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Candidate entries

Articles created/expanded on August 22

Boixos Nois

Picture of former football player Luis Figo.

  • ... that the Boixos Nois threw a pig's head onto the pitch while Luis Figo (pictured) was taking a corner?

Created by Sandman888 (talk). Nominated by Sandman888 (talk) at 20:46, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


David Watts Morgan

  • ... that trade unionist Lt-col. David Watts Morgan CBE DSO MP JP was known by the miners he represented as "Dai Alphabet"?

Created by FruitMonkey (talk). Self nom at FruitMonkey (talk) 18:57, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


1938 European Athletics Championships

Dora Ratjen in competition attire
Dora Ratjen

5x expanded by Sillyfolkboy (talk). Self nom at 18:00, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Amelia Van Buren

"Amelia Van Buren With Cat", photo by Thomas Eakins

Created by Howcheng (talk). Self nom at 17:47, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Franjo Tuđman Bridge (Dubrovnik)

Picture of the southern end of the Franjo Tuđman Bridge, with the port of Dubrovnik in the background

  • ... that the opening of the Franjo Tuđman Bridge (pictured) was controversial due to a public naming dispute?

Created by Tomobe03 (talk). Self nom at 16:04, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Powership

  • ... that a newly constructed powership, a floating power plant capable of generating 144 MW, currently supplies Basra in south-eastern Iraq with electricity?

Created by CeeGee (talk). Self nom at 15:49, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Norman MacLeod (The Wicked Man)

Created by Brianann MacAmhlaidh (talk). Self nom at 11:09, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Patrol 35 / Tsagaan Khass

Created by Stonemason89 (talk). Nominated by Stonemason89 (talk) at 05:13, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • According to its article, Patrol 35 no longer exists (which would make the hook incorrect). In addition, there doesn't appear to be a specific statement in the Tsagaan Khass article, supported by a reference, that says it is openly neo-Nazi. Maybe a different hook - perhaps something about how the second organization justifies its use of the swastika symbol? --Demiurge1000 (talk) 09:45, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hmm I just noticed neo-Nazi is indeed what the one source for that article calls Tsagaan Khass - although with it having considerable potential for controversy, I wonder if a single source is enough? (That position also raises questions about its notability) --Demiurge1000 (talk) 09:51, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Maybe change "are" in the hook to "are or were" in order to dispel the present/past tense issues? Also, there are other sources available for Tsagaan Khass, but many of them are in non-English languages (particuarly Mongolian, understandably.) Perhaps a Mongolian-speaking Wikipedian would be able to help out. Stonemason89 (talk) 16:28, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Greater Bangladesh

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 05:10, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Phule's Company

Created by Sadads (talk). Self nom at 00:54, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 21

John Thomas Smith (1766-1833)

Created by Victuallers (talk). Self nom at 15:04, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Just Give Me a Cool Drink of Water 'Fore I Diiie

Created by Fetchcomms (talk). Self nom at 03:51, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Old Furnace State Park

Created by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 23:34, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Meghalaya Legislative Assembly

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 23:17, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Benjamin Goldwasser

Ben Goldwasser of MGMT backstage with bandmate Andrew VanWyngarden in 2008

5x expanded by Tim1965 (talk). Self nom at 22:30, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Maslenica Bridge (D8)

Picture of the Maslenica Bridge, a steel deck arch bridge crossing a narrow inlet of the Adriatic Sea

5x expanded by Tomobe03 (talk). Self nom at 21:00, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


In convertendo Dominus

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 20:28, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pepi, Luci, Bom

5x expanded by miguelemejia (talk). Self nom at 20:04, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Deusdedit of Canterbury

5x expanded by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 19:09, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Romgaz

5x expanded by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 19:05, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Giora Romm

Israeli Air Force A-4 Skyhawk, a delta-winged single engined ground attack aircraft on display

Created by Poliocretes (talk). Self nom at 17:18, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length verified, hook accepted on good faith. AustralianRupert (talk) 13:01, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've tweaked 'on' to 'in', and added another 'on' to the hook that appeared to be missing. Mikenorton (talk) 19:59, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Woodlawn Preserve

Created by Camelbinky (talk). Self nom at 16:12, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Rock Creek Park Golf Course

Created by Tim1965 (talk). Self nom at 16:03, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lugu Lake

Picture of Lugu Lake showing a small peninsula

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self nom at 07:57, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Cratendune

  • ... that the search for Cratendune continues though evidence that any one site is the lost village remains sparse?

Created by Senra (talk), Self nom at 10:34, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

History of Baptists in Kentucky

Superbike 2001

5x expanded by Nomader (talk). Self nom at 04:53, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pamela Geller

Created by Stonemason89 (talk). Nominated by Stonemason89 (talk) at 03:52, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Would it not be better to change "defended" to "strongly defended" (as per article) or similar, otherwise it sounds as if she might have been a defence lawyer at his trial?

Syed Mahmud

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 03:32, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Van Wert County Courthouse

Van Wert County courthouse, a building of brick construction with decorative stonework and a tall clock tower

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 03:06, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Battle of Graveney Marsh

  • ... that the Battle of Graveney Marsh on 27 September 1940 between British and German troops was the last action involving a foreign invading force to take place on mainland British soil?

Created by Philg88 (talk). Nominated by De728631 (talk) at 00:04, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Article is only 755 characters, almost exactly half of the minimum length. Additionally, there's only one reference, used in a single location; much of the article is uncited. Nyttend (talk) 03:20, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, I wasn't aware of the minimum length, but I can of course add some more text. As to citing sources, the whole article is in fact based on the Telegraph article in the footnote, I thought that was obvious and the only possibly controversial thing is the "last invasion" trigger in the lead - anything else doesn't need an inline citation. But I can of course mark the source as a general reference as well, but that'd be superfluous in my opinion. De728631 (talk) 11:05, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The article has been expanded to a net length of over 1,700 characters with multiple citations from three reliable sources. I think that should work now. De728631 (talk) 11:53, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 20

Ecology of the Rocky Mountains

Created by Hike395 (talk). Self nom at 13:46, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Mass suicide in Demmin

Created by Skäpperöd (talk). Nominated by Skäpperöd (talk) at 09:39, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Very strong oppose-this seems to be a WP:Synthesis combined with essey, thus going against two Wikipedia guidelines, in addition it is based on very dubious sources(among which is a pastor and a politician who was 9 years at the time). I think the article needs to be deleted as per [Wikipedia is not a publisher of original thought] and [Wikipedia is not a soapbox or means of promotion] mentioned here [1]. --MyMoloboaccount (talk) 12:57, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I don't see any essay-like content here. Moreover, the occupations and ages of the sources are not themselves reasons to say that they're unreliable: this man's published writings were reliable sources on the American Civil War, and any current Egyptologists write about events that happened long before they were 9 years old. Could you explain your reasoning more fully? Nyttend (talk) 15:34, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Even a brief search through the sources indicated that the article does not reflect them-I already found that the estimates range from 700 and hardly "more than 1000". Another thing-this article seems to be skewed into portayal of the events as results of Red Army-sources about suicide in Nazi Germany though point heavily to Nazi indoctrination that resulted into cult-like behaviour and hysteria during the fall of Nazi regime(this is directly in fragments where Dennim is mentioned). Thirdly-the article doesn't mention the killings of family members by Nazis which the articles about this mention as well. In other words-so far it represents very biased portayal while omitting important information, with cherry picked details to give it more tabloid-sensantionalistic tone. If it is to stay-all sources will have to be reviewed in detail to pick out the real portayal(like I said, even brief review led to discover that over 1000 number is not correct).--MyMoloboaccount (talk) 16:26, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I have adressed the issues Molobo (talk · contribs) aka MyMoloboaccount (talk · contribs) raised on article talk. I can only repeat here that if he feels that article needs to be deleted, as he said above and on article talk, he should take it to AfD right away and try to find a consensus there. Aussuming good faith, this is genuine interest in the article and not related to either the SPI I initiated last spring that got him blocked until recently, or the WP:EEML arbcom where I provided evidence against him. I noticed that Molobo and Radeksz went after a former EEML target on DYK talk recently [2], and I don't want that to happen here again. Skäpperöd (talk) 17:04, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Skapperod you might want to start debating articles in question, rather than throw EEML accussations here and there as substitute of response to valid criticism.--MyMoloboaccount (talk) 17:48, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Note also that the above information and sources make the proposed hook completely wrong and pushing a POV claim regarding the reason for suicides.--MyMoloboaccount (talk) 18:31, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

East Potomac Park Golf Course

Created by Tim1965 (talk). Self nom at 15:56, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Action of 12 December 1782

A painting of a battle at sea, several masted warships firing cannon at one another.

Created/expanded by Bruichladdich1 (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 11:46, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


History of Baptists in Alabama

Henriette d'Angeville

Henriette d'Angeville

  • ... that in 1838, Henriette d'Angeville (pictured), the first woman to climb Mont Blanc on her own strength, received a calling card from a Polish nobleman on her way to the summit, at 10,000 feet?

Created/expanded by Drmies (talk). Nominated by Drmies (talk) at 02:44, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Haile Fida

Created by Llywrch (talk). Self nom at 23:42, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ejército Grande

Created by Alexf (talk). Self nom at 22:17, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Genetically modified tomato

Created/expanded by Aircorn (talk) and Smartse (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 21:20, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • GeeJo beat us to it, I'd prefer a longer hook like:
ALT1... that genetically modified tomatoes have been produced that ripen more slowly, are more resistant to drought and salt stress and are more nutritous than wildtype tomatoes?
I hope it's clear that they are separate types and there's no super tomato that is all of these, if it's unclear then could someone try to reword it? Smartse (talk) 15:18, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I like ALT1 better than the original. If there is confusion we could focus on one specific trait. Say:
ALT2 ... that Hilary Koprowski has developed a genetically modified tomato expressing a recombinant vaccine that may improve immunity to SARS? AIRcorn (talk) 08:40, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Skeid

  • ... that the sports club Skeid, known for its football team, has also won the Norwegian league in bandy?

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 21:04, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

SFK Lyn

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 19:59, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length is more than double the minimum; date is good; and the hook is supported by a reference. I don't speak Norwegian, but I've checked several references to ensure that certain key words (such as the one for the hook, which includes the name of King Olav) are present. Nyttend (talk) 15:42, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Keith Burridge

Created by Gfouquet (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 21:48, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kamenica Tumulus

Created by Sulmues (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 19:28, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ukshin Hoti

Created by ZjarriRrethues (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 16:13, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fine with me, --Sulmues (talk) 19:19, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lasiopetalum, Lasiopetalum macrophyllum, Lasiopetalum ferrugineum, Lasiopetalum baueri, Lasiopetalum schulzenii

green leaves, brown flowers

  • Comment: I might be able to make this a 5,6 or 7 article whammy in a day or two, watch this space got to five articles. Bored now. have at it.

Created by Casliber (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 15:34, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Reaping Death

Created by Cannibaloki (talk). Self nom at 15:27, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Herbert (Family Guy)

  • ... that Herbert's voice and design was inspired by an elderly man that Hebert's creator, Mike Henry, met when he worked in a grocery store when he was in High School?

5x expanded by User:Pedro thy master (talk). Self nom at 14:48, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fehim Zavalani

Created by ZjarriRrethues (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 14:07, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


SS Dimitry Laptev

Created by Mjroots (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 20:58, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Meteor Procession of February 9, 1913

Created by Svejk74 (talk). Self nom at 09:26, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Don Quixote (opera)

Created by Francesco Malipiero (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 06:37, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Nicolas de Aguilar

Created by Smallchief (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 21:12, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Long-nosed god maskette

A whitish shell carved into the shape of a face, with an extremely protuberant triangular nose

Created by Heironymous Rowe (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 20:51, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Natalee Holloway (film)

5x expanded by KimChee (talk). Self nom at 04:21, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Prince Ludwig of Löwenstein-Wertheim-Freudenberg

Created by Caponer (talk). Self nom at 02:16, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Grady Wallace

Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self-nom at 01:50, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Jake Sasseville

Created by AcadiaGuy (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 19:46, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Langston Golf Course

Created by Tim1965 (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 19:58, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

History of Song

Created by Philg88 (talk). Self nom at 22:43, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 19

Randolph Blackwell

Created by Fazh (talk). Nominated by David Eppstein (talk) at 19:20, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Transportation of Arkansas

Created by Brandonrush (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 17:04, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jerry Nelson (astronomer)

Created by RichardMathews (talk). Nominated by Bejinhan (talk) at 03:22, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pete Allen (baseball)

Created by Halvorsen brian (talk). Self nom at 03:15, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dunstable Swan Jewel

Created by Johnbod (talk). Nominated by Johnbod (talk) at 00:11, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kansas City Cowboys (AA) all-time roster

A man in a baseball uniform is standing holding a baseball bat

Created by Neonblak (talk). Self nom at 18:39, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Short S.27

Created by Mdnavman (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 09:05, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Water supply and sanitation in Burkina Faso

Created by Mschiffler (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 08:43, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Montgomery Bell State Park

Created by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 23:47, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John Lawson Walton

Created by Graham Lippiatt (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 23:25, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of Connecticut Huskies bowl games

  • Comment: Moved from userspace on August 19.

Created by Grondemar (talk). Nominated by Grondemar (talk) at 19:58, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Roddy Jackson

Created by Ghmyrtle (talk). Self nom at 19:32, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Cameline

Created by User:Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 19:07, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bernard de Montfaucon

Head and shoulders drawing of Bernard de Montfaucon wearing a monk's habit

5x expanded by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nom at 17:57, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Leszek Jańczuk (talk) 15:43, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Yanouh

5x expanded by Eli+. Self nom at 17:54, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Daniel-Johnson Dam

A large concrete multiple arch buttress dam straddles a gorge, withholding water

  • ... that the 214 meter tall, 1314 meter long Daniel-Johnson Dam (pictured) in Canada contains 2,200,000 m3 of concrete and is the largest multiple-arch buttress dam in the world?

5x+ by NortyNort and Bouchecl. Self nom --NortyNort (Holla) 11:50, 19 August 2010 (UTC) [reply]

Nantwich Bridge

  • ... that in 1663, Roger Wilbraham organised the replacement of Nantwich Bridge in Cheshire, and the new bridge was completed in time for his son to be the first corpse carried across it?

Created by Espresso Addict (talk). Self nom at 06:49, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Japanese battleship Hiei

three views (side, aerial, front) of a large warship with four main gun-turrets and numerous smaller guns arrayed around a tower-superstructure and three funnels.

5x expanded by Climie.ca (talk). Nominated by Climie.ca (talk) at 06:41, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Does it tell you how close it is to 5x expansion? That'll determine whether I do a wee bit extra work or simply withdraw the nomination. Cam (Chat)(Prof) 16:13, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
DYKcheck, which says 5x expansion began 1046 days ago, is in error. Prose size before expansion began today was 3422. Five times that is 17110. Current size: 17572. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 19:24, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
AGF on the offline source. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 20:08, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Walter Hass

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 02:23, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Neil Gardner

Created by Niccaro (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 08:52, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 18

Ipswich Hoard

  • ... that the first Ipswich Hoard was found whilst demolishing a house belonging to a coin collector?

Created by Victuallers (talk), BabelStone (talk). Self nom at 17:23, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ten Mile River (California)

Created by David Eppstein (talk). Self nom at 01:40, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Red Rock Job Corps Center

A white dome atop a large rectangular tower rises above a field and trees against a blue sky

Created by Ruhrfisch (talk). Self nom at 00:13, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Undershaw

Undershaw, the family home of Sir Arthur Conan Doyle from 1897-1907.

created by Jusdafax (talk). Nominated by Jusdafax 19:02, 20 August 2010 (UTC) [reply]

Minuscule 113

Description of the image

  • Comment: The list of Wettstein was ended just on the number 112, the list of Griesbach is much longer. Other possible hook:
  • ... that Minuscule 113 (pictured), manuscript of the four Gospels contains 24 pictures?

5x expanded by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nom at 14:26, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Dortmunder Philharmoniker

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 07:21, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sind Sparrow

Small patterned brown bird in a thick bush

  • ... that the Sind Sparrow (pictured) was not recorded for 36 years after it was first described, despite searches by noted ornithologists?

5x expanded by Innotata (talk), Shyamal (talk). Nominated by Innotata (talk) at 01:29, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Conquered Banner

Portrait of Father Ryan

Created by AMuseo (AMuseo). Self nom at 19 August 2010 (UTC)

Thomas C. Molesworth

Created by Acroterion (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 21:18, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Andrew Mack

Created by Howcheng (talk). Self nom at 19:03, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Qeparo

Created by Beserks (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 14:59, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Benjamin D'Israeli

Created by Jheald (talk). Self nom at 14:39, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Latavious Williams

5x expanded by Martin tamb (talk). Self nom at 13:37, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Malcolm Jardine

Created by Sarastro1 (talk). Self nom at 10:14, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

St Jean Bosco massacre

Created by Rd232 (talk). Self nom at 10:09, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

No - Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing. Long-term the quote should be replaced with original description combining various sources, but paraphrasing of the current paragraph is impermissible for copyright reasons. Rd232 talk 16:07, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think it might be best to retain the quotation, as the sources are all going to have an inherent PoV and it's probably best if using just one to quote it directly. I do think the quotation needs to be introduced to say who is making the description, whether they were a witness, and when it was written (ie how long after the event). Espresso Addict (talk) 19:20, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Actually the source for the description isn't as good as I thought it was; it's hosted by Bob Corbett of Webster University, but I can't find anything about the author or non-internet publication. I used it because it's a short summary of the much longer first-hand witness description here (Human Rights Watch publication), which is in Google Books and can't be copied and is far too long anyway. I guess that section could just be dropped. But I've got to ask: is sorting this out necessary for DYK? Rd232 talk 19:40, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Given that a much longer statement of a witness is available, perhaps a careful summary with selected short quotations, stating that you are summarising an eyewitness, would be the best way to go. Articles are required to be neutral, so it would be good to fix the issues I raised above regarding possible bias in the description before featuring. Also, as the article describes named people, many of whom will still be living, it is held to higher standards. Espresso Addict (talk) 02:53, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've moved the description to the talk page - I have neither time nor enthusiasm for creating a new summary of the eyewitness description, and the key details are already in the article. I think it can be left for the future and DYK go ahead as is. Rd232 talk 11:34, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Harvey B. Scribner

  • ... that Harvey B. Scribner oversaw the 1965 busing plan that made Teaneck, New Jersey the first district in the U.S. with a white majority to implement a voluntary school integration program?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:43, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Rosalie Duthé

Portrait painting of a woman looking slyly over her bare shoulders towards the viewer.

Created by User:Green Cardamom (talk). Nominated by User:Green Cardamom (talk) at 00:01, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comment. How utterly delightful! If this checks out to everyone's satisfaction, I'd suggest a more concise wording: " ... that celebrated French courtesan Rosalie Duthe has been called history's first dumb blonde?" "Recorded" is redundant with "history," and I wonder whether she's "famous" — if she were, this wouldn't be such a fun thing to find. And no question: the portrait just has to run with the item. Cynwolfe (talk) 01:16, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Agree with this new wording. Thank you. Green Cardamom (talk) 02:39, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sources for hook check out; article has been copyedited. Recommend using image. Cynwolfe (talk) 02:45, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sunosuchus

Created by Smokeybjb (talk). Nominated by Smokeybjb (talk) at 23:35, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jean Touzet du Vigier

Created/expanded by DCI2026 (talk). Self nom at 23:25, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Four governments, of which only three are listed? Unacceptable unless you can fix that. DS (talk) 13:53, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Olga Maturana

Created by Diego Grez (talk). Nominated by Diego Grez (talk) at 20:12, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Spanish verified Tommy! [message] 22:48, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Onizuka Center for International Astronomy

Created by Resident Mario (talk), Awien (talk). Nominated by Resident Mario (talk) at 19:36, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Western Union Defence Organization

Created by User:marcd303019 (talk). Self nom at 18:41, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • A few problems with this one. The hook is not clearly in the article. I can see that WUDO pre-dates NATO but it needs to be clearly placed. Adding to that, is NATO one of "Europe's first multi-lateral military organization[s]" or does it pertain to a lot more countries than those in Europe? Hence not making it a European organization. Also, the first sentence in the Background and Historical Summary sections is the same. On a side note: I think those two sections could be combined to show the progression of defense organizations. --NortyNort (Holla) 08:23, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Judicial independence in Singapore

A sculpture of a robed woman holding a sword in her left hand and a pair of scales in her right hand.

Created by Smuconlaw (talk). Nominated by Smuconlaw (talk) at 18:33, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hmmm. Why not? Anyway, what about this ALT: ... that as judicial commissioners may be appointed to the Supreme Court of Singapore (statue of Lady Justice pictured) for limited periods, some say this may affect judicial independence in Singapore? — SMUconlaw (talk) 09:17, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Centro Urbano Benito Juárez

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 18:24, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Caroline test

Created by Shoplifter (talk). Nominated by My76Strat (talk) at 16:50, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sandur, Kurdistan

  • ... that during the first half of the 20th-century Sandur was the only entirely Jewish village in Kurdistan?

Created by Chesdovi (talk). Self nom at 16:39, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It would seem that they emmigrated in the early 50s. I have no infomation about the locations current status. Chesdovi (talk) 18:04, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Gileppe Dam

Gileppe Dam photographed in April 2007

Created by Cynwolfe (talk). Nominated by Cynwolfe (talk) at 15:25, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Ranch A

Created by Acroterion (talk). Self nom at 14:40, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bolinas Ridge

Bolinas Ridge from the waterfront town of Bolinas, California on Bolinas Lagoon.

5x expanded by Jusdafax (talk). Nominated by Jusdafax 10:30, 18 August 2010 (UTC) [reply]

- ready. Dincher (talk) 00:58, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pflügers Archiv: European Journal of Physiology

Created by Espresso Addict (talk). Self nom at 09:48, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

James Power (empresario)

Created by William S. Saturn (talk). Nominated by William S. Saturn (talk) at 08:39, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GLaDOS

  • ... that IGN has called GLaDOS, the computer from the video game Portal, the greatest video game villain?

5x expanded by New Age Retro Hippie (talk). Nominated by New Age Retro Hippie (talk) at 06:47, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Rephrase: ... that IGN has called GLaDOS, the computer from the video game Portal, one of the greatest video game villains? DS (talk) 13:55, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I disagree with that rephrasing... GLaDOS appears as number one on a countdown list of the top 100 video game villians ([3]). Maybe it could be reworded instead as, "... that IGN called GLaDOS, the computer from the video game Portal, the greatest video game villian of all time?" The "of all time" is superfluous but it emphasizes the timeframe of this list and GLaDOS's overall significance. Nomader (Talk) 04:17, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kermadec Red-crowned Parakeet

Created by Maias (talk). Self nom at 06:41, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Operation Marlborough

Created by Xcalizorz (talk). Self nom at 06:17, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Entrégate

Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 05:48, 18 August 2010 (UTC). Self nom at 05:47, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Caponer (talk). Self nom at 04:03, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Colonia Buenos Aires

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 01:17, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Stadion Koturaška

Created by Timbouctou (talk). Self nom at 00:37, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 17

Germaine Ribière

Created by Highland14 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 11:06, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Gukumatz

Ballcourt marker at Mixco Viejo, depicting Gukumatz carrying Tohil across the sky in his jaws

5x expanded by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 11:14, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'm not sure what's going on with DYKcheck - the article had a length of 2051 characters of prose text when I started expansion on 17 August, and is now showing as 10555 characters of prose text, which is 5x in my book, but DYKcheck is returning not 5x expanded. Something wrong somewhere... Simon Burchell (talk) 11:19, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Assembly for the Sovereignty of the Peoples

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 00:54, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Purl

5x expanded by Colonel Warden (talk). Self nom at 18:57, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ludvík Kundera

Czech writer Ludvík Kundera signing a book

Created by Vejvančický (talk). Self nom at 09:43, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Maharishi Heaven on Earth Development

Picture of the Fleck/Paterson House in the snow, a large four-story stone building with a large porch and a tower with a conical roof

Created by Will Beback (talk). Self nom at 20:54, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alladi Ramakrishnan

Created by Finemann (talk), SPat (talk). Self nom at 16:45, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ignace Michiels

Ignace Michiels seated, playing a three-manual organ

  • Comment: more info linked under organ version, it would blow up the organist's article too much to repeat it there

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 14:36, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Chronic traumatic encephalopathy

A photo of baseball player Lou Gehrig in the pinstriped uniform of the New York Yankees in the foreground, with fans in the stands in the background

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 01:49, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

    • (note: I am not a doctor) The source provides a very weak opinion connecting two very serious issues and a long-gone person. ALS itself is quite a creepy evil - too much uncertainty around it. Could be this, could be that, nobody knows why. Too early to make such statements, even in off-the-record talk. East of Borschov 15:05, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
      • I had seen the article on Tuesday online at the website The New York Times and created the article. The article was published on the front page of the Wednesday print edition and continued inside as a full page of the newspaper. While Chronic traumatic encephalopathy is the ostensible subject of the print article, the story is written largely about Lou Gehrig and the possibility that he died of CTE and not amyotrophic lateral sclerosis (commonly known as Lou Gehrig's disease). The article devotes four pictures to Gehrig, including one taken when he was being walked off the field after suffering a concussion and much of the article deals with CTE from Gehrig's perspective, recounting the details of several incidents where he had been hit by a baseball and suffered head trauma. Gehrig is discussed in the first three paragraphs of the article, as well as throughout the article in The Times, ashowing the emphasis that the newspaper placed on Gehrig. The third paragraph reads "Although the paper does not discuss Gehrig specifically, its authors in interviews acknowledged the clear implication: Lou Gehrig might not have had Lou Gehrig’s disease", which could not more clearly support the hook. Alansohn (talk) 00:17, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Eloísa Díaz

Black and white drawing that shows a woman with short hair.

Created by Diego Grez (talk). Nominated by Diego Grez (talk) at 00:56, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Changed some wording.. Tommy! [message]
Good to go Tommy! [message] 01:16, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

St. Mary's of Aransas, Texas

Black and white image of the left side of a young white woman with dark hair.

Created by William S. Saturn (talk). Nominated by William S. Saturn (talk) at 23:52, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Nurse Jeffrey

Created by 03md (talk). Nominated by 03md (talk) at 23:26, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Better - ... that the miniseries Nurse Jeffrey, a spinoff of House MD, was originally released exclusively for iPhone, iPad and iPod Touch? DS (talk) 14:03, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of accolades received by An Education

Created by JuneGloom07 (talk). Self nom at 23:12, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Joe Lutcher

Created by Ghmyrtle (talk). Self nom at 22:39, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hezbollah theme park

Created by AMuseo (AMuseo). Self nom at 17 August 2010 (UTC)

OK the article is fascinating, the hook is mildly interesting, but I have a few problems here. First, the article is wildly, I would say provocatively, failing NPOV. I am about to raise my concerns about this at the article itself, but not in an overly dramatic way. To give some brief examples: the article in its current form cherry-picks quotes and details from the sources to give as bad an impression as possible (detailed examples on request), the article apparently omits parts of those details that would give the "opposing" viewpoint; the article (and indeed the proposed hook) links a one word adjective (jihadi) as used by Nasrallah to an article on a two-word concept (Salafist_jihadism) that arguably may have a different and much more controversial meaning. I am quite happy to work with you (and anyone else) to reach a concensus on a NPOV version of the article that would then be appropriate for DYK. I wouldn't then be able to review this nomination myself, but I could make clear what has been changed and why I think it should go ahead. I am aware that you have had some success in submitting a whole stream of new articles to DYK recently; the notability of two of them was based largely or entirely on their being cited by a pro-Israeli journalist in a controversial opinion piece about Gaza; the third that I saw had a similar theme. However I don't see why this one shouldn't join them if the article and the hook can be made at least moderately NPOV. Hopefully you are happy to help with this. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 23:19, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The notability here comes from press coverage and surprise. We are surprised that Hamas is building water parks and upscale restaurants in Gaza. And we are surprised that Hezbollah is building a theme park. I would also like to point out that words like jihad, jihadi, and propaganda are not mine. They come form the builders of the theme park, which the leader of Hezbollah calls a "tourist jihadi center".AMuseo (talk) 12:11, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The issues raised have been resolved.AMuseo (talk) 11:58, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Agreed - the article is long enough, new enough, the statement in the hook is correctly referenced, and I don't believe there is any longer an NPOV issue with the article. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 19:14, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
(Also both hooks now point to Jihad rather than Salafist Jihadism, to be consistent with the article) --Demiurge1000 (talk) 19:20, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kristin Kaspersen

Created by Theleftorium (talk). Nominated by Theleftorium (talk) at 20:32, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nirvana 2002

Created by Cannibaloki (talk). Self nom at 19:42, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I've just thought of an April fools day hook:

Athletics at the 10th National Games of the People's Republic of China

Created by Sillyfolkboy (talk). Self nom at 19:25, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yolande Harmer

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 13:33, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pyréolophore

self nomination by Chienlit (talk). Self nom at 12:35, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Dear Wikeditors, By the time this gets 'the DYK treatment' I will be 'rough travelling' through France (Chalon-sur-Saône), Spain and Portugal, so I will probably not be able to reply to editorial comments ... and definitely won't care. :) So please edit as you choose. Chienlit (talk) 13:09, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I have 'taken' the 'liberty' of 'removing' the 'apostrophes' around 'internal combustion engine' in the 'hook'. Si Trew (talk) 20:31, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George R. Brown

5x expanded by Jujutacular (talk). Self nom at 07:58, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George Malley

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 07:47, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bump (application)

Created by Nomader (talk). Self nom at 05:04, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William G. Higgs

West Point cadet in gray uniform with dark hair

Created by Rlevse (talk). Self nom at 01:50, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Older nominations

Articles created/expanded on August 16

Opatów Palace, Jacek Rybiński

A photograph of a palace and garden

Created by Radeksz (talk). Nominated by Radeksz (talk) at 09:01, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


The Capeman

5x expanded by User:Staecker (talk). Self nom at 01:31, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Mary Tyler Moore Show opening sequence

Created by JTSchreiber (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 16:50, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I like these hooks, especially the one with the picture. Article length, hook lengths, and date are OK, and the sourcing is OK on the fact for the first hook. (I can't check the second one because Internet Archive is refusing my connection.) HOWEVER, the callout to the source for the second hook fact needs to be repeated (so it shows up at the end of the sentence about the statue), and the whole article needs more inline citations. DYK generally aims for at least one citation per paragraph, and this article falls way short of that mark. --Orlady (talk) 02:34, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Tadeusz Adamowski

Yearbook photograph of Tadeusz Adamowski

5x expanded by Mack2 (talk), Radeksz (talk). Nominated by Radeksz (talk) at 05:08, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Added.radek (talk) 17:19, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
That's still not proper alt-text. Please read WP:ALT#How to write alternative text. rʨanaɢ (talk) 04:34, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done. I've read it before already.radek (talk) 04:47, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Probably worth specifying ice hockey in the hook. Poland competes at European World and Olympic level in field hockey too, and speakers of Commonwealth English, other than Canadians, will think of field hockey when they see just "hockey" written. David Underdown (talk) 16:07, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"... that Tadeusz Adamowski (pictured), a pioneer of ice hockey in interwar Poland, played the sport at Harvard, coached the Polish national team, and was imprisoned in a German Oflag during World War II"
reworded slightly to include the "pictured" and fit under 200 characters.radek (talk) 21:44, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Glacier Bay

Glacier Bay

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self nom at 01:47, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

very nice work. RlevseTalk 23:39, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks.-- N.V.V. Char Talk . 01
  • 14, 20 August 2010 (UTC)

James Sumner (Medal of Honor)

Created by Jwillbur (talk). Self nom at 01:45, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Seaside Institute

Seaside Institute

Created by AbbyKelleyite (talk). Self nom at 21:47, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think the article is more interesting than the hook. Is there anyway to explain in the hook why the amenities were so good? See ALT1. Also, between citation #7 and #10 there is a large sentence with multiple quotes within parenthesis which made it very difficult to read.--NortyNort (Holla) 09:03, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'll happily admit to writing more interesting articles than hooks. I like your alt hook because it provides some historical context/interest, i.e what storm? Thank you for the rewrite. Abby Kelleyite (talk) 18:29, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Edgehead

5x expanded by Alzarian16 (talk). Self nom at 11:16, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Fair point. How about this:

5x expanded by Alzarian16 (talk). Self nom at 11:16, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bródno Cemetery

Panoramic view of the Bródno Cemetery

Created by Darwinek (talk). Nominated by Darwinek (talk) at 09:40, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

 Done - Darwinek (talk) 10:10, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
New ALT above. --NortyNort (Holla) 15:52, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Aarti Sequeira

Created by Hunter Kahn (talk). Nominated by Hunter Kahn (talk) at 03:48, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Witham Shield

Drawing of a celtic Shield showing bosses and an outline of maybe a boar

5x expanded by Victuallers (talk) Rosie Clarke and BabelStone. Nominated by BabelStone (talk) at 00:37, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Memphite Formula

  • ... that the Memphite Formula, a standardized greeting on Ancient Egyptian letters, was used so frequently that papyrus intended for use as letters would be prepared with the greeting already written?

Created by Thanatosimii (talk). Self nom at 00:32, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GBU-53/B

  • ... that the original Small Diameter Bomb was developed by Boeing but the competition was restarted as a result of a corruption scandal and the Raytheon version of the GBU-53/B was selected instead?

Created by Suomi Finland 2009 (talk). Self nom at 23:30, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think it would be more immediately understandable to list it as "the original Small Diameter Bomb" and perhaps add the word "instead" at the end - you perhaps should also make Boeing and Raytheon into links --Demiurge1000 (talk) 05:35, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done, and changed instead of typing it again and wasting space. Thanks for suggestion. Suomi Finland 2009 (talk) 15:28, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

- Article isn't long enough. DYKcheck counts only 1365 characters of prose. --Orlady (talk) 02:44, 19 August 2010 (UTC)  Done it's longer now and good stuff, not just fluff, was added. Suomi Finland 2009 (talk) 21:04, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

SMS Bremse

Created by Benea (talk). Self nom at 23:06, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kingman Island

Aerial view of Kingman Island and Heritage Island in the Anacostia River in Washington, D.C.

5x expanded by Tim1965 (talk). Nominated by Tim1965 (talk) at 21:36, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Operation Banquet

Created by Gaius Cornelius (talk). Self nom at 20:50, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Note: article moved from user space to main space on 16 August 2010

KunstHausWien

St Briavel's Castle

5x expanded by Hchc2009 (talk). Nominated by Hchc2009 (talk) at 18:45, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Note: I've moved the article to St Briavels Castle (no apostrophe), per article talk page. Hook adjusted here accordingly. Ghmyrtle (talk) 07:29, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Church of La Soledad, Mexico City

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 17:48, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

No, they are not commemorating paid sex. They are not commemorating anything. They are remembering the sex worker victims of violence. This is different. One possible change is DYK that the --- Church in --- is the site of commemoration against violence committed upon sex workers. Suomi Finland 2009 (talk) 21:08, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

R.C. Bannon

Created by TenPoundHammer (talk). Nominated by TenPoundHammer (talk) at 17:39, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Gaja (wine)

  • ... that Angelo Gaja, owner of Piemonte wine producer Gaja, is often described as "the man who dragged Piedmont into the modern world"?

Created by Murgh (talk). Self nom at 14:49, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looking at this diff [6] which shows all of the changes made in the last 5 days, it is really not clear that the article's content has been expanded fivefold in that time. It is not a new article. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 18:05, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Excuse me? Please look a little closer at the move from userfied that occurred on the 16th. MURGH talk 18:11, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Taking the liberty to strike your objection as you haven't responded and seem to be unaware of WP:WIADYK 1.#3.. MURGH talk 21:40, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Mea culpa, I had somehow missed the move from userspace in the history. I have just checked the article and the reference for the statement, and it looks fine. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 22:59, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Li'l Millet, Dorothy LaBostrie

Created by Ghmyrtle (talk). Self nom at 12:41, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Not above you haven't !
Derek R Bullamore (talk) 13:29, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
D'oh! Ghmyrtle (talk) 13:32, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
According to this and this, the song was first released in 1955. If that isn't good enough (as it doesn't specifically refer to the date it was written), I suggest the simplest thing is to remove the words "in 1955" from the hook. Ghmyrtle (talk) 14:43, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
or, ALT1 (but perhaps too long): ... that the 2009 Grammy-winning song "Rich Woman", as performed by Robert Plant and Alison Krauss, was first released in 1955 by Li'l Millet, and was written by him and Dorothy LaBostrie? Ghmyrtle (talk) 14:46, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jamila M'Barek

Created by Cindamuse (talk), Surtsicna (talk). Nominated by Surtsicna (talk) at 11:24, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Triathlon at the 2010 Summer Youth Olympics – Boys'

Created by Arsonal (talk). Self nom at 08:46, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of awards and nominations received by Drake

Created by K. Annoyomous (talk). Self nom at 02:25, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

- ready Dincher (talk) 19:35, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Prince Wilhelm of Baden (1829–1897)

Sketch of Prince Wilhelm of Baden in uniform with a large beard

Created by Caponer (talk). Self nom at 01:33, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 15

Haliclystus auricula

Created by Ka Faraq Gatri (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 01:27, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Oxygyrus keraudrenii

apical view of the shell

Created by Ganeshbot (talk), Snek01 (talk). Nominated by Snek01 (talk) at 17:41, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Opernhaus Dortmund

Opernhaus Dortmund

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 14:38, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Atlanta lesueurii

apical view of the shell

Created by Ganeshbot (talk), Snek01 (talk). Nominated by Snek01 (talk) at 12:39, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Günter Reich

Created by 4meter4 (talk), Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 06:39, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Journal Record Building

Created by Doncram and Orlady (talk). Nominated by Orlady (talk) at 02:12, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'd check this off as A-okay, as sources check out, for this article which Orlady did all the serious work for. Only i am given shared credit for my having started it (thanks, though not necessary), so could someone else approve this? --doncram (talk) 15:56, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Chuck Forrest

  • ... that on the American syndicated game show Jeopardy!, 5-time champion Chuck Forrest won more in his first four games than any of the 15 five-time champions before him won in all five games?

Created by Us441 (talk). Self nom at 19:31, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Article isn't long enough -- DYKcheck counts only 1387 characters. I'll copy-edit it and see if that helps... --Orlady (talk) 02:59, 19 August 2010 (UTC) OK, I've copy-edited it a little now, and it's long enough. However, the article needs some additional clean-up -- in particular, the frequent use of pronouns "he" and "his" is confusing -- and the bare-URL references should be replaced with more formal reference callouts. --Orlady (talk) 03:20, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Good. I did some additional cleanup, too. The article length/dates and hook length check out as OK, but I can't find a source for the hook fact. I don't doubt that it's true, but the sources cited in the article don't say that he won more in 4 games than 15 previous champions had won in five games. (A person needs to piece that information together from several different sources, which is considered to be a form of original research.) Do you have another source for this fact? If not, I'm sure we could write an alternative hook for this article. For example, I believe there are good sources supporting a statement that the regular-play cash winnings record that he set in Season 2 lasted until Season 6. Alternatively, the hook could say that he set a regular-play winnings record after his first four games, then went on to win more money in a fifth game. --Orlady (talk) 02:47, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT1 ... that on the American syndicated game show Jeopardy!, 5-time champion Chuck Forrest held the regular winnings record from early Season 2 to early Season 6? -- Us441 (talk)
I used the alternate hook. I also removed that original research from the article.Us441(talk) (contribs) 16:50, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bed Intruder Song

  • ... that the music video to "Bed Intruder Song" has been viewed over 10 million times on YouTube since being uploaded on 30 July 2010?

Created by TwentiethApril1986 (talk). Nominated by TwentiethApril1986 (talk) at 17:10, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Hmm... That information seems to be dated August 19th (or possibly earlier). There's no telling how many more views it will have received by the time this hits the main page in DYK. Accordingly, I'm suggesting an alternative:

June Card

Created by 4meter4 (talk), Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 15:24, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Search for Robert Johnson

  • ... that in the 1991 documentary The Search for Robert Johnson, Willie Mae Powell, a girlfriend of the blues legend, hears his 1937 record "Love in Vain" (he calls her name, twice) for the very first time?

Created by Lexein (talk). Self nom at 13:03, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

United States Penitentiary, Tucson

USP Tucson

Created by KimChee (talk). Self nom at 03:40, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Youngstown (song), The New Timer

Created by Rlendog (talk), Wasted Time R (talk). Nominated by Rlendog (talk) at 03:45, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Thanks. I'd actually like to expand this to a double nom, as I think an article on related song now qualifies:

Created by Rlendog (talk), Wasted Time R (talk). Nominated by Rlendog (talk) at 03:45, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

WGGH

5x expanded by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 03:44, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sæbø sword

Seven Viking swords

Created by Dbachmann (talk). Nominated by BabelStone (talk) at 01:10, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

re tick, good call Victuallers (talk) 08:44, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Frank Gasparro

Image of a Susan B. Anthony dollar

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 00:10, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length and hook verified. AustralianRupert (talk) 12:46, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

District of Columbia Department of Parks and Recreation

Buildings, park, play area, and basketball court of a Washington, D.C., municipal recreation center

Created by Tim1965 (talk). Nominated by Tim1965 (talk) at 23:59, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Osbert de Bayeux

Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 23:28, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Because only one of the two sources cited was available online without subscription, I double-checked the info here. The hook might flow better if the appositive were moved before the name, to put Osbert closer to the act of murder, but this is arguable. Cynwolfe (talk) 00:44, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT: ... that the medieval English archdeacon Osbert de Bayeux was accused of murdering an Archbishop of York by poisoning the communion chalice?

Siv Stubsveen

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 20:53, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I think "successful" isn't an appropriate insert, both in terms of the DYKway and even my awareness of the subject despite some niche popularity in the 90s. Also, can the original title of the film be included, Dis? MURGH talk 08:03, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Scottish Review of Books

Created and self-nominated by ChrisO (talk) 16:14, 15 August 2010 (UTC) [reply]

  • Creation date, length, hook and ref all OK. One minor point, can we change "popular" to "people's" since that's what the quote says. I realise they are, or should be, synonyms. Si Trew (talk) 21:55, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Media coverage of climate change

Created by Rd232 (talk). Self nom at 14:25, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dashaveyor

A set of four Dashaveyors at the Toronto Zoo

Created by Maury Markowitz (talk). Self nom at 13:05, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Acacia leprosa 'Scarlet Blaze'

red spherical flowerheads against a backdrop of green leaves

Created by Melburnian (talk). Nominated by Melburnian (talk) at 12:03, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Good point. Two of the references accessed from worlwidewattle.com gives different dates. One (1994) is in an "interesting facts"-style summary and the other is a very detailed account in an Association of Societies for Growing Australian Plants Acacia Study Group article which I would give much more weight to. The 1995 date is also supported by PlantNET (NSW Herbarium) and the Australian National Botanic Garden website. I have added a further citation for the 1995 date from the Royal Botanic Gardens Melbourne, who were directly involved with conserving the plant. Melburnian (talk) 01:01, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think that's sufficient evidence of the correct date. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 02:47, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

James Young (1762–1833)

Painting of two sailing ships, sails fully rigged, exchanging cannonfire on a choppy blue-green sea

Created by Benea (talk). Self nom at 10:28, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

(simpler alt) ... that Captain James Young's prize money for capturing a Spanish frigate (illustrated) in 1799 would have made him a multi-millionaire at today's prices?
I suggest we need one or the other and accuracy is good but we don't need to be precise Victuallers (talk) 08:53, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The problem with saying "at today's prices" is it assumes that the commodity (in this case, Spanish frigates, or prizes therein) is still traded: in the absence of that, the price comparison isn't really valid. Si Trew (talk) 20:24, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The commodity in question was silver dollars - millions of them - which were made of solid silver. The other commodity was, ahem, cocoa. Silver and cocoa are both still traded, and some people would offer you a substantial amount of money for a 1799 condition Spanish Frigate; but while cocoa is now much less valued than silver, the silver would satisfy the "today's prices" claim on its own. It's a common usage, I don't see the problem with it. I like your suggested modification of the hook, but I have modified it slightly because (1) "the Spanish frigate" doesn't make sense if the picture is not included, and doesn't make perfect sense even then, and (2) mentioning the year only adds a few characters and almost no complexity, and is important given that the word "frigate" appeared 300 to 400 years ago and is still in use now, but its meaning has varied hugely in that time. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 04:38, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
That's fantastic, that would make such a better hook. I only know about silver dollars and cocoa from reading Eat the Rich, O'Rourke talking about commodity money. That, to me, at least, is a lot stronger: I picked it up on just being a kinda arbitrary figure, but that is a downright interesting thing in itself if he were paid in silver dollars (or lien for them etc). I'm going to check the article for compliance with DYK but if you can reword it into silver dollars that might have more impact. Si Trew (talk) 00:44, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Worryingly, for some reason the mention of silver was in my brain but not in the article. How about;
ALT2 ... that Captain James Young's capture of a Spanish frigate in 1799 (illustrated) turned out to include a cargo of cocoa as well as 1,411,526 dollars?
There are others too, such as the suddenly-rich crews gallivating around Portsmouth with 'bank notes stuck in their hats, buying watches for the fun of frying them' but that's rather harder to work into a hook. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 04:02, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Since I've posted it here already, I might as well;
ALT3 ... that Captain James Young's capture of a Spanish frigate in 1799 (illustrated) resulted in his suddenly rich crew roaming Portsmouth with "bank notes stuck in their hats, buying watches for the fun of frying them"?
Maybe too long? And also slightly confusing because there was more than one crew involved, not all under Young's command. And I don't know if it should have the quotes, or should have "was said to have resulted" instead. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 04:13, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Medrogestone

5x expanded by Anypodetos (talk), Fvasconcellos (talk). Self nom at 10:18, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Armenian Cathedral of the Holy Cross

Created by JASpencer (talk). Nominated by JASpencer (talk) at 08:12, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This article was not created or substantially expanded within the last five days; its history shows that it was renamed from a page formerly called "Akdamar Island", which existed for years. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 22:42, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Triathlon at the 2010 Summer Youth Olympics – Girls'

Created by Arsonal (talk). Self nom at 08:01, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kirkleatham

5x expanded by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 07:56, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Diogenes and Alexander

lithograph of the meeting of Alexander and Diogenes: Alexander, with an entourage of soldiers, standing over Diogenes sunbathing in the street

Lou Smit

  • ... that, called out of retirement to work on the murder case of JonBenét Ramsey, detective Lou Smit resigned 18 months later after concluding that "the Ramseys did not do it"?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:33, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Wendy Barlow

Ref: http://www.gvshof.ca/inductees_detail.asp?IDINDU=124
Ref: http://www.hockey-reference.com/players/b/barlobo01.html

Created by Maple Leaf (talk). Self nom at 00:46, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • New article, prose size (text only) now OK at 1666 chars. Hook is supported by citations in Wendy Barlow. I wikilinked Wendy Barlow above, and fixed the article's bare URLs with WP:Reflinks. Remaining, but non-blocking, article issues: 1. One incomplete, deadlink citation. 2. One of the cited sources not related to the hook is a forum - not strictly a WP:Reliable source. May I suggest rephrasing for a two-fer:
... that Wendy Barlow was inducted into the Greater Victoria Sports Hall of Fame, and that her father Bob Barlow played in 77 NHL games with the Minnesota North Stars?
I defer to another editor, as I edited the candidate article. --Lexein (talk) 22:31, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I went to check this, but it has the {{underconstruction}} tag on it. Have you left it there by mistake, or are you still subbing it? Si Trew (talk) 07:13, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
That tag was there when I got there - I should have removed it, as it had already been 3 days. Gone now. --Lexein (talk) 18:14, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 14

Agriculture in Tamil Nadu

Created by Incrazy (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 23:10, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John Wangler

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 05:34, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The George Hotel, Crawley

A tile-hung and timber-framed building with an uneven tiled roof and a prominent bay window to the right. There is a tall chimney-stack on the roof, and a gallows extends from the ground in front to just below the eaves.

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Hassocks5489 (talk). Self nom at 21:20, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Udaya Wickramasinghe

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk), Testing times (talk). Nominated by Chanakal (talk) at 04:18, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Down Down Baby

Created by Esprit15d (talk). Nominated by Esprit15d (talk) at 20:33, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • New article. Prose size (text only) ok if the lyrics are counted, otherwise it's too short by far. Claim of "1980s" in the hook and article isn't supported by the cited source. The rest of the hook is supported by source, an official authorized Sesame Street video at YouTube (no WP:LINKVIO issue). Article doesn't cite a WP:Reliable source for the existence of "Down Down Baby" prior to the Sesame Street showing, or for the lyrics. This can be quickly remedied through a search of Google Books. --Lexein (talk) 21:52, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bird trapping

File:Pieter Bruegel the Elder painting of a bird trap

Created by Ekem (talk). Nominated by Ekem (talk) at 13:20, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

both hooks are good to go. Dincher (talk) 18:20, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Frederik Christian Stoud Platou

5x expanded by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 09:54, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I suggest rewording the hook. The adverb "unsuccessfully" doesn't work with the verb "voted". Either he did or didn't vote. The goal of the impeachment must have been what was unsuccessful. Dincher (talk) 22:46, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bombardment of Mogador

The attack on Mogador by the French fleet, by Serkis Diranian, depicting a line of warships firing on a sunlit Moroccan town

Created/expanded by Per Honor et Gloria (talk). Nominated by Per Honor et Gloria (talk) at 09:33, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bishop Feild College

  • ... that The Feildian, a monthly magazine of Bishop Feild College, was the first publication of its kind in Newfoundland?

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 00:58, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Waitin' on a Sunny Day

Picture of a large screen at a concert, showing Bruce Springsteen letting a young child sing "Waitin' on a Sunny Day"

Created by Rlendog (talk), Wasted Time R (talk). Nominated by Rlendog (talk) at 00:42, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William Kneass

5x expanded by Wehwalt (talk), Connormah (talk). Self nom at 22:52, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Robert Brown Job

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 22:23, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Guadalupe Bay

Created by William S. Saturn (talk). Nominated by William S. Saturn (talk) at 22:10, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Andrei Pervozvanny class battleship

Created by User:Ala.foum, expanded by me - East of Borschov 19:59, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Expanson date, length, hook and ref all OK. I've bolded cage masts at the top of the lead in lattice mast, there's already a redirect for it to there, so everything seems in order. Si Trew (talk) 08:00, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nicholas Treadwell

  • ... that Nicholas Treadwell started his art gallery in 1963 in a double-decker bus and two furniture vans?

Created by Tyrenius (talk). Self nom at 17:45, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nakivubo Pronouncement

Created by Jarry1250 (talk). Self nom at 17:19, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

prenatal cocaine exposure

  • ... that the belief that "crack babies" would be severely disabled used to be widespread, but research has found that the effects of prenatal cocaine exposure are subtle?
  • ALT1:... that the effects of prenatal cocaine exposure (using cocaine while pregnant) are thought to be less harmful than those of alcohol?
  • Comment: Created in userspace, moved 8/14. For the first hook, here are some refs: "When the use of crack cocaine became a nationwide epidemic in the 1980s and ’90s, there were widespread fears that prenatal exposure to the drug would produce a generation of severely damaged children... But now researchers are systematically following children who were exposed to cocaine before birth... So far, these scientists say, the long-term effects of such exposure on children’s brain development and behavior appear relatively small."[7] and "Early suggestions that exposure invariably led to substantial deficits in multiple areas of functioning have been supplanted by reports indicating that the impact of exposure is subtle."[8]. For the alt hook (which I like less), here's a ref: "Cocaine is undoubtedly bad for the fetus. But experts say its effects are less severe than those of alcohol"[9]

Created by Delldot (talk). Self nom at 16:24, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Zekiah Swamp

Created by Dincher (talk). Self nom at 15:16, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

St Albans by-election, 1919

Created by BrownHairedGirl (talk). Nominated by BrownHairedGirl (talk) at 15:14, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comment. It's minor, but I'd prefer the 1919 bit in the piped link, either St Albans by-election in December 1919 or St Albans by-election of 1919. (I can't really justify why I prefer "of" to "in".) Si Trew (talk) 18:15, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No big deal either way, but: a) putting the date in the same link as the new article makes the date go bold, which to my mind distracts the eye from the key words "St Albans by-election"; b) "election of xxxx" is not a common usage. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:56, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I don't see that bolding the date detracts that much, and the fact that St Albans by-election is a DAB makes it a bit WP:EGGy to me without the date in the link, and although there's no specific mention of this in WP:LINKING#Link specificity, I feel that by having a specific link that masquerades as a more-general one, it goes against its grain. Perhaps I am over-pedantic in expecting links to do what they say regardless of the surrounding context.
As for the "of", I said I couldn't justify it but that's just the way that sounds most natural to me. Why not just go with the unpiped St Albans by-election, 1919 then (or is December that important)? Si Trew (talk) 12:42, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Creation date, length and ref OK (AGF of offline ref, The Times of 3 December 1919). Hook fine except for my minor concern above. Si Trew (talk) 12:47, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
You're right, the December is superfluous, and omitting that simplifies things. Revised hook below. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs)

Nasiriyah Drainage Pump Station

Created/self-nom by --NortyNort (Holla) 15:13, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bygdø Monolitten IL

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 11:46, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Veda Brown

Created by Ghmyrtle (talk). Self nom at 10:41, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

St George's Church, Little Thetford

Looking west through the trees at the east chancel gable in warm evening sunshine

Created by Senra (talk). Self nom at 10:26, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Can't we make it a little shorter and make the interesting fact that it was struck by lightning?:
That's still 214 characters with spaces though. How about dropping the repeat of the village:
ALT2: accepted, thank you. I also changed St George's church to St George's Church throughout --Senra (talk) 20:03, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Date, length, hook and reference verified. I've made a mistake here in that I just moved the article to church with a lower case C, reversing your intent. I'll have to get the redirect deleted and then move it back; sorry about that. I was unsure myself whether the convention was for Church should have caps; usually I would use "church" for a building but "Church" for the organisation, but since this is a specific building, I guess "Church" is correct. By the way, I think in the lead there's still one use with "church" not "Church". Si Trew (talk) 12:57, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
My understanding is that "St George's Church" is correct and I have attempted to keep it that way. See also St George's church, Little Thetford. I thus had the main article title "St George's Church" and a redirect to it from "St George's church" to cover both bases. I am relying on a large number of previous church DYK articles from Peter I. Vardy (talk · contribs) --Senra (talk) 13:14, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, I agree with all that. The redirect's been reversed (sorry about that) so everything's read to go here. You hadn't created the redirect I think, otherwise I would not have been able to move it by mistake. But it's all OK now. Si Trew (talk) 14:41, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. I guarantee the redirect was there, as I created it myself. Someone else moved it. In any case, I have taken the liberty of asking for move protection on the page now. By the way, I got the capitalisation wrong too to [start with]! --Senra (talk) 14:50, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Indonesia at the 2010 Summer Youth Olympics

Created by Arsonal (talk). Self nom at 09:23, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Job Brothers & Co., Limited

  • ... that Jobs' vessel, the Blue Peter, was the first floating, frozen-fish processing outfit in Newfoundland?

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 06:24, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Murray Wier

Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 06:02, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Mirbelia rubiifolia

purplish pink pea flowers

Created by Casliber (talk), Poyt448 (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 05:44, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


1972 European Cup Winners' Cup Final riots

Created by 90.200.240.178 (talk). Nominated by Sonia (talk) at 05:26, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ontario Highway 77

  • ... that the Comber Historical Society Museum, located on Ontario Highway 77, was established in the former Maple Grove schoolhouse, built in 1894?

Created by Floydian (talk). Self nom at 03:57, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Note: DYK check will incorrectly state this has not had 5x expansion in the past 5 days. At one point, many moons ago, this article had another few terribly written paragraphs of original research and speculation. It was removed long ago by someone other than I; the 5x expansion is based on the version that has existed since March of this year. - ʄɭoʏɗiaɲ τ ¢ 04:03, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1

Singer World Series

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 03:57, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Helen Gray Cone

Created by Chick Bowen (talk). Self nom at 03:36, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Cherrytree Sessions

5x expanded by Chasewc91 (talk). Nominated by Chasewc91 (talk) at 02:45, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 13

Dennis Brown (quarterback)

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 00:00, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William Owen Smith, William Ansel Kinney

  • Comment: William Ansel Kinney created August 14 and William Owen Smith August 13; I can work on single hooks if someone wants to complain about needed a single citation

Created by W Nowicki (talk). Nominated by W Nowicki (talk) at 18:22, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

New Ulyanovsk Bridge

Created by Jonkerz (talk). Self nom at 22:32, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Palazzo Chupi

Partial view of the Palazzo Chupi, a bright pink palazzo style structure, built on top of an older four story building

Created by AMuseo (AMuseo). Self nom at 16 August 2010 (UTC)

Ivan Ivančić

Created by GregorB (talk), Ghaly (talk). Self nom at 13:51, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Battle of Ratsua

Created by AustralianRupert (talk). Nominated by AustralianRupert (talk) at 11:14, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Simon of Southwell

Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 13:22, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tadahiro Matsushita

Created by Scapler (talk). Self nom at 10:28, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry about the confusion; I have added another citation to clarify, and with it, corrected the number as well. かんぱい! Scapler (talk) 18:52, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Verified. No problem, the reference itself was confusing itself. --NortyNort (Holla) 10:40, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Queen's Aid House

Photograph of the top three storeys of a black-and-white house, one bay wide, with ornamental panelling.

  • ... that the Queen's Aid House (pictured) has a plaque commemorating Elizabeth I's aid in rebuilding Nantwich after a fire, the only time she is known to have contributed to such a cause?

Created by Espresso Addict (talk). Self nom at 17:57, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Free City of Besançon

  • ... that Besançon got a regional Parlement from Louis XIV partly as compensation for losing its democratic government and claims to independence

Created by User:JASpencer (User_talk:JASpencer). Nominated by User:JASpencer (User_talk:JASpencer) at 17:55, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Typhoon Sudal

  • ... that although Typhoon Sudal was the strongest storm to hit the island of Yap in 50 years, there were no deaths or serious injuries?

Created by Hurricanehink (talk). Self nom at 12:22, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'm having trouble confirming the no "serious" injury part. The 90% figure is interesting as well, see ALT suggestion:
... that although Typhoon Sudal was the strongest storm to hit the island of Yap in 50 years, destroying 90% of property, there were no deaths? --NortyNort (Holla) 10:15, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
... that although Typhoon Sudal was the strongest storm to hit the island of Yap in 50 years, damaging or destroying 90% of property, there were no deaths?

The 90% figure is for destroyed or damaged, but I'm happy with that DYK. Hurricanehink (talk) 11:56, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Verified. --NortyNort (Holla) 10:42, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Software archaeology

5x expanded by Radagast3 (talk). Self nom at 01:47, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Expansion in response to an AfD, which is still outstanding, but likely to result has resulted in a speedy keep. The original article was created 11 August, so it could also be called a new article. -- Radagast3 (talk) 09:44, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! I've added a ref [2] backing up that point. -- Radagast3 (talk) 22:10, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

HMS Salsette (1805)

Created by Acad Ronin (talk). Self nom at 01:15, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date, length OK. Offline hook ref AGF. However, I would rephrase this for clarity:
ALT1: ... that the Mr. Ekenhead in the second canto of Don Juan was a lieutenant of the HMS Salsette marines who swam the Hellespont with Lord Byron on 3 May 1810? Yoninah (talk) 20:44, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2: ... that the Mr. Ekenhead in the second canto of Don Juan (Byron), who swam the Hellespont with Lord Byron on 3 May 1810, was a lieutenant of the HMS Salsette's marines? Acad Ronin (talk) 19:18, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Christian Gobrecht

5x expanded by Wehwalt (talk), Connormah (talk). Self nom at 00:38, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Straw Millionaire

Created by Axem Titanium (talk). Self nom at 00:01, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The CNET article says (using Google Translate) "This project, which he played with childhood friends originally, "Straw Millionaire", but what began as a network version of the game, but now he has become a core business of this." Axem Titanium (talk) 11:59, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • An alternative DYK blurb could be
ALT1 ... that the Japanese legend of the Straw Millionaire depicts a peasant who becomes rich through a series of trades starting with a piece of straw? Axem Titanium (talk) 17:17, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Santa Clara County Federal Credit Union

Created by QwerpQwertus (talk). Nominated by QwerpQwertus (talk) at 23:55, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Note: If you find evaluate or comment on this, please leave me a message telling me - I will not be able to load this page to check because my laptop is broken and I'm using my ancient desktop computer and trying to load this page crashes the program. Thanks!

Marianne Espinosa

Created by Neutron (talk), Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 22:21, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

FC Barcelona Museum

  • ... that the FC Barcelona Museum attracts 1.2 million yearly visitors, making it the second most visited museum in Barcelona, only surpassed by the Museu Picasso?

5x expanded by User:Sandman888 (talk). Nominated by User:Sandman888 (talk) at 21:44, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've changed it from "1,2 million" to "1.2 million" per WP:MOSNUM#Decimal points. Si Trew (talk) 18:30, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
thanks. Should it be "second-most"? Feel free to verify hook while you're at it :) Sandman888 (talk) Latest FAC 18:36, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've reworded that sentence, and made a few other minor copy editing changes, with [this edit].
Hook length, ref, 5x expansion and expansion dates verified, but at 1198 characters readable prose size (as reported by DYKCheck) it's too short. Si Trew (talk) 19:01, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, forgot about that criteria. It's expanded. It should be 1655 now. Sandman888 (talk) Latest FAC 23:13, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Length verified (1633 at last count), everything else OK as above, good to go. Si Trew (talk) 14:49, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Human herpesvirus 7

Expansion diff.

Hook isn't that good, I know, and I apologize. If anyone can suggest a better one, that would be appreciated. NW (Talk) 20:49, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by NuclearWarfare (talk). Nominated by NuclearWarfare (talk) at 20:48, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've verified the expansion, but would this be better? Smartse (talk) 23:53, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Can Mr. Smith Get to Washington Anymore?

Created by Nomader (talk). Self nom at 20:33, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

St Albans by-election, 1943

Created by BrownHairedGirl (talk). Nominated by BrownHairedGirl (talk) at 19:52, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I believe BrownHairedGirl is on a wikibreak and indeed a real-life break, so I have taken the liberty to amend the hook to make the pipe less misleading (i.e. to include the date in the displayed link and not make it appear like a link to the DAB page St Albans by-election), as was agreed for #St Albans by-election, 1919, and in doing so losing the "October". (Incidentally these two minor changes together mean we don't get two DYKs for apparently the same subject.)

Johnny B. Moore

Created by Derek R Bullamore (talk). Self nom at 18:50, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Roberto Cantoral

ALT1 ... that Roberto Cantoral donated the proceeds from "Pobre navidad" to worldwide children institutions such as UNICEF and his song, "Plegaria de paz" was broadcast "three consecutive years at the Vatican"?
ALT2 ... that Roberto Cantoral won the Latin Grammy Trustee Award and received medals of merit from Adolfo López Mateos and Tito?

Roy Carrier

Created by Arakunem (talk). Self nom at 17:46, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The article links "la la" and "frottoir". They could be linked in the hook, but then readers might not go to the main article, which is rather the point. If the hook is too whimsical I've got a couple others that would work. ArakunemTalk 17:49, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- linked la la and frottoir. Dincher (talk) 21:15, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed one link. ArakunemTalk 23:53, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Britain's Economy: Cameron and Clegg Face the Audience

Created by TheRetroGuy (talk). Nominated by TheRetroGuy (talk) at 13:51, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ida Siekmann

Created by HerkusMonte (talk). Self nom at 13:48, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ex parte Crow Dog

a photograph of Chief Crow Dog standing holding a rifle, with his horse

Created/expanded by GregJackP (talk). Self nom at 12:46, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Length, date, and sources check out (checking offline source against an online version. I've taken the liberty of unpiping the Supreme Court link and fixing a typo. -- Radagast3 (talk) 00:09, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


William Carlile

Created by BrownHairedGirl (talk). Nominated by BrownHairedGirl (talk) at 12:38, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ivar Eskeland

  • ... that Ivar Eskeland was accomplished as a philologist, publisher, translator, biographer, literary critic, newspaper editor, theatre worker, radio personality and organizational leader?
  • Comment: Sheer breadth of his accomplishments astounded me, though most have to do with philology.

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 11:23, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Putnam County Courthouse (Ohio)

A square grey stone building

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 03:48, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Saint Meinhard

Ancient stone and red brick walls are protected by a modern roof from rain and further deterioration. Two Gothic arches are well-preserved. The Daugava River is visible in the background.

  • ... that the first stone building (pictured) in Latvia was a church and a fortress of Ikšķile built by missionary Saint Meinhard in 1185–1186?

Created by Renata3 (talk). Self nom at 03:29, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Prince Gabriel of Thurn and Taxis

Created by Caponer (talk). Self nom at 03:17, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

San Giovanni del Toro

Picture of Chiesa di San Giovanni del Toro, a church with a small round tower capped by a dome, mostly painted white with rounded windows showing moorish influence

Created/expanded by Drmies (talk). Nominated by Drmies (talk) at 02:52, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date and length check out. I'm prepared to AGF on the hook citation, but not for the above hook, which suggests that it inspired all the artist's drawings. Also fixing a spelling error, I suggest one of:
ALT1: ... that the 11th-century church of San Giovanni del Toro (pictured) in Ravello, Italy, has a pulpit with Arabic script and motifs which inspired geometric drawings by M.C. Escher?
ALT2: ... that the 11th-century church of San Giovanni del Toro (pictured) in Ravello, Italy, has a pulpit with Arabic script and motifs which influenced the geometric drawings of M.C. Escher?
ALT3: ... that the 11th-century church of San Giovanni del Toro (pictured) in Ravello, Italy, has a pulpit with Arabic script and motifs which influenced the Dutch artist M.C. Escher?
Personally, I prefer ALT3. -- Radagast3 (talk) 06:27, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sure, ALT3 is fine. Thanks! —Preceding unsigned comment added by Drmies (talkcontribs) 12:07, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Replacing the hook with ALT3 then, and calling it good to go. -- Radagast3 (talk) 21:40, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I changed 'which' to 'that'. Mikenorton (talk) 14:15, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Charlton Athletic F.C. 7–6 Huddersfield Town F.C.

Created by Testing times (talk). Self nom at 19:30, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article looks generally OK, but it lacks inline citations. Also, the hook doesn't technically make sense; a team was 5-1 down but then scored six goals and the score was 7-6? I know what happened, but maybe it needs to be clarified. BigDom 19:34, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Before someone tells me that there is no inline citation, this remarkable turn-around is mentioned in all of the five of the listed references. Feel free to pick one if you feel compelled to tick the relevant box. [Oh, too late.] Yes, Huddersfield scored one too, but I doubt I could fit a full match report in the limited numbers of characters avai... -- Testing times (talk) 19:41, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Russia–Zambia relations

Photo of the Russian embassy in Lusaka, Zambia

5x expanded by Russavia (talk). Nominated by Russavia (talk) at 01:40, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


MV Geysir

MV Geysir loading containers in 2009

Created by Haus (talk). Self nom at 01:24, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Minor ce comment -- you may want to change one instance of "involved" to another word.--Epeefleche (talk) 03:25, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Nice catch, fixed. HausTalk 03:44, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 12

Jobar, Jobar Synagogue

Created by User:Chesdovi (talk). Self nom at 11:06, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Box and Cox

Created by Ssilvers (talk), Tim riley (talk). Nominated by Ssilvers (talk) at 18:58, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

H. P. Lovecraft (album)

Created by Kohoutek1138 (talk). Self nom at 17:54, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'd suggest a bit of copy-editing to either hook - to avoid the triple use of the name in the first hook, and the tautology ("wide range of.. variety") in the second. How about:
ALT2:... that the eponymous first album by the psychedelic rock band H. P. Lovecraft includes the song "The White Ship", directly inspired by a short story by the writer from whom the group took their name? Ghmyrtle (talk) 07:27, 16 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Tsk, tsk...piped links to self-titled album articles. Have you read the Manual of Style for music, sir! ;-) Seriously though, I was aware that this needed a bit of copyediting but couldn't figure out a way to improve it without piping the links, which I normally try to avoid. I hoped that someone would come along and improve upon this hook as you have. I'm more than happy to go with this revised hook. --Kohoutek1138 (talk) 10:12, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Umm, no, I probably haven't read that MOS. After starting 200+ music-related articles, is it too late for me now? But, seriously, if the DYK crowd have a problem with the hook wording, I'll happily discuss it - I was just trying to come up with a form of words that avoided the dupli-/triplication of the words. ;-) Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:28, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ollie Carnegie

Created by Halvorsen brian (talk). Self nom at 01:13, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Uganda Development Corporation

Created by Jarry1250 (talk). Self nom at 11:26, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sir Robert Ainslie, 1st Baronet

commissioned his own friend Luigi Mayer to draw pictures of places in the Ottoman Empire for his collection? ? 5x expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 09:28, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Titan's Goblet

In a conventional landscape setting sits a very large stone goblet with vegetation and two buildings on its brim and its water forming a lake.

1833 landscape painting by Thomas Cole, "defies full explanation" according to the museum that owns it?

Created/expanded by Riggr Mortis (talk). Nominated by Riggr Mortis (talk) at 07:18, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Richard Atwood Glass

Created by Motmit (talk). Self nom at 19:18, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kickapoo Joy Juice

Created by Arbitrarily0 (talk). Self nom at 17:28, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Freemasons Tavern, Hove

A white building with a two-storey framed façade in the form of a blue and gold mosaic, with Masonic symbols and gold lettering

Created by Hassocks5489 (talk). Self nom at 12:01, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Ludwig von Wurmb

A black-and-white photo of an oil painting. In this half-height portrait, Von Wurmb is wearing the uniform of the Hessian jäger corps. A medal hangs on a ribbon around his neck.

Created by Magicpiano (talk). Self nom at 02:13, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


George Goodman (MP)

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 02:08, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Frederick William Verney

Created by BrownHairedGirl (talk). Nominated by BrownHairedGirl (talk) at 01:19, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Shield nickel, James Barton Longacre

  • ... that James B. Longacre's design for the Shield nickel (pictured) symbolizes the strength of the federal government through the unity of the states?

5x expanded by Wehwalt (talk). Self nom at 01:09, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Organelle biogenesis

Created by Tyrol5 (talk). Self nom at 22:17, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pure blood theory in Korea

Created by Winstonlighter (talk). Nominated by Derild4921 (talk) at 18:36, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The 'Immigrants' Impact on "Purity"' section is empty save for a 'working' template. This article cannot be resolved until the empty section is either completed or removed. - Dravecky (talk) 06:09, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Philip Hayes (general)

Created by Nsk92 (talk). Self nom at 17:34, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Great Comet of 1264 and Great Comet of 1556

Great comet of 1264

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 16:41, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Hang Nga guesthouse

Tree-shaped house

5x expanded by Dragfyre (talk). Self nom at 16:40, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Great pic, great place (been there). I could go either way on whether we need to include "variously".--Epeefleche (talk) 17:18, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Prince George of Prussia

Created by Ruby2010 (talk). Self nom at 14:50, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Arthur Black (Liberal politician)

Created by BrownHairedGirl (talk). Nominated by BrownHairedGirl (talk) at 14:23, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Oluf Falck-Ytter

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 13:35, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Holy Trinity Church, Coverham

A stone church seen from the south through a graveyard, with a castellated tower to the left, and the nave and chancel stretching to the right

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 12:56, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George P. MacNichol House, Ford-Bacon House

Ford-Bacon House

Created by Andrew Jameson (talk). Nominated by Andrew Jameson (talk) at 10:43, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Refs, hooks, date, length all check out. Had a slight doubt the Bacon Library ref might be considered WP:PRIMARY. Si Trew (talk) 07:42, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Palila v. Hawaii Department of Land and Natural Resources

Created by Resident Mario (talk). Nominated by Resident Mario (talk) at 03:27, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Note: If the name is too long, i think shortening it to Palila v. Hawaii would be acceptable. The article is based mostly on a pay-per-view JSTOR article, I can send it to the nominator if needed. ResMar 03:27, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've shortened it. ResMar 03:09, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
RlevseTalk 19:12, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 11

Medina Armory

A large brown stone building with castle-like towers and a pointed roof with stepped features on the end. Hanging from its right side is a banner that says "Lake Plains YMCA"

  • ... that the Medina, New York, armory (pictured) was the first one designed by George Heins as New York's state architect?
  • Comment: Fivefold text expansion

5x expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Nominated by Daniel Case (talk) at 17:29, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • 5x expansion verified. Date, length OK. However, I don't understand why the hook says "New York" twice; it doesn't seem necessary. How about:
ALT1: ... that the Medina Armory (pictured) was the first one designed by George Heins as New York State Architect? Yoninah (talk) 09:07, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Well, if we don't say "Medina, New York", no one will know which Medina we're talking about. So ...
ALT2: that the Medina, New York, armory (pictured) was the first one designed by new state architect George Heins? Daniel Case (talk) 13:38, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Neoclassical architecture in Poland

5x expanded by BurgererSF (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 20:18, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • There are major portions of this article without citations and the hook is not clearly reflected in the reference. Cit #1 details neo-classic literature in Poland which seems to be centered in Warsaw. However, I just see references in the article to theaters and book stores that supported this literary period. --NortyNort (Holla) 01:36, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment: If these issues can be overcome, it is perhaps worth looking for a more interesting hook as well. Warsaw is the capital city, why is it surprising that it would be a center of architecture? (Consider how interesting and "hooky" it wouldn't be if the terms used were classical, Greece, and Athens, for example.) --Demiurge1000 (talk) 03:44, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I see what you mean, NortyNort. I don't think I can provide much help due to ignorance of the subject (I posted the DYK on behalf of Piotrus, under an arrangement approved by ArbCom). I've asked the article's author, BurgererSF, if she/he can help. — Malik Shabazz Talk/Stalk 21:32, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I've made some changes in the references. Warsaw was not officially designated capital until 1793 and the concept of a single capital city was inapplicable in the decentralized Polish–Lithuanian Commonwealth. BurgererSF (talk) 16:42, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tarebia granifera

turbinid like shell with light brown body whorl and dark brown spire

5x expanded by Snek01 (talk). Nominated by Snek01 (talk) at 21:43, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Using CC-BY content is not against DYK hook criteria. So evaluate: 1) date, 2) article length, 3) DYK hook sentence. Thanks. --Snek01 (talk) 15:17, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I dont see where it says CC-BYThelmadatter (talk) 00:55, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In the article: Reference section. In the wikipedia: Zoologische Mededelingen article. In the internet: journal website http://www.zoologischemededelingen.nl/ --Snek01 (talk) 10:02, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Im not comfortable passing this, although its legal. Let's let someone else do it.Thelmadatter (talk) 17:14, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Marinens Flyvebaatfabrikk M.F.2

Created by Oceanh (talk), Manxruler (talk). Self nom at 12:04, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: I notice the nomination for a DYK for Marinens Flyvebaatfabrikk M.F.1 has just been ticked, so I wonder if it's really necessary to have another one for this very similar aircraft, so soon? In any case, is the hook that interesting? Presumably every producer of military aircraft had a first aircraft that carried a particular sort of weapon. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 06:19, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I understand that somebody will find certain hooks less interesting. But not the supporting rationale, as similar logic applies to even the most notable "firsts". (... that G. Washington was the first U.S. President? - naa.. presumably every republic had a first leader) (... that Armstrong was the first man to step on the moon? - naa.. presumably every visited object in space had a first visitor). Oceanh (talk) 19:19, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jacksonville Historical Society

Old St. Andrews Church

Created by Mgreason (talk). Self nom at 02:19, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Terry Byrne

Created by ShesNumber17 (talk). Expanded & nominated by Fayenatic london (talk) at 23:12, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I wikilink'd "pitch", a term I did not know until last week. With that, did he escort him to the locker room or off the pitch? If he escorted him off the pitch, I would assume he was on the field. --NortyNort (Holla) 01:24, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thanks for that. Byrne would have been by but not on the pitch, so I've changed it to "to the changing room" as that is what is stated "famously" in one of the citations. Alt 1:

Tang Rimochen Lhakhang

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 09:54, 12 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hook is sourced to the book I have right in front of me. Dr. Blofeld 09:55, 12 August 2010 (Utc)

The picture you added is gone just to say if you didnt noticed. Spongie555 (talk) 05:56, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I am aware of it. Deletion was due to a license issue.-- N.V.V. Char Talk . 15:02, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Berman's Bakery

Created by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 20:20, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, this fact is in one of the sources. I added another inline citation to the lead. Yoninah (talk) 19:16, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Still only the company's website cited after the sentence in question. The first in the lead, you dont mention it anywhere else.Thelmadatter (talk) 17:13, 20 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, I don't understand what you're asking me. The fact that the bakery is Israel's "second-largest" is the first sentence in the lead and is backed up by an independent source (cited by footnote #1). Are you referring to the fact that by 1920, Berman's was the largest bakery in the Middle East? Since Angel's only opened in 1927, this makes perfect sense, but since this fact comes from the company's own website, I deleted it. Is everything OK now? Yoninah (talk) 20:22, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


- ready for DYK. Dincher (talk) 18:37, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Parrot Corporation Limited

Created by Mulletsrokkify (talk). Self nom at 19:49, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The hook is too long, at the moment ... suggest a shave.--Epeefleche (talk) 02:58, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Shortened the hook, it was a bit long!! Thanks. --Mulletsrokkify (talk) 21:42, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
WP:NCCORP states as a convention that "The legal status suffix of a company (such as Inc., plc or LLC, or those provided for companies in other languages such as GMbH, AG, or S.A.) is not normally included in the article title". This the article should be moved to Parrot Corporation and the hook amended accordingly. Indeed, by the same principle it should probably be at Parrot (British company) and lose the Corporation (Parrot (company) being already taken), but that might be a bit pointless in this case when "Corporation" is part of its name.
I notice also the hook says "... was the first attempt a fully indigenous ...". Presumably "first attempt as" or some such, but I'm not entirely happy with that either. The sentence where this is stated, "Set up in 1983..." (first sentence in History), is not a full sentence (needs to start "Parrot was set up in 1983..."). While I can make all these changes myself, I think they need consensus really, and although TDYK is probably not the best place to discuss them, I'll note them here in the first instance. Si Trew (talk) 08:10, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with all of your statements and have made the necessary edits to the article. I have changed the hook to reflect the changes. --mulletsrokkify 18:19, 19 August 2010 (UTC)

Family 1739

5x expanded by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nom at 13:46, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Jeremy Bamber

photograph

  • ... that of 38 prisoners in the UK the Home Secretary has said will never be released, Jeremy Bamber—convicted in 1986 of murdering his family in White House Farm (pictured)—is the only one known to protest his innocence?

5 x expanded by SlimVirgin. Self nom at 04:55, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: For anyone checking this, the source is Smith, David James. "And by dawn they were all dead", The Sunday Times Magazine, 11 July 2010, p. 18 of the magazine, p. 3 of the article. Smith writes: "Bamber is unique. He is one of only 38 convicted killers in the country who have been given a whole-life tariff, which means they will never be released ... So far as I can ascertain, he is the only one of the 38 who claims to be innocent." SlimVirgin talk|contribs 05:08, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- ready. Dincher (talk) 13:49, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
even if you don't count "(pictured)" this is over the 200-character length. I noticed it when I was about to move it to prep queue.RlevseTalk 18:58, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Would this do instead (196 characters in edit mode)?

  • ... that the only life-tariff prisoner in the UK protesting his innocence is Jeremy Bamber—jailed for five murders in White House Farm (pictured)?

SlimVirgin talk|contribs 19:37, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

sure. RlevseTalk 20:03, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. SlimVirgin talk|contribs 20:21, 21 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Paulding County Courthouse (Ohio)

A brick Romanesque Revival courthouse highlighted against a deep blue sky

5x expanded by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 03:21, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Special occasion holding area

Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools' Day 2011 - see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.

For 31 October, Hallowe'en

Seven Gates of Hell

Created by Editorofthewiki (talk). Nominated by Editorofthewiki (talk) at 18:43, 18 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • There is a successful AFD record on the talk page from 2005. The AFD says basically unsourced so delete, which is fair. Can someone corroborate the subscription only refs? Why is the AFD record there? Victuallers (talk) 13:55, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Voorleser

Created by Theornamentalist (talk). Nominated by Theornamentalist (talk) at 03:34, 2 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I don't know if Hallowe'en has similar misleading links like April Fool's Day does, so ignore me if inappropriate please. Si Trew (talk) 18:52, 10 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I support Simon's ALT2 - Theornamentalist (talk) 00:17, 11 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
For Halloween you can put it below in the special occasion area. This would also be great for April fool's too. Nevertheless, the original hook checks out but I won't put a tick mark until you move it, unless you don't.--NortyNort (Holla) 00:27, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Duly done, I've unbolded ALT1 (I didn't realise that the bolding on "ALT" suggestions was to show current preference). Si Trew (talk) 03:11, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'm wondering whether "Funeral" could be piped as "pray for their deaths", although it would have to come before "dress up the dead" and the two together might chime a bit. The ALT2 hook length is OK (about 175 characters) but this might push it over. Si Trew (talk) 03:17, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Yea, dressing up the dead is more of an undertaker kind of job. Maybe "bless the dead".--NortyNort (Holla) 07:12, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I was trying to make misleading pipes that painted them as rather ghoulish, and "bless the dead" doesn't really fit that. Si Trew (talk) 19:05, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I was tempted to find a scary looking picture of a Voorleser, but I couldn't find anything at all actually. - Theornamentalist (talk) 06:43, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
How about "send off the dead"? A picture would be nice, the name is creepy as it is. --NortyNort (Holla) 10:59, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
... that the powerful Voorleser would hold babies' heads under water, stuff children's brains, tie their parents together, dress up the dead, tell tales about them and prepare a place for them in the underworld? - Theornamentalist (talk) 15:39, 17 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

For January 1, 2011, Seal of the Federal Bureau of Investigation

Expanded and self-nominated by ChrisO (talk) 20:50, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This nomination is a bit of a special case. I originally nominated Seal of the Federal Bureau of Investigation on August 3 following a 5x expansion (see discussion above under #Articles created/expanded on August 3). Everyone accepted that it met the DYK criteria but the nomination was derailed by a political dispute over timing. I've put forward a compromise at User talk:Jimbo Wales#Compromise proposal, which involves passing this DYK now but scheduling its appearance on January 1, 2011, which is 60 years to the day since the seal was first used. This proposal has been generally welcomed so I'm putting it forward here for formal consideration. I'm aware that the timeframe is somewhat longer than would be usual for scheduled DYKs, but in the circumstances I think a some flexibility would be justified. I've put forward two possible hooks: the original one as proposed earlier, and a new alternative tying the DYK in more directly with the date. -- ChrisO (talk) 20:50, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Interesting compromise. It completely flipped my opinion of the matter. However, prior to providing said opinion, I'd like some clarification: Are we nominating this (with whichever hook) sans image as you initially suggested on Jimbo's talk page?
    --K10wnsta (talk) 00:39, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Appended: I see that you removed the image from inclusion in the original nomination, so I'll assume this post-dated nomination would not include the image either. However, this necessitates further clarification:
Are we excluding the image from this DYK solely because of the recent interaction with the FBI?
--K10wnsta (talk) 01:05, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In effect yes, but in my view it's a necessary evil if we're to reach a satisfactory compromise on this issue. -- ChrisO (talk) 01:16, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • - Tentative Even if the motivation behind qualifying this article for DYK was questionable, I think you already achieved not just a satisfactory compromise, but a completely valid and justifiable use for it. In fact, it's use is so valid, refusing to use the image for no other reason than the recent hoobajoo with the FBI is blatantly (chilled) censorship...and I just can't get behind that. If we're going to censor it, we need to go whole hog or don't go at all.
    Could we put it up for 'On This Day' to avoid reasoning for exclusion of the image?
    --K10wnsta (talk) 01:51, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • No opinion on whether to feature on the future date; however, it would be better if this hook didn't remain on the suggestions page for the intervening months, as it is bound to attract further discussion and the page is unwieldy enough as it is. Espresso Addict (talk) 01:55, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Espresso's suggestion may be useful for more than just making this page leaner. A delay in nomination would lend to better perspective for those establishing consensus. In other words, removing it from discussion for a couple months would also put some time between recent events and the article (and hopefully image) being contemplated for a main page feature (unless such a delay would disqualify it from use in DYK section).
--K10wnsta (talk) 02:12, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Comment This hook should not "disappear" for a few months. It is far better to leave it here to enable a wide input from editors on the issue. I think this is a good compromise that involves common sense, the proposal and special treatment of the timescale fitting nicely under WP:IAR. Mjroots (talk) 13:53, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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