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* In process of talking to editor {{User|Benea}} about the recent edits to the article changing artefact to artifact. I would prefer the British spelling as it is a British article talking about a artefact found in Britain. I have left a message on the editors talk page. --[[User:Senra|Senra]] ([[User talk:Senra|talk]]) 16:40, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
* In process of talking to editor {{User|Benea}} about the recent edits to the article changing artefact to artifact. I would prefer the British spelling as it is a British article talking about a artefact found in Britain. I have left a message on the editors talk page. --[[User:Senra|Senra]] ([[User talk:Senra|talk]]) 16:40, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
::This is correct, the article initially used the American spelling, rather than the British according to [[WP:ENGVAR]]. Hence I changed the usage to 'artefact'. Senra is in agreement this is the preferred usage. [[User:Benea|Benea]] ([[User talk:Benea|talk]]) 16:47, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
::This is correct, the article initially used the American spelling, rather than the British according to [[WP:ENGVAR]]. Hence I changed the usage to 'artefact'. Senra is in agreement this is the preferred usage. [[User:Benea|Benea]] ([[User talk:Benea|talk]]) 16:47, 29 June 2010 (UTC)
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Candidate entries

Articles created/expanded on June 29

Walpole Old Chapel

A white building, looking like a two-storey house, with a red-tiled roof, seen from an angle
Walpole Old Chapel

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 16:21, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

La Peregrina pearl

Queen Mary I with La Peregrina pearl

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 15:43, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]



List of international cricketers from Barbados

Created by Mr.Apples2010 (talk). Self nom at 14:12, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Douglas Brand

Created by HJ Mitchell (talk). Self nom at 13:56, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Little Thetford flesh-hook

  • Comment: Created in User-space and moved to main space yesterday in error. Now moved to main-space today

Created by Senra (talk). Self nom at 13:48, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • In process of talking to editor Benea (talk · contribs) about the recent edits to the article changing artefact to artifact. I would prefer the British spelling as it is a British article talking about a artefact found in Britain. I have left a message on the editors talk page. --Senra (talk) 16:40, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This is correct, the article initially used the American spelling, rather than the British according to WP:ENGVAR. Hence I changed the usage to 'artefact'. Senra is in agreement this is the preferred usage. Benea (talk) 16:47, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Þórketill Þórmóðsson

Created by Brianann MacAmhlaidh (talk). Self nom at 09:09, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tarapith

A four-armed blue woman wearing a tiger skin skirt - stands on a man amongst cremation fires
Tara in a cremation ground
  • ...that Hindu sadhus live in the cremation grounds of Tarapith as they believe that goddess Tara (pictured) - who is attracted to bones - dwells there?

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk), Redtigerxyz (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 05:22, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

History of the hamburger

A stock photo of a hamburger (probably best to use a more pertinent image from another DYK)

Created by TFCforever (talk). Nominated by TFCforever (talk) at 04:05, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 04:31, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Les Witte

Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 03:50, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Johan Fransson

5x expanded by Krm500 (talk). Self nom at 02:48, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • ALT: ... that ice hockey defenceman Johan Fransson signed contracts with teams in three different leagues for the 2010–11 season?

The Pyramids (Indianapolis)

A view of the pyramids from across the lake.

5x expanded by MBisanz (talk). Self nom at 02:01, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Jonah Hex: Revenge Gets Ugly EP

Created by Fezmar9 (talk). Nominated by Cannibaloki (talk) at 01:44, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 03:41, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 28

Schloss Reichenbach

Schloss Reichenbach

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 16:39, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]



Holy Soap

Created by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self nom at 12:46, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Empress pepper pot

A silver statue of a lady with gold inlay. She appears to be wearing a crown.

Created by The Land (talk), Victuallers (talk). Self nom at 12:24, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Richard Minsky

Created by KimChee (talk). Self nom at 03:01, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 03:43, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

PubWatch

Created by Steved1973 (talk). Self nom at 23:55, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Checked length and verified tag is referenced; looks groovy to me. Chzz  ►  00:43, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tracing in English law

  • ... that English common law tracing is so limited many leading academics and judges have called for its abolition as an independent doctrine?

Created by Ironholds (talk). Self nom at 23:46, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified. Hook ref accepted in good faith. Nice work. APK whisper in my ear 03:48, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bill Hudson (photographer), Carry Me Home: Birmingham, Alabama, the Climactic Battle of the Civil Rights Revolution

  • ... that Diane McWhorter wrote in Carry Me Home that a 1963 Bill Hudson photo of a black protester being attacked by a police dog drove "international opinion to the side of the civil rights revolution"?

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 23:26, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 03:49, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Big White Fog

A black and white poster reads BIG WHITE FOG in large font.

  • ... that dramatist Theodore Ward, writer of Big White Fog (playbill pictured), had his first attempt at writing a play thrown into a fire at age seven by his father?

5x expanded by Jujutacular (talk). Self nom at 20:56, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook, and source verified. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 21:35, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Ormside bowl

View of the outside of the Ormside bowl showing rivets and decoration

  • ...that the Ormside bowl (pictured) is one of the finest pieces of Anglian silverwork ever found in England?
  • Comment: This article was written as part of the WP:GLAM/BM initiative. It would be really good if it could go up on August 1 as this is when it goes back on show in the Yorkshire Museum.

Created by JMiall (talk). Self nom at 20:03, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Miguel Cotto vs. Yuri Foreman

Created by Joaquin008 (talk). Nominated by Joaquin008 (talk) at 19:46, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 21:40, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Portland City Grill

Created by Another Believer (talk). Nominated by Another Believer (talk) at 19:10, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Dwight Armstrong

several floors of a bombed building showing signs of an explosion

  • ... that, asked for his thoughts two decades after the 1970 Sterling Hall bombing (pictured) that killed a physics researcher, Dwight Armstrong said "I don't care what public opinion is; we did what was right"?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 16:10, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Marlon Stockinger

Created by Joaquin008 (talk). Nominated by Joaquin008 (talk) at 15:31, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

South Carolina Highway 291

Created by Miller17CU94 (talk). Nominated by Miller17CU94 (talk) at 15:11, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Daniel Lambert

Smartly dressed fat man with dark hair and a red waistcoat, sitting on a chair

5x expanded by Iridescent (talk). Nominated by Iridescent (talk) at 14:52, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified. Hook refs accepted in good faith. ("Get in my belly!") APK whisper in my ear 15:37, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Three Pigeons

Created by Theornamentalist (Talk) Self nom at Theornamentalist (talk) 14:52, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Strong-billed Honeyeater

bird perched on vertical treetrunk

5x expanded by Casliber (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 14:48, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 15:40, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Captain America: The First Avenger

Created by TriiipleThreat (talk), Jhenderson777 (talk). Self nom at 14:25, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Philip B. Hofmann

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 12:57, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. - Theornamentalist (talk) 16:53, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Richard Travis

5x expanded by AustralianRupert (talk). Nominated by AustralianRupert (talk) at 11:38, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1929 Murchison earthquake

Created by Mikenorton (talk). Self nom at 11:06, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Leonard Allison

5x expanded by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 10:30, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bonded by Blood (band)

Created by Cannibaloki (talk). Self nom at 06:05, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Claude Simons, Jr.

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 05:08, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • This is probably a better hook:

Our Lady Of Victory Church (Inuvik)

Created by Spongie555 (talk). Self nom at , 28 June 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't meet the length requirement and there are no references. APK whisper in my ear 04:04, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Under röd flagg

Under röd flagg cover, 1891

Created/expanded by Soman (talk). Self nom at 03:31, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Cupcake Wars

Created by Tommy2010 (talk). Self nom at 03:28, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It doesn't the meet length requirement and the hook isn't mentioned in the article. APK whisper in my ear 04:03, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Lengthened article, included hook with more references.  – Tommy [message] 04:28, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Everything checks out now. (I removed the second link to cupcake, unlinked competition, and italicized the show title in the hook.) MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 17:20, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Richard B. Sellars

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 01:31, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Chris Scelfo

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 00:30, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think the above hook has adequate reliable sourcing, but if it's too controversial for two living people, here is an alternative:
The second hook should be used. Date, length, and hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 04:09, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

ethylene oxide

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 00:17, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook refs verified. Nice work. APK whisper in my ear 04:20, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 27

Leo Thomas Maher

Created by Spongie555 (talk) Self nom at 28 June 2010 (UTC)


Indriði Indriðason

Created by Yngvadottir (talk). Self nom at 20:45, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Anatoly Malofeyev

ALT1 ...that Anatoly Malofeyev was a delegate to the 100th Conference of the Inter-Parliamentary Union and his comments that the conference failed to address human rights issues in Belarus afterwards generated controversy?
ALT2 ...that Anatoly Malofeyev and Vladimir Yermoshin met with Hu Jintao to facilitate relations?

Ernst von Dobschütz

Description of the image

  • Comment: To make reviewing easier I cite here source of the hook: "By 1915 Gregory had raised the numbers further to p19, 0169, 2326, and l 1565. From 1923 to 1933 his successor Ernst von Dobschütz further expanded the numbers to p48, 0208, 2401 (but with some extensive lacunae), and l 1609." (Kurt Aland, and Barbara Aland, The Text of the New Testament: An Introduction to the Critical Editions and to the Theory and Practice of Modern Textual Criticism, transl. Erroll F. Rhodes, William B. Eerdmans Publishing Company, Grand Rapids, Michigan, 1995, p. 74 ) Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 18:42, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nom at 18:42, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Clarium Capital

Created by Gary King (talk). Nominated by Gary King (talk) at 17:48, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pteridium aquilinum

drawings of fern leaves

  • ... that common bracken specific name of aquilinum is thought to be derived from the likeness of the fibres of its stem in cross section to a double-headed eagle?
  • Comment: was a redirect for four years after original material was moved to genus page

5x expanded by Casliber (talk), Rkitko (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 11:47, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • As a preliminary comment, "Pteridium aquilinum" effectively means "eagle's wing", and the leaves of the plant do strongly resemble that. Yet the article makes no mention of it, and instead, like the hook, is focused on "double headed", and "stem fibers", without the wing aspect. It seems to me that if the hook is focused on the the name derivation, the article and the hook should explain this issue more fully. Crum375 (talk) 17:03, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • If you google "Towards a taxonomic revision of Pteridium (Dennstaedtiaceae)", the fulltext pdf ofthe article arises. The issue of the choice of specific name comes up. I admit I didn't add the other explanation and will insert it into the page tonight. It is an unusual derivation discussed there. We actually have a photo of a corss section of the stipe on commons, but it doesn't look like a double headed eagle, or anything much for that matter...Casliber (talk · contribs) 06:44, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Well, given that google also comes up with tons of reliable sources mentioning the obvious connection, the resemblance of the fronds to spread out eagle wings, and its binomial name meaning "eagle wing" (see here as example), I don't see why this most direct and straightforward derivation should be suppressed. Crum375 (talk) 13:54, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Richard Alan Minsky

Created by KimChee (talk). Self nom at 05:49, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Perhaps the hook could be changed to addressing the sentence (146 years) rather than the crimes itself, perhaps that would be less BLP-problematic? --Soman (talk) 19:09, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Electric Company (Football)

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 02:46, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Chetco (tribe)

Black and white drawing of five Native American men, women and children in a mix of native and western dress

  • ... that the Chetco (pictured) were once one of the largest Native American tribes on the southern coast of Oregon, but now only about 40 of their descendants remain?

Created by Ruhrfisch (talk). Self nom at 02:22, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Tocco family

Created by Cplakidas (talk). Self nom at 22:33, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Volksfront (Alsace), Jean-Pierre Mourer, Charles Hueber, Alsatian Workers and Peasants Party, Bloody Sunday (1926), Die Neue Welt

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 00:50, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William Eldon Tucker, Bill Tucker (rugby player)

Created by FruitMonkey (talk). Self nom David Underdown (talk) 15:58, 28 June 2010 (UTC) alt1... that Dr. William Eldon Tucker and Dr. William Eldon Tucker both played rugby for England, Kent, the Barbarians, Blackheath and captained Cambridge University R.U.F.C. teams in the Varsity match?[reply]

I don't think Varsity team is normal usage in this context, and it's probably better to clarify that we mean the rugby team, rather than the University itself. David Underdown (talk) 15:58, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

alt2 ... that during World War I Dr. William Eldon Tucker performed 150 amputations on troops within a month, while during World War II Dr. William Eldon Tucker made improvised artificial limbs for prisoners of war?

I was thinking of this today, the cites are all over the place, plus there are a few unavailable online. Maybe this new DYK suggestion (alt2) is easier to verify?

Stephen B. Shepard, Chris Welles

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 21:06, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Monobia quadridens

A wasp's stinger with a drop of venom

Created by Stemonitis (talk). Self nom at 20:13, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • You have the hook going to bee sting, but according to the source, it's not really a sting at all, as in inserting a stinger, but more of a minor "prick" sensation. The way the hook is phrased, you'd think the male actually inserts a stinger, except he has no venom to inject through it. But according the source, the male only presses the sharp tip of his abdomen against the attacker, which causes a prickly sensation, like touching a sharp corner of an object, without penetration. So I think this hook is unsourced and misleading, as it stands. Crum375 (talk) 23:06, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
A fair point. I have struck the original hook out, and suggest the following alternative. The males can't actually sting, but they can (and apparently do) try. I would include the fact that males don't have a stinger, but it isn't mentioned in the article or the relevant cited source. --Stemonitis (talk) 06:48, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1: ... that male Monobia quadridens wasps will try to sting like a female, but have no venom to inject?
  • The thing is, unless I am misreading the source, the males don't even have a stinger, while by saying "no venom to inject" we are implying they have the stinger, but just don't have the fluid to inject through it. Note the wasp stinger photo here, and consider that all the males have is the tip of their abdomen, without the stinger sticking out of it. How about:
Crum375 (talk) 11:29, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'd be happy with that if you are. --Stemonitis (talk) 13:03, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Henry Newman (Medal of Honor)

Created by 72.74.218.214 (talk). Nominated by Fetchcomms (talk) at 19:52, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Oliver Fricker

Created by Warpslider (talk). Nominated by Jacklee (talk) at 18:31, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Wheelie bike

  • ... that the wheelie bike fad drove bicycle sales to over 4 million units in the US?

Created by AndrewDressel (talk). Self nom at 18:27, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the good faith, and I've updated the reference to contain a url to the relevant passage on Google Books. -AndrewDressel (talk) 15:05, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Henri-Pierre Picou

A black and white print of Picou's masterpiece, Cléopâtre et Antoine sur le Cydnus.

Created by VernoWhitney (talk). Self nom at 17:55, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Theodore (brother of Heraclius)

Created by Cplakidas (talk). Self nom at 15:04, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pipistrellus raceyi

Created by Ucucha (talk). Self nom at 14:31, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Operation Loyton

x5 expansion and self nom by --Jim Sweeney (talk) 13:15, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • ALT 1

x5 expansion and self nom by --Jim Sweeney (talk) 13:15, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The books avail on line page 45 here [1] --Jim Sweeney (talk) 14:57, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Does not the hook link violate WP:EGG? -Atmoz (talk) 19:55, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT 1 added which should satisfy --Jim Sweeney (talk) 23:35, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Brandon Bess

Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 12:52, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Project GreenHands

Created by Regstuff (talk). Self nom at 06:29, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date and length are fine. I couldn't verify the hook, however, as one of the references for it (# 8 "Extending a green hand") seems to be a dead link (it says this when I load: "The article you are looking for is no longer available in this website"). The other citation (#9 "Free distribution of saplings") confirms the record, but I can't quite understand confirm the figures. It says "8.58 lakh saplings" planted by "2.58 lakh people". I think lakh equates to 100,000 (please correct me if I am wrong), so these figures would be 858,000 and 258 000 people, However, the article you have nominated states "852,587 saplings" planted by "256,289 people". Can you please (1) investigate and fix the dead link if possible; (2) explain the difference in the two numbers? Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 02:40, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I fixed the broken link. The newspaper actually changed websites on June 23rd and I didn't take any action about that. Also, I have given an alternate citation and removed the one which has the discrepancy in the numbers. Is it possible to cite the actual guinness world record through the guinness website? I also have a scan of the world record. Is there some way that might be used? Thnx. Regstuff (talk) 05:42, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • My concerns have been addressed. Regarding linking to the Guinness website, I'm not sure. If the record is listed there, I can't see any reason why you couldn't link it in the same way you have to the newspaper articles. I think that would be fine. Regardless, I feel that the article is now good to go as far as DYK is concerned. Thanks for responding so quickly. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 05:59, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hot Potato (video game)

  • ... that Hot Potato tasks the player with navigating a bus through roads filled with alien potato beings?

Created by Nomader (talk). Self nom at 06:16, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Chula Vista, California

Created by 205.188.116.130 (talk). Nominated by Spongie555 (talk) at , 26 June 2010 (UTC)

Furthermore, this nomination was made by neither 205.188.116.130 nor Spongie555, but 68.8.137.220. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 00:13, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
68.8.137.220. might have been me becuse when i made the nomination i forgot to log in to my account and i didnt notice till after I had made the nomination that I wasnt logged in as Spongie555. Spongie555 (talk) 02:56, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John H. Ewing, 16th Legislative District (New Jersey)

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 04:04, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • There's something flaky going on at The Times' webs site. If you get an error, refreshing the link once or twice will often get you an article that it said did not exists. Alansohn (talk) 21:03, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 26

Marcela Valladolid

Created by Tommy2010 (talk). Self nom at 14:59, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Huber's

Created by Another Believer (talk). Nominated by Another Believer (talk) at 05:58, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Arbor Networks

Created by Gary King (talk). Nominated by Gary King (talk) at 05:26, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of submarine topographical features

Description of the image

Created by DiverDave (talk). Self nom at 04:42, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Since there have been many anoxic events, as described in the real "anoxic event" article, I think it's incorrect to WP:EGG the hook into a general list of submarine features, at it implies some special connection, and for some reason is focused on one anoxic event out of many, and not even the most drastic one. I think you need a hook into something more unique to this list article and not mislead the reader. Crum375 (talk) 11:49, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Fichte-Bunker

Created by Yngvadottir (talk). Self nom at 19:53, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George H. Eldridge

Created by 72.74.222.202 (talk). Nominated by Fetchcomms (talk) at 19:44, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Edwin L. Elwood

Created by 72.74.222.202 (talk). Nominated by Fetchcomms (talk) at 19:44, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hayes McClerkin

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 15:06, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

47th Battalion (Australia)

  • ... that the 47th Battalion was one of three infantry battalions disbanded by Australia due to casualties suffered during the German Spring Offensive in May 1918?

Created by AustralianRupert (talk). Self nom at 04:48, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Caponer (talk). Self nom at 03:46, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of Detroit Tigers first-round draft picks

A light-skinned man with a goatee and wearing a white baseball uniform looks over his left shoulder while holding his right hand inside his black baseball glove.

Created by Staxringold (talk). Nominated by Staxringold (talk) at 02:00, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Edwin L. Elwood

Created by 72.74.222.202 (talk). Nominated by Mono (talk) at 00:20, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Zippel Bay State Park

5x expanded by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 23:43, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 03:20, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Little Thetford (reviewer's note: second nomination)

5x expanded by Senra (talk). Self nom at 23:07, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

You nominated this article earlier today (below) and I mentioned here that it's not eligible. You responded below, so I'm not sure why you're nominating again. APK whisper in my ear 03:27, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In that case, sorry. I thought since I had expanded the article (a whole new archaeology section) yesterday, I thought it counted as an expansion. My apologies. --Senra (talk) 10:32, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Acronychia laevis

pinkish fruit and flowers of green leafy plant

Created by Poyt448 (talk), Casliber (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 21:49, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


George H. Eldridge

Created by 72.74.222.202 (talk). Nominated by Mono (talk) at 20:43, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Transandinomys

5x expanded by Ucucha (talk). Self nom at 20:26, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Frederick Mayer (spy)

Franz Hofer

Created by Mbz1 (talk) and Brewcrewer (talk). Self nom at 19:56, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've done it, thank you.--Mbz1 (talk) 22:56, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
You have a few typos in the article. One I fixed (stated > stayed) but there's one "other" that needs either "the" before it or to be made "others" and I don't know which it is, so I had to leave it. Also, you have an ambiguous link in there, "CC". Marrante (talk) 08:58, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Everything is fixed, thanks for noticing.--Mbz1 (talk) 16:51, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Steine House

A grey-painted two-storey building with the lower storey set forward and topped by a balcony. "Y.M.C.A." is written in large letters below the dormer window in the roof.

Created by Hassocks5489 (talk). Self nom at 19:55, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Our Lady Star of the Sea and St Winefride, Amlwch

A modern concrete church

Created by Bencherlite (talk). Self nom at 19:44, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 20:29, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Firecane

Created by JNW (talk). Nominated by JNW (talk) at 19:26, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I count 1657 characters now, including white spaces. The New York Magazine reference for the hook checks out. The age is good. -AndrewDressel (talk) 14:23, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Buffalo burger

Created by Joe Chill (talk). Self nom at 19:13, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

USA Table Tennis

Created by Guoguo12 (talk). Self nom at 18:51, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

James Mangham

Created by BigDom (talk). Self nom at 18:22, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified. Hook ref accepted in good faith. APK whisper in my ear 18:56, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Son Ferrer

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 17:39, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Okryugwan

A picture taken across the street from the Okryu Restaurant, a long two-story white building with a green roof. A bus is parked in front.

Created by CaliforniaAliBaba (talk). Nominated by CaliforniaAliBaba (talk) at 14:44, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, and hook verified. Very interesting. APK whisper in my ear 18:39, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Little Thetford

Created by Senra (talk). Self nom at 13:55, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Although the article was expanded (much more than the 5x minimum), the nomination should have been made earlier this month to meet DYK criteria (within 5 days). Congrats on the GA promotion. Nice work. APK whisper in my ear 18:34, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I will know for next time - thanks anyway (thought I might have slipped in due hook fact was only inserted in the article today but rules are rules) Thanks for trying. --Senra (talk) 19:52, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Milecastle 10

5x expanded by Dumelow (talk). Self nom at 07:57, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Don Roberts (ice hockey)

  • ... that Legend of Hockey Don Roberts was assigned to coach hockey despite having never played the sport and coached his team in boots due to his unsteadiness on skates?

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 07:52, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, and first hook ref verified. Second hook ref accepted in good faith. APK whisper in my ear 12:44, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Children and Television (book)

Created by User:Figureskatingfan (talk). Self nom at 06:08, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

You might want to fix some of those typos in the article.Marrante (talk) 09:00, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Um, which ones are you talking about? I use Firefox when I edit WP, and there were no red lines other than surnames and specialized words like "distractor" and "summative" research. Provide specifics, please. Christine (talk) 04:28, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I was talking about things like the caption beginning with an open bracket, "[George Lesser", which now seems to be fixed. I can't recall the other, but it was near this one, as I recall and in just reading over the first half of the article again, I couldn't find it, so you or someone else apparently fixed it. Marrante (talk) 09:06, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Xetulul Theme Park

Replica of the Tikal Temple of the Great Jaguar at Xetulul Theme Park

5x expanded by IronGargoyle (talk). Nominated by IronGargoyle (talk) at 03:26, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified. Hook ref accepted in good faith. APK whisper in my ear 12:48, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Vekoma Madhouse

  • ... that a Vekoma Madhouse, a theme park ride, creates the impression that the rider is turning upside down, however it is actually the room that is moving around them?

Created by Wackywace (talk). Self nom at 12:55, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The hook isn't cited with an inline citation. There are only two references, one of which is the manufacturer's website. The second reference is a forum, not a reliable source. APK whisper in my ear 18:51, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 25

Olav Johan Sopp

Olav Johan Sopp

Created by Oceanh (talk). Self nom at 23:24, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


1907 Sub-Antarctic Islands Scientific Expedition

Four men on board of a ship standing around their coracle

  • Comment: Nice work by User:Islandbaygardener - interesting story! The Dundonald article has recently been expanded.

Created by Islandbaygardener (talk). Nominated by Schwede66 (talk) at 21:26, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Bob LaPointe

Created by Cmadler (talk). Self nom at 17:06, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George E. Jonas

  • ALT1:... that George E. Jonas founded Camp Rising Sun with his family's fortune in 1929 when he was 32, retired at 57 to devote himself to the camp full-time and remained active with it till his death in 1978?
  • ALT2:... that George E. Jonas founded a free leadership-training summer camp for disadvantaged boys after the Wall Street Crash of 1929 and after World War II, expanded it to include boys from all over the world?

Created by Marrante (talk). Self nom at 08:41, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I just added a second alternate hook. I would love to put some of the other very illustrious alumni in the hook, but cannot find any sources other than those connected with the organization. I guess that the more successful one is, the more one has to put on a resume, particularly over time and unless you can find an interview where the person mentions it (as with Pete Seeger), there is simply no second source documentation. The camp today has over 5,000 alumni from over 80 countries, another great statistic, but again only available succinctly like that from the organization itself. If someone can help me find a way to write a more intriguing hook for this worthy man and his worthy life's work, I'd be much obliged. Marrante (talk) 13:19, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Michigan Train wreck

Created by GrahamHardy (talk). Nominated by Mono (talk) at 22:46, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Battle of Settepozzi

Created by Cplakidas (talk). Self nom at 14:59, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Palmolive Beauty Box Theater

Created by Niel Shell (talk). Nominated by Voceditenore (talk) at 08:09, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Temple Israel (Tulsa, Oklahoma)

  • Comment: The history of the article is a bit confused, because of various changes and moves, but I've basically expanded the material on Temple Israel (Tulsa, Oklahoma) from 215 words to 1211 words. Jayjg (talk) 03:41, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by Jayjg (talk). Self nom at 03:41, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nantwich Grammar School

Created by Espresso Addict (talk). Nominated by Espresso Addict (talk) at 19:37, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Clavaria zollingeri

A purple fungus with multiple thin branches growing in the ground

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 17:21, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Mark Donaldson (rugby player)

Created by AusTerrapin (talk), Dingy (talk). Self nom at 10:20, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Indeed it is, as is the original version on the French Wikipedia from which it was originally translated and then modified. I am not an expert, nor particularly interested, in rugby union, but the article was necessary to be raised on the English Wikipedia to prevent bots from linking the New Zealand rugby player on the French Wikipedia with the Australian Victoria Cross Winner on the English Wikipedia. I also ensured the article had a few extras such as appropriate infoboxes, etc. Hopefully interest generated from DYK might spur others to expand the article further with additional reference sources. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AusTerrapin (talkcontribs)
After conferring with a reviewer more experienced with DYK: date length and hook are all good. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 08:02, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Frederica Evelyn Stilwell Cook

Created by User:Agradman (talk). Nominated by User:Agradman (talk) at 09:21, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ed Saugestad

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 01:37, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 02:55, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Patrol Forces Southwest Asia

USCGC Adak (WPB 1333

Created/expanded by New Hampshirite (talk). Nominated by New Hampshirite (talk) at 22:52, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


gape

  • ... that the gape of nestlings of several passerine bird species have been shown to be conspicuous in the ultraviolet spectrum?

Created by Casliber (talk), Howcheng (talk), Shyamal (talk). Self nom at 22:44, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Denis Preston

Created by Mattgirling (talk). Self nom at 19:08, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hook does not seem to be in the article, or is this taken from the line "...he was not contracted to a particular record label and would often risk cutting a record before pitching for a deal"? Also, if that is the origin of the hook, I'm a little unsure about the source, as it seems to be a musician's personal site. Other than that, looks good. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 22:19, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK, I'll try to find a better source (there are plenty of worse ones, mind) and/or crowbar the hook to fit what sources we do have. matt (talk) 10:43, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Stock im Eisen, Palais Equitable

  • Comment: Palais Equitable created on June 24; Stock im Eisen was previously a redirect

Created by Yngvadottir (talk). Self nom at 18:25, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

HMS Concorde (1783)

Watercolour of two sailing ships in broadside view on a choppy blue sea and smoke-filled sky. Three ships in the background.

Created by Benea (talk). Self nom at 16:29, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


St. Aloysius' Catholic Church (Carthagena, Ohio)

A brick church building with a tall steeple, highlighted against a deep blue sky

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 14:57, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified. Hook ref accepted in good faith. (I assume the hook is cited to ref #2; I didn't see it in the PDF, ref #5.) APK whisper in my ear 20:17, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps the referencing is confusing, then, because it's supposed to be sourced to #5. The hook statement is "conversely, St. Aloysius'...generally designed likewise." You can find the source for this statement in the penultimate paragraph of the second page of #5, immediately under the "1865-1885" header. Please note that the third page of the PDF is marked as page 2; however, I'm ignoring that for referencing purposes, as it's the second page that deals with part 7 of the entire form. Throughout the article, page numbers in citations to the PDF refer to the page number that the PDF assigns to a page, not the page number of the original (unpaginated) document. Nyttend (talk) 04:34, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Doh! I see it now.  ;-) Date, length, and hook verified. APK whisper in my ear 01:51, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dorsland Trek

Created by Pgallert (talk). Self nom at 14:41, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: I prefer ALT 1 ("their language"), unfortunately it is 205 characters long. The main hook is exactly at 200, please keep that in mind when suggesting changes. Maybe we can say that the three dots, the space, and the question mark do not count towards the hook ;) or alternatively apply a very mild case of IAR? --Pgallert (talk) 14:41, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • What about changing "turned back" to "returned" and "completing" to "finishing"? That would save four characters, and perhaps we could ignore the dots. I've changed "at schools" to "in schools" and capitalised "catholicism". Nyttend (talk) 14:54, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hmm, "returned" is not right because they came from South Africa and turned back (southwards) into South-West Africa. Only few of them really returned from where they came. "Finishing" sounds strange to me (but I'm not a native English speaker). To be perfectly honest, even "completed" is not entirely true because today the entire journey, including the turn back, is referred to as "Dorsland Trek" - but to point that out would cost another few characters. -- I have turned around the two actions by the Portuguese, that reads a bit easier, and it makes clear what the "them" refers to. --Pgallert (talk) 15:08, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Okay, I misunderstood about "returned"; thanks. What about "that after reaching Angola from South Africa in the Dorsland Trek of the 1870s..."? That saves two characters and avoids the "not entirely true" problem. Nyttend (talk) 16:18, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Moist static energy

Created by Atmoz (talk). Nominated by Atmoz (talk) at 13:46, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Enthalpy-entropy chart

Created by Raghul.mariner (talk). Nominated by Chzz (talk) at 11:35, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

East Bay (Texas)

Created by William S. Saturn (talk). Nominated by William S. Saturn (talk) at 07:59, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Gayle Blevins

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 06:22, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook ref verified. APK whisper in my ear 06:52, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 24

Jesús Manuel Lara Rodríguez

ALT1 ...that before Jesús Manuel Lara Rodríguez was murdered by Mexican drug cartels, he secretly hid his family?
ALT2 ...that Jesús Manuel Lara Rodríguez was a friend of Mayor José Reyes Ferriz, hid in Ferriz' city but requested no protection even though death threats had been made?
Thanks for the quick pick-up. I will see if I can fix the citations. In a nutshell, the mayor received death threats and had a home in the other city. 30 days prior to his murder, he moved his family there in secrecy. On the day before Father's Day, he was gunned down as indicated. ----moreno oso (talk) 07:52, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The citations to lede should now make sense and are in English for the benefit of all. Poor guy probably thought he only had three weeks to go and he would be safe out of office. ----moreno oso (talk) 10:18, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nick Parker

Lt Gen Sir Nick Parker

5x expanded by HJ Mitchell (talk), Dormskirk (talk). Nominated by HJ Mitchell (talk) at 04:06, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Periclimenes dardanicola, Dardanus pedunculatus

Created by Wilhelmina Will (talk). Nominated by Stemonitis (talk) at 06:54, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1973 Buffalo Bills season

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 18:20, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kaikō

Kaikō ROV

5x expanded by DiverDave (talk). Self nom at 00:40, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Freedom of information legislation (Florida)

Created by Andrew Gradman talk/WP:Hornbook. Nominated by Andrew Gradman talk/WP:Hornbook at 08:18, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1974–75 Buffalo Sabres season

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 05:25, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Gerald R. Stockman

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:09, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook ref verified. APK whisper in my ear 06:58, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jeon-gwan ye-u

5x expanded by CaliforniaAliBaba (talk). Nominated by CaliforniaAliBaba (talk) at 01:59, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1–5 Pillory Street, Nantwich

Photograph of a corner building with a curved front topped with a spire and flag pole. There are two rows of circular windows in the attics.

Created by Espresso Addict (talk). Nominated by Espresso Addict (talk) at 01:19, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified. Hook ref accepted in good faith. (that's a lot of windows) APK whisper in my ear 01:46, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


William G. Austin

Created by 71.184.37.118 (talk). Nominated by Fetchcomms (talk) at 21:36, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Star Watch Case Company

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 21:33, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reference for above original hook: Ludington Daily News, April 16, 1994; p. 1 During the Second World War, Star Watch Case turned its know-how to the manufacture of components for military navigational aides and even the super secret Norden bombsight, to say nothing of thousands of cases for military compasses. Inline reference provided in article under section "Military".--Doug Coldwell talk 22:12, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


ALT 1 - that the Star Watch Case Company made a "Moonwatch" that was worn by astronaut Wally Schirra on a trip to the moon?
Reference: NASA section of article: NAWCC, p. 7 Some of the more famous Star watch cases were used for Omega’s Pulsar watches, the Lord Elgin electronic watches, and the Omega Speedmaster Professional — the wristwatch worn by astronaut Wally Schirra on the last trip to the moon.--Doug Coldwell talk 21:34, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


ALT 2 - that the Star Watch Case Company made certain watches that were worn by astronauts in space?--Doug Coldwell talk 17:29, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ernest Veuve

Created by 72.74.203.184 (talk). Nominated by Fetchcomms (talk) at 21:08, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of governments in Canada by annual expenditures

Created by Padraic (talk). Self nom at 20:21, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Big Bambú

Created by User:AMuseo (talk). Self nom 24 June 2010 (UTC)

I have lengthened it.AMuseo (talk) 21:49, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Date and length are fine now. However, the hook seems to imply (to me, at least) that it's part of the museum's permanent collection, which it isn't, and there's no source stating that it's still the "newest" anyways. How does the following alternate sound? MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 04:48, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT1: ... that visitors can climb through the Metropolitan Museum of Art's temporary art installation, Big Bambú, which is constantly evolving as a crew of rock climbers builds it throughout its six month run?
I concur.AMuseo (talk) 01:31, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dick LaRossa

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 17:01, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of railway lines in Vietnam

Created by Dragfyre (talk). Self nom at 15:13, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that because he got drafted by the United States Army, basketball player Paul Unruh missed an opportunity to play for the Olympic gold medal-winning men's basketball team in 1952?

Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 14:23, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Flower Girl

5x expanded by Benlisquare (talk). Nominated by Benlisquare (talk) at 10:37, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Avid Radiopharmaceuticals

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 04:39, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thomas P. Foy

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:16, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Horatio Washington Bruce

5x expanded by Acdixon (talk). Nominated by Acdixon (talk) at 16:39, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Older nominations

Articles created/expanded on June 23

Grove Farm (Lihue, Hawaii), A. Widemann, George Norton Wilcox

  • Comment: All three should qualify: Widemann started June 23, Grove Farm June 25, Wilcox June 26

Created by W Nowicki (talk). Nominated by W Nowicki (talk) at 18:23, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Chiefly About War Matters

Created by Midnightdreary (talk). Self nom at 22:49, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Samuel Parker (Hawaii)

Samuel Parker

  • ALT1:=... that Samuel Parker (pictured), was in the cabinet of Queen Liliʻuokalani when she was overthrown in 1893?
  • Comment: moved from user space June 23 after a long development. I like the first hook even though it is not the biggest notability of Parker (they both lost and a thrid party won). The other tidbit is that Parker's nephew who was also widower of his daughter married the widow of the second Republican candidate, who was the brother of the first Democratic one (Parker's step-son-in-law?) but that is convoluted.

Created by W Nowicki (talk). Nominated by W Nowicki (talk) at 21:38, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Mike McShane (ice hockey)

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 05:13, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tim Coghlin

  • ... that Tim Coghlin advanced to the Frozen Four in six of the past eight years and has the second highest career winning percentage among the 100 all-time winningest college men's hockey coaches?

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 20:37, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, lengths, hook ref verified. I am approving this, but the article really needs an independent third party secondary source to establish notability, i.e. one not involved with his school or his sports organization. A newspaper article about him, for example, even a local one, would really help. Also, adding some information about him outside his professional achievements would be nice. Crum375 (talk) 21:50, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I have added several additional sources and additional information from those sources as well. Cbl62 (talk) 03:05, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Elakala Falls

Beautiful Elakala Waterfalls in the Blackwater Falls State park, West Virginia, USA.

  • ... that the namesake of Elakala Falls (pictured) comes from the legend of Elakala, the story of a Native American princess who threw herself over the edge of the first waterfall when her lover scorned her?

5x expanded by Raeky (talk), Cmadler. Nominated by Raeky (talk) at 15:31, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • This should definitely be a DYK header, since the picture is a finalist for picture of the year. Just a couple of things: "the namesake of...comes from" is bad English, I would prefer "that Elakala Falls (pictured) derives its name from...". Secondly, can something be done with that [citation needed] tag? It's a bit of an eyesore. Lampman (talk) 00:23, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Good to go then! Lampman (talk) 03:04, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I e-mailed the wv state park e-mail for backwater falls state park before I started improving this article to see if they could provide more information. They got back with me today and the official states she doesn't believe the legend revolves around a princess, shes going to look through some of the material they have there and get back with me with some corrections from those sources. So it might be prudent to either switch the DYK to another hook for the article that does not bring up the princess or put a hold on it until we hear back from the state park... — raeky (talk | edits) 18:05, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I went ahead and tracked down the reference she was referring too, it's a different account of the legend involving a warrior named Elakala. I added both accounts, we felt since both had references we should include both. So I'd like someone else's opinion if the hook should be changed or left as is? Both accounts are referenced (talk page includes the full quote from the book that the legend comes from). — raeky (talk | edits) 17:55, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1... that Elakala Falls (pictured) may derive its name from the legend of Elakala, the story of a Native American princess who threw herself over the edge of the first waterfall when her lover scorned her?

I think this slight tweak (adding "may") covers the bases, and is clearly cited. Sasata (talk) 00:44, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sounds good, I'd also like Cmadler recognized for his effort to improve the article, hes been a great help. — raeky (talk | edits) 00:50, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Have added him to the credits. Sasata (talk) 01:18, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ribbon farm

  • ... that ribbon farms established near Detroit were only 150 feet wide, but up to 3 miles deep?

Created by Andrew Jameson (talk). Nominated by Andrew Jameson (talk) at 11:09, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, hook length, ref verified. Is "platting" a typo here? "It is likely that platting farms in ribbon lots arose independently in various parts of the world." Crum375 (talk) 12:16, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT1... that ribbon farms established near Detroit were only 150 feet wide, but up to 3 miles long?
As an explanation, "deep" makes sense in the context of the article, since these lots are primarily along rivers, and thus they're "deep" in the sense of "extending far in or back from the front or from an edge." However, in a short hook where the overall context doesn't appear, "deep" could easily be misinterpreted to be meant in the sense of "extending far down from the top or surface." So I'd support ALT1. Andrew Jameson (talk) 12:13, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Neva River

Electric tram line on the frozen Neva River around 1900 Electric tram line on the frozen Neva River around 1900
Electric tram line on the frozen Neva River around 1900 Electric tram line on the frozen Neva River around 1900
Peter and Paul Fortress

  • ... that every winter between 1895 and 1910, electric trams were running on the ice of the frozen Neva River (pictured)?
  • Comment: ALT1 ... that in 1963, a plane landed on Neva River (pictured) with 45 passengers and no casualties? Here are alternative tram pictures. Although ALT1 is reminescent of the recent famous landing, I do prefer the main hook.

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 10:25, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nouns take a definite article in English, I know this is not the case in many other languages, but this is the English-language 'pedia not the Russian, it's "the Neva" in English. Gatoclass (talk) 08:04, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Salvador Cristau Coll

ALT1 ... that Salvador Cristau Coll was appointed by Pope Benedict XVI as the Auxiliary Bishop of the Roman Catholic Diocese of Terrassa?
ALT2 ... that Salvador Cristau Coll was incardinated as a Spanish prelate?
ALT4 ... that Salvador Cristau Coll, who is an Archpriest, was incardinated two times?
  • If you look at his diocesan section, you will see that he was incardinated once in Madrid and then in his present diocese. The archpriest suggests something bad and most people will think incardinate means "locked up". ----moreno oso (talk) 10:32, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Carmine DeSopo, 7th Legislative District (New Jersey)

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 04:32, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 22

The Oatmeal

  • ... that the website The Oatmeal, with comics with subjects ranging from zombies, to horse care, to English grammar, receives over 20 million hits a month after existing for less than a year?

Created by Gary King (talk). Nominated by Gary King (talk) at 02:13, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pocket Gamer

Created by Gary King (talk). Self nom at 01:26, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'd like to note that this is considered to be a new article because the article did not exist when I created it (it was deleted, check the logs), and I later asked for the deleted version to be restored for posterity purposes. Gary King (talk) 01:34, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Eric Hamilton

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 23:59, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of college football coaches with 200 career wins

5x expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 22:14, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Keith W. Piper

  • ... that Keith Piper successfully perpetuated the single-wing, "the formation-of-choice during football's leather-helmet era," for decades after it had been discarded by other teams?

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 21:41, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Peter Mazzaferro

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 18:50, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Toy book

  • ... that in the Victorian era the concept of a picture book for children, with illustrations dominating the text, was popularized with small books called toy books?

Created by Truthkeeper88 (talk). Self nom at 17:57, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dennis Douds

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 08:03, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Joe Taylor (American football coach)

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 17:40, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Rose of Castille

Created by GuillaumeTell (talk). Self nom at 16:59, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The hook is too long at 262 characters. Maybe you can figure out an alternate hook under 200 characters. The link to reference number 4 seems to be down? Any idea when it might be up again? Offline reference 5 AGF. Date of article creation checks out. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Regstuff (talkcontribs) 15:19, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Charles Rawden Maclean

Created by Martinvl (talk). Nominated by Daemonic Kangaroo (talk) at 05:13, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Amir Omar

Created by Mccalpin (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 00:01, 25 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Torpedo (petroleum)

Created by Niagara (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 23:54, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

PWS-6

  • ... that the PWS-6 was the the first Polish aircraft fitted with slats—but the prototype is the only model ever produced?

Created by Pibwl (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 21:44, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think the article needs a bit of a copy edit. I had a go but could not penetrate some of the terminology. In the Specifications section there are a number of non-sentences (that is sentences that are missing parts of speech or are very short). Also the the General characteristics have missing values (e.g. there are brackets with nothing in them). Could these be added, or the brackets removed? AustralianRupert (talk) 08:28, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    • I've tried to improve it, but better some native English speaker will take a look. Brackets are by default for values in Imperial measures, but I can't convert them. Pibwl ←« 16:22, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hoxne Hoard

female mannequin wearing the four strand chain

  • ... that the Hoxne Hoard, the largest hoard of Roman silver and gold discovered in Britain, includes pepper pots, silverware and a body chain (pictured)?
  • Comment: WIP ... its meant to be an FA candidate by Friday, but its certainly done 5x expansion already

5x expanded by Witty lama (talk), (talk), The Land (talk), WereSpielChequers and lots of others. Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 17:10, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Temoaya

handknotted rug outside the rug cooperative in Temoaya

5x expanded by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 23:58, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hmmm, thought I commented on this one yesterday but apparently not. I was not able to confirm from the supplied source that they are producing "Persian" style rugs. Can you point me to a source which confirms this please? Gatoclass (talk) 11:20, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK... I put a new citation right after where it says "Persian style hand knotted rugs" from the El Informador source http://www.informador.com.mx/suplementos/2008/56613/6/tapetes-de-temoaya.htm The second sentence of these source specifically says "Persian" (Adquirió fama por sus tapetes de manufactura puramente indígena, una lujosa artesanía tejida con esmero similar al del arte textil persa.)Thelmadatter (talk) 14:35, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Danelle German

Created by Miller17CU94 (talk). Nominated by Miller17CU94 (talk) at 14:49, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article has only one independent source, and that is to a tabloid newspaper. Every other source is to German's own website or businesses. That not only smacks of promotionalism, it also raises questions about notability. If this person and her activities are really notable, it shouldn't be hard to find a few independent sources to confirm it. Gatoclass (talk) 05:07, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kevin Kelley (musician)

Created by Kohoutek1138 (talk). Self nom at 12:02, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John and Eliza Barr Patterson House

John and Eliza Barr Patterson House

Created by Andrew Jameson (talk). Nominated by Andrew Jameson (talk) at 11:31, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

True/Slant

  • ... that Lisa Todorovich wrote in True/Slant that if Warren Beatty's claims to have slept with 13,000 women is true, he would have had to have slept with one woman every 1.17 days from age 14 to age 55?
Created by --Epeefleche (talk) 07:10, 22 June 2010 (UTC); self nom [reply]
  • This hook doesn't work, in my opinion. First of all, it's not really about True/Slant, but more about Warren Beatty. More specifically, it's about Peter Biskind's biography of Beatty, Star: How Warren Beatty Seduced America, in which Biskind estimated that Beatty had slept with 12,775 women. This was not Beatty's own claim, but rather an estimate by the biographer. Biskind arrived at this figure by doing basically the same mathematical calculation cited in the hook, just by multiplying rather than dividing: ""If he had no more than one partner a night -- and often there were several -- over a period of, say, three and a half decades from the mid-1950s ... to 1991, when he met Annette Bening, and allowing for the stretches when he was with the same woman, more or less, we can arrive at a figure of 12,775 women, give or take," Biskind wrote." [2] Todorovich basically took the number 12,775 and divided it over the appropriate period of Beatty's life. [3] So this is just a reiteration of what Biskind wrote, which Beatty's lawyer said was "baloney" anyway. [4] --Metropolitan90 (talk) 16:58, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • We routinely (as editors who frequent this page know), at DyK related to media, use what the media has reported. This hook does just that. It is verifiable. Verifiabilty, not truth, is the core test. IMHO Metro's OR dispute (regarding "truth", not verifiability) with what the publication has indubitably said is not a reason to not promote a verifiable hook.--Epeefleche (talk) 17:14, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I can understand wanting to use as a hook what a media subject has reported, but I'd rather it be something that the media subject reported originally rather than just paraphrasing from a recently published book. With that in mind, here's an ALT1 hook: ... that a True/Slant blogger revealed the news that Facebook president Mark Zuckerberg had changed his privacy settings to allow almost 300 personal photos to be displayed to friends of his friends? --Metropolitan90 (talk) 05:40, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'm happy for you to add your ALT1 (though I question whether it is as "hooky"). I remain of the opinion that the original hook is perfecty fine. True/Slant is not paraphrasing a book. Rather, it is reporting (and this is what is the hooky thing about their report) that the numbers revealed in the book calcualate out to approx one new partner a day for his adult life. That's not just a paraphrase. But, why not put up both hooks for consideration, and whichever the masses here prefer can be used.--Epeefleche (talk) 23:47, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • It seems that after having his Operation Arabian Knight article rejected for DYK, Epeefleche is now trying to give it backdoor exposure through this article. I think if the material was deemed unsuitable, it's unsuitable whether in a standalone article or piggybacking on another one. Gatoclass (talk) 13:21, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would ask Gato to retract that untruth. Without discussing Gato's behavior, I would simply point out that this DYK nom preceded Gato's effort to undermine the other DYK as it was in-queue. And further, that there is nothing in this hook that discusses the other hook.--Epeefleche (talk) 22:44, 27 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Well not exactly, as I raised concerns about the other hook long before this one was nommed. And you could have alerted someone to the fact that you had another nom with the same material in it. But it does seem I was mistaken to assume that you nommed this article after the rejection of the other one, and apologize for the misunderstanding.
However, none of that addresses the current problem, which is that this article contains material already rejected as unsuitable for the main page. Given that the material is also superfluous to the subject of this article, there is even less reason to include it here. Gatoclass (talk) 05:44, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ode: Intimations of Immortality

5x expanded by Ottava Rima (talk). Nominated by Chzz (talk) at 03:44, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

There are strong views on both sides of the proxy editing by banned users, on that I stand mute. But I will say that they should not get DYK credit for it.RlevseTalk 10:07, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kubla Khan

  • ... that when John Livingston Lowes taught Kubla Khan, he told his class "If there is any man in the history of literature who should be hanged, drawn, and quartered, it is the man on business from Porlock."?

5x expanded by Ottava Rima (talk). Nominated by Chzz (talk) at 03:40, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ottava Rima is in fact banned until Dec 2010. Looking at the history of the article, I see that OR wrote the expanded content in his userspace at Simple Wiki, then someone transferred it here. Even assuming that there's no violation of WP:BAN, are we happy that DYK should be used to reward edits made on behalf of banned users? Has this come up before? BencherliteTalk 15:35, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
There is a prescedent; [6] [7]  Chzz  ►  16:22, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I modified "[the]" to "the" based on Ottava's request. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 00:06, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I think in the previous case, it was a DYK based on edits Ottava had done prior to the ban. In this case, I don't think Ottava can be credited for the DYK. According to WP:BAN, "Editing on behalf of banned users is not allowed." cmadler (talk) 18:06, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
He was credited as a nominator for this FAC and this DYK after his ban, FYI. Also, that line you quoted is expanded on later in the same page. Essentially, editors here who copy Ottava's work (he asks them to copy them for him) are responsible themselves for the work they copy; all of Ottava's work (that I know of) that he has asked to be copied are well written pieces of work, which comply with the WP:MOS, etc. so that's why editors are willing to copy his work for him. Including this DYK. Gary King (talk) 18:42, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
<shrug> I don't care that much about it, I'm not going to argue about it, it just strikes me that 1) either it is considered Ottava Rima's content or it's not, in which case it is considered someone else's content; 2) if it's considered Ottava Rima's content, it seems like a circumvention of the ban; 3) if it's not Ottava Rima's content then someone else should be credited. But I won't stand in the way of the DYK over it. Consider this a declared reservation and proceed. cmadler (talk) 19:20, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
As the banning policy page says [I've bolded one word], "Wikipedians in turn are not permitted to post or edit material at the direction of a banned user (sometimes called proxy editing or proxying) unless they are able to confirm that the changes are verifiable and they have independent reasons for making them." Only verified information should go on DYK, so the first part of the banning page's criteria isn't a problem if it's ready for DYK, and improving or maintaining Wikipedia is a good enough independent reason for Sj to make edits such as this. Nyttend (talk) 22:21, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
There are strong views on both sides of the proxy editing by banned users, on that I stand mute. But I will say that they should not get DYK credit for it.RlevseTalk 10:05, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've posted a note at WT:DYK regarding this discussion. cmadler (talk) 12:53, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
My personal view is who ever ultimately made the edit should be getting attributed since they are essentially the ones that own the edits, and blocked editors shouldn't be getting attribution and recognition for "side steeping" around their block by getting others to do "proxy editing". Peachey88 (Talk Page · Contribs) 13:33, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I have semi-protected this page whilst this is resolved. Victuallers (talk) 14:12, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Semi-protection seems pointless, since it's primarily established users editing that page, and the proxy edit in question was done by an administrator. cmadler (talk) 14:39, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
That's a view. My view is that this could go to main page still and it has been iditted by proxy. My vote is no. DYK is for us to show off what is currently happening in new articles. I'm not proud of this. I'd skip it for DYK and that goes for the other one too. Nice articles ... maybe, but they break the rules. Anyone agree? Victuallers (talk) 14:47, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Strongly disagree: there's nothing in the DYK criteria prohibiting it, and as I already pointed out, the banning policy page doesn't prohibit it either. Nyttend (talk) 15:24, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
They break the rules. They improve the Wikipedia. Strongly disagree. -Atmoz (talk) 15:38, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Just like the two guys above, I strongly disagree with this view, too. And I find the semi-protection to be extremely excessive, considering that all the users who have edited the article since it was expanded are established users, anyway. The article is a perfect candidate for DYK, from a content perspective. At the very least, the article should be featured in DYK with credit given to no one. Gary King (talk · scripts) 15:56, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Edge Festival

  • ... that contrary to most music festivals, The Edge Festival takes place across multiple different locations, with fifty artists performing across seven venues in 2009?
  • Comment: Article was 1,779 characters in length, expanded 5x (without infobox or tables) to 9,255 on 22 June 2010.

5x expanded by SteelersFan UK06 (talk). Nominated by SteelersFan UK06 (talk) at 01:34, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Fails WP:DYKcheck, showing currently 3520 prose characters. Please follow the instructions in WP:DYKcheck to load that script into your skin file, then expand the article some more, and use the tool to verify that 5x prose expansion is met. Crum375 (talk) 03:36, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • To be more specific, the count listed in an article's history isn't accurate, the 5x expansion applies to prose only, excluding tables, infoboxes, and many other things. This article is currently 2.65x expanded by DYK criteria. ErinM (talk) 15:30, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I used this tool for both counts, removing the tables and infoboxes which i added in the second. The original didn't contain any of the above at all, which is how i produced the above numbers. Can you tell me what i'm seeing wrong? --SteelersFanUK06 HereWeGo2010! 21:18, 22 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure, but according to the page size tool I use, the page is currently at 6101 characters of prose, compared to 1324 characters of prose before. So you're close to a 5x expansion now; one more good paragraph could be enough to satisfy the minimum requirement. --Metropolitan90 (talk) 05:44, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I installed the tool and rechecked, i think I realised the problem - I was counting references. The article will be long enough in 24 hours... --SteelersFanUK06 HereWeGo2010! 00:50, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Article now passes DYKcheck's standards, but i will continue to improve. Hook should be assessed by source in lead para. --SteelersFanUK06 HereWeGo2010! 02:37, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I count 6,749 characters now, versus 1,345 before — that's long enough, and the date is good. I don't have time to check sourcing and hook, so I can't pass this article right now. Nyttend (talk) 22:30, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 21

Tremont Nail Company

Created by Ktr101 (talk). Nominated by Ktr101 (talk) at 00:19, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hmmm, a little concerned about this one. There is very little about the company as it is today. Most of it seems to be about the company's former historic site. Wouldn't it make more sense to merge this material into the existing article about the historic site? That article currently consists of only one line. Gatoclass (talk) 06:52, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Well the problem with that is that the historic site and the company are two different things. From what I have seen, we have two articles normally in terms of the historic site and the other entity, whatever that may be. I took most of this information from their history page so it will naturally be a bit biased anyways. A while back I had a similar issue with Worcester State Hospital and Worcester Asylum and related buildings, two separate things covering the same place. I could be wrong, but that's how I interpret things here. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 16:51, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

PWS-5

Created by Pibwl (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 21:51, 24 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • "variants" only lists 4 variants and not each has a ref. ~Cite error: A <ref> tag is missing the closing </ref> (see the help page).</ref>RlevseTalk

The Georgetown Improv Association

Created by Wikipedical (talk). Self nom at 03:27, 21 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • date and length check out, but I'm not happy with the references. All citations are from Georgetown University student publications to reference a Georgetown student group. I'd need to see some independent corroboration that the claim in the hook is true, and that the subject of the article is itself notable outside the confines of a particular university. Voceditenore (talk) 11:36, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Will approve the alt once the refs are properly formatted.RlevseTalk 10:03, 29 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Special occasion holding area

Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools' Day 2011 - see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.

2 July, Feast of the Visitation

Ursula Buckel

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 12:38, 26 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

4 July, fifth Sunday after Trinity

Wer nur den lieben Gott läßt walten, BWV 93

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 14:15, 23 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

See also