:

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 The Rambling Man (talk) 21:40, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Conditional Weak Support There are two relatively short sections near the top that need a reference and some of the tables are not very clear on where their data is coming from. And honestly, though I tagged it, I'm not sweating the TV coverage as that is not a claim likely to be controversial. Otherwise it looks good and reasonably well sourced. -Ad Orientem (talk) 21:54, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

2016 Ethiopian protests

Article: 2016 Ethiopian protests (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ At least 52 people are killed in protests in Oromia, Ethiopia. (Post)
News source(s): BBC, The Guardian, Reuters
Credits:
 The Rambling Man (talk) 21:11, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Weak Oppose This sounds like something we should have on ITN. Unfortunately there are currently only three sentences on the subject in the linked article. Those three sentences are not only short on details, but seem unsure of the ones they are providing. It's not clear exactly when this happened. Rocks were thrown, or they weren't. Fifty-two were killed, or three hundred. And there is only one source cited. While the BBC is indisputably an RS source, I'd like to have more than one news source if we are posting something to "In the News." It doesn't need its own article but if we could expand this beyond three sentences and add another reliable news source (or two) I think we could post this. -Ad Orientem (talk) 22:12, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    Just Google News it, I've added The Guardian and Reuters to the template. The Rambling Man (talk) 04:48, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[Posted] RD: Neville Marriner

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Article: Neville Marriner (talk · history · tag)
Recent deaths nomination (Post)
News source(s): [1] [2]
Credits:

Recent deaths of any person, animal or organism with a Wikipedia article are always presumed to be important enough to post (see this RFC and further discussion). Comments should focus on whether the quality of the article meets WP:ITNRD.
 Dionysodorus (talk) 17:01, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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[Posted] RD: Daphne Odjig

Article: Daphne Odjig (talk · history · tag)
Recent deaths nomination (Post)
News source(s): CBC News
Credits:

Article updated
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Nominator's comments: First Nations artist from Canada. Article has been expanded and referenced. MurielMary (talk) 06:02, 3 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

2016 All-Ireland Senior Football Championship Final

Article: 2016 All-Ireland Senior Football Championship Final (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ In Gaelic football, Dublin defeat Mayo in the All-Ireland Senior Football Championship Final, retaining the Sam Maguire Cup for the first time since the 1977 final. (Post)
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Article updated
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 Greencauldron (talk) 20:15, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[Posted] 2016 AFL Grand Final

Article: 2016 AFL Grand Final (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ In Australian rules football, the Western Bulldogs beat the Sydney Swans to win the AFL Grand Final (Post)
Alternative blurb: ​ In Australian rules football, the Western Bulldogs defeat the Sydney Swans in the AFL Grand Final, winning their first title since 1954.
Credits:

Article updated
The nominated event is listed on WP:ITN/R, so each occurrence is presumed to be important enough to post. Comments should focus on whether the quality of the article and update meet WP:ITNCRIT, not the significance.
Nominator's comments: multiple updaters Yellow Dingo (talk) 10:03, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Inclined to support given that this is the club's first premiership win for 62 years and only its second ever, as well as being the first time any team has won from seventh position on the ladder. Gatoclass (talk) 10:58, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Although I note that the match itself isn't covered in the article, and I think that would have to be rectified before this could be posted. Gatoclass (talk) 11:05, 1 October 2016 (UTC) I now support this nomination as a match summary has been added. Gatoclass (talk) 08:34, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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[Posted] RD: Brahim Zniber

Article: Brahim Zniber (talk · history · tag)
Recent deaths nomination (Post)
News source(s): [3][4]
Credits:

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 Zigzig20s (talk) 20:18, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[Posted] End of Rosetta mission

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Articles: Rosetta (spacecraft) (talk · history · tag) and 67P/Churyumov–Gerasimenko (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ The space probe Rosetta ends its mission with a controlled crash into comet 67P/Churyumov–Gerasimenko (Post)
Alternative blurb: ​ The European Space Agency's Rosetta spacecraft ends its mission with a controlled descent onto comet 67P/Churyumov–Gerasimenko
News source(s): Nature
Credits:
Nominator's comments: Hasn't happened yet, but is going to. Banedon (talk) 01:31, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Not exactly "all along". There was no plan for what do at the end of the mission - they originally considered putting it back to sleep for five years until the next orbit. It looks the decision to land it on the comet was made some time in 2014 or so. Smurrayinchester 14:36, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The article says it "ended its mission by landing on the comet near a pit called Deir el-Medina." I haven't read a lot about this topic, but it's not entirely clear to me whether the vehicle achieved a soft landing or was destroyed. Sca (talk) 22:02, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
PS: BBC headline: Rosetta mission ends in comet collision. Sca (talk) 22:30, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"Descend" seems inaccurate. Friday's BBC story said: "Europe's Rosetta probe has ended its mission to Comet 67P by crash-landing on ... the icy object's surface. Mission control in Darmstadt, Germany, was able to confirm the impact had occurred when radio contact to the ageing spacecraft was lost abruptly. The assumption is that the probe would have been damaged beyond use." Sca (talk) 21:23, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Good summary. Thanks. Sca (talk) 14:48, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
But should 'crash landing' be hyphenated? Sca (talk) 21:33, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Not in the school of English I was taught? Espresso Addict (talk) 21:56, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Well BBC (above) hyphenated it as a verb. But whatever.... Sca (talk) 00:56, 3 October 2016 (UTC) [reply]

2016 FIFA U-17 Women's World Cup

Article: 2016 FIFA U-17 Women's World Cup (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: 2016 FIFA U-17 Women's World Cup, the first ever FIFA women’s football tournament in the Middle East, kicks off in Jordan. (Post)
News source(s): FIFA
Credits:
Nominator's comments: kicked off yesterday, continues for a month Makeandtoss (talk) 17:35, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Indeed (which is why I opposed myself), but I bet we wouldn't have posted the U-21 version either (which I would have supported) for the same reason ... consistency is something we need to look at on sporting events. Black Kite (talk) 17:53, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • But as noted, WP:IAR is a policy (!!) no less so whether former consensus or not established that we should not post junior events (just as it established we no longer judge "super notability" of RDs), it is still perfectly acceptable to do so. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:01, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Good point. But I take a somewhat conservative approach to IAR. My view is that (with apologies to one of our former presidents) invoking IAR should be safe, legal and rare. I have done it a few times myself. But only in unusual situations where I really thought that an exception to an existing guideline was warranted but that circumstances did not justify changing the guideline itself. Here I have doubts about the guideline. If I was going to go down this path, I'd just propose removing most of the college/university level sports events from ITNR. And if someone made that proposal, I'd probably support it. -Ad Orientem (talk) 19:08, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Me too, but for consistency, with the RD entry below where IAR is quoted as a way of getting out of posting an RD even if it meets the quality threshold, it only seems reasonable to quote it here to note to others that IAR doesn't just apply as and when they feel appropriate. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:17, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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[Posted] RD: Shirley Jaffe

Article: Shirley Jaffe (artist) (talk · history · tag)
Recent deaths nomination (Post)
News source(s): New York Times Le Figaro
Credits:

Article updated
Recent deaths of any person, animal or organism with a Wikipedia article are always presumed to be important enough to post (see this RFC and further discussion). Comments should focus on whether the quality of the article meets WP:ITNRD.
Nominator's comments: Article has been updated and referenced. MurielMary (talk) 09:39, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment. Good job on the referencing, but I think more detail is needed on her style, works and critical reception before this can be posted. A list of some of her notable works is lacking, as is any detail on her sculpture. Pre-expansion there was a quotation that has been removed, which was useful; I assume this couldn't be referenced? The lead also could do with being a little longer. There's a long obituary in French from Le Figaro but embarrassingly I can't read the technical French.[4] Espresso Addict (talk) 17:46, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the suggestions - have expanded somewhat. Espresso Addict MurielMary (talk) 20:58, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, I'm prepared to Support now. To the comment below about her death not being in the mainstream news, Le Figaro seems adequate. Espresso Addict (talk) 22:36, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Light show nominations for RD are assessed on the quality of the article, not the notability of the subject. MurielMary (talk) 20:18, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"In the news" means widespread/general coverage, not a mention in the subsection of a niche periodical. And, yes, the readership of the Saturday Arts & Design section of the NYT is a niche audience.
Notability no longer a criteria for opposing a nom. Quality of article only. MurielMary (talk) 22:43, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
The revised RD guidelines presumes that anyone with an article is sufficiently notable to be listed on RD. The only valid grounds for opposition is article quality. -Ad Orientem (talk) 22:44, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
It damn well is a criteria; WP:Ignore all rules is a WP:Policy. How dare you two attempt to stifle debate with your bogus claim? Abductive (reasoning) 23:16, 1 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Posted. I agree that Jaffe is not the most important, notable, or widely reported of deaths, but the community endorsed a quite permissive approach to selecting postings at RD. Also, her inclusion is far from the least notable or least prominent to be posted since the RFC. Dragons flight (talk) 20:59, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[Closed] 2016 Hoboken train crash

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Article: 2016 Hoboken train crash (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ At least 100 people are injured after a passenger train derails in Hoboken, New Jersey. (Post)
News source(s): [5]
Credits:
 Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 14:26, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wait but lean support There's conflicting numbers but all have at least 1 dead, possibly more, and dozens in critical conditions, with the total number injured above 100. This is a significant commuter rail accident but let's make sure the details are firmed up before posting. --MASEM (t) 14:30, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support I have been following the story closely since it broke, now three dead with the toll likely to rise significantly as dozens are "critically hurt". A significant train accident from the looks of it. Prevan (talk) 14:33, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wait but this is probably going to turn into a support fairly soon. -Ad Orientem (talk) 14:40, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Not everything is about death toll. There are hundreds injured, that should suffice. Article is still quite poor at the moment, though. Banedon (talk) 14:56, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support significant train accident - definitely abnormal in the United States. 138.51.138.90 (talk) 15:11, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose Wait train crashes that kill 3 1 (as of this post) are not that rare, and unless there's a higher death count or evidence of a crime this rates at about the level of a multiple-car traffic accident. At this point the best place for readers to look is the area news, not a lagging encyclopedia. μηδείς (talk) 16:14, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - While the level of fatalities appears mercifully low compared to other rail accidents, it's still a grave matter. And there's a wider story regarding the failure to implement Positive Train Control systems under the Rail Safety Improvement Act of 2008. (The US lags considerably compared to Europe in such matters.) AlexTiefling (talk) 16:16, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. Yes, the number of deaths appears low (fortunately!!! And that is the only thing about it anyone should ever say!) And many of the injuries actually appear to be not as sever as first thought. But this is still a major crash. Firstly, as Alex noted, theres the PTC angle. Secondly, the structural damage to the terminal is very large, with a partial roof collapse. And that terminal is a nationally registered historic landmark; the roof itself is actually the first example of the Bush-type train shed, and its destruction, even partial, is notable in itself. oknazevad (talk) 16:28, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - article now in good shape. Rare for a rail accident to cause such severe damage to a station. Mjroots (talk) 17:21, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wait Oppose – Per μηδείς, Daniel Case. – Sca (talk) 17:52, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment. BBC is now saying 1 dead and dozens injured.[5] The article is currently not much above a stub and does not mention the historic nature of the building, nor does it discuss the underlying safety issues. I'm not opposed to posting this (especially as the news it would displace is very stale) but an accurate, non-sensationalist blurb and a reasonably-fleshed-out article are first needed. Espresso Addict (talk) 18:04, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose this is headline news at this moment, mainly due to its location, but if I recall correctly, at least two recent railway crashes in Western Europe with multiple deaths/casualties were not posted. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:00, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    • Searching through the archives, I found Dalfsen crash from Feb 2016 where the train was nearly empty and one death occurred (not posted), Hermalle-sous-Huy crash from June 2016 where three died, 40 injured (not posted), Andria collision where 20 were killed (posted), Amtrak derailment in April 2016 where 2 groundcrew were killed (not posted). There might be more and I do sorta see the comparison simply on the the death/injured numbers that this is nothing like a major incident (eg the Andria one), but there are points about the damage to the historic terminal and the failure of a major safety feature, rather than just human error, that seem to play to this too. --MASEM (t) 19:17, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
      • To the latter point, unless I'm reading it incorrectly, the train wasn't fitted with the so-called PTC (per the BBC, According New Jersey Transit's most recent PTC progress report, none of the 440 trains on the New Jersey Transit rail line are equipped with PTC, nor have any employees been trained on the equipment.), so it wasn't a failing of a major safety feature, more likely human error. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:35, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
        • You're right, it's human error - but now reading further, it appears that they were originally set to be required by 2015, but Congress extended the deadline to meet complaints by train companies. Now, I know we're not yet at the point to determine if the lack of PTC would have prevented this, so the political failing here is likely a sideline issue, but it could be significant. I would still consider all other factors equal that the damage to an historic building atop the incident makes this more than just another tragic train crash. --MASEM (t) 19:53, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support as a train colliding with a station is somewhat rare, as is a historic building being damaged in such an accident. 331dot (talk) 19:26, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose per TRM. We are down to a single death. This is starting to look like a lot less than what we originally thought. Yeah there was some property damage and a high number of injured, but we have refused rail related accidents with higher casualties. Issues involving safety laws are extremely common with any transportation related accident. Sorry, but as the dust settles and things are becoming more clear I just don't think this rises to ITN level and posting this would be hard to square with recent precedent. Some consistency in standards would be kinda nice. -Ad Orientem (talk) 20:19, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose It is certainly big news here in the NY metro area, but I would not see it as ITN-worthy unless we are really having a slow day. Daniel Case (talk) 21:17, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Daniel Case: ITN has been going slow as of late - most of the blurbs posted on ITN have gone stale. 138.51.138.90 (talk) 23:31, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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[Closed] RD: Miriam Defensor Santiago

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Article: Miriam Defensor Santiago (talk · history · tag)
Recent deaths nomination (Post)
News source(s): Inquirer
Credits:

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Nominator's comments: Former Filipino senator. Article is comprehensive, with only a few "citation needed" tabs. EternalNomad (talk) 02:59, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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[Posted] RD: Agnes Nixon

Article: Agnes Nixon (talk · history · tag)
Recent deaths nomination (Post)
News source(s): USA Today
Credits:

Article updated
Recent deaths of any person, animal or organism with a Wikipedia article are always presumed to be important enough to post (see this RFC and further discussion). Comments should focus on whether the quality of the article meets WP:ITNRD.
Nominator's comments: Article had orange maintenance tags, which I have resolved and removed. However there is an IP user on the article busily reverting my edits. MurielMary (talk) 04:45, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Conditional Support While the article is not horrible, there are a few too many gaps in sourcing to post right now. These need to be filled in. Any claims of fact that are not obviously non-controversial need citations. -Ad Orientem (talk) 17:01, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
TRM, are you referring to the paragraphs of prose being under-referenced, or do you think the last two sections (lists of writing positions) need to be referenced?? Thanks. MurielMary (talk) 20:52, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Not TRM, but there are several uncited paragraphs with content that could be challenged; I'll add citation tags. The lists of writing positions right at the bottom don't appear encyclopedic & probably need cutting out altogether. Espresso Addict (talk) 21:13, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Yes true, have removed as they are probably unencyclopedic as well (overly detailed) MurielMary (talk) 19:19, 2 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[Closed] WorldView-4

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Articles: WorldView-4 (talk · history · tag) and Canyon Fire (2016) (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ The launch of the United Launch Alliance WorldView-4 satellite continues to be delayed due to numerous wildfires burning on Vandenberg Air Force Base. (Post)
News source(s): [6][7]
Credits:
 Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 17:43, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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[Closed] MH17

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Article: Malaysia Airlines Flight 17 (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ The investigation into the crash of Malaysia Airlines Flight 17 concludes the plane was shot down by a missile system belonging to Russia from within Ukraine. (Post)
News source(s): The Guardian, WSJ
Credits:
Nominator's comments: Major step in the investigation, and nearly checkmate (they still need to know who pressed the button) Smurrayinchester 13:08, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
oppose for same reasons that this adds nothing.
But lord, ya'll will believe anything the MSM posits, wont you? Meanwhile World War III has now begun in South Asia too...someone should nominate that.Lihaas (talk) 11:35, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose no actual impact. When there will be sanctions of some sort sure, but until then the conclusion does nothing of substance. Nergaal (talk) 17:17, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wait per Sca, as this story really hasn't reached a conclusion. Russia deny any involvement, Ukraine are happy to see the report. What changes? The Rambling Man (talk) 19:03, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment I'm not sure why everyone is claiming this is "inconclusive". News articles say the opposite. Per CNN: "Speaking at a press conference in the Dutch city of Nieuwegein, Wilbert Paulissen, the head of the Dutch National Detective Force, said there was conclusive evidence that a missile from the Russian-made Buk 9M38 missile system downed the passenger flight on July 17, 2014, killing all 298 people on board." Smurrayinchester 07:37, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
What's inconclusive is, who did it? The Buk stuff has been known for months. (Changed my wait to oppose.) Sca (talk) 17:56, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment - I've undone Ad Orientem's good faith closure, since I'm not seeing a consensus. "Wait" isn't the same as "Oppose"; we've wound up posting many items for which "wait" was a perfectly reasonable first position (e.g. the Turkish coup). I have no opinion on the nomination yet. Banedon (talk) 07:53, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose that the Russians were responsible is old news. The lead of the article says that the Dutch Safety Board concluded this in October 2015, and it wasn't even the first to reach this conclusion. All this does, it seems, is add a bit more detail to the Russian involvement. BencherliteTalk 17:41, 30 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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[Posted] RD: Max Walker

Article: Max Walker (talk · history · tag)
Recent deaths nomination (Post)
News source(s): ABC, Sydney Morning Herald
Credits:

Article updated
Recent deaths of any person, animal or organism with a Wikipedia article are always presumed to be important enough to post (see this RFC and further discussion). Comments should focus on whether the quality of the article meets WP:ITNRD.
Nominator's comments: Played 34 cricket tests for Australia, plus was a very good Aussie Rules footballer. Article sourcing needs improvement, but there are plenty of obituaries this morning that can be used as sources, so I will start addressing that. I don't know who to list as the "updater" because many IPs have made small contributions. AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 01:20, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I have removed the Ref Improve tag. Unfortunately there is another orange tag there that needs to be removed before this can be posted. -Ad Orientem (talk) 16:29, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

[Posted with blurb] RD with blurb: Shimon Peres

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Article: Shimon Peres (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ Former Israeli President and Prime Minister, and Nobel Peace Prize winner Shimon Peres dies at the age of 93 (Post)
News source(s): NY Times, The Atlantic, The Guardian, CNN,
Credits:

Article updated
Nominator's comments: Not sure who to credit as updaters - maybe me and others? EdChem (talk) 02:30, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Parts of the article still require more citations. On the question of whether there should be a blurb, I tend to think that Peres falls just short of the threshold. He was certainly a very important Israeli leader, but I would not say he stands out as obviously more significant than other recent Israeli leaders, such as Rabin, Sharon, Netanyahu and Olmert. At his age, there was also nothing unexpected about his death. Neljack (talk) 02:59, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment Oh man. This really needs to be posted at least to RD and I think a credible argument can be made for a blurb. Unfortunately, once again, we are confounded by crappy referencing. Sigh... -Ad Orientem (talk)
  • Oppose blurb even with sourcing. I don't think he rises to that level. – Muboshgu (talk) 03:15, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support blurb with sourcing Peres was often known as a founding father of Israel, and had huge impact on the entire region. Definitely reaches Lee Kuan Yew level of notability. EternalNomad (talk) 03:20, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support blurb sigh. I know he's not American, not from an English country, and he only won a Nobel Peace Prize rather than starred in Bicentennial Man. I just think it's sad In the News used to have genuine international stories, and now it's beneath the level of market tabloids. Ribbet32 (talk) 03:43, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
ITN has its problems but I'm not sure that's a fair shot. The only reason this may not get posted is because of the lack luster quality of the article. ITN is not a news feed. It exists to highlight good quality articles whose subjects are topical by reason of current news coverage. -Ad Orientem (talk) 04:11, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose in current state due to lack of citations. MurielMary (talk) 03:53, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • A separate article about his death and state funeral could be plausibly be written, so this could get a blurb. (Though I don't really expect anyone to bother, given the woeful state his main article was in, though that's at least improving.) The way to do get it there is the same way to get it to RD: proper sourcing in the article, not frivolous complaints about other articles that were acceptably sourced. —Cryptic 04:02, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe, but I think it would be begging for an AfD nom as a content fork and per NOTNEWS. He died of natural causes at 93. And state funerals almost never get their own articles. -Ad Orientem (talk) 04:11, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
There is no requirement that for a blurb to be supported that a separate article on the death/funeral have to be made. --MASEM (t) 04:16, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't mean to say that a separate article needs to be made, just that it be plausible that one could be. And while there's no requirement for even that, there's no requirement that I not oppose a nomination for failing it, either. —Cryptic 05:36, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support on improvements, RD for sure, general support for blurb - Some weak sourcing but this can be fixed. A former elected leader of a major nation should be given a blurb, the nobel prize pushes it further, but I would like to see a better article for that blurb to be supported. --MASEM (t) 04:16, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
In what sense is Israel a major nation, Masem? It is a mid-size country, albeit one that receives a lot of attention due to its geopolitical situation and controversy. We must be wary of systemic bias. And even in the case of countries that clearly are major nations, I'm not convinced that every former elected leader would warrant a blurb - would you really say that every former Prime Minister of Italy or Japan (and there are lots of them, some of whom held office for quite short periods), and every former President of Mexico or the Philippines, warrant blurbs. That would seem a big change from our current practice. Neljack (talk) 06:57, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
by precedent we posted yitzak shamir (I did the update) and he was head of govt and sate. just reword blurb to remove nobel OR title as its too wordy. (btw- nobel deaths are also precedent here).Lihaas (talk) 04:44, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support blurb. Article seems to be in better shape, includes important historical details, and uses nearly 70 citations.--Light show (talk) 04:47, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: I have been adding sourcing as have some others. Happy to try to find a suitable source for anything still felt to need it. I would ask earlier commenters on sourcing to please re-evaluate and identify / tag anything still needing work. As for the blurb issue, I'm obviously in favour as a Nobel Laureate who helped to found Israel, was a leader for 50+ years, negotiated their nuclear program, was an instigator of the Suez war, etc. Have a look at his description in the New York Times. EdChem (talk) 04:53, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
PS: Would someone experienced with ITN please see who deserves credit as updaters? Thanks. EdChem (talk) 05:02, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
It seems to be Avaya1 who has made by far the most substantial updates. It's easy: I added him to the ITN template above, and then just hit "Give credit". Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:18, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: I asked specifically because I was unsure whether the 'updater' credit(s) belong to those who post the information updated in the blurb or all updates to the article to make it ITN-ready. Avaya1 did a lot of work after the blurb was posted. I did quite a bit of referencing, as well as adding material and references on the death, after posting the ITN request in response to well-justified criticisms of inadequate referencing. Others had already added some material on the death. Hence my request. By the way, with "giving credit", does that involve something on user talk pages, as I have had no notification. Just asking. Thanks. EdChem (talk) 02:18, 29 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support blurb once referencing issues have been addressed. Significant Middle-East politician. Mjroots (talk) 05:35, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support blurb. Very long political career (66 years!); probably the last major figure of the Israeli founding generation; Nobel Prize shows international significance. Article needs some work, but nothing precluding posting. Neutralitytalk 07:12, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Posted with blurb. Dragons flight (talk) 07:40, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Post-posting support of blurb. High international significance, given his impact. 331dot (talk) 08:41, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • PP support I don't often lump on, but in this case, a good call. Only issue I have with the article on a quick glance is the massively excessive use of External links. But meh. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:15, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: I've been working on this article (mainly the section on the Suez crisis) for a couple of years. But as you can see, the referencing and historical sections (aside from the coverage of Suez) are really not great, including some parts I've added today (without access to the relevant books). The only part of the article which goes into real historical detail is the Suez crisis. Today I've re-ordered the lede and added some quotes from Peres (since he is famous for making memorable quotes or bon-mots). However, the article certainly needs a lot of expansion to cover the other parts of his career (the 1960s, 1970s, 1980s, 1990s, etc). Also, not everything in the article is well-cited currently. In terms of the subject's notability though - he is clearly one of the most significant figures in recent history, as evidenced by the fact his funeral will be attended by leaders from the around the world. He was one of the father's of Israel nuclear program, Rafael, the Oslo process, etc. Avaya1 (talk) 20:01, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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[Closed] Interplanetary Transport System

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Article: Interplanetary Transport System (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: Elon Musk from SpaceX introduced Interplanetary Transport System, which is purposed at first to make manned Mars flights. (Post)
Alternative blurb: Elon Musk from SpaceX introduced Interplanetary Transport System for manned Mars-flights.
Alternative blurb II: Elon Musk from SpaceX introduced Interplanetary Transport System project for manned Mars-flights.
Alternative blurb III: Elon Musk from SpaceX introduced Interplanetary Transport System system for manned Mars-flights.
News source(s): NASASpaceflight
Credits:
Nominator's comments: This is "the" project launch from the major "new space" company that has already delivered and there is already something done-ish about this also, like Raptor-engines. Usp (talk) 00:26, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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[Closed] Three-parent baby

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Article: Mitochondrial donation (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ World first three-parent baby has been born. (Post)
News source(s): (New Scientist), (BBC), (The Time)
Credits:
 Jenda H. (talk) 18:03, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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[Closed] Loma Fire

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Article: Loma Fire (talk · history · tag)
Blurb: ​ A wildfire starts in the Santa Cruz Mountains (Post)
News source(s): CBS San Francisco, ABC7 News
Credits:
Nominator's comments: Not sure if this should be considered ongoing or not. Seems like it's spreading according to sources. Dat GuyTalkContribs 16:19, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Oppose posting the mere beginning of a wildfire, which are quite common in California and the Western US. If there are things like very large scale evacuations, large amounts of damage or casualties, etc., something to hang our hat on, I would reconsider. Reporting on this seems limited as well. I would add Ongoing would only be appropriate if the article gets regular incremental updates that individually would not merit posting on their own, but would collectively. Lastly, the blurb would need to be globalized a bit, many readers might not know where the Santa Cruz mountains are. 331dot (talk) 16:21, 27 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Between Santa Cruz and Los Gatos, 10 mi. S. of San Jose. Fairly extensive article here. Sca (talk) 14:10, 28 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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Nominators often include links to external websites and other references in discussions on this page. It is usually best to provide such links using the inline URL syntax [http://example.com] rather than using <ref></ref> tags, because that keeps all the relevant information in the same place as the nomination without having to jump to this section, and facilitates the archiving process.

For the times when <ref></ref> tags are being used, here are their contents:

  1. ^ https://www.theguardian.com/music/2016/oct/02/sir-neville-marriner-obituary
  2. ^ https://www.washingtonpost.com/entertainment/music/conductor-neville-marriner-dies-founded-london-orchestra/2016/10/02/86f82f68-88b9-11e6-8cdc-4fbb1973b506_story.html
  3. ^ "Le milliardaire Brahim Zniber s'est éteint". TelQuel. September 30, 2016. Retrieved October 1, 2016.
  4. ^ Nsehe, Mfonobong (October 1, 2016). "Moroccan Multi-millionaire Brahim Zniber Dies at 96". Forbes. Retrieved October 2, 2016.
  5. ^ "Hoboken train crash: 1 dead, more than 100 injured". CNN. CNN. Retrieved 29 September 2016. {{cite news}}: |first1= missing |last1= (help)
  6. ^ Scully, Janene. "Fires Will Keep Atlas V Rocket, WorldView-4 Craft At Vandenberg AFB Longer". Noozhawk. Retrieved 28 September 2016.
  7. ^ "Central California wildfire swells to 4,500 acres at Vandenberg Air Force Base". latimes.com. Los Angeles Times. Retrieved 28 September 2016.