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====Onneca Fortúnez====
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{{*mp}}... that the Muslim caliph of Córdoba [[Abd-ar-Rahman III]] and the Christian king of Pamplona [[García Sánchez I of Pamplona|García Sánchez I]], who were [[Battle of Simancas|at war]] during the Spanish [[Reconquista]], were both grandsons of '''[[Onneca Fortúnez]]'''?
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====Cat house (Riga)====
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Candidate entries

Articles created/expanded on September 7

George Catleugh

Created by WFCforLife (talk). Self nom at 01:31, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Alex Caceres

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 00:32, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on September 6

Shigeki Osawa

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 23:36, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Michael Johnson (fighter)

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 23:30, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Aaron Wilkinson

  • ... that due to his pale complexion and resemblance to a character from the Blade films, Aaron Wilkinson's coaches nicknamed him The Daywalker?

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 23:27, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Banglabandha

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 23:13, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Château Raymond-Lafon

Created by Murgh (talk). Self nom at 23:02, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Witch of Pungo

5x expanded by Rlevse (talk). Self nom at 20:42, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Douglas of Mains

Created by Wikiwayman (talk). Self nom at 20:23, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The World of Strawberry Shortcake

5x expanded by Slgrandson (talk). Nominated by Slgrandson (talk) at 20:15, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Mitford Castle

5x expanded by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 19:41, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Cocktail Hour

Created by MelanieN (talk). Self nom at 19:38, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Leon Belasco

Created by Jack1956 (talk). Nominated by Jack1956 (talk) at 19:21, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ibacus peronii

Illustration of a slipper lobster, seen from above.

5x expanded by Stemonitis (talk). Nominated by Stemonitis (talk) at 18:52, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Bangladesh-Nepal relations

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 18:51, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Henri Gascar

5x expanded by Shadygrove2007 (talk). Self nom at 17:25, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


HMS Tirfing (1866)

  • ... that the Swedish monitor HMS Tirfing only made a single overseas voyage, when she visited the ports of Helsingfors, later known as Helsinki, and Kronstadt in August 1867, during her career?

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 17:24, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Colonia Guerrero, Mexico City

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 17:22, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Bravo

Created by Sadads (talk). Self nom at 16:57, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Christine Berrie

Created by Kindzmarauli (talk). Self-nom at 16:45, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Inland Customs Line

A thin, stick-like plant with green, oval leaves.

  • ALT1:... that the Inland Customs Line stretched across more than 2,500 miles (4,000 km) of British India and in parts was made from an Indian Plum hedge (pictured) 12 feet (3.7 m) high and 14 feet (4.3 m) thick?
  • Comment: Quite complicated this one. The original article was at Great Hedge of India, I rewrote it in userspace and moved it to Inland Customs Line and made the Great Hedge page a redirect. You should be able to find the previous article in the history of that page. Please feel free to run this without the picture if you want, to use a different picture or to suggest more alternative hooks (there's plenty of interesting things about this barrier!).

5x expanded by Dumelow (talk). Self nom at 16:29, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Nannygate

  • ... that during the Nannygate political controversy of 1993, Americans asked each other if they too had a certain kind of problem?

Created by Wasted Time R (talk). Self nom at 16:25, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

[Note: there was previously a disambiguation page at this location. I have moved to that to Nannygate (disambiguation), as the 1993 matter, which did not previously have an article devoted to it, is clearly the WP:PRIMARYTOPIC. Wasted Time R (talk) 16:25, 6 September 2010 (UTC)][reply]
  • This hook is a little misleading. "Once the Nannygate matter broke into the news, the question "Do you have a Zoë Baird problem?" became frequently asked by Americans of each other in casual conversation, with many answers being in the affirmative." is the best quote from the article supporting the hook. Its not really "each other" and the problem is explictly stated as a "Zoë Baird problem." I would recommend:

ALT 1 ... that during the Nannygate political controversy of 1993, Americans were asked if they had a "Zoë Baird problem."? Thelmadatter (talk) 17:31, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I thought about that originally, but I was trying to tease the reader a bit more with the hook! I also wanted to avoid a Zoë Baird link inside a quotation, which is generally bad form per WP:LINK. And I am not sure why you think "each other" is not appropriate, since that is what was happening. Your phrasing of "Americans were asked ..." makes it sound like the government or a polling firm or some other institution like that was doing the asking, which is not the case. Wasted Time R (talk) 00:35, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


2010 Lamar Hunt U.S. Open Cup Final

5x expanded by Skotywa (talk). Self nom at 15:42, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Colony (restaurant)

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 15:00, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Duerosuchus

Created by Smokeybjb (talk). Nominated by Smokeybjb (talk) at 13:19, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Operation Musketoon

5 times expansion and Self nom by --Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:15, 6 September 2010 (UTC) [reply]


Scoresby Sund

Iceberg in the Scoresby Sund

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 08:19, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]



Aboyne Castle

  • ... that the location of Aboyne Castle was selected for its strategic position near the Dee and controlling the northern end of one of the Mounth crossings?

5x expanded by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 05:18, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

2004 British Open (snooker)

Created by Christopher Connor (talk). Self nom at 04:24, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tamora, Nebraska

Created by Ammodramus (talk). Nominated by Nyttend (talk) at 03:37, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Satch Davidson

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 03:21, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Mukerjee (talk). Self nom at 01:09, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

note: the article "Vaishnava padavali" is also new and meets DYK criteria. should we have both in bold? however, the hook is referenced only in Govindadasa. --mukerjee (talk) 01:09, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on September 5

Tanners' Bridge

  • ... that the Tanners' Bridge on the Lanë brook served from the 18th century to the 1930s when Lanë's course was changed?

Created by Vinie007 (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 23:50, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1971–72 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 23:01, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1970–71 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 22:57, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1968–69 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 22:51, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1969–70 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 22:52, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Södermanland Runic Inscription Fv1948;295

Created by Deanlaw (talk). Self nom at 22:03, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fred Preaus

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 13:11, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Eureka Masonic College

5x expanded by Orlady (talk). Nominated by Orlady (talk) at 03:59, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Duel at Lake Merced

Drawing of the duel between David C. Broderick and David S. Terry

Created by Mbz1 (talk). Self nom at 23:59, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Saying it's the 'last notable duel' seems too subjective. The fact that it was a duel between a US Senator and the Chief Justice of a state Supreme Court is interesting enough. DS (talk) 02:20, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Well, it is an exact quote from a public domain article I used as one of the sources. The name of the article is Famous American Duels and this duel is described on page 615 as "the last notable American duel".--Mbz1 (talk) 06:45, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with DS here. "The last notable duel" is a subjective statement - for a strong statement like that the opinion of a single source is not sufficient, there would need to be evidence of a considerable number of sources expressing the same opinion. It is better to use a more factual hook, like ALT1 here. Nsk92 (talk) 07:08, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Please feel free to promote ALT 1. Thanks all for the interest to the article.--Mbz1 (talk) 15:28, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Greenland Sea, West Ice

Iceberg in the Greenland Sea

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 23:56, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Wow I'm impressed at your work on CORE articles on here. If anybody has an idea of what articles should be expanded asap it is you. Dr. Blofeld 17:04, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kitwana Jones

A black man with dreadlocks wearing a green jersey with the number 26 in white.

  • Comment: I did 5X expansion using prose size (125 words --> 628)

5x expanded by Canada Hky (talk). Self nom at 23:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]



HMS John Ericsson

A low-freeboard monitor with a single turret forward and funnel amidships. Her deck is crowded with people

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 23:13, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


King of the Ring (1996)

5x expanded by Richard "Wrestler" Lopez (talk). Nominated by GaryColemanFan (talk) at 21:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Vinyl Conflict

Created by CrowzRSA (talk). Nominated by CrowzRSA (talk) at 19:54, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Economy of England in the Middle Ages

A worn silver penny with the face of a medieval king just visible in the centre.

Created by Hchc2009 (talk). Nominated by Hchc2009 (talk) at 19:54, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Longitudinal Video Recording

Created by Yorkshiresky (talk). Nominated by Yorkshiresky (talk). at 19:26, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Amankila

Created by Rosiestep (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 17:40, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Clyde Refinery

Created by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 17:35, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article says it is the "longest operating oil refinery in Australia" but doesn't mention that it is the oldest refinery. I've added oil to the hook to make it clear that this is an oil refinery. Smartse (talk) 16:25, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The Reuters ref states ... at the 82-year-old refinery -- Australia's oldest-- in the past 12 months doesn't it? BineMai 16:46, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1983–84 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 17:23, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Paper clothing

Created by Sandstein (talk). Nominated by Sandstein (talk) at 17:16, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William Piers (constable)

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 17:12, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1980–81 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 15:16, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1979–80 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 15:16, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

SMS Braunschweig

A large, light gray warship bristling with guns sits just offshore; dense black smoke drifts from its three tall funnels.

5x expanded by Parsecboy (talk). Self nom at 15:05, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Amanjiwo

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 13:48, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of music concerts at the Millennium Stadium

Created by Seth Whales (talk). Self nom at 11:26, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Heyrowsky in uniform

5x expanded by Fridae'sDoom (talk). Self nom at 10:42, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It's actually smaller in size than in April, plus it says he was an Oberst in WWII, not a Hauptmann.RlevseTalk 21:08, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The refs were listed multiple times without ref names so I merged the refs. Ah rank anomalies noted and fixed. Internal links that were dead were removed, I just cleaned it up.

Alt 1:

Ғяіᴆaз'§Đøøм | Champagne? 02:48, 6 September 2010 (UTC) - it is not new .... it isnt eligable for DYK. Articles have to substantially less than 5 days old Victuallers (talk) 15:48, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, but even using DYKcheck tool, the readable prose only went up 30k or so, a fraction of 1X, far from 5x. Rank anomaly still exists in hook too. RlevseTalk 20:56, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dabar Bridge

Created by Tomobe03 (talk). Self nom at 10:32, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Portrait of King Louis I of Hungary and Poland wearing the "Hungarian Crown"

Created by BurgererSF (talk) 10:19, 5 September 2010 (UTC). Nominated by BurgererSF (talk) 10:19, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Stephen Lekapenos and Constantine Lekapenos

Created by Dimadick (talk). Nominated by Cplakidas (talk) at 07:46, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1976–77 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:35, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1975–76 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:35, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1973–74 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:30, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


1974–75 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 07:30, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Frank C. Garland

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 05:38, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sartaj Aziz

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 05:02, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

A black and white baseball card featuring a man in a white baseball jersey and striped cap holding both hands out cupped in front of his chest.

5x expanded by Staxringold (talk). Nominated by Staxringold (talk) at 03:50, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article meets DYK standards for length and sourcing and the hook length is fine. The online source from the Sporting News and his obituary in The New York Times both say that fans tossed $160 in coins. At the time, everything other than pennies and nickels were silver, so I don't doubt that there were silver coins included, but the wording "fans threw silver coins" could mean any number of coins. Whatever metal they were made of, $160 worth is a lot of coins and I would suggest wording it as "fans threw $160 in coins", or some variation thereof. Some mention could also be made in the hook that he was the first player to accomplish the feat. Nice article and one that it is absolutely surprising never existed before. Alansohn (talk) 05:53, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Arthur Roy Mitchell

Created by Billy Hathorn (talk). Self nom at 03:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

ALT: ... that in 1959 the cowboy and western artist Arthur Roy Mitchell designed the centennial emblem for the 1859 Colorado gold rush?

Larry Ashmead

Jaime Cardinal Sin of the Philippines shown wearing a white cassock with a red belt and skullcap holding a microphone

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:08, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


2010 Pakistan cricket spot-fixing controversy

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 00:57, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment I have a separate nomination of spot-fixing waiting to be reviewed if you wanted to turn this into a double nom?

... that the Pakistani High Commissioner to Britain condemned the Int'l Cricket Council's suspension of the three Pakistani cricketers charged with spot-fixing in the 4th Pakistan-England Test?  Francium12  23:25, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sure - not a bad idea at all. :) Shiva (Visnu) 14:11, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on September 4

Minuscule 782 (Gregory-Aland)

  • ... that according to Minuscule 782 Jesus wrote sins of his opponents on the ground?

Created by Leszek Jańczuk (talk). Self nom at 00:22, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Charles Ives House

A two-story gray wooden house with light green shutters seen in winter, with snow on the ground. A long wing with two brick chimneys projects towards the left from a higher rear section. At lower right is a black mailbox with "5Ave" on it next to a clear paved driveway.

  • Comment: Fivefold text expansion. Hook fact is on p. 3 of source document

5x expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Nominated by Daniel Case (talk) at 08:04, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1962–63 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 08:00, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1960–61 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 08:00, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1958–59 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 08:00, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Marinens Flyvebaatfabrikk M.F.3

Created by Manxruler (talk). Self nom at 05:17, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George Hitchcock (poet)

Created by Bongomatic (talk), Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 01:14, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George Hrab

George Hrab speaking with fans during a break at The Amazing Meeting in London on October 3, 2009

  • ... that independent musician and podcaster George Hrab (pictured) has customized his album packaging with such things as a tin box in order to encourage his fans to purchase his music?

Created by Krelnik (talk). Nominated by Krelnik (talk) at 00:32, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Kulhar

Created by Hunnjazal (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 17:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Mairbek Taisumov

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 11:22, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Diplomatic uniform

Created by Sandstein (talk). Nominated by Sandstein (talk) at 07:23, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

OK for length, style references. Citations accepted on good faith.Shadygrove2007 (talk) 09:08, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

French Royal Army (1652-1830)

Created by DCI2026 (talk). Self nom at 00:30, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • As a protest here, because the article has absolutely nothing to say about the actual subject, but is a tour at breakneck speed of wars France was involved in, and the reasons for and results of them. Whether these wars were fought using poison-dart blowpipes or nuclear weapons, by men or by single-breasted women, will not be discovered from this article. Johnbod (talk) 03:38, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tyonajanegen

Created by Gobonobo (talk). Self nom at 23:00, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Not yet up to 1500 bytes of prose with the prose tool (only 1285 bytes now). Can it be expanded some? Ruhrfisch ><>°° 04:22, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yes. The length should be good now. Gobonobo T C 05:17, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Length, date and hook confirmed. Ruhrfisch ><>°° 19:16, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1965–66 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 21:41, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


B. Frank Heintzleman

5x expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 21:35, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Carrier Strike Group Three

An MH-60R Sea Hawk from the "Raptors" of Helicopter Maritime Strike Squadron (HSM) 71 performs a controlled carrier approach towards the Nimitz-class aircraft carrier USS John C. Stennis (CVN 74) during flight operations. Stennis and Carrier Air Wing (CVW) 9 are on a scheduled six-month deployment to the western Pacific Ocean.

Created by Marcd30319 (talk). Nominated by Marcd30319 (talk) at 21:03, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Parodia tenuicylindrica, Parodia arnostiana, Parodia buiningii

A green cactus with several yellow flowers on a black background.

Created by J Milburn (talk). Nominated by J Milburn (talk) at 21:00, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


1964–65 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

5x expanded by User:TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 20:58, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John Greenhill

  • ... that English portrait painter John Greenhill died, aged only 32, after being found in the gutter following a drinking session at the Vine Tavern in London?

Created by Shadygrove2007 (talk). Self nom at 20:42, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

 Done The article is transcribed and edited from Dictionary of National Biography - I have added a template just to clarify. All apparently "unsourced" statements are in the DNB reference. Shadygrove2007 (talk) 10:23, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I think we still need inline citations regardless of whether it came from a PD source. Also, I saw a few weeks ago that there was a discussion on whether or not it was acceptable to use PD sources for DYK or not. Tarebia granifera (the article that was discussed) didn't appear on the main page and as that was only a couple of weeks ago, I'm not sure if this should either. Smartse (talk) 17:12, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • The DNB template in "references" section indicates that DNB source text has been incorporated (i.e. in this case cut and pasted, then edited) into the final wiki article - virtually every sentence comes originally from DNB. Adding citations for every statement (all bearing the number "1") is not necessary in this particular case - in fact it would just add visual clutter. Read the DNB source - you will find that all the statements in the article, including the hook, are absolutely supported by all the sources. Shadygrove2007 (talk) 20:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think we need to decide whether or not a copy + paste from a public domain source is suitable for DYK first, before arguing about the need for inline citations. I've started a discussion about it here. Smartse (talk) 16:02, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I object to using copied-and-pasted text for a DYK nomination. It isn't fair to other people writing articles that are actually new, and it isn't fair to whoever may come around later and replace this with an article based on a more current view of the topic but whose article will get disqualified from DYK because this copied-and-pasted version has already appeared there. --Hegvald (talk) 19:01, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Per Wikipedia:WIADYK number 1 point 4 "Try to pick articles that are original to Wikipedia (not inclusions of free data sources)". Sorry, I should have noticed that earlier. Also can you check the link to the DNB - searching the full text in the link given I couldn't find any mention of this person. Smartse (talk) 19:13, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Sorry I linked you to the wrong volume - I've now fixed it - see page 79 here.
One of the WIKI guidelines is "assume good faith". :There seems to be some misunderstanding here. The hook has absolutely not been cut and pasted from anywhere - it is original based on facts from the article. The article is also ORIGINAL as it has been extensively rewritten and edited. If you read the WIKI article and compare it to the original DNB text you will find appreciable differences. Also remember that sources are VERY limited for many lesser-known artists of the period, and in my experience DNB (a real encyclopedia compiled by experts - not just an internnet PD resource) is often the best to start with. This is very different from modern biography where there is a huge amount of working material which needs to be compiled from many sources.
Re: "Copy and paste": A copy and paste from DNB is a sensible and efficient way of creating an initial template on which to base the final article. Several hours of work of additional work has then gone into editing, updating, rephrasing and checking with other sources. Images have to be researched and added, and categorised in wikicommons. Internal linking with other WIKI pages is quite a job in itself because the original text often only gives surnames or incomplete aristocratic titles which requires careful checking and reading of other WIKI articles and other sources to make sure that links go to the right page. Also, material has to be sifted out which is out of date - for example paintings may have been moved to other venues, county boundaries change etc etc. There are any number of facts which need to be double-checked from other sources. Other facts not available at the time of DNB (c. 1900) may need to be added to update the text. A lot of rephrasing is needed because of differences in the usage between 1900 and now etc etc. In other words, a lot of work, and, dare I say it, expertise has gone into putting this biography together.
That's it folks.Shadygrove2007 (talk) 21:25, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Samuel Eyles Pierce

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 20:30, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hook is referenced to ONDB which requires subscription. Dr. Blofeld 20:30, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hamilton Watch Complex

A red brick building with a clock tower.

Created by Niagara (talk). Self nom at 19:47, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Romstrade

Created by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 19:38, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1963–64 Michigan Wolverines men's basketball team

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 18:25, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Charles "Buffalo" Jones

Charles "Buffalo" Jones

ALT:... that Charles "Buffalo" Jones, the first game warden at Yellowstone National Park, once roped an unruly bear and spanked the animal on its rear?

Created/expanded by Billy Hathorn (Billy Hathorn talk). Self nom at 18:05, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Francis Farm Petroglyphs

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 17:55, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bògòlanfini

Bògòlanfini fabric

5x expanded by Sandstein (talk). Nominated by Sandstein (talk) at 17:06, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Mithya

5x expanded by Mspraveen (talk). Self nom at 16:31, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Albany Convention Center

Created by UpstateNYer (talk). Self nom at 15:29, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Michael S. Smith (interior designer)

  • I would be grateful if some knowledgeable person could check the DYK-relevant size of the article before it gets too close to its DYK deadline. It is certainly expandable, but I need to know, so I can work on it while I have time available. --Hegvald (talk) 18:36, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • OK, I figured out how to use the script to check the size. It is still a bit on the short side. I will get back to the topic tomorrow and expand the article. --Hegvald (talk) 19:50, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Censorship in Spain

Created by Tommy2010 (talk). Self nom at 14:15, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

That's not censorship - it shouldn't even be in the article, never mind the hook. Quite a bit of the article isn't about censorship in fact! Perhaps something about censorship under Franco, added to the article, would make a decent hook. But, article needs quite a lot of work to focus on its supposed topic to justify front page exposure. Rd232 talk 14:45, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alright. Tommy! 14:49, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Amantaka Hotel

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 13:30, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Is that so?

Yes, that is so. Dr. Blofeld 17:05, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Torgeir Vraa

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 12:28, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Niels Ødegaard

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 12:23, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Parachartergus apicalis

A wasp tends treehoppers

Created by Smartse (talk). Nominated by Smartse (talk) at 12:09, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • alt1 makes me think "so what?". main hook is cool but "startling complexity", which you quote in the article, does not appear in ref 6 (not via a pdf search at least). alt2 does not have a ref right after it and does not seem to appear in ref 5. RlevseTalk 12:24, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Re alt1 - fair enough, I just found it funny reading the reference. The references for the other two are scans so a pdf search doesn't work (I don't know how google scholar manages to do search them?!). The main hook is discussed on page 296 of the reference cited, alt2 is on page 126, in the last paragraph before the discussion of this ref. I can add more reference tags if you would like but I thought one per paragraph was sufficient. Thanks for the review. Smartse (talk) 09:26, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
main and second alt ok. RlevseTalk 20:59, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

LucyPhone

Created by Cunard (talk). Nominated by Cunard (talk) at 07:13, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jeshua Anderson

Created by Bender235 (talk). Self nom at 00:08, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on September 3

Onneca Fortúnez

Created by BomBom (talk). Self nom at 01:59, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Cat house (Riga)

Created by Xil (talk). Nominated by Philaweb (talk) at 22:07, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Smoking in Indonesia

Cigarette factory in SumatraKretek Smoking

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 17:07, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Peggy Ann Jones

Created by Ssilvers (talk). Nominated by Ssilvers (talk) at 15:12, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tirana Circus

Created by Vinie007 (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 03:41, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

September 2010 Quetta bombing

Created by Wikireader41 (talk). Nominated by Chesdovi (talk) at 01:18, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Grand Design (book)

Created by Alokprasad84 (talk), Mbz1 (talk) and Drbogdan (talk). Self nom at 21:16, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

length, style and references check out. Ready to go. Shadygrove2007 (talk) 09:15, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Palaeovespa

5x expanded by Kevmin (talk). Self nom at 14:40, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Richard Etchberger

Created by Jwillbur (talk). Self nom at 06:00, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • His medal is scheduled be presented on September 21, so it might be cool to postpone the hook till then. In which case an alt hook could be used:
Alt 1:... that United States Air Force airman Richard Etchberger will posthumously receive the Medal of Honor today? — jwillbur 06:09, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bellevue, Schenectady, New York

Created by Camelbinky (talk). Self nom at 03:11, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sod House Ranch

no

Created by Orygun (talk). Nominated by Orygun (talk) at 00:17, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pancyclic graph

Created by David Eppstein (talk). Self nom at 22:26, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Daniel P. Davison

  • ... that as president of U.S. Trust, Daniel P. Davison classified clients with less than $300,000 in assets as "poor", but was willing to have staff walk a dog for those with assets exceeding $2 million?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 21:18, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Church of St John sub Castro, Lewes, Russian Memorial, Lewes, The Finnish Prisoner

A stone drum on a stepped base below a tapering section, then a decorated box, then a cross. Around the drum are arched panels with carved writing. It stands in front of trees, some of whose branches partly obscure the decorated box. To the right is a gravestone.

  • Comment: All 3 articles moved from sandbox to mainspace on 3 September.

Created by Struway2 (talk). Self nom at 19:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • If it helps: the two halves of the hook (Tsar's memorial to prisoners, story inspiring opera) appear separately in each article:



Perfume cushion

Sweet-bag 16th century

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self nom at 19:56, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

In the article I wrote: These "herb pillows" of the 18th, 19th and 20th centuries of aromatic herbs were believed to help the advancement of sleep. The Walter book source reference says: The "herb pillows" of the eighteenth and nineteenth centuries (little sacks of aromatic herbs thought to be a remedy for sleeplessness) always included lavender, clovepinks and costmary as principal ingredients. The White book source reference says: There are several herbs that have a reputation for easing insomnia, and by creating a blend of these leaves and flowers, you can make small "herb pillows" to help you sleep. I am just going by the book source references.--Doug Coldwell talk 23:51, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry, I searched the article for the words "promote sleep" used in the hook and found the text "are made with sleep inducing ingredients like ... that help promote sleep", which is sourced to these unreliable sources. If the hook is to refer to the text "were believed to help the advancement of sleep", then that is exactly what the hook should say. There's a big difference between us reporting somebody else's belief that these cushions help one sleep, or us as an encyclopedia asserting that they do. See WP:NOR.  Sandstein  06:06, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1: "... that a "dream pillow" is a type of perfume cushion filled with aromatic herbs claimed to promote sleep?" Shadygrove2007 (talk) 09:42, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2: "... that a dream pillow is believed to help the advancement of sleep?"--Doug Coldwell talk 11:45, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1 works. The other criteria are met. ALT2 has the problem that "is believed" is a textbook WP:WEASEL word and shouldn't be in an article, let alone in a main page hook; besides, according to the text, they "were believed", past tense.  Sandstein  11:56, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT1 also seems unsatisfactory as the word "claimed" is an expression of doubt which seems inappropriate for this well-established usage. The term perfume cushion does not seem right either as it is little used - zero hits on Google Scholar, for example, and so is not a common name. The article currently conflates several types of scented package which have used in various sizes and for various purposes. It might be better if these were split and the scented pillow used for sleeping covered under a clearer title. Colonel Warden (talk) 22:18, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Changed name to Sachet (scented bag). There are thousands of hits in Google using Sachet "scented bag". The French term "sachet de senteurs" (Bag of Scents) seems to be a popular French name for this item.--Doug Coldwell talk 12:41, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT3: "... that a "dream pillow" is a type of sachet filled with aromatic herbs to help overcome sleeplessness?" --Doug Coldwell talk 12:41, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
'ALT4: How about "... that a "dream pillow" is a type of sachet filled with aromatic herbs designed to help overcome sleeplessness?"Sadads (talk) 00:27, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Brazilian ironclad Rio de Janeiro

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 18:52, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Andhra Pradesh Vidhan Parishad

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 18:25, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jacoby & Meyers

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 16:27, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Colonia Exhipódromo de Peralvillo

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 15:47, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Emu-wren, Southern Emu-wren, Rufous-crowned Emu-wren, Mallee Emu-wren

drawing of two Rufous-crowned Emu-wrens

  • Comment: could make common name the link to the Emu-wren page but that'd be an easter egg link(?)

5x expanded by Casliber (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 15:23, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


South Salem Academy

Created by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 13:39, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of NME number-one singles from the 1980s

Created by Rambo's Revenge (talk). Self nom at 11:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article is a few hundred characters below the required 1,500. The article would benefit from some more discussion of the artists and songs that made the list, which should be readily available from sources and would easily put the article over the 1,500-character minimum for article prose. Alansohn (talk) 14:34, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • After reading the article in more detail, this appears to be a word-for-word copy from List of NME number-one singles from the 1970s, which in turn was copied from other articles about top hits in the UK. The only exception is the brief final paragraph which makes reference to some of the chart differences in the decade of the 1980s. There is plenty to write about on the subject, such as artists who appeared most often, songs that charted for the longest time, etc., that there can be much more added to the article about its subject. As the historical information is duplicated text and as it adds nothing to the list of top songs in the 1980s, I would recommend that this article not proceed to approval without a substantial reworking. Alansohn (talk) 20:59, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Most Unwanted Song

Created by 28bytes (talk). Self nom at 08:38, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thomas Tregosse

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 07:22, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Caleb Bailey

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 07:14, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of planetary features with Māori names

Created by Iridia (talk). Self nom at 06:40, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Marty Huff

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 06:03, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Eight Bells

Sailors taking a reading

Created/expanded by JNW (talk). Nominated by JNW (talk) at 04:07, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on September 2

Ed Shuttlesworth

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 18:26, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Svenska Spindlar

Created by FranciscoWelterSchultes (talk). Nominated by Stemonitis (talk) at 07:02, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

William Trickett Smith II

5x expanded by KimChee (talk). Self nom at 01:30, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Nicola Zerola

Nicola Zerola

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 09:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Angiolina Bosio

Angiolina Bosio

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 12:30, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Carlo Scalzi

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 11:46, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Craig telescope

Created by Fotaun (talk). Nominated by PFHLai (talk) at 06:57, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

MV Mi Amigo

Photograph of a radio ship, viewed from the starboard stern quarter

Created by Mjroots (talk). Nominated by Mjroots (talk) at 20:26, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Date, length, hook, and source verified. Wilhelmina Will (talk) 00:21, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Dhuvjan Monastery

  • ... that the 11th century Dhuvjan Monastery in Albania contained an icon which included some remains of very important early Christianity martyrs?

Created by Your Über Monkey (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 18:25, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Brazilian ironclad Tamandaré

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 17:14, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jack Pitney

A blue 2006 Mini Cooper S Checkmate

  • ... that BMW advertising executive Jack Pitney convinced the company to market the Mini in the U.S., despite concerns that American buyers would not buy cars that small given the popularity of SUVs?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 12:50, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Lewis Gregory

A man with dark hair and a burgundy, grey and black cricket uniform with 'Gregory 24' visible on the back is bowling a white cricket ball.

Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 10:54, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Gene Englund

Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 00:12, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


HMS Aeolus (1801)

5x expanded by Benea (talk). Self nom at 23:59, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Davara

Created by White Shadows (talk). Nominated by White Shadows (talk) at 22:36, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Skipper W

Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 21:06, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Scouter's Key Award

Created by Ericalford (talk). Nominated by Rlevse (talk) at 19:55, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

C. Joseph Genster, Metrecal

  • ... that C. Joseph Genster of Mead Johnson developed Metrecal in 1959 as part of a weight loss craze that had dieters subsist on nothing other than the 900 calories offered by drinking four cans a day?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 17:35, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John Phillips (fighter)

  • ... that John Phillips was the first fighter to test positive for banned substances in the Cage Rage promotion?

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 16:59, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Movimiento 2D

  • ... that the Movimiento 2D is a Venezuelan opposition movement founded and led by the editor/proprietor of the daily El Nacional?

Created by Rd232 (talk). Self nom at 16:06, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Greenbelt Cooperative Publishing Assn., Inc. v. Bresler, Dorothy Sucher

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 15:05, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Marvin Bracy

Created by Bender235 (talk). Self nom at 14:02, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Colonia Cuauhtémoc, Mexico City

Torre Mayor in Mexico City

Created by Thelmadatter (talk). Self nom at 13:56, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Mr San Peppy

Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at 13:53, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Daniel Tabera

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 11:56, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Luis Beltrán Prieto Figueroa

Created by Rd232 (talk). Self nom at 09:59, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Protein pigeon homolog

Created by Boghog2 (talk). Self nom at 05:35, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • It looks good, but I think that it could be hookier:
ALT1: ... that inhibiting protein pigeon homolog may provide a treatment for Alzheimer's disease? Brilliant! Your hook is much better.  Done
I think people would be more likely to click on it like that. One other thing, do we know what its function is other than to cause the formation of beta amyloid? If we do it would be good to include it. Smartse (talk) 16:33, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I will see what else I can dig up on this protein and expand the function section if possible. Cheers. Boghog (talk) 19:56, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Unfortunately not much else is known about the function of this protein. However I have expanded the article significantly to include more information on homologous genes in other species as well as more details on the size and location of the gene and the transcribed protein. Boghog (talk) 09:12, 4 September 2010 (UTC)  Done[reply]
I've edited your hook slightly to take out an unneeded comma. I hope that's OK. -- L'ecrivant (talk) 22:29, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No objections. Looks good. Boghog (talk) 09:12, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT1 is good to go. Thanks for adding more details, I can see why there isn't much information available now. I've linked inhibitor to enzyme inhibitor in the hook as I thought the average person might not understand what it means. I know it isn't perfect, but that article discusses the concept in general. Smartse (talk) 09:50, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Church of Saint Laud

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 05:35, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Labrador Sea, Northwest Atlantic Mid-Ocean Channel

Past sunset at Labrador Sea

  • ... that the Labrador Sea (pictured) contains NAMOC, one of the world's longest underwater channels?

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 05:30, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I suggest this slightly amended hook, as I feel that the NAMOC acronym needs to be spelled out and the original hook was missing the word "the". Also, only one item should in bold type. -- L'ecrivant (talk) 22:32, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, maybe ALT1 is better - they both need bolding though because one has been expanded and the other is a new article. Smartse (talk) 15:54, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Coprinopsis variegata

An egg-shaped mushroom with surface scales and forest as a backdrop.

Created by Sasata (talk). Self nom at 04:28, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • All good, just suggest a small tweak of the hook:
ALT1... that scaly ink cap mushrooms (pictured) can attack and digest soil bacteria by growing hyphae that secrete digestive enzymes?
You've written that they are chemicals in the article, but could you check the source to see if they are in fact enzymes? It seems more likely to me. Smartse (talk) 16:20, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I agree they are likely enzymes, but the source uses "compounds", and does not go into any detail about the nature of these compounds. I also checked the primary source, and the author does not speculate about this, so I think we should go with the generic "compounds" as in Alt2 (added slight tweak in wording to avoid repetition of "digest"). Thanks for checking, Sasata (talk) 19:24, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
ALT2... that scaly ink cap mushrooms (pictured) can attack and consume soil bacteria by growing hyphae that secrete digestive compounds?
Damn NOR! Better go with ALT2 then. Smartse (talk) 19:33, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1967–68 ABA season

facade of the Teaneck Armory, with a green lawn, flagpole and tracked armored vehicles in front of the building.

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 03:20, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lawrence E. Roberts

African American man in full Air Force uniform

Created by Rlevse (talk). Self nom at 02:46, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! RlevseTalk 01:19, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Ernest Spybuck

Ernest Spybuck, Absentee Shawnee Artist. ca. 1910

Created by Taoboy49 (talk). Nominated by Sadads (talk) at 02:15, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Jammu and Kashmir Legislative Council

Created by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk). Nominated by S h i v a (Visnu) (talk) at 00:43, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Older nominations

Articles created/expanded on September 1

Paul Ryan Rudd

Created by Codehydro (talk). Self nom at 13:41, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Mafalda Salvatini

A photograph of Mafalda Salvatini taken during the early years of her singing career.

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by 4meter4 (talk) at 13:16, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

King of the Ring (2006)

5x expanded by Richard "Wrestler" Lopez (talk). Nominated by GaryColemanFan (talk) at 16:56, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Main Street Historic District (Medina, New York)

A view down the center of a wide street with three-story ornate brick commercial buildings in a mix of colors on either side. At bottom center is an upside down "Only" above a curved arrow pointing right.

  • Comment: Source for fact is on p. 54 of document (going by page numbers assigned by JavaScript reading software).

5x expanded by Daniel Case (talk). Nominated by Daniel Case (talk) at 20:10, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Wolfgang Krause

Created by Yngvadottir (talk). Self nom at 17:44, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Sonia Prina

Sonia Prina

Created by 4meter4 (talk), Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 09:35, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: A 15x expansion

5x expanded by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 04:58, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Respect (The Bill)

  • ... that in the series finale to The Bill, called Respect, all 17 current cast members appeared in the final episode?

Created by Spike1999 (talk). Nominated by 5 albert square (talk) at 01:45, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Should now have more than one ref, external links now properly formatted --5 albert square (talk) 22:34, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
RlevseTalk 02:26, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Francis Sumner (millowner)

engraving of stately home

5x expanded by Victuallers (talk) and create by ClemRutter. Self nom at 22:27, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • With regards this one, I'm a little confused. It may be because it's early and I'm a little groggy, but it seems as though the source suggests he lived at Glossop Hall WITH his mother, following his father's death. Have I misinterpreted? Paralympiakos (talk) 10:19, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, you are right... he lost his mother whilst there. Ive added "with new parents". OK? Victuallers (talk) 16:27, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Re-reading that source made me feel thoroughly stupid. I had to read it about five times to gain an understanding. My current understanding is that Ann Sumner (mother) died when Francis was a toddler. Robert Sumner (father) marries Barbara [Sumner] (now stepmother), before Robert (father) dies. Then Francis lives with stepmother and step-grandfather in Glossop Hall. Is that correct? If so, I'm happy to tick this one off. Paralympiakos (talk) 17:02, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Returned to original wording as it was correct Victuallers (talk) 16:05, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Changed "ended up at" to "lived at" and therefore: ready

Brazilian ironclad Barroso

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 18:15, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Petar Parchevich

A purple shield with two standing goats and a crimson band with three six-pointed stars in the middle surrounded by gold, white and purple decorative elements and topped by a gold lion rampant

Created by TodorBozhinov (talk). Nominated by TodorBozhinov (talk) at 13:26, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jan Błachowicz

  • ... that after missing the whole of 2009, Jan Błachowicz returned at KSW XIII to defeat two opponents on the same night?

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 11:43, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Dawid Baziak

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 11:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Scottish surnames

Created by Brianann MacAmhlaidh (talk). Self nom at 09:29, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Bill

5x expanded by 5 albert square (talk). Nominated by Fridae'sDoom (talk) at 08:07, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

A 5X expansion in prose. since it's 75k you'd have to get it to 425K. Why did you think this was a 5K expansion?RlevseTalk 14:45, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think that the nominator meant to out forward Respect (The Bill), which was created on Sep 1. GeeJo (t)(c) • 15:40, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1996 Football League Second Division play-off Final

Created by User:Brad78 (talk). Self nom at 02:36, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Created by MichaelQSchmidt (talk). Self nom at 02:19, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Virgil Ardelean

  • ... that Romanian police officer Virgil Ardelean avoided having to take sides in the 1989 Revolution by feigning deafness when his superior ordered him to become involved, instead getting sent to the hospital and kept in bed for otitis?

Created by Biruitorul (talk). Self nom at 00:34, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: In my opinion, this particular biography of a living person requires close checking before it is appropriate as front page material. Each of the three very large paragraphs making up the bulk of the article has a single citation at its end; but I am not wholly confident that the references involved support everything said in those paragraphs. Material such as "In 1994, sensing that the Caritas Ponzi scheme was about to collapse, he ordered" seems very speculative - even if the source does support it, shouldn't it be phrased differently? Shouldn't it be made clear that one commentator or historian suggested that (in their view) the orders he gave were as a result of his beliefs about the fate of the Ponzi scheme? "The village is populated by ethnic Hungarians and Roma" - it is now? it was then? it says so in the sources? it says so in the particular source at the end of that paragraph? --Demiurge1000 (talk) 02:45, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Umm, as far as I can see, the article is much better referenced than just a single ref at the end of each paragraph. ""The village is populated by ethnic Hungarians and Roma" is clearly referenced in ref 1 in the present tense (i.e., it's still populated by Hungarians and Roma). While your comment about the Ponzi scheme action may have some validity, I don't really think it's a major concern, so as to require "close checking before [the article] is appropriate as front page material". This is DYK, not FAC.
  • I have reviewed the article for DYK (hook referencing, length and date) and I intend to verify it, so please reply as soon as you can if you have any further comments. TodorBozhinov 18:08, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you both from your comments. In regard to the Caritas issue, I have added another source supporting the claim, rephrased it a little, and added Ardelean's denial that there were hidden diskettes. Everyone agrees they were searched, but there is uncertainty about other facts, and I have tried to reflect that. In terms of what is sourced from where, every footnote refers to the text preceding it within the paragraph, so for instance the first paragraph is sourced to the Ziua article. Please let me know if I can alleviate other concerns, either here or on the talk page. - Biruitorul Talk 20:57, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

List of American Basketball Association awards and honors

Created by K. Annoyomous (talk). Self nom at 22:46, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I have read through the article and I have no issue with the length of the article and hook or any concern about the factual accuracy of the hook. My question is that we should probably avoid hooks that are basically in the form that "there are X entries on List Y", which could be generated for any list article nominated at DYK. There were so many great athletes who played in the ABA, and making some mention about the unique accomplishments of any one of the 80 basketball players mentioned in the article would probably make for a better hook. Alansohn (talk) 15:12, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Rena Kubota

Created by Jfgslo (talk). Nominated by GeeJo (talk) at 22:03, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Daniel Webster (Florida politician)

An older man is shown from the chest up, looking into the camera and smiling. He is wearing a gray suit, red patterned tie, and blue shirt. His hair is gray, and the background is a steely blue.

5x expanded by Scapler (talk). Self nom at 21:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

ALT 1: ... that Daniel Webster (pictured) was the first Republican Speaker of the Florida House of Representatives since Reconstruction?


Kucadikadi

Lucy Telles, Kucadikadi basketweaver

Created by Uyvsdi (talk). Self nom at 21:26, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Rin Grand Hotel

5x expanded by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 21:15, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lepidophthalmus turneranus

Close-up of elongated translucent pink crustaceans with flattened, opage white claws.

Created by Stemonitis (talk). Self nom at 21:14, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Though, personally, I think that the hook is punchier with all the text after (pictured) redacted. YMMV. GeeJo (t)(c) • 20:28, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'd be happy with either the full hook or GeeJo's curtailed alternative. --Stemonitis (talk) 20:57, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

First Māori elections, 4th New Zealand Parliament

Formal seated portrait photograph of a man in his 50s holding a patu.

  • Comment: Both articles were created in userspace and were moved to mainspace on 1 September.

Created by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 19:34, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]



Edward Mead Johnson, Mead Johnson

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 19:03, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]



Electrica

  • ... that Electrica has an electric power distribution network of 116,500 km?

5x expanded by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 17:46, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Franklin Brito

Created by Piotrus (talk). Nominated by Piotrus (talk) at 17:20, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The facts in this case are so in dispute that I'm not sure an WP:NPOV hook can be drafted. (For example the proposal above doesn't convey the government's position that there was no such takeover, because the disputed titles applied to land that wasn't Brito's.) It's also already included in ITN's "recent deaths". If we must have it, though, we might as well correct a substantial flaw in much of the Western media coverage, which is the impression that Brito lost his entire farm, and have some kind of hook which clarifies the dispute was over part of his farm. Rd232 talk 19:57, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The sources are unclear; it doesn't mean that the position that he lost the entire farm wrong (I find it rather strange that one would go to such extremes for losing only part of the farm). I also think that the above hook is neutral, but I propse an even more neutral alternative below.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:22, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • ... that Venezuelan farmer Franklin Brito died after several years of hunger strike he begun in protest of what he saw as the government takeover of his farm?

Aziz Çami

Created by ZjarriRrethues (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 16:16, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Very badass! I think this fact deserves to be highlighted! I'd like to suggest an alternative hook:
ALT1 ... that when Aziz Çami tried to assassinate Zog of Albania in the Vienna State Opera house in 1931, the king pulled out his own pistol and returned fire? -- L'ecrivant (talk) 22:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • ALT1 is a more appealing hook, however it is controversial, as it seems to be a legend, not confirmed by the other killer, Ndok Gjeloshi. I'd rather have a hook that is confirmed by all parties, because it's going to stay forever in the talk page of the article, and I really believe in this essay, so I stand by the original hook as approved by TodorBozhinov.--Sulmues (talk) 14:22, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

St John the Evangelist's Church, Leeds

The interior of a church with an arch containing an elaborately carved screen in front of which are carved pews

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 14:50, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


value-added modeling

  • ... that value-added modeling rates teacher performance by comparing prior and current year student test scores and can be used to award bonuses to top performers and fire those with the lowest ratings?

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 14:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • I don't see support for the ides that teachers with the lowest ratings get fired. Mention of training but not firing.

Perhaps ALT 1:that value-added modelling rates teacher performance by comparing prior and current year student test scores?

Plus "modeling" is spelled wrong.Thelmadatter (talk) 15:54, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The article discusses its use for teacher retention and the main source says "Though the value-added method is often used to help educators improve their classroom teaching, it has also been a factor in deciding who receives bonuses, how much they are and even who gets fired." The article will be moved to reflect the correct spelling. Alansohn (talk) 17:14, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Franz von Hipper

5x expanded by Parsecboy (talk). Self nom at 12:48, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Escape of the Provisional Revolutionary Government

5x expanded and new article by Esemono (talk). Self nom at 12:48, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

East River Road Historic District

Ornate Gothic Revival house, heavily ornamented with gingerbreading

Created by Andrew Jameson (talk). Nominated by Andrew Jameson (talk) at 10:43, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • For convenience, direct link to cite: Grosse Ile Historical Society (2007), Grosse Ile, Arcadia Publishing, p. 82-83, ISBN 0738550507 Andrew Jameson (talk) 10:50, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Aktio-Preveza Undersea Tunnel

Created by Athenean (talk). Nominated by Athenean (talk) at 07:52, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Labia minor

  • ... that Labia minor is chocolate-brown and up to 7 mm long, including the pincer?
  • Comment: For once, it's nice to be able to benefit from the confusion this animal's name provides!

Created by Stemonitis (talk). Self nom at 07:03, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Haha, I think the hook can be improved though:
ALT1 ... that Labia minor are chocolate-brown, up to 7 mm long, and equipped with pincers? Smartse (talk) 10:39, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Brilliant. Both hooks are approved - love the suggestive, but not so suggestive picture. Clamshell Deathtrap (talk) 11:00, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In the alt hook, I've replaced "have" with "equipped with"; see parallelism (grammar). Nyttend (talk) 21:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Fantastic! :) Is this an example of labia dentata? -- L'ecrivant (talk) 22:41, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think it is inaccurate to use "have" instead of "equipped with" and it makes the hook a lot more interesting. I'd suggest changing it back Smartse (talk) 15:57, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Inaccurate, no. Ungrammatical, yes. Proper parallelism requires that the bits between commas be easily rearrangeable; it's fine to say "Labia minor are...equipped with pincers", but not fine to say "Labia minor are...have pincers". Nyttend (talk) 22:18, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This would could go great in the April Fool's Day DYK. :) —CodeHydro 18:01, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Harris Dental Museum

A small white brick building with windows on each side of the front door

Created by Nyttend (talk). Nominated by Nyttend (talk) at 04:42, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Jacob Mayer

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 02:25, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 31

Iximche

Two stone temple platforms in a grassy area

5x expanded by Simon Burchell (talk). Self nom at 08:28, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

ALT1: ...that Guatemala gets its name from the Nahuatl name of the Kaqchikel Maya city of Iximche.
Simon Burchell (talk) 12:33, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kelli Scarr

Kelli Scarr playing at Melkweg, 14 July 2009

Created/expanded by Seraphimblade (talk). Self nom at 07:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Julius Curry

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 05:52, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lucas Duda

  • ... that Lucas Duda was pulled from his professional baseball debut in the eighth inning due to hamstring cramps, which he thought were the result of dehydration brought on by his flight to the game?

Created by Yankees10 (talk), Brewcrewer (talk). Nominated by Brewcrewer (talk) at 01:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

fine, I'll rephrase both hooks below:

>Created by Yankees10 (talk), Brewcrewer (talk). Nominated by--brewcrewer (yada, yada) 01:44, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Domenico Annibali

Domenico Annibali

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 22:04, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Adelaide Borghi-Mamo

Adelaide Borghi-Mamo

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 21:48, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

French ironclad Océan

A three-masted warship with its sails furled. The top of the funnel is barely visible over the forecastle.

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 18:31, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


French ironclad Suffren

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 18:24, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reinert Torgeirson

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 08:24, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Meets requirements and Norwegian references accepted in gøød fåith. But since the article is just barely long enough to qualify, I think we shouldn't put it on the main page unless we find something interesting to say about this man, which I can't.  Sandstein  16:48, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Children of the Stars

  • Comment: Image requested from director/producer. Awaiting reply.

Created by Ling.Nut (talk). Self nom at 07:14, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Swastika (Germanic Iron Age)

Created by Dbachmann (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 01:22, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Mont Pleasant, Schenectady, New York

Created by Camelbinky (talk). Self nom at 23:54, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pensacola and Atlantic Railroad

Created by User:Textorus (talk). Self nom at 22:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

A little more concise:

COSMIC cancer database

Created by Abergabe (talk). Nominated by Rockpocket (talk) at 17:27, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1952 Winter Olympics

5x expanded by H1nkles (talk). Nominated by H1nkles (talk) at 16:05, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Abaz Kupi

  • ... that the antifascist and freedom fighter Abaz Kupi was the founder of the Legality Movement, which aimed to return Zog of Albania back to his throne?

Created by Aigest (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 15:08, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Podgorica–Shkodër railway

Created by Your Über Monkey (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 13:33, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Bajzë Rail Station

  • ... that the Bajzë Rail Station was completely cleaned up in 2003 from toxic chemicals dumped in 1991-92?

Created by Your Über Monkey (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 13:25, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

USCGC Point Arden (WPB-82309)

  • ... that the USCGC Point Arden, an 82-foot USCG Point class cutter originally designated as WPB-82301, later acquired the name Point Caution when the Coast Guard started naming all cutters longer than 65 feet?

Created by Cuprum17 (talk). Nominated by MC10 (talk) at 01:47, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Edward A. Gisburne

Round portrait of a stern-faced young man dressed in a suit.

5x expanded by Jwillbur (talk). Self nom at 01:24, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date is verified, but the article seems to be a bit short of 5x+ expansion. The last pre-expansion version[4] measures to about 1100 characters of prose, whereas the current version measures to about 4950 characters of prose. It seems that you are about 500 characters short of 5x+ expansion. Maybe some-one else could re-check the character count, but if you could expand the article by around an extra 500 characters in the next 2-3 days, that would certainly solve the length problem. Nsk92 (talk) 17:05, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • OK, thanks. I used this tool[5] for computing the prose-length; in any event the prose length is certainly OK now. There is still one minor issue with verification of the hook fact. The second term of service after the leg amputation mentioned in the hook is the one during WWII. It is mentioned in the first paragraph of the section "World War II and later years". However, there needs to be an extra footnoted ref in that paragraph. At the moment the only in-line ref there occurs at the end of that paragraph, after the sentence about Gisburne's son being killed in the war. I'd like to see an extra in-line ref earlier in the paragraph as well, where the service of Edward Gisburne is mentioned. Nsk92 (talk) 05:47, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, done. — jwillbur 21:51, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Very good, thanks. Entry verified. Nsk92 (talk) 04:14, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Leymah Gbowee

5x expanded by USchick (talk). Self nom at 00:40, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George Alexander Parks

Governor George Alexander Parks of Alaska Territory

5x expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 22:50, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comment: An example of what can happen after your boss assigns you to escort a group of dignitaries. --Allen3 talk 22:51, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Hipposandal

Hipposandal

  • ... that the hipposandal was a metal shoe laced to horse hoofs in Celto-Roman countries?

Created/expanded by Rama (talk). Nominated by Rama (talk) at 22:29, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Oops, sorry. I hand't noticed that requirement. I'll try to beef it up a tad. Thank you! Rama (talk) 06:21, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Should be a bit better now. Thank you. Rama (talk) 06:52, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Good to go now Thelmadatter (talk) 16:00, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ancient Church Orders

  • ... that Ancient Church Orders is a genre of early Christian literature which has the aim to offer authoritative prescriptions on matters of moral conduct, liturgy and church organization?

Created by A ntv (talk). Self nom at 21:44, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

X-Men: First Class (film project)

Created by Jhenderson777 (talk), -5- (talk). Nominated by TriiipleThreat (talk) at 20:27, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Plön Castle

5x expanded by Bermicourt (talk). Self nom at 20:13, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]



St Michael's Church, Cowthorpe

A stone church with a prominent embattled west tower incorporating a large arch, and the relatively small body of the church beyond it

  • ... that the tower of St Michael's Church, Cowthorpe, North Yorkshire, (pictured) has been described as "more like a castle fortification than a religious symbol" and its arch as "more suited to a cathedral than a small country church"?

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 19:26, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Lords of Finance

Created by Remember (talk). Nominated by Remember (talk) at 18:16, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alternative hook - ... that the only book that Fed Chairment Ben Bernanke recently recommended to understand the financial crisis of 2007–2010 was the Pulitzer Prize winning Lords of Finance by Liaquat Ahamed? Remember (talk) 12:55, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Walter Powell (politician)

Created by Motmit (talk). Self nom at 18:07, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've changed balloon > hot air balloon Smartse (talk) 17:22, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've also moved the article to be (politician) rather than the dates. Smartse (talk) 17:28, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jacob Bigeleisen

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 17:27, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Qemal Butka

Created by Aigest (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 16:41, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Jersey Circus

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self nom at 12:01, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

James Pierrepont Greaves

Created by Shadygrove2007 (talk). Self nom at 11:22, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

¿Por Qué Te Tengo Que Olvidar?

Created by Jaespinoza (talk) 07:26, 31 August 2010 (UTC). Self nom at 07:25, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Black-spotted whipray, brown whipray

A brown, diamond-shaped ray with black spots and a whip-like tail, in shallow water next to a pier

Created by Yzx (talk). Self nom at 06:43, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


William W. Evans

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 05:47, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Verified. Clamshell Deathtrap (talk) 09:47, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pete Ladygo

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 04:19, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1689 Boston revolt

Governor Andros a prisoner of Bostonian rebels in 1689.

Created by DCI2026 (talk). Self nom at 04:19, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


George V. Chalmers

Man in 1930s vintage football equipment without helmet cocks back throwing arm with football in hand

Created/expanded by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 03:30, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Kannagawa Hydropower Plant

Created/self-nom by --NortyNort (Holla) 03:10, 31 August 2010 (UTC) 16:13, 28 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Mill Creek (Lake Erie)

A large, concrete tube with a creek flowing into it.

Created by Niagara (talk). Self nom at 02:26, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Ghiyasu'd-Din Naqqah

Created by Vmenkov (talk). Nominated by Vmenkov (talk) at 01:42, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: I have no idea whether Ghiyasu'd-Din Naqqah's hometown was within the borders of today's Iran (rather than say, Afghanistan or Uzbekistan), but Shakh Rukh's embassy is described by Anglo-American academics (e.g., Timothy Brook) as "Persian". Contribution from anyone with the knowledge of the language and access to the primary source would be appreciated, at least for spelling the person's name in the original script! -- Vmenkov (talk) 01:42, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 30

Terra sigillata

5x expanded by AgTigress (talk). Nominated by Johnbod (talk) at 15:37, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Most thorough! I've left a few comments on the article talk page, but these are aimed more at getting the article to GA and do not prevent the article from appearing in DYK.  Sandstein  08:11, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1946 National League tie-breaker series

Created by Wizardman Operation Big Bear. Self nom at 04:37, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Neosho class monitor

A very low-freeboard warship in a river. It has a very prominent gun turret near the bow, a funnel amidships, and a covered sternwheel at the rear.

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 17:26, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Inez Haynes Irwin

A black and white, head and shoulders photograph of a woman

5x expanded by Bruce1ee (talk). Self nom at 08:05, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


John A. Kirkwood

Created by Jwillbur (talk). Self nom at 22:02, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Senostoma

  • ... that members of Senostoma must kill their hosts when ready to emerge?
  • Comment: Kind of an experimental hook. Quite a few parasitoid creatures out there, and I thought that maybe the less said, the better. "Kill? Host? Who, emerge for what?!" Rather than, "Oh, just another fly larva inside a beetle..." Open to ALTs, of course, though think the parasitoid habit is probably the best material to use. Maedin\talk 07:52, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

5x expanded by Maedin (talk). Self nom at 07:52, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Portrait of Ivan Gannibal, 1780s

Created/expanded by Y (talk). Self nom at 21:25, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Date and article length verified. However, the hook is too long: even not counting (pictured), the hook is 264 characters long, which is well above the 200 character limit set by WP:DYK rules. The hook needs to be considerably shortened. Nsk92 (talk) 18:20, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

let's try this again, shorter this time at 192 characters -- Y not? 21:31, 4 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Better, but still too long. According to this character count tool[7], this hook is still 214 characters long (that's without counting the word '(pictured)'; with the word '(pictured)' it is 225 characters). I am not sure how you got 192; when the length of the hook is counted, every character, including spaces and punctuation is included, starting with 'that' and ending with '?'. Nsk92 (talk) 00:52, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • dammit, I used Word and inadvertently looked at the wrong line. I've got it down to 199. Sorry, I'm rusty, I haven't had a DYK in years.
  • OK, thanks. ALT2 hook verified. Date and article length verified, hook length OK, hook fact verified (the hook fact ref is in Russian, but I checked that it does indeed support the hook fact). I have removed the stub tag from the article, since DYK articles are not supposed to be marked as stubs. Nsk92 (talk) 01:34, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

825th Tank Destroyer Battalion

Created by Shimgray (talk). Self nom at 13:07, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Nick-D (talk). Self nom at 03:23, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the check. I prefer the first of the two hooks, but am happy if the uploading admin thinks that the second works better ;) Nick-D (talk) 11:44, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Anthony Roberts (basketball)

Created by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 01:51, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

White Boar

Created by Johnbod (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 20:57, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

- which is a bit of a hyperbole, as a couple of dozen cannonballs and other stuff helped too. Or:

Åre Old Church

Åre Old Church

Created by Philaweb (talk). Self nom at 19:10, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I didn't think they were that old...impressive So Victuallers (talk) 16:31, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Agustarello Affré

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 14:44, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ada Adini

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 14:16, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


St Mary's Church, South Cowton

A stone church seen from a slight angle, with an embattled tower on the left, the nave in the centre, and the chancel on the right

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 10:02, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reger-Chor

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 06:21, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

French ironclad Marengo

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by Sturmvogel 66 (talk) at 23:35, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Viktor Nemkov

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Nominated by Paralympiakos (talk) at 22:44, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Francisco Drinaldo

Created by Paralympiakos (talk). Self nom at 22:38, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hamilton H-47

The last surviving Hamilton H-47 airliner

5x expanded by RuthAS (talk). Nominated by TSRL (talk) at 20:43, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


David Einhorn (rabbi), Har Sinai Congregation

Photo of Rabbi David Einhorn

5x expanded by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 20:09, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Princess Sophie of Saxe-Weimar-Eisenach (1888-1913)

Created by Ruby2010 (talk). Self nom at 17:41, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that artist George Garrard (1760-1826) made plaster models of farm animals, and successfully lobbied Parliament to introduce legislation to protect the copyright of British model-makers?

Created by Shadygrove2007 (talk). Self nom at 15:52, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • ALT2 (better still): "... that, in 1798, artist George Garrard successfully campaigned to introduce the first copyright protection for model-makers in Britain?"

Safet Butka

Created by Aigest (talk). Nominated by Sulmues (talk) at 14:47, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Isaac and Miria

Created by Itzjustdrama (talk). Self nom at 14:45, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I didn't know that could be a problem. How about *ALT 2: ... that Isaac Dian and Miria Harvent are characters of the Baccano! light novels and anime, set in the Prohibition-era United States, but also appear in the Durarara!! anime, set in modern Tokyo? 'Course, I don't know if that's very interesting ~Itzjustdrama ? C 14:22, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
That's actually better, yes. DS (talk) 23:04, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No tick mark for alt two? ;P ~Itzjustdrama does not equal a Drama Llama 16:38, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John Franklin Alexander Strong

Black and white portrait of man with white wavy hair and handlebar mustache wearing a dark suit and white shirt with wing collar

5x expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 13:05, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Danish Golden Age

C.W. Eckersberg: Woman Standing in Front of a Mirror, 1841

5x expanded by Ipigott (talk). Nominated by Elekhh (talk) at 12:53, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Battle of Suoi Chau Pha

Created by Anotherclown (talk). Self nom at 12:12, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Azotobacter

5x expanded by Materialscientist (talk). Nominated by Materialscientist (talk) at 11:43, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Nah - I think it's fine as is, perfectly accurate and no need to dilute the hook with extra words. You can equally say that a saw is used in the production of wooden objects, or whatever. Le Deluge (talk) 18:45, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    Adding alginic acid would make the hook more accurate but less intriguing, thus fewer people would be interested to read the article. I think it is one of those cases when the hook doesn't need to describe all details. Materialscientist (talk) 21:40, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1957 Maryland Terrapins football team

Created by Strikehold (talk). Nominated by Strikehold (talk) at 05:11, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on August 29

Shirlee Emmons

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Self nom at 15:59, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Angiomyolipoma

5x expanded by Colin (talk). Nominated by Colin (talk) at 12:28, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

K2K experiment

Created by Strait (talk) and expanded by Headbomb (talk). Nominated by Headbomb (talk) at 10:52, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Your Coffee Cups

Created by QwerpQwertus (talk). Nominated by QwerpQwertus (talk) at 02:37, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Adelaide Malanotte

Adelaide Malanotte

Created by 4meter4 (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 21:03, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

al-Mabda', Iraqi Communist Party (1960), Daud as-Sayegh, Ittihad ash-Sha'ab, Associations Law

Created by Soman (talk). Self nom at 03:47, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lorne Kidd Smith

Created by Nikkimaria (talk). Self nom at 04:07, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Mei Yamaguchi

Created by Jfgslo (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 03:22, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Promise Neighborhoods

Created by SteveChervitzTrutane (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 03:22, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]


Mimi Lo

Created by Music + Pageants (talk). Nominated by Secret Saturdays (talk) at 03:22, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Le Castle Vania

Created by Kindzmarauli (talk). Self nom at 01:06, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hamilton Hill, Schenectady, New York

Created by Camelbinky (talk). Self nom at 19:10, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Alexander Pendarves

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 05:47, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Tom Beckman

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 02:33, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The 30 years isn't that interesting (and long service is implied by a relatively senior job), it would be nice if it was something along the lines of "was in charge of new vehicle launches at General Motors when XXX model was launched"? Helps bring it home to people if they can link him to something they see on their streets every day. Le Deluge (talk) 10:15, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Unfortunately, the source does not identify a specific model or list of models. If the 30 year part is a concern, we could go with the following alt hook:
  • 30 years isn't a concern, just a bit dull. Even if the specific source doesn't say what models he was responsible for, it would not be WP:OR to say that on the one hand he was in charge of new models between 1999 and 2004 (or whenever), and a separate source to say that GM released model X in 2001 and model Y in 2002. A hook could reasonably say that models X and Y were released whilst he was in charge of new models. OTOH, it would be WP:OR to say that he was in charge of releasing models X & Y. Like I say, I just thought it might make it a bit more tangible if you can relate him to something people are familiar with. Le Deluge (talk) 01:38, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I appreciate the effort to come up with an improved hook. However, the source that says Beckman was in charge of new vehicle launches here does not identify specific models, nor does it specify the range of years when he held the position. Accordingly, there is no reliable hook to tie the hook to specific models. I think the original hook is pretty good. It's unusual for a football player to reach such a level with one of the world's largest (until a few years ago THE largest) corporations. Cbl62 (talk) 14:48, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Valerie Bettis

5x expanded by Cryptic C62 (talk). Self nom at 02:12, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

George Roubicek

Created by Hunter Kahn (talk). Nominated by Hunter Kahn (talk) at 01:05, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Freedom of the press in Ukraine

Created by User:Mariah-Yulia (talk). Self nom at 23:59, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Length and date verified, but proposed hook is not supported by the reference. The reference states that Ukraine received a "partly free" rating in 2007, but does not mention its previous ratings. I think the other fact mentioned in the reference is more interesting:
"... that Ukraine is considered to have the greatest freedom of the press of all the former Soviet Union states?"
--Cryptic C62 · Talk 16:27, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Well the section Rankings (in the article) gives refs for the claim (just click on the maps of Freedom House given in the ref). But your alternative line is more interesting . Fine with me which one of the two get elected to be DYK!
Mariah-Yulia • Talk to me! 23:21, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think the alt hook is more interesting.—Chris!c/t 01:48, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ah, I hadn't noticed the more detailed discussion of the ratings in the body of the article. I just hit Control+F and searched for "never" and only found the one result in the lead. Nevertheless, it appears that there is consensus that the alternative hook is more interesting, so I consider this good to go! --Cryptic C62 · Talk 02:58, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lagrivea

  • ... that the fossil squirrel Lagrivea is characterized by deep basins in its teeth?

Created by Ucucha (talk). Self nom at 19:56, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

John Bettesworth-Trevanion

Created by Rosiestep (talk). Self nom at 16:47, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Somerset County Cricket Club in 1891

Created by Harrias (talk). Self nom at 16:33, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: Does this mean that if this particular sports club survives for a thousand years, there might be over a thousand Wikipedia articles about it? I find this mildly concerning. Also, isn't a more interesting hook possible? Presumably lots of cricket clubs joined this championship in the 19th century, so there's nothing particular interesting about that - maybe a hook about their return being a reversal of their fortunes after being thrown out of first class competition previously? --Demiurge1000 (talk) 17:37, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Harrias talk 07:44, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • As for the "sports team X, in year Y" article naming... well, I give up. Such things generate endless press coverage and I've seen far more obscure sports clubs now getting similarly named WP articles, so I suppose the existence of local rags prepared to cover such things, will forever make it possible to have yearly articles about them - much like the local rock bands etc. --Demiurge1000 (talk) 01:54, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Martin Dannenberg

Created by Alansohn (talk). Self nom at 15:22, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Kampung Boy (TV series)

  • ... that American voice actors "kept slipping into a Jamaican accent" when voicing Malaysian characters in Kampung Boy?

Created by Jappalang (talk). Self nom at 14:44, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • ALT1: ... that academics consider Kampung Boy the animated television series a cultural artefact, bearing witness to Malaysian society's rural-urban transition?

Current article size is 14 kB (2321 words). Jappalang (talk) 14:53, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Given the fact that there are more than 50 hooks proposed on this one day, would it be possible to combine the two similar hooks concerning Kampung Boy (and perhaps the third hook concerning the work's author (Lat)) into one multi hook? Cbl62 (talk) 14:55, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Kampung Boy

  • ... that "naughty ones with ... bushy hair" fill the pages of The Kampung Boy?

5x expanded by Jappalang (talk). Self nom at 14:43, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • ALT1: ... that to a Kampung Boy, having the foreskin of his penis sliced off is "just like an ant bite"?
  • ALT2: ... that Malaysian graphic novel The Kampung Boy was not first published in the country's official language and was later translated back to it?
  • ALT3: ... that the language in the United States version of Malaysian graphic novel The Kampung Boy was left mostly untouched because the publisher judged its customers capable of understanding foreign words?

I expanded the article from 3082 B (507 words) to 19 kB (3229 words). Jappalang (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Arvid G. Hansen, Arbeideren, Arbeidet

Created by Geschichte (talk). Self nom at 11:31, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Angelli Spumante & Aperitive

Created by Bine Mai (talk). Self nom at 10:48, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: I think this is problematic for two reasons, that this claim relies on a statement on the company's own web site, hardly third-party RS and more SELFPUB, and that it smacks of embellishment that is so common among company self-descriptions uninterested in neutral language. Yes it may well be "modern", but one of the most by whose standards? MURGH talk 15:29, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Visa policy of South Korea

5x expanded by Crossmr (talk). Self nom at 01:15, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Special occasion holding area

Note: Articles nominated for a special occasion should be nominated within five days of creation or expansion as usual (with the exception of April Fools' Day 2011 - see Wikipedia:April Fool's Main Page/Did You Know). Also, articles should be nominated at least five days before the occasion to give reviewers time to check the nomination.

For September 12, 15th Sunday after Trinity

Warum betrübst du dich, mein Herz, BWV 138

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nom at 12:32, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

For September 13, 14:00 GMT (13:00 UTC), see comment text

Polytechnic of Namibia

A red-roofed yellow building in bright sunlight, built in German colonial style. Over the entrance is a red cross and the inscription "Elisabeth Haus"

5x expanded by Pgallert (talk). Self nom at 08:30, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comment: Okay, here I will request quite an amount of good faith into me: The creator, almost all contributors, and I are affiliated to this institution, either as employees or as students. However, nobody else seems to want to write about it, so here I submit despite a crystal-clear COI. --Pgallert (talk) 08:30, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • And a Question: On September 13, 14:00 GMT I will present a lecture on Wikipedia at the Auditorium Maximum of Polytechnic of Namibia. It would of course be a nice publicity stunt to have the institution mentioned on the main page at that particular day and time. Does Wikipedia support something like this? I would believe it is a win-win situation. --Pgallert (talk) 08:30, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • 5x expansion, date, length and hook verified. I fixed some grammar in the hook and bolded the article name. I see nothing wrong with you being an employee of the Polytechnic, the article is certainly not biased in any way. TodorBozhinov 09:04, 25 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
(tongue in cheek) - do tell your students that each of them has to write a DYK on their hometown and the Namibian institution has to be an FA in four languages in return for this ginormous favour. Oh and good luck with the lecture. Victuallers (talk) 14:47, 27 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
:) Thanks, will do. Actually the will write something, see here, and I promised a 100% assignment mark should their contribution make it to DYK. Namibia an FA, that would be something... I'm willing to accept any help. --Pgallert (talk) 15:08, 27 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I agree it is win-win and we should help (any others?). I have updated all school articles (not too many) in Winhoek where your poly is Victuallers (talk) 16:59, 27 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

For October 1

Wait for me, Daddy

soldiers marching down the street with a boy chasing his father

new by Esemono (talk). Self nom at 08:30, 05 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

and Canadian picture is OK too. Victuallers (talk) 15:54, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

For 31 October, Hallowe'en


Spodomancy

  • ... that by riddling your ashes on Halloween, you might determine who in your household will be the next to die?

5x expanded by Tim1965 (talk). Self nom at 00:31, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Margaret Jones (Puritan midwife)

Created by --Ishtar456 (talk) 02:33, 4 September 2010 (UTC))[reply]

Little People of the Pryor Mountains

Created by Tim1965 (talk). Self nom at 02:16, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


October the 31st (The Fall Guy episode)

Cassandra Peterson appears before a poster of herself as "Elvira"

Created by --Ishtar456 (talk) 22:34, 1 September 2010 (UTC))[reply]

I fixed it up a bit. We don't really want to leave out Keith. But that fact (twin brother) is not cited (in a synopsis you aren't supposed to need it, but for DYK you do). In all fairness, Elvira and John were the guest stars and the other Carradines just had cameos. Are you sure we want to leave Elvira out? Isn't she all about Halloween?--Ishtar456 (talk) 02:43, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I agree lack of source kills it and Elvira is better - maybe replace eveil twin with Elvira? Victuallers (talk) 09:21, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]


::

The Brass Rail (Hoboken, New Jersey)

  • Comment: Rhyming in the beginning unintentional... Now it is intentional hah... and I am going to grab a drink there one of these days and snap a picture of those stairs for the article.

Created by Theornamentalist (talk). Nominated by Theornamentalist (talk) at 14:29, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ipswich Witchcraft Trial

Created by Tim1965 (talk). Self nom at 23:17, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • "May have been the last witch trial", rather. We don't know what will happen in the future -- people do make ridiculous assertions still, and occasionally judges humor them (witness the case of the woman who got a restraining order against David Letterman so that he would stop psychically harassing her). DS (talk) 13:11, 1 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • That's true of 99 percent of DYK noms which use the term "largest," "most expensive," "tallest," "record," etc. On the other hand, we can't predict the future, so "may have been" is not accurate, either. It's why I chose "has been called"; that is an accurate statement, although it may not hold true in the future. - Tim1965 (talk) 12:55, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Got to agree with Tim.. surely the average reader is clever enough to realise that, say, the world's tallest man ......... means the man who when measured to the top of his head when standing with bare feet and without a spine extender is the tallest although there may be other men taller who have not measured them selves or been found and it is possible that in the future other men could grow taller or by using gentic modification it may be possible ... etc etc We must assume that sentient people know that new things happen in the future. rant over Victuallers (talk) 09:55, 3 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha.--Ishtar456 (talk) 01:18, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Veratrum nigrum

The purple-black flowers of the Veratrum nigrum plant growing from a spike raceme or branch

5x expanded by Tim1965 (talk). Nominated by Tim1965 (talk) at 18:46, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The point is to create a play on words with the title of the plant. It is not a true Hellbore; it is true it can kill you. When it comes to plants, most people probably don't know what the term "false" means (I didn't). So verifying that "false means false" is not just a play on words, it is informative as well (confirming a person's assumptions). - Tim1965 (talk) 03:38, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Nah, I'm with Smartse, this hook is just not working for me. And I don't really see the Halloween connection either, unless anything that could kill you is now eligible for Halloween. I don't think we're going to be short. I suggest this goes back to "regular" DYK, and you come up with another hook? Sorry. PS Tim - "Hellebore" is an English word, not a Latin word like Helleborus, so "hellebore" should not be italicised, in DYK or in the article. Le Deluge (talk) 19:13, 30 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Grammar point: there should either be a "while" after the first "that", or there should be a "but" before "it is true", or the comma before "it is true" should be a semi-colon. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:12, 2 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Ferocactus latispinus

very spiny cactus

Created by Casliber (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 14:42, 28 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

It sounds scarier to me. We could maybe make something out of this but saying that it can be killed by Fusarium oxysporum doesn't sound very scary. Another option is to make a stub for Didymium wildpretii using this and then we could have a hook of ALT2 ... that Didymium wildpretii eats the decaying remains of Devil's tongue barrel (pictured)? Smartse (talk) 12:00, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Not the easiest material to work with. For hook purposes (eg ALT2) it is probably best called a "barrel of devil's tongues"? A bit of creative Googling came up with PAR 279 of this ref which would allow an example of a site in which it grows in the wild and hence (stretching a bit) :
That same ref has a bunch of saints which could be translated into English, and MZ 1239 leaves the tilde off La Cañada... Alternatively you could use the hardiness data to suggest that :
The Fusarium is tricky, you'd end up playing with "mouldy bottoms" or "butt rot". One little thing, the image relies on recurvus being a synonym for latispinus. I don't doubt that it is, but it probably ought to be reffed - and in any case, it's a bit too obvious an image to accompany a hook that we're struggling to get tricksy with... Le Deluge (talk) 14:23, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The book ref lists recurvus as a synonym. The other hooks are more interesting than mine, and yeah I reckon losing the picture will probably help. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:31, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I will propose the following. I don't know if playing with the name of the plant is acceptable to anyone else. But I would hope so, given that the fifth proposed hook does mention the word "barrel". The way I read the plant name, "barrel" is like saying "the John Smith house" or "the Evergreen Pine tree." You don't necessarily need it (well, I'm making that case). - Tim1965 (talk) 13:24, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • So let's recap: ALT1 would pass DYK rules/guidelines. ALT2 would not due to redlinks in the hook. ALT3 would not, because the ref is not in the article as it currently stands. ALT4 is iffy: As a metaphor (hell freezes over = never), it means it will never die (not factually true). As a play on words (hell freezes over = temp below 0C), it's iffy because the plant is hardy only to -4C and can, in fact, die (min temp is 10C). I will not pass judgment on my own suggested hook. So right now, barring changes, we don't have a passing nom except for ALT1. - Tim1965 (talk) 13:24, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

For November 13, Governors Awards

Governors Awards

Created by Gareth E Kegg (talk). Self nom at 22:31, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

For January 1, 2011, Seal of the Federal Bureau of Investigation

Expanded and self-nominated by ChrisO (talk) 20:50, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This nomination is a bit of a special case. I originally nominated Seal of the Federal Bureau of Investigation on August 3 following a 5x expansion (see discussion above under #Articles created/expanded on August 3). Everyone accepted that it met the DYK criteria but the nomination was derailed by a political dispute over timing. I've put forward a compromise at User talk:Jimbo Wales#Compromise proposal, which involves passing this DYK now but scheduling its appearance on January 1, 2011, which is 60 years to the day since the seal was first used. This proposal has been generally welcomed so I'm putting it forward here for formal consideration. I'm aware that the timeframe is somewhat longer than would be usual for scheduled DYKs, but in the circumstances I think a some flexibility would be justified. I've put forward two possible hooks: the original one as proposed earlier, and a new alternative tying the DYK in more directly with the date. -- ChrisO (talk) 20:50, 13 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Interesting compromise. It completely flipped my opinion of the matter. However, prior to providing said opinion, I'd like some clarification: Are we nominating this (with whichever hook) sans image as you initially suggested on Jimbo's talk page?
    --K10wnsta (talk) 00:39, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Appended: I see that you removed the image from inclusion in the original nomination, so I'll assume this post-dated nomination would not include the image either. However, this necessitates further clarification:
Are we excluding the image from this DYK solely because of the recent interaction with the FBI?
--K10wnsta (talk) 01:05, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In effect yes, but in my view it's a necessary evil if we're to reach a satisfactory compromise on this issue. -- ChrisO (talk) 01:16, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • - Tentative Even if the motivation behind qualifying this article for DYK was questionable, I think you already achieved not just a satisfactory compromise, but a completely valid and justifiable use for it. In fact, it's use is so valid, refusing to use the image for no other reason than the recent hoobajoo with the FBI is blatantly (chilled) censorship...and I just can't get behind that. If we're going to censor it, we need to go whole hog or don't go at all.
    Could we put it up for 'On This Day' to avoid reasoning for exclusion of the image?
    --K10wnsta (talk) 01:51, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • No opinion on whether to feature on the future date; however, it would be better if this hook didn't remain on the suggestions page for the intervening months, as it is bound to attract further discussion and the page is unwieldy enough as it is. Espresso Addict (talk) 01:55, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Espresso's suggestion may be useful for more than just making this page leaner. A delay in nomination would lend to better perspective for those establishing consensus. In other words, removing it from discussion for a couple months would also put some time between recent events and the article (and hopefully image) being contemplated for a main page feature (unless such a delay would disqualify it from use in DYK section).
--K10wnsta (talk) 02:12, 14 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Comment This hook should not "disappear" for a few months. It is far better to leave it here to enable a wide input from editors on the issue. I think this is a good compromise that involves common sense, the proposal and special treatment of the timescale fitting nicely under WP:IAR. Mjroots (talk) 13:53, 15 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I do not support 1 January 2011. The DYK section is for new articles. There are exceptions like April Fools and Halloween; I do not see the point of making every day of the year a possible exception. Geschichte (talk) 20:28, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

See also